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The Room Past The Core

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Tue, 11/12/2013 - 21:18
Undyingumbra's picture
Undyingumbra

A knight steps in. An experienced Vanguard-a veteran of the Unknown Passage four times over, a knight who has nearly died in his pursuit of what might rescue him and all of his comrades.

He looks around. He sees a room, made of plain, grey metal. There are some splotches of darker substance-a staining of the metal, perhaps, or some alloy-without much adorning it. Some discarded armor and vitapods lay around. In the far back corner lays an Arcane Salamander Mask, a thin layer of dust covering its faint blue sheen. Near his foot is the body piece of Seraphic Mail-he notes with interest that, while the main body is perfectly intact, the sleeves and other extensions are slightly mangled. To his left and slightly ahead, a Volcanic Helm and the collar of the mail, still glowing red with heat-no way to tell how long they have been here, as their inner fire burns off the dust. He can see now a slight flare of light as some dust settles on it.

He notes with interest the lack of weapons and shields-perhaps there is a portal beyond, one too narrow for armor. But of course, a knight would never leave without their weapon or shield. To do otherwise would be unthinkable.

The thought is comforting, fitting. As he relaxes, he glances towards the center of the room-but as he does, averts his gaze up, to try to find where the light comes from. There is a faint glow, coming not from the walls but from near the middle of the room. A question for a later moment.

For now, he simply closes his eyes and enjoys the sensation of being in a room. A real, walls and ceiling room. While the Clockworks are a marvel, the openness always unnerved him. He never spoke of his agoraphobia to others-it wouldn't do for a knight to be afraid.

When he opens his eyes, he is looking at the center of the room.

Another knight stands there. It wears no armor, but holds every weapon and every shield.

It looks back at him.

The knight screams.

...

...

...

There is silence.

It rests.

Tue, 11/12/2013 - 23:25
#1
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Vivideus
That's the best story I've

That's the best story I've seen in the past month!

pl0x keep up with it and continue! I'll be watching damned hard

Wed, 11/13/2013 - 20:21
#2
Undyingumbra's picture
Undyingumbra
Depth 29

A thousand thousand screens, all displaying a lock. The dust blows through the clusters of images, somehow leaving the screens unscratched. Everything else is seen through the slightest fog, but the locks are clear. Mocking. Taunting.

A weary knight steps through. She is still only a Knight, yet the only survivor of Firestorm Citadel. Her allies-her friends-all Vanguards, all better and more experienced than her, better equipped.

And they gave their lives so she might live to see this-this cruel mocking of those who have given so much, only to be prevented from what is needed most. She doesn't see the need to be composed anymore. She is alone.

She weeps. She weeps for the death of her friends, a death she may have caused by not being skilled enough. She weeps for the futility of their mission when the Core itself mocks them. She weeps because there is nothing left for her.

...

A click.

A screen displays an open lock. She looks at it, just after the flicker of blackness that overcame the screen vanishes. She dries her eyes, regains her composure-her friends might still be gone, but she has her mission. There is no more time for tears.

She steps closer to the screen. It grays into static for a moment, then a silhouette appears.

"Who are you? Do you know how to access the core?"

"..."

"Answer me! I am a Knight of the Spiral Order, and we desperately need power!"

"..."

"Answer, goddammit! My friends DIED for this!"

A faint whisper, barely audible over the wind. "Power?"

"Yes. Our ship crashed and we need to power it."

A laugh. Still as faint as before, but somehow... Wrong. Less a laugh than what someone who had never heard laughter for would do attempting it. Closer in kin to the noise a serial killer would make before dismembering its prey.

"Not power."

"Yes power! If we don't get it, we'll be stuck here forever!"

"You want power?"

Her voice is shaky. She is unnerved-the creature she speaks to is something she knows is fundamentally wrong. The Snarbolax was a frothing, rabid beast, the Royal Jelly a monster, the Roarmulous Twins massive engines of destruction, and Vanaduke a fallen king tied to his dead people. Not nice. Not good.

But not wrong. She understood them all. This creature she speaks to? She does not. She feels she could know it, but something in her refuses to acknowledge it. Some instinctive part of her can feel that even knowing this creature would fracture her psyche, send her gibbering in madness over the edge of the platform to crash into the Core's shell, her bones breaking and her body dying as a release from the horror she would see, she would know.

But she has her mission.

The voice repeats itself.

"You want power?"

Her voice shaky. Unsure. She sounds as if she knows she will regret this-if she has a mind left to regret with.

But her statement is clear.

"Yes."

Sun, 11/17/2013 - 23:18
#3
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Fshuolong
e_e

This story..Just..Cool...

Tue, 11/19/2013 - 18:36
#4
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Crashburnboom
Just... awesome

Whoa + 1 "subscriber" for you

Wed, 11/20/2013 - 08:29
#5
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Magnum-Frost
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It's glorious, I love it!

M0AR PL0X

Wed, 11/20/2013 - 08:49
#6
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Magnum-Frost
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whoops-a-daisy, double post

Mon, 11/25/2013 - 20:49
#7
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Callis-The-Wicked
o.o

This. This is fresh. I love it. I love it like...like I love lore. Yes. That's how much I love it. I love it like I would a son. Stories are my children then? Lore is beautiful. Don't stahp. Bai.

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