Name: Diana Gorchev

Age: 16

Race: [NEW RACE ADDED!]

Frorian - Modern descendants of an ancient race long before there was Cradle, Frorians are human-like beings with a strange affinity for ice. That being said, they prefer to live in very warm areas to prevent themselves from entering metamorphosis. As they age, their bodies become cooler, and so they must resort to living in warmer and warmer environments, lest they freeze over and begin changing. In Stage 1, the average Frorian will survive for about 40~ years before becoming too cold to survive in conventional heating conditions, and must either make the change, or die trying to stop it.

Because of this dilemma, their technological and civil advancements have stopped, and thus they were added to the ever-growing layers of Cradle.

Stage 1 - Human-like, cools things at a touch. Older Frorians can breathe out wafts of freezing gas.

Stage 2+ - (Explained as time goes on or if Diana is left alone to freeze)

Bio:

Revealed as time goes on and sufficient character interaction quota increases. She hasn't had the best of childhoods...and it's definitely something anybody talks about.

Descriptive Appearance :

Onyx-black shoulder-length hair tied in a ponytail, bangs let down. Five feet, five inches in height. 95 lb. in weight. Pale skin complexion, magenta eyes [explained later as time goes on.]. Though she isn't bony or dying of hunger any longer, her upbringing may have stunted her growth. A ring of whip scars surround her neck.

Loadout:

- Ash Tail Coat, Mighty Cobalt Helm, Three-Barrel Energy Magnum (Master Blaster), Fierce Flamberge, Heater Shield.

Quirks:

She tends to stutter and mumble a lot, as if she's shivering.

Spaces out during rest times.

She avoids talking...a lot.

She's supposedly rich, but she shows no signs of possessing such money. Well, maybe when she wants to buy something for a certain special someone...if there is any.

Name : Will "windmaker" clover
Age : around 13
Race : Leva clypeum = a race of a long lost civilisation , this race looks like human altought they are made of pure crystalized valestone who take on a organic form. they are expert swordman and an even more expert blacksmith, their warrior creat their own weapon and armor altought few of them still buy them from the store. As a child a clypeum can alerdy create small polished sharp pick which they use for a tradition they call it 'spatha' they use those pick to poke an energyball which the pick absorbed an they use it as an stick for a relay race. However because they are made from crystal they are weak and quite fragile which make them usually hide in the shadow.This race is forgatten by now however some of them is still hiding in the woods looking for an oportunity to create a civilisation... Note tought they are made from crystal they still have organic tissue as the skin,hair,nose,feet,etc only thier eye diverse from human on outer apperance cause they glow faintly of green and thier veinds heart are hard crystal while their blood are liquidfied crystal.
Bio : will was an expert swordman since he is a child however he is very closed person and only talk to his most trusted people thus no one really knows about him. as time grow he became an expert assasin altought he rarely kills a target. most target is just lefted by him with their hands and legs tied to a pole ( which is not very fun cause it is very high ).he gets his job done in a whoosh of a wind granting him the title "windmaker" . altought he has a very critical weakness he is afraid of bugs.. yes an assasin who scream with fear and even collapse when he see a tiny mini spider.
Loadout : dusker coat and cap , grand faust , a vile striker tied to a short staff, and a haze bomb
pic : i will add it later
Extra : he has a emerald eye, a tall body , a little fat , short black hair , and a pick made from crimsonite he value this more than his life because it is his first weapon he ever made

Just a reminder, this is the type of roleplay where the story is jelly in your hands! Once your app is approved, please feel free to add your scenes to the google doc.

Frorians vs Spiral Order. It'll explain how Diana got in.

...she IS one of the enemy...for now.

Accepted, this idea of a nuclear oven is intersting. I am especially interested to see how his memory loss and people possibly recognizing him will factor into his behavior!

Ummmm yeah i just post the new story sorry for the delay it just i am confused about the storyline and decide to take Will to know both Jace and Diana at the most tragic way possible. Lol.... BTW i just make a battle between will and Jace it is gonna be ( not so ) Epic !

Oh yeah i just notice that.... Well......... Sorry i guess do you want me to delete it ? or do you want me to modify it so that stuff is not getting weirder on my side. Oh and Vinny which part do you not understand ? is it the vocab and grammar ? cause i am bad at them ( I live in asia ) or is it the plot ? anyway sorry again i will not do such thing again.

P.S : i am not the best guy to tell you this but what about the hashashshisn thing ?

post a few chapter before requesting apps?
well, maybe that's just my way of doing stuff

your title amazes me; I hope to see the same in your story

@Vivideus I amn't requesting applications, but accepting them, the story would have progressed whether or not people decided I was worth there time.

@Vinnydime I fixed the part where Jace stares at Diana, let me know if you're ok with what i've done.

@Spirals-ore That was a pretty big power-play. Also, one reason I am a bit confused is because of your tenses(read your previous post in depth after writing this, sorry), this prologue takes place in the past tense. Some but not all of your sentences reflect this. I would prefer that you remove the power-play.

@Isisdelltion Are you waiting to jump in? Don't be scared, revisions are encouraged !

It's alright. I've had to teach people with worse grammar than yours how to correct themselves.

@creeperlucario Um... is this guy an npc, this is kindof out of the ordinary for me... Vinny has good enough judgement, it's up to him.

@Spirals-ore Urban Dictionary defines powerplay as: In a roleplay, controlling other people's characters. This is very looked down upon and is against most rp rules.'Kim punched Kelly and watched her cry,' is powerplaying, because who are you to say if Kelly started crying or not.

@Blessid-Bombardier Interesting... considering this is the prolougue, it may take until the chapters start(when Jace will hopefully be back in the safety of the spiral order, although I have some stuff up my sleeve)for him to take full effect in the story, sonsidering Kalik was killed, Jace may show resentment in the beginning, but soon realise the things that Twitch has actually seen.

@Vinnydime you can go ahead and rule on the addition of "Berrut"

@Creeper-Lucario If he is going to be played as a protagonist character, that might present the problem with power level on comparison with even Bombardier's character. I guess he makes for a good villain, but putting a guy like him in so early might not work. Good character, but perhaps you can use him later? If we start fighting him now, he might raze Diana, Jace, and Will to the ground, while getting ripped to shreds by Mark XD

@Blessid-Bombardier I don't think you did anything bad up to the point that Mark was sitting back down with Jace, where you powerplayed Diana and Jace. That small bit was a good enough segment that Akdetroit and I could use to make up some dialogue with Jace and Diana.

I'm fine with Berrut appearing later. Just as long as he is in.

Name: Refal Divinity

Gender: Male

Age: 21

Race: Valkyrie

Bio: As an outcast from his own race, he now works for the Spiral Order. Bit of backstory here...

It all started one day when the Spiral Knights found the Valkyries home. Knights wanted to keep Peace for them selves so they could win the endless war with the monsters down below. The Valkyries bubble of Peace was ruptured, literally ruptured. Peace, being their shield from the outside world, was split into several pieces and war started. This was called the War of Broken Peace. This war was kept classified and not many know about it. The few that survived and know about it have been sworn to secrecy. Eventually all pieces of Peace were brought back together and the war stopped. They layered it with Mist Sun Silver (A special type of mist that is absorbed into things which makes them as hard as obsidian) so that it would never break again. However Refal was captured and tortured to tell the secret. The Knights absorbed the mist and it solidified, creating what is known as, Sun Silver. They were happy with this outcome as the Sun Silver was strongest material they had found yet and they also managed to counter it with Shadow Steel and it created huge amounts of Crystal Energy. However, the 2 materials together were unstable and it was extremely hard to contain. The Valkyries were abandoned and Spiral Knights focused on containing the materials. The captured Valkyries escaped and returned to their homeland. Refal was outcast because he had told of their secret and he left, angry. He went to the Spiral HQ and showed them the Valkyries divine weapons. The Spiral knights agreed and allowed Refal to enter.

Pic: Nope

Loadout: Divine Mantle and Veil, Divine Avenger, Argent Peacemaker, Grey Owlite Shield.

Extras: He does have wings and he does use them.

@creeperlucario as far as i know knights are the humans of this world, they are called the Isoran and have simply adapted to the way they have forced to live the past 2,000 years or so. also, It isn't quite as simple as "instantly tried to use Fang of Vog" where did she get it? How did she grow powerful enough to even wield it? Maybe make some adjustments and i will definitely consider your application.

@Isisdelltion You will have blue text.

@Dewca I hope you don't go GodMode on me with that loadout of yours. I have expierience with Valkyries and i know they have wings. Use them responsibly. :) Application accepted.\

@Everyone So we have about 4-5 people in the RP now, I think we should stop at 7-8, maybe less. Vinnydime may advise on this decision.

Yeah, that's about a good number. I can barely manage like 20~ characters' interactions before going ka-put, so 8 would be an easier number to keep tabs on.

@creeperlucario accepted.

@vinnydime I concur

thanks for the one who fixed my grammar ! ( Umbra bio will reflect will bio too since they grow up together )

Name : Umbra
Age : 13
Apperance : Purple Ponytailed hair long enough until it reach her back with a yellowish tip , kinda tall and slim , has an emerald eye like all clypeum does ( Change to crimson if the spirit side take over )
Race : Leva clypeum
Bio : she was born on a small village near the scarlet fortress , she was a really close freind to will and was the first person will talked to other than his parrent. She was very smart and brave , though one day she went to the scarlet fortress alone.. when she walks into the very depht of the fortress a spirit has set an eye on her body and taken over it however umbra was strong enough to repel it but sadly the spirit was alerdy inside her , This make umbra has two personality her normal state which is joyfull , freindly and defensive and her spirit side which is aggresive , cruel , and seductive. When she is on her spirit trance she can understand what feinds and ghost are talking and also has a very sharp hearing.
Loadout : Angelic set change to fallen set when on spirit trance , Argent peacemaker change to sentenza when on sporit side , cold iron vanquisher

I will post the other later kinda run out of idea

I chose the orange color and I am wondering where everyone is? Are they in a guild? I don't know...

@Dewca your application was already accepted. :)

@everyone Sorry for my absence, been busy with school. I will be back full force pretty soon, gonna be pretty busy with Christmas this week though.

Name: Storm
Age: 15
Race: Spiral Order
Bio: Pretty normal life on Isora, On cradle he crafted his own shockburst brandish and with it he feels more confident. He was named Storm because of his affinity towards electricity. He is very good mechanically, but isn't the best at combat. He is very afraid of the underground, like the clockworks but he doesn't show it.
Pic:I is not good at fan-art
Loadout: Shockburst brandish, Voltech Alchemer
Extras: Rank is knight, looks up to older knights for advice.

That's my app hope it works!