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Heart of Valor. [Fanfiction] Chapters Released: 12
Cario was surprised to noticed how dumbfounded Astran looked. Only Minutes earlier, they had ran from a strange dark creature. Multiple times she had looked back, and Astran had followed her showing no emotion on his face.
When she looked past him, she saw it.
She had no correct way to describe the thing. There was no definite shape. It lacked any facial features, besides two looming holes that likely once held eyes. When she saw it, she thought it was something like a grimalkin. The only differences were its size, it's constantly shifting form, and it's red and black texture.
From experience, red and black in a graveyard usually meant phantoms.
"Where's Malkalack?" Astran said sounding stunned. She looked at his face again. It was
confused. Cario briefly wondered if it reflected her own expression. Then suddenly his words
registered. She look all around, and saw no sign of Malkalack.
"C-could the thing have caught him?"
"If by 'thing' you mean the giant monster of death that was hell-bent on chasing us, then yes, its's probably possible."
"Was that a yes?"
"Yes."
Astran was taking on a bitter and sarcastic tone. Cario could not honestly say that she relished the time they were going to spend together. "Where are we?" she asked.
"We're in the clockworks."
"Thanks."
"It was a stupid question, Cario. It deserved a stupid answer."
She sighed. "What am I supposed to do with you?"
"Whatever you want," he said with a shark grin. Cario scowled and turned from him to think.
What was she supposed to do now?
Malkalack was gone. No. He couldn't be.
How could someone be there on say, and be gone just like that? It was surreal. She half expected him to stroll around a corner saying, "Hey guys, don't worry about me! It was a false alarm."
But that was not going to happen, she had to accept it.
Cario felt Astran's gaze from behind her, and was reminded at how unfavorable her situation
was.
"We're going back up." she turned to face him.
A snarl formed on Astran's lips, and she thought she could hear a growl lodged in his throat.
"We can't go back up there. Not without Cole's gear!"
Cario hotly replied, "So THAT'S why you bothered coming! You're a disgusting person, Astran! How could you think so LITTLE of people? Cole had a whole LIFE behind him, and all YOU see is a way to sell loot!"
Her outburst had righteous intention, but she didn't have the bravery to back it up.
Astran smashed into Cario. All of the sudden she could smell his foul breath, feel his heat around her.
He pinned her against the wall and got in her face.
"You don't make the calls anymore, girlie."
He shoved her, and she crumpled to the ground.
"Malkalack is gone! It's just you and me. I call the shots now. I'm the one who will get credit for recovering Cole's body!"
Cario had the breath knocked out of her. When she sat up, she took a deep gulp.
"I-I could get you jailed, A-Astran! W-what are you doing? Y-you'll never be able to set foot in Haven a-again!"
She didn't think she sounded very threatening. Her stuttering occurred in every sentence now because Cario knew that she couldn't beat him. She was an excellent bomber, but no match for a swordsman of Astran's caliber.
Cario slowly started to get up from the floor. When she just got onto her legs, Astran
replied.
"No , I won't. Because if you ever decide to inform someone of my actions here, I'll kill
you." For effect, he took out his Valiance. Almost comically, the end of it caught a glare, looking all the more menacing.
"Now," he continued, "We are going to find Cole's body. You're going to let me take his gear. Then we will bring his corpse up to Haven, and you will give me all the credit for saving you, despite the unfortunate loss of Malkalack."
At that moment, he brought his Valiance forward and made a large cut along Cario's arm.
She gasped in pain and recoiled.
Blood started to pour out, and she tried stopping it with her arm.
"An unfortunate injury." he said with vicious enjoyment.
"But you'll explain how you would've died without me."
Astran was triumphant. Cario could be killed by him whenever he wanted. Reeling from shock
she tried to discourage him somehow. "B-but what if Cole is alive?"
Astran's grin grew wider. "Then he won't be alive for very much longer."
Cario realized what a menace Astran was. He didn't care about the knights, or gremlins, or anything.
He only cared about money.
It boggled her mind. How could he possibly kill another knight for his arsenal, when they were losing to gremlins everyday?
Cario didn't voice any of these opinions. She felt that she may be beyond speaking by now.
Astran's eerie grin turned into a frown. "We've wasted enough time here," he turned to the
pathway that likely lead to the elevator, all without removing his eyes from her.
He beckoned Cario to go in front of him. She was his prisoner now.
Astran didn't notice Cario's tears.
Astran didn't notice everything about her wilt.
He certainly didn't notice the pain and the guilt that weighed her every footstep.
Yesh.
EDIT:
"If by 'thing' you mean the giant monster of death that was hell-bent on chasing us, then yes, its's probably possible."
"its's probably possible"
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Forgive your senpai.
"Now," he continued, "We are going to find Astran's body.
Uh... what?
EDIT: Much better.
Well, Cairo is now in serious trouble. She is slowly bleeding out and Astran can kill her whenever he wants. This is bad and if Cario faints, I have the bad feeling the Astran might kill her... Malk and Pyschord or someone else to come and help Cario and duel with Astran...
Just thinking here...
Who will Felicity eat first? Astran, or Malkalack?
@Creeperlucario
Ah yes. This is not a good looking situation for Cario.
@ Feline
Felicity should appear within the next two or three chapters.
@everyone
Should I post chapter 9 today, or tomorrow? Looking for some smart people advice.
Created a new title heading and I think you should post chapter 9 today if you want. Also... I was wrong with the relationship part... oh well.
Chapter may or may not be released tomorrow morning.
I'll have you know I actually TRIED on editing.
I didn't hold back like usual.
Eh... Honestly, it probably won't be in the morning. But I can try?
is this the forshadowings of a fight?
to add on to Cario's suggestion, maybe one of the other characters not introduced yet...
Great chapter though, looking forward to another, tomorrow is mah choice
ZE POWAH OF BETRAYAL HAS STRUCK YET AGAIN!
I feel like I should have seen this coming - you're absolutely killing any sort of hope I have for Astran. >.<
Overall, not the most interesting chapter in my opinion but definitely essential. It added good details to the plot and helped to carry along the story as we learn about what happened to certain characters. This style reminds me a lot of the Star Wars books I love to read so much, as often times the authors have to write out several separate plot lines that eventually come together in a large way in the finale of the book. :)
Overall, very intriguing...I can't wait to see what will happen to everyone.
@Colray
You'll see soon enough. :D
@Kanoka
The next chapter is sorta the same. Not as interesting as a normal chapter, but it is essential. Just saying that now.
Also, I'm not the best with character personalities. I needed to make him a scumbag, but besides taking Cario as 'hostage' I don't feel as if I made him how I intended to.
SILLY ME. For the past few days, I've done no writing. Sorry about that. .-.
I won't be able to do any writing now, NOT UNTIL I GET MOAR CHARACTERS!
That's right! Applications are open again! Check the OP for requirements!
EDIT: I will not be accepting applications from players who already have a character in the story! Also: if you've already posted an app that I have not accepted, post it again! Don't ask why.
Name : Chitran (Symbolic name for clear-minded, which is synonymous for SANITY HAHA!!!!) Heathrow
Gender : Male
Backstory :
A young man born in the peaceful suburbs of Haven, Chitran Heathrow was a boy who didn't quite plan to have such a violent life ahead of him. As fit and athletic as he was, he often dreamed of being something more akin to a construction worker or a firefighter, passively aiding the community, rather than blowing the brains out of a Gremlin.
When he was 12, he moved to Emberlight, Gremlin refugee town of poverty, and from then on, his plans changed for...the better. He began to help out at charity events funded and hosted by the Order, and he spent more hours in the orphanage than anywhere else, and though his education was rather limited, it was more than satisfactory for the needs of the orphans.
Life was good for him, really.
And then his Father was kicked off the edge of a stratum by a Guardian Knight, of all things. The Order explained bluntly to his mother and sister that "he was a threat to the Order", because he was "too involved for his own good", and that he would be a liability. A liability to what? Emberlight was well protected.
Mr. Heathrow was never a man to hide secrets, and even Mrs. Heathrow only knew that he worked in charities and in construction sites. It didn't seem like he knew any sensitive information.
And in order to have these questions answered, Chitran then decided to agree to his rather forced invitation to the Order's ranks. It's been five years since, and the only thing that's on his mind is splitting open the next furry's face to get one step closer to his own goal : justice and the truth. Cheesy as it sounded, it was a thing his father would have wanted : his son to know about everything, whatever it was. Or at least, that was what Colin thought.
Armor: Mad Bomber Set, Volcanic Plate Shield.
Weapons: Big Angry Bomb, Callahan.
Personality: A soft-spoken man who preaches only mercy, the young Heathrow throws it upon himself to be the one who clears the way for his friends to ease their burden, while delivering a painless death to those who oppose him and his allies. However, while he can be easy to be friends with, it's only being his friend that's easy. He reflects most questions about his personal life with another question or a parable (he isn't religious, but he often refers to religious texts to guide his beliefs while combining them with modern beliefs), and is an expert as masking himself to be a man at ease and satisfied with his life. In actuality, he often vents his anger through battle, one of the reasons why he's often the catalyst for total annihilation for the opposition. Just stand back and smell the charred flesh when he gets into the mood; anything more might be the end of that pretty little appendage of scent.
Stats
Swordsmanship: 2
Gunning: 5
Bombing: 8
Vitality/Endurance/Stamina: 5
Intelligence: 5
Speed: 2
Cunning: 6
Agility: 7
^And that's how you make a balanced character.
You do know that your character's name has to be some sort of derivative of your own? Otherwise I wouldn't have named my character Cole
Colray, it doesn't say that anywhere in the App requirements.
Name: Dusk
Gender: Male
Armor: Mercurial Demo set
Weapons: Nitronome, Static flash( explodes on contact)
Personality: A very experienced engineer who likes to tinker with his weapons during his free time. He is a friendly person in general (until someone tries to touch his things). During fights he seems to forget about his team mates when placing his bombs which has resulted in a lot of arguments and a profound amount of apologizing in the past. He also sets up timed explosives beforehand and usually lures enemies into them who think they've cornered him. His skills with bombs are known throughout the Order and has earned him the nickname the "mine man." Never misses an opportunity to salvage useful parts out of wreckages and can quickly create small devices with the things he finds.
Swordsmanship:0
Gunning:0
Bombing: 8
Vitality/Endurance/Stamina:5
Intelligence: 10
Speed: 4
Cunning: 6
Agility: 6
It is only IF and ONLY IF the name of the character in question is the said alias of a username will Valorai himself change it into a proper, outstanding name! Googly diddly DEE!!!!
A whoosh, and the landscape changed.
They went from a dark, dead graveyard to a dark, dead wolver den. The elevator had brought them down to where the incident began, it's wheels and machinery never groaning or complaining.
Cario stood silently in front of Astran. He grinned to himself when he remembered how he had took control, taking the loss of Malkalack to his advantage. Although it would be lying if he said he wasn't worried about what would happen when they got back to Haven.
He visualized everything he could do to save the situation. He'd be fooling himself to think that Cario wouldn't tell as soon as she was safe from him.
So he couldn't bring her back to Haven.
What else was there to do?
You could kill her.
That was a new thought. If he murdered Cario, no one would be able to know the full story.
But did he really need her now?
She was right there: it could be as simple as that.
But carrying two dead bodies to Haven didn't sound ideal to Astran. So many different choices to make, he cogitated.
As the elevator stopped at a charred depth, he decided that the best course of action would be to kill Cario and Cole, if he was alive, loot their gear, and dump the bodies over the edge of a level. If he brought the bodies back to Haven, the medics would probably decipher what had killed Cario and Cole. He obviously could not risk that.
"Move," he growled to Cario.
Slowly, she advanced forward. Her expression looked slightly shocked to see the charred remnants of what was once a wolver den. Only Astran and the elevator escaped the flames that followed after the explosive charges. Everything else was consumed by fire.
Charred lumps of what he assumed to be bones littered the area. He could imagine Cole and himself fighting off a pack of wolvers only the day before. For most people it may have seemed like years ago. But for Astran, every event seemed as unimportant as a footstep on a ten-mile track.
They waded through the remains for a while looking at dead plants and hollow dens, until Astran realized he had to make the next step. When he saw the ledge Cole had fallen from, he demanded, "Stand over there." He pointed to the ledge.
Cario seemed like she was going to refuse, but the energy had seemed to have escaped her.
She walked to it, cringing a little.
He could kill her now. It'd be very easy.
However, Astran wouldn't want to lose her gear, even though it wasn't as great as Cole's.
Besides, it wasn't wise to kill her now if he might need her later.
"Now look down there," he said, trying to sound threatening even though he was issuing nothing. "Tell me what you see."
"A-are you going to kill me?" She whispered.
Astran guffawed. "What do you think?"
She stared at Astran for a moment before looking below the platform.
"Well?" he asked impatiently.
She was taking her sweet time, looking down. He pulled her back and walked forward, deciding to look for himself.
He saw trees. The tops of many many trees. Astran was hoping to see some sort of landmark that he could work his way towards.
Instead all he could see was a single tree, multiplied by one thousand.
This wolver den was bigger than he had thought.
After quickly pondering these thoughts, he realized a fatal mistake he had made.
He turned his back on an armed prisoner.
No sooner than he had the thought, he received an astonishingly strong push by Cario.
He violently shrieked as his momentum heaved him over the edge, and he fell.
For a few moments, he felt nothing below him, and then he felt his arm hook to the edge of the level Cario was standing on.
Astran looked up and saw her peeking over the ledge with a terrified look on her face, perhaps agonizing that she had just murdered one of her own kind. Her emotion doubled when she saw Astran still hanging there, cursing.
His arms were weak. He felt the tendons streching and revolting.
Dropping down would ease them, but why jeopardize his life?
He reached one hand above, trying to find a foothold.
Excruciating pain tore throughout his hand as Cario smashed his fingers with her feet, fracturing and mangling his bones.
There were tears in her eyes, which distracted Astran as they dropped on his face. He made a last attempt before his arms would fail him.
He would grab Cario's leg the next time it came down.
His nerves screamed at the action of tightening around something, and Astran momentarily
thought he would pass out. He grabbed her leg with both of his arms now and pulled,
but sorely wished he hadn't.
Cario collapsed to the ground, her head slamming on the frigid, rugged metal.
With nothing to keep either of them in place, an unconscious Cario started to slide off of the edge, plunging Astran down even more.
Then quick as a flash, Cario and Astran plummeted down below.
Dag Nabbit, Astran! Three characters falling AT THE SAME SPOT? This place really needs guardrails. Thank you all for waiting patiently for this chapter! Tell me what you think below!
SCRUMPTIOUS AS USUAL. THE BEAST DEMANDS MORE STEAK BE FED!
Well...I do like my meat aged...so take your time. :D
Name: Cake
Gender: Male
Armor: Mercurial Helm, Mercrurial Mail
Weapons: Triglav, Sudaruska
Shield: Volcanic Plate Shield
Personality: A very intelligent silent observer. Is anti social, a shadow. Doesn't like others being "unprofessional", basically loud or stupid people. Usually ALWAYS knows if something is up. He's very weird, loves weapons and armor to the point of Fan-Girlism at the sight of something 5*. In battle, he is the source of information. His predictions of the enemy are usually always right and accurate. He is however not much of a fighter, even though he's a master with big freaking swords (Triglav and Sudaruska). I did mention he was weird right? Rightttt?
STATS:
Swordsmanship: 10/10
Gunslinging: 0/10
Bombing: 0/10
Stamina: 10/10
Intelligence: 8/10
Speed: 3/10
Cunning: 8/10
Agility: 1/10
Personal Note: Don't need to choose me for already known reasons.
EDIT FOR VAL: Is he easy to use now? :D
EDIT #2: Stats changed to what I intended it to be. Sudaruska replaces Voltaric Tempest for more Stat Points.
http://assets.diylol.com/hfs/dbf/705/d2a/resized/y-u-no-meme-generator-r...
The story is awesome so far.
Weapons: (No obsidian or winterfest weapons, no WHR. Dark retribution is allowed.)
That's taken from OP.
He has over 40 stat points
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So now Astran and Cario will fall onto the turtle..and Cole won't be there. XD
I actually really appreciated some of the stylistic choices with this chapter. One of the things that I forget sometimes but I love to take note of is the shortened paragraph style for faster reading and building of suspense. I don't know if it was intentional, but as the story progressed I definitely found myself reading more quickly and the emotion came across more clearly.
Overall, while perhaps not as interesting of a chapter (I actually thought the action element helped with that tremendously here, so more interesting than I was expecting, hehe), it transitions us to the next piece of the story!
Reminder, everyone! I can't start writing until I get a good gremlin application. Requirements are in the OP. Statistics apply the same way as anyone else. Speaking of which, cake. Only 40 stat points.
I thank Duskfinder for "finding" my mistakes in my application. You really helped out in doing stuff for me and being very picky.
What are you talking about, it says it right next to the name in the app form.
"Name: (This is important: This name MUST be based off of your forum or in game name. For example: Aekun would be a satisfactory name. Feline-Grenadier would not. If you name is like VinnyDime, change it to Vinny. I will decided whether names are acceptable or not.)"
It all really just comes down to Valorai's choice.
Great chapter by the way!
Shank you very much!
If I don't get any acceptable apps today, I will allow people who already have characters in the story to submit more apps.
Do Gremlins have to share my name as well, or is it only for Knights? (I anticipate tons of childhood trauma if it's the former XD) Any other differences I should take into account, such as gear or anything?
@Snowcracker.
Use whatever name you want, Snu. Although I think a female gremlin named Snow would be great for the story!
I don't really wanna make any characters for this story.
Name: Mephiles "The Robo Shadow Master"
Gender: Male
Armor: Lvl 10 Snarbolax Set with Lvl 10 Crest of Almire and 2 Dread Skelly Charms
Weapons: Lvl 10 Gran Faust, Lvl 10 Sentenza and Lvl 10 Graviton Vortex
Personality: Calm, can't stand when women's feelings are ruined or crushed, usually found battling Tortodrones or Ironwood Sentinels, sneaky, lonely and won't get distracted when in battle.
STATS:
Swordsmanship: 5
Gunning: 5
Bombing: 5
Stamina: 5
Intelligence: 5
Speed: 5
Cunning: 5
Agility: 5
I'm putting this app here for later. I might end up using it.
@Sono
Why not? You've already submitted two apps- (both I had to decline.)
Make another one!
Why do I have to make one? Do you even need any characters from me?
Here's a character that you can reject, I don't mind.
Name:Arrow
Gender:Male
Armor:Shadowsun Set
Weapons:Argent Peacemaker and Sentenza
Personality:Quiet, does not enjoy company, seems to like personal time and solo missions.
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Swordsmanship: 0
Gunner: 8.3 (due to the loss of left arm which has been regenerating by his own methods, not Sparks)
Bomber: 0
Stamina:5.5
Intelligence:8 (has natural methods to almost every injury, experienced in the clockwork elevators)
Speed: 6.6
Agility: 7 (climbs to shoot from high places and a has to have for the no shield arm)
Oh I wasn't thinking of Snow for a name >:3
Name: Cracker (HAH!) the Klepto Gremlin
Gender: Female
Armor: Managed to 'Find' a Mercurial Demo set and modified it to fit her. She also actually bought a Saintly Silver Pendant and a Wyrmwood Bracelet that she's kept for ages.
Weapons: Irontech Destroyer and Humbug Hazer ('Borrowed')
Personality: Skittish. She enjoys company for a little bit, but isn't all that trusting of said company. She prefers to be quiet, though when she does speak she is usually blunt and doesn't sugarcoat things. She tries to make sure things turn out best for her.
STATS:
Swordsmanship: 0
Gunning: 0
Bombing: 8 (Explosions make for PERFECT distractions ;P)
Stamina: 3
Intelligence: 7
Speed: 7
Cunning: 9
Agility: 6
Let me know if there's something wrong with this here app.
Great, Snow! I can definitely work with that, however,me completely forgot about armor...
I think cracker is going to have regular armor at first. When a certain "something happens, I'll include weapons and armor.
Which of the four Knight apps are you going to accept?
Glad it's workable. It's the best excuse I could think of to get her gear XD
*is excited for the next chapter*
Writing the next chapter right now! I'm not sure when I'll be able to release it, however. I'm taking the day off tomorrow as it is my birthday, so I have plans. I'll either release the chapter tonight, or on Saturday. Thank you for your patience!
Also, as far as apps go, I'll list each new character as I introduce them.
@Sonosuke
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make an app! PLEASE.
I needs motivation from thee.
Considering you denied my last two and didn't even tell me, I don't have a lot left.
Subject line says it all.