Spiral Knights - Thinslayer, please read!

Thinslayer, please read!

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Mon, 02/17/2014 - 15:04

Valorai

Hello thin. (And anyone else who was curious enough to click) I could use your assistance. I noticed on your previous RP that you had some interesting lines. Here is an example.

Dark is the Void and its all-seeing Eye!
No shelter for the helpless and weary.
No choice left for us but to curl up and die
What's left for our souls gaunt and bleary?
__________

I always knew that you were well versed, and I'm hoping that you could do something like this for me. My attempts to contact you in game have failed, so I decided to make a thread about it.

Here is what I ask of you:

- A short 'poem' about the swarm. Restrictions:

Cannot name the swarm
Must describe the swarm in some way.
The beginning must start with chanting.

Of course, I do not hold you to do this for me, it's just a favor I asked. There's no one I know who could do it better than you on here.

Mon, 02/17/2014 - 15:13

Pipipipipi

The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

I'm not Thin, and I'm reading this first

Mon, 02/17/2014 - 15:20

Thinslayer

@Valorai

I'd love to. I'll post the poem here.

EDIT: Scratch that, I'll post it after Feline's. You're on! >:)

Mon, 02/17/2014 - 15:18

Feline-Grenadier

POKE!

Despair for all who sees the Eye.

The trickle of shade, relentless;

Despair for all who sees the Eye.

Unrelenting pain,

Despair for all who sees the Eye.

For all in its grasp;

Despair for all who sees the Eye.

In its clutches are many dead.

Despair.

~~~

Thin, you have to top this one!

Mon, 02/17/2014 - 15:36

Thinslayer

The Eye of the Swarm

Hear us, O knight, and follow our voice... Despair and die, despair and die! Please, join us and live; there's no other choice! Despair and die, despair and die! We mean you no harm; why then do you run? Despair and die, despair and die! Don't listen to them, they're nothing but scum- Despair and die, despair and die! We bleed for your soul, our members cry out... Despair and die, despair and die! The Eye is still weeping, your name we all shout! Despair and die, despair and die! To hell with it all- PLEASE SAVE US, WE BEG YOU!! Despair and die, despair and die! Your foolishness surely destroys you.

Mon, 02/17/2014 - 15:57

Valorai

Heart of Valor

I'm not saying that either of your poems are better than the other, but I'm choosing Felines. This poem will be used in my fanfiction, and it just fits the setting better.

Mon, 02/17/2014 - 16:02

Thinslayer

/bow Feline-Grenadier

Kudos, Feline-Grenadier. /salute

Mon, 02/17/2014 - 16:04

Feline-Grenadier

^-^'

/hug thinslayer

Mon, 02/17/2014 - 18:34

Malkalack

Swag IS a virtue

I thought Thinslayer's was cool, but I dont begrudge Feline-Grenadier.

@ Thinslayer Dude, that reminds me of a song Vikings might sing. Minus the swarm. But it read like a skald's song. WELL DONE

Tue, 02/18/2014 - 07:32

Valorai

Heart of Valor

Hey Thin, I want to talk to you again. But not publicly this time. Is your in-game name Thinslayer? Are you active on it? If so, can I send you a mail or a friend request?

Tue, 02/18/2014 - 09:12

#10

Thinslayer

@Valorai

Yeah, my IGN is Thinslayer, and I'm quite active on it (as it's my main). Feel free to either friend me or PM me.

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