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Wed, 03/05/2014 - 11:32
Whyna's picture
Whyna

I am sorry about that other fanfic, I wanted some applications for the fan-fic , so I 'sent it to the graveyard'.

Anyways, I am making a new fan-fic. Before I make any chapters, I would like a few applications for the story. I will need....

- An anti-hero (No brooders plz)
- A character who makes a self sacrifice (Optional)

DIFFERENCES
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-There is no Seerus, Razwog, Herex or Tinkinzar.
-The core is powered by 4 hidden 'Arcane Emblems' hidden within the most unexpected and irrelavent areas.

APP SET-OUT
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Name:

Role:

Likes (This section could help shape the comedy)

Favourite Food (As in, Rocky Jelly Pie sorta food)

Dislikes:

Gear (I need this to shape the skills of the character)

Appearance:

Stats (hope you do not mind valorai)

Speed 1/10
Strength 1/10
Luck 1/10
Knowledge 1/10

CAST
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Biotech Hahn
Me
Fain
Gra'gra'grakky
Sho Marufuji

Prologue :D finally
Chapter One

Wed, 03/05/2014 - 11:40
#1
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Valorai
Heart of Valor.

I would send an app, but I have no idea what you want for it. Name. Appearence? Bio? Personality.

Wed, 03/05/2014 - 12:04
#2
Whyna's picture
Whyna
Short live the trojans....

Done.

Wed, 03/05/2014 - 12:54
#3
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Thinslayer
Let me try.

Biotech Hahn
Role: scientist
Favorite Food: Blaze Pepper Soup
Likes: talking fast, sounding intelligent, mecha horses (the equivalent of motorcycles), shooting random things and pretending it was an accident
Dislikes: other fast-talkers, know-it-alls, mecha horse enthusiasts, trigger-happy gunslingers
Gear: Rugged Robo Wrecker, Big Beast Basher, Super Slime Slasher, Spitfire, Pummel Gun (wrench, pick, shovel, flare gun, and escape gun, respectively)
Stats:

  • Speed: 2
  • Strength: 2
  • Luck: 1
  • Knowledge: 10

Astran "Thinslayer" Valderis
Role: Deuteragonist #1
Favorite Food: cattle milk
Likes: guns, ladies (i.e. not "girls," just to be clear), being awesome, controversial debates, power walks, health food
Dislikes: stupidity, getting killed, mushrooms, unwashed hands, bad breath
Stats:

  • Speed: 5
  • Strength: 2
  • Luck: 5
  • Knowledge: 3

Solorfainiel, better-known as "Fain"
Role: Deuteragonist #2
Favorite Food: venison
Likes: stealth, surprising people, being hot & sexy, knife-throwing, saving Astran's hindquarters, Astran's hindquarters
Dislikes: Astran (just a little bit), competition, bad breath, Blaze Pepper Soup, hypocrites, ex-boyfriends
Stats:

  • Speed: 8
  • Strength: 1
  • Luck: 5
  • Knowledge: 1

Thu, 03/06/2014 - 07:12
#4
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Malkalack
Swag IS a virtue

NAME: Gra'gra'grakky (yeah, he's a gremlin)
ROLE: Minor Antagonist
FAVOURITE FOOD: Mystery Meat, baby! Ignorance is bliss.
LIKES: Monologuing, Forcing captured knights to serve him, and Gremlin dancers. (Don't ask what kind). He also enjoys one-upmanship. And koalas.
DISLIKES: More important Gremlins, itchy bandages, mortal injuries, Spiral Knights and cavaties.

Stats.
Speed: 1
Strength: 5
Luck: 10
Knowledge:0

Thu, 03/06/2014 - 10:47
#5
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Whyna
Prologue

Whyna started chopping some bushes, looking for a certain fruit. 'Where is this bloody Amberberry that scientist wants?' he muttered in a curious tone as he cut through the bushes with his blade. It took a lot of painful chopping until he found an orange fruit, covered with spots of a darker shade. 'That must be it!' he exclaimed, and he then went off to the Gloaming Wildwoods.

He slaughtered the wolvers and chromalisks, and rushed to the den. Wolvers and Alpha wolvers pounded across the den. He swiftly stroke a team of beasts and frozen a pack of wolvers. Then he entered the lair of the snarbolax... He then woken the creature and lured the ghastly creature into the reach of the beast bell and stopped it in its tracks. He started unleashing his first combo of calibur strikes, then he lured it once again and continued with the same pattern until a final cry came from Snarbolax.

Whyna then entered Moorcroft Manor and met Biotech Hahn, who was working on something. 'Do you have the antidote?' asked Whyna. 'Yes, and I suppose you have the Amberberry?' replyed Biotech Hahn.

'Why do you need it anyway?'
'For my dinner, Blaze Pepper soup, yum!'
OK Then....!'

By the way, how do people like Valorai and Psychnade make links to their chapters?

Sat, 03/08/2014 - 02:08
#6
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Whyna
Short live the trojans.....

Before I make a new chapter, I would like a main character app and mabye some feedback, but i will need a main character app and some details to the gear for some of you who did not mention anything :D

Sat, 03/08/2014 - 08:25
#7
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Sho-Marufuji
Oh, um.. Uh.. Oh, there's my app.

Name: Sho Marufuji (Goes by Sho)
Role: Main Character's Frenemy
Favorite Food: Jellies! :DDDDDDDDD (Especially Slooms)
Likes: Guns, creepy things, jellies, kats, UTTER DESTRUCTION AND DEATH, HAHAHA-derp, pretty much everything.
Dislikes: Ehhh, pretty much nothing.

Stats:
Speed: 5
Strength: 5
Luck: 5
Knowledge: -7 (0)

Sun, 03/09/2014 - 03:45
#8
Whyna's picture
Whyna
Short live the trojans...

Really, HOW do they make links?

Sun, 03/09/2014 - 04:04
#9
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Feline-Grenadier
Hm...

Testing.

Alright, so here's how I'll break it down.

Let < = [.

And > = ].

[a href="http://examplesite.com"]EXAMPLETEXT[/a]

Alright, the "a href=" part is a command that says : "Hey the following script will be the hyperlink!"

The site the "a href=" command translates has to be beginning with an http://, but since most sites use it anyways, you can always copy and paste the site address from another window / tab.

After you enclose the "a href=http://" part with ">", then you can type in any text you want as a clickable placeholder. If you want to type in any text after that hyperlink, though, you can end the command prompt by typing in "< / a >", as you would any other command.

Alternatively, some sites will automatically convert their copied URLs into hyperlinks when you paste them, like so :

http://www.mangahere.com/manga/historys_strongest_disciple_kenichi/v02/c...

This way, you don't have to add placeholder text to your hyperlinks.

Sun, 03/09/2014 - 05:52
#10
Whyna's picture
Whyna
Short live the trojans....

Still need the main character app and gear details.

Mon, 03/10/2014 - 13:32
#11
Whyna's picture
Whyna
Short live the trojans...

Detail please. And Sho, I am making you the main character, hope you do not mind.

Tue, 03/11/2014 - 13:36
#12
Whyna's picture
Whyna
Short live the trojans....

OK, I will be planning Chapter One!

Fri, 03/14/2014 - 12:00
#13
Whyna's picture
Whyna
Chapter One: The Confusing Element

The shooting star flew across the sky with such speed as a falcon, and with the beauty of an elegant swan across the sapphire skies of Cradle.
The person who saw this was a lucky person to see such a rarity in such a place. The amazement, the beauty, the luck was astounding. Today was to be a great day. 'Amazing!' said this happy person. This person was Sho Marufuji.

He is a great and courageous Vanguard, who loves everyone and everything. His caring attitude is what replaces his pea-sized and, frankly, foolish mind. His luck is one of any person, but is great. Sho Marufuji has a powerful strike and never gave up even in the worst circumstances, and these traits are what had taken him to such great authority and rank to be for great use for the perilous adventure that lies ahead of his great path.

Sho rushed to Haven and entered the Bazaar.

Haven is a great and wonderful city, inhabited by pretty snipes with a beautiful rhythm and a prestigious dancing skill. The Strangers who also live there speak a strange and fascinating language called Govanian, a language made entirely out of odd and confusing onomatopoeic words and sounds. There are also many small-looking houses, yet they have many, MANY intricately decorated rooms underground. They usally have many Knights living inside. The Bazaar is basically a huge crowd of anxious buyers and sellers.

'Hey!'
'I was told by someone to give you a present for what you did.'
'What did I do?'
'You raised the civilians' morale while I travelled to get the antidote for this blasted disease called the Cursed Plague.'
'Ah, yes I remember.'
' So I will give you this in return.'
' A Ghost Bell?'
' It will help later on.'
' Hmm, thanks anyway!'

What Sho Mafuruji did not know was that the Ghost Bell is a fascinating artifact. Whenever the call of light enter the Ghost Bells range of sound, something strange yet exciting happens. It becomes a new form of bell and shoots a beacon of light across the land. This is mainly why Haven is in its lively and welcome state. If this did not happen, it would have been a dull, urban city. This great power has never been explained, and it greatly confused even the cleverest scientists. This can very well be one of the great wonders of Cradle.

'Who is this then,' said Grack who was looking down from a tower. 'Another knight to be facing the very likes of me?'

To Be Continued....

Sorry if its small :/

Sun, 03/16/2014 - 09:08
#14
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Whyna
Apps

No anti-heroes then?

Mon, 03/17/2014 - 13:15
#15
Whyna's picture
Whyna
Short live the trojans...

Please, I want some feedback on this chapter so someones reading and this is not an abandoned thread.

Anyone?

Fri, 03/21/2014 - 10:44
#16
Whyna's picture
Whyna
That name is rubbish

Changed the name.

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