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Emblems of Cradle (Discussion Thread) (Apps Open)

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Tue, 03/11/2014 - 13:29
Whyna's picture
Whyna

This is my first RP ever!

Applications
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In an app you must have the following:

Name
Age
Appearance
Cradle Emblem (This decides your rank in the RP)

You have a certain amount of points to assign, of which amount I will tell you depending on who you are.

Owlite Wisdom (0-3) These points will increase throughout the story.
Winter Sorrow (0-3) These points will increase throughout the story.
Spiral Wonder (0-3) These points will increase throughout the story.

Gear:
Role:
Backstory:

Special Ability
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This you can use in your story posts, but one only! I will provide info for what i think works.

Owlite Abilities
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Telekinesis: Pretty equal.
Clairvoyance: Fortune-tellers.

Winter Abilities
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Time Travel: You can trace and soar through certain events in your life.
Petrify: You have the power to transform a person to a block of ice.

Spiral Abilities
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Teleporting: You shall have the power to flee from battle(Max 200m).
Force Field: You have the power to turn a source of energy into a huge barrier.

Tue, 03/11/2014 - 19:41
#1
Colray's picture
Colray
whats it about?

Might be more inclined to app if I know what did story's bout :)

Wed, 03/12/2014 - 09:09
#2
Whyna's picture
Whyna
Short live the trojans....

It is 300 years after the Skylark crash landed onto Cradle. They now have created an Emblem of Cradle. The world soon changes, and life evolves. However the Owlites seem to have came back into existence. But the evolved world is open to new dangers...

Wed, 03/12/2014 - 09:27
#3
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck

Not to be rude, but thats not much of a story to go off of. Thats more like a set up then a story. Its a alright set up, but I think you can make this into a much better story given a little more time and work. I would never discourage a write (I want mroe writers!) and this is no different, I would like to see more story then a set up thou :L

Wed, 03/12/2014 - 09:43
#4
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Feedback on the setup

This is my first RP ever! Good luck.

Applications
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In an app you must have the following:

Name
Age Why is this important?
Appearance
Cradle Emblem (This decides your rank in the RP) What are Cradle Emblems? Tell us more about them.

You have a certain amount of points to assign, of which amount I will tell you depending on who you are. Why?

Owlite Wisdom (0-3) What is this, and what do the numbers mean?
Winter Sorrow (0-3) What is this, and what do the numbers mean?
Spiral Wonder (0-3) What is this, and what do the numbers mean?

Gear:
Role: What roles are available?
Backstory(Optional): Why is this optional? Our ability to write a good story is pretty important; I reckon this might actually be the MOST important part of the app.

Special Ability
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This you can use in your story posts, but one only! I will provide info for what i think works

Owlite Abilities
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Telikinesis: Pretty equal. It's spelled 'tele-kine-sis'. How does it work in-game? And what do you mean by 'pretty equal'?
Clairvoyance: Fortune-tellers. How does this work in-game?

Winter Abilities
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(coming soon) We can't make character applications until this is finished. Don't take too long.

Spiral Abilities
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(coming soon) We can't make character applications until this is finished. Don't take too long.

Wed, 03/12/2014 - 10:05
#5
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Thin, reading your post reminded me of what happened to Creeper's story.

Wed, 03/12/2014 - 10:12
#6
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Valor.

It's happening again.

Wed, 03/12/2014 - 10:40
#7
Whyna's picture
Whyna
Short live the trojans....

What happened to Creeper? Did he flip out and derail the thread?

Wed, 03/12/2014 - 10:43
#8
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck

Its in the past, just learn from the mistake, and move forwards.

Wed, 03/12/2014 - 12:17
#9
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Thin's Review

Those are still legitimate criticisms...

Wed, 03/12/2014 - 12:53
#10
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

I'm not saying they aren't, just that I'm in fear of being witness to another near-mental breakdown.

Wed, 03/12/2014 - 12:58
#11
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck

At the risk of saying what I just said, things happen for a reason. Wither or not we learn from those mistakes is our problem and our priority. What happened happened, from that we should take the mistakes that where made and learn from them. In other words a quote I like a lot.

We look to the past, to prepare for the future with all the lessons we learn along the way.
~???

This does not mean we should always say it was a bad thing for their really are no such things as mistakes, rather your learned how not to do something, or how not to get it right. All I am saying is learn from everything that happened in the past, RP's/Realife/ETC. For history will always be with us and threw it we can tell when some one is doomed to repeat it or make it. :)

Sat, 04/12/2014 - 00:45
#12
Ember-Break's picture
Ember-Break
Hm...

I'm just gonna throw an app out into the open, and we'll be able to learn off of the example: this spot'll be reserved for an ACTUAL app once all discovered info is put into the top but... For now/later it will be a "trial and error App".

The Ancient survivor:

(Starting off, I'm gonna make an Owlite guy who's insanely strong in Wisdom and Magic. Can we even make Owlites? And what of those Winter thingys. Are they a race? An evolution of enemies perhaps?)

Name: Morgul
Age: 1931 Cradle Years
Appearance: A withered old Owlite, completely blind he uses only magic to sense those around him. His age has granted him great wisdom, but an unhealthy cough which cannot be cured by magic or medicine. He has a huntched back and uses a cane to support himself, although those close to him know he has enough power to walk straight without anything's/anyone's aid.

Cradle Emblem: (I have no idea. I'm guessing you were planning on making this like the Ranks? If so, you should list some ranks available for the Owlites or... Winter things? Th' heck are those?) High (if not highest) Owlite Rank.

Not enough info to even guess what I can do for these. It sounds like you'll review the app and give a number for each right now. What they do is unclear too but... I guess for Morgul he'd have 3 Owlite Wisdom and not much else.
Owlite Wisdom ( 3? )
Winter Sorrow ( ? )
Spiral Wonder ( ? )

Gear: (What gear could an Owlite have...? Do we just make custom gear and describe its looks and perhaps its equivalent to regular SK gear?) A smooth White Silk robe that is soft and warm to the touch. Its hood's inside has fluffy feathers and down, making a makeshift pillow of absolute fluffiness.

Role: Guide to Owlites (Are such positions available? Or is there a limit?)

Backstory: (Well, I'm not gonna use this guy as an example, but are we able to use characters from other RP's? (Pitchforks or something. I don't even know what they're called.) Also, we'll need more of the actual story's background for characters as old as this, and newer info on the surrounding area for younger apps) He was raised before the Owlites vanished, and has lived throughout their disappearance, honing his magic and looking for other Owlites which managed to survive the (insert whatever this RP plans on reasoning for the Owlite's disappearance here). Now that they have returned, he guides young Owlites so that they might explore the dangers of the outside world with (insert basic description of this RP's depiction of Owlites here (ex: wisdom, valor, thoughtlessness, etc.) ).

Special Ability:

Allows him to share his vast knowledge of monsters (along with their weaknesses), spells, food, and other such things with all Owlites within 30 miles. He cannot move while using this form of powerful telekinesis, as it would otherwise interrupt the flow of (insert wherever the Owlites get their Power (if they get their own power that is) from). He has called this self-invented spell "Relay Compendium".

Owlite Ability:

(Are we able to make our own abilities? Or must we choose from a list? The community could help with ideas for abilities if you want, that or make it a "free ability" that goes along with the Special Ability)
Absolute Guard Circle: Capable of guarding all allied forces for as long as the caster is uninterrupted, or as long as they do not run out of (once again, whatever power the Owlites can use). Damage taken during casting interupts the spell, but when mastered (which Morgul has) it takes seconds to complete the cast. The caster can move during chanting. The caster is not protected by this Ability.

Sat, 04/12/2014 - 13:21
#13
Liminori's picture
Liminori
Err...

This RP can still be saved, Whyna.
Just give us a detailed story, What are emblems, And what's up with the points system?
Also, I may be saying what Thinslayer said again, But still- Compacted.
Finish the abilities and schtuff.. Please.

Sun, 04/13/2014 - 02:12
#14
Whyna's picture
Whyna
Short live the trojans....

Well I finished the Abilities.

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