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Cradle's Dream World (Fan-Fic, Chapter 1, part 2)

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Wed, 04/02/2014 - 14:13
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario

This is something I am going to do along side The Swarm's Final Stand...

Story: Everyone knows that when you fall asleep, you dream. In Cradle, the dream's often feel like it's real life and you wake up before it becomes too dangerous or if you are about to die. However, recently in the dreams, 2 dark creatures have been terrorizing knights in their dreams and killing them. One is rumored to prevent them from awaking and the other is a ruthless dark demon.

This story takes place from 5 knights, each chapter shows the person's nightmare dream.

Apps: (Side note, one of the characters dream is 3 years in the future. So when you are doing you app, you can change the personality for the future dream. E.g. If the person was childish and immature, in the future, they could be mature and helpful. Appearance can also change if you want for the future dream.)

Name:
Age:
Appearance: (Can use a picture if you want)
Equipment: (Armor can be customized but can only have 2 defenses e.g. shadow and piercing. Status isn't allowed.)
Weapon: (Typical spiral knight weapons but can have a customized look)
Personality:
Bio:

My App:

Name: Amy
Age: 15 (Older version is 18)
Appearance at 15 (Normal)
Appearance at 18 (Future Dream)
Equipment: Coat that gives normal and shadow defense. Doesn't wear helm.
Weapon: Wrench Wand but customized to look like a staff.
Personality: Kind, helpful, tries her best, can get confused if things don't make sense and fantasizes (Only fantasizes in the future dream).
Bio: Amy grew up in Cradle and knew how it all worked but wasn't sure how the dream world didn't work just yet.

Accepted Apps (Don't need anymore)

Phantom
Dice
Gres
Leo

Thu, 04/03/2014 - 19:47
#1
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Oroseira
Ooh, okay!

Name: Phantom
Age: 14 (so 17 as dreamself)
Appearance:
Normal
Dreamself
Equipment: Black Kat Cowl and a custom-made Snarbolax Coat which is just aesthetically different.
Weapon: Gran Faust.
Personality: Mainly cheerful and helpful, but can sometimes be quite snarky.
Bio: Mainly a cheerful guy, somewhat easy to break.

Thu, 04/03/2014 - 15:27
#2
Colray's picture
Colray
errrr got it

Name: Leo
Age: 20 (Same in dreamworld)
Appearance: Chapeau of the Green Rose, Almirian Crusader amir(minus giant spike thingy on shoulder)
Equipment: Shadowsun Set.
Weapon: Crossbow (customized Callahan)
Personality: Easygoing, Determined, likes to keep to himself, had a deep dislike for fire.
Bio: Leo was a gunslinger that liked the feel of a crossbow. After some experimentation, he was able to change the look of a Callahan and uses it as his main weapon. Works as a scout for the order, has unseen movement skills.

Thu, 04/03/2014 - 06:38
#3
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Valor.

Name: Dice
Age: 30 (Dreamworld: 16)
Appearance: Tall and dark. Dark circles under his eyes. Has a flowing cloak.
Equipment: A dark brown cloak that has normal and piercing defense.
Weapon: A Lionheart blade with a serrated edge.
Personality: Depressed. Antisocial, he doesn't like people in general. (In dream: Fun, lively, energetic.)
Bio: Having lost all of who he loves he became a sad man who mostly kept to himself. In the dream, he can pretend everyone is safe, giving him the happiness of a child,therefore making him sixteen.

Thu, 04/03/2014 - 07:46
#4
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Name: Gres
Age: 16 (19 in future dream)
Appearance: Stocky build, grey eyes, wears Grey Feather Cowl and Snarbolax Coat. Has a scar running down the right of his face, over his eye.
Equipment: Divine Veil, Skolver Coat, Barbarous Thorn Shield
Weapon: White Acheron without the purple aura, Barbarous Thorn Blade
Personality: (16) Quiet, keeps to himself. High morals prevents him from taking innocent lives. Would protect any teammate or innocent in danger.
(19) More open and kind, but otherwise the same.
Bio: Nosu is a highly respected warrior. His skills with a sword are only matched by his ruthlessness towards his enemies. He met two brothers while out in the Clockworks, and they have become rather close friends.

Thu, 04/03/2014 - 08:07
#5
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Apps

@Phantom: Accepted
@Colray: Nearly accepted, just need a picture.
@Valorai: Accepted
@Sonosuke: Accepted

1 app slot left.

Thu, 04/03/2014 - 08:15
#6
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Isn't that all 5 knights? Including yours?

Thu, 04/03/2014 - 09:15
#7
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
@Sonosuke

Yes, I only need 5 knights including mine. The story is quite long for the 5 characters...

Thu, 04/03/2014 - 19:17
#8
Oroseira's picture
Oroseira
Oh...wait.

I forgot dreamself!Phantom image. Ooops. Oh well I'll do it soon. It's not that big of a deal. And also the Snarbolax Coat is decidedly different looking (it functions like a normal Snarbolax Coat, it's just it's aesthetically different.)

Thu, 04/03/2014 - 14:00
#9
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Starting first chapter soon...

I am ready to start the first chapter but I need one more character first...

Thu, 04/03/2014 - 15:28
#10
Colray's picture
Colray
done

I jotted down the appearance in words, might make an appearance on SpiralSpy since Drawing us taking too long for me.

Fri, 04/04/2014 - 14:43
#11
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Creeperlucario
Chapter 1: Amy's Dream Part 1

"Urgh... did... did I fall asleep here?" Amy slowly starts getting up and yawns since she just woke up. Amy looked down and was surprised at the clothes she was wearing and then looking in the mirror and said "Wait, these aren't my clothes! Did... did I grow up when I was asleep?"

Amy walked around and said "I'm sure it's me but older. I do look more elegant and more sensible." Amy walked to the door and opened it still thinking how she could have aged that quickly. She realized that she was in Haven's palace. As Amy walked out, she heard someone calling for her and she turned around to see who it was.

"Amy, how are you?" Amy was shocked to see Phantom there and said "O-oh, f-fine." Amy noticed how much stronger he looked due to his new equipment. Suddenly a Mecha Knight run by and looked worried. Phantom then said "Great(!) Another Mecha Knight afraid of maintenance... I'll be back." Amy quickly said "T-take your time."

Amy started to walk towards the door to enter Haven and thought she could feel someone watching her. She turned around but couldn't see anyone and thought she was just confused a bit too much. "I need to calm down and think carefully, I still don't know how this happened..." Amy left the palace and started walking around Haven.

Haven seemed normal and Amy was a bit relieved at that and decided to take a walk through the nearby woods. Amy calmed down and was feeling happy but just thought she forgot what happened over the past 3 years which was still odd. As Amy was nearly done, she thought she could hear someone training the Garrison.

"The power of your sword comes from the strength of your legs. Use your legs for more power." The knights then said "Yes Sir!" before going to the training hall in the guild. Gres turned around when he heard someone walking by and saw Amy.

Amy was a bit surprised that Gres was helping out the garrison and Gres then said "You having a stroll around Haven, Amy?" She quickly replied "Y-yes, I am just strolling around..." Gres was a bit puzzled and said "The king asked me to train the garrison for deeper exploring." Amy replied "Do your best..." Amy quickly walked away and Gres had a confused look on his face before going into the training hall."

Amy leaned against a nearby wall and sighed. She then said "Is this a dream? Something doesn't seem to be right here but, now I think about it..." Gres used to be pretty quiet and often stayed by himself but now, he is more open and dare I say, looks cute." Anyone nearby would have seen Amy just standing there, fantasizing...
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Well, that is the first part done. As for your character Colray, it's been accepted.
Leave your thoughts about what you thought about this part.
As for the other characters, Amy has met all these people in real life before so this is why there are in her dream...
I'll try and get the next chapter done by tomorrow.

Mon, 04/07/2014 - 18:45
#12
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Nope, you are not going into the second page.

Sat, 04/12/2014 - 14:30
#13
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Chapter 1: Amy's Dream Part 2

Amy was still fantasizing when Leo noticed her and decided to play a trick on her. Leo slowly sneaked behind Amy and said "A-my!" Amy snapped out and shouted back "L-leo!" Leo said "What's wrong? You scared?" Amy was slowly looking paler from the surprise when Leo says "What where you doing?" Amy started blushing a bit from embarrassment and said "N-nothing"

Amy was getting worried and decided to run towards the arcade and it looked like she was crying. Leo then said "What did I do?" After Amy reached the arcade, she walked over to the side and looked over the edge sighing. "I-I guess it's good everyone is still here but... is this what everyone's going to be like in the future?"

"Hm... I have seen everyone except Dice but, he often seems depressed." Amy then heard someone saying "Amy". Amy thought "No... it can't be..." Amy turns around and saw Dice there, still looking the same but, more lively. Dice then said "How have you been? Want to explore Gloaming Wildwoods?"

Amy was starting to shake a bit and was looking flushed. Amy then said "N-no t-thanks... I-I'm f-fine..." Amy thought "Why is he acting so lively? He used to be so alone and depressed." Dice had noticed Amy wasn't looking right and said "Are you OK? Your voice is shaking and you looked flushed." Amy was shocked that Dice knew how she was feeling.

Amy started to shake her hands and said "T-There i-is n-nothing w-wrong." Dice grabbed one of Amy's wrists and said "You don't look fine, I think you should rest. Do you need to go to the hospital?" Amy was really freaked out and pushed Dice back and said "N-no, you a-are making t-things worse!" Dice then said "What's going on?"

Amy run to a lift and the lift started to go down. As the lift was going down, she was crying and then the lift stopped halfway down to depth 13. Someone boomed out "Amy!" Amy looked up and saw the creature and said "Y-yes?" The unknown creature then said "Didn't we agree that if I gave you power, you would become my slave!"

Amy then said "W-why would I-I agree to that?" The creature then said "Believe me, it would feel great knowing you are a slave to the 1 of the strongest creatures in Haven. Now, become my slave!" The creature saw someone with red eyes in the distance as it started to fly closer to Amy with blood soaked claws.

Amy then shouted "N-n" and woke up from the dream and finished shouting "NO!". She started to look around and everything was back to normal. Amy sighed and said "Thank god." She got up and said "What.. was that? An omen? Well... at least it was peaceful... sort of..."
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Sorry for the massive delay, internet was out and just came back today...
Who is the mysterious creature in the future saying about having Amy as their slave?
What was that creature with the blood soaked claws? Is it one of the dark creatures?
Find out next chapter if the internet doesn't go out...

Tue, 04/15/2014 - 17:26
#14
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Why is this in the Graveyard all of a sudden?

Wed, 04/16/2014 - 08:43
#15
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Pipipipipi
Roses are red, murder is blue, yet they don't have a clue.

Because Creeper can't make a fan fic without feeling like a complete fail

It's ok...

/pats Creeper on the back

Wed, 04/16/2014 - 08:54
#16
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

I think that's the last thing you'd want to tell the author.

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