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Vie, 02/06/2015 - 05:27
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Liminori

I've stopped seeing stories in the vault. They look more like a bunch of grabs for attention.
I didn't join Machinauts, and I left outnumbered because I knew it would be too long. Much like the Yore of Almire, except in that case I just didn't know what to do. It's really hard to do a skeleton story, so I think I'll just have to put more restrictions, like making a map.
And yes, that means that in my previous stories you could literally go wherever the f*** you wanted.

When did stories stop being stories?
And no, I'm not saying you're all bad storytellers, because that would be rude and hypocritic.
Your stories are original, though not compelling, and they lose their point or intended read within a few posts.
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You are a student of Helix High, Just about to graduate.
That rumoured day is coming up again- The mysterious bus that shows up every year, and takes people. It is rumoured that people that get on never get off. For whatever reason, you are compelled to investigate.
Let's see how badly this goes.
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Application Sheet
Name:
Gender:
Bio:
Personality:
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Character List & Status
(APPS ARE NOT BEING ACCEPTED YET)
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So.
I'll be creating maps, and a story skeleton and the like.

Let's see how badly this goes. - Carda

Vie, 02/06/2015 - 08:08
#1
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Autofire
You are experiencing a PICNIC ERROR!

It might or might not interest you to learn that I have been working on the sequel to By a Thread, for my fangame. No, it isn't just intended to carry my game. However, my busyness on other stuff, (Like reading The Hobbit) as well as forgetfulness, has kept me away from it.

Dom, 02/08/2015 - 12:41
#2
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Liminori
Ah.

Alright.

I'm not even sure why I thought this would be a good id-
Actually it looks like I didn't in the first place.
My stories have no place in this world, apparently.

Fun fact: Helix is a synonym of spiral!

Dom, 02/08/2015 - 13:08
#3
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Ember-Break
Missing input, lost output.

Were you waiting for people to make apps? Or was your post just now speaking of how you've given up on the idea before it even started, Lim?

If it was the former, then all you need to do is change this:
"Character List & Status
(APPS ARE NOT BEING ACCEPTED YET)"

to

"Character List & Status
(APPS ARE CURRENTLY BEING ACCEPTED)"

If it's the latter, then allow me to just say that despite the story summary currently being quite vague -- incredibly vague in fact -- as well as limiting as to what characters Apps you may have received (specifically in the Age category), that you shouldn't give up on it before it had even begun. Or at least make sure you giving up results in the thread in the graveyard, and not with a post explaining how you've given up. Seeing ideas die before they develop makes me sad, so don't show me that your work is dying... Just put the flame out in silence.

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