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Jue, 11/19/2015 - 06:10
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Jue, 11/19/2015 - 19:20
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Much twist!

I enjoyed the story very much. The writing was good, but the story had a kind of cookie-cutter storyline for a mystery novel. The only survivor from a massacre was the murderer, the lazy unorthodox guy solves the case, etcetera. However it is only your third attempt. Again, I enjoyed the story and look forward to more.

Jue, 11/19/2015 - 23:45
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Strayed-Faris
TY!

Thanks for reading and the input. :3
I'll definitely try to go for a more complex crime and character cast on my next run.

Mié, 06/22/2016 - 10:18
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