Spiral Knights - Almire,Renaissance (FANFICTION:ON HIATUS TILL NEW YEARS!)

Almire,Renaissance (FANFICTION:ON HIATUS TILL NEW YEARS!)

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Wed, 11/16/2011 - 13:26

Softhead

The Proluge is HERE: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/31387#comment-197824
I have moved my Story to a seperate page!
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Chapter 1: Knightmare!
Blood.
Crowds cheering.
Grotesque bodies...
A woman in grey and red crying, being draged like a criminal...
A head is on a pike like a spear, eyes closed. The eyes suddenly snap open and glared at space, laughing. A teenager ing bedclothes stepped back, scared. The red, pinpricks of eyes stared at the boy and flames exploded from the sockets. The boy screamed as his felt his flesh roasting.
''God! Somebody help Me!'' He bellowed.
''Renaissance..'
''Aaagghh!''
''Renaissance!''

Renai shot up from his bed like a bullet, covered in icy cold sweat. His mother looked at him in fright, confused that her son was in this state of morose.
''Renaissance Vanaduke, are you alright?!'' she asked, scared.
''I'm fine mother, just a nightmare..''he muttered inaudibly. He stared at his mother with his slitted eyes, shinning radiantly in the darkness like orange flames. He had this dream for the third time in a row since his 16th birthday. His sweat made his clothes cleave into his skin like knifes. He needed to go into town again without his mother knowing. He needed to see that man and get awnsers!

Characters will be chosen soon. Review and like!
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Tue, 11/29/2011 - 03:39

Skyber

A very good start you should

A very good start you should continue it.

Tue, 11/29/2011 - 12:48

Softhead

I will by wednesday

M intrenet came back today after 5 days of I AOL screwing up my broadband

Tue, 12/06/2011 - 00:40

Softhead

I will upload!

when i get home from school.

Wed, 12/07/2011 - 00:32

Softhead

Abit late. Chapter 2: commute

Renai woke up at the crack of dawn. He had made sure his mother could not see him walk out. Renai then sneaked out from the musty dwelling to the ambience of the silent, burning hot desert town. He was paranoid as the local would find him and report him to his mother. Feeling he was safe, Renai strutted confidently to the steam tram station.
The steam tram was the last piece of technology the Spirals created before going to war with the Almirians. It was much safer than horse and protected them from the Strangers. He made sure his hood was up and paid his crown fee. He sat down at the back, wedged between two burly farmers, one a man and another adolescent. The younger farmer was a girl! He thought many nicknames for the farmer until a voice intruded his thoughts.
“You goin’ to Vanadin?” she asked in a demanding county drawl.
“Yes” Renai replied.
“We need to go to the city for supplies, as we are farmers!” she shouted in a smug tone.
Renai muttered sardonically “Thank you captain obvious.”
Renai hoped the tram didn’t break. Those words were cursed as just then the tram stopped! Renai hit his head and slumped onto the floor. Through his unconscious state, he could hear screaming, and roaring.
“Strangers?” he questioned absent minded tone.
He opened his eyes only to see a deformed creature about to bite him…

Sat, 12/10/2011 - 06:04

Softhead

Chapter 3: 07:00

Renai felt the creature probing him, searching him for the sweet, juicy parts of him. The Stranger thought he was a five course meal. Renai felt an ailling pain in his stomach.

Strangers he thought. By-products of Spirals techno-organic project. Slow but when in a swarm, you're overwhelmed.

Overwhelmed The word stuck like glue. He was being overwhelmed by one Stranger.His anger was boiling madly now. He coulden't fight in this weakened state, but the stranger was more proficficent in power than Renai was in his entire life. He felt the hands grasp his necklace made out of Sun Silver and suddenly jerked away in agonising pain.

''They are afraid of Sun Silver?'' Renai muttered bemusingly. He tore it off and gripped it tightly.

He lifted himself up with a groan and saw the sight of the Strangger. The hand it grasped with was withered away. Is looked like it had oily, bubbiling tears coming from its narrowed optics. Renai composed himself and lifted the shard of Sun Silver over the head of the Stranger. Renai hesitated for a second, seeing the predator in this docile state. He then stabbed with full force at the forehead of the preadator. For a second nothing happened, then a peircing scream filled the corridor of the tram. Renai felt himself blast out of the corridor like a bullet of hot lead from a gun. He last saw the time of his watch was 07:00.

07:00,07:00,07:00.

Then he blacked out on the desert floor.

Sat, 12/10/2011 - 14:52

Softhead

Chapter 4: Infomant 1: Rex and Reginia

Haven Town Square Departures 12:44
The sun shone raidiantly in the melting pot of the town. To the bottom of it, pass the hoards of buyers and idle talkers, there was the departure gates. They were newly designed machines that warped to anywhere on the surface. I needed to take one to...
...somewhere. I passed Rescue Camp, Axis, Great Lake and Rocky Desert warps. Still none were the ones I need to take. After passing redundant warps I finally find the one I need is there; Mountain Peak! I gleefuly stood at the gate and waited for the dust to cover him. In a instant I looked like a sand monster. I then warped in an instant to my destination.

Warp ??:??
I felt like I was in a fruit whirring in blender as my atoms shifted painfully into a new destination.

Mountain Peak Nexus 12:48
I felt a cold, nipping, lone breeze blast at me as I reconstituted at the Nexus. It took a long time for me to adjust to the dark. I walked down to the Village's hostel, The Maw, to meet the informat.

The Maw 12:50
I entered the hostel and struted to the recception. I was very jolly as I would finally meet the 'Infomat'. I looked at the male recceptionist in a steam mask and Mecuriai Demo Helm.

''Mornin''' I spoke cheerfuly.

''What do you want?'' He hissed rudely.

''Jam your hype!'' I replied.''I just want to visit the 'Informant'!''

The recceptionist replied coldy'' He's in the bar now hurry up and get out.''

A he said those words, I swear that steam came out of his mask like a morning mist. I took a left into the bar and saw many knights drinking Wolverale. I walked to the counter and sat down on a stool. A man beside me had a Grey Feather Set and was spinning a Supernova on the surface of the counter.

''So, do you have it?'' I whispered to to woman.

''You're the man huh.''the Informant had a low and soothing voice like her calm, blue eyes.

''So, do you have it?'' I questioned again. She handed me a module and it was downloaded to my arsneal.

''I'll give you more tomorrow, If you want.''

''I think I will stay until I have everything I need.'' I turned and walked back to the recception.

''Just give me a room.'' I awnsered quickly

I grabbed the key he handed me and walked to room 1A. I sat on a desk and reviewed the module.

Almire facts 3: Rex and Reginia. The voice was in a slow, dull voice.

The king of Almire during 50 PSA was Jono Vanaduke of Vanadon. He had a group of many knights that were his Round Table. One of them was Lady Meridia who fought along side him during several wars. They fell in love and lived happily married in an era of peace for thirteen \years. Later the planned of having a child. Then after one month of conciving, Jono went insane after a excavation finding a rare metal which splintered on Jono. This lead to killing many knights and royals of other lines with the help of other royals of Vanadon. He was stopped by Polonius of Vanes, Polonia.The royals were excucuted, Jono was dead, Meridia was exiled to a local town outside of Vanadin and Polonius took the throne. Thus this ended the Rex and Reginia years and started the Polonius Kingdom Era.

I reviewed this several times befor closing the window. I lay down and thought about it.

I am so going to have the best story!
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These will explain the Universe of my story. Expect these A LOT!

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