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EMBRACE THE DARK [Chapter III: Tooth and Claw (COMPLETE)] - FanFic Comic! - UPDATED January 25

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Mon, 03/05/2012 - 14:32
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy

Synopsis

The recovered video of the chilling last moments of a lost squad sparks an investigation that will uncover an insane plot which if brought to fruition could not only spell doom for the Spiral Knights, but for all life on Cradle as well. Stopping it is a task that not one, but many brave heroes will be needed to foil as they confront terrifying enemies the likes of which have never been seen before, and not everyone will live to tell. The line between friend and foe blurs as allies are found in the most unlikely places, while trust is misplaced in the hands of those who are friends, as the race to save Cradle becomes ever more desperate.

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Attention

For those of you who haven't been following you may want to read the rest of the post here BEFORE viewing the comics.

To the mods: Could you let the shadow copy of this in the General forum stay there please (*-*)

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When you view this scroll down a bit so you don't see the panels that are coming:

~~====EMBRACE THE DARK====~~

Prologue
Chapter I: Chosen Heroes --- Chapter I Notes
Chapter II: In the Dark --- Chapter II Notes
Chapter III: Tooth and Claw (COMPLETE) - UPDATED --- Chapter III Notes
Chapter VI: Priorities (in progress)

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Goals for this Project
- Create an awesome FanComic
- Bring more attention to the forums
- Bring more attention to the Treasure Vault in particular
- Explore more in-depth some of the story elements we already know, while we wait for OOO to add more content :D
- Inspire more fan work
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About the Plot

While a lot of it is non-canon I attend for the story to end in a way that it technically 'could' happen in the actual SK world, so half of Haven won't get blown up, or the contents of the core come spilling out or something like that, I want to do my best to avoid stepping on what OOO wants to do with the storyline.

There are few assumptions I'm going to make though:

- Levels (and Cradle in general) are much larger then the 15-20 minute jogs you do in game, it could take hours to go through an area, and days to explore an new path down the the core

- There is a far greater variety of weapons and gear for both Knights and their enemies
- Weapons and gear may work differently or have more uses then in game
- Foes will tend to be smarter then what we see in game
- The interaction between the races on Cradle are far more complex
- There are no revives or instant health pills :P

- I'm also going to have to assume some things about the swarm for the story to work, hopefully it won't deviate too much from what OOO has in mind.

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Differences Between the Story and real Game Play
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Specialized Squad Roles

Squads can be larger then four people, and will often include characters with specialized roles such as squad leader, heavy weapons expert, medic, etc. Keep this in mind for your suggestions.

I'd also like to mention that, although there may be room for loner types, a majority of the knights will work in squads (whether the group will stay together is another matter) at least initially, if your main character has friends/squad mates you would like to see it would probably be a good idea to give a description of them too at some point as I am also looking for supporting characters as well.

Realistic Weapon Carrying

In my prologue story you may have noticed that characters often have their larger weapons slung over their back when not in use, I plan to carry on with this so knights will be limited to carrying 2 "large" weapons at most, I will assume smaller handguns and swords are holstered or sheathed.

Your Shield Actually 'Blocks'

Shields do not form a protective bubble around characters, they will act like real shields and actually take and (hopefully) absorb blows.

Bomb Toss

Bombs do not discriminate between friend or foe in this tale, as such they will often be tossed like grenades or remotely detonated from a safe distance.

No Instant Health Pills or Revives

That would kind of kill the drama.

=====BE PART OF THE STORY=====

You can participate in helping me create this tale by helping in one of these two threads:

Embrace the Dark: STORY DESIGN HELP
Embrace the Dark: ROLE CASTING

Everyone who contributes will be credited.

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 14:38
#1
Iron-Volvametal's picture
Iron-Volvametal
...

"Imgur is Over Capacity!"

IMGUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 14:39
#2
Fallconn's picture
Fallconn
FALCON PUNCH!

very nice Apathy...you've destroyed Imgur with your awesomeness ¬_¬

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 15:13
#3
Iron-Volvametal's picture
Iron-Volvametal
Grammar Mistakes.

Page. 60

"Hope their friendly."

*they're

"Gear up were moving out."

*we're

Page. 17

"Okay lets see who we've got here..."

*let's

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 14:56
#4
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
fixed

fixed

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 15:09
#5
Iron-Volvametal's picture
Iron-Volvametal
Hey...

On Page. 36, Urrick's Comment, is that supposed to be a reference to Usef-Berrys' Thread?

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 15:06
#6
Iron-Volvametal's picture
Iron-Volvametal
Spelling Mistake.

Page. 37

"Avaren Sir, I'm receving a Transmission..."

*receiving

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 15:12
#7
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
fixed it. Also I didn't know

fixed it.

Also I didn't know about that thread, guess they do look like gorillas :D

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 16:13
#8
Scarred-Knight's picture
Scarred-Knight
And again...

Amazing work on your fan fiction as always Happyapathy.

Your knowledge of models and designs behind the weapons never fails to impress me. I've said this for when you were done with part of chapter 1, but I can't wait to see more of your work.

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 17:00
#9
Avihr's picture
Avihr
Awesome O_O

jus... awesome O_O

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 17:22
#10
Ravenevan's picture
Ravenevan
Awesome!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 22:38
#11
Psychodestroyer's picture
Psychodestroyer
Dudes

Awesome.

I have nothing else to say.

Just...awesome...

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 22:55
#12
Tovvok
WHOA!

too awesome man, patiently waiting for more

Also thanks for the credits, I'm sure we all appreciate the notice :D

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 23:18
#13
Frostrex's picture
Frostrex
Awesome chapter

I like how in the background, you have people doing other things, and how Frostrex was the only one mildly disturbed by the video...

Wed, 03/07/2012 - 07:40
#14
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
Bump

Any comments on what you've seen so far?

Wed, 03/07/2012 - 12:56
#15
Softhead's picture
Softhead
One thing

Realia is a evil b****!

Poor Devilites.....

Other than that, cool beans.

Wed, 03/07/2012 - 14:47
#16
Valorai's picture
Valorai
I love it! I saw it for the

I love it! I saw it for the first time right now. :D

Wed, 03/07/2012 - 16:57
#17
Faronel's picture
Faronel
Oh my Roarlumus!

Wonderful. Wow. Amazing. You have a enormous amount of talent.
...And time.

Wed, 03/07/2012 - 18:29
#18
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
HUZZAH!

Wow I'm amazed, this is awesome hopefully we'll see chapter 2 soon, and some new characters!

Wed, 03/07/2012 - 20:00
#19
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Do you think that every one

Do you think that every one of us are all people with too much time? GET A LIFE!!! That doesn't apply to me, because I am dead.

Go figure.

Wed, 03/07/2012 - 20:40
#20
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
ATGATG IS BAK

I kinda agree with u Atgatg... WAIT WTF! ATGATG IS BACK FROM DA DED! AAAAH!
10 minutes later...
Ok, as i wuz saying, i agree with Atgatg, even I have a life. I use the forums judt when i cant play the game.

Thu, 03/08/2012 - 11:24
#21
Blakkwaltz's picture
Blakkwaltz
hello

I spotted you in the missions and I also read your comics decent stuff a little text heavy but ok.
Folds arms behind back and nods.

Thu, 03/08/2012 - 14:35
#22
Valorai's picture
Valorai
FOOL! Let a pro show you how

FOOL! Let a pro show you how its done.

*Folds arms behind back and-*

*Arms fall off* NUUUU!!! My beautiful arms!!! WHY!?!?!?!?!?!

Thu, 03/08/2012 - 15:36
#23
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
NAW U FAIL

Tsuna: IDIOTS! DIS IS HOW U DO IT, YA TRY HARDZ

*folds arms behind back and falls inti a pit* FUUUUUU-! Wait... I HAVE WANGS!
*flies back up on angel wings* :3 yeah buddy

Thu, 03/08/2012 - 16:48
#24
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Im still on the floor......

Im still on the floor...... Ooh! An angel!

*Jumps up and bites onto angel wings*

Mmph! M-m-- I-m Fly--ng!

Thu, 03/08/2012 - 18:50
#25
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Tsuna: AAAH DEMON! *takes out

Tsuna: AAAH DEMON! *takes out blaster and shoots Atgatg* NO WORK?! FINE*shoots Atgatg with Argent peacemaker* WEH?! Y U NO WORK! *shoots Atgatg with nacho launcher MKll and watches her fall to her(cough! Second) death.

Tsuna: :3

Thu, 03/08/2012 - 20:56
#26
Tovvok
hey

stop it! this is a thread for the comic!

Thu, 03/08/2012 - 21:01
#27
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
HAAIL NAW

Tsuna and Blue: (simultaneously) ... Shall we? We shall. *shootsTovvok with nacho launcha MKll* TROLLD

Fri, 03/09/2012 - 13:32
#28
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
teasers

Chapter 2 is in the works right now, here's a little look:

Outpost 17

This will be the starting point for this chapter, not much will happen here in this chapter but will be coming back here later...

Title Page

Lots of Sam Fisher clones?

Fri, 03/09/2012 - 15:37
#29
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
@Happyapathy

you know that corener to the left of the elavaters thats emptey? I suggest u put an alcemy macheine ther.

Fri, 03/09/2012 - 16:24
#30
Agazide's picture
Agazide
Waha! This is awesome. It

Waha! This is awesome. It takes forever to upload the photos but I'll have the entire thing on spiralsnipes eventually.

Sun, 03/11/2012 - 09:14
#31
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
bump

bump

Sun, 03/11/2012 - 11:57
#32
Softhead's picture
Softhead
HELP!

Does anyone own IE 9 and has recently downloaded spiral install? For some reason, I can't download anything!

I need to do those Wolver Dens....

Sun, 03/11/2012 - 12:32
#33
Echo's picture
Echo
Holy crap, never expected

Holy crap, never expected something like this. I just finished the prologue. This is awesome so far!

Sun, 03/11/2012 - 20:12
#34
Windsickle's picture
Windsickle
Nicely done, Happyapathy.

Nicely done, Happyapathy.

Wed, 03/14/2012 - 10:31
#35
Pow-The-Commando's picture
Pow-The-Commando
This is the best fanfic I've ever seen.

BEST FANFIC EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wed, 03/14/2012 - 17:32
#36
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
@Happyapathy

im the only one that posted critasisem and im ignored im just saying an alcemy machine would look nice.

Wed, 03/14/2012 - 18:25
#37
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
I actually need that space

I actually need that space for something...

Thu, 03/15/2012 - 22:21
#38
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
Partial Chapter II release

Put up the first part of Chapter 2, mostly story and character development, exciting stuff will happen soon. Will also include more pre-chapter stuff like some character bios in the final chapter 2 release.

@Eurydice

Any chance this thread can have a shadow copy in the General Discussion forum?

Thu, 03/15/2012 - 22:31
#39
Psychodestroyer's picture
Psychodestroyer
Oo

This is intense....

I Lol at espy, she be mean ><

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 00:44
#40
Shue-Donnym's picture
Shue-Donnym
From what I can discern, the

From what I can discern, the enemies on the title page are modified scuttlebots...or at least the parts that are visible.

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 12:10
#41
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
Comments or speculation

Comments or speculation anyone?

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 12:59
#42
Windsickle's picture
Windsickle
Minor Typos

Misspells. It's "competent" not "competant" unless Esira just mispronounced the word due to accent or something. Also, Urrick (yellow-green with Spiral Demo Suit and Groundbreaker Helm?) incorrectly says "their" when the correct word would've been "they're."

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 14:15
#43
Retrofit's picture
Retrofit
stuff

Chapter 2 looks great so far. I appreciate the attention to details like character activity in the backround and the various lighting effects - they help make the comic feel more "alive". The dialogue between Jael and Frostrex was a nice touch as well - it'll be interesting to see how character interaction develops going forward.

Looking forward to the rest!

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 17:44
#44
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
@Happyapathy

'sweet mother of cradle' that comment is so werth more then an alchemy machine

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 20:46
#45
Varsian's picture
Varsian
just a little something...

you know what this comic needs? an epic theme song...just sayin...

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 04:31
#46
Pow-The-Commando's picture
Pow-The-Commando
CII "Well their off the list

CII
"Well their off the list of suspects"
*they're

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 11:35
#47
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
@Varsian &Happyapathy

i agree findeing some backrouned music (not just an epic thiem song but also some good music to fit each sichuation) would macke this fafic epic it mite even become elegable to be a sticky thred.

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 18:41
#48
Fruits's picture
Fruits
Happy, you didn't just blow

Happy, you didn't just blow my mind away, you shattered it into a million pieces, then stomped on the remains and spit on them.
Amazing work.

The way you've portrayed the world of SK, everything feels so much bigger, mysterious and open, as if there were something undiscovered behind every locked door or elevator, scary things happening in secret places and breathtaking vistas in remote spots. It all makes it feel like a gigantic living world, one I'd love to spend hours exploring. And of course, I always appreciate the efforts put into the dynamic poses, the neat composition/camerawork and the inventive storytelling.

Keep it coming!
I can't wait to find out who dies first. =P

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 21:28
#49
Bulby's picture
Bulby
Good stuff

Awesome work. Can't wait to see chapter 3. :T

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 21:30
#50
Agazide's picture
Agazide
murr

Drop insertion so epic

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