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Embrace the Dark: ROLE CASTING [UPDATED FEB. 8, REOPENED, view character list for open slots]

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Thu, 02/02/2012 - 18:02
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Happyapathy

Now Actively Casting Roles for the Near Future

Active casting for my FanComic Embrace the Dark has reopened and will remain so until all open slots have been filled, I will be reviewing both new and past submissions and will make a point to comment on notable character suggestions.

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There's a mountain of text here about what I'm looking for (and what I'm not looking for) so I have marked the most crucial parts with *IMPORTANT* that you should read at least before you suggest a character, though considering everything will likely increase the chances of your character making it in.

ATTENTION to those submitting actual game characters or characters used in previous FanFics

I've marked certain sections and points with a ==!== as they may affect the existing concept of the character you already have, you should address these sections for your character.

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Things to Keep in Mind *IMPORTANT*
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Not Everyone Gets to be a Star

I make no promises to anyone for their character making it in, you might spend an hour describing your dream character and they may only end up with a minor role, or not even appear at all. I won't say any character suggestion is bad, but I may not be able to find any way to include them into the plot regardless of how much work or thought you put into them. That said characters with more thought and description will have greater consideration then those with less effort put into them.

The character selection here is going to be far more rigorous then most FanFics because I can't bring a character into been by simply saying "so-and-so walked into the room", I actually have to model, texture, and animate all characters and any specialized gear/props that may go with them, not that I discourage lots of submissions, in fact suggesting multiple characters would be a good idea if you want an idea of yours to make it in.

Creative Leeway ==!==

Unless specified by the submitter, I reserve the right to borrow, change, and/or omit parts and aspects of characters as I see necessary to use them, this may include changing names or combining parts from multiple peoples suggestions into a single character, if there is an important element to your characters appearance, personality, and/or history that you believe is integral to them please tell me, otherwise everything else is subject to change at my discretion.

Think Outside the Box

For those who follow my Spiral Spy works you should know that what I can make in terms of gear, armor, and props is not limited to what you see in-game, it is perfectly okay to suggest customized gear and weapons for your character but keep in mind that there is a limit to what I can do and how much I'm willing to do for a single character, so if you say something like "I want my character to have a full mechanized battle suit" chances are I will toss your idea out the window.

I have an ongoing showcase of what I can do with character and gear design that you can view to see what is possible in my other thread SPIRAL SPY SCENES.

View it here, do further down to see more

Things I CAN'T do (at the moment):

  • Bow and Arrows (I've tried)
  • Two-handed melee weapons (working on finding a way)
  • Whips, robotic tentacles, or anything that needs a lot of fluid, uniform movement (Too hard to animate)

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Differences Between the Story and real Game Play
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Specialized Squad Roles

Squads can be larger then four people, and will often include characters with specialized roles such as squad leader, heavy weapons expert, medic, etc. Keep this in mind for your suggestions.

I'd also like to mention that, although there may be room for loner types, a majority of the knights will work in squads (whether the group will stay together is another matter) at least initially, if your main character has friends/squad mates you would like to see it would probably be a good idea to give a description of them too at some point as I am also looking for supporting characters as well.

Realistic Weapon Carrying

In my prologue story you may have noticed that characters often have their larger weapons slung over their back when not in use, I plan to carry on with this so knights will be limited to carrying 2 "large" weapons at most, I will assume smaller handguns and swords are holstered or sheathed.

Your Shield Actually 'Blocks'

Shields do not form a protective bubble around characters, they will act like real shields and actually take and (hopefully) absorb blows.

Bomb Toss

Bombs do not discriminate between friend or foe in this tale, as such they will often be tossed like grenades or remotely detonated from a safe distance.

No Instant Health Pills or Revives

That would kind of kill the drama.

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Character Requirements *IMPORTANT*
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I'm going to keep the required elements for a submission here minimal and leave it up to people to embellish their ideas further:

Name:

Obvious.

Gender:

Also obvious.

Personality:

What outlook does your knight take? Optimist, pessimist, etc? Are they friendly, mean, shy, charismatic, etc. What are their mannerisms like, are they the type that says "is not", "isn't", or "ain't"? How do they react under pressure? etc...

Wow that was short. Though chances are pretty slim for your submission if this is all you give.

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Optional Information
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Here are some optional information categories you can give, its not limited to these and you don't have to fill them all (hence optional), if you do not fill out a category I will assume you are okay with whatever I put in.

Appearance/Armor:

If you want you can leave it up to me to decide what a character should look like, otherwise you can specify the appearance of your character, keep in mind armor is not limited to what is in game but keep it reasonable and based off of something that does exist. It is also possible to make knights taller or shorter then usual but I will not be taking to the extreme either way.

Weapons:

Same as Appearance/Armor, but I'm willing to stretch the range of possibilities more here, keep in mind that I'm going to try and be realistic about what Knights can carry in terms of weight so you won't see anyone running around with 4 Troika like swords.

History/Background: ==!==

If your knight has past experiences, relations, or other forms of personal baggage you think I should include or be aware of mention them here, be careful of saying something that would force me to go off on a personal issue tangent from the main story like "he's searching for his lost father" and such similar past issues that people may expect me to address somewhere in the course of the story.

A lack of experience can also be a feature of your character, perhaps they are a trainee who finds him/herself thrown into a situation they are not ready for.

Relations: ==!==

Does your character have any important relations? Are they in a squad, know of, or are related to another character you or someone else has suggested? How important is it to your character that I include this relation?

'Twist' Degree: ==!==

How far will you allow me to make surprise revelations or changes to your character? Such as it turns out your character is actually a lumber disguised as a knight (not going to happen) or your character is revealed to be a homicidal snipe killer (also not going to happen), tell me how much you want your character to stay as 'your character'.

If your character has friends/squad mates/pets who you hope to play supporting roles you can also tell me how you want me to treat them as well in terms of this.

Pets/Sidekicks:

You can suggest a pet/sidekick for your character, but don't expect everyone to have a snipe/wolver/mechaknight/mewcat/whatever in tow behind them, if there are pets it will be limited to very few characters having them.

Expendability: *IMPORTANT* ==!==

How okay are you with your character been killed off? Do you want them to survive in the end? If you like to reuse your characters in other Fan-Fic works you may not want them to die (or this could be a perfect opportunity to have them die :D) in the course of this story. Saying nothing here will be taken as that you are okay with whatever I to your character.

I will listen to you if you want your character to live but DO NOT ask for me to make sure your character dies, and certainly don't tell me what kind of dramatic death sequence you want, knowing a character is destined to bite the dust will kill the tension around them when things go south, if you do want a specific death mail it to me personally in game and I will consider it (I won't promise I will carry it out) as not to give it away here.

Make note that asking for your character to definitely survive will reduce their appeal to me as I don't like having a 'Saturday Morning Cartoon Hero' type who everyone knows is going to live no matter how bad things get, I would really like there to always be the potential for death for the main characters in this story.

If your character has friends/squad mates/pets who you hope to play supporting roles you can also tell me how you want me to treat them as well in terms of expendability.

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Here's a template you can use for your character, you don't have to use it as these are only guidelines:

Name:
Gender:
Personality:
Appearance/Armor:
Weapons:
History/Background:
Relations:
'Twist' Degree:
Pets/Sidekicks:
Expendability:

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Iffy/Unlikely Submissions
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Non-Knight Characters

I won't say that I won't accept any characters from other races besides knights, however it is a long shot that they will make it into the story.

Villains (UPDATED)

It is the antagonists, not the heroes, who drive a story, without them there would be no tale as it is what they do that the protagonist has to respond to, I have the important villains already planned out and adding anymore would mean rethinking the overall plot, it is possible that suggested minor henchmen types could be accepted but the chances for a villain who would have an impact on the plot is less then 1%.

UPDATE: I've reconsidered parts of the plot and there is the possibility for a small (5 or less, certainly not more then) number of antagonist knight characters, I will put further details of what I may be looking for when I decide whether to include them or not.

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How to Get Your Suggestion Rejected *IMPORTANT*
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Mentioning the words "magic" or "superpower"

This is SK not WoW, if you want your character to throw fireballs give him a flamethrower, not have him spew them from his hands.

Wall of Text/Disorganized suggestions

You may have the best idea for a character who would be perfect for a starring role here, but if you submit it as a wall of 20 lines of unbroken text I won't even bother to read it, incomprehensible grammar will also turn me off so make sure your submission is put in a way that doesn't make peoples eyes hurt when they look at them.

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How Long will Casting Go for? What About Revisions?
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I don't plan to close casting for a while, possibly never, however the sooner you submit your idea the better the chances of them landing a major role, if you submit an idea late ('late' has yet to be defined) they might just end up as cannon fodder or as that guy in the background doing something.

You are welcome to submit as many characters as you want, and make changes to them until/if they show up in the story, I suspect many people will be revising their characters after the first few chapters are put out when they get a better idea of what I'm looking for.

If you do revise a character make sure you inform me of the changes you have made.

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NEEDED/FILLED ROLES *IMPORTANT*
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To help with the casting process I've devised a chart to keep track of what I'm roughly looking for by showing what sort of characters I need for each chapter when they are introduced, check this to see if your character made it in or if you can think of a character to fill a hole. For some roles I have a kind of character in mind that I want, at which point I will describe what I'm looking for.

Types of characters

Main Character: Lead roles that the story will revolve around, they will see the most character development and drama

Supporting Character: A character who is closely involved with a main character but does not have the story focus on them, like a best friend for example, likely to follow where the main character goes and follow their actions, possible chance of been turned into a main character depending on direction of story

Minor Character: Used to fill out necessary roles to make the story work such as extra squad mates, nonetheless important though and could have their own sub-stories and dramatic scenes, possible chance of becoming a supporting character. More vulnerable to sudden/shock deaths (refer to Torozae from the prologue :P)

Generic Character: Sometimes I will just fill a role with an unimportant knight I make who may not even be given a name, they will often end up been cannon fodder or background characters.

What I need for...

----Chapter 1----

Squad 1

Avaren: CONFIRMED - ( with amendments) - Squad Leader (Main)
Typhon: CONFIRMED (with amendments) - Second in Command/Guardian (Supporting)
Kyrie: CONFIRMED - Medic (Supporting)
Urrick: CONFIRMED - (with amendments) - Bomber/Technician (Supporting)
Frostex: CONFIRMED - Technician (Supporting)

Squad 2

Esira (a character I made ;) ): CONFIRMED - Squad Leader (Main)
Jael: CONFIRMED (with amendments) - Second in Command (Supporting)
Auger: CONFIRMED - Bomber (Minor)
Generic - Squad mate
Generic - Squad mate

----Chapter 2----

No changes planned

----Chapter 3----

No changes planned

----Chapter 4----

No changes planned

----Chapter 5----

Squad 3

Rex: CONFIRMED - Squad Leader (Main)
Drake: CONFIRMED (with amendments) - Second in Command OR shared Squad Leadership (Main)
Generic - Squad mate
Generic - Squad mate

----Chapter 6----

Robida: CONFIRMED (with amendments) - Civilian (Minor)
Soro: CONFIRMED(with amendments) - Technician (Minor)
???: ??? - Gremlin Assistant (Minor/Supporting?)

----Chapter 7----

Squad Characters (Squad Assignment TBA)

Gyli: CONFIRMED (with amendments) - Striker(?) (Supporting)
Artini: (Unconfirmed)(with amendments) - Swordsman (Supporting)
Jed: CONFIRMED (with amendments) - Gunner (Supporting)
Regnan: (Unconfirmed) - Gunner (Supporting)
Clide: (Unconfirmed) - Technician (Supporting)
??? - ???: (Supporting)

Other(s)

Reanu: CONFIRMED (with amendments) - Swordsman/Bomber/Solo Knight (Supporting)

----Chapter 8----

Squad 4

Gwilren: CONFIRMED - Squad Leader (Minor)
Rosco Barns "Silk Finger": CONFIRMED - Gunner (Minor)
Fragor: CONFIRMED - Bomber (Minor)
York: CONFIRMED - Guardian (Minor)
Zale: CONFIRMED - Technician/Medic (Minor)
Augustus: CONFIRMED - Swordsman(Minor)
??? - ???: (Minor)

Other
Captain Hammer: (Unconfirmed) - Navy Marine Platoon Leader (Minor)
Ailment: CONFIRIMED - Swordsman/Solo Knight (Supporting)

----Chapter ?---- (will be included eventually)

??? - ???: Unconfirmed (Main?)
??? - ???: Unconfirmed (Supporting?)
??? - ???: Unconfirmed (Supporting/Minor?)
??? - ???: Unconfirmed (Supporting/Minor/Empty?)

----Chapter ?----

TBA

Please keep in mind that new roles will continue to open up, a suggested character may not appear until later, just because your suggestion doesn't appear on the current list does not mean there won't be a possible future role for them

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 18:04
#1
Iron-Volvametal's picture
Iron-Volvametal
:D

I loved the Comic, so I might Join.

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 18:17
#2
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
Name:Necro Gender: Male

Name:Necro

Gender: Male

Personality: A shadowy loner, but is generally a good team player is nessesary. He is somewhat very sarcastic and the such like, and hates noobs, but he is really a good Knight at heart. Likes BN, Fiends, and generally almost anything most of the average playerbase hates. More intelligent is matters of science as he used to be a scientist before the Skylark crashed.

Appearance/Armor: Wears Solid Cobalt Armor and Spiral Demo helm, wears magic hood and wolver coat as costume. Colors green and green. Wears his weapons in various sheaths all over his body. Khorovod+Jalovec in special double-sheath on his back, shockburst brandish and sealed swords in a belt sheaths, Twisted snarble barb is just stuck into his belt, lightning capacitor and super blast bomb are in a criss-cross bandolier on his chest, and his Crystal Shards is in a belt bandolier. Keeps extra armor in pack on back (hey, that rhymes! Extra armor includes several Cobalt helms and armors.)

Weapons: Jalovec, Khorovod, Shockburst Brandish, Sealed Sword, Twisted SNarble Barb, Crystal Shards, Lightning capacitor, super blast bomb.

History/Background: Just a regular Knight with a dark and sarcastic attitude. Used to be a scientist on the SKylark, but that all changed when the SKylark crashed.

Relations: None. No friends/love interests/people who he enjoys their company.

Pets/Sidekicks: Breeds a small amount of greavers, as he has a profound interest in them. currently has about 20. Always takes 2-3 of them on missions.

Expendability: No. Although it would be okay for him to get severly injured, taken prisoner, the works.

Feel free to change his stuf around a bit, if you accept him and feel like it. It's your story/comic, after all.

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 18:44
#3
Windsickle's picture
Windsickle
About this story...

I'd post a Character Sheet but before I do, I'd like to ask you a question, Happyapathy. What kind of story are you planning this to be? I don't want a summary or a basic plot or anything. I guess a better way to ask this would be: is this going to continue with the same "feel" that your prologue/preview had? That sort of darkish, epic, action type story? I apologize if this is asking too much but I'd like to know that kind of information before I put, say, some silly, happy-go-lucky character here or something like that. Thanks.

Sun, 02/05/2012 - 07:21
#4
Retrofit's picture
Retrofit
Stuff
  • Name: Kyrie
  • Gender: Female
  • Appearance: More or less this.
  • Weaponry: Peacemaker, Supernova
  • Characteristics: A veteran of the Spiral Order, Kyrie serves among her fellow knights as a Field Medic. Although typically short spoken and reserved, she is always ready to risk her welfare for that of others. Her extensive surgical and mechanical expertise and lethal precision with firearms make her a valuable companion and potent adversay.
  • Companion: A snow-white Snipe named Archimedes. He has a disturbing affinity to filthy places.
  • Expendability/Twist: Although notably experienced, the Field of Medicine often forces Kyrie into harrowing life or death situations which threaten both herself and her allies. Determination, skill, and luck have sustained her through numerous battles...but everyone bites the dust eventually.
    Kyrie usually keeps quiet about her history, supposedly because there isn't much to tell, and her service record mostly supports this claim. Still, everyone has their secrets...

EDIT: Name updated per request.

Moderately open character profile. Some liberties are naturally acceptable.

Couple others drifting in my head. May post here later.

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 20:59
#5
Sanin's picture
Sanin
HI

Name: Kana

Gender: female

Personality: wise, kind, skilled, caring. Likes to work as a team, also good at soloing. Always think before doing something stupid. like to help noobs, also Kana is very loyal to people who cares about her.

Appearance/Armor: Crown and Armor of Fallen (love to wear disguises: magic hood and cloak, divine stranger hat and wolver coat, other noob costumes)Always carries her Crest of Almire(very important to Kana, is the shield that gives her pride)

Weapons:FoV, Divine Avenger, Barbarous Thorn Blade, Argent Peacemaker, Faust, Virulent Catalyzer, Photo Sword and Gun :D, and some other swag.

History/Background:Vana's twin sister, once an proud Elite Crusader and a patriot of Almire. She is the only survivor of all the Almirians after Vanaduke have wiped out Almire (which soon became FSC.) Now she totally hates Vana.

Relations: Snarbolax is her best friend.

'Twist' Degree: I will take the 10 degrees 'Twist' (not much will change, is not like i am gonna turn evil and knife someone in the back) P.S. if I twist it "180" degrees, i might turn ur story upside down XD

Pets/Sidekicks: I think a Snarby Cub will go great with Kana ( I don't care a lot about having a pet)

Expendability: is ok if my character dies, but don't make it RANDOM!

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 19:45
#6
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
@Windsickle

I plan to play a lot with building up on suspense, but when it breaks expect there to be a lot of sword swinging and shooting when the action does happen. If I can I want to work in some humorous parts (like dealing with Devillite bureaucracy) but if I have my way I do have some very dark scenes in mind, when it comes down to it though this is more an epic adventure type of tale, not a horror.

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 20:08
#7
Xairathan's picture
Xairathan
Critias

Name: Critias
Gender: Male

Personality: Critias is a peaceful Knight unless the lives of himself or his friends are threatened. His one major flaw is his lack of confidence in himself, which has caused disaster to befall the team more than once. He is also, due to an incident, very afraid of the deepest depths of the Clockworks and what lurks within.

Appearance: His personal color is Cobalt. He wears a Dragon Scale Helm, which he adorns with a Scarf, Glasses, Com Unit, and Headband. His armor is a set of Wyvern Scale Mail, covered in small trinkets from friends and former squad members.

Weaponry: (First): Blazebrand (Second): Faust (Third): Silversix (Last Resort): Electron Charge Bomb

Backstory: Critias joined the Spiral Order along with his friends Torus and Raye at a young age. Their squad leader, Shiranui, took them on their first mission to the depths of Firestorm Citadel after a few weeks of training. However, due to a mishap in communication (or so it seemed), the squad took a wrong turn and ended up in a Swarm-infested tunnel. After an argument in which Shiranui and Torus left Critias and Raye behind, the Swarm attacked. All four members escaped safely, and two days later Critias and Raye were sent with two high-ranking Spiral officers to investigate.

During the investigation, the squad was ambushed by a large group of Swarm-infested monsters. The squad fought bravely, but made little headway. During the battle, Critias' squad suffered many casualties, the Squad leader sacrificing himself to allow the other three to escape. After a day's pursuit in which the squad was finally cornered, Critias saw an opportunity to escape. However, because of his hesitance, the other member of his squad was killed and Raye was mortally wounded. Critias escaped in time to save Raye's life, but the incident left her incapable of returning to the Clockworks.

Since then, Critias has delved repeatedly in an attempt to conquer his fears and take revenge on the Swarm-tunnel that hurt Raye. His friend Torus has joined him in his quest as well.

Companion: A fire-type Chromalisk named Shiranui, after his former squad leader. Shiranui is, unlike Critias, a fierce fighter and has the world record for Longest Length a Chroma can Spit.

Expendability/Twist: Critias, a novice diver, can adapt relatively well to most situations. However, when put into a situation in which he is emotionally or physically traumatized, he is likely to either freeze or make a fatal mistake, sometimes both. (I would appreciate if Critias is mainly kept as he is though)

Relations: In his downtime, Critias hangs out with his friend and lover, Raye. During his delves into the Clockworks, Critias appreciates the company of Torus the knight and Shiranui the Fire-chromalisk

[EDITS]: I would appreciate him alive, please :3
As for Torus, consider him a brash, hard-headed Knight that is the very epitome of heavy-sword-wielding Knights (he packs a Divine Avenger and Sudaruska). His armor is an Ancient Plate Mail and Arcane Salamander Mask

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 20:25
#8
Iron-Volvametal's picture
Iron-Volvametal
Submission Form

Name: Iron

Gender: Male

Personality: Serious, Caring, Defiant, Smart, Protective.

He is a Very Serious Knight, who also Cares for his Friends/Teammates & anyone else who is Close to him, Protecting them with his own Life. He is Skeptical of other Knights at First & Observes their Reactions very Closely to Determine what Type of Person they are. Even though he doesn't talk much, his Knowledge of most things is Impressive, being Beneficial in Groups & to Junior Knights. His Favorite Monsters are Constructs & he has a bit of a Hatred towards Beasts.

He Travels with his Friends, Tal/Grimm(They Share a Body), Zero, Myra, & Rikku.

Tal- (No Picture Available)
Grimm- (No Picture Available)
Zero- http://i529.photobucket.com/albums/dd333/Sonic402183/Zero.png
Myra- http://i529.photobucket.com/albums/dd333/Sonic402183/Myra2.png
Rikku- http://i529.photobucket.com/albums/dd333/Sonic402183/RikkuTheUndeadHuntr...

Appearance: He wears a Heavy Demo Suit w/ a Heavy Bomb Bandolier & a Cobalt Helm w/ Heavy Helm Guards.

Iron(Close Enough) http://i529.photobucket.com/albums/dd333/Sonic402183/GrumpyEyesExample.png

Weapons:

-Combuster, with an Irontech Bomb Hacked into the Core to Power it Up.
-Irontech Bomb that has the Same Effects as a Nitronome.

History/Background

He lives with a Group of Outcast Gremlins inside the Clockworks, in a Town called Lumiville, due to the Amount of Luminite that Grows around the Village, being the Town's Protector & Blacksmith, Repairing the Gremlin's Wrenches & Pickaxes.

He is one of the 4 Mysterious Knights to Escape Various Experiments Conducted by the Spiral Order's Scientists to become the "Perfect Soldiers."
Due to the Experiments, he is now Resistant to the Statuses he Normally would be from his Mad Bomber Suit, allowing Greater Survival. He is now considered an Android.

Relations:

Tal-Best Friend; Looks after him like a Little Brother.
Grimm-Not sure...
Zero-Best Friend/ Rival; Kinda like Zolo from "One Piece."
Myra-Protects her at all times; She loves him, but he doesn't Return the Affection, because he doesn't Notice.
Rikku-Friend/ Rival; Doesn't like her Hatred toward every Monster in the Clockworks.
Friends(On SK) Jokes around them; Uses Sarcastic Remarks to make fun of them.
Everyone Else-Defiant.

'Twist': None. I would like him to stay the Way he is.

Pets/ Sidekicks: His First Friend/"Pet" is a Mecha Knight he made named "Mechas." Mechas' Appearance looks that of a Mecha Knight Kit, but with a Dark Red Re-Color, T2 Mecha Knight Visor, Firebreak Shield, & Fireburst Brandish. He Wanders around Aimlessly in Lumiville, helping the Gremlins with Work & Chores.

Expendability: At the Worst, make him Seriously Injured(Like Getting Stabbed Through the Chest, much like the one in your Comic) & Taken away to get Medical Attention. No Death.
(How would I play Spiral Knights if Iron was Dead?)

EDIT: They won't Die, because they never Venture in. They just Wave Iron a Good Trip down & Stay up.

At the Least, make him into a Cameo(Ya know, like a person walking & Talking in the Background) but if you can, make a few scenes with him talking to a Couple of the Knights.

[Sorry for the Long Post.]

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 20:03
#9
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
@Xairathan

I didn't quite understand there if your okay with hm been killed off or not :P

I'd also like to mention to everyone that, although there may be room for loner types, a majority of the knights will work in squads (whether the group will stay together is another matter) at least initially, if your main character has friends/squad mates you would like to see it would probably be a good idea to give a description of them too at some point as I am also looking for supporting characters as well.

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 20:09
#10
Xairathan's picture
Xairathan
Edit

Edited my last post. Any other issues?

(I'm excited!)

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 20:22
#11
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
I updated the Twists and

I updated the Twists and Expendability section to include how you think I should treat the possible supporting friends/squad mates/pets you suggest could to go with your character.

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 20:23
#12
Tovvok
Limit?

So I have more than a few ideas for characters... whats our limit to how many guys we can offer you?

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 20:41
#13
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
There is no limit to how many

There is no limit to how many characters you can suggest, I just can't promise I will accept them all.

The total number of characters I'm going to have is not set yet and probably won't be until the first few chapters are out.

@Sanin

You might want to re-read about that part on non-Knight (this includes Almarian to me) races and magic, otherwise your character is okay.

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 20:34
#14
Windsickle's picture
Windsickle
Alright then. Maybe I'll

Alright then. Maybe I'll post a few. This one's a bit more light-hearted/silly character if you can fit one in. I've put the information that I'd prefer kept together (with regards to your Creative Leeway section) in bold font (< strong >).

Name: Riefs

Gender: Male

Appearance/Armor: Red Personal Color, Blazebreak Armor, Blazebreak Helm, Swiftstrike Buckler

Personality: Generally agreeable and nice person. Seemingly fearless and actually enthusiastic to take one for the team. Actually quite intelligent with a talent for tactics but he completely disregards it along with any common sense; probably won't find it until he's an old geezer with nothing better to do. Has a heart for those who are teased and bullied. Tries to treat everyone equally but actually has more respect for the creatures of the Clockworks than his fellow knights due to how he's treated himself. Kind of independent.

Battle Style: Fire equipment (obviously), leaning towards swordsman, charges and rushes foolishly into packs of enemies, rarely shields, very fierce and fast, willing to take damage if he can take down enemies with him.

Weapons: Blazebrand, Fiery Pepperbox, Flamberge

History/Background: Follows an ancient tradition of a small family of knights in which the retired would pass down their equipment to their heirs, equipment which happened to be those that Riefs has inherited. He lost a lot of equipment to gambling including a Drake Scale Helm, a Magma Driver, and a variety of other fire-style equipment though he has now quit gambling because he's horrible at it and lost so much. He now reluctantly wears a Blazebreak Helm to follow the creed but is constantly mistaken for a female knight. Explaining that he's male only lead to teasing, bullying, and fights which have resulted in him spending the majority of his time stewing in corners by himself working out, reading "Do-it-yourself" books, playing online fantasy games, reading novels, and earning enough Crowns to get a Drake Scale set believing it will help distinguish himself as male. Is currently only interested in proving who he is and helping those who are oppressed similarly; he doesn't really care about anything else. Prefers environments where he can be himself.

'Twist' Degree: I'd prefer that Riefs be relatively unchanged from the above. Character development and progression are perfectly fine though.

Relations: Helped start a club for Clockworks creatures and knights alike who are sick of being judged and bullied. You may place him wherever you like though.

Pets/Sidekicks: None yet?

Expendability: Your choice though a fair amount of lifetime would be appreciated.

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 20:59
#15
Tovvok
Character 1 York

Portrait:
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Name: York

Gender: Male

Personality: Macho

Rank: Seargent (assumes squad responsibility if Commanding officer should fall), heavy weapons specialist

Appearance/Armor: In image, not is a custom heavily armored wolver set with wolver pauldrons (shoulder pads)

Weapons: Collapsible hidden blaze brand striker custom variant (in image); interchangeable for a common blaze brand. His other weapon which he only ever uses when he has to is a large volcanic pepper box with a custom gasoline bandoleer so he can suppress a constant fire without having to reload.

History/Background: York was once a soldier under the flag of the fire storm citadel, before the lord vanaduke lost his mind and the whole "fire" advent happened. He escaped with a few other lesser members of the citadels army before vanaduke could turn him and those with him into slags. He was hardened by the course and harsh flames and ever since has had an attitude of confidence and slight arrogance. He beleives he has seen the worst of it and can handle anything he now comes across.

Relations: York keeps contact with a fellow soldier of the old courts of firestorm who was horribly marred in the escape. He tells no one his name and rolls by the alias Scorn. He is a mysterious calculating warrior who is unrivaled in dual short sword combat. York watches over him as if they were brothers, the two having only each other after the fall of their homes.

'Twist' Degree: none, he is a farely loyal simple man, just their to serve a purpose

Pets/Sidekicks: none

Expendability: At your discretion, very expendable

Sat, 02/04/2012 - 15:38
#16
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Outnuendo
Some app

Name: Jed

Gender: Male

Weapons: Senteza, Biohazard, Polaris, Argent Peacemaker

Appearance : http://s1248.photobucket.com/albums/hh488/ManicSunrise/?action=view&curr... (Sorry for the bad scenery. This was really rushed)

Edit: http://i1248.photobucket.com/albums/hh488/ManicSunrise/Jed2.png (another picture)

Bio: An ex-Member of the Levelers, which were an elite group of knights exploring the deepest depths of clockworks, Jed left after a disastrous mission in which he was the only one to survive, as he could keep his distance. He never rushes in to battle without a plan, and is constantly planning, even when he sees a single monster. He also happiest in the middle of the battle, and lives for the moment. He is also a crackshot sniper, using his sentence to snipe.

Personality: Pretty cynical and sarcastic. He also doesn't sugarcoat stuff, and will flat out tell you if he thinks it was terrible. He gets really happy when in the middle of a battle. Note that this usually starts happening whenever he's exploring. Otherwise, he acts very detached. He is usually very stark and down-to-earth, and treats honor in the same way. In his own words: "Faith and honor might help a bit, but when it really boils down to it, the only thing that matters is who's gripping the other person's head."

Relations: Is good friends with the knights Sun, a field researcher that studies monsters in the wild, and hale, a friendly genius who runs most of the frontier (A vast, unexplored area). He has also treveled with Soro, a cynical engineer who now works with Hale, and occasionally Tag, a swordsman who got Jed back into exploring, yet an enigma to all. He has also gone on a quest with Kana and Kantint.
'Twist' Degree: Can you keep his personality, as well as his senteza?
Pets/Sidekicks: Not many, though Tag was once one of his sidekicks.
Expendability:You can have him die, just as long as his death means something. Please, don't make it something like "Then a rock fell from the sky, and killed him."

Role: Probably some sort of planner, the one that tries to decided what hi team should be doing a the time.

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 20:58
#17
Tovvok
Character 2 Scorn

Portrait
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Name: Scorn

Gender: Male

Personality: Cryptic, calculating, eery, calm

Rank: Corporal, stealth specialist

Appearance/Armor: Custom heavily mechanized skelly helm with default dusker coat

Weapons: two blaze brands

History/Background: Scorn was never appreciated s a child and didn't have many friends. He spent most days rigorously training in multiple two handed fighting styles, in order to be able to ward off bullies. His focus and resolve were always unwavering. Though the day of vanadukes sudden insanity came as a shock to all as he ran down the streets calling "Out of Almire you dogs!" Turning all those in his path into strange fiends, scorn was prepared. His only weakness was his family had been turned and one of them bit him, marring his face. He was forced to strike down his brothers and his mother and father alike, but he did so with deadly precision. He was becoming tired and overwhelmed during a fight when a group of other survivors discovered and rescued him.
He was forced to be hooked up to an apparatus so that he could survive his wounds proceeding their escape.

Relations: His old friend york from FSC, they only met during the escape but are now bonded as brothers, some of the last of their kind.

'Twist' Degree: Could possibly be turned against squad when in presence of vanaduke or other primary demons due to his morphed form into a half living being, against his own will would be mind controlled and force to attack his allies.

Pets/Sidekicks: none

Expendability: At your discretion, somewhat expendable

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 21:04
#18
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Sanin
um...........

@Happyapathy

if u have played the game, u will know that the Almirians are a race of knights or else the they won't make the ALMIRAIN CRUSADER SET for players 2 wear.
and if the part about magic is my MAGIC HOOD and CLOAK, those are helms and armor in the game..................

Tue, 02/28/2012 - 19:04
#19
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
ALPHA

Name: Alpha

gender: male

personality: short tempered at times, always looking for trouble, outgoing and funny

Armor/weapons: nameless hat, nameless poncho, mega magnus, polaris, and sentenza, aegis OR Skolver coat and metal sonic helmet + original weapons and an Acheron (optional)

history: always accepted, Alpha was always privileged, and was almost always on top of things, he's always concerned if he has the best gear. After his family is killed off by an invasion of gremlins, he resorts to bounty hunting for money, eventually he finds his way to spiral HQ and joins up as a recon agent for the chance of killing the gremlins that killed his family and for changing his life back to a life of privilege.

twist degree: could always backstab or leave the squad for a bigger or a better squad or for more crowns

pets/sidekicks: a devilite named DEV that's his assistant and his hunting partner he picked him up after the guy got fired for blowing up a city, he is seriously obsessed with explosives, Also carry's around coffee for everyone!

expendability: You do as you see fit BUT he is my favorite character so he might not be as expandable as the others

EDIT: Maybe he could be a squad leader? Or according to your latest post he could be a supporting character, You can change his character, it is your comic, but i'd like his personality/backstory to be the same if it's possible but if needed go ahead and change it! Maybe DEV can be comedy relief? Also if he dies please make the devilite live? And i've figured that the whole nameless poncho outfit looks a bit weird can i change it to a skolver coat and a metal sonic helmet? (lol the metal sonic thing is a bit weird but it looks good) also i'd like to give him a backup sword maybe an Acheron?

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 21:17
#20
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Happyapathy
@Sanin I assumed those were

@Sanin

I assumed those were relics picked up from the skeletons of Almarian Knights who died a long time ago, last time I checked the hood and cloak didn't let you throw fireballs...

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 22:13
#21
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Agazide
Silver the scientist

Name: Agazide [nickname Silver]
Gender: Male
Personality: Whimsical, tongue-in-cheek, doesn't take battles very seriously allowing his much stronger teammates to do the fighting while he takes notes or analyzes things. Serious-obsessive when research is concerned. Unconcernedly takes notes on monsters on a clipboard during routine battles, always keeps a charged bomb inside his hat. Quotes data, weakpoint info, ect. when fighting.

Appearance/Armor: wolver with regal parrying plade, gold chapeau, Grey Owlite shield.

Weapons: Leviathan ASI high, which he is very proud of, and a spammy shivermist buster. Experimental weapons if epicness is needed in the story. (http://spiralsnipes.tumblr.com/post/16841650405)

History/Background: A relatively low-ranking scientist knight who enjoys researching monsters and mechanics within the Clockworks. A minor celebrity because he runs the main newspaper within the spiral knights colony :3

Relations: Master Chief/Cortana relationship with Arcelia, in which Aga gets into deep [crapola] and Arc exasperatedly bails him out via bullets and information.

'Twist' Degree: No backstabbing the good guys or anything like that. Maybe I could watch a few recruits die in the name of science, if you're going for the cold evil scientist angle.

Pets/Sidekicks: The perpetually exasperated Arc, via headset.

Expendability: Just looking for a camo in this thing, I don't mind being comic relief or the token guy who's kicked off a cliff for dramatic effect. Though I'd prefer to take out at least one mob via science or weapons before that happens. Oooh, or I can save the party's arse by freezing all the things. That would be a cool entrance if you're willing to have me as a long-term character. Death by having the bomb go off inside my hat is not an option. The bomb going off after I'm dead is.

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 22:07
#22
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Scarred-Knight
I have been waiting for some time to do this...

Name: Originally Dias, nowadays Ailment

Gender: Male

Personality: A heavy pessimist. Prefers to stay quiet and get the job done without speaking if possible. Very dark voice and a somewhat dark demeanor. Has few friends, and keeps to himself quite often, only presenting himself when he deems it important. He primarily practices swordsmanship as a means of entertainment, but also occupies his time with meditation, as well as frequent expeditions into the clockworks. Deals well with pressure, and remains calm almost the entire time. Very hard to catch him off guard. While he doesn't talk much, he is very wise and thoughtful.

Armor/Appearance: Wears his own version of Vog Cub Cap and Armor (of which I can provide should you deem this character acceptable in the Fanfic). He is slightly taller than the normal knight. Even when in a situation of a battle, he prefers to not undergo the battle-stance, as that makes him predictable.

Weapons: Always carries his signature sword Nightmare's Edge (which again, I can provide the texture), which sheaths at his side when he does not use it. Also hides a Volcanic Pepperbox for when he needs it (I have a re-texture of this that makes it slightly more realistic).

Histroy/Background: One of the best swordsman of the Spiral Order, Dias was known for being very supportive of the Order in his own ways. While he does not interact with them much, he does agree with their motives. When the Skylark crashed, he decided to look in the depths of Cradle for what, or who may be responsible for what caused the crash. After several months, he eventually found the source of the crash, but ended up mortally wounded due to being unprepared for what lied against him. However, he did not die, but instead endured several months of madness and confusion in the clockworks. When he finally did return, he came back carrying things he never had before, a garb that was much more twisted than the usual Vog Cub garbs, as well as a sword that no one recognized. He also came back and responded to a new name, seemingly forgetting his old one. His new name was Ailment. While he says he is sane and his motives remain with the order, some speculate that he still retains whatever happened to him in the clockworks. To this day, he plans on going back down there in order to find that source once again.

Relations: In good standings with many strong and skilled knights, however he keeps to himself quite a lot, thus people don't necessarily trust him. He does have a rival though, to which he has not seen since the crash of the Skylark. Many never question his actual swordsmanship, but people do question weather he is still with the order or not.

'Twist' Degree: I am pretty loose in terms of keeping him in place. This is your Fanfic after all Happyapathy, and you can do what you want with it. Just don't turn him on his head, and I am good. :)

Pets/Support: No pets, he relies upon himself pretty much. He can work with others, but he prefers to do tasks on his own. In other words, I do not have any plans to have anyone else tag along this character besides characters created by other people.

Expendability: While I would prefer for him to not die instantly, I at the same time would not be surprised if he died at the end or before so. Again, this is your Fanfic, you do what you want with him. Do what you think will suit the story best, you know your own story better than I do, so I really have no say in how long he will survive. If anything, he should only die to things he has never seen before (so, anything that is "out of the ordinary" clockworks structure).

Some pictures to help you get an idea as to what my character could look like:
Hand Drawn Version
Animated GIF I made some time ago...

I hope you consider him to be in your Fanfic, would mean quite a bit to me if he made it.

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 22:20
#23
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
@Aga How about been kicked

@Aga

How about been kicked off a cliff and landing on top of a monster :P

Thu, 02/02/2012 - 23:50
#24
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Faronel
Kantint

Name: Kantint

Gender: Male

Personality: Somewhat cold-hearted. Really smart and wise. He would usually use "is not" insted of "isn't." He will usually not help unless he is absolutly needed, otherwise he will watch were he can't be seen. He often may appear and disappear suddenly. He does not like to talk about his past. When someone needs it, He becomes compationete and gives advice. He refuses to let his friends die. Is usually calm at all times.

Appearance/Armor: He wears a Mercurial demo set, and has a slightly altered, more powerful version of an Ironmight plate shield.

Weapons: He has an incredibly large varety of bombs, but usually uses a Big Angry Bomb, an Electron Vortex, and the gun Valiance.

History/Background: When he was young, almost every one he knew was killed by people he does not remember. He was then taken in by the Spiral Order and became a scientist for them. To this day, he carries a poket watch given to him by his best friend who was killed, and is very protective about it.

Relations: Works as a scientist for the Spiral Order.

'Twist' Degree: I'd perfer to keep mostly the same- but you are the one making the comic.

Pets/Sidekicks: When he works, a silver Mecha knight with no weapons or sheilds and malifuntions less assists him.

Expendability: I don't want him to die eairly. If he does die, I'd like to be late in the comic and I'll mail my perfered reason for death.

Other: He is great at fighting. More importantly though, he is FREAKISHLY stealthy.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 00:43
#25
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
a lot of moody characters

a lot of moody characters here aren't there...

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 01:51
#26
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Frostrex
Still taking?

Name: Frostrex

Gender: Male

Personality: Usually cheerful, that said, he will probably make jokes while on an expedition, and try to cheer up his team. He won't take sides, and will try to resolve confilct peacefully. He will trust anyone who says they're his friend, so he is a little naive. He is a formidable fighter, but gets distracted easily.

Appearance/Armor: Clad in full Solid Cobalt armour, with the visor down, his dark blue eyes are only just visible. He carries a canteen, a side blade and has attached a comm. unit to his helmet.

Weapons: Being a newly released Spiral Knight, he weilds a shiny new Scended Calibur and straps an Avenger to his back. His shield is a shiny new Green Ward.He has a holstered Silversix, given to him by his grandfather.

History/Background: Being a fresh set of swords, Frostrex decided to go for the job as a communications technician, sending messages back and forth. He likes to play a supporting role in a squad. His family were fighters, and were not pleased when he chose this line of work.

Relations: None really. Being the newbie doesn't really get you friends...

Expendability: Frostrex can die if need be, or if the team really needs assistance, then BAM!, comm. guy is dead. But I wouldn't mind him going into a coma...

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 04:39
#27
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Outnuendo
"a lot of moody characters

"a lot of moody characters here aren't there..."
In my defense, Jed's not always moody.

Hell, in your standard adventure he is hardly ever moody.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 05:02
#28
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Shue-Donnym
Eh...just asking, can the

Eh...just asking, can the equipment be, like, salvaged parts of monsters(e.g. zombie head, jelly spire, etc)?
Because I made a scavenger-type character and I wanted to enter it in this fancomic.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 05:20
#29
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Darkbrady
I've left everything detailed

I've left everything detailed enough (I believe) to get the character across to you sufficiently, whilst also vague/open-ended enough for you to play about with it as you see fit.

Name: Jael
Gender: Male
Personality: In a word; stoic. Doesn't show emotions very often and tends to keep emotionally distanced, but has great affection for Robida (see below) and will be incredibly loyal to her and their squad. Will laugh a lot and appear to never take things seriously on an aesthetic level, but always does, he just doesn't show it.
Appearance/Armor: Wolver hat, Skelly suit with Tails' Tails attached and a bomb bandolier, where he carries his explosives.
Weapons: Any applicable sword (Sudaruska, if you'd prefer a specific choice), Volcanic Pepperbox, Electron Vortex, Shivermist Buster. Swifty Buckler.
History/Background: He keeps his history to himself generally and tends to only really discuss anything relevant to it with Robida.
Relations: Robida, his girl/wife (however these things work in SK/your fic).
'Twist' Degree: Pretty flexible. The only bits that are important are his interactions with/towards Robida/their Squad. History/background section can be changed to whatever.
Pets/Sidekicks: Not a sidekick/pet, but only works together with his girl, Robida. She's tends to work in similar fashions as himself, but is a lot more shy and keeps quiet, talking generally only to him in the background. She'll appear to take things far more seriously than Jael. She likes using swords and will get right in the face of the enemy.
Expendability: He'll live until he dies. Nae worries. Ideally, Robida shouldn't die, w/e happens to her.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 09:05
#30
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Happyapathy
keep the suggestions coming

I would like to point out that smashcraft posted a good example of what I'm looking for in a supporting character and his suggestion will probably make it in as a minor character (I do have a bit of an issue with the name though :/ ).

It would help to submit a good number of short, minor character ideas as well as your main character suggestions.

That said, I'm looking for a charismatic, overall 'good guy' squad leader type for the opening chapter who uses a type of "open face" helmet, such as the gunslinger hat (*cough*preferably *cough*), or open cobalt helm, for example. One problem with helms like wolver caps is that they block out the eyes so doing emotions with them is harder then those with open faces.

Just so you know characters won't be getting a lot of alone time as I intend for major things to happen with groups instead of single persons.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 09:09
#31
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Spyash
ah am i to late!

Species:Gremlin

Gender:male

Equips:Wild Hunting blade,Acheron,and a Sentenza

Personality:Mysterious, kind of evil although does enjoy himself quite a bit and has a love of snipes.

Bio: A gremlin who became a Assassin after his family was slaughtered by the spiral order when they went out to the devilish drudgery one day to buy some new clothes only reason he survived because he was a mischievous 4 year only gremlin who thought it would be hilarious to hide in a mail box where the knights didn't find him. as he saw them be beaten up by the spiral order he started to cry as they left a devilite found him and trained him so that he could move quick and as he grew up at the age of seven he was hiding waiting for a member of the spiral order to come by and he found one as he came up to attack she noticed him and thought he was kinda cute!.they talked and had lots of fun and she introduced him to snipes.as they grew up at the age of eleven she went adventuring in the clockworks with him where a gun puppy shot her down.She landed with a slam as she hit the ground he rushed up to her to try and do every thing he could to save her when a lumber whacked him into a tree away from her and when a wolver popped up about to grab her when he shouted "NO!" run towards the wolver a hit it in the head with his thwack hammer.He got her up and carried her to safety through all the pain it caused him.After another year she asked her dad to adopt him which he did as a birthday present for her. They trained together and after weeks of hard work she gave him a wild hunting blade as a gift he treasures the blade as if it was his life.They together slowly got much strong and he made him self an Acheron to help her defeat Jelly King.After they Got enough Jelly gems he bought an antigua and she bought a sealed sword.One day he had left it was the day before her birthday and she was in so much distress. The next day there was a knock at the door and he had returned and with him he carried a Darkfang shield say "only the most honourable gremlins get to wield this shield in combat and i think your more honourable than any of them" she hugged him so tight it started to get hard to breathe and she hadn't let go yet so he had to mumble until she figured out what he had been saying.She went out to the store that day to get herself some new clothes that her dad had said he'd buy her for her birthday and she'd seen a white fur cloak that was very beautiful so she asked her dad "can i get that?" as she pointed to it her dad said "ah a skolver coat one of the most valuable kinds of fur,sure i'll get that for you" and so they buy it after a few months she made herself a divine avenger and Spyash made his Sentenza. 2 days after she got a ceremony for gaining clearance into tier 3. One day as they're adventuring Spyash tripped and hit the ground really hard she laughed at him and then helped him up (secretly he really likes her laugh) but as he got up he notice a path behind a wall he followed it and when down into a room with her it was pitch black they knew something was wrong she pulled out her divine avenger which lit up the room. "Oh wow....." she said "i never thought i'd be the one to discover him""discover who?" said Spyash "King Tinkinzar" she said he responded "and that is.........." "Spyash he's king of the gremlins" "well that explains the gremlins around him" "their the Crimson Order" she said "haha a smart one she is" said king Tinkinzar "Spyash" she wispered "ya" he wispered back "we can take him"she said "are you sure we can take him and the Crimson Order?" spyash responded "yes we can this is what we've been training for" she said "ok" he said "if you insist". She said to King Tinkinzar "your on and when we win we'll go down in histroy you guys will be done Knights from the spiral order will come at you day and night" he responded "Ha! Vanaduke is going to love you" "ok get them and take the girl get rid of the gremlin with her. A hand came up and grabed her "GET OFF ME!" she shouted she swung her Divine avenger at a gremlin just to have taken away "NO!" spyash shouted as they were pulled away from each other "i'll find you and get you back i promise you" and spyash's vision goes black. He woke up in bed at home nothing taken, he was glad about that he still had the wild hunting blade she gave him and the matching Darkfang shield that he carved thier initials into.He went around town posting up signs saying he'd pay to buy the best skolver at tracking he could. Always looking in the clockworks for one to find for free, And on that day he swore to himself he would do anything to get her back even if it killed him.

thats my character if you want to include him i'd love to help thanks!

~ Spyash

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 15:29
#32
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Ndognine
Got one for ya :D

Name: Rex

Gender:Male

Personality: kinda laid back, tries to stay out of arguments, and generally be a good friend. Will always lend a hand to friends, tho may joke around about how they needed it. Besides all that he has a short temper, and won't let something go if he knows (or thinks anyway) he is right. He tends to perform his best while under pressure.

Appearance/Armor: (this may take a minute...)
Helm: Dragon Scale helm with glow eyes (idk what u think of these with the whole "magic" thing so if you don't want them it's fine) heavy mecha wings, volcanic scarf, and heavy spike mohawk.
Armor: Snarbolax Coat with fancy parry blade, ghostly aura (same as glow eyes) and volcanic dragon wings (same as glow eyes)
Kinda like this: http://spiral.onyxbits.de/node/319
personal color: Red
Shield: Swiftstrike or Barborous Thorn Shield.

Weapons: Fang of Vog and Sentenza (I'd like to assume this will be full shadow damage rather then split ; )

History/Background: When the Skylark first crashed Rex was too shaken to be of any use to the Order. His brother on the other hand started delving as soon as they let him. Rex was confused how someone could go into something so dangerous so quickly after the crash. However, while wandering Haven one day he bumped into the Leader of Alpha Squad, Euclid. The confidence he showed in his ability and his team's ability inspired Rex. He wanted to be just like Euclid, and inspire confidence in his friends, his family, and his team. Euclid's disappearance and his brothers injury shook him at first, but it quickly turned to rage, and then boiled down into a drive like no other. He would do anything in his power to find Euclid, and the Alpha  Squad, and avenge his brother by continuing his work.

Relations: has a brother that was seriously injured in the clockworks and is now confined to the hospital. Met the leader of Alpha Squad, who inspired him to become a knight.

'Twist' Degree: your story, your call

Pets/Sidekicks: has a pet Vog cub (if that's not okay it can just be an ash tail :p). Whether he comes into the clockworks or is just a potential random conversation piece is your call.

Expendability: just like "twist": your story, your call.

If I missed anything just let me know :D

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 09:40
#33
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Retrofit
Stuff

"I do have a bit of an issue with the name though :/"

The name's just filler. Feel free to swap it out for something you find more desirable.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 10:03
#34
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
Info?

Can we at least have other hints about if or characters make it in? Also can we know if we make it as a minor or major characters?

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 10:27
#35
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
I'm still debating with

I'm still debating with myself about whether to publicly announce how the casting will go, to be honest I might not know if I will need a character until I reach the point where they would be helpful, so until the story is finished there is always a chance for me to decide to add a new character if I want to.

@Spyash

TL;DR, I think I said something about that.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 12:50
#36
Softhead's picture
Softhead
a question

You know Nekomi? May my character have a history with her?

Sat, 02/04/2012 - 06:49
#37
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Isisdelltion
Minor Character

Name: Soro

Gender: Male

Personality: The sarcastic knight who's a bit negative. He'll crack a joke from time to time, but is generally shy and timid. He definately isn't a loner, and will try to stay with the group as much as possible.

Weapons: Acended Calibur, and nothing else.

Appearence: Wears Solid Cobalt Set, Smallish.
https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1nuO6-AVO5NkbTWGcpt1XormMqUZ0idVmJIkF...

Bio: Soro was one of the engineers on the Skylark, but he's more of a mechanic than a computer geek. When it crashed, he went into the Clockworks to learn some stuff from the Gremlins at Emberlight. He met a few knights called "The Levelers" and was working with one called Hale.

Relations:Knows Jed, and is somewhat friends with him.

'Twist' Degree: It's your story.

Expendability:It's your story, and if you need him to, he'll die for you.

He is more of a minor character, staying with the group.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 15:21
#38
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Happyapathy
@AtrumvindexPost it and will

@Atrumvindex

Post it and will see, I'm not going to put too many limits on what people can suggest, I just can't promise I will use them.

I'm seeing a lot of 'leader' types here, problem is I need more 'follower' types to follow those leaders :P

Tue, 02/12/2013 - 16:11
#39
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Windsickle
Bang.

Name: Regnan

Gender: Female

Personality: Doesn't choose to speak much but will take initiative and charge as she sees fit. Rarely seems to be fazed by dangerous, distressing, or otherwise unpleasant circumstances and changes of events. Tries to use all her senses to be as observant and aware of her surroundings (including enemies and teammates). Tries to be prepared for any situation at all times to rather paranoid lengths. Prefers sniping to open combat. Likes hot drinks.

Appearance/Armor: Sky Personal Color (or something somewhat bluish), Nameless Hat, Sunset Duster,...

Weapons: Modified Iron Slug (compatible with a variety of types of ammunition including Piercing Callahan bullets), Antigua,...

History/Background: Little is known about Regnan other than that she's a sharpshooting gunslinger with a moderate amount of combat experience and surprisingly decent mission success rate in smaller teams. Spends most of her time alone cleaning, fixing, and modifying her guns, preparing defensive/fallback systems and shelters in case of emergency, and being generally paranoid. Does extensive research before missions on as much related information as she can, including information on her teammates and other Knights (creepy). Speaks in a Western/Southern accent? Is currently working on making her Iron Slug compatible with Elemental and Shadow type projectiles.

Relations, 'Twist' Degree, Pets/Sidekicks, Expendability: All of this is to use and change as Happyapathy sees fit.

-Windsickle

EDIT: Just a bit of minor fixes here and there.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 15:25
#40
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Darkbrady
@Happy: My suggested

@Happy:

My suggested character both comes as a non-leader type and comes hand in hand with another character; good for filling half a squad while leaving room for a leader and other, too. Just pointin' that out, in case you took anythin' I said as implications that they're to be leaders, if it helps you filter out some "leader types" :)

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 15:42
#41
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Happyapathy
I've added a little chart of

I've added a little chart of what I'm looking for that I will update as the roles are filled, I hope this will help people to see what I need.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 15:43
#42
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Happyapathy
double post...

hooray for Drupal :/

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 16:15
#43
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Theonz
I might try as well.

Name:Theo

Gender:Male

Personality:Very shy. Strong, silent type. Cannot show/feel "good" emotions.(He looks mostly sad.) Absolute loner; is very uncomfortable with speaking to anyone in general. Only talks when somebody else openly speaks to him. Few actually do. Does not like killing. [Optional: Somehow friendly to the gremlins and devilites, neutral to the rest.]

Appearance: Shadowsun slicker without the gunslinger stuff on it(Just the black robe/poncho) and Grey feather cowl. Personal color is Grey/Red.

Weapons: Acheron renamed as "Noiré".

History/Background: A knight with a past so terrible, almost all of his emotions have faded away. Nobody knows what really happened to him. [Optional: He is the only/one of the few who kept their memory after the skylark crash.]

Relations: None. Up to the story to tell.

"Twist"Degree:Do a barrel roll.

Expendability: I would rather prefer not dying. But its your story.:)

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 16:58
#44
Ndognine's picture
Ndognine
About the roles, I guess it's

About the roles, I guess it's still your story and your call, but I suppose it would be nice to be a main or supporting character :P

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 17:01
#45
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Agazide
Flaming ice meteor of pointy doom

@Happyapathy

Sure, if I get to land swordfirst :3 Ooh ooh ooh or I can freeze myself so that I become this pointy statue of meteoric doom. But yeah, anything's fine, no need to treat my character with special dignity.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 19:31
#46
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Fruits
My clumsy attempt

Name: Dober

Gender: Dude

Tentative type: Supporting or minor

Personality: group clown, good guy, realist who practices safety first but dislikes superstition

Appearance/Armor: Demo suit, groundbreaker helm (not that important; can be left to your design)

Weapons: Surgebreaker shield, autogun, irontech destroyer

History/Background:
Dober is a field engineer and that means he has had a first hand look at just how incompetent and outright stupid his predecessors were when they built the world he lives in.
While he isn't exactly a "shield is half full" kind of guy, the man knows his craft and can Mcgyver up a busted mechaknight with 2 mist energy, a handful of bronze bolts and 5 feet of duct tape.
And while he's not exactly a full blown pessimist, he does like to complain that the new generation of engineers are lazy, have poor work ethics and prefer throw crystal energy at a problem to make it go away rather than fixing the root of the problem in having the right equipment for the right job.
Some could argue that he's shown a bit of paranoid behavior but to those who've seen him at work, it only makes him the first knight who made it to the escape pod when the Skylark went down with enough time to spare to message "I told you so" to the ship-wide interphone.
Being tossed around squads as needs for repairs and maintenance arise, he is easy to get along with but has the most affinity for machinery, often naming the mechaknights and turrets he repairs.

Relations:
Nerd cred abounds!
His superiors know him as a reliable repairman; the rest of the corps refer to him as the creature from the math-lagoon.

'Twist' Degree:
Dober is somewhat of a recluse who talks to his computer and sometimes lets slip his 150 ton "secret project".
Great freedoms can be taken as to what he really does in his dark room with his supercomputer and that broadband connection.

Pets/Sidekicks:
While he doesn't have a pet per say, he often repairs and gets attached to derelict mechanical constructs he runs into, sequentially naming them "dobs junior".

Expandability:
While there is a lot of poetic comedy in the tinfoilhat-wearer of the group dying, there's no reason why he can't make it to the end to deliver a cheesy line about everything being the fault of poor clockworks designs; however, if he has to die, I'd like to think that he will probably have managed to do so with hilarious irony.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 20:32
#47
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Iyashi
Name: Kuger Gender:

Name: Kuger
Gender: Female
Personality: Easy to work with, willing to take bullets for others, leadership skills, but easily distracted
Appearance/Armor: Black & White Azure Guardian if possible to create, Black & White plume'd helm, prismatic wings, cool glasses, divine flower (Crimson personal color)
Weapons: Scissor Blades, Shock Sudaruska, Neutlizer (or unique custom gun), Darkfang shield
History/Background: Originally a scientist who developed weapons for the spiral order, Then worked with squads as instructional support, training new members. eventually became a officer in charge of squad exploration.
Relations: N/A
'Twist' Degree: Feel free to use in any plot.
Pets/Sidekicks: N/A
Expendability: Kill if you want to but I'll be sad.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 20:58
#48
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Valorai
Name: EmeraldGender:

Name: Emerald
Gender: Female

Personality: Fun-loving, friendly little would-never-hurt-a-fly-Blue.
That's when people are around.
She's a killer with a lust to destroy the spiral order. She hates in with every molecule in her body. Of course, no one knows. She loves nature (Especially al the mewkats and wolvers.)
Appearance/armor: Seraphic set. Pink Flower accessory on helm.
Weapons: Leviathan blade.
History/backround: Used to be a computer whiz, and a master of stealth. Not really any more. She was injured on the field and the spiral order couldn't care less. Thats what she thought. She was able to heal though some of her brain (Or whatever spiral knights use to think) was damaged. She can barely operate any kind of technology.. But, because of this she learned something pretty awesome. She could be so skilful with her moves, sometimes she mesmerized her foe with all the different moves. She ditched her skolver set that everyone knew she weared and put on the seraphic, so no one would recognize her. She's still in Haven figuring out how to take out the order.

Relations: She used to have some, but everyone presumes her dead. The only one to know of her existence is someone in the spiral order.

Pets/sidekicks: A baby wolver. Rarely seen though. She keeps it somewhere in her armor where no one can hurt or see it. Referes to him as "Blue".

Expandability: I dont want my character to die. Although being horribly injured would be ok.

Also, she loves helping people (Being medic) and she doest like being the leader of the group. But she does like being important and having a high position.

Also, I think It'd be cool if she had a love interest? Its ur story though.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 20:57
#49
Tovvok
Filling the roles

would it annoy or upset you if we stated a character who might be best to fill a role and state the role example:

Squad 2
??? - Second in Command (Supporting)

I have the perfect idea for this character and would like to suggest he fills this role, otherwise IF he makes it in wherever he fits I'm ok with.

Fri, 02/03/2012 - 21:40
#50
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Happyapathy
go ahead I have no issue with

go ahead I have no issue with that

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