Spiral Knights - My life as a Snarbolax - The End. Sequel coming soon :D!

My life as a Snarbolax - The End. Sequel coming soon :D!

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Fri, 10/05/2012 - 14:22

#51

Dreathuxy

Ok. Thank you for the info.

EDIT: Oh cool new page

Tue, 10/09/2012 - 14:41

#52

Dreathuxy

Chapter 6 Part One

I stood and watched as the Great Colony grew bigger and bigger. Bradstone and his squad stood beside me. Derelict broke the silence.

"Hey, how do you think we will do in the battle?", she said.

"I dont know, but as long as none of us die Ill be happy.", I replied.

All of us were startled when a gremlin appeared out of nowhere and threatened to slit Elira's neck. She yelped and Derelict bit the gremlin and the poor thing got shocked to death.

"Whew, that was close." Frosti said.

Everyone agreed. I stayed silent and focused on the massive colony. I noticed something fishy about it. A huge red dust seemed to be around it. Or so I thought. Zechariah noticed it too, and pointed it out.

"Hey guys, are those gremlins?", he inquired.

"Yeah I think they are", Bradstone replied.

Oh s***. They were coming.

Sat, 10/13/2012 - 05:37

#53

Dreathuxy

Hello?

Im going to postpone the story until I know that people are watching this thread. Im feeling kind of Lonely.

Sat, 10/13/2012 - 05:49

#54

Artistbma

lol I read that a few days

lol I read that a few days ago, just didn't feel like posting.

Keep dat story goin!

Sat, 10/13/2012 - 13:23

#55

Metaalpha

Don't give up so easily

I've been reading this story and so far it's impressed me, I'd love to see more of it,please continue! PS: In my fanfic leader board its coming 2nd place (1st is battlefield) so keep going and get 1st place!!!

Sat, 10/13/2012 - 13:48

#56

Oroseira

/shake

What's gonna happen next?

@Dreath Ohohoho...I can't wait to see it. Chapter 6 Part 2 please!

Sun, 10/14/2012 - 07:40

#57

Dreathuxy

Chapter 6 Part Two

First of all, thank you guys for all of your support. I thought this was going to die, but you encouraged me to keep on going!

I might create a sequel.

***

Everything was a blur. Shielded gremlins were blocking our attacks from behind. Recon gremlins were coming up behind our guys and slicing them to bits. Bradstone and his team were fighting along beside me. In the midst of all the bloodshed, I managed to bump into Frosti, who was breathing heavier than normal.

"Anything wrong Frosti *murf*", I said as I bit a hooded gremlin's head off, the backbone coming out with it.

"No Snarby, just a bit warm", he uttered as he raked a recon gremlin to shreds with his claws.

I knew what was happening. Frostifurs are used to cold places. Down here, a large citadel is heating the place up. I just hope Frosti will be able to handle it.

"Zechariah, how are you doing in the fight?", I inquired as a shielded gremlin tried to hit me with its deformed hammer. I dodged. In doing so, I was able to rip its shield off, put it on my back, and body slam the poor creature.

"Derelict and Elira are back on the crawler, coming up with a strate-", he was cut off when Bradstone yelped.

"SNARBY! COME QUICK! ITS FROSTI!"

Oh s***. How could this happen. On top of a pile of slaughtered gremlins, was Frosti. I couldn't even tell it was him. He was black and as thin as a Chromalisk.

"FROSTI!!!", I yelled as I came over to him.

"No... let me *cough cough* be", he gasped, "It was fire...*cough* lots...".

"No no no no no NO! Frosti, you cant die", I felt tears welling up in my eyes.

"It is *cough* my time...."

His charred body turned into snow for a split second, then melted.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Sun, 10/14/2012 - 01:39

#58

Metaalpha

Snarby! Come quick! Frosty!

Poor frosti :( :( hope we can collect his ashes/molten liquid :D

Sun, 10/14/2012 - 05:18

#59

Artistbma

That was great! I like the

That was great!

I like the descriptive words you put in this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.

Sun, 10/14/2012 - 07:05

#60

Oroseira

Oh well. /shrug

Not even one part after introduction, got burnt to ashes. Oh well, /shrug.

But as for expendability, seeing as Derelict has something special, Don't kill her.

Sun, 10/14/2012 - 07:44

#61

Dreathuxy

SPOILER ALERT!!!!

This was not the last time we will see Frosti.

Mon, 10/15/2012 - 14:31

#62

Oroseira

Oo!

Maybe he faked his own death to scare Snarby...

Thu, 10/18/2012 - 13:01

#63

Dreathuxy

Question

Im sorry but chapter 7 wont be out until next week.

But back to the point: Am I posting parts to frequently or do I take too long to get them out?

Thanks

Thu, 10/18/2012 - 16:24

#64

Oroseira

You're taking too long.

It's been a week and there's still no chapter 7. Do you hate the number 7?

Thu, 10/18/2012 - 18:45

#65

Dreathuxy

@phantom

The reason I havent got 7 out yet is because I've had 2 losses and I have to go to all their visitations and funerals.

Thu, 10/18/2012 - 19:03

#66

Artistbma

I dont think you're taking

I dont think you're taking too long. I take much longer than this. ;3 Take your time.

Thu, 10/25/2012 - 20:56

#67

Feline-Grenadier

Yadda, yadda...

Name:
Atro (Derived from the word "atropine")

Gender:
Male

Personality:
Atro is known to be quite an airhead. He can't exactly think for himself, and he constantly has to be told what to do. However, his mental instability is made up for several good virtues. This includes honesty, motivation, and even valiance.

Bio:
Atro was born in one of the hardier forests of the Wolver's home-world. While the nearby Ash-Tails adapted to the heat, the Wolvers in these forests had to adapt to the copious amounts of gas built up from the eruptions. This resulted in a backfiring adaptation: less mental stability for higher brutality. The Wolvers of this forest had not only begun to adapt to just the gas, but to all the other organisms within the vicinity. They needed to guarantee their kills, and therefore adopted a rabid-like disease in their mouths, which infected and killed prey. A large amount of this bacteria would kill even the strongest of the Wolvers, so they learned to foam at the mouth quite often, so as to avoid an overload.
When the Gremlins began to abduct whole pieces of the world, their prey changed from that of local game, to fearsome aliens that could possibly even rival the melee skills of the Wolvers. Atro's true story begins when he was recruited into the super-pack to counter another Gremlin attack. His lineage was of the "Rabid Wolvers", the descendants of those of the hardy forests. While he in particular may not be the smartest or most socially successful animal, his combat skills can make even the most skilled Healers curse at their failed attempts to heal.
Special Skills:

Infection- The naturally-occuring bacteria in Etharius's mouth can infect any living creature. A healer's attempts to save their teammates would be to no avail, as the bacteria was evenly matched with the medic's skills.

(Possibilities:

-He dies of his mental condition.
-He dies with valiance in battle.
-He becomes one of the two Rabid Snarbolaxes.

Your choice.)

Fri, 10/19/2012 - 03:28

#68

Oroseira

@Dreath

Poor you, lemme cheer you up. *throws trick or treat confetti in the air and the pumpkin lands on Phantom's head*

Sat, 10/20/2012 - 23:28

#69

Feline-Grenadier

Ripping thru like a missile, rippin thru my heart.

. = bump.

Sun, 10/21/2012 - 04:20

#70

Shadow-Knightxx

awesome story

first i never go to treasure vault but used up my me an was bored so went to the forums and i was reading this story
really awesome story can't wait for ch-7

Mon, 10/22/2012 - 17:21

#71

Dreathuxy

Chapter 7 Part One

I was bawling now. There were gremlins running to greet me with their ugly hammers, but I prevailed, burrowing through the ground and chewing off their tendons one by one. And near Frosti's death place, there happened to be Elira, examining the mountain of corpses.

"...Gremlin Pyros", she mumbled.

"Pyros?", I asked, still in shock from Frosti.

"Well, see these tanks here?", I replied with a yes,"Well, they are connected to these gremlins backs, and there, flames are shot through these tubes", she explained to me.

I took off to the crawler to get a bucket. There, I grabbed a bucket from a supply room, went back outside, and went to the remains of Frosti, now a puddle of water.

I'll get revenge, I thought as I scooped up Frosti's remains into the bucket.

Tue, 10/23/2012 - 22:09

#72

Feline-Grenadier

Bump, and...

BUMP. (BTW, I never did get news for my character sheet. What happened?)

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 12:36

#73

Dreathuxy

BE PATIENT VINNY!!!!!

Im debating it. I like him but he sounds OP. Ill give you my response Friday.

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 19:05

#74

Feline-Grenadier

Sorry...

Well, he is kinda whacko in terms of mental/logical capacity. Also, he has to foam for a bit quite often.

Thu, 10/25/2012 - 13:09

#75

Dreathuxy

Also a note to those who are currently appling for characters

"All the other wolvers had good names like Joe and Bob"

Keep this in mind.

Thu, 10/25/2012 - 20:51

#76

Feline-Grenadier

So...

I edited the profile, his new name can be seen!

Thu, 10/25/2012 - 22:03

#77

Snovv

Twins? :D

Name : Miki,Hidari
Gender : Miki(female),Hidari(male)
Personality : Miki ( a happy go lucky Vog cub whos fast and precise like a scouter but her combat-skills are unreliable ),
Hidari ( a humble Vog cub who doesnt like to co-opperate well with others, he also protects his sister with his life, his combat skills are excellent )
Bio : i don't really know what Bio means so please inform me of the meaning and i'll think of something about it sorry :(
Special skills : Miki is capable of running as fast as a bullet train and can still see clearly where shes going,has the ability to heal wounds with her saliva, Hidari's teeth are as sharp as diamonds and his tail are extremely sharp,his nose is also very sharp and is capable of detecting any mobile living thing in a radius of 50 km

in case non of you know what Vog Cubs are... http://wiki.spiralknights.com/Wolver ...

Small details : Miki means right in japanese while Hidari means left in japanese

Hope you like them :)

Sat, 10/27/2012 - 06:58

#78

Toah

Zephy

Name: Zachariah (Someone already took Zephaniah)
Gender: Male
Breed: Wolver
Personality: Quiet, Nice, Loyal to those he fights along side.
Bio: Born to a Clan of Wolvers that have unusually powerful saliva, that is great for relieving pain. He is usually near the front lines, helping other wolvers with wounds that would have usually taken them out of the fight, he really likes fried silkwing and doesn't like virulusk as much as the other wolvers.

Also, Snovv, IMO that's REALLY overpowered. Run as fast as a bullet train? Detect any living thing in 50km? jeez

EDIT: Changed name, removed instant-heal saliva, now it's just pain killers. (it does sorta heal too, just not nearly as fast)

Fri, 10/26/2012 - 17:05

#79

Snovv

Look whos talking

1st of all have you ever heard of the word 'creativity'? and 2nd Look whos talking?! you copied my idea cause your jealous and don't have as creative ideas like mine HEH!

Fri, 10/26/2012 - 18:48

#80

Toah

Not sure if Trolling, or just

Not sure if Trolling, or just stupid.

Edit; I didn't even see that little bit about healing saliva in your post, but if you're going to get all butthurt about, just consider my wolver to be a nerfed version of your wolver, whatever floats your boat.

Fri, 10/26/2012 - 19:46

#81

Dreathuxy

This is not a fighting thread Ladies...

@Vinnydime: Accepted. Im just lowering the amount of bacteria he produces.

@Snow: Im taking Toah's side here. WAY too OP. Also, Bio stands for Biography. Write a short story of your apps life.

@Toah: Still Kind of OP.

Sat, 10/27/2012 - 00:11

#82

Feline-Grenadier

Well...

He can't poison someone with every bite anyways...

(Don't) take care of him!!! (OMG I raised him since he was a puppy!)

Sat, 10/27/2012 - 07:00

#83

Toah

Update

Updated post, removed insta-heal, changed name since someone else took my Zephaniah :(

Sun, 10/28/2012 - 07:04

#84

Dreathuxy

Chapter 7 Part Two

I rushed to the crawler, now in flames from gremlin pyros. I dodged attacks from behind, being careful not to spill Frosti's remains. I stopped just short of the crawler. Now I see why there are so many wolvers on the battlefield.

The entire crawler collapsed before my eyes. I was astonished. I thought it was indestructible. Guess I gotta start studying architecture. I started to run away from the giant pile of rubbish that was once the crawler. The field was flat now, with a thin layer of red dust and hairs covering it, With the only shelter a giant rock in the distance.

Rock. Hide. Those were the only two words I thought of before I scurried to the shelter as fast as my legs could carry me. Bullets, hammers, and body parts were flying all over the place near the boulder. Luckily, there was a small concave formation in the rock, I could hide safely.

I recollected myself. I now knew what the heck I was doing, where I was, and what just happened. I fainted from all the things swirling in my head.

When I woke up, I was in a dark room filled with tools. A deep voice spoke up.

"It looks like our subject is awake, Tinkinzar"

Sun, 10/28/2012 - 18:48

#85

Oroseira

e_o

Oh god. PLEASE don't tell me it's another one of these...

Tue, 10/30/2012 - 17:39

#86

Dreathuxy

New Schedule

Each chapter part (or whole chapter) will be out weekly.

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!

Thu, 11/01/2012 - 19:47

#87

Kremurgh

moar plz ;w;

Why this chapter end like that ? why *cry* I want moar wolver-related stories D:
And I have to thank GogoleTranslate for help me to understand everything :3
(Maybe I will create a Wolver ? We will see later ~)

Fri, 11/02/2012 - 11:28

#88

Infernoburner

Mah application

Heya, this is my application. Hope it gets in.

Name: Rescus
Gender: Male
Personality: Loyal to friends, always taunts an enemy. Often feels lonely and confused.
Bio: Recus is an Alpha Hunter Wolver (hunter fur :D), an almost dead race of wolvers. His race is light-green coloured instead of the yellow-brown colors. Rescus himself often gets himself in trouble, while also using that to give the enemy a final blow. His parents and group were killed by a group of Tortadrones, which made him hide. After he was brave enough, he quietly sneaked up on each one, and when it was safe, he cut its head off with his spiked tail. He swore to kill all Tortadrones there are, no matter what.
Special Skills: Is very unnoticable in green terrain. Has spikes on the end of his tail which he uses to fight anything that gets in his way. Has no fighting skills excluding his tail, tough.

Tue, 11/06/2012 - 14:34

#89

Dreathuxy

Responses

Chapter 8 Part One will be out on Wednesday.

@Infernoburner: uhh... I think that the hunter fur wont work. If I did, people will be asking for hallow wolvers and surge wolvers, etc. You get my point. Revise.

Also a question for Vinnydime, is it ok if I change the way that he got his foaming mouth of healing?

Tue, 11/06/2012 - 19:46

#90

Feline-Grenadier

Um...

What foaming mouth of healing? You got it wrong. My wolver causes poison. (Think of it as comparing Atro with a komodo dragon.) His bio stated that his family has had it for generations.

Thu, 11/08/2012 - 14:48

#91

Dreathuxy

Chapter 8

I was scared. A shadowy figure was injecting all sorts of sharp objects into my side. Then, they fed me a virulisk. But this one was...different. Then it hit me. After the figure shoved the thing into my mouth, I could see green smoke coming from openings in my almost-closed mouth. I got ready for the excruciating pain that was going to follow. Wait, wheres the pain? I thought, baffled.

"There, the subject has complete immunity to poisonous objects", the voice of the figure said. I could tell it was a female voice now. Suddenly, the wall behind me exploded, a wolver ran through. He was an ash-tail, but something was different about him... He spoke up.

"Okay, lets see if I can untangle you", he said. While he was getting me removed from the cold, metal platform I was strapped to, he was humming a song.

"Wa oh oh oh oh oh oh oh, we don't even have to try, its always a good time". I interrupted his song by clearing my throat.

"Oh yeah, right. Almost there...there", I fell to the ground, weaker than usual, "Ok, lets get out of here". This wolver was certainly an easy going one.

"Hey, whats your name, who are you, where am I going?", I asked, clearly more frightened than I thought I would be.

"Names Atro, recon member and professional demolitionist", Atro said cheerfully.

"And, where are we going?"

"Going to free Bradstone and his squad", he remarked.

"Wait, wah?", I asked in shock.

"Yep. they were captured, and I know just the way to free them", he pointed to his teeth, seething with white foam.

I was startled. If hes rabid, how could I trust him? For all I know he could be leading me towards certain death. I spoke up.

"You're not rabid, are you?"

"NO! Where the hell did you get that idea?"

"Well I saw your teeth-"

"OOHHHHHH, thats just poison foam. Runs in my family", he replied, interrupting my question. We turned a corner, the old rusty path creaking and echoing in the steaming facility.

"Now lets go save your friends", he said, and we set off into a dark hallway.

Sat, 11/10/2012 - 10:58

#92

Auroas

Awesome Story

What the title says. It's a great idea, and a great realization. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Sat, 11/10/2012 - 22:15

#93

Dreathuxy

@Auroas

Thanks!

Tue, 11/13/2012 - 19:54

#94

Dreathuxy

Announcement

New chapters will be out every Thursday.

Also, to the people I've accepted, I havent forgotten about you. youre characters are just being benched until they come into play later in the story.

Thu, 11/15/2012 - 20:09

#95

Dreathuxy

Chapter 9 Part One

At the end of the hallway, we found Bradstone and his team. All of them in cages. Atro quickly started to get them out.

"NO! DONT UNLOCK THEM!", Bradstone bursted.

"Why?", I replied.

"We'll be-" he was cut off by the sound of gushing water and Atro shouting.

"HOLY S*** SNARBY! I THINK I DID SOMETHING WRONG!"

Atro was right. His miniscule brain made water rush into the facility, along with several armored gremlins to go with it. Atro quickly ran to the enemy. I followed after him. We bit and slashed, Atro's poison mouth seeping into the armored gremlins, eating them from the inside out. Soon, all of the gremlins were defeated. We cheered. All of us cheered. Until we heard booming footsteps from the hallway. Derelict spoke.

"The Juggernaut"

Fri, 11/16/2012 - 18:22

#96

Oroseira

Ohoho.

Derelict better survive this, remember, I want her not to be killed and when Snarby becomes the snarbolax, Derelict becomes frightened and runs away, instead of probably getting eaten alive.

Fri, 11/16/2012 - 19:46

#97

Auroas

App

It's not too late for me to send in an character app, is it? Cause I've got an awesome, original one planned.
-
Also, this is a suggestion: I find it kinda hard to keep track of who's who, so could you add a character log with their species and status, etc to the OP?

Fri, 11/16/2012 - 21:11

#98

Dreathuxy

Responses

@Phantom: No one will die from now on.

@Auroas: Youre the last app. Also, thank you. Ill be adding that log soon.

Sun, 11/18/2012 - 16:30

#99

Auroas

Application

Subject 173 (Nickname: Starkralle)

Gender: ? (Acts more masculine than feminine)
Personality: Reclusive, sort "Silent but Deadly"
Bio: Once a normal Wolver cub, he was kidnapped at a young age by a Gremlin search party, which took him back to the Colony. There, Gremlin Engineers and Warmaster Seerus himself used all kinds of "prototype enhancements" to improve him. When they were done, he was superior in every way to most other Wolvers, but it also broke him. He was determined to escape, so when the Gremlins sent him to King Tinkinzar, he broke his cage, ripped his guards' throats out, and disappeared into the shadows. One day years later, he appeared without warning in the camp and asked to be enlisted.
Special Skills:
Stronger and smarter than almost any other Wolver
His bite is almost impossible to escape

ENHANCEMENTS - NOTE: This part right here is very important!
Part of legs, and body are fused with Scuttlebot parts, so he's harder to hurt
He has a sort of helmet made of a Scuttlebot head
He can fire Bullets of any kind from his right eye (meaning normal Scuttlebot, Cinderbot, Brumabot, Surgebot, or Hazbot) and can also fire Shadow Bullets

Weaknesses:
His armor is very heavy, so he can't jump as high
Around half as fast as a normal Wolver
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Note: By "smarter" I mean like about machines and engineering and problem-solving, not like about math and stuff.

Wed, 11/21/2012 - 19:17

#100

Dreathuxy

Response and Announcement

@Auroas: In. I love the concept. Wont be benched for long.

Announcement

Due to the holiday of Thanksgiving, I will be too busy eating unhealthy crap and watching football. However, there is a chance that I will post something I've been working on about the story.

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My life as a Snarbolax - The End. Sequel coming soon :D!