The Spiral Conspiracy. [New Fan-Fiction!] {Accepting Apps!}
Jue, 03/07/2013 - 03:51
This is my second time doing a Fan-Fiction and I'm pleased that my first one has been seen and liked by lots. "The Spiral Conspiracy should have been Onoa's work, but he's been busy, and I've taken over The Spiral Conspiracy. But Onoa will be helping with the story and is a character inside the story.
To see the ORIGINAL 'The Spiral Conspiracy', click the Link below:
http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/73594
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Here are some points I would like to make:
1. Haven is much bigger than it normally is In-Game. Which means more Civilian (I will call them Civvies inside the Fan-Fiction) housing and shops.
2. The Police that you see roaming around Cradle works for the Spiral Order (DUH!) and the more advanced Black Op Police are called the Enforcers.
3. As you might read in the First Chapter, there are Sniper Rifles. The rifles are a longer version of the Argent Peacemaker and the Sentenza which, attached to it, is a scope. *SNIPER TIME!*
4. Costumes: There are Costume slots, but I will not be explaining that much. Also, I have changed the Chapeau of the Black Rose into a Helm, not just a costume.
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I would like the applications to be like this:
Name:
Age (Optional):
Species:
Rank:
Loadout:
Bio:
P.S For the characters of my former Fan-Fictions:
If you would like to transfer your character into this Fan-Fiction, let me know, I'll be glad to!
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Chapter One: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/76079#comment-663656
Chapter Two: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/76079#comment-666538
Chapter Three: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/76079#comment-667165
Chapter Four: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/76079#comment-667746
Jue, 03/07/2013 - 05:19
#2
Did you end Betrayal...?
Did you end Betrayal...?
Jue, 03/07/2013 - 05:38
#3
Yes
Well, I'm working on it from time to time....
Jue, 03/07/2013 - 19:19
#4
If you can, can you inclde Fripper again?
His age is 21
Vie, 03/08/2013 - 06:14
#5
Gladly!
Of course!
Vie, 03/08/2013 - 10:29
#6
How about my dudes?
How about my dudes?
Vie, 03/08/2013 - 23:21
#7
Well...
Care to slap Luke back on again?
Sáb, 03/09/2013 - 01:09
#8
Yeah!
Both are going to be back in the fight!
Dom, 03/10/2013 - 21:38
#9
Character Train
Well everyone seems to be getting their characters added to this story, so I think I'll jump on the wagon. Which means I'll be applying.
Name: SZ-100
Age (Optional): 1 and a half years old.
Species: Wolver-Snarbolax Hybrid (Wolver but with black fur and red eyes)
Rank: Not sure if this applies to Wolvers
Loadout: Barbed spikes on back, can be used as whips when deployed, almost like tentacles. Has almost perfect night vision. While she is not a full-size Snarbolax, she can still roar sometimes, and does it to scare Knights because of her playful nature.
Bio: Born into a normal Wolver pack in the Aurora Isles. One day, she was captured by Knights and lost most of her memories for some reason. She underwent a series of experiments to create a Wolver-Snarbolax hybrid, which were largely successful. She was kept in a laboratory for a few months, however, a Gremlin missile attack created an opportunity for her to escape captivity. Now she mostly roams Haven, hunting Snipes, which has been the subject of an intensive investigation still going on today. She was spotted twice, and the Knights that saw her have created a sort of urban legend about a Shadow Wolver in Haven. She stays in Haven to this day, stalking Knights, unable to access the elevators into the Aurora Isles.
Lun, 03/11/2013 - 04:52
#10
Umm...
Are you tamable? Cause I would like a pet
Mar, 03/12/2013 - 08:57
#11
Valentine!
Mind if I submit a character?
Name: Valentine
Species: Isoran
Gender: Female
Rank: Vanguard
Appearance: normal height, delicate eyes, red personal color
Loadout: White Rose Regalia set w/ divine pipe & Crest of Winter; Shining Ward; Daring Rigadoon
Bio: Her origins are completely unknown; all the Order knows is that she popped up one day and became a living legend. She is a renowned healer, expert gunslinger, and peerless fencer, as befitting a Knight of the Rose. She's a very cheeky little lady and has an impressive sense of humor, but has a tendency to get herself into trouble. She was once arrested for getting herself into a barfight, beating up all the patrons, and piling them all up and sitting on top of the pile while smoking her pipe. She was never allowed back into that bar.
Lun, 03/11/2013 - 19:38
#12
Tamable?
Well... she can be, but she's a little rebellious at times and might run away.
Lun, 03/11/2013 - 23:23
#13
Hmmm
@ Thinslayer What loadout? if you tell me thats best but I can help you imagine one. :P
@ Aekuryi Alright! Time to get cracking on my new chapter then.
Lun, 03/11/2013 - 23:28
#14
@Knight-Of-Vanaduke
Look closely. The loadout is provided.
Mar, 03/12/2013 - 00:08
#15
Name: Axis
Age: 25
Race:
Name: Axis
Age: 25
Race: Isorian (or is it spirilian?)
Rank: Enforcer
Loadout: Chaos set (Poison, shock and fire MAX), Acheron, sentenza, plague needle, venom veiler
Bio: A very poisonous individual not only in gear but in mind. He's sharp and a quick thinker, but comes off a bit rude and cold. He's very pessimistic, but that doesn't stop him from being a one of the best agents HQ has. His attitude and disposition means he's not in a very high ranking position but he's infamous throughout the squad. Claim to fame? Stopping a bank robbery committed by no less then 20 individuals (Big cities got to have big banks right?) how did he stop this single handedly? By hooking up a venom veiler to the sprinkler system and pulling the fire alarm. All 20 Perpetrators were caught immediately, 25 other bystanders were hurt. He's ruthless, but he always gets the job done, collateral damage or not.
Mar, 03/12/2013 - 01:44
#16
Awesome!
He'll be in Delta Squad
Mar, 03/12/2013 - 04:13
#17
Chapter Two
Chapter Two:
I walked into Feron’s office, holding the body. Kora was sitting on Feron’s lap, kissing him. I dumped the body on the table, and they still ignore me. I shook my head. I could have detonated a Nitrome next to them and still they would continue. I sigh, threw my report at them, and left. Seriously, if I had a girlfriend, I wouldn’t be like them, thrashing like a pair of eels. I headed back to Arca barracks, home to us and the other Enforcers. As I entered, I noticed two unusual things. One was a newcomer sitting on a bed. Two, was everyone was chatting, not like the squad I was used to. I cleared my throat, and everyone quieted. I glanced at the newcomer.
“New medic?” I asked Onoa without taking my eyes off the newcomer.
Onoa nodded, “Her name’s Stephanie.” I nod slowly, then walked closer to her, until I could feel her breath on my chest.
“Loadout?”
She glanced up, and replied timidly, “Plague needle, Wild Hunting Blade, and Skolver.”
“Rank?”
“Champion.” I guess she’s okay.
I waved my hand in the air, and said, “Dismissed.” Everyone stood and walked out of the barracks, everyone except Stephanie. I follow them, hand on the door, when I glance at her. She’s pretty cute, if you look at her like that. I grin and walk out the door. I opened our private squad Comn. “Onoa, meet me in the Advanced Guild Hall. We’ll have some target practice.”
“Sure.” I walked into the Advanced Guild Hall, and reserved a Sniper range. I walked into the room, and found Onoa waiting for me. He nodded to me, and tossed a Sniper to me. I scoped, and together we shot dummies everywhere. “What do you think of Stephanie?” As he shot a dummy’s arm off.
“Well-….” I thought of what to tell him and what not. “Well, she’s kinda cute. She’s shy, and she’s nice, I guess.”
“So you like her?” He nudged me with his elbow.
“Not really.” I sniped a target from afar, and as I line up my shot again, I heard him mumbling into the Comlink, “Stephanie…… Sergeant…… Likes you….”
“Hey!” And I twist my gun and fire into his foot.
“Argh!” He cried, as he dropped to the floor and cradled his foot. I grin, “That’s what happens when you cross Sergeant Boris.” I drop the Sniper next to his head and walk off. As I walked out of the underground Training Hall, I noticed a sort of Wolver, tailing a Knight. “Hey!” I yell and I ran to the Wolver. It turned, it’s unusual ruby colored eyes looked at me for a second and ran off. I stop, letting it go. “You alright?” I ask the knight.
The knight shrugged, “What do you mean?” What the? He had a Wolver tailing him and he didn’t even know. I shook my head. Either the Knight was blind or the Wolver was unusually silent. The last unusual thing about the Wolver: Wolvers don’t have Jet black fur.
Mar, 03/12/2013 - 08:57
#18
Edited the app.
I have edited my character application. Mind checking it out? :D
Mar, 03/12/2013 - 12:32
#19
Good but
Stephanie only said 8 words and Boris is starting to like her? lol what the...
Mar, 03/12/2013 - 21:32
#20
Mmmhm..
@Thinslayer Yeah, I checked. It's going to be there.
@Art Boris likes Cute girls.... :D
Mié, 03/13/2013 - 05:35
#21
Way to go Onoa! XD
Mié, 03/13/2013 - 07:02
#22
Chapter Three
Well, guys, this is a little mature. Well, not a little, but it's rated SDPG. Also known as Super Dooper Parental guidance. Please do not read if you don't have the guts for it.
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Chapter Three:
I walked back into Barracks, sighing. I had reported to Feron, and had received the cold shoulder as he just continued kissing Kora. I walked to my bed and dropped down. I reached out for the nearest thing I could find and that was my blanket. I draped it on my head. I then reported it to Captain Ozlo. Ozlo was a teensy bit harsher. He said I was crazy and said if I had these visions again, I should go see a doctor. I shook my head. Then I heard a voice. “Boss?” I felt the blanket lifted from my face. “You alright?” Valentine smiled at me. It was ever so hard to see the vicious, brutal girl that could beat the crap out of the whole squad, me included.
I smiled at her. “Nothing I couldn’t handle.”
“Don’t be so sure of that, Boss. You can’t handle everything.”
“You can’t too.”
“Got that right.” For a second, her shoulders sagged, and she hung her head.
“Something wrong, Val?” That was our squad nickname for her.
She shook her head. “Nothing, just...” She suddenly burst into tears, and she wrapped her arms around me. She sobbed into my shoulder, her embrace desperate for someone, something to comfort her. I was shocked. I’ve never seen her sad, let alone cry. Emotional outburst. I guessed, and I awkwardly wrapped my hands around her. I stroked her hair, whispering, “It’s all right. Everything’s going to be fine.” She continued crying into my neck. I scooped her up into my arms, then carried her back into her room. I gently lowered her down on the bed. Already her sobs were beginning to stop, finally she was just sniffling. As I pried my arms from her, she wrapped hers around my necks, pulled me down to her bed. As I lay on top of her, she kissed me. I lay there stunned, and I pulled back from the kiss. Val whispered, “I have always liked you. You were so kind, so handsome-….” Wait me? Handsome? What in? “So caring. I love you, Boris.” And she kissed me again. This time I didn’t pull back, but I didn’t kiss her back.
When she finished, I pried her hands off, saying, “Enough is enough.” I wrapped the blankets around her, and pressed my lips to her forehead. She smiled, and closed her eyes. A moment later, she was snoring soundly. I walked out of her room, closing the door behind me. I walked to the lounge and sat there, head on my hands with my eyes closed. I slipped into sleep for a second, and I banged my head onto the table. “Damn it!” I yelled at the table. I closed my eyes. Everyone thought I was crazy. Feron, Ozlo and everyone else. I forgot about the kiss. I grabbed a bottle of booze and chugged it down. My throat burned, but I forgot all about Feron and Ozlo. I was happy. I threw the now-empty bottle of Booze on the table. I shattered, the glass bouncing on my armour. I grab two more bottles of it, one in each arm, drinking it while ambling towards Valentine’s room. As I think of Valentine, I remembered her lips, the feeling of her breathing on my neck, everything. I opened the door, put down the bottles, and cried, “Valentine!” She startled awake, and stared at me. I grinned, and I started taking off my clothes, my armour and my bodysuit. As I strip off my pants, I scrutinized Valentine. Her breasts, her eyes, her lips, everything. As I relieve myself of clothing, I walk to her, grab her head, and kiss her. She kisses back, breathless. I grab her, and together we fall on to the bed. She slowly takes off her clothes. Now, together, we were naked. She kissed me, and I kissed her back. I couldn’t get enough. I pulled back, and kissed the hollow of her neck. I pulled back, then laid my head on her breasts, feeling her heart beat. She kissed me once more, then her lips left mine, exploring my earlobe. I kiss her, then finally we fall asleep, together.
Mié, 03/13/2013 - 14:21
#23
...this is the most descriptive chapter yet :p
A few adjustments to Fripper. He is the Shadowmaster, but DO NOT PUT IN TAMARA FROM MY FANFIC. I SWEAR THAT IF YOU DO I WILL BURN YOUR HOUSE DOWN AND TURN YOU INTO A HOBO. DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME????????????? Good.
Mié, 03/13/2013 - 23:47
#24
._.
Hunh! Now I'm so silent...
Jue, 03/14/2013 - 03:17
#25
Well...
I liked it!
Well...
I liked it!
Jue, 03/14/2013 - 05:09
#26
Well
It seems a school day with no recess and lunch writing this chapter has paid off...... *Headache....* Well, read this to satisfy your needs for Fan-Fictions. I'm gong on Vacation for a week, and I won't be posting then :P
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Chapter four:
I awoke, with my arms around Valentine. I rolled out of Valentine’s bed, and landed on the floor. Thank god she didn’t notice. I grabbed my armour, ran into my room, and locked the door. I leaned on the door, breathing hard. I couldn’t face the fact that I slept with Valentine. No way, No way. I shook my head, got dressed and glanced at the window. A second later, I was out of my room, and on the floor of our backyard. I severed all my Comn links, checking to see if anyone could hear me, then screamed into my helmet. I ran, ran and ran. I continued running when I reached the forest, then I tripped over a branch, I sprawled onto the floor. I look up, and check my mini-map. Yes, this is the place. I walk to the gigantic tree, and press my gauntlet to its side. The tree shuddered, and revealed a doorway. I look into the darkness, and jumped. It was a full 3 minute ride to get to the place, and I kept checking my timer. At last, I reached there. It was a small hiding place where Onoa and I hid when we were scared, sad or just for fun. No one knew about this place except us, and I’m pretty sure it stays the same way. I glance at the photos of us when we were children. There are drawings, weapons and snacks. I got one and bit on it. Nice. Then I noticed a blinking icon on my Heads-up-Display. It was a chat line with Onoa. Grudgingly, I turned it on.
“Let me in.” Then I realize I locked the doorway of the tree. I opened it again, and Onoa fell beside me. “What’s going on with you and Valentine?” He sung in a carefree voice.
“That obvious?” I asked, shaking my head.
He grabbed two items from his bad, one a backpack and another a pillow. “These two were found in her room. A girl wouldn’t need two pillows. And your backpack. Why would you leave your backpack in her room?”
“I slept with her.” Yes, I finally faced it. No need to hide from it. “Anyway, wanna go hunting?” He nods, and together, we climb out of our little tree-house, or cave, whatever it is. I loaded my Valiances, and kept my eyes open for any potential prey.
As I poked stray bushes for Chromas and Wolvers, I heard a scream, “Ahh!” Definitely Onoa. I pinpointed his location with my mini-map, and I raced to his side. There was a spike in his armpit, wedged by his arm. He didn’t know that though. He was gasping and moaning, “Boris! Help me! There was this gigantic Wolver Snarby, and she went that way!” He pointed to a path where trees and bushes were broken. “I’m going to die…..” He closed his eyes, and began snoring. I stared at him for a moment, then I slapped him. No response. Huh. I slowly walk down the path where Onoa was pointing at, and withdrew my pistols. I kicked a branch aside and aimed….. at a Wolver, it’s fur jet black, spikes on its back and three tentacles floating. It was gnawing at a piece of meat, a dead Chroma. Huh, I grinned. Suddenly, it looked at me, its red eyes piercing me. “Whoa….” I take a step back, and tripped backwards . Damn it, not the best time to trip, is it? I fell down, my Valiances flying to somewhere. In a heartbeat, the Wolver….. or Snarby cub was on me, gazing at me. I raised my fist, and tried to punch her. One of her tentacles, they looked like whips, wrapped around my hand, and tightened. I grimace in pain, and use my other fist to hit it. It used the same move again, tightening my hand. I began to squirm against its…. Well, it seems like a he, so anyway…. I began to squirm against HIS grip, when it snatched a pouch full of food, jumped of my, and quickly gobbled the meat up. “Hey!” I protested weakly. It looked and me, grinned and pranced away. I threw a tracking device at her, and it stuck on her butt. I winced, but at least I got a tracking device on him. I walk back to where Onoa was, slapped him twice, and he woke up. “C’mon. Got to get back to Barracks.”
“Not scared of Valentine?” He asked, him trying to meet my eyes.
“I’ve got to see her eventually, do I?” He shrugs, and we headed back to Arca barracks, oblivious to a set of eyes, red eyes, gazing at us departing. Not human eyes, Wolver eyes.
Jue, 03/14/2013 - 15:37
#27
Erm...
._. <(Where's me character?)
Jue, 03/14/2013 - 19:25
#28
What?
She deserves better than to have a tracking device stuck on her butt :c
Why not like... her chest? I don't know, that's a little better.
Sáb, 03/16/2013 - 02:50
#29
Maybe...
Maybe because if it was at SZ's chest he would've probably noticed and scratched at it then it would be broken then disconnected from the Barrack's tracking gps.
Seems logical, I think...
Vie, 05/03/2013 - 23:44
#30
App
Name: Zero
Age: 20
Race: Isoran
Rank: Vanguard
Loadout: Dark Retribution, Metal Sonic Suit and Helm, Swiftstrike Buckler, Determined [Purple] Eyes
Bio: A cold-blooded individual with a lust for revenge... or "justice" as he calls it. An intelligent fellow, in fact. He devised a way to enhance the versatility of his Swiftstrike Buckler through use of his Dark Retribution and only he knows the specific mechanism for it to work. When he was a small child, with only a Cold Snap at hand, his parents were killed in a fire. He knows someone set fire on their house and he will do anything to get vengeance. Often when he sleeps, he dreams of this girl his age: beautiful, smart but he couldn't grasp the entire dream. When he tells of this to his only relative, his Aunt, says there is hope for him to be good.
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Okay, you might've misinterpreted his way of making the Swiftstrike Buckler more versatile. He gathers the energy released by the bomb using the Swiftstrike using a mechanism only he knows and when he stored enough, he releases a powerful beam or a razor edged wheel that can cut through trees and even Jelly King or the Roarmulus Twins! But he needs to rest for at least a minute because it's tiring like Hyper Beam or Giga Impact from Pokemon Games.
Sáb, 03/16/2013 - 07:39
#31
Hmm
Well, it also could have somehow gotten on her lower back. It would have been really difficult to reach and hard to rub off on something else.
Still, I can't wait to see how this unfolds :3
Vie, 03/22/2013 - 03:08
#32
._.
*tries to keep this fic alive...*
Vie, 03/22/2013 - 13:24
#33
KoV abondoned this
just saying to all
Jue, 03/28/2013 - 20:55
#34
Nope
I didn't abandon it, ya dolt! I went on a trip for 5 days...... so I couldn't work on it. And I'm going to be gone for another 2-3 days, so expect no new chapters.
Jue, 03/28/2013 - 21:27
#35
Well, at least you didn't abandon a perfectly good story :D
Sáb, 04/13/2013 - 10:51
#36
Yes he sure did
Dont slack KoV
Im watching you...right at this moment. Just look out that window...
Sáb, 04/13/2013 - 14:15
#37
/sigh
At this point, we know KoV/Topo is NOT going to make any long-lasting fanficts, let alone good ones. Can you let this get swallowed into the sea of threads now?
Sáb, 04/13/2013 - 21:23
#38
We can't.
Cause we keep commenting on the thread.
Sáb, 04/13/2013 - 21:50
#39
Well
To answer your questin, Vin, I am capable of making long-lasting fan-fictions. Note Cradle wars and Hybrid Knight. I quit this cause I haven't been noticing this for a while, and I'm REALLY bored. I'm just watching other people's fan-fictions (Including you, Vin :P) and participating in the Finder's Keeper's roleplay.
Chapter One:
Brinks scampered along a dark alley on Retrode Street thinking he was un-seen. He was wrong. I stood perched on top of a building, Valiances akimbo in their holsters. Behind me was Onoa, my squad’s best Sniper. Once the Argent Peacemaker and Sentenza Sniper Rifles were out, he was a crack shot with it. I hooked my grappling hook on to a chink of the roof, and swung down. Brinks didn’t notice, who continued walking, occasionally sending sidelong looks behind him and to his sides. Thank Goodness I was wearing my Snarbolax Coat, matched with the Chapeau of the Black Rose. I melted into the shadows, Brinks never knowing I was there. Suddenly, he whipped out a Blitz Needle and sprayed right behind him, which is to say right in front of me. I let my instincts take over, and I dropped down, going prone. I heard him mutter, “My senses must be off. I could have sworn….” He shook his head, withdrew his Blitz and continued on his way.
“That was way too close.” I heard Onoa’s voice say.
“Yeah.” I said. The privacy of a helmet was awesome. You could speak to anyone without anyone knowing. I stood up cautiously, and slowly crept up to him. Then I heard it, Gremlinese. I immedeailty paused, and ducked behind a trash can as a group of Gremlins, bearing the Ironclaw sign, go up to Brinks and hand him a sack of…. Crowns? Crystal Energy? Hard to say. Brinks inspected its contents, nodded and handed the Gremlins a module, which contains Spiral Order Intelligence.
Onoa gasped, then whispered, “I’m going to get that bastard.”
I nodded and said, “Lemme at the Gremlins.”
“On my mark. Now!” I pounced from my hiding spot, Valiances blazing. The blasts were dead on, each killing a Gremlins escort. Which left Brinks and a mender. The mender casted a shield over himself, protecting himself from other attacks.
“Hey!” Protested Brinks, and a second later where his head was supposed to be erupted into a pulp. The Mender glanced at Brinks, then lost its breakfast, therefore shutting off the shield for a second. That was all the time I needed. I grabbed his head, got my Valiance and used the Bayonet below and barrel and stabbed it through its head. All resistance evaporated. Hard to resist when a knife goes through your head, is it? I chuckle at my own joke.
“Inspect the bodies. I’m going to send a report to Spiral Knights.” I nod once, and knelt over the bodies. The Gremlins’ bodies hold a few crowns, and a few Gremlin Gizmos. Brink’s pockets and bag was filled with weapons we had to exchange for tokens, including…..
“The legendary Fang of Vog….” I whisper, holding it up.
“Yeah, Yeah.” Onoa said, annoyed. He looked up, “We can keep the tokens and the weapons. Bring the body back for evidence.” I nod once, then gathered Brinks, or whatever was left in my arms, and carried him back to Arca Barracks.