Cake-Walk {Fanfiction} [Accepting Apps!]

I'm so sorry for my absence. e.e Between education, family, RL, and the fact that there's this god-awful Java Binary (SE) problem that doesn't get fixed regardless of how many Java iterations I run this game through, I haven't been able to squeeze enough time for this little cloister I call a gem. Regardless, I still love the SK universe, so it seems I'm going to be stuck here for a long, long while.
And even after this game goes down decades in the future, I'll always have the memories of this story, here.
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Apps:
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Name:
Gender:
Race (Knight, Gremlin, Kat, Phantom, Almirian Remnant) Note: Phantoms and Remnants must reside in a logical weapon like Acheron or Almirian Crest or anything like that.
Short bio:
Personality:
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[Dominance - Follow Vin, one of the Order's few Inquisitors, through his waning moments as an ally of Cradle. Does he retain his Dominance over his sanity? Status: FIN]
[Cake-Walk - Read on as Travid, Felicity, as well as a few returning from Dominance live out their lives since Vin's exile from the Order. Some struggles are a cake-walk, while others put them in an unsolvable dilemma. Status: ONGOING...AGAIN!]

Name: Fripper
Gender: Male
Race: Gremlin
Bio: The Shadowmaster of the gremlin army. At a young age of 5, he started training as a ghostmane with the previoous Shadowmaster. At the age of 7, he killed his parents, because they knew too much about him. E lived on his own, out on the streets, until at age 17 he was accepted into the gremlin army. At the age of 21, he was the new Shadowmaster
Personality: Cruel, sarcastic, humorless

This seems like a nice story just waiting to bloom. I'll join in on the fun.
Name: Travid
Gender: Male
Race: Knight
Short Bio: At a young age Travid lived in the poor quadrant of the home world with no family ties. To fend for himself he would often steal from the rich. Once he got to an older age he applied for the Spiral Knights in hope to start a new life. But people from his past refuse to let go, bringing back some darker memories.
Personality: Cheerful and a joker.

Simply descriptive and yet it's interesting storyline... is well... interesting!
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*Okay, back to my old, app self*
App:
Name: Uni
Gender: Female
Race: Knight
Short Bio: She is one of Zero's only friends in this world. She is smart and beautiful, but incapable of handling battles on her own. But she always has hope for Zero, despite his icy behavior. In her childhood, she often brought with her a small plush Knight doll whenever she played with the sweet seven year old Zero. Now she's seventeen, whenever Zero goes out of limits or bounds by laws or even himself, she tries to convince Zero from doing it.
Personality: A flirt with Zero, generally cheerful and breaks her way into anything with a smile!

"Ashes, ashes, we all fall down!"
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"So, you're telling me that you don't know where 'Zero' is right now?" Vin asked from the dark. The whole room was pitch black, except for the small column of light in the center. Vin had only on T-shirt and sweatpants, so he could not be seen from the dark.
"Y-yeah," replied a young woman in the center of the column. She was "pretty cute", in Vin's perspective, but she was nothing more than a tub of information. Socializing would come later.
"And how long has it been since the last incident?" Vin asked. He coughed out blood in the dark, and he wiped his mouth with his shoulder.
"Are you alri-"
"I'm fine. It's just tuberculosis, I'll meet up with the docs later. Back to where we are..."
"Right. The last incident was about...five weeks ago?"
"The one where he left seven people hospitalized, and two dead. Or so it says on my report. Care to tell me what incited this, exactly?"
"Two ruffians were going to mug us. They had backup."
"Right. Now, how quickly did Zero kill them?"
"E-excuse me?!"
"*cough*Yeah*cough*, how quickly did he take them down?"
"Is that even an appro-"
"Just answer the question, please."
The young lady looked down, head between her knees, hands on her hair. "Under a minute."
"Great, that's all the info I need," Vin finished. The sounds of papers being folded and organized quietly echoed across the room.
"Don't you want to check on his psycho-"
"I only did that on Isora. Having episodes of insanity is the new norm, unfortunately. The door is to your right, just input 5 CE to unlock it. If you need some, I'll open it for ya."
"T-thanks," the young woman curtly said. A gong sound echoed, and a rectangle of light flooded the room. A few seconds later, the rectangle disappeared, leaving Vin in the dark again.
He was alone in the dark. The dark helped him think clearly, the dark wove invisible threads that Vin could tie. The dark was his contemplative partner; it was his helper. And in this dark, he conceived the following events:
Zero was a somewhat unstable Knight. He initially was able to mesh in with the rest of society, until he grew up to about 20. At this time, some change coursed through him, something stimulated to do something. Something that involved plenty of killing. After he did the dirty deed, he needed to pull out clean. He wasn't able to do it quickly enough, and he got carried away with a few of those annoying buggers. He was not punished, as his actions opened up a window of opportune for the Enforcers to lead a raid on the same group a few weeks later. However, something seeded into his mind, something that drove him to build up for the next event. He is now convicted of killing one of the Chief Enforcers, as well as a Vanguard. Or perhaps this was the dirty deed? Yes, this must be it. Maybe the ruffians were a way of confirmation. After all, killing as fast as that is usually done by a calmer person. No enraged fighter would have accurately screw over his enemies. After that, he fled to an unknown location to recover some wounds, or so says Ms. Uni. And now here we are...
So, the Order wants him back alive. If he is going to get a fair trial, then I'll have to compile some evidence to protect him. Hopefully, I can stall the main bulk of the Order before my own Investigators are done.
Vin collected some files, and put them in a compressed packet for presentation. He was going to brief some of his Private Investigators on a mission.

Name: Anubis
Gender: Male
Race: (Appears Isoran, no other knowledge.)
Appearance: Indigo. Knight of the Black Rose Set along with Crest of Almire, Gran Faust, and dual-wielding Sentenzas.
Bio: A person falling slowly into madness from being isolated from everyone else, Anubis is the faithful servant of the Snarbolax family. He often walks aimlessly around or inside Cradle, watching people from the shadows and longing for a life out of reach. Every now and again he has to go to a Boss to relieve his inward anger, often destroying every monster in his path on these expeditions within seconds until nothing remains but his reward. He carries a Book around in a black bookbag slung around his shoulder, it's contents the Almirian Souls that he has defeated, which will stay in service to him, for within the Book he gives them dreams of a heaven they cannot reach.
Personality: Dismal, efficient, insane(mostly on his anger-relieving missions, with him grinning wildly as he blasts many a hole through monster with his Sentenzas) and direct. Rarely happy.

"Ring a'round a'rosy, a pocket full of posies..."
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The following weeks after, Vin was able to locate and convince Zero to leave his hiding place. His wounds were properly treated, and the court case was settled with no one guilty. After all, Vin's own Investigators unearthed some evidence that showed that the people Zero killed probably deserved it many times over. However, he was to be imprisoned for a month for vigilante justice, instead of going about the proper way of doing things.
Now, Vin had already settled several minor cases involving several soldiers and a few Enforcers. The incident, per se, was one of the more interesting cases, since it revealed several renegade factions' locations. Underneath all that, there was speculation over a Knight gone missing, apparently for his Gran Faust's wishes. He participated in a few raids and investigations, but resumed his "office" work a couple days after. He has yet to tell the doctor about his tuberculosis.
78 Days since events of C-2...
Vin was resting by the fountain in Haven's town square, breathing heavily. He was sweating all over, and his usually bright eyes had glazed over. The disease was getting to him. Vin then dipped his hand into the water, and splashed it on his face. The cool, refreshing liquid cleared his mind, but not before he felt something tap his waist. He looked down, only to find his money pouch missing.
"Motherfu-" Vin muttered as he got up, and drew his Barbarous Thorn Blade.
A dark silhouette was going to run into the crowd, so it could only end two ways: Pin down the thief and scare the crowd, or hit a random guy and scare the crowd. Vin shaked his head dejectedly, and flung a bullet-speed thorn at the thief. It caught the guy's heel, causing him to fall over and raise panic. Amidst all the commotion, Vin strode over and squatted by the thief. He took the money pouch from the thief, and then pulled out a pill.
"Your name?" Vin asked, breaking the pill onto a Miracloth, and then soaking it with Ecto Drops.
"Erm...uh, Travid," he replied calmly. He broke into a grin and laughed an unusually hearty laugh.
"Something funny?" Vin inquired, purposely tightening the wrap around Travid's heel 'til it hurt.
"OW! Um, no, sir," Travid replied. He was still giggling.
"Got a family?"
"..."
"Did I hit a soft spot? Okay, fine, take half of my money. It's not like I'm starving day-to-day like your family is."
"How did you know they were still alive?"
"Because you didn't hang yourself, you're not an alchoholic, and you're not in a therapy session," Vin said as he finished the wrap. He was about to give half the money when Travid took a ballsy snatch at the pouch again. Surprisingly, he succeeded. With a hobble, he waved back at Vin, half sneer and half jeer, and then hopped into a bush.
"Mother of Vog, did I just see what I saw? You giving a thief your money?" a scolding voice chimed. It was Ms. Uni, again.
"Pfft, it's not like I need any of it at al-" Vin said, before he cut himself off with a series of coughing and hacking. It was to the point where he had to bend over. His mouth tasted like blood, and a red stain was on his usually black coat.
"And you said you would take care of it," Ms. Uni scolded again. She shook her head, and picked him up from the floor.
"I didn't think it was that bad."
"And taking things too lightly will get yourself killed. Can you at least care about yourself once in a while?"
"The only cares I have is eating."
"Not even showering?"
"Nope."
Uni dropped the Inquisitor in ridicule, but picked him up again. They were heading right towards the Guild Halls, not the Hospital.
"Uni, care to explain where we're going?"
"..."
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MEH TOO LAZORY TO CONTINUEZ >A< WILL DO'Z TOMORRZ Or sumting.

That's just how I would picture my character! Keep the posts coming!

I like this new story, Vinmeister. The story is pretty engaging, and I really like your style of writing, keep at it! ^_^
Also, I'm applying, if you don't mind.
Name: Eras
Gender: Female
Race: Knight
Short bio: One of the head doctors on the Skylark, she had a huge amount of knowledge regarding medicine. She was also quick with the sword (and scalpel), and sick or injured knights came to her for help, or even sometimes therapy. However, when the Skylark crashed, her legs were crushed by a falling beam. Beyond the point of repair, she had them amputated and was left without the ability to walk for several weeks, and becoming bedridden, slowly losing the will to live, because of her inability to help anyone. One day, her caretaker found a package with just her name on it at the clinic entrance. Inside, there were a pair of prosthetic legs. Overjoyed at this, she underwent physical therapy, had the prosthetics attached, and was able to walk once more. She is now part of the medical team, taking care of Knights' injuries, with her extensive medical knowledge.
Personality: Bold and tomboyish, yet gentle at the same time.

"Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water..."
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It had been over a month now since Vin had lived with Uni during Zero's month-long absence. It turned out that Vin, despite the incredulously massive income he had, was homeless. Uni, out of pity, took him in, and personally saw to his care. She fed, cleaned, and tucked Vin to sleep. It seemed as though Vin had become the little brother that she never had, which was true to an extent. Vin and Uni, unsurprisingly, were both single children. Despite Vin's objections, Uni used the same genuine kindness as she had with Zero and took care of him.
"I set up an appointment with a doctor today," Uni said as she was eating her breakfast, one early morning. Vin was across from her, sipping on coffee. When he heard the news, he spat out the coffee all over the table.
"E-eh?!" Vin cried out.
"For Vog's sake, can you not ruin the table?!" Uni scolded, standing up to retrieve a towel. However, Vin overtook her in two strides, and bumped her back into her seat with his hip.
"Sorry, I'll clean up my own mess. Anyhow, I don't need a doctor," Vin complained, as he was wiping the table. He then abruptly slouched over, and had an episode of continuous coughing. His grey sleeve was soaked in saliva and blood, in a much greater volume than before.
Uni helped him walk across the hallway, into the street, before the episode ended. "Yes, you do, or you're gonna kill yourself."
Vin made no objections as he was half-dragged into the hospital, and was directed towards a room. Inside, a young woman was reading an article about a recent ambush by a Gremlin. Vin had read it before; it was about a lone cloaked enemy hospitalizing two squads of recruits. Although the attacks were brutal, the victims themselves were only small fry. Nothing special about beating up kids who couldn't hold their own.
It wasn't until the young lady stood up did Vin realize that she was a double amputee. Both of the stumps of her legs were connected to two prosthetic legs, both looking just like a pair of normal legs. The only thing that made him realize they were fake was their black color.
"Hello, Vin, my name is Ms. Eras. I am your doctor today; you'll be in good hands."
Vin simply nodded, and slid down the wall. He was going to go on leave today...
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Too much female characters? Get a load of testosterone in the next segment, tomorrow.

Another chapter :D
Very good.
But what about Seatus' character?

"..but Jack fell down, and broke his crown..."
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Vin was subsequently kicked out of Uni's apartment after she had picked up Zero, half for her own sake, half for his sake. Fortunately, he was ordered to lodge in with a Knight by the name of Arthur. Arthur, for some reason, was in the hospital, when he had noticed Vin sleeping in the lobby. Eras handed Vin a bottle of prescription drugs, and waved him off.
"Take care of yourself next time," Eras whispered into Vin's ear as he put his shirt back on. It was just after a check-up, a week after living with Arthur. Both of the young men didn't bother to talk to each other during this time, until now. A pop-up dossier appeared in front of Vin, which showed Arthur soloing a Graveyard Floor. Vin waved at Eras as his combat armor, a Snarbolax Coat and Grey Feather Cowl, formed around his body. A whirlpool of darkness wrapped around the Inquisitor, leaving Eras to continue with her work.
When Vin arrived at the Graveyard, a horde of fifty slags had surrounded Arthur. He was laughing maniacally, firing off his dual Sentenzas like a devil.
"Die you f***ers! I am f***ing ANUBIS! GOD OF DEATH! YOU WILL GET DOWN BACK INTO YOUR GRAVES!" cackled the Knight.
Vin sheathed his Barbarous Thorn Blade, and walked around, studying Arthur. "What the heck..."
Arthur, or Anubis, was firing SHADOW weapons at SHADOW-based enemies. It wasn't that he had a hard time killing them, but rather the opposite. In fact, he was cutting their numbers down pretty well. The bullets flying out had turned coal-black, instead of the usual violet rounds.
"Y-you called me?!" Vin shouted over the noise. Anubis didn't pause, but instead fired of a shot straight at Vin. It grazed his hood as he ducked, only to turn around and find a Phantom's orb in stasis. Vin sighed, and unsheathed his blade. He walked away from the scene, into the next set of graves. The Inquisitor plunged his blade into the floor, which summoned massive thorns from below. The undead were impaled on these massive pillars, but their rest continued as soon as Vin lifted his blade. Crowns laid everywhere, to which Vin indiscriminately collected. He was going to have to call an Enforcer after this...
2 days later...
Enforcer Lydia, a Callahan-wielding officer, was sitting down next to Vin. Across them was Arthur. They were in Arthur's apartment, but nobody objected to anything. Several minutes passed, until the distant bells signaled noon. Outside, the day was downcast for heavy rain. Despite this, the door was still left open, which allowed a draft to fly through.
"Arthur, do you have any idea what kind of situation you're in?" Vin inquired, a hint of irritation in his voice. He was in his combat armor, but his hood was pulled down.
"..." was Arthur's reply.
"As far as I'm concerned, I'm living with a grenade without a pin," Vin continued, "some vessel attempting to hold in a demon. Do you know what happens if you can't control the other you?"
"There is no other me."
"Are you sure about that? You call yourself by two differe-"
"That's just me when I'm fighting. I vent it all out."
"J-just you when you're fighting? Do you know how messed up that was to purposely wake the Undead?"
"Do you have any connections toward them?"
"Not at all. But there's a thing called respect. I advise that you should get rid of the source of your hell, before it floods over into your mind."
At this, Arthur's eyes glowed red. He opened a book that was sitting by him, and recited a few verses. The room heated up like it was Firestorm Citadel, and something was forming mid-air. Lydia, who had raised her Callahan, fired a round into the forming ball, causing it to dissipate. Vin unsheathed his Thorn Blade, and lunge at Arthur. However, he was shoved back by a blast of hot air before he could make contact. Arthu- Anubis then sent a jet of flames straight at Lydia, which burned her arm. She clutched it, and attempted to dash outside. A lance erupted from the floorboards, and impaled straight through her chest.
"I am the god of death, and you WILL not escape," Anubis gravely stated, floating upwards.
Vin scrambled towards the hallway, breaking off the lance as he went, and dragged Lydia out of the building. Whenever a jet of flame was about to hit them, he lobbed a thorn into it. Finally, they were out of the building, which was completely on fire. The weather had progressed into a heavy downfall, so hard-hitting drops pattered off of Vin's coat. He was breathing heavily; it was only a short time since his recovery. The building then suddenly put itself out, leaving only a charred window at the bottom floor.
[STATUS REPORT]
- One Enforcer in critical condition. Stable.
- One Inquisitor with minor burn injuries and bruising. Stable.
- 1, 750, 000 crowns worth in damages made. No plans for rebuilding as of late.
- "Anubis" Arthur is now MIA. Wanted for 950 CE reward.
- End of report.
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Argh, Seatus, why did you make such a dangerous character?!

Cuz dats just how I role <(^-^)>
*someone walks past and mutters, "Vog, you're such a disgrace Seatus,"*
*squeaks* "I know!" <(^-^)>

I guess I'll leave my app here.
Name: Artif (sufficiently fantasized version of my in game moniker)
Gender: Male
Race: Knight
Short bio: Born into a secluded cult of warriors, Artif has been raised since birth in the art of murder. Though still inexperienced, his skill with the blade outstrips a traditionally trained Knight of the same level, but his skills in every other weapon class suffer as a result. He declines working for the Spiral order, preferring to rent his skills out as a high-level mercenary or bodyguard. His recent endeavors have brought him in contact with a Vin, whom he is willing to fight alongside with but more importantly experience life, growing tired already of the job of a hired blade. He strives to find a better, more fulfilling life than coldly cutting down anyone his employer dictates, and has decided to seek out someone who he believes could help him achieve that goal.
Personality: Very professional while on the job, but shy and awkward due to a life lived with little contact with others. When off the clock, he is curious and somewhat whimsical, finding the intricacies of life novel and refreshing. He rarely makes friends, but the few who do have the privilege of befriending this strange little Knight have a powerful ally and fun friend at their side.

"...and Jill came tumbling after."
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It was well into the night, on the boulevards of Haven, when Vin sat in a dark alley, combat armor on. He popped a few pills into his mouth, and slipped the container back into his pouch. Unconventional items, like drugs and live plants, were not able to be de-materialized, unlike weapons and native plants to Cradle. The items would spill as soon as they re-materialized, so there was always a pouch on a Knight's armor.
Two dark orbs formed from outside the alley, which produced two Knights, also in combat armor. One was the Callahan-wielding Lydia, who had recovered from her injuries. She wore her own Snarbolax Coat, along with a custom Surge Tailed Helm. The other was a new recruit: Artif. He donned a complete Ancient Plate set, and held a Triglav in his right hand.
"Follow me," Vin ordered, and put on his cowl, activating his thermal vision. He stood by a side door, and unsheathed his Thorn Blade. Lydia stood opposite to Vin, and armed her Callahan. Artif took point, and hacked down the door with the massive blade. He stepped over the broken wood chips, shield up, and slowly madea quick pass over each room. Each of their inhabitants were sleeping, so Vin took the opportune moment to sabotage their weapons. The trio then tiptoed upstairs, letting no floorboard creak.
As soon as Artif popped his head out into the hallway, a burst of bullets whizzed by his head. He held his shield up, letting the rounds disperse harmlessly. Vin hopped out to the side, and lobbed a thorn into the shooter's arm. As the opponent was wincing from the pain, Artif rushed in and shield-bashed the combatant, effectively knocking him out. A sound of a shotgun echoed as Artif's leg was shot, but the recruit only turned and held his shield up. Another shot rang out, blowing a large chunk of the doorway off. Two shells clinked to the floor, and a loud thump came from the dark room. Artif came out, relatively unharmed, save for his bare, scratched leg. Meanwhile, Vin had dropped off a Stagger Storm in a room full of bunks, paralyzing any person who tried to fight. Lydia took over Artif's role of point man, and jogged upstairs. The familiar roar of a Volcanic Pepperbox clashed against the sweet harmony of Lydia's Callahan, alerting Vin about the firefight upstairs. He tossed a pill at Artif, and ran up the steps. Lydia had staked the enemy's hand to the floor, and was about to kick the gun away before a blast of energy knocked her into the wall. She pulled out her sidearm, a Valiance with a supressor, and emptied seven rounds into the room. She reloaded both weapons, and switched back to her Callahan.
"How many floors left?" she asked, massaging her arm, where she was burned before.
Vin looked up, and signaled a "2". He threw another Stagger Storm into the room adjacent to the next staircase, triggering a cacophany of thuds. Vin tossed his second pill at Lydia, and motioned Artif upstairs. This time, Vin took point man position, and popped just his head up. A dim blue light arced across the corridor, and rolled at Vin's face. It was a Nitronome. Vin impaled the bomb before it could explode, and ran into the dark hallway. Sounds of scuffles and thumping were heard, until Artif calmly turned on the lights. Five people were on the floor, while Vin and a person dressed in the Robes of the Fallen were doing hand-to-hand combat. Their weapons lay on the floor, waiting for the critical moment.
The opponent struck at Vin's ribs, and then attempted sneak in a groin shot. However, Vin blocked it with his knee, and made a quick chop in the opponent's throat. The opponent stood back to cough, but Vin wasted no time and closed the gap with an uppercut. This strike was deflected by a backhanded fist, and the opponent returned a pushing palm. Vin was slammed back into the wall, and held his arms up as he received a flurry of punishing blows. As the opponent was about to finish up with a elbow strike, Vin lunged for the opponent's torso, and lifted the enemy high in the air. He allowed gravity to help him slam the combatant down, and then he sat on top of the opponent's stomach. He grabbed the opponent's neck, and held on as tight as he could. It took several minutes, but the retaliation was beginning to slow down. That is, until Vin felt something sharp stab into his side. He crumpled down on top of his opponent, who shoved him away. The enemy was about to run upstairs, but a stake from the Callahan prevented the enemy to flee.
Vin crunched on a pill, and ripped out the shadowy blade from his body. Artif had already ran ahead, with Lydia providing covering fire from behind. The Inquisitor crawled to the person in the Robes of the Fallen, and pulled of hi-
He pulled of her helm. Under the menacing shell was a girl's face. Her eyes were frightened, and her face's expression distorted in fear. She grabbed a Curse Vial from her belt, and threw it at Vin's face. He punched it with his left hand, allowing the shards to cut through his flesh. He struck the opponent's temple with a expertly placed elbow strike, promptly knocking her out.
When he finally reached the top steps, Lydia and Artif had finished their job. Vin was using his Thorn Blade as a crutch, and hobbled up to the both of them.
"Arm's doing fine?" Vin asked, breathing heavily. His wound oozed out a sickly purple fluid, the usual aftereffect of being hit by a source of shadow.
"Yeah," Lydia replied, clutching her chest. She wasn't done recovering; her body still needed a bit more rest.
"W-wait, are both of you injured?!" Artif exclaimed.
"The Order usually attempts to put down people who are particularly antagonistic to them. I'm hated by more than a few for putting away a couple of hotshots into prison," Vin explained. He slid down a wall, staining the peach-colored paint with reddish-purple fluids.
Artif sighed, and picked up Vin onto his back. Lydia walked up the stairs, to the roof, and lit a cerulean flare. The area was clear.
"Wanna go for coffee after this?" Vin asked the both of them. Lydia placed her hand on Vin's shoulder, and then walked downstairs. Artif, however, was confused.
"C-coffee? At a time like this?! I-uh don't know w-what to say to that!" Artif stammered. He looked like a little boy role-playing as a knight in shining armor, which made Vin chuckle.
"Sure, after I piss off Eras."
"Eras?"
"My doctor. She's going to overdose me on purpose when she finds out about this..."
"Then why are you going to her?!"
"Relax, it's just a joke. Anyhow, I'm fine here. Let's just mop up, and then we can go when the Enforcers come, alright?"
"S-sure."

Your character already made its cameo in the Newspaper that Eras was reading. He's too powerful to introduce early on in the story.

This is the temporary end of the "slice of life" aspect of this fanfict. Now starting on an arc.
A young man, in a hide of thorns, leaned against the wooden wall of the bar. His contemplative expression was hidden by a Grey Feather Cowl, allowing only a pair of steel-blue eyes to radiate from the cloth. The scent of blood was strong on him; patches of red had mottled the coat. This young man sighed, and then slumped down, arms folded across.
The door next to him, a frail aluminum frame, was slammed open by the head of a trio. These three young men, about a few years younger than the former, were holding their chins up too high, their chests too puffed out. The bar silenced for a few seconds, and then resumed its usual chatter. One of the three men turned towards the former, and spoke to his friends.
"Wanna drag this bum to the alley tonight? He looks like he could use a mugging!"
"Nah, too tired from the interrogation," said the leader, obviously still vibrant. He seemed to be making himself larger than life, like an idiot would do.
"By the way, how did it go?" asked one of the leader's goonies, a shorter, scrawnier man. His voice was as bad as an old cat dying, if not worse.
"It was fruitless," the leader sighed melodramatically, "in the end, the person died from her wounds. Had all her limbs torn off!"
"Bah," said the first one, "she probably deserved it. Suits for her not speaking!"
The trio laughed a cacophony, causing heads to turn, and then dragged the bloody man out of the bar, into the nearby alley.
"...and guess what, you're next!" shouted the leader, his stupid face grinning. He wasn't even in his combat armor, a fatal mistake for any Knight prepared for a fight. He was about to slam his fist into the man's face, until his once-haughty expression changed into one of pain and fear. He screamed, and fell back, revealing a massive thorn in his bladder.
"I'm not a bum. I am an Inquisitor, your superior officer. And you're going to f***ing pay for your audacity, ya pieces of crap!" yelled the bloody man. He already unsheathed his Barbarous Thorn Blade, which was attached to his hand via a chain of thorns wrapping around his arm.
The other two cursed, and clumsily activated their combat armor. Before the Inquisitor stood a Chaos Scholar and a Skolver. The Skolver charged, his Sudaruska slowly swinging, only to have his head skewered and scrambled by the Inquisitor's Thorn Blade. A sicking squelch was heard before the Inquisitor withdrew his blade, only to plunge it clean through the chin. He yanked the blade out, kicking the disfigured corpse into the Chaos Scholar, who had took ages to finally arm his Autogun. The scholar blasted his friend's corpse apart, and attempted to fire again. However, the sounds of clicking signified he had run out of ammunition. The Inquisitor, his eyes burning with bloodlust, expertly carved a straight line through the scholar's belly, letting a pile of gore begin to spill out. As the scholar clutched his stomach, he fell over...right into the Thorn Blade. His breathing was blocked by the blade's tip. The Inquisitor pulled out his own firearm, a Valiance pistol, and emptied all nine rounds into the scholar's throat. A scowl came across the Inquisitor's face as he wiped the spattered blood, and sheathed his weapons. The leader, still on the floor, looked up, sobbing for mercy. But the other man gave none. He turned around, and allowed the patches of thorns on his coat to finish the job. And the job took several minutes.
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"What in the world do you get into yourself these days?" Eras sighed, shaking her head. She was patching up Vin, who had bruises and cuts all over his body. Vin, however, was thinking hard about something, with his steel-blue eyes staring sharply at the whitewashed walls of the room. He was muttering something about "dismembering" again and again, gripping his hands tighter and tighter. Not even when she applied the alcohol did he wince, only intensifying in his muttering.
"Those who executes their own laws in their self-ordained right are the worst of all. Their body parts should be dismembered, their faces scrubbed from the memories of others, and their ashes dumped in Almire," he said clearly, finally reaching the climax. He grabbed Eras's hand as she was about to wipe his face with a wet cloth, but retracted it. "Sorry."
Eras, who was momentarily startled, sighed and packed up the supplies. She left the room, turning off the lights as she clicked her heels down the hall. Vin was alone in the dark, again. A flash of crimson glinted in his eyes.
Kill, kill, kill, kill.....

I'd like to submit a villain, if you don't mind.
Name: Gwenyvier, a.k.a. "The Finder"
Age: 700 cycles (physically 33 cycles old and holding)
Gender: Female
Race: Knight (valkyrie)
Appearance: extra-tall height; delicate eyes; white personal color; long, lank, silver hair; shadow dragon wings; hidden spiked (cat?) tail
Loadout: black loose-fitting silk dress hanging off her shoulders; thin golden circlet around her head; Barbarous Thorn Blade UV ASI vhigh & CTR vhigh; Shield Bracelet
Bio: She was once the essence of the Core itself, but after an unknown series of events, she was disconnected from the Core and became corrupted. She now bears nothing but hatred for the Core and its allies, and seeks revenge upon them all. Unfortunately for her, her powers are rather limited, so she often finds herself working alongside the less amicable members of society.
Additional powers: Her dragon wings have razor-sharp leading edges capable of slicing a man in twain. Her tail carries regenerating poisoned spikes and has an extremely sharp arrowhead-shaped tip. She can retract her tail to the point where it is not visible to the casual observer. Her fingertips carry deadly retractable claws, and she can breathe curses on her foes (like Carnavons).
She has a Void scar underneath her right eye.
Her silk dress has a lot of inherent piercing defense, and her shadowy build makes her nigh-immune to shadow attacks. Her defenses could be best described by Radiant Silvermail.

Out on the streets, sat the Inquisitor, leaning his head against the wall. He was breathing in the polluted, rank night air, something that he loved and hated simultaneously. He was about to nod off into another nightmare, when something odd happened.
Someone slammed his head into the wall, hard. He opened one of his eyes to see a twisted image of a Valkyrie, a corrupted form of the paragon of peace. Her porcelain face, while otherwise perfect, was marred with a violet-and-black scar running down her right eye. While beautiful, her appearance was frightening at the same time. She was massive, not in terms of length, but in height. He realized he was staring straight up at her, when he felt something enter his body. Something sharp. He moved his eyes down, and found his gut getting stabbed and stabbed again by a tail, bladed with a syringe of poison on the end. As it was about to make another strike, he grabbed the tail, and impaled the Valkyrie's own wrist the thing. A shrill scream deafened his ears, and he felt three deep cuts run across his face. On the Valkyrie's left hand was the hanging flesh of his face, the tail still hanging through the wrist. His opponent breathed heavy, before shouting something. A fume of purple clouded the Inquisitor's vision, before he instinctively ducked down. The brick wall behind him produced a grinding screech, while the very air itself was cut apart by something slashing.
Vin managed to run a few meters before slowing down, and grabbed his torso. His wounds were oozing out a sickly rainbow of green, red, and purple. He drew out his Thorn Blade, and raised it at the Valkyrie. Only, she wasn't in front of him. He felt something cold go through his back, and found the end of another Barbarous Thorn Blade burrowing through his stomach. With a turn, he attempted a slash at the Valkyrie, who easily dodged the swing. Vin flung a shower of thorns, but the Valkyrie deflected them all, with inconceivable speed. He felt something stab into his torso again, before he was blinded by light.
"...aren't dead yet!" a murky voice shouted. He faded back into darkness.
When Vin came to, he saw Artif, Eras, and Uni sitting around him.
"Vin! You're awake!" rejoiced Eras, she was about to hug him when Vin suddenly recoiled back into the bed. Eras gasped, but then slowly slipped her hand into his. "Hey, it's alright, you aren't in danger anymore, there's nothing to worry about."
"Hey-a Vi-" Uni was about to go, until she cut herself off. She leaned right up to his face, and stared into his eye. She leaned back, her eyes widened with alarm. "W-what's that with his eye?!"
Artif stared thoughtfully into Vin's right eye. "Huh, it kinda reminds me of the Snarbolax."
At this, the other two shifted their gaze at Vin's eye. He needed some explaining to do.
~~~
Vin is like a ragdoll, taking those hits like a beast! XD

I like the way you've introduced my villain. :D
If your characters ever encounter her again, for real, her personality is much the same as the former Gwen's - cheeky, graceful, and flirtatious. Her combat brutality is legendary, so in that respect, her portrayal in Vin's vision was highly accurate. :D

It was about 3 hours later since Vin was first hospitalized, and his recovery was unrealistically quick. As soon as all the poison had left his body (via coughing), his wounds sealed back together like it was nothing. His mind repaired itself from a manic state, back into his more docile phase. The only thing that would not revert was Vin's eye, which was slowly splitting into three seperate spheres.
"Care to explain about the eye?" Eras asked, irritated by the fact that she wasn't told about the eye.
"Oh," Vin replied, quite calmly, "this? This was from... I guess 5 years ago?"
Artif spat out his coffee he had taken from the vending machine, Uni shouted, and Eras gave a queer face.
"Yeah," he continued, "it was a gift from a certain somebody. I wouldn't have been here without this thing."
"W-wait, somebody can do that?!" Eras inquired, shocked. The other two were in a similar state.
"His na-"
"He?"
"Can you let me continue? Thank you. His name was...I believe it was Seatus?"
"Doesn't ring a bell."
"Shouldn't. He only hangs around Sanctuary."
"I've been to Sanctuary once before..."
"Did you have a full party there?"
"Yeah."
"Exactly the reason why he's not there. Besides, you need to have been in contact with something powerful, like Vog."
"Woah, wait a second, Vog?!"
"And you thought he was a legend?"
"B-but didn't he leave 6 years ago?"
"How old do you think I am?"
At this, Eras looked at the Inquisitor questionably. Based on his appearances, she might've guessed 20, or even 30 years of age. However, this was not the case.
"You've got to be kidding me," she muttered under her breath.
"I still remember the Skylark," he said, grinning.
Yup, this guy was at least 40. The Skylark landed 20 years ago. In 14 years, the Order has been unable to escape, so they remodeled Haven. 6 years later, several incidents happened, such as the Return of Vog, among other things. 6 years after, and Haven was flourishing as the base of the Order.
Vin had been there since the beginning.
"Anyhow," Vin went on casually, "in order to get this thing fixed, Seatus needs to do it. I've got a Shadow Key, so Eras, Artif, and I can go."
"W-wait, I'm coming with you!" Uni protested.
"3 members only, and Artif is stronger than you. Wouldn't want you to get killed on the way. Just hang out with Zero, maybe leave behind a prayer or two."
Uni opened her mouth to continue protesting, but stopped herself.
"Then why am I going?" Eras asked. "Having a double amputee isn't exactly the best idea for a team."
"You might want to try the same treatment as I did. Maybe get those legs back," Vin replied. He showed his right arm, and then focused some energy through it. The arm reverted back from a fleshy, tan form into several strands of briar. "Also lost my arm in the Vog incident. Seatus implanted some of his flesh as thanks for keeping peace."
"So, is Seatus a Snarbolax?" Artif asked.
"Was waiting or someone to ask that. And yes, he is."
"This'll be an interesting one," replied the small mercenary, who broke into a gleeful grin.
Vin forced his arm to change back into the fleshy form, and massaged it.
"We'll go in about," Vin said, thinking, "this Winterfest."
~~~
When you're 26 years younger than your character, you have to stop and think how life might turn out for you in the future.

I am 26 years younger than your character too! :O! I'm not worried about creepers on here. They can't read, and they hate math! XD (Seatus says the blondest things)

Here's two ways you can interpret it:
"Yup, this guy was at least 40."
40 - 26 = 14
"The Skylark landed 20 years ago. In 14 years, the Order has been unable to escape, so they remodeled Haven. 6 years later, several incidents happened, such as the Return of Vog, among other things. 6 years after, and Haven was flourishing as the base of the Order."
20 + 14 + 6 + 6 = 46 - 26 = 20

Around this time of year, the Clockworks was near-frozen with ice. There was a constant grinding sound that sounded like screeching metal, likely a side-effect of the cold. In the Crossroads to the Shadow Lairs, snow had blanketed the whole steel platform, and the lights flickered. This time, only one staff member was tending to the elevators. It was a young man, or at least he appeared to be, and he was humming "Amazing Grace". In the distance, an elevator came down, with three figures.
"Well, well, well," said the young man, activating his Geo Knight gear. It was a Skolver Coat accompanied by a Divine Veil, with a merry red personal color.
"What are you still doing here?" one of the figures inquired, his steel-blue and crimson eyes glowing from inside the Grey Feather cowl.
"I don't believe in time for rest," explained the Geo Knight. He pulled out a dossier and started tapping on it. "Three people, who's names are?"
"Inquisitor Vin," said the hooded figure, "Corporal Artif, and Dr. Eras."
"Got it," said the Geo Knight, finishing his report. "Where to?"
"Just a visit to Sanctuary," explained Vin. "Have errands to do before the holiday season goes full-blown."
The Geo Knight tipped his hood as a greeting, and returned to his spot.
Vin materialized a massive Shadow Key from his inventory, and slid it into the lock. A wave of pink light spread through the many black wires, and the rails slid down the elevator. The felt even colder than the usual frost that was Winterfest, it was the menacing cold of the Shadow Lair. Before anyone stepped on the elevator, Vin held his left hand out, and rolled up the sleeve. There was a tatoo on his arm, an eye, also accompanied by tattoos of black pixels.
"Da mihi Sanctuarii," Vin whispered. The tatoo on his arm glowed a bright pink, and the pixels seemed to grow. The other two Knights gasped, but otherwise kept silent. Soon, the Swarm had taken up the entirety of Vin's left arm, and then leaped onto the elevator. The pixels then slid into the screen, which flickered into a white tree. The Inquisitor grinned at his friends, and stepped onto the elevator, which was festering with The Swarm.
"I-is that e-even safe?!" Eras shouted.
"Totally fine with me on board," Vin replied.
Artif shrugged, and calmly stepped onto platform. The Swarm immediately wrapped around his foot, but then receded within the next few seconds. Eras took her turn, and gingerly placed her prosthetic foot onto the platform. No reaction. The doctor slowly leaned forward, and placed her next foot on. The Swarm, this time, quickly slid up her legs and into her stubs, and then subsided. However, a chilling feel crawled up her spine.
"What did it just do?" Eras asked, in an almost shrill voice. The chilling waves came again and again, causing the doctor to get goosebumps.
"The Swarm wants to know it's friends' friends," Vin explained, giggling a bit. Eras sighed, and punched the [DOWN] button.

You haven't posted to Finder's Keepers in a while. I have your character her own chapter. ^.^

From this point on, can future applications also describe their characters out of armor? After this arc, I'm going to focus on non-combat stories and such.
For people who already have their apps in, can you create a description of your character out of his/her armor? Thanks.
[Example]
Vin has a pale complexion, and looks about the age of 18 (despite being MUCH older than that). He has jet-black hair, and steel-blue eyes. Out of his combat armor, he usually wears his pair of Frosty Glasses. He wears a lot of grey clothing, but his usual outfit is a grey T-shirt 2 sizes too large, and sweatpants. He enjoys going barefoot.
[Example end]
So, just do the bodily descriptions, and then move onto clothing and accessories.

Gwen has long, lank, silver hair with a bright moon-like sheen. It covers her right eye, which has a hair-thin Void scar under it. Her eyes are gray and her skin is so pale that it almost glows. She has a nearly perfect figure. Out of combat, she likes to wear her loose-fitting royal-blue silk gown with sleeves hanging off her shoulders. In combat, she sometimes wears a Grey Feather hood and cloak. Her mannerisms are graceful and her expressions serious. She carries herself like the powerful, intelligent woman that she is.

As the elevator smoothly rode down the shaft, Vin's Swarm tatoo begun to fade. It gradually receded back into its original shape, and ceased its movements. The air around them became brighter and brighter, until it was the pristine white that only the Sanctuary could have. Below the elevator was a massive island, thrice the size of other Sanctuaries, with a massive pool in the center.
At the edge of the pool, a fourth being registered into the party: Seatus.
As his figure could be seen clearer, Vin realized Seatus was in a humanoid state, his bare legs hanging down in the water. Seatus, his eyes suddenly wide-eyed and fearful, ducked his head. A thorn clipped his head, cutting off a few strands of hair. From above, another figure floated mid-air. It was the same one from before, the woman who had attacked Vin.
Vin cursed as he unsheathed his blade, and hopped out of the platform. He landed right into the Valkyrie, missing by a few inches, and engaged in a wrestle with the being. He used his weight to grab at her leg, and tugged, hoping to pop the thigh from the socket. However, her tail slashed at his arms, until a solidly placed strike caused him to lose his grip. The Inquisitor fell into the soft grass, growling this time. He flung a string of thorns at the Valkyrie, who easily deflected it with the flapping of her wings. However, she turned and took on a charged round from Eras's Master Blaster, knocking the Valkyrie effectively to the floor.
Artif was already down on the floor, apparently having slid off while no one was looking. As the Valkyrie had fallen, he brought his massive Triglav down, combining the force of gravity with his own. When the smoke had cleared, the Valkyrie, her armor cracked, had barely been able to roll out of the way. She was breathing heavily, but quickly kicked off, back into the air. Suddenly, the glow of her Swarm-scar began to shine brighter. Vin's tatoo reactivated, and started to wrap around his left arm.
"Artif!" Vin called out, now rushing to the waters of the Sanctuary, "make sure I stay in the water!"
The small mercenary ran up to Vin, and pushed him into the pool. The black particles immediately floated away from Vin, up into the sky. "What about Eras?" Artif asked Vin, worried. The Inquisitor cursed, and attempted to leave the pool. However, the Swarm immediately tried to take control over Vin, so he splashed right back in.
"Help her!" shouted Vin as he pushed Artif out of the pool. Eras was just about to reach the bottom part when...
Vin turned to Seatus. "Can you patch me up real quick? I can probably get that Valkyrie out of our sights soon enough."

Seatus nodded, and grabbed onto Vin's face and arm. He was going to have to tear out the implanted flesh, and cleanse it. The humanoid closed his eyes, and exerted a massive volume of energy into the flesh. In a few seconds, the arm and eye turned into wiry strings of flesh, and slipped off of Vin. The Inquisitor's real form was revealed...
Meanwhile, Artif was dragging back the Valkyrie with the hooked edge of the Triglav, wrestling the handle of the blade to barely keep a grip. The Valkyrie, however, let out an ear-piercing screech, sending out the familiar cloud of smoke. Artif held his breath, and tugged back with all his might, until the sound of flesh ripping was heard. It wasn't the Valkyrie's however. The small mercenary looked down at his Volcanic Plate Mail, to find it perforated with knife-like feathers. The Valkyrie lifted up the massive Triglav, finally lodging it out of her shoulder, and kicked it into the small mercenary, kncoking him back. The Valkyrie felt an extreme pain in her tail, and turned around to find it lopped off by Eras's Cautery Sword. With a great deal of contempt, the Valkyrie attempted to slash the doctor with her claw, but only cut air. However, as Eras was about to take another step back, the Valkyrie flung a shower of thorns at her...
By instinct, Eras blocked her face and torso with her arms, but one of the thorns had drilled into her arm. While Eras tried to take in the pain, the Valkyrie swung her Thorn Blade low...
and successfully shattered the prosthetics.

When Artif came to, he saw a blurry pair of figures. One was walking towards the other, who was on the floor, crawling away. Muffled shouts echoed in his ears, and he turned to find a disheveled, burnt man pointing his charred stub back at the other two. It took a few seconds, until the memories rushed back in. Immediately, he ran off towards the Valkyrie, his armor falling to pieces, and tackled her to the ground. He didn't fully remembered as to why he was to engage, but he couldn't stop landing punch after punch. All of them were parried, blocked, or dodged, until the Valkyrie's knife-like feathers cut into the small man's arms. Even then, he only resorted to his elbows, and attempted to crush the Valkyrie's head without his hands. Instead, he only felt the massive resistance of a Shield Bracelet. The force emitted from the bracelet amplified, which then shoved the small mercenary back. She got up, walking right over to Artif, and stabbed into his torso. She twisted, pulled out, and stabbed.
And again.
And again.
And again...
Vin was cursing under his breath, mostly at himself for his weak state. Seatus had torn off all the foreign flesh from Vin's body, revealing a young man covered in burns, lacerations, and bruises. The Inquisitor, who had seemed to be in peak condition, was now a weakling. His left eye was charred black, his right arm a burnt stub, bones jutting out. This was the condition Vin was in as he was dying, dying from being consumed by Vog's flame. This was his true self, a man on the verge of death.
But he still retained his Dominance over his life.
Seatus was already applying on the new flesh, its revitalizing power erasing all the scars from the body. Even the small cuts left behind by the Valkyrie were being wiped off, revitalizing the skin.
"Seatus?" Vin asked as he was adjusting to the replacement.
"Hm?" the humanoid replied, his hands still working quickly.
"Is that the Valkyrie from before? The one that helped us?"
"Yeah, it's that one. I don't know why or how she came, but she wants to kill me. I think her name was Gwenyvier?"
"Huh, same here. Something to do with that Void scar on her face?" Vin stepped out of the pool, and the Swarm attempted to overtake his body. However, the new energy from Seatus's replacement turned the veins red, and so the black pixels settled down.
"The Swarm? I don't know. You made a pact with the Swarm, so it couldn't have been it."
Meanwhile, Eras was holding her gun up at Gwen, who had finally been satisfied with her work. Artif was unconscious, his chest cracked open into a gaping hole, but was still alive. Or, that was what the HUD indicated. The doctor fired a shot, which was deflected with the flick of the wing. She then backed away from Gwen, firing two more shots. Both of them missed by a long shot. With a hellish grin on her face, Gwenyvier walked over...

Due to the fact that Travid had (keyword is had) lived a poor life (that doesn't mean he doesn't have money) he's generally quite thin. He has black hair that is fairly short but long enough to cover his right eye. He wears a white t-shirt, a white jacket, and jeans. Don't be alarmed but he has a dozen of each. He also harbors a black suit similar to a hitman's suit. This he only wears on special occasions, which is next to none. But he refuses to sell it as it would fetch a large sum of crowns. Close friends state that it might be his link to someone. He has pale skin due to almost never leaving his humble abode and he will only leave for necessities such as crowns, food, etc. He has a green left eye as his right eye was replaced with a robotic eye. Concerning the suit, another friend was able to pry away some more information from him by getting him very drunk. In his drunken state he revealed why it was so special to him. But the answer itself was a bit shocking. His friend refuses to tell more.

It's important for you to know that I was born into the game, so I will be a Snarbolax humanoid. But when I accidentally transfer back to a human form (will be explained when I get to that part in my fanfic)I will only have a bright light covering me, kind of looking like shorts. :P
@Thinslayer Why not show him what Gwen looks like by using that RWBY White Trailer? The referral was in RtC if you can't remember...

That's an excellent idea, Seatus.
@Vinnydime: The RWBY Trailer shows a character who is nearly identical to Gwenyvier. The main difference is the dress, which is short in the trailer, but Gwen wears a long, straight gown. Otherwise, I was quite stunned by the resemblance. Even the character's fighting style is remarkably close to Gwen's.

Yeah, I had noticed that you talked about that vid like 50 gajillion times in RtC

You could call this an addition to my original app, haha.
I also just realized that I didn't specify what Eras had equipped, but if you like, you can make that up.
On the other hand, out of armor, she usually wears a striped blue T-shirt and a pair of dark grey corduroys, and if she's working, she wears a doctor's coat over it. She has straight brown hair that is usually in a braid that reaches down to her waist. The bangs are usually dyed green. Her prosthetics are very futuristic-looking, and are nearly identical to real legs, the only difference is the color of them, which is black. It's not known who the manufacturers are.

Just remembered something to add to my out of armor. He wears dusky glasses.

Wow :D
I forgot to read the newest chapter, I didn't expect her prosthetics to be broken.
Great work as usual~!

And no, Artif is far from dying. He's made to be at least 5 times harder to kill than Vin. I'm just gonna have to screw him up a bit...

I know you guys like reading, but it feels so...
Dead.
Oh well, back to writing....
"You are my sunshine, la~la~la~la-la..."
~~~
Vin sat out on the bridge leading to Haven. The dawnstar was just rising from the Arcade, causing the sky to turn melon-green. The clouds raced by the artificial skies of Cradle, scurrying off into an unknown location. This time, Vin was clad only in his T-shirt and sweatpants, both of them ashen-gray. He had taken off his glasses, so that his steel-blue eyes would not refract their light to somewhere else. If a newcomer to Haven was inbound, then he would make them remember the first time they entered Haven. Unfortunately, the sun continued to rise until it was early morning. The weather shifted to a cloudy sky, and the air grew somewhat colder. At this time, the Guardians would switch shifts for the next couple of hours, and so the cycle would continue like that.
Vin sighed, and stood up from his seat on the bridge. A Guardian eyed him suspiciously, but continued onwards towards the bridge.
As he was walking up the stairs into Haven, his normal outfit materialized around him. A coat of thorns sprung out from his back, and a dark cowl shielded his face from the prying eyes of curious defenders. The system inside activated, which made his eyes radiate with light. From that point on, glasses were not needed.
"Feron," Vin addressed as he passed by the lieutendant. The taller man gave a small nod of acknowldgement, and both men resumed their paths.
Technically, Feron was a commanding officer. Despite this, Vin was an Inquisitor, a rank which exceeded that of most military titles and honors. Inquisitors had access to most of the sensitive information in the Order, as well as clearances to areas denying the public. Thus, Vin was able to ramble about Haven wherever he pleased, without any questions.
Despite this, it served no benefit to Vin. His works was indoors in the interrogation room, not in some secret testing facility. And if he remembered, today was going to be a busy day...