New: Specific Character Application Details
"Rest in peace Sword and what it emblems." -Vivid
"Don't you know...it's the end of the world...
It ended when they bade me...good bye..."
Hi everyone!
This is Vivideus with his first ever attempt to write a coherent fanfic. Which is actually very difficult.
The story is *intended* to be quite an epic tale, but I don't know how it will turn out xD
The story happens in a background loosely related to Spiral Knights; I have nicked the better concepts and trashed the rest. As result, the story won't be 100% relevant with the SK lore and there are things that I intentionally dismissed.
I have the first few chapters done, I'll probably update two times a week. Go smack me in game if I delayed (IGN: Vivid-Gluttony) (waiting for ya all with most glorious love!)
So, enjoy the story! Sincerely hope your support!
Updates
Vivid is depressed...
He needs hugs. Lots of them.
Notes:
1. The story is not completely tied to the SK world. Don't rage if you see your favourite Gremlins not getting a mention.
2. Echo is not the puny, smelly guy with the slick blade overgrown with moss you see in HoH. And she is NOT Ezho .
3. This is my first try and English is not my first language; please give suggestions and feedback! Also, since I am still in the process of actively honing my English writing, my style may change drastically over time. Don't feel strange.
4. Please, in specific, please do not challenge me on the mechanics of swords, guns, how stuffs work, etc. I got the freedom to do whatever I want; again, don't rage if my concept of Lockdown/Divine Avenger contradicts your perception.
5. I may use names of my in-game friends, but not in an insulting way; if you find yourself accidentally placed in the story and you dislike, please let me know.
Links:
Character Name Explanation
Character Application Post
Character Power Chart
Content:
Part One: A Prominence at Dusk
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Part Two: Pale the Twinkling Stardome
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven
Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen
Part Three: Revelation Under Full Moon
Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen
Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Twenty
Chapter Twenty One
I decided first to do a character name briefing here; you'll find out what do I *intend* to mean for each of my lovely gaiz/galz!
Lance: Long, sharp and extremely lethal (check Companion Cavalry or Polish Hussar), it is however easily breakable and extremely frail if not at its tip; in fact, in medieval times, lances of knights are intended to be broken against your opponent's shield in a gallant, chivalric duel. Does this character portend to tragedy? We shall see.
Nicholas: My real life friend, my second best friend in SK after Vindeus. He is a lovely guy, though has a temper when he goes recon. I hate his polaris-hammer styled recon which I cannot blame as spamming (cuz I spam more).
Auresque: A Shilin name. Which means a name from my most revered online artist, Shilin. Check her out and support her webcomic on shilin.deviantart.com or Carciphona.com
Xyver: His name is indecipherable since I don't know what I want to do about him. So nvm. nvm. nvm.
Mythra : Zoroastrian deity of covenant and oath. What do I want to do with him/her...? Most probably I'll bind him to something else.
Mira : Mira is a mirror. What does she reflect changes from time to time, but...there are seldom times that she gets to reflect herself. And if that's the case, its a long and ultimately narcissistic process.
Vindeus : My best friend in game until I discovered that he is NOT a girl. Well, to satisfy my ***tic wishes, I made her a girl here...her name means something though, will be elucidated later.
Atalia: For those who like reading the Bible Old Testament as a third-rate epic story (no offence intended), they should know Ataliah. I could argue that Atalia is as deadly and evil as her Bible counterpart, but in the end she is just a typical person lost in the indulgence of what they treasure/crave. The Night of Sorrow is dedicated to her.
Vercin: A contraction of the Gaul chief (and hero) Vercingetorix, the only general able to stand up to the furious might of Julius Caesar the Great. The name is perfect for the war-hardened lieutenant of the fiery Halfblood Princess.
Chris: A truly epic LD player known for his rageness (is that a word...) who had already died from SK.
Septre: Derived from the word scepter, the stick/wand/long stuff that signifies the strength of a monarch/ruler. The symbol of sovereignty, royalty, and best of all...power overwhelming.
Hiros: A guy who happens to be my friend?
Echo: Is an echo. Is not an ezho.
Kai: Kai is a word from my native language, Cantonese. It means "the opening", "the beginning". Yeah Kai is both cute and cool.
Zytes: Zytes makes me think of Cytus. And Cytus means perfection.
Lucielle: the Luci- prefix suggests light; most of the time, when I bestow such an obvious quality on a person, he/she is surely not all light and joy...wait and see, she is another key to solving the puzzle.
Vasha: Lemme just confess this is a random name.
Thesus: Random name. Sorry. This guy is a total dick so nevermind his name.
Mankey: Is my friend. Same case as in Hiros.
Rubius: You know who he is...nevermind.