@Liminori- Actually you can hear the tone of text. It's dependent on the writer's diction, or "word-choice". The Style of the passage is the manner in which you choose to express yourself, and the Tone of a passage is the attitude or mood revealed by the Style.

You certainly know how to juggle multiple things at once. o_o
(Will we get to see their bios?)
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@Dmatter- Aw, sorry to hear that. Strep sucks.

@thin: sure!

Do I need to edit my post or are you going to edit yours? :P Because I'm getting quite confused.

Cool. :)

WELP! That is either REALLY effective medicine, or I'm just REALLY lucky. I feel completely normal, yet I can skip school! Yay. Give me a few minutes and I'll post something. Sorry I haven't posted often the entire time, I've been busy. EDIT: Wait, before I write my post, two questions that may have story significance. One: are there multiple instances of places in this RP? (Like, more than one firestorm cathedral or gloaming wild-woods.) and two: Can my character have a pet? He won't do much, he'll just be a pet.

Sorry for my rather abrupt post. I needed to find a way back into the story. :/

@thin Oh, Okay. any problems with my post? If so, I'll edit it.

@Thin K. He's not really a direct-confrontation-in-the-middle-of-haven kind of guy, but I actually tried twice to get others to try and interact with me, but the others were busy or didn't take the hint. The first time is when I threw my bomb down into that area where most people WHERE congregated, the second time is when my character was standing right there in the open. On the second time I was trying to get Ukai to come and get me to help Topoyozada up, but I admit I was WAY too subtly about that, as Chromo specifically said that he thought he was far enough away to be seen and I was trying to imply that he forgot that Ukai had a greater senses Ect. As you can see, I'm bad at implying things. At next opportunity, I'll try to be much more obvious about it.

Also, re-reading the little "Here's what the story is" at the OP, I think Ive misunderstood something. Have most of the clockwork creatures been transformed, or are they still plenty?

Sorry, but it's just that when something is pointed out, it makes it sound like a pointed arrow at someone meant to piss me off.
I myself would like to point out, That it is very easy to take things the wrong way. Either someone takes offense to a certain post, even though it was not meant that way, or the way the text was written was misunderstood, and or written in a way to accidentally piss someone off. If you can see where I'm going here, the more I try to explain what I mean, the more it just points at itself.

Anyway. . . I'll try to post the stupid little bio finally. Properly for once that is.

I'll just work with this. But seriously Ultima you shouldn't already figure out the swarms plan in a second, that doesn't help diversify the story in anyway. I made the comment to add suspicion, not as a reason to instantly call out Axis.

I also think it strange that Nathaniel suddenly figures out the Swarm's plan. Also, why is he already so protective of Winter; he barely knows the girl!

I'd enjoy it more if everyone trusts the Knight, then is betrayed by him. It's more suspenseful

Wait. . . I NEVER HAD TO CHANGE ANYTHING! NOOOooooo......
Oh well. the last Bio was deleted, so..... Agh, whatever. Dagoon's a mercenary who used to work for the spiral order, then her and her team were sent off outside of haven to do favors for the other towns and settlements before everything went bad and was an apocalypse.
Oh yeah, and the group? Well, now only 2 of them remain. but. . . Dagoon doesn't know that and thinks she's the only one left, considering that the other dude got separated. GOOD ENOUGH?!? I'd really rather not do it properly, and do it more like a review.

I don't know about restrained and disarmed, but he'll have some explaining to do, that's for sure.
As for the Azure Knight, he will definitely gain the group's trust before doing anything else, which could be anything.

Nathaniel does NOT know that the knight is swarm-infested. He just thinks that the knight is suspicious and the swarm might've found a way to possess people without visible markings. That's why Nathaniel asked him to explain himself. If that knight provided a reasonable explanation for his armor, shield, and weapons not having any dents or scratches on them, Nathaniel's thoughts about it might've changed. And I thought we already agreed to make the group trust him a bit more. :/ I'm confused.

He never did. Gunslinger's rule: Shoot first, ask questions later :p So Yea, he's going to get questioned later on :P

Ultimate? I'm pretty sure I made two entries one with your rant, the other without. So.... I'll double check tmr, cause it's getting pretty late right here, and I got to sleep. 'Later

Alright, no more niceties here....
You need to tone down the "I'm too sexy"/"The world revolves around my holiness" stuff, as well as your power-playing.
Who said Tenebris' blade was flawed? I sure didn't, so it must not be true.
This is supposed to be a co-op of the forum, not the story of your ideal self. We are not supporting characters, and Nathaniel is not the "Main" character. So if you wouldn't mind editing your posts, I'm sure we'd all be able to get along a bit better here.