Name: Midnight
Gender:male
Appearance: full valkyrie raiment with fancy valkyrie wings
Group: lota squad B-class
Armor/Shield: valkyrie raiment set + aegis
Weapons: cold iron vanquisher, blitz needle
Personality/Bio: Midnight is born in the valkyrie council, a sacred branch of the spiral order that are specialized in dealing with fiendish threats as well as other hostile paranormal activities. Midnight is one of the few new valkyrie born in this generation due to the depopulation of war, unlike other fearsome strikers, Midnight appears to be rather feminine and well mannered. Experienced in dealing with shadow enemies, Midnight finds himself unfamiliar with gremlins, but the council promised him that the CIV and blitz needle are more than enough to finish them off. Armed with a thirst to fight amongst the commoners, Midnight was assigned to the lota squad. Hoping that his team mates will not mind his girly and unintimidating appearance.
Allowed to die: sure, Midnight can die to prevent him from becoming into a fallen (valkyrie tends to transform into fallen when they witnessed too much voilence or injustice.)

Name: Amber
Gender: Female
Appearance (picture or description): -(Link Goes Here)- Black Hair, Blue Eyes, Brown Scale Mail. No helmet in costume.
Group: Delta Squad Striker
Armor/Shield: Heavenly Iron Armor, Mercurial Demo Helm, The Bitter End
Weapons: Fang of Vog (Note, FOV is slower than other cutter weapons), Sentenza, Argent Peacemaker (Antigua line = fastest guns)
Aspects: Cat Got your tongue?, Come on- Fight!, May the best one win
Personality: Amber is a very fair person, and she tends to pick fights that she knows that her enemy can fight, due to her Chivalrous-Like personality.
She likes protecting those unable to protect themselves; albeit in her own methods, And does not dishonor her enemies.
Bio: Amber is an Ex Apocrean who left in search of a more noble cause. Upon finding the Spiral Order, she could feel that this was the place for her. She asked to be a part of the Spiral Order, but she had a lot of people not wanting her there, due to being an Apocrean.
Allowed to die: Yes- if another is to die, Amber will rush in to stop the other. (Death Switcher)

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9 Square Tic Tac Toe, anyone?

Edit: Major correction; 81 square TTT.

I saw that my bio provide info on where I come rom, not who I am, so um, whether u actualy need it or not, here it is...

Isaac is humorous and act younger than his age, he is confident, use his fathers passing as his motivation, and never gives up, in combat, he looks more like dancing than actualy fighting, but he sometimes can be a little cought up in the moment and do a few mistakes, but he always laugh at himself after that...unless, its a too big of a mistake that can cause a mission fail but that rarely happens. Sometimes, flash backs can come up in his mind....his fathers body in the tomb....the funeral, the gremlin.....he would freeze for a few seconds...maby even shed a tear, and he and his father were very close...after that, he will be all charged up with anger, BAM u made him mad, u gremlins aint gonna see the light again......*appears infront og ur face and bashes u up >:(* yea like dat. he treats his squad members as a family more than a squad and is always cheerful, unless u mention his dad then he will be emo for a few minutes, he never completely got pass that. He loves his mom, hes always saying stuff like:"without my mom, I wouldnt be who I am today" and every week he would call his mom to update on things and mail her 20% of his salary. he is very interested in ships, Skylark has always been his facination, especialy the aerodynamics, wow thats cool, them curves, them sleekness, them propulsion system, them tearium core. And um he is wierd, he treat his swords like pets and sometimes talk to them .__. like: "ok Archy(Acheron) lets show them what the wrath of the underworld can do" hehehe is this too long I got caught up in the moment again .__.

Here are some dialouges that may help you write stuff about midnight, think of him and Affraiel (you know who he is) two polar opposite characters, one represent my masculanity (Affraiel) and the other represent my feminity (Midnight).

Training ground comparison:

Affraiel moved confidently in front of a test dummy, he turned his head around and grinned at Ruby and the others who were lagging behind, "Watch how uncle Affraiel demolish this dummy kids," with the grin still on his scar ridden face, Affraiel brandished out his twin leviathan blades and turned the test dummy into dust within a matter of seconds, planting both of his sword solidly into the ground, Affraiel happily lighted up a cigar and took a deep puff, "Damn... I just love the sight of a dead dummy in the morning, in the noon or the night, heck, anytime would be fine by me!" Suddenly, the cry of another recruit was heard when he was attacked by a malfunctioned schufflebot, Affraiel took another puff with the cigar and wasted no time pulling one of his leviathan blade out from the ground and threw it right into the schufflebot's vital compartment. The bot was instantly taken out of comission and so did the terrified recruit, who fainted after the blade came inches away from his throat, "Ugh," Affraiel sneered before throwing the cigar away, "Is this the best the spiral order has to offer?"

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Midnight tailed behind Ruby and saw a slightly damaged dummy that no one bothered to pratice in the corner of the training hall, "Miss Ruby, may I request permission to practice with this dummy?", Ruby nodded her head without knowing why would Midnight not use a clean dummy instead, "Go ahead Midnight," she chuckled, "and please, you don't have to address me as 'miss', just call me Ruby." Moments later, while everyone is training hard, Rudy can see Midnight in a glance, standing quietly in the corner with the damaged dummy, he had his CIV drawn, however, he wasn't slashing away at the dummy, instead he just waved his sword in the air, as if he wanted the dummy to watch him pratice, his fighting style was questionable, the swinging movements were gentle and elegant at best, even lieutenant Vaelyn's fighting style would have been considered barbaric in comparison.

Flirting situation:

After dropping his warden armor to the group like solid anvils, Affraiel stopped Ruby from leaving the equipement room and wiggled his thick white eye brows at the young captain, "Hey, Ruby... ain't you forgettting something?" before Ruby could talk, Affraiel positioned his face so close to Ruby's face that she can hear him breathing and whispered, "Say... how about you gimme a kiss after what I did out there?" "ARGH!" Ruby backed up into a corner in terror, horrified by the warden's wild advance. Affraiel sighed and sagged his shoulders, "Oh come on, I know you can't resist me," said Affraiel and flexed one of his biceps, "Check these bad boys out... Colin ain't got nothing on me, he is half the man you need!"

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Seeing that Ruby had secluded her self outside the command post, under the reflection of a full moon, Midnight creeped in behind her and presented to his captain a special metal crest, "Captain, I want you to take this..." Ruby felt flattered and accepted the crest without a word, "Before you ask what this crest is..." Midnight scratched his head and blushed, "I will tell you what I feel about-" for a moment, Midnight paused due to a hic up, "-Do you like Colin? I mean..." Midnight concealed his blushing face beneath the shadow of the night and started fidgetting, "I mean... do you like me? I hope I am not too girly..." Before Ruby could reply, Midnight flied off into the sky, probably too embarrassed due to the confession.

There were a few small grammar errors here and there, but the story seems to be coming off of a great start! What I am finding that I'm appreciating is that the story itself is centered around your characters and the story is written in the third person, but not with the all-knowing form of it. Means that we all get to see our characters but at the same time think on our own how they are thinking. :)

I can't wait to see the next chapter! I'd give a more thorough "review", but right now I'm using a hotel computer since my mom and I are on a road trip to see a friend perform in Les Mis. :) Perhaps I'll edit this comment when we return home.

Boop.

I'd like to change my character completely. I've found one that is more... Suitable.

Name: Imca (I'm blatantly pulling a character from elsewhere, And yet it'll still work.)
Gender: Female
Appearance (picture or description): Boop
Group: Delta Squad Striker
Armor/Shield: Almarian Crusader Armor (Without the Shoulderpads), Mercurial Demo Helm (Normally unequipped.), The Bitter End (Ocasionally).
Weapons: Var is Imca's trademark weapon. Despite it's weight, It can easily play many different roles. It can work as a sniper rifle, a machine gun, a rifle, an anti tank gun, or a greatsword.
Personality: Imca is very distant, and only talks when she feels it is neccasary. Often, she is very defiant when it comes to taking orders, or talking- But that doesn't mean she won't do anything about it. You have to get on her good side to understand her.
Bio: Imca's been in the Delta squad for a year, despite only being 16. She's seen her share of death, and it hasn't changed her appetite for war. Her hometown was attacked by gremlins of the Crimson Order, and she's searching for a fistful of revenge.
Allowed to die: Doubtful.

Then tell me why a Striker can use ALL of the heavy weapons with ONE HAND?
No offense meant, But I really have to just go out of my way, and give you the entire list of heavy weapons a knight shouldn't be able to use with two hands, but somehow can.

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 ,8 ,9, 10!
All of these weapons can be put in the inventory together, and yet they'll still be used one handed. I'm wondering if there's no such thing as gravity on SK. I mean seriously, You'll be holding millions of materials, Minerals, Crowns, (Does CE have weight?), Unused armor, Unused weapons, Bound items, ETC.!

And even still, You can have MSI armor (Hmm, Wonder why there's no such thing as MSI High yet) which can make you move really friggin fast, despite having heavy weapons. And let's not forget, If the striker booster is involved, it doesn't matter!
And a striker doesn't have to hold items one handed, after all- You could simply glue the booster trigger to where you need to hold your object!
Besides, There'll be a gun meant for two handed wielding after the gun update (That is, if they decide to think about weight and accuracy)
And tell me, Once strikers use that gun, Are you going to care? It's going to be OP as hell!
So yes, I believe a striker WOULD be able to use the weapon.
If gravity IS involved (Hmm, Vials that fly without falling) Then all is required is the carrying of solely the weapon, and armor.

I'm sorry if it seems I'm being a bit rude, But I just needed to get that out of my system.

I CONCLUDE THERE IS NO GRAVITY ON CRADLE!

No, no. THIS IS YELLING! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!
Anyway.
I also forgot to mention, why Can't a striker use two handed weapons? It's built to be a two handed weapon, and even using it two handed, you can move fairly fast with a heavy weapon. Besides, Since the reasoning of a striker is to be fast, It's simple enough to use a Striker Booster, you just push the boost trigger.
Which, Like I said earlier, Can always be made to be a part of Var.

Right. I wasn't asking for a new character, but a character replacement... I can't change things, despite the story not starting yet?
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Rather, Imca doesn't listen to orders, but she still does what she thinks is best for the situation at hand.
If you've ever heard of a "Hotdog" In strategies is, That's what Imca would be, More or less. If the commander can truly get her trust, She'll follow orders... Usually. If a mission is given, it will be taken, and she will be there.

As for Var... If it isn't too much of a hassle, Can the weapon be changable only between battles?
I mean, really- To change a weapon requires screws, bolts, and the parts to change them.
If not, I'll choose a Rifle.
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Edit: Oh, dang. I didn't see the chapter. Sorry.

I've done goofed, and missed a few details. At this point, I feel like I'm pushing the boundaries to staying here. owo;

Notes to keep in mind
- Conversation with Imca is rare, as she will either ignore you, or say something contradictory and continue on.
- I think you slipped up, But I'm just saying. " Var doing the same with her Var. " PLOT TWIST, IMCA IS VAAAAAAAAAAR (Nah...)
- Imca is really unsociable.
- I think that, to really show how our characters act, we aught to make sample chapters so that there are... Less mistakes.
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I'm probably going to do that sometime today. *Yaaaawn*

I put Ebony's character in the story for you to do what you will for him - while I can see why some of the others would want their characters to be represented the way that they envision them, I'd rather not give you guidelines for him. After all, it is your story! Have him fit in whatever way you feel will be best for the story. If you'd rather have a more defined character with dialogue/action/etc examples, I can create that, but I leave his fate in your hands. :)

It's a fanfic. And besides, I find (Throught my time RP'ing anyway) that people use the discussion thread irregurally. . . Despite these types of forums having twice or thrice the amount of comments.

Give it time, Colray.

As others have already stated, there wasn't much to say about this last chapter, at least in my opinion - it did set up quite a few friendship/relationships to be aware of, though, so it's important in that regard.

I was surprised to see us jump to so many years ahead of the very first chapter. I was almost hoping to see how Ruby managed to beat her team into shape and form them into the Iota squad, so I'm only a little disappointed. :-/ Otherwise, it was a fine chapter.