Forums › English Language Forums › General › Treasure Vault

Search

The Darkwalkers (Sequel to Guilds and Gremlins) - Work In Progress - Apps Full!

76 replies [Last post]
Sat, 06/06/2015 - 12:56
#51
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
Woah there!

I've had a lot of end-of-the-year crap to deal with recently, and some thoughts on my story. First of all, I don't think this will be a trilogy that I originally planned it to be. I'd rather have this be a few chapters longer than have the second two parts be short. Once I have finished this, I'm going to start up another fanfic (for which I already have ideas). You haven't seen the last of me! I'll hopefully have some content out soon, so don't worry too much! Also, apology accepted Eliott, just be careful on these foorims. "I don't get why people tell me to keep my head in the game. I'm likely to have it chopped off!" as I say. :P I might use that as a quote for Mono eventually... Or someone, at least. Maybe Pteron, that kinda sounds like him...

Mon, 06/22/2015 - 17:15
#52
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
HOLY CRAP!

(OOC: It's been a long while, I know, but Chapter Nine is out! I hope I can be writing more now. I've had a lot of stuffs going on, and other things have taken preference to writing, and even gaming (WHAT?!). :P You haven't seen the last of me! You will one day when I'm pushing up the daisies, but that's a worry for another time. :P)

Chapter Nine: New Recruits and New Alliances

Mono opened the door of Grub’s house and staggered in before falling to the floor. Alisa and Pop turned and stared at the panting knight. “What’ve you been doing?” Pop asked. “Those new recruits been hassling you?”

“There might only be six of them, but they’ve got some skill,” he replied. “I dueled each of them until I could best them. It ended as a game of endurance. Actua’s Area Protection Shield was too much for me to get through, so I had to stop before I tired myself to death.”

“You said Ryker suggested that she join his squad, as Xervenzør was lost, right?” Alisa asked. “You think she’s good enough to be a veteran?”

“Oh yes,” Mono said. “Where’s Grub at?”

“He said he was heading to the mercenary outpost to speak with Sophia about her draft of the alliance,” Pop explained. “She might return with him, but until then, I guess we can wait here.”

“Hello? Is this Grub’s house?” a person asked from outside the house. He knocked on the door multiple times, until Pop opened it.

Rezule, Z’Raejum’kal, and Old Snag walked in the door, smiling to Mono. “We just came to get familiar with your policies. It’s been a while since we’ve talked, hasn’t it?”
Rezule said.

“I suppose it has,” Mono replied. “I guess you had more luck with the jury than I did. Was the trial done fairly? Did you have a defense?”

“Yeah, I did,” Rezule answered. “Feron helped me pay for the best defense attorney here. The prosecution was lousy, as it normally is with the Spiral Order. I guess you were able to put up a good fight?”

“Well, some of Ozlo’s arguments were valid, but they wouldn’t warrant a death sentence,” Alisa said. “The jury was bribed. Even though we were clearly innocent on the charges of murder, and just as guilty on the charges of disobeying orders and the destruction of property, most juries would have said innocent of all charges, just because we killed Xerxes.”

“How much did Ozlo bribe the jury?” Z’Raejum’kal asked.

“I heard fifty thousand a piece,” Pop told him. “That makes one million for the whole jury bribe, which is absolutely insane for the amount of damage we actually did.”

“That’s pretty bad…” Old Snag commented quietly.

“Indeed it is,” Rezule said. “Anyway, what are the rules of this special forces regiment? Same as the others, or are you going to be a different kind of leader?”

“Well, I have decided that most rules should still apply,” Mono answered. “But there was a problem that I noticed before I was left for dead in the Underworld. Lower level warriors were unable to object to orders. Even sergeants couldn’t object to suicide missions. I know the captains were able to provide constructive criticism to their lieutenants, but even they might not have an understanding of everything, let alone the sacrifices some sergeants and their squads would have to make. Many fell unnecessarily because they were unable to speak out. So in the Warriors of Old, anyone is allowed to speak out against an unfair or stupid order.”

“That is often the case with special forces regiments,” Old Snag said. “Even the lowest soldiers are given a fair hearing, because they had to be respected to get into the regiment in the first place. Is this going to apply to all the regiments, or are you not in charge of the entire military?”

“Feron is the official military leader, but he does not have power over my regiment,” Mono explained. “I suggested this to him, and he said he would use my idea. Vaelyn is in charge of the aerospace field, but she has little power anymore. She does have a regiment of engineers and technicians that can fight well, though. Wegner is still in charge of all geologic operations, and, as the Captain, Feron has all the legal responsibilities.”

“I assume you are not as formal as any other regiments?” Z’Raejum’kal said. “Are you more willing to accept people in than the others, even if they are not properly trained and have to be in a squad of three or five because of that?”

“Oh yes, we accept anyone that has fighting potential,” Pop replied. “Mono isn’t technically a Vanguard and I don’t think Rezule is either, and Lokd, you, and Old Snag haven’t received any training from the Spiral Order, is that right?”

Everyone nodded their head in agreement.

“Wait, Old Snag, what can you do for a squad?” Alisa asked. “Any magicks?”

“I have some training in the dark magic,” Old Snag replied. “I can also act as a necromancer if the need is dire, and I am fluent in the Language of the Scholars, and most Owlite magicks.”

“Are you three a squad already?” Mono asked.

“Yeah, but we have another knight with us,” Z’Raejum’kal said. “Dogref. We like him, but he isn’t the best fighter out there. He’s not a drag, though, no worries.”

Mono was about to say something, but the door of the house opened, revealing Grub and Sophia. “Hello!” he hailed them. “Sophia, I assume you brought the draft of our alliance?”

“I have, and I already made some compromises that I assumed you would demand,” she answered. “To sum it up, we each have a little bit of power over each other’s guilds, but of course, I cannot order your troops to do something that you don’t want them to do, and vice versa.”

“So if, per se, some of my warriors are with you, you would have power over them, but my rules would still apply?” Mono asked. “If you want to have a look at the rules I developed, Alisa wrote them out a few days ago. If you have your own rules, I would like a copy.”

“Yeah, I have some things written down,” Sophia replied, pulling an old piece of paper from her pocket. “I just scratched down a few ideas, but I suppose they’re also on your list of rules.”

The two leaders quickly swapped lists and analyzed them. Mono, Grub, Alisa, and Pop approved of all of Sophia’s proposed rules, but they were not as comprehensive as theirs.

“Mono, what do you mean by ‘Any soldier will be allowed to speak out against unfair or unthoughtful orders’?” Sophia asked suddenly.

“If one of us, or anyone, gives an order that will put lower level soldiers in unnecessary danger, they are allowed to speak out against it,” Mono replied. “This is to stop any suicide missions that could have been avoided with the same end result.”

“I think I can agree on that,” Sophia said. “But don’t you think cowards will use that to get out of doing anything remotely risky?”

“If they were cowards, they wouldn’t be here in the first place,” Mono countered. “By nature, war is risky, and there will be casualties. I trust that my men understand that. When I first began recruiting, I told everyone that the chances of survival were extremely low, but most of us scraped out in the end. I assume you trust your own as such?”

“I believe they would fight until the last ounce of life left their bodies,” Sophia responded with a threatening tone in her voice.

“Good,” Mono said. “If you have confidence in your soldiers, they will have confidence in you. And, if you do not feel as confident in the Warriors of Old as I do, why don’t you come outside and we can spar with a few of them?”

“I see no harm in doing so,” she replied. “Assuming we all set our weapons to stun-mode? I don’t want anyone getting killed.”

“Of course,” Mono agreed. He stood up to address Old Snag, Z’Raejum’kal, and Rezule, who were talking on a couch on the other side of the room. “Do you guys want to come with the rest of us to spar out on the eastern field?”

Old Snag made a noise resembling a chuckle before saying, “We’ll come, but I had better not participate otherwise it would be no fun for anyone.”

!#-^*^-#!

Mono stood beside Actua, Pop, Jacques, and Z’Raejum’kal, staring down their oppents, Alisa, Grub, Sophia, Rezule, and Ven on the other side of the field. Everyone proceeded to set their weapons to stun-mode.

Once everyone was ready, the two teams stared at each other menacingly. Pop was the first to move. He projected himself into the air and fired a hail of bullets onto the enemies. Everyone but Sophia dove to the ground, but she fiercely shot Pop out of the sky.

Mono and Actua threw themselves right into the enemy lines, only to be met by Grub, Rezule, and Ven fiercely defending themselves. Alisa was stunned behind them, while Sophia fired continuously at Jacques, who had managed to flank her and was advancing swiftly.

Actua stunned Rezule, but Ven’s twin silver blades were impossible for her to ward off. She quickly fell, leaving Ven open from behind. Z’Raejum’kal was able to stun him with his blue trident while his back was turned.

Meanwhile, Grub and Mono were fencing with their Barbarous Thorn Blades as they had many years before. Neither could gain the upper hand, until Sophia joined in with Grub. She had just knocked out both Z’Raejum’kal and Jacques.

Mono dodged a volley of bullets from her, while sheathing his own blade, only to draw a Gilded Griffin. One shot to the chest stopped Grub dead in his tracks. He turned to Sophia, who was now twenty yards away, and firing rapidly.

Mono raised his shield in an effort to stop the bullets from hitting him. For one brief second, he lowered the shield to fire back at Sophia. During this time, one of her bullets struck him in the stomach, knocking him out. But he was not without success. The one shot that he managed to fire at Sophia hit her diaphragm less than a centimeter beneath her sternum. They flew backwards simultaneously, and when their limp forms crashed to the ground, a thud could be heard all over the field.

!#-^*^-#!

Mono’s eyes slowly opened to Sophia’s own luminous yellow eyes. “Good… game…” was all he could muster up the energy to say.

Fri, 06/26/2015 - 22:53
#53
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
Homestuck!

Eyyyyyyy a new chapter!

Nothing much to say, but know that your readerbase has not abandoned you.

Tue, 08/04/2015 - 19:57
#54
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
Does this make me a necromancer if this sank to the second page?

Chapter Ten: Official Soldiers

Pteron pointed to a small patrol of Darkwalkers and gremlins camped in a ravine in front of his squad. The squad consisted of Ven Kumonai, Wolfen, and Krenfeld. Krenfeld was the guardian, and the others were strikers, while Pteron lead as a gunner and tactician. “Don’t attack ‘em yet,” he whispered. “We might be able to, er, extract certain information from those furry beasts.”

One of the gremlins took his head up from the campfire before them to speak to the largest gremlin in the group. “Sir, when are we going to go have fun with those Sforzandosi fools?” he asked curiously.

The largest gremlin, who Pteron assumed was the leader, chuckled before saying, “Soon enough. Remember, our orders are not to kill. We merely have to either bribe them or threaten them somehow. I do not expect resistance, but we must be careful.”

He wore a black armored robe with the Crimson Order’s insignia on it. Pteron was automatically worried for the knights of Sforzandosi.

“But didn’t you receive a letter from Clemente about agreeing on terms of something or other? Surrender? Or was it alliance? I forget…” another gremlin inquired.

“You’re not supposed to know that, let alone say anything about it,” the leader warned him. “You never know when those Spiral Order folks could be listening in, be it Warriors of Old or even members of Sforzandosi.”

Pteron smiled to his squadmates at this news and whispered to Ven, “Go back to Mono and warn him of this. He might want to intercept this little group and give ‘em more than they bargained for.”

“Will he believe us?” Krenfeld asked. “I doubt he would acknowledge this sort of question of authority.”

“Remember the rules?” Pteron pointed out. “We can speak up, even though we are Sophia’s lessers. Calling out dangerous leadership is something Mono believes to be every soldier’s right. We are official soldiers of the Spiral Order after all, and Sophia isn’t, so by their rules this is totally fine as well.”

Ven nodded understanding before he turned around and whisked away into the trees toward Haven.

!#-^*^-#!

Mono fired his Gilded Griffin at the holographic targets that appeared before him at the shooting range. He turned around, ready to shoot the next one that appeared, but instead of a practice target, he found his barrel to be pointed right between Ven Kumonai’s eyes. “Woah, sorry there,” he said to Ven went he realized that he had almost pulled the trigger. “Don’t sneak up on me again, okay?”

“Yeah, sorry about that, but I’ve got urgent news,” he panted out, for he had to run part of the way back to Haven, as his ankle boosters had given out on him. “My squad just found out that Sophia… Might not be as trustworthy as you think. She requested to speak with some sort of gremlin diplomat. He was from the Crimson Order, and he looked like more of a brutal killer than a diplomat.”

“The gremlin’s idea of diplomacy typically involves corruption, bribery, and blackmail. Why does that not surprise me?” Mono responded. “Why don’t I send out Vipsania’s squad and another lower squad to help your squad take care of the gremlins, while I can go confront Sophia with a ready fighting force? I’m not expecting a fight, but if that’s what it comes to, I’ll be more than willing to destroy her. For the sake of the Spiral Order, that is.”

!#-^*^-#!

Pteron’s squad were still overlooking the ravine when the reinforcements came. Ven had arrived a few minutes beforehand, and they were not surprised to see Vipsania and Cat emerge from the trees, leading another squad of soldiers. “It’s good to see you guys!” Wolfen exclaimed quietly. “The gremlins are asleep right now, so we can easily storm their camp, especially with these numbers.”

“I honestly thought you guys would never make it!” Pteron said. “It might’ve been dusk when we sent for help, but now you only have moonlight.”

“We’ve got a scanner that gave us your exact location,” Vipsania explained. “That’s one of the perks of being an official soldier of the Spiral Order and not just a Warrior of Old. Anyway, what’s the plan of attack, or is that what I’m here for?”

“I’ve got a plan all thought out,” Pteron replied. “Your first order is to come with me down to the bottom of that ravine. The rest shall become obvious once it is set in motion.”

Lokd looked doubtfully at the ravine and remarked that there was no obvious way down.

Pteron smiled to him and beckoned for everyone to follow him silently down the ravine’s edge. Eventually, they reached a twist in the ravine. It also got wider, although no one but Pteron was willing to look over the edge. “I hope you know how to swim,” was all he said before jumping off the wall. He managed to enter the water gracefully, although his movement in air was anything but that.

The water was slightly warm, due to the volcanic activity present underneath the ravine. The pond was hundreds of feet deep, but not very wide. Pteron assumed that an ancient earthquake had caused this sinkhole within the wide gash in the ground. He quickly swam to solid ground and beckoned for the others to jump. Krenfeld went second, followed by Cat, Vipsania, and the others.

Once everyone was dry enough to fight, Pteron lead them stealthily to the enemy's camp. No one was on guard duty, so Pteron casually strolled into their camp. “Hello, my friends!” he cried out, waking the gremlins and the Darkwalkers. “I have come to turn myself in. I am an officer of the Warriors of Old, and I believe you could extract some valuable information out of me!”

Many of the Darkwalkers aimed their guns on him. “You’ll end up being useful,” one said, “even if you are a yellow-bellied coward.”

“You’re one to be talking,” Pteron remarked calmly. “You happen to be a traitor to your own kind as well, and as for all you gremlins, you only follow your leaders’ orders because they inspire fear into your pathetic hearts!”

“Listen now, I don’t want to have to kill you,” the gremlin’s leader said. “I’d rather you just come quietly and give us some information, or we might just kill you here.”

“Quietly, eh?” Pteron chuckled, shrugging his right shoulder. “Well, I’ve already given you information, but I suppose you already knew how wretched the lot of you are.”

“Just come quietly, and we might spare your life,” a Darkwalker in a Skolver coat threatened him.

“Listen, my friends, I come loudly,” Pteron corrected him. “My friends came quietly, but I guess from now on there is no more coming quietly...”

At this, Vipsania stormed into the camp, followed by the other ten knights. Pteron drew his pistols and shot the gremlin’s leader and the Darkwalker in the Skolver coat. Before either the gremlins or the Darkwalkers could draw their weapons if they hadn’t already, everyone in the camp had fallen except the Warriors of Old and one Darkwalker.

Wolfen had the poor knight pinned down beneath his Flamberge, and asked him, “What were you sent to do?”

“We-we-we were… p-p-planning an alli-li-liance…” the Darkwalker stuttered, “With… S-s-sforzandosi.”

“Were you the only group sent?” Ven questioned him menacingly.

“No… Another group was ahead of us,” the frightened knight replied, a little calmer now. “They were larger. Mainly to intimidate Clemente. We were the ones that were actually going to do the, er, negotiating.”

“That’s all we need to hear,” Pteron said. He pointed to the leader of the other squad, Fjorent, “Could your squad escort this knight back to Haven and tell Feron what happened? Also, make sure it is clear that I don’t want this young wretch killed. He was compliant, so that ought to lower his sentence.”

“Yes, sir, I shall do that,” Fjorent said, and instructed his squad to bind him.

“So, Pteron, are we going to intercept the other group?” Jacques asked.

“I don’t know,” Pteron replied. “What do you think, Vip? Mono might already be over there.”

“Yes,” Cat spoked for her friend. “I just contacted Mono. They’re bunkered down behind a rock, preparing to strike. He said that two squads of reinforcement would be very useful, even though, by the sound of it, he has the rest of our guild over there.”

“Oh, Pteron, that was a rather audacious stunt,” Vipsania commented. “The Spiral Order might not approve of such nerve. We’re official soldiers. You would do well to remember that around Feron.”

Sat, 07/11/2015 - 19:22
#55
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
Homestuck!

“Just come quietly, and we might spare your life.”

“Listen, my friends, I come loudly. My friends came quietly, but I guess from now on there is no more coming quietly. .”

I have a strange love for this quote. I may have to incorporate something similar into my own writing someday :3

Tue, 08/04/2015 - 20:02
#56
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
HALLO!

Welp guys, I am back from vacation. I write this at 8:00p.m., and I got home from a two week vacation at 1:30 this morning. I was at a fiddle camp for a week, a bluegrass festival for a couple of days, I got to tour the Colorado School of Mines (interested in going there in a few years time), I tried out a bunch of violins (getting a new one), and I spent some time in and around Oklahoma City. And I had band camp at 9:00 this morning. Dang. Excuses, excuses! I'll have a chapter out either tonight or tomorrow, and then I can see if I can't get an actual SCHEDULE going for when I write. Maybe every Tuesday, Saturday, and Sunday? We'll see...

Sat, 08/08/2015 - 16:09
#57
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
SORRY

(OOC: Sorry it's late! I had other commitments and an update to Windows 10 messing with me. I wrote it on Wednesday, but was unable to get it edited due to band camp, and I was out hunting this morning (at four in the morning) so... That's my excuse.)

Chapter Eleven: Interception

“Mono, you requested my squad?” Mar asked, approaching his leader.

“Yes, I did. I also requested everyone else, but it seems that you are the first to arrive.”

“Why? What’s going on?” Stalig asked.

“Pteron’s squad was out patrolling and found some very valuable information,” Mono answered. “I sent Vipsania’s squad and another out to provide reinforcement, but we have a job of our own.”

“Who’s ‘we’?” Ryker asked, entering the room. His face was covered by a rebreather, a targeting module, and a helm-mounted display, but Mono recognized his voice and armor.

“Ryker, I see you upgraded your gear,” Mono observed. “Is that some sort of battle-mask or something?”

“I guess you can call it that,” Ryker replied. He pressed a button on his helmet, which caused his rebreather to lower, his helm-mounted display to fold to the side, and his targeting module to swing down. “Now, let’s get to business. What is this place, first of all?”

“It’s our guild hall,” Pop explained, coming down the stairs from the second story. “Feron gave it to us, but we don’t really have time to be dallying in here right now.”

“Yeah, Pop is right,” Actua said. “We need to get moving. Where is everyone else?”

“They should be coming now,” Mono answered.

The Warriors of Old began to enter the main hall, and five minutes later everyone was present, except those that were with Pteron. Many of them were demanding explanation, as it was late evening and they wanted to be home.

“There is no time to explain!” Mono yelled at them. “We have to get going now if we don’t want to have to annihilate Sforzandosi. Follow me!”

!#-^*^-#!

By the time Mono reached the Mercenary Outpost, the Darkwalkers and gremlins were already too close for them to enter. The guild was bunkered down behind a pile of rocks. Mono’s earpiece rang, and he quickly responded. “What is it?” he whispered.

“It’s Cat,” the person on the other end of the line responded. “We just took down the Darkwalkers and gremlins that were camped out back here. Where are you?”

“We’re hiding behind a rock up by the Mercenary Outpost,” Mono replied quietly. “We could really use some support if we’re going to attack these servants of Tinkinzar, for that is what I believe they are, effectively. I’d rather have a force of a hundred than ninety-two, as I believe that is what we’re at. Twenty-three squads, if I counted right.”

“Can you wait for us to get there?”

“No. We have to attack them within the next few minutes,” Mono said. “Get here as soon as possible.”

“Will do, sir.”

“Mono!” Grub whispered to him from behind. “I’ve been told that our enemies are planning on breaking in within five minutes.”

“That’s a bad sign. They must know that their friends were taken care of.”

“How would they know though?” Grub asked, worriedly.

“I don’t know,” Mono replied. “I’ll contact Pteron and see what he thinks.

“Pteron? You there?” Mono said when Pteron was on the line. “Did you take any prisoners or did anyone escape?”

“Yeah, we took a prisoner. He was a coward, but a useful one.”

“Could he have escaped?”

“He would have to get through Fjorent’s squad in order to do so… I’ll have someone else contact him.”

A few few seconds later, Pteron gravely said, “Fjorent did not reply to our call. In fact, he doesn’t even show up on our scanners.”

“Did you hear some sort of explosion earlier?”

“Yeah. Well, it sounded more like a gunshot than anything else, but I suppose that counts.”

“Then Fjorent and his squad have been killed. Get over here soon. As soon as I end this call, I’m going to break cover and attack.”

“Yes, sir,” Pteron replied, ending the call.

Mono motioned for the squads to split up into teams. Ryker’s and Mar’s went with his to flank their enemies, while the other teams stayed behind the bank.

Mono crept behind the bushes with his team until they were out of their enemies’ field of view. They snuck right up to the enemy's’ flank, when Vül, the bomber from Ryker’s squad, and Mar tossed grenades into the Darkwalkers’ ranks. Three grenades exploded on impact, whilst the fourth rolled farther in before detonating.

The other Warriors of Old took this as a cue and broke cover. Many other grenades were thrown into the ranks of the Darkwalkers, causing even more disruption. Although the Warriors of Old were outnumbered almost three to one, these grenades had given them a large advantage over the Darkwalkers.

Mono emptied his Gilded Griffin of ammunition, almost as soon as the first grenades detonated, but waited before storming into the crowd for fear of being blown to pieces from collateral damage. When the majority of the Warriors of Old stormed into battle, Mono entered the fray and almost instantly stabbed a gremlin in the neck.

Mono ducked down to stab another gremlin, and while he arose, three bullets flew through his chapeau from behind. He spun around instantly to see Actua. She was standing there with her Grim Repeater in hand looking very sorry. Mono smiled to her in forgiveness, and turned around as fast as possible, swinging his shield in front of his body.

The shield made contact with a Darkwalker, and knocked him to the ground. Alisa was fighting another Darkwalker only one foot away from the grounded one. She was pushed back, and tripped over the unfortunate Darkwalker. Alisa’s boot crushed her enemy’s windpipe, but she still managed to fall backwards onto Mono. Both knights fell to the ground, but Actua stormed forward with her Area Protection Shield, pushing all enemies out of the way, giving nearby Warriors of Old a couple of seconds to recover, before the shield expired.

Grub stormed through the shield seconds before it disappeared, eager to finish off any stunned gremlins. Mono saw him running, and stood up, trying to kill the gremlin he was after before his friend could get to it. Unfortunately, the one they were after was given a swift death from above by Pop, who smiled at his silly friends and continued fighting.

Grub and Mono’s lightheartedness ended when they saw Alisa get pierced with a bullet in her side. Blood oozed from the wound, but both friends were soon preoccupied fighting a gremlin and a Darkwalker each and they were unable to get her away from the battle. Mono thought he saw Ava der Ärztin take Alisa away out of the corner of his eye, but was uncertain. Once he killed his assailants, he turned around, but did not see Alisa.

Before long, the last of the Darkwalkers and gremlins retreated. Their force of three hundred had been reduced to about seventy-five, but, at the time, no one was counting.

Beneath a tree just feet from the battlefield, Alisa was lying beside three vials. She was unconscious, but Mono could see her breathing, and knew that she would be okay. He walked over to her, and she awoke, mumbling, “Mono… My side hurts… Am I okay?”

“You were shot, I think, and Ava der Ärztin brought you over and healed you as much as possible, given the short amount of time since the battle. I hope you are okay, because we need to go confront Sophia about this deal of hers with the Darkwalkers,” Mono explained.

“Just drug me enough to make me at least look intimidating,” Alisa replied. “I don’t care if you have to use splints to hold my arms in place with my gun in them, or if I won’t be able to actually walk for a few days, I will be there to work out a deal.”

“It’s all right, we are going in as soon as we have assessed our losses and such,” Mono replied. “Just… Don’t get shot again, okay?”

“Alright,” Alisa tried to smile, but it ended up as more of a painful grimace than anything else.

Fri, 08/21/2015 - 00:56
#58
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
Hey, I'm back again.

(OOC: Here's another chapter. I made this one long to account for the fact that I can't write as much, and I will most likely be throwing out one or two long-ish chapters a week. I started high school on Monday (first year. Yeah, I'm probably on the young end of fanfiction writers on these forums), so that is likely to eat my life. All my other activities continue as usual, but with the edition of more homework, so I will be spending more time writing, as it is something productive, as opposed to playing Skyrim or Minecraft. :P I hope you guys enjoy the chapter, and I am rather "meh" on the fact that no one has posted since the 8th, which was my last chapter. Comment! Or else! I have nothing to threaten you with because I'll hate myself for stopping!)

Chapter Twelve: Losses and Fresh Blood

Mono looked up onto the battlements on the Mercenary Outpost. Those reinforced sandstone walls will be impossible to take down, he thought to himself. The gate isn’t going to open, and we can’t climb over without getting shredded by those machine guns. They haven’t fired at us yet. Maybe they are waiting for us to strike the first blow.

The Warriors of Old were scattered throughout the field where they had done battle. Two hundred thirty-one gremlins and Darkwalkers had been confirmed as dead, and twenty Warriors of Old had been slain. At least another twenty were wounded.

Mono searched the field for Grub, and found him talking to Ven, whose side was heavily bandaged and bloody. “Grub, what do you make of this? How are we going to get in there?” he asked.

“There isn’t much we can do,” he replied. “There are at least four of them for every one of us. We can’t trap them in there either. They have machine guns, and enough supplies for a month, no doubt.”

“We could always try to talk with them,” Ven suggested painfully. “They might be willing to negotiate if they don’t feel threatened.”

“Well, yeah, but…” Mono said. “Well…

“Pop, Ryker, Pteron, and Vip, come with Grub and I!” he yelled over the ruckus. “Mar, I’m leaving you in charge of the camp! If anything happens, defend this camp with your life and go down fighting like true Warriors!”

Mar ran over to talk to him quickly. “What happens if you don’t return?”

“Alisa is in charge, and if her wound causes any trouble, I think you will be the new leader,” Mono told him solemnly. “If it comes to that, this guild will not be disbanded. I hope you shall continue our legacy honorably and forever serve the Spiral Order. If the worst comes to pass, go down fighting.”

Mar looked at him disbelievingly. He could not imagine the Warriors of Old under his rule. “It has been an honor,” he said, but even though great power awaited him if Mono were to fail, not one part of him wished that to happen.

Mono turned back to the fortress, and, with his friends in tow, he marched slowly toward the fortress, with the hot summer sun illuminating his left side, and the darkness of fate shadowing his right side. He knew that this was not to be his doom, but his bones chilled with worry.

Pteron, who was to his right, saw that something was troubling him, and smiled. “We are going to be fine, I smell it in my bones,” he told his leader, not acknowledging the ridiculousness of his words in the present situation.

Mono said nothing, but turned to see what his other friends were doing. Pop looked as if to confirm that no one would jump out of the brush. Grub and Vip kept their eyes on the fortress, making sure no one was going to gun them down from the battlements. Ryker scowled at the ground ahead of him, and spit onto a gremlin’s corpse that had not yet been buried. Pteron was the only member of the party who was smiling. He smiled at Mono, the fortress, and Ryker.

“What are you grinning about?” Ryker asked him. “Do you want to die or something?”

“Life is good, my friend, life is good,” he replied. “I’ve got a feeling that Sophia will not want to kill us here and now. I’m sure even a gremlin could figure that one out.”

When they reached the summit of the hill, twenty feet before the door, Mono stopped suddenly. “Something isn’t right…” he whispered.

“You are correct there, my friend,” a Ghostmane Stalker said, appearing by the gate. She had lines of orange and green on her, and Mono was worried that she was a minion of Herex’s that had already worked out an alliance with Sophia. “My name is Leona. Do not fear me, for I am not wearing my normal armor. If that was the case, you’d all be dead.”

“We wish to enter this old shack,” Pteron spoke for Mono. “We’ve got dealings with some guild master in there. What was her name? Clementine? Serena? I forget…”

Leona growled under her mask at his joke. “You’d like Aelston, young gunner. He’s in there somewhere. Tinkinzar got sick of him and exiled him. Same reason I’ve got half a
mind to kill you right now. And him, for that matter. Also, your lack of respect for your leader is dangerous, Pteron. You want your head in there and you’ll watch your tongue.”

The door opened after she entered a code into the lock, revealing at least fifty knights, armed to the teeth and ready to slaughter Mono’s small gang of negotiators. Aelston was trying to get through the solid wall of knights but was having trouble and causing quite the fuss. Mono signaled for him to go outside and wait, as if he wanted a word with him later.

He walked down the hall of potential enemies with confidence and when he reached Sophia’s door, he rapped on it politely. It opened, and six seats were already laid out in front of Sophia for the knights to sit on. Everyone took a seat and the doors closed.

“So…” Pop said, “We are here to discuss your proposed allegiance with gremlins and Darkwalkers. What have you to say for yourself?”

“I cannot stop them from asking,” Sophia replied. “Well, I could slaughter them all, but that would take too long and be too risky.”

“So that was it?” Mono demanded. “You were not going to do anything but turn down their offers? You didn’t speak with them beforehand?!”

“They thought it was a meeting about alliances,” she replied coolly. “I was going to deceive them into surrendering accidentally.”

“So this whole fight was in vain?” Ryker asked angrily.

“No, Ryker, it was not,” Grub said. “They could have killed Sophia and almost destroyed Sforzandosi. But we got to them first. Twenty knights lost, yes, but we can always recruit more.”

“Twenty-four,” Pteron corrected him. “Fjorent’s squad was killed as well.”

“Then we shall be departing,” Mono said. “And Sophia? Please inform me if you ever have to negotiate with the gremlins. I will not be as forgiving next time.”

Her yellow eyes burned into his soul as he left the room after Pteron. “I hope we will not have this problem again.”

A young gremlin, who couldn’t have been older than twelve, stopped Pteron in the hallway of knights with his fists up. “You are the leader, yes? Fight me. I must show my strength. I’m the strongest of my age, so I must also be the strongest of all.”

“Pteron looked at the stupid gremlin, who thought he was so powerful, incredulously. “I’m not fighting a whelp like you.”

“Then you’ll defend yourself.”

Everyone moved aside in the bar and someone cleared room for Pteron and the gremlin in the center. The whelp charged Pteron, who simply spun him around back to where he came.

“Your fancy tricks won’t beat me!”

He charged the tall knight again, who hooked his boot around his opponent’s leg and shoved his chest. The unfortunate gremlin hit the concrete floor with his spine, and screamed in pain, but stood up again to continue fighting. This time he punched Pteron’s stomach, who contorted his face but otherwise didn’t move.

Pteron returned the blow with a blow of his own to the gremlin’s face. The kid flew to the ground, and lay still. When Pteron turned him over to check him, he saw that the kid’s nose was terribly bloody, and his heart had stopped breathing.

A female gremlin charged from the crowd, weeping and screaming. “My poor boy! My poor boy! He’s dead! He’s dead!”

Pteron felt terrible inside, but didn’t wish to show it. His face… His mangled face! he thought. I didn’t want that to happen!

“You killed him! My only son!” the boy’s mother screamed at him.

Mono beckoned to Pteron to leave the mother to her sorrows, so as to not cause more damage.

When he got outside, Mono saw Aelston and asked him, “Would you be willing to join the Warriors of Old? I heard you were exiled by Tinkinzar himself.”

“‘Too stupid,’ he said, ‘Too silly,’ Aelston told him. “Yeah, I was exiled. But I don’t know if I want to join your guild. I’ll think about it.”

“Alrighty. You are welcome any time. I owe my life, so it would be an honor to have you in my ranks, even if you do not work in the main squads.”

“I may take you up on that offer soon enough.”

!#-^*^-#!

When Mono and the Warriors of Old returned to Haven, the news of their losses spread like wildfire. Knights and gremlins young and old came flocking to the Military District of Haven to go through a series of rigorous tests, conducted by the officers and guild masters.

Each guild master had paired up with an officer so as to test four knights at a time. Mono and Pteron were good friends at this point, so Pteron was perfectly happy being with Mono, but his leader had his own agenda.

Mono knew that killing the young gremlin two nights ago had scarred Pteron terribly. He wanted to keep an eye on his officer’s mental stability. Pteron had always been a little crazy and daring, and Mono feared that he would not be so while depressed. He feared that his officer’s spirit would be crushed and Pteron would never be as good of a warrior and commander as he was before.

“Accepted, report to me after we are done,” Mono said to a promising and enthusiastic young knight. “Next!”

Another knight, who appeared to be a fresh Vanguard, stepped up. He was armed to the teeth (literally) with , a Barbarous Thorn Blade and Shield, and modified Snarbolax armor. “Kaqueth. My name is Kaqueth.”

“Well, Kaqueth, your test begins now,” Pteron told him. “You are to be judged on your overall skills and knowledge of battle.

“First of all, the oral portion of the examination. What is the guild you wish to join?”

“I wish to join the Warriors of Old, a specials forces regiment of the Spiral Order, led by Lieutenant Mono. You are in an alliance with Sforzandosi, led by Sophia Clemente. The other three guild masters are Lieutenant Pop, Lieutenant Alisa, and Lieutenant Grub, and the officers are Commander Pteron, Commander Mar, Commander Ryker, and Commander Vip.”

“Good…” Mono commented. “You don’t have to name our ranks. Because this is a special forces regiment, we are more casual than normal regiments, but we do expect more from you in combat. Pteron is unable to test you, as you seem to be a swordsman, so that shall be my job. Your job is simple: force me to yield. You may begin.”

Kaqueth pounced onto Mono as a cat pounces on a mouse, but Mono made him slide right off his shield. The new Vanguard drew his sword now, and his examiner did the same. Kaqueth sprung forward with a stab, but Mono tapped it aside with his own blade.

The attacker realized that his Mono’s shield was down and charged forward with a bash, which caused Mono to fall on his back. Kaqueth jumped onto Mono and commanded him to yield, even though neither of them had a sword or shield.

“I’m willing to take the bet that I’m a better wrestler than you,” Mono said.

Kaqueth opened his mouth, revealing that his armor had a large mouthpiece complete with teeth. “Yield!”

“Alright, you win,” Mono told him reluctantly, rising from the ground. “You are now an official member of the Warriors of Old. Report to me when the rest of the knights have been tested.”

“Thank you, sir,” Kaqueth said, and turned around to find some of his friends.

By the end of the day, fifteen new squads had been formed, numbering the Warriors of Old at thirty-four squads and one hundred thirty-six members, as opposed to the twenty-five squads and one hundred members they has only a few days ago.

Fri, 08/21/2015 - 18:01
#59
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
In between breaths we are all dead

ಠ_ಠ how did I miss the previous chapter? Blaaaarrrr

Entering highschool hmmmmmm? Ye may be young, but still older than I was when I started my first SK fanfic.

Those were dark times...

Anyway both Leona and Aelston in this newest chapter <333

Wed, 08/26/2015 - 22:48
#60
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
Another chapter?! Only FIVE days later? What lunacy is this?!

(OOC: Sorry if this chapter is a bit dark. Okay, it's very dark. But that's 'cause it's Chapter Thirteen, so that's my excuse. My other excuse is that I started reading Lord of the Flies for Honors English the other night, so all that darkness is going to be crammed in my brain for the next couple of weeks. :P Also, if you don't remember who Tsímímí is, he was mentioned in Chapter... Eight? Well, whichever chapter introduced Leona. Also, @LoN: Aelston has quite the part ahead of him, so if him and Leona being there was interesting in Chapter Twelve, you'll love this. Also, if anyone was wondering about Mark-LS5, he is still with Tinkinzar, but that'll be explained later, no worries. I don't want you peeps freakin' out like a bunch of mad billygoats.)

Chapter Thirteen: Tsímímí’s Demise

“Move me quicker, you fools!” Tsímímí shouted at his slaves, who were pushing him along on a hovering building. Tsímímí stood on top, with a machine gun mounted in front of him. The entire structure was armored, but was made cheaply so as to not use real engines to power it.

Tsímímí’s purple and red cape flowed behind him in a way both dark and majestic. He had assigned twenty of the best trained Darkwalkers as his personal guards since the incident at the Mercenary Outpost. Everyone, including himself, knew that Tsímímí valued his life more than any other. He would kill anyone if it meant saving himself, even his own son.

“Sir, we need a break!” one of the slaves complained. “Why don’t you let the guards push you for a while? They’re strong warriors, we’re just merchants!”

“Shut your mouth unless you want it open for eternity!” Tsímímí replied, pointing a dagger at him.

“But--” the servant cried out, but was stopped short by a dagger through his heart. The other slaves and guards moved out of the way, so as to not trip on the corpse. The slave was left on the road in a puddle of crimson blood, with his mouth wide open in the stillness of death.

Three travelers approached Tsímímí’s party on the road before them. They saw a warrior dressed in sparkling steel with violet and crimson fabric adorning it. They saw a figure of power, but also one of cruelty. But in his men, they did not see thoughtless minions. They saw ruthless murderers.

Tsímímí knew what they saw, and immediately gunned them down with his machine gun. The blue lasers cut through them, leaving three charred and bloody bodies on the road.

Any Darkwalker “lucky” enough to be chosen as a guard had been given orders to never question any of Tsímímí’s actions, even if they involved brutally murdering innocent people. On this journey of his, which eventually lasted fifty miles, and took four days, three slaves and forty-one travelers fell to his hand. Although his guards were not willing to stand up to their brutish leader, someone slightly smarter saw this madman’s atrocities. And this good soul was willing to take a stand.

!#-^*^-#!

Aelston saw the three travelers in front of him be ripped to pieces. They were wealthy retired Vanguards, who had owned shops in Haven for armor customization. He had just spoken with them, but he had fallen behind them to eat a small lunch. Aelston might have been half a mile away, but he knew what had transpired, and who did it.

He immediately cloaked, and began to lay down anti-personnel mines on the road, where he knew Tsímímí would go. Tsímímí was bound to recognize him and shoot him for fun if he was not careful and deadly.

Once the mines were hidden, he quietly jogged over to Tsímímí’s party to have fun, as his present life had been getting rather boring. A few of the guards were surprised by the cloud of dust that Aelston generated, but Tsímímí himself didn’t appear worried.

Aelston quickly fell in line with the slaves and hopped onto the ladder that lead up to Tsímímí’s seat. He climbed up it and stood next to Tsímímí, who was staring off to the right. Aelston took this opportunity to aim the machine gun at one of the guards below and fired.

The soldier fell dead, and Tsímímí spun around, trying to punch Aelston. As any master recon would do, Aelston jumped off the structure before his prey even got the chance to turn around. To his surprise, he failed to land on the ground. Instead, he crashed onto another gremlin recon, who stood dead still until Tsímímí had passed.

She whispered to Aelston, “Who are you? What was that all about?”

“I can’t see you at all, where are you?” Aelston asked.

“Right in front of you.”

He crawled forward, trying to see if he could find her. Unfortunately, she had twisted around, and he accidentally swung his arm into her leg, causing her to fall onto him. To any onlookers, this would have been quite amusing, but, as no one was able to see either of them, the hilarity of this went unnoticed.

“Okay, I’m just going to hide behind some bushes and uncloak, so maybe you can find me without tripping me up,” she whispered hostilely.

When the other gremlin uncloaked behind a bush, Aelston saw for the first time who it was: Ava der Ärztin. He also uncloaked, and she knew at once who he was. “What are you doing attacking Tsímímí’s men?”

“Having fun,” he replied. “But I need to go over there. I set some mines, so I might as well watch them go off.”

The two gremlins quickly linked their cloaks, so they would not crash into each other, and ran up to the minefield to wait.

Tsímímí’s first rank of guards activated all of the mines. They flew into the air, one even landing on Tsímímí. Aelston uncloaked himself and began throwing chakrams into the remaining soldiers’ ranks. Once seven of the eight surviving guards had fallen, Aelston recloaked and climbed up the building to stand beside Tsímímí.

“It is a shame, isn’t it?” Aelston asked Tsímímí. “If you had seen me first, I’d be dead. In fact, if Tinkinzar hadn’t exiled me, I’d probably be patrolling these hills to make sure you didn’t come into any trouble. But I wasn’t. In fact, I was the trouble.”

“Aelston! How dare you betray me!” Tsímímí accused him, but was directed an entire one hundred twenty degrees away from Aelston’s actual location. “Just because Tinkinzar exiled you doesn’t mean I’d kill you!”

“It’s okay Tsímímí, I’ll make your death quick,” Aelston said. “You shouldn’t be afraid at all. Besides, you would have killed me for the sake of killing me. Like you killed those innocent merchants.”

Tsímímí began to look around frantically. “You wouldn’t disgrace Tinkinzar and the Crimson Order by killing me!”

“The whole Darkwalker operation was destructive to the Great Colony from Day One,” Aelston spat. “If I really wanted to disgrace the Crimson Order, I would let you live. You Isorans have always been a disgusting and dumb race. But I digress…”

“You are a Warrior of Old, aren’t you?!” Tsímímí demanded. “How can you say you are loyal?!”

“I’m thinking about it,” Aelston corrected him. “I’ve been doing a lot of thinking… I even thought it out pretty thoroughly that Tinkinzar might not be the best leader for the Great Colony after all. Through all I have ever done, I have only wanted what was best for my race. My time around the Warriors of Old has showed me many thriving and prosperous gremlins who are not under Tinkinzar’s iron fist. Compared to them, the gremlins of the Great Colony are underfed livestock.”

“How dare you speak like that about our leader!” Tsímímí shouted at him. “I hope you boil in your own blood after you’re done with me!”

“Quite the angry one…” were the last words Tsímímí ever heard as Aelston threw a chakram at his throat from five feet away. The circular blade got lodged in his neck, and he fell off the platform with a thud as he landed on the ground.

Aelston uncloaked once more and climbed down to free the slaves, who were most grateful. When the last one was untied from the accursed platform, Aelston heard a gunshot from nearby. It was only one, and was not followed up by any more, so he assumed it was a signal, as a single gunshot to the sky on Cradle meant that someone was approaching.

Pteron, Ven Kumonai, Wolfen, Krenfeld, and a bound captive came over the hill to Aelston’s right. “Hello, Aelston!” Pteron greeted him. “We found this Darkwalker running away. I assume you spared him?”

“I think my chakram must have bounced off his armor,” Aelston replied. “And before you ask, I am going to join the Warriors of Old in your war against Tinkinzar, under one condition.”

“What would that be?”

“Once he has been defeated, we must help rebuild the Great Colony from what it was,” Aelston explained. “I have realized that Tinkinzar’s rule has only weakened the Colony as a whole, although their military is currently strong.”

“You’ll have to talk to Mono about that one, but I was not going to mention that,” Pteron told him. “I was going to tell you about this little wretch. He can give us certain information about how to break into Tinkinzar’s own citadel, so I decided to spare him.”

“I can give you even better information than he,” Aelston reminded him. “Is there something you aren’t telling me?”

“Well… Yes,” Pteron admitted. “I… I couldn’t muster up the will to kill him after… After what I did to that poor young gremlin. I didn’t want to force anyone else to do the deed.”

“I’d be glad to dispose of him,” Wolfen stepped forward. “Have you forgotten that Xerxes’ minions killed my best friend? I don’t mean any hate for you, Aelston.”

“Of course,” Aelston and Pteron replied in unison, albeit for different reasons.

Without even waiting for any more of a response, Wolfen plunged his Barbarous Thorn Blade into the Darkwalker’s heart. Pteron cringed at his ruthlessness, but said nothing, so as to not appear weak before a possible recruit.

Sat, 08/29/2015 - 02:26
#61
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
Gremliiiiiiiiiiinnnnsss

!!! A wild New Chapter appears !!!

Mark! Yeah, I was wondering what's up on his end. Partnership with Aelston is broken up due to aforementioned Gremlin's exile, but Mark is still working with Tinkinzar? Hmmmmm well I suppose robots and AIs always did screw around less than us organic flesh vehicles. It shall be interesting to see how the two interact in the future given their now opposing alignments.

Ava and Aelston! <33333 Gremliiins. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I do believe that this is the first time any of the Ghostmanes have met in person on screen. All that's left is for Leona to join up and then the ungodly Ghostmane Trifecta will be complete.

And lo, the Prophecy shall be fulfilled, and this unholy trinity shall stalk the face of Cradle till the end times, wreaking stuff and being totally badass. With holy blade and blessed pyrokinetics shall they cleanse this world of the Darkness that walks amongst us, these monsters of men and Gremlins. And thus their foes shall ever cower in the shadows, waiting for their twilight shades to pass, for their fleeting footsteps to cease with running around murdering everyone.

For the great Carbon in writing out a masterpiece for the ages did say, let there be a righteously OP group of Gremlins; and it was so. And it was good. As cloaks glimmer and flames plume, as steel flashes and blood spills, as things explode in scorching eruptions of shrapnel and rubble and stuff and basically cause a massive mess, this trio shall endure, and continue their god-given work.

These three, in their unbreakable union, shall stare into the deep face of the Void, in which screams across distant skies fly and blood red stars overhead whirl, and the Void shall stare back.

And the Void shall blink first.

Sun, 09/06/2015 - 21:31
#62
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
New chapter coming soon!

There'll be another chapter in the next couple of days! I'm a little deaf in my leaf ear (dove hunting without earplugs for part of the time. Even with earplugs it was bad), and I've had a lotta stuff happening. And a lotta stuff not happening. But I finally broke Skyrim (saves glitched out), so I guess I just have to write. Aw, what the heck, why am I typing this? Just a little warning. And yeah, this is a little late. :P

Sat, 09/26/2015 - 19:49
#63
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
SORRY (AGAIN)

(OOC: Damnit, this is late! I had it written on Saturday, but was unable to edit it until today (Tuesday). I've had some hamwhack (homework) and procrastination problems (I had less than four hours of sleep last night), so I'm thoroughly dead. Anyway, just as a little hint, the main battle in which one of the sides is defeated is not going to be the end! There is not enough stuff that happens after the battle to make a third book, so it's going to be tagged onto the second. And as for the Tusked Deer, imagine it to be like one of those Asian hog deer thingies. The sort of thing I would expect on Cradle. Only one more thing, I promise! Yes, there is now a Compound 37 Herex. In fact, he has forty-four (I had trouble spelling that D:) compounds, but the most famous of which is Compound 42 Herex due to the fact that is is sentient, although game lore about the Jigsaw Valley says that thoughtless things like constructs and slimes inhabit it, but my thought on the matter is that slimes can think. About as much as ants. Or me as a write this. Am I blabbering? Yes. I'm tired. Also, thanks Ranny-Sackers (Ryker-dude, Ran-Sack, Ransack, Sackran, Runsuck, Sack-O'-Potatoes, the list goes on) for a dialogue suggestion!)

Chapter Fourteen: The Knowledge of a Rat

The small buck sniffed the air suspiciously, checking for any signs of life. He was fully-grown for his species, but only stood thirty inches tall. His golden antlers gleamed in the sunlight that shone into the clearing.

Mono had found his prey, and was determined not to let this one get away. The last Tusked Deer he had seen was scared off by a pack of wolvers. Mono crept up to the clearing, trying his best not to alert the animal of his presence, lest the beast spill his guts with its tusks. These tusks appeared to be fangs that came from its mouth, much like those of a wild boar.

The Tusked Deer bowed its head to the ground and continued grazing, completely oblivious to Mono. The tall warrior cocked his Gilded Griffin and aimed it in one motion. He pulled the trigger, sending the bullet straight through the deer’s heart.

Mono took out his knife to gut and skin the beast, but before the knife could touch the fur, a scout, bearing the crest of the Warriors of Old, charged into the clearing. “Sir, you are needed back in Haven at once.”

“What’s going on this time?” Mono demanded. “Who sent you?”

“I heard a few scraps about Aelston and some other Ghostmanes, but other than that, all I know is that Pop wanted you back immediately. Grub and Alisa, too.”

“If it is so urgent, do you want to field dress this deer and bring the carcass back to Haven?”

“If that is needed, I shall do it. Do you want to keep the heart?”

“Of course. Every hunter knows that the heart must be eaten first. Come knock on my door later, or stop by the office. Either way, I want that deer. And don’t mess up the hide. Especially not the head. I want him mounted.”

“Yes sir,” the young knight replied before Mono left.

!#-^*^-#!

When Mono finally arrived at the new Spiral Order Headquarters, he was greeted by Ryker. “Hey, Ryker! What’s going on?”

“That swine Aelston and a few others have assembled inside,” he replied. “I’ll be coming in with you. There’s a big meeting.”

Alisa, Grub, Pop, Mar, Vip, Pteron, Aelston, Leona, Pythonne Selensky, Ava, and Sophia had assembled in the second story meeting room. A map lay on the table in front of them. It was marked with red lines and blue lines, and appeared to be of a city.

“Mono, I suppose it is good to see you!” Aelston greeted him. “Do you have a squad all lined out for me, or do I have to have my own?”

“Well…” Mono began, “Leona, are you planning on becoming an official member?”

“No, of course not,” Leona replied. “I’m just here to help you guys take the city.”

“Pythonne?”

“Nope.”

“Then I suppose we’ll have to find a squad for Aelston,” Mono decided. “Ryker, didn’t you lose someone during the fight by the Mercenary Outpost?”

"Mono, you had better not be thinking what I think you're thinking," Ryker responded. "And if you are, stop thinking it. Yes, we lost Orolg, but putting this... sniper under the command of someone whom he tried to kill doesn't strike me as a good idea."

“It’s a great idea!” Mono argued. “Just deal with it. Hate causes disunity. It might end up working out. Plus, you have a team built for it. A technician, a bomber, a guardian, and whatever Aelston classifies as.”

“That’s settled then. I suppose we work on a plan of attack now? We can’t just let everyone in the Great Colony die of old age, can we?” Aelston said, glad to change the subject.

“Well, we could starve them out…” Pteron began.

“They’d just tunnel out!” Vip interrupted him. “We need an actual strategy.”

“If you want to think of a strategy, you first have to analyze what you want to capture,” Grub said wisely. “The Colony is on a plateau, so there is only one way up.”

“No, there are sewers that empty out into the forest on the east side,” Leona corrected him. “I could bring a special squad through those. I know a way into the main citadel, but it would be risky.”

“I could bring a few squads over to the left side and create a distraction,” Pythonne suggested. “A distraction in the form of a cliff or two falling down.”

“That could work,” Grub said. “Leona, if you could lead a few into the citadel to power down the main defenses and gates while Pythonne leads the distraction, Mono and the rest of us could storm the main gate and make our way to the citadel.”

“What about my fighters?” Sophia asked. “Surely we will play a part in this battle as well?”

“Oh course,” Grub explained. “We could have a few of you go with Leona’s group as extra protection, and we can use your forces to bolster our own during the storming of the main gate.”

Aelston looked at Mono, who had remained silent the entire time. “Mono, you remember the attack on Xerxes’ fortress?”

“I remember it vividly, albeit with grief.”

“Well, those guns that Xerxes had are going to be nothing compared to Seerus’ cannons,” Aelston warned. “If Leona’s group doesn’t get the cannons powered down, we might as well retreat, because if we don’t, we’ll all be pushing up the daisies.”

“Indeed,” Leona said. “I’ll have to have a reliable squad. Who wants to come with me?”

Sophia spoke first. “I’ll send three of my squads out to join you. Maybe a few more, depending on where we are needed elsewhere.”

“Ryker, why don’t you go?” Mono suggested. “You have the right team for it. In fact, about as diverse as a team can get.”

“I suppose that could work,” he replied. “Aelston and Leona know the way. Is Lokd in Vip's squad? If so, they could be of use."

"I'd gladly go," Vip said.

“My squad could keep Pythonne’s group in line,” Mar suggested. “Most of us wouldn’t take kindly to Pythonne leading the group, but he could still be in charge of the explosives, since he is probably the most skilled bomber around.”

Pythonne nodded his head in agreement, and Mono voiced his approval.

“And what about me?” Ava demanded. “Do I have any place in your plans?”

“Other than healing, what can you do?” Grub asked. “If you can somehow chat up the guards in the sewer area and distract them, you might be able to join up with Aelston and Leona’s group.”

“I might be able to pass as a messenger and get the guards to leave,” she said. “I’d have to have some people to back me up, obviously, in case my act failed.”

“And what about me?” Pteron stepped forward. “Should I join the main assault?”

“Yes,” Mono replied. “I want your squad in the main group.”

“Could I trade off the bomber of my squad, Vül, with Jacques from Mar’s squad?” Ryker asked. “He’s pretty diverse in terms of combat, and Mar will want mostly bombers.”

“Of course,” Mono nodded. “You’ll have to tell them of the change today. But I want the squads back to the original design after the battle. Which reminds me… What of you, Aelston?”

“I wish to help rebuild the Great Colony and find a leader that does not care for his own power,” Aelston said. “I want the best leader we can have. Maybe an elected one. If the Warriors of Old are willing to help me do that, I will stay with you for a while. But not forever. I will return to serving the Colony in any way possible: as a warrior, a politician, or even a leader.”

“If you do end up as their leader, could some sort of alliance be formed between the Spiral Order and the Great Colony?” Alisa asked hopefully. “I wouldn’t want another war breaking out. Especially as we are allies, if not more than allies, right now.”

The door of the house opened quickly, revealing Captain Feron and surprising the Warriors of Old. “I heard some of that,” Feron said. “In fact, I’ve been listening for quite a while.”

“What is it, Captain?” Pop asked. “Is something wrong?”

“I fear there is more to it than merely capturing the Great Colony,” Feron explained. “You must also capture the outposts within the Clockworks, and many cities above ground, and you don’t know if the Nine will even be there. It’s likely that Herex will be at his Compound 42 plant to the east, and Haven will have its best knights gone. And you never know if the people of the Great Colony will support Aelston or whoever is chosen.”

“Feron, you have a force of ten thousand warriors here,” Mono reminded his superior. “We are not even two hundred.”

“Aye, but you forget,” Feron argued, “many of those men live in the surrounding countryside and may not get to the main city in time. And even if they do, it is still very likely that any attacking gremlins will be armed to the teeth.”

“No,” Pteron intervened suddenly with a smile. “Not teeth. Fangs. Fangs that inject some of that nasty Compound 37 Herex. There have been rumors that Herex is producing that stuff in bulk now.”

“Should we launch a side assault on Herex’s factory?” Mono asked his strategic friend.

“I don’t know,” Grub replied. “We shall see, my friend. We shall see…”

Sun, 10/25/2015 - 00:50
#64
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
I'm alive...

(OOC: I finally got around to doing this. High school sucks. It's not that I don't have the time to engage my brain, it's that I don't have the sleep. I'm wasting sleep just writing this dang thing so I'm going to stop. And LoN, have you given up? Am I just writing this more Ranny and myself? /shrug.)

Chapter Fifteen: An Officer’s Folly

The sun dawned over the horizon, shining its glowing light over the once barren and inhospitable valley. Through engineering and technology, the gremlins had made it their home.

Though the Colony itself was on a plateau, many production facilities and laboratories dotted the valley. Mono knew of Herex’s own infamous facility that lay beyond the Colony, to the north, although he could not see it. It was built on a wretched and filthy lake in which nothing but the most strange and hardy forms of life could survive.

Gremlin patrols could be seen wandering the valley, but not even Aelston dared to take pot shots at them, for fear of alerting their enemies of their position.

Four hundred miles from home, the Warriors of Old and Sforzandosi were prepared for the attack. They were waiting on a ridge overlooking the deadly valley for Feron’s signal. Feron had decided to bolster Mono’s force with five hundred standard soldiers. They had found a cave that exited into the valley, and were going to wreak havoc among other processing plants and facilities shortly. Mono opposed this, as he was planning on taking the Colony itself before dealing with the surrounding areas.

Mono’s shadow was a silhouette on the horizon; his right side basked in the sun’s golden light, while his left side was shadowed by the receding darkness of night. Alisa, Grub, and Pop walked up to him slowly.

“We need to address our warriors,” Pop told him. “We also have to block off the cave so we don’t have to deal with those other soldiers messing us up.”

“I was thinking we could collapse part of the cave,” Grub suggested immediately. “They’d find another way out by the time the Colony was taken.”

“That’s too dangerous,” Alisa rebuked. “We have to convince them. Don’t we all have the authority to stop them?”

“They might not comply,” Mono finally responded. “We can try, but if we do, and we fail, we’ll be stuck with them.”

“But Feron gave them orders!” Alisa said.

“Feron’s not here,” Grub pointed out. “He doesn’t know the situation at hand, so we are completely within our power to ‘change’ the orders. Besides, boundaries are meant to be crossed, just as orders are meant to be disobeyed.”

“We’ll do that then,” Mono decided quickly and firmly, without much thought. “Override orders.”

Sophia had overheard this and stepped into the conversation. “And who will waste time doing that?” she asked. “The longer we are in that valley before we begin the attack, the more likely we are to fail. They’ll post extra guards, and before we know it, they’ll be coming out to fight us on their terms.”

“You have a valid point,” Grub agreed. “Why don’t we send one of our squads and four Sforzandosi warriors to deliver a message?”

“That would be eight fewer fighters from the main force,” Sophia said. “We might be able to divert that many. You will need your officers though.”

“Those soldiers could lead Feron’s to join the main force in storming the gates,” Grub suggested. “We can just get a recording of you and they ought to comply.”

“You can always court-martial them if they don’t,” Sophia joked, but behind her brief laughter was a sinister truth. If Mono wanted, he could control the entire Spiral Order. He had the supporters for it, if not the sheer numbers.

“Pop,” Mono ordered, “go choose a squad and four Sforzandosi warriors. Give them their orders; they can get a recording once the rest of us are moving. Alisa, go get everyone rounded up and ready to fight. Grub and Sophia, I need to finalize the squading and grouping with you. We leave this ridge in forty minutes.”

!#-^*^-#!

Mar nodded to Mono, silently signaling that his group would branch off to the west and begin their assault on the Great Colony. Leona’s group stayed with Mono’s, and would only separate when the first of Mar’s bombs had detonated.

Pythonne, Stalig, and Vϋl walked closest to him, while the fourth member of Mar’s squad guarded the rear.

“They won’t be ready for a few explosions,” Mar assured them, “and if they are, we have traitors among us. Stalig, I want you to go in front of us, with your shield raised until we get where we can start causing those gremlins some problems. Pythonne, you are now in charge. Vül, you need to stick with me.

“Everyone!” he called. “Pythonne is now in charge of all explosives. Stay in your current positions. I don’t care for the whole idea of military marching, so you can be casual, but be ready. If a gremlin patrol comes, we are moving to the side, and then maybe we can take them out with a few bombs. Got it? Good.”

The lifeless and unforgiving cliffs to their right occasionally came alive with a small rockfall, but Mar could only hear silence. Pythonne could sense something wrong, but chose to hold his tongue.

Mar watched the barren landscape. He was always on the lookout for any sort of gremlin patrol, but the only thing he could see was a sea of run-down, yet still running, refineries and factories. “What’s your thought on all these rusting vessels?” he asked. “Surely they have to be dangerous?”

“Yeah, those scumbag gremlins can’t even run their refineries,” Pythonne replied. “I’m surprised their old trash cans haven’t already fallen apart, or blown themselves up.”

“Guys, I think there’s someone coming toward us on the road!” Stalig interrupted them. “We should take cover.”

Mar signaled them into the cave they found nearby. They were silent in their movement, and by the time the last man entered the cave, everyone was settled in.

“Is everyone comfortable and prepared to be silent?” Mar asked. “We’re going to stay here for twenty minutes--”

“No you will not,” a voice, unmistakably gremlin, said. A ceiling light suddenly illuminated the cave, revealing at least two gremlins or Darkwalkers for every one of Mar’s men. “You’re coming with us.”

“What’s going on here?” Mar demanded. “How did you know about us?”

“We didn’t,” a rather decorated Darkwalker answered. “This cave was built about a week ago as an escape route for the Nine, King Tinkinzar, and the best of his men. Unfortunately for you, you are in this cave with the one hundred twenty most awarded of Tinkinzar’s soldiers.”

“Alright, you stupid knights, get up, and get moving!” the lead gremlin yelled. “If you step out of line, you die. Keep your weapons with you, as any resistance is futile.”

After a few minutes of marching, Pythonne fell in beside Stalig, and whispered, “Is your shield blast-proof?”

Stalig nodded.

“I want you to get in the center of our little crowd, and get as many knights, and as few gremlins, in the radius as possible,” Pythonne ordered. “I don’t need to tell you what I’m going to do. Get that shield up when the fighting star--”

“Quiet down back there!” a Darkwalker yelled.

Stalig nodded again, albeit more grimly.

Pythonne weaved his way through the crowd, to Mar’s side. “Go over there with Stalig,” Pythonne said. “Don’t ask why. You’ll see.

“Sir,” Pythonne addressed the gremlins’ leader, “You know something about strategy. Tell me, what advantage does a group of bombers have over you?”

“What?” the gremlin asked instinctively, before realizing Pythonne’s intent. “Kill them!”

Pythonne dodged a hammer-swing, and returned it with a bomb. His explosive took out a knight, several gremlins, and caused part of the ceiling to collapse. Almost instantly, Stalig’s shield went up, and dozens of bombs flew through the air. Pythonne’s armor protected him from the blasts, but many others were fighting suicidally. He leapt into Stalig’s shield, and only barely escaped a large falling boulder.

At this point, Stalig’s shield was supporting tons of rock. He pushed upward, praying that it would hold out. Light was visible through the cracks in the boulders. After thirty more seconds of clenching his teeth and praying to the gods he was still alive, the remaining bombers surfaced.

They were in a building in the city, and they could hear a dreadfully loud noise outside. Every entrance to the building was blocked by the boulders Stalig’s shield had displaced within the tunnel.

Mar was nowhere to be seen, but Vül, Stalig, and Pythonne were still alive. The fourth member of Mar’s squad was also missing, along with forty-two others. Of the sixty-one warriors that Mar left with, only seventeen remained.

“We made it!” Vül yelled joyously.

“Yes, but so many didn’t,” Stalig said. “We lost Mar and Lakev, and countless others.”

“I hope Mono has started his attack by now,” Pythonne remarked. “It would be the perfect time: all those gremlins can think of right now is us.”

Mon, 10/05/2015 - 00:25
#65
Midnight-Dj's picture
Midnight-Dj
:/

I have to say, although the writing leaves room for improvement, Saboteur is fighting in the way I intended him to, and that is BLOW UP EVERYTHING AND RUN

Mon, 10/05/2015 - 10:46
#66
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
@MDJ

Well, I'm writing this for fun and practice. It has improved tremendously from when I started. But that's why I'm writing it. And I'm glad you think I portrayed Sabo accurately. He's certain fun to write for. :P

Tue, 10/27/2015 - 21:50
#67
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
I dun know what to say

(OOC: Hey, sorry guys, I've had a lot of problems. Multiple tragic events, school chaos, relatives staying with me... I can't write with a cramped head. Eek. Halloween in a few days though, I'm happy for that! Maybe I'll do a small spooky-write by then. Probably not. But I'd like to. Maybe Friday. Yeah, Friday. Won't bother editing it. :P Enough blabbering in the blubber of slain walruses. Time for a chapter! :D :D :D :D)

Chapter Sixteen: The Weak Side

Leona led her group of warriors to the east as Mar was leaving to the west. She was mentally preparing for the worse, and trying to get over Aelston’s foolishness. He wouldn’t stop trying to scale the plateau.

“Leona, haven’t you grown sick of Aelston yet?” Jacques asked.

“We all have,” Ryker answered for her.

Aelston fell to the ground beside Actua, who helped him up, before he jogged back to the front. Leona sprayed him with fire from her palms, but it caused no pain.

“We’re supposed to be the stealth unit here!” Leona snapped at him. “I bet Mar’s group is doing better than us!”

Aelston fell back in with Ryker, Actua, and Jacques, who were treading lightly and watching for trouble. Ava marched just behind them, with Vip and the rest behind her.

When they arrived at the sewers, Aelston was calm, and was actually talking to his old enemy: Ryker. They were not friends, but as Mono had said, hate causes disunity, and as one of the most critical parts of the plan, unity was essential for Mono and hundreds others to survive.

The entrance was roughly circular with a radius of about five feet. The concrete was stained from chemicals, and the water in the sewer reeked of death. Almost everyone but Leona, Aelston, and Ryker gagged, as they had rebreathers.

To Leona’s surprise, Tinkinzar had not ordered the installment of cameras, even though this sewer was the most obvious way to weaken the Colony. Instead, Leona thought she heard guards up ahead playing a card game. She halted the party, and sent Ava forward to see what she could to with the guards.

They saw Ava as soon as she came into the cavern, but did not raise their weapons. “Who are you?” one asked.

“I’m just a--” Ava began, but was cut off by a deafening rumbling. The two guards retreated back to the Colony and left her in solitude.

“What happened?” Leona asked. “Did Mar’s blast do that?”

“I would guess so,” Aelston said. “But by the sound of that, it wasn’t on the outside of the plateau: it was in a tunnel.”

“Then we need to move! If we don’t get those guns down in time, Mono won’t be able to get to them!” Ryker yelled. He ran ahead, with Leona and Aelston tailing him.

The cavern converged into another tunnel, but after a few minutes in that tunnel, Leona found a ladder leading up to Seerus’ arsenal. She emerged from the ladder ready for a fight, but no guard was there. The rest of the warriors climbed up, while Ryker and Leona walked around, investigating the machinery.

“We’re in the workshop,” Leona addressed them once everyone was in the room. “We’ve got some strangely designed Roarmulus units, and it would appear that the functional ones are elsewhere. Split up into your squads and check the whole workshop! We have to make sure that none of these will work!”

Ryker led his squad and Leona away from the Roarmulous units and toward a rack of Scuttlebots. “These are what I’m really worried about,” he explained to his squad. “Turn these off one by one.”

He reached to reached to grab, one, but as soon as his glove touched the metal, all fifty Scuttlebots sprung to life. Ryker fried the first one with his Voltedge, but the horde was upon them almost instantly. The other knights joined in the guns, and Ryker prepared his sword’s lightning bolt. Once he had it lined up, he fired and took out at least fifteen of the constructs.

Within seconds, the Scuttlebots had been dispatched, and Leona gave the signal to move on. They climbed up some stairs to the second story, which was, as with the rest of the building, deserted. Ryker, Lokd, Leona, Aelston, and Ava got to work immediately shutting down the systems.

The main artillery cannons were powered down, then most of the constructs in the arsenal were disabled.

“Leona! You wanna come over here?” Lokd asked. “Something has to be wrong with the power system. I can’t disable all of the constructs! Four Roarmulous units, a couple dozen Scuttlebots, twenty or so Retrodes, and at least fifty Mecha-Knights don’t seem to have a power button.”

Leona shoved him to the side and analyzed the screen. “Those sly dogs!” she yelled after a couple seconds. “They must have changed it after hearing how Xerxes fell. It would appear that they can only be powered down if they are in the arsenal. I guess Mono is going to have to deal with them.”

“That’s four Roarmulous units!” Ryker exclaimed, joining them in trying to disable the constructs. “They’ll rip him apart!”

“No, they’re not as deadly as you imagine,” Leona said. “Because of the slope of the plateau and the switchbacks, Roarmulus units cannot be used effectively against them. Besides, they are siege weapons, and were never intended to be used for defending a plateau.”

“So, what are we gonna do now?” Aelston asked lightheartedly.

“Why don’t we go aid Mono from the roof?” Vip asked. “He should be starting his part of the attack by now. And by the sound of that explosion earlier, Mar is in need of help.”

Leona, Aelston, Ryker, and Actua nodded their heads, and Ryker led the way up to the roof of Seerus’ arsenal. The Great Colony was a stunning sight for the knights, who had not yet seen such a feat of engineering. A stone and steel wall bordered the entire plateau, and directly inside the wall were the barracks. On the north side was the citadel where Tinkinzar and the Nine were planning the last parts of their defense. In the center of the city was a massive steel tower, surrounded by single circular street.

“What’s the tower for?” Actua asked Leona.

“It’s residence for all civilians,” she explained. “They pay a lot for the protection of the walls and the Nine, but their apartments are terribly small. The barracks aren’t much better, unless you are in a special forces squad like Aelston or I. Then you’re in luck.”

“Everyone, duck for cover!” Aelston commanded. Everyone but him ducked, and he threw a grenade into the street below, at a Roarmulous unit. It landed in the construct’s mouth, rendering it useless.

The other three Roarmulous units were on the west side of the city, along with almost all of the gremlins’ fighting force, storming an already damaged building. They were unable to enter, but still decided to exhaust their efforts.

“What was that for?!” Leona demanded. “What part of being in the stealthy group do you not understand? We are supposed to remain hidden and unnoticed.”

“We might as well help out the other groups,” Actua defended Aelston. She mounted her Grim Repeater on the the edge of the building and began firing into the crowd. Aelston and Ryker joined in, and before long, the gremlins realized something was terribly wrong, but their ranks refused to thin.

Sun, 11/01/2015 - 01:49
#68
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
Undertale!

AAAAHHHHHH I MISSED 3 CHAPTERS

I'm still here, still reading, sorry for like not posting anything or whatever. I managed to forget that the forums existed for like the entire month of October basically.

But. Um. Yes. Things are happening. Fights. Cave-ins. The Trifecta of Gremlins. Things and stuffs. Yes good writing highly approve keep up the great work I'm bad at feedback and also remembering forums exist sorry

Sun, 12/13/2015 - 15:34
#69
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
'Eeeeey!

(OOC: Sorry I'm late. I've lost a cat and a peacock (car, mountain lion, respectively), I've got finals next week, I have been working my butt off the last couple weeks on school stuff. Had music concerts (flute, violin). Gotten hurt a few times. Had to deal with idiots. If I have time over break, I'll do some serious writing and maybe pump out a couple of chapters. Maybe more than a couple. If I don't sacrifice me and the other freshman to the Gods of Pizza. Me first though, I deserve it the most. I hope you like my lore, though, had to write some history. Other than that, this chapter really illustrates my life: unedited, crazy, and a living hell.)

Chapter Seventeen: The Brutality of War

Mono nodded goodbye to Mar and Leona as their groups went separate ways. He kept to the path heading up the plateau, with at least one hundred warriors behind him. They began to walk up the first of five switchbacks.

The first one was completely unguarded, but steep enough to be problematic for any siege engines. The gashes in the rock that created the path revealed volcanic brown-­grey rock, and deposits of other igneous stones.

Every time they would reach the top of a switchback, Alisa would use her cloak to scout for guards. She found none until the final switchback, so Mono let his men rest on the fourth until he thought it safe to continue.

“Stay here until I give the word,” he told his men. “Seerus’ guns will rain down on us for certain if we try climbing the final switchback, for certain.”

The Warriors of Old and the members of Sforzandosi found it difficult to sit still, even in this tense situation. Mono polished his Gilded Griffin, Kaqueth sharpened his talons and teeth, and even Alisa couldn’t help but doodle in the gravel. Only Pteron remained still, as he gazed over the vast expanse of the gremlins' valley, no doubt reminiscing about battles, death, and war.

Mono holstered his gun and walked over to talk to the seasoned warrior. “What are you thinking about, Pteron? You’ve been awfully quiet,” he inquired.

“Why are we at war with the gremlins?” Pteron asked. “What is the point of this terrible war?”

“As you most likely know, when that old fool Ozlo crashed the Skylark, they had a decent leader, Corzan,” Mono explained. “He tried to create an alliance between our civilizations, in the hope we could learn from one another.”

“Yeah, I know,” Pteron said. “Then he betrayed us, and Ozlo killed him. Tinkinzar then rose to the Iron Throne, and now we've been thrown into the whole mess.”

“Wrong,” Mono contradicted him. “Ozlo distrusted Corzan, so he helped a rebellious young gremlin by the name of Tinkinzar rise to throne, who was actually dangerous to our cause, and did turn on us. Of course, Ozlo still kept ties with him the entire time. Ozlo was never truly on our side. He was treacherous and dangerous, while looking like a prime protagonist for his story. He killed an enemy king! Well, Ozlo killed Corzan, but it wasn’t in fair combat like they say. Tinkinzar helped Ozlo get into Corzan’s bedroom, where the king was subsequently drugged in his sleep until they got into the gremlin’s arena (which was of course torn down later), and have him a blunt stick to fight with. Ozlo was wearing a full set of armor, with his custom Leviathan Blade, while Corzan was dressed in just the clothes he had worn to bed.”

“Then why do they say Ozlo killed him in a fair fight if it wasn’t fair at all?” Pteron asked doubtfully. “And who on Cradle told you this?!”

“Kaval Uribor used some magic to alter the appearance of the fight,” Mono finished. “Feron told me all of this. He was one of Ozlo’s bodyguards, before he rose to Lieutenant. Of course, this was all kept secret for a long time. Now do you see why we are fighting?”

“Who else knows this?” Pteron asked. “Do Aelston and Leona know about it? Sophia? Alisa, Pop, and Grub?”

“No one. Well, with the obvious exceptions of Feron, Tinkinzar, and possibly some of Tinkinzar’s favorite minions. Wegner might, but I doubt it.”

“So we’re fighting in revenge for Corzan?”

“There’s more than that. We are fighting to avenge all that have died in Ozlo’s setup. We are fighting to avenge all those that have already perished, like Eve and Cryo.”

Mono stood up and moved to the front of the force and fell into conversation with Pop, until they heard a terrible explosion on the western side of the mountain. Many of his fellow knights fell to the ground.

Alisa quickly recovered and cloaked to check if there were any guards still at the main gate. No one was there, so she ran back to Mono and gave him the “all clear” signal.

Mono waited just over five minutes before commencing the attack, so as to ensure his opponents were preoccupied, the screamed, “Let’s go!” to his soldiers, who quickly followed his orders and joined in the mayhem.

The terrifying mass of charging bodies stopped at the gate, where their bloodlust continued to build up. As soon as Alisa opened up the gates, their pent­-up rage was unleashed into the Colony.

Pop and Ven Kumonai both flew on top of the wall to get a good view of their enemies. They were the first to notice that the majority of enemies had flocked to a building on the west side of the Colony. Pop fired a few shots into the crowd, but Mono’s charge got in his way, preventing him from using that angle any more. Before he got a better position, he noticed gunfire coming from the roof of Seerus’ arsenal. It was taking down gremlins, so he assumed it was Leona’s group.

Mono shoved aside the first gremlin he found, who was quickly stabbed by another knight. He heard a bestial roar behind him, and saw Kaqueth charge forward, his sword slung across his back.

More beast than man, the brutish figure tackled a gremlin before savagely ripping its heart out and moving to another. One gremlin, who tried to flee into a building for safety, was gunned down in an instant by a knight. On the far end of the street, an explosive blast sent multiple gremlins flying and nearly deafened many others, including Mono.

No pain nor weariness befell Mono. His arms and legs moved out of instinct. His conversation with Pteron had dug into his soul, churning out a primeval hatred of all that Tinkinzar stood for.

But Mono was not the only one that felt this bloodlust. Pteron felt it, with the way he mercilessly slaughtered gremlins, one by one. Wolfen thought of Cryo, and the evils of his enemies. For a second time, he shattered his sword on a gremlin’s neck. Even Ven felt the primitive urge to kill. Not even a gremlin's sturdy vertebrae could withstand the force in his katanas.

To those partaking in the battle, the sky turned a dark shade of crimson as hellfire rained onto their enemies. As the gremlins’ numbers began to dwindle, the Warriors of Old lost their frantic bloodlust and began to calm down. When the final gremlin in the street had fallen, a figure stepped out a mostly ruined building with its hands raised. Everyone instinctively readied their weapons.

It was bleeding from its left arm, and its armor was covered in dust and blood, but Mono could tell that the mysterious figure was Pythonne. “Don’t shoot!” Mono yelled. “Where is everyone else?”

Vül stepped out of the wreckage, along with Stalig and thirteen others. The survivors had looks of both sorrow and relief on their faces.

“What happened?!” Grub exclaimed. “Where’s Mar?”

“Got caught… Blew up bombs… Saved by Stalig’s shield… Kugald charged… Died…” Vül panted.

Mono was surprised by their casualties, but was relieved when Leona, Aelston, Ryker, and Actua, an unlikely group, came prancing into the street, with seemingly every member of their party intact. “Easiest mission ever,” Ryker joked. “How did Mar’s party go?”

“By the looks of it, not too good,” Mono said in response. “Looks like we lost Mar and too many others.”

Leona’s party became suddenly solemn. “How did your charge go in terms of casualties?” Leona asked.

“We haven’t counted, but by the looks of it, most of us are okay,” Grub said. “I presume it was your crew firing into the mess?”

“Indeed it was,” Aelston replied. “That looked ferocious from our vantage point. It was certainly bloodier than last time. And whoever was doing that Snarbolax imitation was an absolute beast!”

Kaqueth smiled beneath his mask in embarrassment when everyone turned to look at him. “Thanks, if that was a compliment,” he stuttered.

Sun, 12/13/2015 - 18:04
#70
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
Undertale!

Oh hey, managed to catch a new chapter not too long after you posted it, rather than missing it for a few days/weeks. Noice.

I've finals next week as well. Good luck to us both! I know I'll certainly need it, since so many of my classes are borderline.

Some interesting backstory here. I actually haven't seen this spin on it before. Ozlo, ye cowardly backstabber. Rest in pieces.

Sun, 01/03/2016 - 19:09
#71
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
Heyo

(OOC: Hope you guys had a merry Christmas and a happy New Year! This chapter took a while, as it was long, and I was away just before Christmas, and had some family over, and for a while I didn't feel like writing. It mainly got so long because I was writing it in chunks and couldn't find a suitable place to end it. Found a good spot today, and it is edited this time around. This might be the longest chapter I have done yet, and I hope it's the best. Or one of the best. Hope y'all enjoy. :D)

Chapter Eighteen: The Power of Words

Bodies lined the streets of the Colony. The pools of blood extended far beyond the field of fallen gremlins, as the hard stone was unable to absorb it.

None of Mono’s group could be found on the ground. The gremlins’ lack of coordinated resistance made Mono’s attack all the more deadly.

Sophia limped over to Mono, and soon, Grub, Pop, and Alisa came over to discuss the final assault.

“Grub,” Mono asked, “what are you thinking in terms of how we should get into the citadel? We’ll have to deal with a lot of guards, especially considering that we have the Nine in there.”

“If Pythonne’s group is feeling up to it, they might be able to drop a few bombs through the roof to stir the pot,” he suggested. “An all-out charge would not inflict heavy casualties for us, considering the fact that they only have foot-fighters defending the interior.”

Sophia was about to speak, but her words were cut short when a group of gremlins burst from a building and started firing into the crowds of knights. They targeted the small area of their wounded enemies. One rushed in with a flamethrower and managed to torch one of the already injured, but was cut down before he could take any more lives with him.

The other gremlins were shredded within seconds by the masses of knights, but their goal was accomplished: they created fear and kept the remaining knights on edge. One of their bullets had found Pop’s thigh, and another exploded between Ryker and Aelston, who were having yet another pointless argument.

Only the wounded knight who was set alight did not survive the sudden attack. Pop and five others decided that they would stay behind and rest. A few of the wounded knights, some with broken arms and one whose hand had been blasted off from the wrist, decided that they could not miss out on the final charge.

Within minutes, it was decided that Pythonne and Aelston would help the remaining bombers blast down the citadel’s door, before the rest of the force stormed its halls.

The knights were tense as they marched down the street to the citadel. Everyone with a gun had it aimed at either the rooftops or the street before them. Their footsteps were the only sound that could be heard, beside the occasional gunshot. One sniper tried to fire into the crowd, but Actua dispatched him with a burst of fire from her Grim Repeater.

Five guards stood by the door of the citadel when Mono arrived. The sturdy sentinels were on the lookout for anyone, but Mono hid his party behind a curve in the road. Out of instinct, Pteron overtook Mono and killed each of the guards with a single shot to the head.

The Warriors of Old and members of Sforzandosi poured into the square before the door. Aelston and Pythonne led the bombers in placing bombs around the door. The gunners all stood in a rough formation behind the guardians’ shields. They were all prepared to kill whatever what was inside when the door opened.

When the last explosive had been placed, the bombers retreated to the safety of the shields, and Aelston proceeded to detonate them. The solid steel door fell back into the doorway, trapping a gremlin’s leg beneath it. The helpless creature was killed in an instant by a barrage of gunfire.

The gremlins inside returned with a barrage of their own, which was soaked up by the guardians’ shields. Mono led the knights forward, slowly but steadily, as they marching into the citadel. Their immortal army cut through the defending gremlins, until all seemingly died or retreated.

A few gremlins were alive on the ground, but were killed on sight by the first rank. When they reached the end of the hallway, the shields were disabled and Mono ordered them to split up. He chose five squads to stay behind and guard the doorway, and sent half of the remaining force with Grub and Alisa to the eastern wing to clear it of gremlins and return when they were done.

Aelston had told him that the Nine housed themselves in the western wing of the citadel, while the eastern wing was used for storage of various weaponry. The north wing was where Tinkinzar and his personal guard were housed. By attacking both the eastern wing and the western wing at once, Mono hoped to minimize armed retaliation.

As Sophia and Mono led their group to the west, they killed any gremlins in their way. The retaliation included, for the most part, a few gremlins holed up in an office throwing mugs at them, or in the worst cases, drawing a gun too late and finding themselves in a puddle of their own blood.

Mono had given the order not to destroy any gremlin papers or information, as they could have made new technological advancements, allowing new weaponry. After killing at least two of the Nine in small, but bloody skirmishes in side rooms, the group found an office room full of Devilites.

The fiends appeared to be working for the gremlins, and the gremlins seemed to have some way to control their minds. Mono locked them in a room for later, saying to his group, “This could be most interesting. We’ll need to stun these guys later and figure out what is going on.”

The next room they entered included a crazed gremlin, who was foaming at the mouth, working on blueprints for some type of airship. Ryker recognized him as Zanterxōs, a famed and highly intelligent engineer. He was promptly tied down and locked up, with one squad staying behind to ensure he didn’t escape, as his designs could prove fundamental in stabilizing a future gremlin government.

Eventually, the party reached the end of the hallway, which opened out into an enormous hall. On both the eastern and western sides of the room were three thrones, and on each throne sat a member of the Nine. Forty guards stood in formation at the end of the hall.

Stalig and the other guardians instantly activated their shields, allowing Mono to speak.

“You have no chance!” Mono yelled to them. “If you surrender now, we may spare your life, but certain death awaits all those who resist. Which of you have the guts to give yourself up?”

No one moved. The room was tense with worry. Seerus was ready to kill anyone that surrendered, but Herex was relaxing and smiling. Mono nudged Sophia, and pointed to Herex, indicating that if anything happened he expected her to deal with him.

Within seconds, three of the four guardians fell to the ground, dead. The room descended into chaos. Everyone surrounded Stalig, trying to protect him from whatever strange force killed the other guardians.

In less than a second, the enemy guards began their charge, Herex fell dead to a bullet that found his neck, and Seerus stood up to defeat Mono.

Much like Xerxes, Seerus had a suit of bullet-proof armor. The knights’ shots made contact with the hulking brute, but he never flinched. One tried to rush him, but he slammed the brave warrior aside with his solid steel hammer.

Before Seerus got to Mono, who was frantically shooting and reloading, Lokd managed to climb onto his back and tear off his sinister mask. The face he revealed was scarred and burned from years of warfare. His yellow eyes scowled with hate for a few seconds, but were soon dimmed by Actua’s Grim Repeater.

The last four of the Nine fell quickly, allowing Mono to capture seven of the guards that stopped resisting. This small conflict left a few knights dead or wounded, so Sophia sent a pair of her medics to help the wounded from both sides. Four knights were left to guard the remaining gremlins and the Sforzandosi medics.

By the time Mono’s group returned to the meeting point, Grub and Alisa’s group was already there. “You ready to face the big boys?” Mono asked his friends. “How did the east wing fall? It seemed like only a handful of gremlins in the west actually knew how to fight with a weapon.”

“I suppose you had it easier than us,” Grub said solemnly. “We lost around two dozen knights, not to mention those that were wounded and had to stay behind with some guards and medics. Vip and Cat both suffered severe burns and cuts, but I think they’ll make it. It looked like we got ambushed by the remaining Darkwalkers and quite a few Ghostmane Stalkers.”

“That’s not good,” Sophia commented. “We found a few Devilites working for the gremlins in an office, and we killed eight of the Nine, and captured the other one.”

“That's good,” Alisa said. “Maybe Tinkinzar doesn't have anything else up his sleeve.”

“We need to get moving,” Mono decided. “The longer we wait, the more prepared he will be.”

Leona and Aelston stepped up to the door to the north wing and began working on the lock. Neither of them knew the code for certain, but they both had been trained to crack any lock, even those of their masters. Within minutes, the door was opened.

“Tread lightly here,” Aelston whispered to Mono. “The Ghostmanes are almost certainly lining the halls all the way up to Tinkinzar himself. I’m pretty certain I’ll be able to see through their cloaks, but we’ll have to see.”

“Let’s do a little test then,” Pteron suggested before firing twelve rounds into the darkness. Three gremlins appeared and fell to the floor with various wounds. “Apparently not.”

The hallway broke out into chaos. A volley of chakrams hit the first rank of knights, but most only skimmed off their armor. One lodged itself into Jacques, who pulled it out to keep as a souvenir, but Pteron took it from him and returned it to its thrower, who would have been surprised, if he knew what hit him.

Explosives detonated on every side of Mono, who was thrown into a wall. Ryker saw the crumpled figure and fought his way over to help. By the time Ryker got to him, he was already firing into the swarm of gremlins.

Mono smiled to Ryker and said, “Use that Voltedge of yours. Might give those Ghostmanes a scare.”

Ryker unleashed a blast of electricity similar to the one he defeated Kaval with. The bolt split into smaller sections, each finding its own gremlin to bring down. After five seconds of the blast, Ryker stopped, but the Ghostmanes had already retreated farther north.

The hallway became silent with blood and death in the air. Every knight stared at Ryker, who smiled beneath his mask and gave an awkward shrug. Jacques ran forward to grab his chakram and Mono took the opportunity to stand up painfully.

“We must continue on!” Grub shouted to divert attention from Mono’s wounds. The knights followed him, but Sophia stayed behind to keep an eye on him.

Mono limped forward, following the knights. Ava der Ärztin appeared beside him and handed him a vial. Sophia spun around and held her gun to the gremlin’s throat until she realized who it was. Mono glugged the liquid, then collapsed on the floor. He pulled himself up, then smiled and said to them, “That’s some strong stuff.”

He fell to the floor again, but this time Ava used his weakness to apply a bandage to the gash on the warrior’s arm, which he failed to notice. “I… can still fight,” he panted.

Ava scowled. “I can’t stop you. But be careful. You won’t make the difference in the battle.”

Sophia helped him up, then the two haphazardly jogged to catch up to the rest of the fighting force. Their friends were in a standoff with a group of gremlin gunners. Both groups were hiding behind corners, so neither could get a decisive shot off.

Mono tapped Stalig on the shoulder, and whispered, “Get your shield up and charge down that hallway. Stir up something interesting.”

The guardian obeyed his orders. He ran into the hallway with his shield activated. A barrage of gunfire pierced the energy portion of the shield, but the shield itself held up. The gremlins quickly targeted his legs and brought the young gunner to the ground. Moon scowled, then charged out to help his fallen companion. Others followed him, cutting down the gremlins one by one.

The knights’ sudden charge had caught the gremlins off guard, leaving them with less than five casualties. Stalig had lost both his legs from the knee due to the gunfire, but Ava was there to prevent his death, although he would be unable to continue.

Mono continued to push his men forward through the citadel, until they finally reached what was thought to be Tinkinzar’s room. Aelston and Leona checked for traps, but found none, and were able to unlock the door with ease.

Sophia opened the door slowly, so as to allow everyone to ready their guns and swords. Instead of bumping into a swarming horde of gremlins like every knight was expecting, only one lone gremlin was to be seen. The glowing purple eyes seeped into the knights, but they refused to bend to the king’s will.

“Your day has come at last!” Mono shouted to Tinkinzar.

The gremlin was entirely still; his face expressionless, his eyes emotionless. “I am most sorry,” uttered the ruler, “but I cannot give you the fight you want. My power is not physical, like so many that have come before you to usurp the Iron Throne have believed. You see, your old friend, what was his name, Uribor?, did more than help me take the throne from that weakling Corzan. He helped me keep it. He blessed me with the power to enthrall other gremlins, or even knights.”

Tinkinzar chuckled as Mono scowled to Leona and Aelston for not telling them this. “Ah, your friends did not know this. Anyone I let out of the trance forgets about it. Of course, Aelston has been out of it for longer than I thought. He broke free on his own.”

“I did no such thing!” Aelston retorted. “I have nothing to do with your dark magicks!”

“You broke free when you neared Cravat Hall,” the dictator explained. “The Owlite magic broke you free from my bonds. You were able to think for yourself from then on. You made errors after that. When I exiled you, I did it because the bonds were broken. I still had control over your memory, but it was only strong enough to make you forget this. Leona, on the other hand, escaped my enthrallment with death. Again, I let her go, as once the mind has overcome the magic one time, it is forever resistant.”

“Why don’t you control us all now?” Sophia asked. “I haven’t come into contact with the Owlites.”

“True, but their magic is contagious,” Tinkinzar said. “You are all resistant to it, I’m afraid. I have no options now, but to submit.”

“How does this magic work?” Pteron asked. “If you die, is the spell broken?”

“By the nature of the magic, probably no--” Tinkinzar started, but Pteron didn’t allow him to finish. The holder of the Iron Throne fell to the floor, uttering the words, “Kzumøk ver hing!”

While the knights cheered, Aelston, Leona, and Lokd stood deathly still, staring at each other in mortal fear. “Did he… Did he say the words?” Aelston asked. “Did he say them right?”

“Yes… Yes he did,” Lokd answered. “Those were the words.”

Sun, 01/03/2016 - 19:09
#72
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
Woah! Two in two days!

Chapter Nineteen: The Behemoth

“Wow!” Ryker exclaimed. “What a beast!”

“So this is what Zanterxōs was planning…” Mono uttered, staring at the airship. “I wonder if we could fly this.”

On the starboard, port, and aft sides of the colossus were gunner positions, and the cockpit sat between two rocket launchers. Two curved wings rested above the cockpit, with one engine on each.

Mono stepped up the ramp into the cargo hold, which acted as a pathway between the pilot’s seat and the gunner positions. He found a few passenger seats and boxes of weaponry.

Sophia, Aelston, and Ryker climbed into the ship with Mono, who had chosen them specifically to investigate the airship. “Let’s see if this thing actually works!” Sophia shouted, taking the pilot seat. Her Kamacite Arm fused itself into the ship, and with it, she closed the door of the cargo hold and began takeoff.

Aelston, Ryker, and Mono all scrambled to get into a gunner seat before the airship took off. As the engines started up, a voice came over the loudspeaker, “Vedqa ver kú Alya-Dres-Fvort.”

“What does that mean?” Ryker yelled to Aelston.

“Welcome to the Alya-63,” Aelston explained. “‘Alya’ translates roughly to ‘behemoth,’ a suitable name.”

The ship lurched forward, before grinding to a halt on the hangar’s floor. “Lemme try that again!” Sophia yelled.

“I’m not liking this!” Ryker shouted. “Have you ever flown anything before?!”

“There’s nothing else to fly on this planet!”

“Good point…” Ryker grumbled. After a couple tries, he got the microphone working, and was able to communicate without yelling. “Where are you planning on flying this thing once you get it working?”

“Why don’t we bomb Herex’s facility?” Aelston suggested. “That way, we won’t have to worry about his Compound 42 getting on us, or anyone else.”

Before anyone could reply, the ship was out of the hangar, and flying north rapidly. Within seconds, the knights still clearing the Colony were firing at it, but its armor managed to stop even the more powerful rifles. Aelston, who had taken the aft gun, fired into the sky, trying to show that they meant no harm.

“Wow! A-35 lasers!” Aelston exclaimed as he watch the guns’ projectiles fly into the sky. “These are three grades more powerful than my sniper. You guys know how lucky we are to get ahold of these?”

“I’m assuming there were not many of these guns made?” Mono asked.

“That, and they were only working on the earliest prototypes when I was exiled,” Aelston replied. “These are new!”

Sophia suddenly veered the ship to the east, where Herex’s facility was. Knights were already laying siege, but had not yet broken into the fortress. Mono and Aelston fired onto the walls, disabling multiple turrets. They could see their fellow knights on the ground cheering them on as Sophia turned around, this time to bomb the enemy.

Four missiles shot from the hull of the craft into the facility. Fire, smoke, and shrapnel rose from the fortress when the missiles made contact. After two more runs, Sophia roughly landed beside the battlefield.

The crew of the Alya-63 exited the airship to a round of applause from the knights on the battlefield, who all appeared to be Feron’s.

“There they are! The leader of the Warriors of Old and the leader of Sforzandosi!” one knight whispered to another. “What’re they doing with an airship?!”

“Takin’ it for a test drive,” Aelston joked. “What’re you whelps doing here?”

“Feron sent us,” one replied. “We were stopped at the edge of a cave by some of your soldiers, but they let us come out when they got the signal that Tinkinzar was dead.”

“Hah! Typical knights!” Aelston laughed. “Hiding in a cave! Mono, would the Warriors of Old be caught hiding in a cave? Wait, I know the answer.”

“We broke out,” Ryker corrected him. “And if I remember correctly, you and your robot went running away with your tails between your legs.”

“The insubordination and disrespect!” one of Feron’s officers exclaimed. “How do you manage to keep your crew in line if everyone acts like that?!”

“We manage,” Mono replied sternly. “Now, do we wanna fly this thing back to Haven, or wait?”

“We have to set up a government here before we leave,” Aelston reminded him. “Need to get a decent leader and system of laws.”

“What’re you planning on doing, taking over?” Ryker asked him. “Mono, do you really want Aelston as the holder of the Iron Throne?”

“I don’t see why not,” Mono said seriously. “He’d make a great leader.”

“He tried to kill me! Multiple times!”

Mono sighed and signaled for his friends to return the the ship. Sophia took off again and did another awkward landing in the hangar. Mono, Ryker, and Aelston got out to head back into the citadel, but Sophia decided to fly the Alya-63 back to Haven and see if new ones could be made.

By the time Mono, Ryker, and Aelston caught up with their friends, all continuing resistance within the city had been crushed, and Grub was working on setting up an occupation plan. The prisoners had been put on a caravan back to Haven, and a memorial ground was set up beneath the plateau where Mar’s group had blasted the rock. The knights’ bodies that were found were also laid to rest, and their enemies’ bodies were set ablaze on the south side of the plateau.

After a week of rebuilding, Mono decided to leave five of his squads with the Colony for a month or so, until Aelston and Leona finished installing a government.

On the way back to Haven, Mono decided to talk to Lokd, and uncover the meaning of Tinkinzar’s last words.

“So… Lokd, when Tinkinzar died, what did he say?” Mono asked.

“‘Kzumøk ver hing,’” Lokd responded. “Those are the words that no leader is supposed to utter. They mean, roughly, ‘Death to my subjects.’”

“Why would he say such a thing?” Mono inquired. “What does that mean for the Colony?”

“Those were words said in anger, but they were meant,” Lokd said. “He was angry at his subjects for failing to protect him. Honestly, I don’t know what it could mean for them.”

Mon, 01/11/2016 - 00:32
#73
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
Undertale!

Oooh 2 chapters. And pretty long ones, at that. Once again, great writing and story.

Interesting take on Tinkinzar here. Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain.

Seems Aelston (and Leona?) really are going to be set into positions of power. I can't even begin to imagine the kind of shenanigans that'll ensue from this. Hehe.

Things do seem to be winding down, but that last bit about with "Death to my subjects" does worry me a bit. I eagerly await to see what contingency plan Tinkinzar may have in store. Even if he is dead (At least I think he is? That's what I'm getting from that bit about Pteron). Perhaps something to do with those Devilites?

Mon, 01/18/2016 - 21:29
#74
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
Finale!

(OOC: So, I'm going to do another book or two, but that'll be in a few months. I will be taking rolecasted characters, so get some ready! The gremlins and of course our crazy Pythonne will still be around and functioning, but the majority of the knights will be old... I mean, I guess Old Snag could worth some magicks and maybe make them young again. I dunno. We'll see. But the characters in the next one will be even more rolecasted. I might even rolecast the main character. We shall see. Anyway, enjoy!)

Chapter Twenty: Tearium

One year had gone by since Tinkinzar’s demise. The Colony had been repaired; many sensible gremlins had returned. Lokd and Ava had left Haven to help with the rebuilding of the gremlins’ society.

Aelston and Leona set up a Council of Eleven to rule their race. Both Ava and Lokd were offered spots, but only Lokd accepted. Other scholars were taken from the population and given seats in the Eleven, as well as three ex-generals of Tinkinzar’s army that were deemed safe. A democracy was being set up by these Eleven, so they would only have power for a short while longer, unless they were reelected.

Zanterxōs had been put in a prison where he would design new airships, albeit at gunpoint.

Mono had come into possession of one of Tearium cores that powered the airships. He was on his way to Wegner to find out if the Spiral Order could build another Skylark and return to Isora.

When Mono arrived at the old geologist’s facility, everything was in disarray. It looked as though a bomb had struck the inside of the laboratory. Knights were carrying crates in and out, all of which were filled with minerals or rocks.

Wegner was analyzing a mineral sample brought by an expedition into the Clockworks when he saw Mono. “Mono! You decided to show up at last!”

“I suppose I had to come here some time,” Mono grinned. “Why’s this place in such a mess? Has it always been like this?”

“It’s all organized, trust me,” Wegner defended himself. “The minerals are all laid out on the floor by composition, and the tools by uses. Unfortunately, my helper knights are always clueless, so they just pile the minerals everywhere.

“No!” he yelled abruptly. “Don’t do that! These are not organized by color! This goes over there, with the other Valestone based minerals, not the copper based ones! Never put them in that pile! If I tried to extract copper from that it would probably explode! Get out of my sight!”

The knight ran away in terror and left the building.

“Sorry,” Wegner said, “I always get sent the engineers when I ask for knights interested in science. All the geologists are out in the Clockworks getting themselves killed to bring me samples of stuff I already have. But they’re not the worst of it! No, I get average brutes bringing me silicon dioxide and insisting they found something useful. Don’t they know I’m currently studying zinc sulfide?!”

Mono shook his head and chuckled. “I’m here to ask you something,” he said. “So, the Skylark was powered by a large Tearium core. Well, during my war against Tinkinzar, I found an airship. It was small, compared to the Skylark, but it also had a Tearium core.”

“Can I see it?” Wegner gasped excitedly.

“Yeah,” Mono said, taking his sample from his pocket. “We found about fifty more, but they are only about three pounds each, so I didn’t think we could do much more than power some airships with these, but it seems the gremlins have a way of manufacturing Tearium. Would it ever be possible to rebuild the Skylark?”

“If the gremlins had only fifty cores, it would take at least fifty years,” Wegner told him. “I wouldn’t be alive to see it, but you might. But then again, this planet is fascinating. If I could go back to Isora or stay here, I’d stay here. It’s been thirty years.”

“So, should we save them for later or continue to build ships?” Mono asked. “Anyone that wants to leave could easily commission a decent sized ship, but nothing as big as the Skylark.”

“Yeah, for now, it would make more sense to devote resources to quell a rebellion, if there is one,” Wegner answered. “There is time to see. I guarantee there are gremlins and knights joining together at this moment, conspiring against the Spiral Order and the Eleven.”

!#-^*^-#!

Mono stood between Pop, Grub, and Alisa on Haven’s western wall, the very same they had destroyed a few years ago, watching the sun fall below the horizon.

“So, are we ever going to get off this old planet?” Grub asked.

“From what Wegner said, we could,” Mono replied, “but I’ll stay. I like the gremlins, the hordes of undead, and, of course, the great hunting.”

“You have a good point,” Pop said. “Besides, we bought an Alya, so we might as well stay to enjoy it.”

“Y’know what?” Alisa suggested suddenly. “Why don’t we pool some money and have our tail written down? We’ve come an awfully long way, and future generations deserve to hear of our story, and not from word of mouth. Then it would seem like a legend. We were real people. The Warriors of Old will still be a regiment seventy years from now, so they must have a story to call their own.”

“That’ll be easy,” Mono said. “Since everything was recorded, I could just give them the files in my head. Of course, anything I missed would have to be explained by someone else, like with Mar’s group during the assault on the Colony.”

“We might as well do it now,” Alisa said. “Our story is over. ‘The sun is setting over the vast plain of my life.’ That’s what Eve told me the day we attacked Xerxes’ fortress. Our destiny has been completed.”

“A new day shall dawn,” Grub prophesied. “A day where we shall be the ancestors looked up to by many, but few shall have the courage to follow in our footsteps. A day where the Warriors of Old are still a ragtag group of the best fighters the Spiral Order has to offer.”

Darkness finally fell over Haven with the five warriors’ silhouettes lining the wall. “But for now, we might as well have fun!” Pteron interrupted the tranquility, and revealed that he had been listening in for a while. “C’mon, we have a party to get to! It’s been a whole year since that tyrant was dead, can yah believe it?!”

As the friends went to their party, three words seemed to resonate through the air, sky, and ground: Kzumøk ver hing.

TO BE CONTINUED

Sat, 01/23/2016 - 14:07
#75
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
Death To My Subjects

And so dawns an era. T'was a brilliant tale, truly a story worthy of legends.

You're gonna another sequel? That's awesome! For some reason I thought that this one was going to be the conclusion, but I see now that there's still much fallout that'll have to be dealt with. With the way Gremlin society has reformed, it does make me wonder what new probably-non-gremlin-based crisis will pop up.

I probably shouldn't submit any more characters in the future, since I already have 2 at the top of the chain of command (Geez I never expected them to go that far in life when I developed them. Amazing stuff). But in the event there's not enough or something, I'll be sure to crank something out. Hehe.

But yes. I eagerly await your return in a few months.

Mon, 01/25/2016 - 16:59
#76
Carbon-Jm's picture
Carbon-Jm
@LoN

Thanks for your dedication! Feel free to make another character or two when I do open up the rolecasting. This will be different in the next one. It's gonna be like 50 years later, so you dunno what happened. Maybe Mono was assassinated. Maybe Actua went nuts with her Grim Repeater and is now in jail. Maybe a nuke hit Haven and they're all dead. We shall see...

  • « first
  • ‹ previous
  • 1
  • 2
Powered by Drupal, an open source content management system