Ok plz no more asking, I cant keep all those names in my head. I will REALLY try to make the next chapter today or tomorrow.
An old outdated fanfic.
Wed, 10/19/2011 - 15:28
#52
Ok plz no more asking, I cant
Wed, 10/19/2011 - 15:53
#53
In the next chapter there
In the next chapter there will be dusk ancient and salamar jm dallex, 2 will die in the chapter after this one.
Chapter.....I can't remember Ill edit it later LOL
Everyone knew it would come to war. After all the attacks in the clockworks, wolvers and gremlins raiding the auction house, and disppearing knights in the clockworks we had no choice. There were 3 places where the battles were the most dangerous. The jelly kings palace, was 1 of them. The jelly king hated the gremlins, and the knights, so he stayed out of the war. Vanadukes kingdom was also a battlefield, Vanaduke himself wanted them to come so he could slauhter them all. AND THE 3RD BATTLEFIELD WAS HAVEN. Please help the the spiral knight army, we can win.
The newspaper was very depressing. But Dusk, found himself in the line for spiral knights hoping to help their army. He noticed jm, and salamar were there as well, jm, was a good friend of his, but salamar was more like a rival.
Sorry guys i have to go, ill finish this later.
Thu, 10/20/2011 - 12:10
#54
Finally!
Now where is Atrum, is he still alive? I edited my main arsnal again.
Wed, 10/26/2011 - 17:31
#55
Upgraded Atrumvindex
Name: AtrumVindex
Guild: Elite Explorers
Alignment: good
Arsnal:winmillion, Almirian Crusader with Crest of Almire, Cold Iron Vanquisher, Valiance
Likes: groups, coins, trading, teamwork, tatical reasearch, games, arena, devilites
Dislikes:ME and CE prices, jerks, deserters, ''dying'', weak weapons and armor, being lonley, peolple not buying materials for 20crowns apiece.
Personality:Cynical, hard working, very angry with the spiral order and their way or buissness, kind but conservative, finds great potential in young knights and recruits them and wants to be stonger to not rely too much on others, he is a tatical person and works in a team.
Skill: A bit rusty due to going on hiatus for two months+ annoyed with the orders rule. He is a zig-zag, speedy fighter. He got favours from many devlites so they can fight on the good side.
Thu, 10/20/2011 - 17:58
#56
You are not dead atrum and
You are not dead atrum and carya ou can make character if you want to
Thu, 10/20/2011 - 21:25
#57
Character
Name: Electrodoom
Gender: Male
Color: Turquoise
Likes: Pranks, weak monsters, scary stories
Dislikes: Snooty people, strong people
Hobbies: Cheating, sneaking around, scaring people, pranking people
Personality: Mischievious, vile, smart
Arsenal: Fireburst Brandish, Wolver Cap, Scary Skelly Suit, Defender, Autogun
Fri, 10/21/2011 - 14:30
#58
AHHHHHHHHH!!! Plz no more,
AHHHHHHHHH!!! Plz no more, people besides carya, but electroddom you can stay
Fri, 10/21/2011 - 18:40
#59
did i update mi stuff? if not here it is
Divine veil
Grey feather fowl
Grey owlite shield
Acheron
Boltbrand
Gigawatt pulsar
Volt driver
BTW ancient is in ur guild ^^
Fri, 10/21/2011 - 19:36
#60
yes i know ._. srry for not
yes i know ._. srry for not making chapter right away, ill get to it later
Fri, 10/21/2011 - 19:40
#61
Im in.
Characters name - Goldtrimmer
Personality - Powerful, Heroic, brave
Equipment - Gran Faust, Divine Avenger, Levi Blade, Silversix, Vog Cub cap, Skolver coat, Volcanic Plate shield, x2 True Love Pendant, costume rose regalia gold
Other - no.
Fri, 10/21/2011 - 21:43
#62
thankyouthankyouthankyou
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Sat, 10/22/2011 - 07:37
#63
WHY?! plz no more
WHY?! plz no more applications ill accept you gold BUT PLZ NO MORE,
Sat, 10/22/2011 - 21:27
#64
Character update
I now wear Magic hood, spiral culet (costume), and horned owlite shield.
Sun, 10/23/2011 - 10:35
#65
Continueing chapter
K i continue
The line was getting shorter, soon it will be Dusk, then jm, then salamar. The knight at the front asked a few questions then gave you a job to do, or he might just make you go to one of the 3 battlefields. Apparently Dusk, was to stay in haven to defend any targets. Salamar was to go to the jelly kings palace and jm went to go to vanadukes.
Dusk
~~~
After a few hours of watching for potential attacks dusk got bored, so he looked around for something to entertain himself. He and another Knight called dallex. They made a game where one of them searched for an object, then the other one had to guess what it was. (I spy LOL) After a few games it got boring too. Dusk happened to turn his head a little and noticed they were alone. Panicked, he looked for the others. They where running toward some figures. Dusk realized they were under attack! He and dallex rushed in with the others. Wolvers and gremlins, he couldnt notice that until one of the wolvers nearly took his arm off. He slashed left, he hit one of the menders! The menders were the worst, healing all the other gremlins. Dusk's instincts told him to duck. He did. A wolver went sailing over him and hit dallex's blade. Dallex screamed somthing to dusk but he just hears," ST...! Be..hi...you!!!"The kinght next to him had his throat ripped out by a skolver, with 2 vog cubs behind it. They looked closely at dallex and dusk. Making a smacking noise, as if it was about to have a great meal, it turned from dusk....and headed straight to dallex! "NOOOOOOOOOOOO" dusk screamed. One of the vog cubs looked behind it, that was a good cahnce for dusk, he took it and smashed the vog cub. it lay slumped on the ground. But the skolver was now on dallex, him screaming and screaming, the skolvers huge jaws progressing toward his throat. Dallex knew he was done, gave in, and closed his eyes for the last time.
Next chapter: Jm at Vanadukes kingdom.
I think i did good at that chapter, what did you think?
Sun, 10/23/2011 - 10:39
#66
0_0. I don't know
0_0. I don't know
Sun, 10/23/2011 - 17:53
#67
trolololololololololololololo
trololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sun, 10/23/2011 - 19:29
#68
Jm
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Vanadukes kingdom was
Jm
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Vanadukes kingdom was a slaughterhouse. Knights gremlins, and wolvers dying everywhere. Occainsonally youll see one of vanadukes zombies, but the wolvers make quick work of them. Vanaduke himself was STROLLING around waving his blade here and there, killing dozens. he was enjoying himself ALOT. Unfortueately, Jm was put with a squad to take down vanaduke, with him was ancient and 20 other knights. They found vanaduke in an arena. Once the knights stepped in the arena, the gate slammed down, making sure no one would escape. They heard a scream. One of the knights was crushed under the gate, everyone watched as his eyes lost its light, they heard 2 more screams, apparently the gremlins/wolvers sent some infantry to take down vanaduke too, gates slamming down on their sides, and killing a wolver, and a gremlin. There were 21 knights. 12 wolvers 5 vog cubs, and 3 skolvers. There were 17 gremlins.Vanaduke, chuckling to himself, also seemed to say this to himself," AHAAHAHAHA! More things to kill, this will be fun!" He ran over to the gremlins, 1 slash from his weapon killed half of the gremlins leaving 8. The knights went forward, slashing at him wherever they could dodging his blade,after 17 minutes, there were 14 knights 9 wolvers 2 vog cubs 2 skolvers and 1 gremlin.Huffing and puffing vanaduke still kept slashing, this time crushing ancients leg. Trapped under the blade, ancient screamed furiously. Vanaduke twisted his blade causing even more pain.
Will continue tomorrow.
Mon, 10/24/2011 - 09:38
#69
Bit dark
Seriously, where am I? I hate NOT fighting!
Vana's sadistic sides shows after years of paranoia after becoming what he is now.
So there was haven,JK palace and Firestorm Citadel. Would be nice if for a finale they distroyed IMF and drove the Snarbolaxes to extinction Bit I want to do IMF!
Tue, 10/25/2011 - 20:39
#70
Write more!
I'm waiting!
Wed, 10/26/2011 - 14:15
#71
Sheesh, ok ill write a
Sheesh, ok ill write a little. LOL By the way atrum, u will be in next chapter.
Jm
~~~~~~~
Jm watched Vanaduke GIGGLING, as he twisted his blade around in ancient. That was enough for him. He sprinted over to ancient, trying to pull him away from the blade. Vanaduke saw the knight do this, he swung his blade at Jm, cutting him in half. As Jm layed there, he saw that because of his distraction, two knights pulled ancient away, from vanaduke. "good" he thought. Then he closed his eyes for the last time.
Will right more later.
Also, the conclusion of these battles will come later.
Wed, 10/26/2011 - 15:09
#72
where
when's the next post gonna be! i can't wait to see what happens next! wait.... never mind just read your new post.
Wed, 10/26/2011 - 17:45
#73
Bit dark
I want to go in the Grand Colony, Valiance blazing, clad in Almirian armour, dodging the fire that hurts me alot in that armour, Shielding with my own Crest of Almire and shoving my Cold Iron Vanquisher right into Tinkizhah's chest for paralizing me chapters ago. I could have died! Yes, I have finally settled on my arsenal it the one I described just now.
Wed, 10/26/2011 - 20:03
#74
been a while since i looked
been a while since i looked in this thread. time to update my stuffz.
Swords: Khorovod, Grintovec, Shockburst Brandish
Shield: Bristling buckler
Armor: Cobalt armor, magic hood. i think i have a cobalt helm. maybe i dont. just say i do.
wait a minute, i posted here 12 days ago. derp. thats still a long time.
Wed, 10/26/2011 - 20:56
#75
Salamar at Jelly King's palace.
Salamar WAS PUT AT JK'S PALCace (srrycaps lock and im too lazy to correct it :)) and it was hard. The moment you thought it was safe, a polyp would appear right under you and attack. And on top of all that, he was being followed by a wack named goldtrimmer. Every moment of the time he was saying,"I'm heroic powerful, and brave!" Salamar didn't say anything because if he opened his mouth, somthing would come out that would make Goldtrimmer cry. Finally, another knight stationed there named Electrodoom, played a prank. He did something to goldtrimmers voice box, to give him a high pitched voice. "Im heroic, powerful, and brave!" he said in a squeaky voice after killing a mini jelly. Everyone laughed. Even the jellies laughed! (Salamar didn't even know it was possible for jellies to laugh, let alone taLK) "Im heroic powerful and brave! Im heric powerful and brave!" He said over and over again. Salamar had to go on his knees and cough, to stop himself from laughing. Goldtrimmer finally got angry enough where he killed jelly, after jelly. After he killed the 3rd jelly, he stopped gasping for breath. "What? You can't even kill 3 jellies without suffocating?" a knight said. "STOP IT!" Goldtrimmer screamed. A flash of light blue appeared in salamar's vision. After the flash goldtrimmer had disappeared from where he had been. and he now was floating inside the body of the Ice Queen!
AtrumVindex
~~~~~~~~~~~
After a few weeks, atrumvindex finally left the hospital. His new arm attached, and everything else was ok. He heard a boom in the distance. The medic Revan had told him a war was going on. Atrumvindex wanted revenge against the gremlins. Unfortunately for them, he knew how to get it.
Thu, 10/27/2011 - 14:03
#76
No comments?
No comments? :(
Electrodoom
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Everyone stared as Goldtrimmer DISSOLVED inside the Ice queens body. After a minute he was gone. The Jelly King crawled up next to the ice queen. Together they looked twice as deadly. The Ice queen slid over a pack of wolvers, turning them to ice. The jelly king slid over a few knights and gremlins fighting. They had so much slime on them they couldn't move. Soon everyone started running away from the palace. As the knights got on the gate, they saw the Queen and king go into the throne room. On the other gate the gremlins and wolvers were also trying to go to the next level. One of the gremlins was grinning. Electrodoom looked back at the palace. He watched it blow up and light up the sky.
On the next level the battle resumed and everyone started dying again. Electrodoom cornered a gremlin and hit it with his fireburst brandish. the gremlin hit the ground covered in fire. Behind him 50 gremlins jumped on him. He got cut with all 50 swords. As the biggest gremlin was about to hot him again, Salamar drove his sword into the gremlins skull. Together they killed all 50 gremlins. The remaining knights all went to the gate to get to the next level. On the next level, they were greated by the rabid snarbolax.
Mon, 10/31/2011 - 14:34
#77
Atrumvindex, at Ironclaw munitions factory.
Atrumvindex told everyone about the new roarmulas twins he saw at Ironclaw. He, Revan, and Amerio with 10 other knights were sent to disable them. They finally got on the level with all the twins. " YIKES! That is a lot of roarmulas twins" Amerio said. Revan and Atrumvindex shut his mouth. "SHHH!!! We can't let any gremlins hear us!" Revan whispered. With that, they came to the first twin. Since Amerio wasn't a good fighter, he was sent to disable the twins with his knowledge. After an hour, he finally disabled the first twin. "Can't you go any faster?" Atrumvindex whispered to Amerio. "No, if i make a wrong move all of these twins will wake up. Then we'll be in trouble" he replied. After disableing another one, the trio heard some gremlins a few meters away." See?! Did you hear that?! It had to be a spiral knight!" the first gremlin said.
The secound one said" Maybe it is a spiral knight.... but shouldn't we call for backup?"
No! We could get promoted! And I think we could handle one knight! HAHAHA!!"
And with that they turned around the corner, and saw the knights. The gremlins screamed as all three of them slashed their swords. They slumped to the ground. A stange noise was coming from one of the gremlins. Revan went close and saw something stiking out of gremlin 1's pocket. This was something Revan had never thought gremlins had.... It was saying,"Trayl! Are you there?!" "Uh-oh. This is bad! They will be coming for us now!" Amerio screamed, "Let me try to get all the twins down at once! That way we could leave fast enough!" Atrumvindex and Revan nodded in agreement. It was the only way to get all of the twins disabled. After a few minutes, Amerio said" I got it! I did it!"
Then all the twins woke up.
They fled. They had just enough time to take the elevator back to haven. Revan noticed Amerio was shaking. "Hey, it's ok. We can still destroy all those twins" he said in a comforting voice. "It's not that im worried about" he replied.
Barely audible he said" I upgraded them......"
Tue, 11/01/2011 - 12:30
#78
Le Gasp!
Cool! I can't wait!
Tue, 11/01/2011 - 18:29
#79
weps update. now have a blast
weps update. now have a blast bomb.
Tue, 11/01/2011 - 19:29
#80
Wait..
I DIED?!
Wed, 11/02/2011 - 13:33
#81
LOLZ By the way guys, after
LOLZ By the way guys, after this fanfic ends, im going to make another fanfic called "Enter The Core"
Wed, 11/02/2011 - 19:25
#82
Lemme see.... I'm going to
Lemme see.... I'm going to list all the character names here so that I can look here to see what characters are left.
Goldtrimmer: DEAD
Jm: DEAD
Dallex: DEAD
Electrodoom: Still alive
Atrumvindex: Still alive (For now xD)
Will: Still alive
Trinodius: Still alive
Shadow: Still alive
Amerio: Still alive
Salamar: Still alive
Dusk: Still alive
Ancient: Still alive
Sir Shade: Still alive (In fact, have I even put him in a chapter yet?)
Thu, 11/03/2011 - 00:28
#83
What!!!
I'm going to die!! I better have a epic death scene taking all enermies with me IF I die...
Thu, 11/03/2011 - 04:06
#84
;A;
*Runs away crying*
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 17:51
#85
FINAL CHAPTER OF PART
FINAL CHAPTER OF PART 1
SOMEHOW everyone was in haven. The Snarbolax, Rabid Snarbolax, gemlins, wolvers, knights, Revan, Electroddom, Atrumvindex, Will, Trinodius, Shadow, Amerio ,Salamar, Dusk, ancient, and sir shade. It was chaos. Death here and there, the entire war, depending on this battle.
Revan
~~~~~~~~~~
"Shadow, look out!" Right as Shadow looked behind him, the blast from the gun puppy hit him square in the chest. He was still up though. "We have got to force them back!" Dusk screamed. " YEAH, WELL THEY SEEM TO BE USING THE SAME TACTIC!!!!" Salamar replied furiously. Revan screamed to Atrumvindex," RUN ATRUMVINDEX, RUN!!!!!" Atrumvindex obeyed, but he was to slow. The blast hit him, and his sword and armor, fell to the floor in a burning heap. Atrumvindex was gone. ( >:D )
Atrumvindex
~~~~~~~~~~~
In a bright flash, he no longer saw the battlefield. He saw that he was Under a tree, in the grass, with several ther stranger knights. He didn't think about them. He didn't care. All he wanted was to rest, and relax, and look at that pretty cloud up there.....
Amerio
~~~~~~~~
He stared in horror. As the heap of armor went to the ground, he saw that the blast came from one of the ROARMULAS TWINS that he had accidentily upgraded. Screams rang out as 20 of the twins were blasting every knight in sight. He watched as Trinodius, and Sir-sHADE was destroyed. The Rabid Snarbolax was killed by Ancient and 5 other knights, but one twin destroyed them. " Revan, everyones dying what can we do!!!!????? " I...I don't know!!!! I don't think theres any other thing to do but destroy the twins!!!" Revan said. They succesfully destroyed 5. By then only Revan, Amerio, Dusk, and Ancient were left. "AGGGGHHHHH!!" Ancient screamd as he was destroyed. There were only 5 other stranger knights left. Now 3. Now 1. Now It was just Revan, Amerio, and Dusk left. "NO! AMERIO!!!" This time Amerio had just enough time to dodge, but his leg disappeared. As Amerio lay there, silent, Revan ran over to cover him. That was a mistake. Amerio was hit by a twins blast and he too was now gone.
Revan
~~~~~~~~~
Now Revan was in his sights. But before they shot, Dusk pushed him out of the way. Together they took down 2 more roarmulas twins. Next to him , Dusk was hit. And now Revan was the last. After all twins gathered around. Revan saw his last glimpse of cradle before he too, was gone.
Afterwards
~~~~~~~~~~
All the gremlins killed everyone in haven. Now there wasn't a single spiral knight alive. The gremlins/wolvers have won.
NEXT!!!!! PART 2 ENTER THE CORE
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 19:40
#86
Yay happy ending
Yay happy ending
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 11:12
#87
Since all the characters in
Since all the characters in part 1 died, I will be accepting 4 more characters.( 5 if I'm in a good mood)
Please put down your:
Name:
Gender:
Personality:
Small Bio:
Other:
Anything else you want to include:
Race:
Of course I will be a Skolver. :D
Im looking forward to your applications and posts!
Sat, 11/12/2011 - 19:19
#88
Name: Necro
Gender:
Name: Necro
Gender: Male
Personality: Evil. Very evil. Has a profound interest in fiends. Breeds Greavers for a small army.
Small Bio: Used to be an ordinary Knight until he was infected by the Swarm. Under it's influence, he massacred a party of Knights in the clockworks. is now a highly wanted fugative. no one knows that he is infected by the Swarm; they all think that he just suddenly turned rogue.
As a normal Knight, however, he still bred Greavers.
Other: Has a small army of about 100 various Greavers
Anything else you want to include: Equipts include: Super blast bomb, khorovod, jalovec, cobalt armor + helmet, shockburst brandish, magic hood, bristling buckler.
Race: Spiral Knight
Sat, 11/12/2011 - 20:06
#89
Name: dawn
Gender:
Name: dawn
Gender: M
Personality: friendly , funny
Small bio: A knight that looks suspiciously like dusk... He was found two days after the massacre, unconscious in a graveyard. Surprisingly, none of the monsters seemed to want to attack him. It was almost as if they feared him o_o . He was known to practice fighting the roarmulus twins every chance he got until he was able to defeat them without breaking a sweat.
Other : trained medic
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 06:52
#90
Ok, actually, I would Like 3
Ok, actually, I would Like 3 spiral knights, and 2 other races(NOT gremlins!) Necro's a spiral knight, and duskfinder, you didn'y put down a race...
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 07:07
#91
It says in the bio .....
It says in the bio ..... Second word
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 12:59
#92
....
Poor me...
Can a clockwork creature join the knights?
If so, Here's mine:
Name: Charles RH Norris (prefers Chuck)
Gender: Male
Personality: angry,Tactical, Shifty,Moody, Revengeful, Cinical, Sarcstic
Race: Devilite Experiment(Mutated to be skilled is stealth, Power, IQ, Observation)
Bio: A janitor that worked in the coliseum,had a divorce and going through poverty and was about to kill himself, a group of elders of Devilites chose him to be mutated into a skilled assasin. He was a fan of Tinkinzar's plan of killing the Knights until it meant losing the money and entertainment of LD and BN. After the ''Battle of Intstance One'' (the Final Battle PT 1) Kroggmo and many devilites join the knights So they can see themselves kill each over in the Coliseum. He also had a knight who worked as his publisher for his story about his mutation called Atrumvindex (my character) who died during the battle and wanted to avenge him.
Equips: Almirian Crusader(the same armour as Atrumvindex), Pike that Deals split shadow, normal, Piercing and elemental Damage, Utility belt, Comm and scanner.
Other: Has killed 1000000 things in one day and set a record. He wears the pike on his leg, Using Roundhouse kicks
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 08:35
#93
My application
I suppose I could give this a shot
Name: Azure
Gender: Male
Race: Spiralian knight
Personality: A friendly kind of person. He is eager to assist any fellow knights and will always try a diplomatic solution to something. He usually acts as "the strategist". He is not very good at fighting but he makes up for it with the aforementioned traits.
Bio: Azure was never the sharpest tool in the shed. He was a great tactician yes, but the other knights believed in fighting skill and he was branded as a weakling. Despite how some of the knights shunned him, he will always try to help a fellow Spiralian. Soon enough, he had honed his skills and was recognized as a "real" knight. He is, however, still lacking in skill compared to most knights of his tier. Whenever he ventures into the clockworks or fights in King Krogmo's coliseum, he almost always acts as the brains of the team; as long as they actually listen to him.
When the attack on Haven began, he was inside a treasure vault. His party had went up to Haven already but he remained there to rest, oblivious of the carnage happening on the surface. When he decided to emerge, the battle was over and the streets were littered with bodies and discarded metal. He wanders the streets of Haven, searching for any survivors.
Additional info:
Equipment:
-Armor: solid cobalt helm and armor
-Weapons: Tempered calibur, Super blaster, Great defender
Interest: He has always been fascinated by the diverse life within the Clockworks. If the knights weren't so busy fighting them, he would've tried to get to know them better, without having to lock them in a cage.
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 12:00
#94
Btw Ive decided you can pick
Btw Ive decided you can pick any race evn a gremlin. Today I got an inspiration for the new chapter, and it will have a gremlin in it one way or another.
ATTENTION!!!!! All the characters in this part are the offspring of some of the characters in part 1! I would like all of you to put down whose child you are!! Thanks you.
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 12:11
#95
Dusk :B
Dusk :B
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 12:12
#96
Part 2 Chapter 1
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20
Part 2 Chapter 1
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20 years after the end of the Spiral war.
~~~~~~~~
"What in the name of Cradle is that!!!" The creature Blots was pointing at was not in any of the children's books for gremlins. It had slimes, Lumbers, wolvers, all of the creatures that lived on Cradle. But that thing, 15 yards from him was not supposed to be here. " What are you talking about?" his friend Bolts asked confused."Theres nothing there!!! Just scrap metal!" "But I saw it move! It looks like a robot! Not metal!" Blots said, hoping his friend would believe him. "Oh yeah? Well show me. It's just one of the robots they make in that Ironclaw factory. Maybe I can use it's metals to make something" Blots
looked at Bolts. Then at the strange robot. Then back to Bolts. He took a deep breath, "Ok, I'll go over there. But promise me you won't leave in case it attacks me." "HAHAHA!!!! Blots, that's the one thing robots aren't allowed to do, Hurt gremlins." Finally Blots found the courage to start walking towards the machine.
~~~~~~~~~
I will finish this chapter after I come back from dinner. Im not sure how long it will take.
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 13:00
#97
Wait!
My guy has been edited!
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 17:26
#98
Continuing Part 2 chapter
Continuing Part 2 chapter 1
~~~~~~~~~~~
As Blots got closer he sighed with relief. It was just one of those robots made from the Ironclaw factory. From the history books, Blots learned that the Ironclaw munitions factory was closed 20 years ago. The gremlin leader would not tell them why it was closed. Blots didn't even know what it was for. It was probably a secret that King Tinkinzar knew, and he didn't want to next generation to know about.
When Blots got closer to see if he could salvage any parts, he noticed something strange about this robot. It was wearing some sort of clothing...It was wearing an armor of some sort. Scratched into the armor was the word Cobalt. It must be the name of the armor Blots thought. And on it's head was a hooded kind of helmet... It also had a strange symbol on it.. Also, scattered around the robot were remains of some weapons Blots recognized. A Javolec..A super blast bomb..But the other things were unrecognisable. Blots kicked it's head. It made a clanking sound, but it wasn't hollow like all the other robots he read about.
"Hey Bolts!!!" Blots yelled. "This is a robot, like you said. But it's relly weird. Will you come to look at it?" "To scared to salvage it, huh? Well ok, I'll be there in a sec."
When Bolts got over to the robot he said, "Woah, what is that? You're right, it is strange. "Told ya" Blots snorted. A humming noise started emanating from the strange robot. "Woah, get away. When you kicked it, it might have triggered something that will make it explode." Bolts said, concerned for their safety. Suddenly, two lights started to form on the robot's face. "They look like eyes!" Blots thought aloud.
The robot started moving. Not getting up, but more like testing itself to check if it still worked.
Finally the robot got up, looking around it started to say," Where am I?" But it was cut short and just said," Where a....". It fell to the floor. "Hey! What did you do that for! If it was still working we could of used it as a slave robot, and show off to our friends!" Bolts complained. " Hey!! it was probably dangerous! See those weapon remains on the ground? It must have been made to assassinate!It might have killed us!" Blots replied furiously. A light started beeping on the robot. It showed some sort of cubes... Some of them were empty, but half were full. The robot got up once again, and said," Hey! Gremlins! I'll show you, you little.."
A squad of gremlins came up to them. They has hoses with gas coming out. The robot slumped to the ground. Blots, and Bolts vision was getting blurry..They felt themselves falling to the ground. When they closed their eyes they noticed the squad leader looking scared and angry.
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 17:34
#99
A short:
Hazy
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As the
A short:
Hazy
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As the gremlin squad started to pull the two gremlins and the spiral knight away to the jail, Hazy, the squad leader, was worried. How could a spiral knight still be alive? Their race was wiped out years ago. The king ordered all the gremlins after the war had ended, to not tell ANY of the next generation about the plauge of the spiral knights. As Hazy went to interrogate the spiral knight at the prision, she was unaware of the commotion behind her.
The swarm
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Watching the gremlin move away the swarm started to form into it's spiral knight host. As the tiny swarms formed into the molecules that made up the knight, they changed color too. Now the swarm looked exactly like its host. It sent a few swarmlings to form into the weapons the host once had. Finally ready, the Swarm started to walk to the host's prision.
Mon, 11/14/2011 - 19:34
#100
Woot! 100 post! And I'm
Woot! 100 post! And I'm accepting 1 more person! Now.
just trying to be polite since it's your fic