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An old outdated fanfic.
DAWN
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Dawn went to the part of the graveyard where all the graves were. Ok. Graves where EVERYWHERE! But in this place there seemed to be more then all the other parts of the graveyard combined. As he was going there, he looked to the right. It was the same old sight. Zombies and 1 or 2 phantoms were looking at him. Not attacking him. They were just watching. For the past 20 years they had looked at him like that. Dawn had guessed it was out of fear. He could be wrong of course, but he wasn't about to go and find out. He looked at the rest of the graveyard. A few yards away to the north-east was the spot he had first woken up all those years ago.... He could still see the imprint of his tiny body in the soil there. Before he got knocked unconsciousness he remembered that he was a trained medic, and that he was barely more than a baby when he was laying there. The only reason he actually survived was because of a kind gremlin outcast. Most outcvasts go to Emberlight but this gremlin felt more at home in the graveyard. He died 6 years ago. Thankfully he told Dawn all the secrets to live in the graveyard. Snapping out of his memories, he started again to the CoffinZone. The CoffinZone was a place where all phantoms eventually died. Sure, they can't be killed, but eventually age gets them. The CoffinZone also existed in another dimension. But thats a long story on how he found THAT out.
As he walked to the line between the dimensions he thought about how he yearned for some other spiral knights company. But he had heard his gremlin friend say something about their destruction, so he would forever be alone...
He crossed the line into the phantom zone. As soon as he crossed he heard a "hello?".
He ran toward the voice. Eventually he found something behind one of the phantom coffins.. It was a robot! A spiral knight!!!! Err...no... It wasn't a spiral knight. Well..maybe it was.. It was completely blue, it it kept saying," Hello? Hello?". He could make out some armor on it too.
It had a solid cobalt helm and armor. Maybe someone long ago left some kind of hologram here, and for some reason it activated? It was probably a recording he thought. But hey. He was curious. There was nothing below the image to indicate a hologram. He said to it, " Hello. Hello, hello, hello!!" He chuckled. After all these years being around zombies, he still maintained his sense of humour. The knight in the hologram stood silently. Then it yelled," Who is this!" " It is me. The almighty Dawn!" He couldn't help it. He grinned. "Dawn? Interesting... Are you a zombie?"
"Have you not heard me?! I am Dawn! The almighty Zombie lord! Of course im not a zombie you idiot! All zombies can say is," Moan.....".
"Blast! Enough joking around! Who or what are you?!" the hologram said clearly annoyed.
"Fine. My name is Dawn. And I'm the last living spiral knight. But but you can't be a spiral knight. Why do you make your image look like that?" The hologram knight looked stunned. His mouth wide open. Apparently he had been holding a sword, because he heard it clatter to the ground.
"Impossible!" the knight barked back. " I have to be the last living knight! I'm the only one being safe living in a treasure vault.... Let me give you a few questions only other spiral knights would know.
1. What is the name of the place the spiral knights lived in?."
That was easy," Haven" Dawn replied without hesitating.
"Hm...
2. I will only ask this question now since I have a limited amount of time. Who are th heroes of the spiral war?"
This was tougher. When Dusk was old enough, he found out that he was given a book listing spiral knight history. Stapled to the end of the book was the spiral knight war. He didn't study that as much, and he couldn't get it now, because he put it for safekeeping at MoorCraft manor.
He started listing them ," Revan..Atrumvindex...Amerio...Shadow....and Dusk...
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I will finish laterz..
Hooray, I got in too :D . By the way, do I still need to be the son of one of the original characters?
I suppose you don't NEED to, but it would fit in with the story i'm making.
Azure 5 hours before chapter 2
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After the Spiral was Azure found his home in a treasure vault. It was so very peaceful there and crowns spawned every day. Not that he needed crowns. They wouldn't help him in his building projects, and since only Spiral knights used them he couldn't buy anything with them. After the last 20 years, he's made a small house, a table, and all the other things needed in a life. Since Azure wasn't exactly a muscleman, it took 15 years to make the house. Just recently, he's started making technology to search for any other spiral knights. All the chromalisks he had been neighbors with said it was a foolish task, and there was no other spiral knights. The chromalisks didn't turn him in to the gremlins, because they wanted him to live, and the species with him. Anyway, the technology he recently made was a probe, so tiny, it could not be seen with the naked eye, He sent it to various parts of the clockworks with no luck. He finally checked the graveyard. It was stupid though. No knight could survive a day in the graveyard, let alone 20 years. As he searched the greveyard he saw a line passing through the graveyard as he got closer, he went through it. Everything went wrong.
He could not see where he was anymore. He also couldn't move the probe. He kept calling out hello? Until he finally heard a reply....
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This chapter was just so you know what Azure was doing for the past 20 years.
I haven't been getting very many comments....What can I do?
I apologize. My internets had some problems, so I haven't been able to post new chapters.
Please accept
Race:Knight
Name:Tails
Personality:Evil,Vindictive,Strong
Equipment:Vog cub set,Levitation blade,Grey Owlite shield,Argent Peacemaker
Other:As he was looking for infinite strength,Tails the knight was cursed with a pro and a con a ton of power for his personality turning upside down he accepted as evil consumed him he turned into one of the greatest strongest knights of all time!Also he is 25 years old
Um.. Sorry, but I'm not sure I can fit your knight into the story. I might be able to, but he'd die right away. >:)
Nah just don't put him in he was a horrible idea :P badly thought character is badly thought
Sorry, I had only room for 1 evil spiralknight, and I think Necro took it.
the title says it all but tails should still be greedy :P
Wow, really good! Bit short though... Here is mine if u wanna read it, http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/23652
name: Dyrus
gender: male
color: Blue
likes: Virus, genetic, when the plans come together
dislikes: anyone who touches his sample of virus
hobbies: Genetic mutation, Martial Art sparring, inventing a bio-chemical weapon
personality: keeps calm always, not easily aggravated, very patience, when somehow aggravated, doesn't stop until he killed all near him, whether they are friend or not. in other word, go berserk.
Due to his experiment, he bonded his DNA with various creatures DNA and few other viruses. Using these, he freely morphs his body to suit condition. when in berserk mode, he turns into chimera, its ur choice how he will look but there is a describtion in my fic. He is also a great strategist and always plans ahead. He hid himself in a stasis field in the Spiral War because he knew Spiral Knights couldn't win. He is still somewhere...hidden...safe(?)
Revan
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The leaves were a different color today. Instead of the normal lush of green, all the trees were the color of autumn. He looked around and saw the other people noticing it too. Revan walked up to Atrumvindex. "Hey Atrum!" Revan ran to him. " Whats going on?" "I don't know" he said. They turned and saw Amerio over by the water fountain. Dipping his metal hand into the water. As they walked toward Amerio , Amerio said," Do you feel it?" Revan and Atrumvindex glanced at each other and gave Amerio a questioning look. " Can't you feel it? We're gonna be free! I can feel it! I know it!" Amerio said, with a relieved look. "Free? From what?" Atrumvindex scoffed. "Theres nothing that we belong to! We are not prisioners!" Sighing, Amerio started to reply:
"Don't you remember how we got here?" a few other knights were gathering around, including Shadow, and Dusk. When Amerio said this a few of them looked at the place they've been for the past 20 years. The fountain as they called it, was in the middle of the place. Across from it was lush forest, with an abundance of trees, shrubs, and grass. The clouds in the sky were always moving. When they got to a darkened part of the forest, a brave knight went through it, and found himself at the other side of the park. The darkness was in such a place were it made a circle around their home.
"Do a single one of you remember how we got here" Amerio repeated. " Dusk raised his hand,"We got here because...uh..erm.. well we..hmm" he stuttered. "Well I remember a little" Revan replied. I remember a light coming toward me, it made me feel like it was taking me to a wonderful place. And here we are!" he raised his hands indicating the forest. "Yeah, but theres more! And I know how we can find out!" Amerio said with a grin. "Just ignore him everyone! This place and its wonderfullness must have shocked him again. Ignore his ramblings" Atrumvindex said. As everyone started leaving, Revan looked back. Amerio was taking some of the parts from the water fountain.
"Need any help?" Revan said smiling.
"sure" Amerio said." Get that part over ther" Amerio said showing him from the inside of the fountain.
Revan had no idea what they were making. But he knew that it was gonna do them some good.
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As you can see, they are still gonna be in the story, and they are VERY important.
Wait, so they are not dead? I am confused
Lol. They are dead. It's kind of like a Heaven type thing.
now haz flourish.
also, forget if I said this, but also haz super blast bomb.
HELP ME! Whose point of view should the next chapter be shown in? TELL ME NOW!
NEEDZ MORE COMMENTZ! (Turns into comment eating monster)
RAAWRRR!!!! Eats all commentz on this.
Same...I want an entrance too :'( I will put u into mine :D
Charles RH Norris
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Work, work, work..Thats all he had done for the past 5 days. His devilite boss found out he had been slacking off, and had been taking more breaks. That was not acceptable behaviour for a devilite. 20 years ago, after the knights lost the Spiralian war,(Spiral war for short) he had been working overtime. Because King Krogmo and the Devilites had been aiding the knights they were exiled to the only places devilites could be found. The drudgeries. The gremlins ruled everthing now. Lumbers, wolvers, kats, chromalisks, and many others had sided with the gremlins. The only ones who hadn't were the Devilites, and the monsters found in graveyards. The strangers were wiped out along with the Spiral knights.
Two months ago, Charles RH Norris stumbled across a spiralian camp. Taking a closer look, he assumed it had been deserted when the spiral knights were all killed. But just as he was about to leave, he saw movement. Just a flash of blue. Going into stealth mode, Charles blended in with his surroundings.
Charles was involved in a devilite experiment, long before the war. It involved A mixture between a devilite, (Charles) and a chromalisk.( MR. CHROMA)
In the experiment, something went wrong, and Mr. Chroma was killed. The devilites didn't care though because it had worked on Charles. He could now blend into his surroundings, and he had some other traits the chromalisks had.
Although the Devilite Scientists said that Mr Chroma had been killed, sometimes Charles heard a voice in his head talking to him. Turns out, it was Mr. Chroma. He was living in Charles body, with noting to do but observe what Charles saw. He never told any of the scientists of course.
At the spirilian camp, Charles sat by a hut. He waited a few hours to see if there was any more movement. After a few hours, he spotted a figure heading to the hut. Charles just barely stopped himself from gasping. It was a spiral knight. A blue one. It must be the one he saw earlier. Than an evil thought creeped into Charles mind: If he caught the knight and sold it to the gremlins he would be rich!!! Then he remembered Atrumvindex and remembered that he would sacrifice his life for a spiral knight.
The blue spiral knight went into the hut. Observing it, Charles saw it doing things all spiral knights did before the war. Collecting minerals. Charles looked behind him and saw another spiral knight. It looked like it was very young. As it passed to go somewhere else, Charles could have sworn that it looked directly into his eyes. '
When he focused his attention back on the knight in the hut, he heard a,"hello" and saw that a sword was at his throat.
ME NEXT! ME NEXT! wait. I am not even confirmed...
Dyrus, what exactly are you? From what I read I think you're saying that you are a knight that can morph into various monsters?
If you are i'm not sure I can fit you into the story.
Basically, yeah, but I mainly, I am a virus researcher who survived from the War. I don't NECESSARILY have to be a guy who can morph into carious monsters, but surviving knight factor is real important. I am sure you can fit that in, you are good at writing stuffs. Just start off with me waking up and moving around and do stuffs
Atgatg can do whatever she wants with her/his story
It's her now. Mr brother has gotten lazy and now I do his fanfic. xD
First a him, then replaced by a her?
IT DOESN'T MAKE SENCE!!!!!!!!
I can't wrap my head around it, when?
BTW, I lost internet from thurs and got it back today(Damn you AOL).
I've been doing this fanfic ever since it got good. xD
Sorry about the hold up guys. This chapter is about my character:
Petunay
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"Ugh" I said. For breakfast I was getting something I couldn't even recognize as food. AGAIN. That was enough to get the gremlin watching me to throw his fist at my face. It made a cracking noise. "You ungrateful brat! Be thankful we give you food!" the gremlin snapped at me. "Oh thats food you've been giving me?" I joked. "I thought you were feeding me melted owlite feathers." He threw another fist at me. I was knocked down to the floor. "I don't even know why we keep you!" he said. "You are no use to us. And if you keep cracking at those jokes we WILL start feeding you owlite feathers!" He tugged on the chain in his hand. It went from his hand to my neck. They could easily choked me to death, as I found out when I first got here. He put the chain in his hand on the wall. It seemed to magically meld to the wall so that it could not be removed. Therefore, I could not escape. He slammed the door on his way out. I muttered to myself as a fell asleep.
I could not remember how long it has been.But I do remember when and how they caught me. After the destruction in Haven, I went on the elevator and went down. As I got to the first level I saw that gremlins with jetpacks had followed me. I quickly ran and ran until I reached the end of the depth. I slipped an fell into the clockworks.
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The rest of the depths were a blurr. I finally saw the core platform. It was rushing toward me at great speed, and slowly the speed had decreased greatly. I realized that a gremlin had caught me and we were now hovering. I looked at the gremlin and gasped. He looked terrible. Countless battle scars on his face and neck. A big wound next to his eye. And his fur was almost completely black. He snarled at me, and he was about to throw me into the core. As I braced myself, I heard the gremlin talking into his radio. I looked at him with my eyes. I tried to make them look as terrified and innocent as possible. He snarled and started to hover over to his gremlin comrades. On the platform Petunay saw the limp and bloodied bodies of the spiral knights who stood guard at the core. One of them was alive. He looked at her fearfully and closed his yes pretending to be dead. That didn't fool the gremlins for a second. The gremlins dispatched him with ease. As the gremlins regrouped they all looked at me with curiosity. "What did you bring the shrimp for, Haze?" one of them asked. "Orders from King Tink." Haze replied. "I'm guessing we're gonna test on it or dissect it or something." They headed into the unknown with her.
As Petunay watched silently she wondered what was going to happen to her.
Still no posts? I feel like the most unread fanfic in the treasure vault......
Give me your posts!!!
Haze
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Haze watched as the gremlin scientists looked at the spiral knight. They have not been seen for 20 years. Theory was that a gremlin party had taken the knight down, but didn't completely destroy it.They found this in the scrap piles, that would explain how it had survived. Nobody would be snooping around there to look. The two young gremlins found at the seen had been looking for scraps, and coincidently activated it. They had to wipe their memories so they would never remember. The knight looked torn apart. It had many scars left on it. It looked familiar.... It had a small resemblance to the knight who had given Haze the scar on his face. The knight who had given the scar also burned Haze, making the fur black.
"Sir" a gremlin said to Haze. "We are ready to destroy the.... thing." No gremlins who knew of the knights would be killed if they even mentioned the spiral knights.
"Proceed" Haze said. The gremlins started to take the knight apart, they could also look at the amazing technology that spiral knights were made of. They could make amazing new robots!
Before one of the gremlins even pulled on the knight, an alarm started blaring through the prison.
"ATTENTION!" The Intercom blared. "ALL GREMLINS TO SOUTH ENTRANCE OF PRISON, IMMEDIANTLY!!!"
As Haze got to said place, she saw a... Spiral Knight!!!!! It looked just like the knight they were about to tear apart! To make sure, Haze went back to the room they were keeping the knight.
It was still there.
Haze heard a scream behind him. The copy of the knight was standing in the doorway with a gremlin at it's feet.
"Wha..What are you?!" Haze stammered. Another gremlin launched itself at the knight. The knight quickly turned around and snapped it's neck. The gremlin went limp and slumped the the ground. The thing made a strange noise that later would be identified as a laugh.
It sprinted forward and paraylized Haze with a powerful punch. It must have assumed Haze was dead. Haze watched the thing look at the knights body. Suddenly, it turned into a black ball of energy and somehow went Inside the knight.
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Necro
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Necro jerked awake. "No...." he thought. He could tell the swarm was inside him. He watched as the swarm took over his body and started to leave this place.
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The next chapter will be really good! Keep the comments coming!! :D
Thanks Necro for giving me your post.
(Eats post) (Grows 100 feet tall)
This chapter will be a mix of almost all characters.
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Necro/The Swarm
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Necro/Swarm walked out of the prison. After testing it's strength smashing a few walls it became confident enough to start exploring the clockworks. But where first? "The graveyard." it thought to itself. There he would have peace to make a plan. Things were different in this age. The plans had to change. Lots of the plan. With that, it ran of the platform and fell down into the clockworks.
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Dawn
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Dawn heard a thump. By the sound of it, it had to be less than a mile away. He turned back the the hologram thing and said, "I have to go, I heard something strange." "OK, well hurry back then!" the knight in the hologram said. He appeared to be very excited.
Dawn ran about 20 yards before he saw it. There was a clearing in front of him, so it was easy to see far away. It was a robot of a sort... "Maybe another spiral knight he thought." That gave him a boost and he was before the knight in seconds. It definitely WAS a knight. "Hello?". The knight didn't move. Then it started to get up. " Whoa! Let me help you! How did you get here?" Dawn questioned. As Dawn reached his hand to help the knight up it took his hand the knight squeezed to hard that Dawn thought he was going to break his arm. "Stop! Stop it!" Dawn yelled frantically. The knight threw him at least 3 yards away then jumped after him. It had a Javolec in it's hand and he swung it at Dawn's head. Dawn jumped back but it hit his chest. Dawn looked down. Wires were protruding from it and a few other damages. Dawn kept fending off his attacks but he overpowered him. Dawn put his shield up and the Javolec punched a hole through it. He swung at the attackers arm. He missed and the price was a finger. It made a buzzing sound as it fell to the ground. Dawn screamed in pain. He had to get away. If he could lose the knight, he could hide in the Phantom Zone. He sprinted to the coffins. As he walked over them zombies popped up and slowed the attacking knights progress. Finally, about 30 zombies were biting at the knight. Taking advantage of this, Dawn sprinted to his hiding place.
When he returned to the hologram he saw the knight in it on the ground bleeding.
2 Depths above
Same time as Dawn heard the thump
Azure
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Through the device Azure heard the knight say he had to check a noise he heard. As Azure waited he thought about this discovery. "An actual Spiral Knight!" He thought. " I'm not alone. I wonder if ill be able to meet him....."
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Im going to finish later. Srry.
should make an equipt checkup
Amor: Solid Coblat amor, 3 cobalt helms (all for sale), wolver coat with UV freeze medium (also for sale), magic hood
weaps: Jalovec, khorovod, super blast bomb, shockburst brandish, flourish
shield: bristling buckler
Azure
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While he was thinking about it, he walked around. A thump sounded behind him. A knight was standing on the ground. A crater was around him.
"Could this be the one I just talked to?" Azure thought. "Hello, are you____" The knight smashed into him, and again, and again. Azure had to get away.
He ran into the house. The knight smashed down the house.
He used the powder he made that made him invisible.
The knight found him anyway.
Azure jumped off the platform.
The knight caught him by the leg.
It threw him a great distance. Running was useless now, he was too fast. Azure swung a fist at him, but the knight caught his arm in his hand and started crushing it. Blood was coming out of him now. The knight hit the side of Azure face, then at his legs. Azure blocked an attack and tripped the knight. "I can still win this" He thought. He found his sword in the ground. He grabbed it and swung it behind him ripping a chunk from the knights face. The knight destroyed his sword with his bare hands. Azure punched the knights face, but then his twisted his hands in an akward position.
"Enough" it said. It threw a punch that knocked him out. He heard the knights footsteps leaving, and then silence.
Petunay
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So now I'm being held in some gremlin facility. They do tests on me so that they can find out how to upgrade their robots. I was in a single room with a bed and a desk with a pen and paper. The walls were dusty and had cobwebs, the floor was the same. I guessed they used it as a cell once. Sometimes a hear a scratching noise from the wall. My guess is that it comes from a wolver. I began to draw a picture of Haven. In it, there was a happy stranger in the auction house, and 2 knights. One with a wolver set, and the other with a cobalt set. There were at least 3 snipes there too.
When I finished, I realized I was an excellent drawer.
I sat on the bed thinking for a moment.
BAM!!!
The wall to the left of my cell collapsed. I saw a knight there! It had a solid cobalt armor, and a magic hood. It looked at me for a moment, then ran forward and ran into the wall.
It was gone.
Immediantly a siren went off. It said, "ALL GREMLINS ON DUTY GO TO CELL 438 NOW! WE HAVE A HOSTILE HEADING WEST!!!"
They would be coming so I had to hurry. The holes made an excellent escape route. I went in the one that exited the prison, the other one went deeper inside of it. I jumped out of the hole. When I landed I sprinted as fast as I could. I heard gremlins close behind so I went faster. I saw some scrap metal with a hole in it. I could hide inside! Hopefully none would notice. When I jumped into the hole I realized that I had just gone down a depth. Before it got out of reach, I grabbed the platform. I was hanging there for a few minutes.
Some gremlins came close to the scrap and said into a radio, "Subject has escaped, repeat, subject has escaped."
An angry voice from the other end said, "Find it! No matter what the cost! We Can't have it escape and roam the clockworks."
Has my last once of strength fled, I fell into the depth below. "And just my luck." I thought. It was a graveyard.
=D
GImme more chapters! Although that comment is somewhat hypocritical since I don't give you guys any chapters for my storeis anymore. =( I really should start writing again. I'm spending most of my free time on these forums instead of writing.
I love my character. SO evil. =D Although it is the Swarm that's possesing me. It's still awesome.
I'm reading '?'