Spiral Knights - Yet Another Fanfiction

Yet Another Fanfiction

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Sun, 10/09/2011 - 18:43

Xairathan

I'm bored. Zetta-Lux's fanfic thingy hasn't gotten updated in a while, so I'll just go ahead and say this: I'm writing a fanfic. And, like many other writers out there, I'm accepting character submissions. Please follow the following (lol) format:

Edit: I've just got the best idea! Feel free to make your character a (wait for it) MONSTER FROM THE CLOCKWORKS! /applaud

Example:
Name: Critias
Gender: Male
Color: Between light and regular Blue
Personality: Timid, but he can be brave if he has to. (Please write a better description than this >.>)
Hobbies: Looking for dragons, befriending love puppies, and chasing Snipes.
Goal in life: To enter the Core
(the following is optional)
Weapon(s): Blazebrand, Electron Charge
Armor: Wyvern Scale Mail
Helmet: Dragon scale Mail

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 18:54

Nechrome

dang. i already have like 7

dang. i already have like 7 characters all in different stories. im losing track. actually, I already lost track.

Name: Maximus
Gender: Male
Color: Red and dark green
Personality: A loner, but works okay with others. Enjoys smashing Zombies, Devilites, and any construct except gun puppies and lumbers. Unless the lumbers with a Khorovod Charge
Hobbies: Smashing stuff, looking for secret passages in depths for extra treasure, breading Greavers.
Goal in life: Not die.
Weapons: Khorovod, Jalovec, Electron Charge, 3* shock brandish, Snarby Shield.
Armor: Cobalt Armor
Helm: Cobalt helm.

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 19:35

Duskfinder

Name: Dusk Gender: male Color

Name: Dusk
Gender: male
Color : Orange
Personality: who has little patience but is nice to his friends . Keeps to himself most of the time .
Hobbies: fighting. getting treasure.
Dislikes : wolvers .
Weapons: acheron, gigawatt pulsar, volt driver, bolt brand
Armor: grey feather mantle
Helm: divine veil
Shield: grey owlite shield

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 20:15

Doggies

Hmmm

name: Amber
Gender: female
Color: red and pink, just look at my profile picture.
Personality: is kind to everyone minus robots. Doesnt like killing animals.
I couldn't decide to make a monster or knight so amber is a were Wolver.
In Wolver dens, she transforms into a teir 3 alpha Wolver. P.s. Still retains gender when a Wolver.
Hobbies: snipe following, chatting with wolvers in were Wolver for, Waffles, and collecting gel cores and thunder balls.
Dislikes: robots, knights who don't like wolvers.
Weapons: Tempered caliber x2, and a deconstructer bomb.
Shield: brute jelly shield.
Armor: Dusker coat not made from a actual Dusker, Dusker cap also not made from real Dusker

Edit: she doesn't have to hate dusk, she just doesn't really like all the knights that don't like wolvers, not just dusk.

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 20:09

Xairathan

Dang...

Wow, what a plot. So we've got a timid Knight, a Werewolver at odds with a fellow Knight, and a Knight gone solo! I can't wait to write this... keep it up!

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 20:19

Doggies

She doesn't know dusk.

can you please make it so that she doesn't already know dusk. Make it so that she figures it out. Please. When are you going to post a chapter.

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 20:22

Xairathan

@Doggies

Okay, I'll make that come true. I'll probably post a chapter every few days (I *do* have schoolwork >.<), and this will go on hiatus for November because I'll be writing my novel in 30 days challenge at that time. After that it should (hopefully) be pretty regular if I get enough character entries

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 20:33

Lestatshadow

Name: Lestat shadowGender:

Name: Lestat shadow
Gender: Male
Color: dark red/crimson and black
Personality: a loners wondering the clockworks dark and mysterious (a lone ranger) but great at solving problem when the time call for it.
Hobbies: take up point and snipping Silkwing when they fall into his sight's or blind sighting Ironclaw Mender when there back are turned
Goal in life: to reach the core and discover the secret it's holds.
Dislikes: being given orders, being spotted buy a group of Greaver (ffffuuu... hate's Greaver)

Weapon(s): He's a gunslinger so nothing but the best guns argent peacemaker, Polaris, hail driver and blitz needle
Armor: vog cub coat with ghostly aura
Helmet: nameless hat (black) with a toasty pipe in the corner of his mouth.

hope this character will be usual to you. I would love to see him in you story

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 20:36

Xairathan

Roles

Alright, I'm getting a sense of what I'm going to do. It'll be (non-continuous) short stories involving characters, but some of the events will connect (such as
Amber discovering Dusk's dislike of Wolvers, etc.)

If you want your character to do anything special (i.e. be paired with anyone, get killed, get kidnapped, kick Vanaduke's butt, etc.) please let me know ASAP so I can configure the plot! Thank you!

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 20:46

Lestatshadow

Well if he could be in some

Well if he could be in some sort of dark cave/tunnel or something when he picks up a load of movement on a scanner "there are robots after all" a bit like in the alien movie with the motion tracker thing its pitch black where he is slowly surrounded my greaver moving in all around him with a massive fire fight kill as many as he can going out in a blaze of glory lol

i leave it up to you if he die or survivor?

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 20:49

#10

Xairathan

Blaze of Glory...?

Alright, I'll keep that in mind. On the other hand, here's the link to the new story!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TsR9xdRRDixSwtj-l7Td_tQsgD2AUL6RvTz9...

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 21:02

#11

Lestatshadow

im eagerly readying along and

im eagerly readying along and WOW this is amazing im love what im reading.

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 21:40

#12

Silvalkyriana

XAIRBEAR!!! <3

Name: Silvalkyriana "Silva" or Silvy or Silv or Sil or some other nickname. She has TONS.
Gender: Female (tomboy)
Color: Indigo! A color thats not completely blue or completely purple... WHICH IS IT?
Personality: Very outgoing, and definitely loves to laugh. Focuses on supporting the guild, team, and friends before herself. Does tend to get a little clutzy/random/spastic. Very funny (or at least she hopes).
Hobbies: Making horrible nicknames for people. Hugging. Laughing. Joking. Thwacking monsters. Introducing herself to strangers. Yelling. Spinning.
Goal in life: To befriend every knight on SK. And to solo all the bosses. To get into the fountain in town square and visit the GM headquarters that lies underneath.
Weapon(s): Final Flourish, Leviathan, Shivermist Buster, and Wrench Wand. (also equips the 3 star flamberge for those unfortunate DC'ed people)
Armor: Skolver
Helmet: Mercurial with a flower! (and a Magikat hat in here dreams)
Shield: An Owlite
Likes: Cake, poking, hugging, smiling, spinning, friending, making a complete and utter fool of herself.
Dislikes: Beggars, lag, having no shield when u REALLY need a shield. Dying (DUH). tripping. greavers.

PET!
MR. Snorlax the sleeping quicksilver lichen!
LIKES: to sleep. and to shock silva awake when she sleeps.
DISLIKES: not sleeping and being dragged around with her owner silva. and being hugged.
color: silver
goal in life: to become a huge quicksilver colony
gender: currently unknown.....

hehe xair i based it off myself sorta.... XD cant wait to read it!

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 21:32

#13

Xairathan

WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVEN-

SILV! BAD SILV! BAAAAAAAAD SILV!

anyways, first two or three pages are up. Be prepared for Character-Intro-Fest.
*sigh*

...I'm totally not paying attention in class tomorrow

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 21:38

#14

Silvalkyriana

XD I know u laughed!

and im good. ur bad xairbear!

AND U TOLD ME TO CHECK IT OUT!

you should have known id post.

and where are these pages??!?!?1

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 21:41

#15

Xairathan

Above

Link is in post 10, Silvy... pay attention, you, or Alen's never gonna be yours.

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 09:03

#16

Vanillateddy

MEEE TOOO PLEASE!!

Name: Teddi

Gender: Female

Color: Light blue

Personality: Quiet, mainly because she got cursed and it affected her voice and can no longer talk, she can only manage to mew or nyan like a mewcat everynow and then (maby Amber can understand her), but acts Very silly. Loves Mewcats and even owns one. Sometimes has problems with Wolvers that chase her and her Mewcat but doesnt realy hate them. Like's to play with the cute monsters in Sk and all the Snipes.

Hobbies: Wearing the dangerous things in Sk like Chaos set, eating Gel cores on toast, looking up at the dark sky inside the core, chasing Snipes and her favorite activitie of befriending mewcats. Likes to run around pokeing people and trying to get them to say hello to her mewcat.

Goal in life: To get her voice back.

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Weapon: Gran Faust and barborous thorn blade.
Armor: Chaos cloak
Helmet: Chaos cowl with Fancy Vertical vents.
Shield: Royal Jellie Shield

Non- Attack Based Pet.
Basically meaning that she doesnt want it coming with her and fighting by herside.

Mewcats (she has many).
Personality: Quiet and cute.
WHat do they do?: They wait for the return of Teddi, so that they get fed their catnip pouches and gelcores. Usualy sleep in Teddi's guildhall.
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Sorry for such a late update. the Pet was just an adition to put in so you know shes like a mewcat lover and brings them home with her if she finds one and will take care of it protecting them from the newbs of the game that think thier bad..

I also fixed alot of spelling errors i cant stand seeing spelling errors.
Also fixed her name for you.
Also put in a plot twist in with amber in the personality.
Hope it helps.

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 21:44

#17

Dragaroth

well.... hasnt scarred me yet. thats good

so I might as well put a potential character out there
Name: Roth
Gender: Male
Color: Light blue and a dark crimson red
Personality: multiple. 1) outgoing and helpful, loves a new problem to solve, and new people to meet. 2) quiet, unsocial, dangerously violent
Hobbies: 1) puzzle solving, friend making 2) the death of kats
Goal in life: 1)To find a solution to his duality, 2) to find... something
slight backstory: after entering the old owlite academy, his team was wiped out by Grimalkins, and he himself barely escaped. ever since the incident he has shown a split personality, alternating at random between his former light-hearted self and a darker personality seeking desperately for some artifact. He has been seen arguing with himself on multiple occasions.
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thats two Grimalkin things within an hour of each other... I have a problem. well, I put him out here because the artifact that dark! Roth is looking for would be up to you, that means messing around with any connection to Owlite, Grimalkins, etc would fit however you want it to... just sayin.

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 21:46

#18

Silvalkyriana

ALENS MINE!

omg just to add onto my silvy character, u and i are both fighting for alen, you or some other person idk. but ya

oh and i saw the link... i just forgot about it.......XD

yes im a forgetful psh

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 21:48

#19

Xairathan

Uh...

Okay, Vanilla and Dragoth will be added at a later time as current Wolver Den capacity is filled. See you two in Haven! and SILV, ALEN IS TOTALLY MINE WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!

(btw, alen = Critias)

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 22:00

#20

Vanillateddy

Cool.

Love the story by the way its realy good.

Full of detail and even gave me goosebumps for a while.

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 22:54

#21

Espira

Xairbear! <3

Name: Espira (Mainly referred to as Espy)
Gender: Female, but a Tomboy
Color: Dark Blue
Personality: Hates all things girly (like pink, bows, flowers, butterflies, purple, etc.), dresses like a cowboy, usually pretty nice until you get to know her, then she teases you all the time. Very klutzy/blonde, and forgets things easily.
Hobbies: Teaming up with Silv to make horrible nicknames, hugging, spinning, and eating.
Goal in life: To see a party of GM's in the middle of the fountain.
Weapon(s): Argent Peacemaker, Polaris, and a Divine Avenger (just in case). Sometimes can be found wandering around with her Antigua.
Helmet: Nameless Hat
Shield: Grey Owlite
Likes: Mustaches, food, Pokémon, cowboy stuff, spinning, hugging, pigtails, and smashing flowers.
Dislikes: Girly things, not being able to get to the fountain, and Basil when he doesn't have the recipes she wants.

PET!
Espeon the Electrolisk.
LIKES: To eat and steal Espy's vials/health capsules/remedies
DISLIKES: Espy's bossiness and all the hugs he gets.
Color: A dark grey with bright light blue spot/stripe things.
Goal in Life: To escape from Espy.
Gender: Male

Lol just kidding Xair. Blame Silvy.
<3

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 23:00

#22

Silvalkyriana

nuuuuuuuuuuuu dont blame me! Its a great character and pet

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 23:14

#23

Xairathan

Omai

This is gonna be quite the party... I should totally throw in my own avatar and then the 3 of us Jempirians can fight over Critias

Sun, 10/09/2011 - 23:42

#24

Vanillateddy

note

lol i love how you put the reminder note right in the story xD...

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 04:30

#25

Duskfinder

I think u misunderstood me when I said I had little patience and now every one hates me :'(
Also 50k cr is not much but its still not broke.

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 04:36

#26

Duskfinder

Silvy is going to have

Silvy is going to have trouble befriending me so she can never fulfill her goal in life.unless u change my character or I DIE O_O

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 09:05

#27

Vanillateddy

Updated Teddi

Hey i updated Teddi's character being i sort of rushed it in being i wasn't sure if you still had open spot when i posted xD.. but yah new update.

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 12:35

#28

Koi-Wa-Sensou

Xairathan

Hey this is Xairathan's non-Steam user. I'm typing from school, and I'd just like to state that:

@Dusk: Sorry. It's kind of hard to have a story progress without some form of antagonism

@Teddi: Like I said, the spots for Short Story 1 are filled. However, all introduced names will appear in a cameo at the end of Story 1, and Story 2 will hopefully include the newer repetoire of characters as well as the ones from 'Light into Dusk'. \

Thanks for reading and keep the submissions up!

~Xair

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 12:36

#29

Koi-Wa-Sensou

Double Post

Fail Double Post. Disregard this.

~Xair

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 15:50

#30

Duskfinder

how do we know ur not an

IMPOSTER??!!!

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 17:20

#31

Silvalkyriana

@Duskfinder

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!

u and i are going to friends i can jsut sense it in the near future.. no matter how much refuse! XD

and can we have my character like run around on fire? and then die? cuz that happens all the time..... jkjkjk <3

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 18:51

#32

Duskfinder

lolololololol

Also can I have a pet too?
Snarby Jr. ( mini snarblox)
Likes : eating jello, sleeping , me
Dislikes: constructs
Color : crimson and black
Goal in life: becoming a boss
Gender: male

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 19:07

#33

Vanillateddy

XDD

i can see that this will become a realy fun thread indeed.

Now give me some gel core for my toast.

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 19:43

#34

Xairathan

Blargle

I am Koi-Wa-Sensou, and I approve this message.

...plot blocks are blocky. NOW! PART 3 OF YOUR ADVICE! NAME SOME SHORT STORY PLOTS FOR ME. OR DIE. >8D

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 20:40

#35

Vanillateddy

Okay well....

Okay well... i can put in a tidbit.. how about Teddi is in a haunted passage way hanging out with all the mewcats camping out in that area when some of the characters come along and find her.
She obviously likes haunted stuff... i mean cmon Chaos gear? idk go from there i guess.

Mon, 10/10/2011 - 21:38

#36

Silvalkyriana

PLOT??? YAY

so um i think itd be so much fun

to have kinda like a mini story for each character

so perhaps have silvy attempting to befreind people but then getting pushed into a fountain and finding gmland

and maybe have everyone reach their goals but it was a dream in a dream in a dream in a core in a vog coat in a trojan in a fire in a water ballon in a etc

idk actually

just some humorous side tales to highlight each character and better develop them wiht some history

ya know?

or perhaps the misfit adventures: flashmobs, trolling, and dance partys

hahahah XAIRBEAR!!!! <3

OH AND PERHAPS A PET ADVENTURE? WHILE THE OWNERS ARE AWAY THE PETS COME OUT TO PLAY!??!?!

AHHAHA

IDK

but yes i definitely want to explore the clockworks and chance upon a cult of mewkats and rare monsters.... partayyy

oh and what was part 2?????

lol sorry for my rant....

Tue, 10/11/2011 - 02:00

#37

Dragaroth

the more I read it

the more unhinged I think amber is. She really is crazy, a well-intentioned extremist I'm sure, but her demeaner, the way she speaks, her ideas, everything hints towards someone quite crazy, and VERY fixed into their ideals. those kind of people extremely worry me.....

Tue, 10/11/2011 - 16:49

#38

Xairathan

Plot Twist

...there's a method to my madness, Dragaroth...

Thu, 10/13/2011 - 03:23

#39

Duskfinder

Sat, 10/15/2011 - 10:27

#40

Dragaroth

Xair

I never denounce your madness, I just worry about the character. I have no idea what your planning for her but I have no doubts it will be good.

Sat, 10/15/2011 - 21:00

#41

Vanillateddy

derp :D

Sat, 10/15/2011 - 23:11

#42

Toastyspiralknight

Myself

Name:Toastyspiralknight(duh)

Gender:Spiral knight

Colour:red

Pensonality:Couragous,Smart,Very kind(Doesn't donate unless if its geniune).Not bossy and has a pretty good relation with a friend called Clokmaster

Equipment:All of my equipment belongs to the cobalt set.Currently I have a 4* helm and the rest is 3*

Goal in life:Discover the truth of the clockworks and reach the core to repower skylark.

Likes:Kats(Which tend to bite me),Snipes,Skylark and friendly knights

Dislikes:Hostile knights.Agressive creatures.Punch and vise(I suspect they are spies)and energy(It cuts down to a limit to how much I can discover)and people who wear wolver coats(Due to endangering wovlers)

Pets:???

Story:Survior of the skylark crash.I was a young knight but then After going to haven.Clok took me up as a knight with hope.I am now a proud CO-gulid master of golden knights and I know alot of history.I also deal with hostile knights(Which includes roth for having a dangerously violent behavior)and cruel mean knights.

ZEE END.

Mon, 10/17/2011 - 14:29

#43

Xairathan

ARGHABLAGLEBLAGLE

as the post says, ARGHABLAGLEBLAGLE!

My internet is down! I'm using a relative's laptop at the moment. So sorry, I'll be writing, but the fanfic will have to wait. Darn internet connections. AT&T = Xairafail

Sorry guys

Mon, 10/17/2011 - 15:52

#44

Vanillateddy

haha at&t

SUX....

But hey i dont think many people are realy that worried about it so dont worry everything will fit in place sooner or later take your time..

Derp :D.

Mon, 10/17/2011 - 22:17

#45

Shadow-Arcanus

character

name: Sir Shade

gender: male

color: yellow

likes: machinery, gremlins

dislikes: monsters, obnoxios people

hobbies: inventing things, dissembling the clockworks, conversing with gremlins

personality: keeps to self, loyal, a tinkerer

arsenal: wild hunting blade, polaris, grey owlite shield, mercurial mail (wolver cloak), mercurial helm (magic hood)

Sat, 10/22/2011 - 02:08

#46

Dragaroth

Xairathan.

you either need to post an update stating where you are at in the writing process, or just admit you have decided to let the project die. either or. I won't revive this thread again if you don't take some sort of action buddy

Tue, 10/25/2011 - 18:14

#47

Mentro

id like to add my character

id like to add my character but ive already got a couple of characters going to apear in other fanfics plus theres my fanfic which i need to get back on.and im probably gonna forget about this in an hour or so so bye.

Tue, 10/25/2011 - 20:47

#48

Xairathan

ASDFGHJKL:"

That's all I have to say. Hopefully the jerkface connection will stabilize out. For now, I've updated the story (am updating it), and apologize for the lack of update in the past two weeks

Again, sorry!
~Xair

Tue, 10/25/2011 - 21:04

#49

Doggies

It's fine

my computer has been down so I have been posting from my iPod.
And boy do I hate autocorrect especially when it comes to the names of these monsters.
P.S. Hi silvervalkyraina. It's me, doggies :3

Wed, 10/26/2011 - 03:40

#50

Duskfinder

No really?

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