My bad. I forget ><
So...
Don't confuse my precious shot-type Medabot with some Horeshoe crab!
:D Better?
My bad. I forget ><
So...
Don't confuse my precious shot-type Medabot with some Horeshoe crab!
:D Better?
As they piled into Tortomega, color started to drain away from everything. Soon, all was grey. Bloo glanced over at Blind as she knelt beside Lordofnecros. She looked back and said "Please tell me he is going to be alright.".
Bloo just looked at her and before he could say something, the Snarlbolax butted in. "Don't worry, I have seen health pills cure bigger wounds then that and his heart rate and breathing is normal."
"Good…" Blind said as she watched over Lordofnecros.
"Hey, why hasn't he attacked us yet?" Mystic said and peered out Tortomega's window.
"He is still recharging after that time stop. I'm thankful the Snarlbolax protected us." Arus said and fiddled with his wrench.
"Then why don't we attack him? Now is the perfect time!" Dusk said looking at the multitude of buttons on Tortomega's dashbroad.
"We can't because Tortomega is still charging it's weapons." Arus replied softly glancing at a bar that was slowly filling up.
"Well they better charge up quick, Jake almost done recharging. A purple Aura appeared around Jake just as Tortomega's power bar filled up all the way. Jake dashed forward with a lunging slice but Tortomega warped behind him and unleashed a barrage of missiles. Jake quickly sliced most of them down and some missed but one hit dead on. A red bar on Tortomega's dashboard went down.
"Sonething is going down on the screens!" Dusk shouted as Tortomega warped again.
"Don't worry, that's Tortomega's computers think that his health is!" Bloo shouted over the roar of missiles being fired.
"Well, that missle didn't do much." Amber said as Tortomega warped once again, Jakes attack just missing.
"Then let's test out those side guns I added!" Arus shouted and slammed a button causing do guns to pop out of the side of Tortomega's shell.
"I call one!" Mystic shouted and rushed over to one.
"I will help to." Lordofnecros put in weakly.
"No. Your going to lie down and I'm going to try and heal that wound, Dusk can shoot.". Blind said and got out a remedy capsule.
"Hey Arus, can this thing fly?" Amber shouted as the building they were in started to rumble.
"Sure! Why do you…" Arus was cut of as part of the ceiling almost hit Tortomega. "Crap! We got to get this fight outside." Bloo said as he went to help Blind with the healing.
"Well, let's steer him out. Come on guys, keep firing at him!" Amber shouted as she grab bed hold of the steering wheel that appeared and flew it through the hole it previously made. Amber flew Tortomega in circles with Jake while Dusk and Mystic kept firing. But soon, disaster struck.
"CRAP!" Amber shouted as Jake started to duel wield some sort of shadowy gun. The bullets went flying everywhere. "Hold on, it's going to take some skill to dodge this!" Amber shouted as she started Tortomega to the left avoiding all but one bullet.
"SNIPES!!" Amber shouted and was knocked away from the steering wheel, a black crystal halfway through her armor.
"Amber!!!!" Dusk shouted and list his concentration. Seeing a opening, Jake snipe the side gun Dusk had been using and it blew to pieces knocking him straight into a wall.
"Crap, I think I just broke every limb…" He said faintly and lost conciouness.
"Arus…get the controls…" Amver moaned weakly before she fainted too. Arus rushed forward to the steering wheel, but before he got there, Jack had finished charging a huge bullet that cleaved the other side gun right off, sending the entire gun straight into Mystics chest. He quickly started changing but it hit him while only his legs were Trojan.
"Sorry guys… I can't help you know.…" He said and reverted into a unconscious knight.
"This is going all wrong!" Bloo shouted as he started to fade.
"Whars happening to you!?" Arus shouted as Bloo started to fade faster.
"Shoot, the time spell is wearing off, hurry and defeat Jake…" Bloo managed to say before he dissapperaed completely.
"This is not good." Arus said as he continued to dodge Jakes attacks but them Jake started to fire bullets everywhere.
"Darn…" Arus said before a group of bullets when straight through the window of reinforced glass and exploded.
"I'm… sorry…" He said to Blind before he flew over unconcious.
"Blind…" A voice said faintly. "its the Snarlbolax. Quick while I'm through his thought barrier, crash the Tortomega into him."
"But-" but the voice was already gone.
"Well, it's all or nothing." She said and turbo boosted it at a speed that made Mystic's Trojan charge look like slow motion walking, Blind steered Tortomega through another storm of bullets straight into Jake. There was a huge explosion of pure white.
…
TO BE CONTINUED *UBER TROLLFACE*
Wooow…
That took at least two hours to make it perfect.
Next chapter, the chapter to end all chapters( and the story) will be up at Friday.
Anyways, I would like to thank everyone who has read this story.
I put a lot of effort into this one.
I would personally like to thank these great people for being supportive in their own unique, and very strange ways.
Weld
Pshycodestroyer
Arus
Duskfinder
Mystic
Blindshot
Lordofnecros
Windsickle
.
If I did not mention your name and you think you have helped tell me and I will find you on game and personally thank you on front of other people as a apology.
I would also like to thank the staff at three rings for creating this amazing game my story is based off of.
Other people I want to thank.
My friend Jake for creating Jake.
The Snarlbolax for being asweome.
Tortomega for being completely asweome at fighting.
And most expesically I would like to thank Bloo for being a great main character in my first series and for coming back the second time.
I think that is all I have to say so I'm going to be going to sleep.
Well, intill the last chapter,
Adieu my good friends.
YAY FOR VERY STRANGENESS! :D
Personally, I DO actually consider myself strange...:/
This thought requires further attention! To work!
How come you fanfic gets so many post? Mine is less, and I uploaded Ch2 yesterday! HELP ME!!!!!
Any way, good story! I like to see more after this.
you should shorten the chapters slightly and try to post more often. The quicker u get chapters out, the quicker you become popular. By the way, this is my second story so u should also wait a bit and let the posters cone to u.
Anyways, always try hard.
-Doggies.
since I don't really know how, would someone be able to put this on the wiki and if you can, I wil be very happy.
Thanks in advance.
YOU SEEN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank the lord!! I'll take some of that advice. I might double chapter or triple tomorrow.
Sorry but I didn't mean right now. I still have the last chapter to write and I'm hit with serious blankness. I will try and write one around wednsday. That will give me time to think. And could you be able to make it so it doesn't link to the forum page. Because what happens when this eventually goes to the end of the graveyard. The link will then break.
P.S. Find me in game. I will have something for your knight if you could do that.
Like make a document or something or like a page of the wiki. I don't know but could you please try. It means a lot to me to have my stories on the wiki.
Thanks so much,
Your friendly author,
~Doggies
Apologies if I've offended you in some way Doggies. How are you feeling health-wise? Better I hope. There's a lot of sickness going on in my area too coincidentally. I don't think I'm sick yet thankfully. Get well soon everyone who happens to be sick right now.
I'm a bit confused. And the time I live in is GMT+0(london time) so time zones are a problem.
Im not a computer wizz at links. So I don't understand.
By the way, chp 3 and 4 are up on it.
i have been thanked by a very creative and awsome mind!
@doggies maybe threerings should have you make the next expansion.
and finnaly plz mail any of my knights in game for when the new story begins! ( my knights are weld, archweld, and burstwolf)
I've been largely quiet about this, but I haven't seen my signup been acknowledged yet (or I don't think it has been), and am wondering when my character will appear.
Signup: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/31423?page=1#comment-195847
so yeah Christmas stuff happened I I wasn't able to post but just you all wait, I will have a christmas present for you guys, I'm going to post the last chapter on Christmas eve night so you can read it Christmas morning.
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!
Ah... Thank you. Seriously, that's pretty neat. A present for us? Yay!
.....yes.....awsome nonphysical christmas gift.....yeah....new chapter....is this the final chapter...?
@doggies i know i have asked this a lot already but plz mail me in game when the new fanfic will begin
i thought that a new chapter would be posted on christmas eve...but no new chapter...what's going on?
Doggies forgot?
I dunno.
WE MISS U DOGGIES. POST SOMETIME SOON PLZ.
Sorry that I have been unable to post. I couldn't get to a computer at all. But I promise that the final chapter will be up at maybe wednsday. And then I might have surprise on possibly Friday. Anyways, I hope you can all forgive me for this huge delay thx.
P.s. Litterbit, I couldn't add you because I was to far into the story and I promise you will defiantly be in the next one.
P.s.s. I will sadly not be working on another huge story after I end this one but will do a couple one or two post long short stories for a tiny bit and then make another huge story.
I think that Is all so intill next time,
Adieu.
so that is why... ok i can understand. plz mail me in game when you start your next huge story. i would rather that my character be in a long story rather than a short one, in other words i can wait.
now for some random rhyme about a random subject
there was a grey dragon
whom owned a gold wagon
but sold the gold wagon
for a new pearl flagon
(a flagon is a large container in which drink is stored, typically with a handle and a spout)
and #2
a man wished
that he had a pet fish
and once he got the fish he made a good dish
( the man ate the fish XD)
@ doggies i did not see that part about meeting you in game so i will try to find you this weekend for that reward
"Uggghhh……"
"Omg, she's moving, she's alive. Hurry and get……"
"What happened?..."
"Please tell me she will be ok……"
"Where am I?……"
"It's time for you to wake up now." A voice, solid and strong broke through the mixture of other voices.
"Mmmmhhhmmm…"
As Blind slowly opened her eyes, she saw her friends standing over her with teary eyes.
"That's better."
The voice again, and she turned to see Bloo beside her.
"Bloo…" Blind began.
"It's fine." He responded.
"Thanks." Blind replied and sat up and saw the rest of her friends bodies. Dusk had bandages all over his left side. Mystic's head was wrapped up, Arus' had two broken legs, Amber had some bandages over the right of her chest and was in a wheel chair. And then she looked at Lordofnecros, who had bandages cover his intire torso and were slightly bloodied.
"We got hurt pretty bad didn't we." She said with a small smile.
"Well, your hurt pretty bad too." Amber said quietly. Blind slowly looked down to see that her legs were fine.
"No, not your legs…" Dusk's voice trailed off and Lordonecros turned away.
"Well tell me!" She said and as she went to cross her arms, only one came.
"Oh…" She said in a tiny voice.
"Well don't worry, we well build you a robotic arm so that you will have two arms again." Lordonecros said.
"Well, we saved the world didn't we?". Blind asked.
"Yes, you all did."
The 7 friends turned to see Faron come through the door. He pulled out 7 medals and handed them out to each of them.
"You did what the entire army would not have been able to do, you pull out a no limit to kill that, whatever it was. All that matters is that you are all heroes.
"Oh, there's one thing I forgot, I think the Snarlbolax deserves a reward." Amber and Dysk said at almost the exact same time.
"Don't worry, Brinks figured out a way to make all the weapons that come from the Snarlbolax out of different thing and they are actually stringer to, so I don't think the Snarlbolax will gave to deal with any knights for no on." Feron politely explained.
"Well he will be bothered one last time." Amber said with a smile and threw her back over her shoulder and wheeled out of the room.
"Don't worry I go with her" Dusk said quickly and followed her.
Mystic gave a small laugh after he went.
"And one last thing." Blind said
"What?" Everyone asked and all Blind did was lean over a kiss Lordofnecros.
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LATER
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"Hey, come on out! I know your here!" Amber shouted into the woods.
"Fiiinnne." The Snarlbolax replied. "I'm busy."
"Here." Amber said and wheeled off. At first the Snarlbolax just sat there and then he realized Amber had left something. As he picked it up, he saw that it was a wrench.
"Wow, she actually did it." He said dumdfouned.
()()()()()()()()
PROLOUGE
)()()()()()()()(
In the end, all of the knights lived except for a few who were downed in the battle.
Blind and Lordofnecros got engaged.
Bloo returned to his old time.
Arus started to work on repairing Tortomega.
Lordofnecros still keeps falling from his griever.
Amber secretly started working on a new arm for Blind.
Blind practiced doing things with her other hand.
Dusk continued in his quest to get stronger and he and Amber trained together at times.
And Mystic continued to agitate everyone.
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
P.S. Expect a bonus thing on Friday.
Well, I'm going to sleep now so, intill next time,
Adieu.
I have something special foreveryone on Friday which Im not going tell u what it is.
*TROLLFACE*
i have a surprise too.... i will finally get through my 3* block! yay gift to self!
Windsickle applauds.
PS: How's the pneumonia Doggies?
i hope the pneumonia isn't coming back for a while and it's getting warmer to so hopefully I will last intill next winter.
Anyways, as promised I have something special, a sneak peek at my next story.
Well, here goes nothing because all day and even in school my brain has been working furiously coming up with this so I hope you like it. P.S. This takes place long before or after the events of Bloo the Bloogato or this recent story that is only called Doggies fanfiction. This means even though some people have the same names, they are not the same people.
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Prologue
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"So, we go in there captain?"
"Yeah, it's the only way in."
"Fine."
"Now be quiet or the plan will be ruined."
It was a amazing night outside. I looked up a Cradles two amazing moons, orbiting each other as they orbited the planet. Sadly, this night woul be ruined by what my team was scheming. We were all about to become fugitives. We had to break into the vaults, take armor, weapons, and supplies and them disappear into the clockworks.
"Were almost ready captain Doggies."
"Good Litterbit, we go in now."
"Sir" Another knight in the group asked, "There seems to be a lack of guards."
"Good eye ______. Be various everyone."
And so it was, we broke in got what we needed, split ourselves into smaller groups and each took a different elevator.
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3 Years later
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"Uggghhh…" Doggies groaned as he sat up in his small tent.
"Good your awake, I need your help with something." _______ called out from the area outside the tent.
"Wonder how the camp is." Doggies wondered and thought back to the faithful day a knight with the same name framed him and his friends, turning them into fugitives. He and his friends now stayed in a small village built in the canopy of a forest on the surface. Safe and sound from prying knights.
"Hurry up!" _____ called again.
"Coming!" Doggies hollered and opened his tent flap to let in the light.
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So, how do you guys like it. The blanks are for characters that haven't been chosen yet and all of you are welcome to volunteer because guess what, I decided to go straight to the next story instead of lots of tiny stories.
Keep in mind this is just a small draft and I might just make a complete new one but we will see.
Oh yeah, Litterbit, you are certain to get a part as are Weld, Windsickle, and Psychodrstroyer if they chose because they didn't get a spot in the last story.
And one last thing is my reason that I write these, what motivates me to write these stories.
The first is that it creates your own personal world that you can shape in whatever shape you want, your the god of it.
The second Is all of you of course. Just having people who want to read what I write (unlike my teachers in past years) motivates me to do more.
The final reason is that I can't stop. Everyday my brain is constantly thinking up new even Scenes to put in the story.
A tip for other writers Is to imagine the scene in your head as if it was happening in real life a couple times the write a change it if you want. Another important thing is to read tons of books whenever you get the chance because this can inspire you with new scences. The next story character signup might begin Monday so get your characters ready. This time, one of the things the character sheet needs is a better personality section so I can really work with them.
P.S. There needs to be a least one girl character so Blindshot you can have it if you want and this time a promise little romance.
Well, intill next time,
Adieu.
Name:Vot
Color:Cobalt
Likes:Making things that eventually try to kill him.
Dislikes:His creations trying to kill him.
Personality:Awkward, but pretty nice. Usually is trying to figure out the difference between and Mod Calibrator and a Calibration Mod
Gender:Male
Armor:Solid Cobalt
Weapons:Leviathan Blade. Nothing else.
Other:Has a pet Scuttlebot without any legs.
Also, so far this fanfiction (I mean the new one) is AWESOME! YAY!
I read/play games/watch a lot of TV.
In fact, after all that, this video off a game I played inspired one of the Final chapters in my current fanfic.
I haven't written it down yet, but it's there, almost as clear as day, in my head, playing itself out over and over.
The Video was from Kingdom Hearts Birth By Sleep: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gtTCm8t6i5Y
The Song is: Simple and Clean Planitb remix, one of my fav song bits to listen to, even when it's pretty short.
Hope you like it. Maybe it can help you with your story writing?
That video was the best of it I could find on the internet. It isn't perfect, but it'll do.
ok i will create a new character sheet for this story
name: Dusklord
likes: tacos, fruit, combat, helping friends, wolvers
dislikes: being mobbed by monsters, cowardly knights who do not help in fights, bolongie
weapons: glacius, boihazard, big angry bomb, barbarous thorn blade
skills: herbal medical treatment, hunting, firecrafting ( without weapons/matches), fishing, attempting to tame monsters (is having trouble trying to tame anything but beasts/jellies)
armor:
helm:dragon scale helm
helm costume:chapeau of the black rose
suit: almirian crusader armor
armor costume: tabard of the black rose
pesonality: kind towards friends and allies, yet would be best to avoid in the heat of combat usually likes to scout ahead in order to keep his friend safe and will help his friends when the need be
gender: male
color: ultramarine
other: is able to reprogram almost any construct ( except tortodrone, since having no experience with it) has a pet soul jelly named Glop, and has had an encounter with vog, which was only for a moment.
note: the gear my character has is not my in game gear yet...same with color... and the name is being changed
Can I join? If so, can you take my character from the last story?
Thanks Doggies. Glad to hear you're feeling better. Here's a character sheet if you'd like.
Name: Kaynen
Gender: Female
Race: Spiralian?/Spiral Knight
Color: Turquoise
Equipment: Drake Scale Mail, Angelic Helm.
Weapons: Nightblade, Prismatech Alchemer MK II, Super Blast Bomb, Flourish.
Shields: Great Defender, Horned Owlite, or Scary Skelly depending on circumstances.
Specialties: None other than basic First Aid, cooking, and basic survival skills.
Likes: Helping others with menial tasks, animals, tasty food, spicy food, cooking, friends, getting things done, reading books and other simple pastimes.
Dislikes: Getting hurt, getting picked on, getting teased, evil stuff, seeing others getting hurt or bullied, getting defeated, too much attention, taxes, scammers, mean knights, paperwork.
Personality/Other: Doesn't talk much will speak up when necessary. Kind and friendly. Smart but slightly submissive when it comes to disagreement and dispute. Very willing to help others but feels awkward when helped herself though she will accept it if she needs it. Used to working by herself. Seasoned in single knight adventuring. No experience in team adventuring or combat though willing to learn. Has a natural weakness to Freeze for currently unknown reasons though likely due to some form of non-infectious disease.
You could take my character but I can see that Windsickle came first so he can take the spot. But use mine's as another one if you need it.
Glad you're feeling better. :D
i wish that the sky would rain ce in SK so that we could all gain 5 ce for every drop of ce-rain that hits our knight
doh wat? I got engaged with Blind? O.o
that's interesting...
Nice end to the story. Can't wait for your new one. Here's my character sheet.
Name: Necro (not lordofnecros, just Necro, got it?)
Race: SK
Gender: Male
Colors: Green with red
Equipts: Bristling buckler, solid cobalt armor, magic hood, khorovod, jalovec, lightning capacitor, super blast bomb, flourish, shockburst brandish, arc razor, wolver coat with UV freeze med and 5 cobalt helms all with UVs (Normal Max, SHadow Low, SHadow Med, stun low, and curse low.). Doesn't wear UV'd items; plans to sell them.
Likes: Greevers, heavy swords, the color red and white and black, explosions, Blast Network, inflicting shock on others in Lockdown.
Dislikes: Retrode lazar attacks, recieveing status effects, Lockdown.
Personality: can't decide if to make him evil or good, insane or sane. I'll make him good. He enjoys smishing monsters, and hates anyone who insults him for using heavy swords. Also hates teir 1 nubs in teir 2 lockdown.
Other: Since Necro used to be a scientist, he has a high level of intelligence. He breeds a small amount of Greavers for assistants (for what, he hasn't told anyone yet), and currently has 1 of each type of Greaver, and a special mutant breed of Giant Greaver which he rides on that produces the statuses shock+fire.
cool stuff anyway i am wondering. why can't knights just eat the jellies?
For anyone who reads this, the new story is In the treasure vaults and called the tale of a bandit.
Please read it, especially you Mystic TROLOLOL.
first fifth page comment.
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Delibirds carry wherever they go,
A bag full of present that sometimes will explode,
And it's bag of fun it carries a heavy load,
That it shall dump on it's enemies to spread joy.