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A Wordy Delve Into The Clockworks (fanfic)

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Fri, 11/04/2011 - 15:06
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Incoherrant

Hello, readers. I usually dabble on the visual side of artistry (http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/23089), but it just so happens to be National Novel Writing Month at the moment, so I'm dabbling into the verbal side of art. I don't intend to do a full 50k word novel of fanfic (I'm trying to do a couple of shorter stories rather than one big one as long plots are hard and getting the writing done at all is enough challenge for me), but I do intend to squeeze as many words out of it as I can, as it apparently is easier for me to write than stories of my own creations. So, err, might as well toss it here in bits.
Do note that Inco isn't me, he is my character and has a personality that doesn't quite match mine. I dunno if that's worth noting, but hey. :P Also note that I'm not doing any proof reading as that would waste precious writing/procrastination time, so if there's any mess-ups, well. Okay.

So anyway.

The Descent

Another time, another place in another world, on a planet known as Cradle, a distraction walks towards the brassy instrument panels of an elevator with a screen in front of it identifying it as the "Iron Lion" entrance to the world below. He is clad in a black, armoured coat lined with fur and adorned with a bandolier of small carved pumpkins, treated to last so their little, gleefully glowing faces may never rot away. His round face and large, orange eyes look out from under a dark grey hood, decorated with orange stars on either side. At his feet a pattern of flames light up similarly to the faces of the pumpkins and his eyes, a supernatural flame in his dress keeping him safe from both chills and burns on his adventures.
He is informally known as Incoherrant (or even more informally, 'Inco'), a name he has carried for a long time now. Most of the people who knows of him make assumptions that it might be a nickname he received for his speech impediment, or for the oddly constructed sentences he sometimes shout out in the middle of a mission. Inco has never explained it himself.
As he fiddles with the instrument panel, little icons flash past on a a screen. The screen flickers for a moment as arrows and numbers appear and are hastily read before he presses one of the heavy buttons again so different images pop up. He stands there for a while, scrutinising the symbols and trying to recall the multitude of meanings encoded in them.
They are mostly red, brown and dark green squares with a few pale, blueish grey ones among them. Nearly all of them have steel grey symbols etched across the coloured square, pawns, cogwheels, shields. A few red squares have peach coloured tower symbols instead, spicing up the interface momentarily. He scrolls down further, finding then ones he has been looking for. At depth fifteen of the Clockworks, below so many deathtrap filled layers above it, the metallic imprint of a stylised paw on a teal square indicates the start of the area he seeks.

Incoherrant had been down there before, with many different allies. This time he would venture alone, taking another stab at the seemingly endless robotic army being constructed in that place, another shot at wrecking the facility beyond repair. Going alone held no actual advantages, but the knights that the captain of his order had sent down with him lately had been more of a burden than a help; he would like to take his time to get a better idea of how to properly wreck the dangerous factory.
He walked away from the lift, leaving the instrument panel and screen to reset to default. Talking to his superiors might mean he could hitch a ride past some of the fourteen layers of critter infested areas seemingly set up to kill his kind; he would like to be able to do this. Powering the lifts took a lot of energy and he might need it later; overriding many a level would be much more efficient, even if it only meant someone else had spent their own stored power to get there.

Luck was with him. A fellow knight had just gotten through to depth thirteen unscathed, the perfect place for him to join in. He got the override code from his captain and headed back towards the elevator gate, stopping briefly by the armoury to pick up his weaponry and a fitting shield beforehand.
His swords, one a heavy, double-edged blade, had technology similar to that of a cooling chamber's integrated with the guard in such a way that a short energy charge could flash-freeze hostile creatures, hampering their movement greatly. The sharp, blackened edges dealt fine damage as well, although the thick fur of some beasts seemed to be too much to cut through with it. He had other, more stabby, weapons to deal with such creatures, but he did not expect to encounter any in the factory. The other sword was a much lighter blade with two bright purple stripes glowing ominously about two thirds of the way out from the hilt to the tip. This ominous feel was well deserved, for it was a sword of a shadowy nature, able to strike with vicious explosions of negative energy when used right.
Inco sheathed both swords, one at his hip and one on his back. He looked at his collection of shields briefly before settling on the glowing one that resembled the face of an owl. It was a silvery kite shield with stylised, gilded wings at the sides and an internal, sunny glow radiating out of it. The shield carried several cracks from old battles, but none of them were worrisome; it was still a strong shield and one of his favourites.

Once the fully equipped knight reached the elevator, he wasted no time in tapping the right key combination to reach his ally. As he activated the large, blue button with the downwards pointing arrow, the brass coloured mechanics whirred to life. With a rattle and a couple of clanks somewhere in distant machinery, it sank him down towards his goal.
Incoherrant held on to the rail as the old lift took him past many levels of the diverse inner world of Cradle; he barely caught glimpses of looming creatures, mechanic and feral, some even unnaturally brought back from the dead. Several gremlins, small, red-furred creatures with long ears and an affinity for tinkering, appeared to be working on the construction of a level he could see in the distance. Some gremlins had allied themselves with the knights, but most still happily built more and more death traps for them. Why they did not just wreck the elevators was a mystery.

Fri, 11/04/2011 - 15:21
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Windsickle
Oooooooo. Very nice. Quite

Oooooooo. Very nice. Quite descriptively dramatic.

Fri, 11/04/2011 - 15:26
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Incoherrant
Thank you. :D I still needa

Thank you. :D I still needa mash out some 400-500 words more today to keep up with my schedule, so may have another post in an hour or two if it gets to a post-worthy point by then. \o/

Fri, 11/04/2011 - 18:08
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Nechrome
" I don't intend to do a full

" I don't intend to do a full 50k word novel of fanfic "
well, I am. =P. so far, it's at about 7.5k words. I've been working on it for a looong time. sort of. i haven't been working on it recently.

Fri, 11/04/2011 - 18:32
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Incoherrant
Good luck with it for when

Good luck with it for when you get back to it. :D

Also, mini-chapter go. Much like the terminals in the actual game, not terribly much happens. Somehow the passage seems a good place to break off for the night. I made my word count goal for today. :3
Alsoalso, Incoherrant's accent is really, really weird and I'm not sure how to write it. He can't pronounce e right. This is based on me not having an e on my keyboard, so whenever I have to type in SK, I put a 3. Outside of SK, I keep an e in my clipboard and paste it in where needed. > >; Point is: Inco talks funny. I'm not sure how to best demonstrate it.

Crossroad of Adventure

"I thought you were going to leave me waiting here for hours," a calm voice called up as the sinking platform slowed to a halt at the dusty terminal.
"My stuff, I néédéd to fétch it first," Incoherrant replied, having let go of the platform's rail just in time to keep his balance when it suddenly sank away to let him get off.
"Keep it on you more often, that way you may be ready sooner," the other knight argued, her green eyes revealing a subtly amused expression despite the scolding.
"Wéll... I havé a lot of stuff." Inco didn't recognise this one.
She was clad in a heavy looking suit, much of the tough material matching her eyes. More of it was sturdy metal plates, several protecting the front of her torso, boots with the same sort of metal covered most of her legs. Her helmet seemed equally massive, the visor a more lightly coloured tone of metal than the rest. It had a green stripe down the back, matching the suit. A large, square shield that looked nearly as tall as her was fastened to her left arm. Her weapons were presumably tied to her suit and hidden from view by the big shield.
"S'wait, who aré you?" he queried, failing to dig up a memory of this person.
"I'm, uh, Tusch?" She seemed confused with his question.
"Oh, 'kay, just... I don't think I know you."
She frowned slightly. "That's... Nice. Listen, I got told you just wanted a shortcut down here. Now you're here. The Strangers already left again, though, so there's really nothing but the lift down to head for."
"Right, right. Sorry." He started walking towards the elevator that would take them further down. The terminal was, as Tusch had said, deserted. No travelling Stranger with a bag of valuables for sale like there usually was.

The two of them stepped onto the platform; Tusch pushed some buttons on the instrument panel and the rails popped up. One could call them security rails, if it had not been for the rickety nature of the lifts and the hazardous areas they connected. Those made it it seem like a false safety measure.
Inco hit the blue 'down' button and with a shudder they were on their way. The screen had displayed a shield icon; they were heading towards an arena, one of the most challenging level construction templates in the Clockworks.

Sat, 11/05/2011 - 13:11
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Incoherrant
Juuust unloading more text.

Juuust unloading more text. In case you're curious, this fanfic now spans a bit more than 2k words and I have a sneaking suspicion that most who open this thread go teal deer on it. (Or tl;dr/too long, didn't read.) Also, I'm being mean and cliffhangering this post a little. Anyway~

Robotic Rampage

The rusty lift rattled to a stop in the middle of a square stone room lit by torch-like lamps. The two knights had only spoken briefly on the short trip down, the orange eyed one commenting how he was actually planning on adventuring alone and the green eyed replying she would head up when she was sure a pesky sword wielder like himself could handle things on his own. They were quiet as they got off of the platform when the rails went down. Inco went for a short walk around the perimeter of the room, drawing the heavier of his swords and swinging it at the metallic lamps, easily breaking them apart and rendering the room a good deal darker.
While he was occupied with this, Tusch walked forward through the only opening of the room. The middle third of one of the walls was essentially missing, leading into a hallway. Immediately outside of the room, a large red and white button took up most of the floor space in front of a large metallic gate that blocked the way. She stepped onto the button. Nothing happened.
"Oi, orange eye guy? You coming?" she called back to the darkened room.
"Yup, just smashing lights;" he replied as he came around the corner, sword still in hand.
Tusch rolled her eyes while he stepped onto the great button as well. For another moment nothing continued to happen, then the button sunk into the floor and with a hiss of steam the gate in front of them followed suit, clearing the path. The two knights walked silently down the hallway, both quite familiar with the structure of this sort of trap, having fought through similar ones many a time before. It lead up to a short staircase, walls soon abandoned in favour of rails that showed off the vast empty space around and below the level structure, more torch set-ups attached out of reach.
"So, you'ré a bombér?" Inco asked to break the silence.
"I am, yes. I take it the armour gave it away quite a while ago?" Tusch replied, staring out at the deeper levels that could be glimpsed far down at both sides of the walkway.
"You'd bé right, uhm... I'm just kinda surpriséd you can walk that fast with it on, it looks réally héavy."
"It is."
He felt slightly stumped by her brief reply and found nothing further to say. Her previous remark about sword users being reckless still stung a little.

Shortly thereafter, they walked up another set of stairs, higher walls reaching upwards from the floor structure ahead of them and spreading to both sides as well. Another gate blocked the way into the room ahead, a much smaller button in front of it the only thing to interact with. Tusch stomped on it, activating the hissing mechanism that lowered the gate.
They continued inside. Calling it a room might be a bit wrong; the walkway widened into a large, square platform with the walls surrounding it at a distance, leaving a bottomless trench almost all the way around, more lights set up out there. Only the walkway they arrived on and the one gated off at the opposite side of the platform broke the sight of the imposing depths. Another large button like the one right after the enclosed room the lift landed in sat innocently in the middle of the square platform, its white edges smudges with a grimy, green sludge. The air had a distinctively acrid smell to it.

Tusch pulled a bomb charger out from somewhere behind her shield, looking at the oblong object, a bright yellow and salmon coloured device with a light grey base and a shiny, red button, with thoughtful eyes. Chargers like it gather energy from the surrounding air and shape it into a small, explosive disk that the knight wielding the device can then plant on the ground. It will detonate shortly thereafter, either in a large burst of energy or, as in the case of Tusch's, a haze that lingers for a few moments. As denoted by the colours it had been painted with, this one would produce an overheated fog, the particles in which were likely to cling to critters and ignite, setting them on fire.
Inco simply readied his black and blue sword, tightened the grip on his shield and stepped onto the large button. One could have called it a trap, but it was so blatant it was much more like a challenge set by the denizens of this hazardous world. Tusch clicked the small button on her charger and lifted the device into the air, an almost visible stream of energy vapour being drawn towards it. With a tiny ping sound, it announced having a charge ready to go.
"Do not walk in the mist, orange. You'll be a good deal redder if you do;" she warned him.
"I know how it works... I built oné oncé;" he said, shuffling his feet on the large button, still not amused that she apparently saw him as useless.
"Well, good."
With that she pressed it briefly to the filthy ground halfway between the floor button and the edge of the arena, setting down an active charge. She ran to him, already charging it up again as the tiny bomb went off and an orangey haze spread across the field, hammering an armoured foot against the dirty red and white metal and sending the button into the ground.

Sat, 11/05/2011 - 16:55
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Well, I made it to my target word count today. :|

Tiles in the floor sprung up to the left and right of the two knights, revealing several hostile creatures as they were shoved up through the hidden latches. Two dark green turrets with a vague similarity to canines and toxic smoke coming out of their blocky maws quickly took aim at the knights and started unloading energy pellets while four small, squarish robots with four bug-like legs and a single glowing green reticle on their body started crawling around the field haphazardly.
The overheated fog enveloped one of the turrets as Tusch flung down another charge in the middle of the scuttling mechanical creatures, dodging the bursts of energy they let out through their frog-like mouth openings as she readied another.
Inco had grabbed the ire of the sickly looking, bullet vomiting puppy replicas, guiding their line of fire away from his ally and dodging the shots while his chilly sword charged up. A quick dash around through the area where the first haze bomb had been set and since dissipated brought him within striking distance of the partially incinerated turret. He sidestepped a round of bullets from the other one as he swung his sword powerfully at the neck of the stationary robot. The strike connected forcefully, a loud bang, a scraping metallic noise and a creaking of rapidly frozen metal plates marking the end of the turret's existence. He sidestepped again, the functional turret being completely unaffected by its perishing twin.

The smaller robots had been reduced in number, only two still scrambling eagerly after the surprisingly nimble bomber. The others had fallen apart across the battlefield, singed pieces of metal visible below the fiery mist. As her fellow knight struck through the second turret, a new round of trapdoors triggered, several spindly constructs being shoved up through the floor, reaching out towards the knight with dangling, clawed limbs or taking aim through the trio of targeting reticles on their bucket shaped heads. Mechanical zombies vomiting long beams of a not only toxic gas, but also a highly explosive one.
"Why'd you trigger that already!?" she shouted, kiting the shambling constructs across a freshly set charge just in time for the small explosion to hit them with full force, making them stumble slightly before belching their gas towards her again. Inco did not reply, too focused on avoiding the explosions and beams and tripping on any of the shrapnel scattered across the arena floor.
The last two of the small, square scuttling robots finally fell apart from the damage the fire had dealt to them, their destruction heralding a new wave of the many ambushes set up on the platform as the two knights dodged around, one releasing flash freeze inducing sword charges at the ones the other had not managed to set on fire.
Two mechanical knights with smoking pipes sticking out of their backs popped through the floor on either side of the arena, a foul smog billowing away from them as they raised their sickly green energy swords, electrical noises echoing out from the hollow parts of their helmets and armour.
"Aw crud... Ow!" Inco cried out. He had needed to suddenly change direction to avoid running straight into one of them and as a result he had accidentally stepped right into the line of fire for one of the spindly constructs, earning him a gaseous explosion that hit him square in the back.
A few seconds of frantic running later, the two organic warriors had the small army of constructs rounded up, kiting them in a way so their artificial intelligence kept them running in circles. Inco and Tusch were running in larger circles around the edges on either side of the platform, both charging their respective weapons before striking. The igniting mists just about dissipated before he ran into them and the constructs his sword strikes managed to freeze to the ground posed no threats as new charges were set up right behind them, although the flames quickly melted the ice away.

It took them a while, many bombs and hacks and dodges and even more frantic running from the next waves of mechanical foes, but the two knights eventually stood victorious. For a brief moment there was nothing but a scattering of broken, warped metal and engine parts, a smattering of pungent oil leaking out in small pools all over the platform and the two knights, somewhat out of breath from the long fight standing on either side of the field. Then a large hatch right in front of the gate blocking the way forward opened with an ominously large clunking sound, a hiss of steam and a screech of scraping metal parts announcing something large being lifted up into the arena.
The final foe, set up by the constructors of the level as an end boss, was a towering, dark figure. It held a shield that in itself was larger than either of the knights and wielded a sword even larger than that with no apparent difficulty. Its body was covered in heavy plate armour and its head was that of a horse, seemingly carved from solid rock. Cracks were visible on many parts of its body, a hellish pink glow emanating from them, belying the almost mechanical appearance of the behemoth.

Sun, 11/06/2011 - 08:59
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Incoherrant
Demotivated writer is demotivated. Anyway...

The monster let out a bestial snort, slowly raising its shield and weapon before charging at Tusch with a surprising amount of speed. It slammed its massive sword heavily into the ground where the small bomber had stood only second earlier, fortunately reacting fast enough to jump out of the way. Her swordsman ally wasted no time, dashing over to swing his blade into the creature's back while it tugged its own sword back out of the ground. Inco managed three slashes at a weak spot in its armour before it angrily turned around, the knight's fourth strike reflected by its enormous shield and its weapon raised up menacingly as it took aim at him. He jumped out of the way as the horse headed foe swung into the spot he'd been standing in, dirt flying away from the blade when it struck the ground with a heavy thud. The little knight backed away, charging his sword up while the fiend trotted closer. When it lifted its sword in a threatening manner despite being out of reach he foresaw the rushed charge attack it was making and ran out of the way just in time, the beast running shield first into the low wall of the platform, giving him just enough time to unleash his charged sword strike on its back while it tried to recover from its failed charge. As he stepped away to avoid a hit on the head when the now frozen-to-the-spot monster turned around, a purplish disk of energy shot past him and into the fiend's armour, causing it to whinny in pain and slump over in defeat. Inco whirled around to see where the disk had come from as a hollow sounding fanfare from somewhere in the surroundings signalled the end of the arena challenge, finding Tusch a short distance away with a whirring, crescent shaped sabre. The whirring originated from a small generator welded to the back of the blade.
"A sword?" he asked, a bit surprised.
"Bombs ain't always enough;" she simply replied. "Nice work in here for the most part, though. Guess you do have some skill after all."
"... Thanks."

Mon, 11/21/2011 - 10:35
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Softhead
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