Here it is, the new story and I tweaked it a little.
Prologue
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"So, we go in there captain?"
"Yeah, it's the only way in."
"Fine."
"Now be quiet or the plan will be ruined."
It was a amazing night outside. I looked up a Cradles two amazing moons, orbiting each other as they orbited the planet. Sadly, this night woul be ruined by what my team was scheming. We were all about to become fugitives. We had to break into the vaults, take armor, weapons, and supplies and them disappear into the clockworks.
"Were almost ready captain Weld."
"Good Litterbit, we go in now."
"Sir" Another knight in the group asked, "There seems to be a lack of guards."
"Good eye Windsickle. Be very careful everyone."
And so it was, we broke in got what we needed, split ourselves into smaller groups and each took a different elevator.
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3 Years later
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"Uggghhh…" Ghanti groaned as he sat up in his small tent.
"Good your awake, I need your help with something." Blind called out from the area outside the tent.
"Wonder how the camp is." Ghanti wondered and thought back to the faithful day when he was part of the group that robbed the Spiralian Vaults and escaped into the night. His small group had hid on the surface in a small treetop village. Safe and sound from prying knights.
"Hurry up!" Blind called again.
"Coming!" Ghanti hollered and opened his tent flap to let in the light. As he stepped outside, he saw Blind near the kitchen area making a delicious breakfast of Snipe eggs and some delicious berries.
"Well, what do you need help with?" Ghanti asked as he walked over to her.
"I need you to get Vot, Weld, and Windsickle to come and eat. Their working on something and will probarly forget to eat breakfast." She replied.
"Sure thing, oh and by the way, where's Dusk? I need to tell him something." Ghanti asked.
"Don't know, but you should be able to find him after breakfast." Blind said, "Now go and get them so I can eat."
Ghanti strolled along one of the branches of the trees to get to the small workshop and as he got closer, he saw four shapes fighting in there.
"Not again." Ghanti moaned and drew his custom made sword. He opened the door to see a Trojan shaped robot charge towards Weld. Ghanti quickly lunged forward and cleaved it's head right off.
"Thanks." Weld, Winsickle, and Vot said at the same time.
"I tried to make a Trojan robot to help us. I even had a name for it." Vot said and held up a nameplate that said My5t1c.
"Well, um, yeah, it's breakfast time and I'm hungry so let's go." Ghanti quickly said, "Last one to Breakfast is a rusted mecha knight!"
They all ran for the table, with Ghanti being last because he had forgot his sword and they all had a hearty Breakfast.
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Sometime later that day
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"Dusk, I need to ask you something." Ghanti said as he walked towards Dusk who was hanging upside down from a branch.
"Ok" Dusk replied and pulled himself up.
(End of Prolouge)
TROLOLOL CLIFFHABGAR AND I HOPE MYSTIC READS THIS
TROLOLOL.
The tale of a bandit
@Doggies: "Oh. Windsickle is in the tale..? I thought Kaynen was going to be used... I'd rather you use her if that's all the same. The story looks like it's going to be interesting though. It's great so far."
Are you actually taking apps?
i am a captian now? sweet! I predict a great story from this. anyway i like it so far and will probbaly continue to read it
Nice.
(Crawls into corner and dies)
LOLOLOLOLOLOL
Atgatg why did you die. Is it an insult?
Next part will be up tomorrow.
*pokes Agtagtg's dead knight with a stick* um i think he is dead...cause he is not breathing....or would he be alive since he is twitching....*continues to poke body with a stick*
*Springs up and slaps Weld* I am she. FOOL.
Also, I died from loneliness.
Is bad.
I know.
Atgatg could use a hug!
Blindshot gives Atgatg a big hug! :3
Think of this:
I thought Atgatg was male but had a sister who shared his account. Of course, maybe this is Atgatg's sister who we are conversing with right now. I'm not giving out hugs until I know who is who.
Lol. I'm pretty sure my bro doesn't play sk anymore.
@Outnuendo
I feel much better now!
*reads chapter again*
*Crawls into corner and dies*
thanks now i have a black eye...
what happened to the new chapter? i thought it was going to be posted last night...
*walkes to snack bar and takes all the jelly beans* Now these jelly beans are mine! All mine!!!! *evil laugh*
Well I guess that answers that.
Huh. I've never hugged a corpse. How... How do you do this? Oh well. Here goes...
/hug Atgatg'scurledupcorpseinthecorner
Kind of creepy though in a twisted kind of way. Never would have seen myself doing stuff like this. I'm hugging a corpse! I guess even the dead get lonely sometimes. Undead sure do at least (I'm talking about you, you messed up, wiggling Zombies).
Anyone know what's happened to Doggies? I hope he doesn't have pneumonia again.
That means I'm a murderer (Shudders).
Sorry 'bout not posting I lost track of days yesterday so I thought today was Tuesday.
And thankfully, it wasn't pneumonia. (Shudders harder)
Anyways, here be your news chapter.
Chapter 2 The spirits.
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"Do you think we should ever go back to Haven. I wonder if we are no longer being hunted." Ghanti ask, mindlessly fiddling with his sword.
"We could always give a little peek. But the problem is that how will we get back here without revealing ourselves." Dusk put in.
"Still…" Ghanti said staring in Havens general direction.
"I think it's to risky." Dusk said after carefully contemplating the consequences. But Ghanti wasn't listening anymore. He focused his eyes on something in the distance.
"Tell everyone to turn everything off a be silent, something's coming." He queitly whispered to Dusk who dashed across a branch towards the camp. Ghanti quickly scrambled up the side of the tree and got to a little hollow part near the top a peeked out a hole. Whatever was coming was moving closer, but to loudly to be a spy. As he watched it get closer, he saw there were two distinct glows among the area that was moving. There was a yellow white glow and the other was a deep purple. The rustling stopped a the lights grew a bit dimmer and Gganti held his breath. Had he been seen or did whatever was coming know of the camp. Unfortunately, the dim lights headed towards the main tree and as they passed the base of his, he heard voices that were very quiet. Once they were out of distance, Ghanti sent a message to Dusk to relate for a battle. As the message disappeared down the tube, he saw the glows come out of the bush, but nothing was carrying them. He quickly sent another message that said Phantoms. As he stared at them, he realized their was no such thing as a yellow phantom, and then it hit him. A golden phantom. But how Gganti was puzzling as he quietly crawled along the tree back to camp. Weld handed him a thing when he got back and Windsickle mouthed the words To and Hear while Vot motioned to put it to his ear. When he did, he could hear voices.
"This looks like a good place to hide least they find us."
"But what about wild beasts?"
"If were quiet, they won't come."
"ok."
"Now be- LOOK OUT." one of the voices shouted and suddenly a Snarlboalax came leaping out of the bushes and attacked the um, lights?
The Knights feelers closer to the edge, weapons drawn, to see what was happening. The Snarlbolax was chasing two glowing dots around the clearing. The Dots were shouting help and were clearly in distress. Ghanti motioned to his friends to prepare to help and they all leaped out of the tree Landing silently in a bush. They crept towards the Snarlbolax right as it cornered the dots. It reared back to land a killing blow when three blasts of energy burst from the dark and hit it square in the back. Then three knights Ghanti, Blind, And Dusk charged from the bush swords drawn and struck down the beast.
" I call the meat and Fur!" Blind said and gathered her mats and everyone one else came and took some of the mats.
"Were did those, lights go?" Weld asked and looked around.
"Right here!" said a bright a cheery voice. From around the corner came two little wolvers. One was purple and the other was a golden yellow.
"The knights stood dumbstruck at the two beasts.
"Thanks for saving us!" They said in a cherry tone. The knights still stood there and Windsuckle just barely nodded his head.
"Ummmmmm." Dusk said as he looked at the two . "Hello?"
"I think they need a explanation." The golden yellow one whispered to the purple one.
"Just look at their faces." The other one responded holding back laughter.
END CHAPTER
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Shadownox, do you mind being one of the villains.
Trust me, I will not make you suck. You will be like a cool villain.
Please????????? With this cherry one top ---------> 0'
"Windscuckle." Now there's an interesting mental image. Aheh.
So the characters are the following (correct me if I'm wrong)?...>...>
The Rogue Knights: Ghanti, Weld, Dusk, Blind/Blindshot, Windsickle, and Vot + My5t1c.
Future Antagonists: Shadownox, Necro, Frost.
Other: Littlerbit, anonymous golden, yellow Wolver, anonymous purple Wolver, and the/a Snarbolax (is it considered a character?).
Is I in the story?
Can I be included?
Thats why I dies. Loneliness.
*Reads second chapter*
Now Im twice as sad.
*Dies*
Necro and Frost, you will be with shadownox as villains. I will need a character sheet from you frost and same for you Necro if you want me to change your character.
To make this clearer, this is a different dimension from my other stories so there are multiple snarlbolaxes and characters who were in the other story will not know eachother in this one.
Atgatg, what is causing the loneliness, do you prehaps what to be in the story?
YES! I CAN HAZ SPOT IN STORY!
Name;Frostrex
Colour:Dark Blue
Appearance:Skolver set
Gear:Grey Owlite Shield, BlizzardHale(Read Spiralstory last chapter for info) and Ascended Calibur
Personality:Silent and dangerous.
Name: Necro
Color: Red+green
Appearance: Hangs weapons in several sheaths haging around his body.
Really Detailed Appearance: Hangs bombs in criss-cross bandoliers crossing his chest. Sheaths Khorovod and Jalovec on special double-sheath on his back that cross the swords to make an X. Flourish and Shockburst are tucked into his belt. Sealed sword and Arc razor in a special double-sheath on his belt. Shield is tied to his left wrist. Puts armors not in use in a pack on his back (hey, that rhymes! XD)
Gear: Khorovod, Jalovec, Shockburst brandish, lightning capacitor, super blast bomb, Flourish, Sealed Sword, Solid Cobalt Armor, Magic Hood, Spiral Demo Helm, several Cobalt Helms and Cobalt Armors, Wolver COat, Birstling Buckler.
Personality: Evil. Evil. And Evil. Did I mention evil?
Shadow says that he want to be a villain. But make me a more awesome villain than him. :)
Brothers. He is your bro, right?
Ive been reading this thread and the chapters are REALLY GOOD! Please continue. I wouldn't mind if I was a character either :D
Looks like i'm not famous enough to be in this fanfic..... D:
*curls up beside atgatg and dies, too*
*Extends arm and pushes Fallen to differeent corner*
Do I need to post an Application?
this is nice! just make sure that im a rouge villain. i dont like to fight in teams. XP
i have just now read the new chapter and i had no idea there where purple wolvers... i guess there are Gold wolvers... anyway
* dumps the unloked jelly beans into a wiker basket and keeps the ones liked* i do not like certian jelly beans... and now i shall wish that in the next chapter me and one other of the "renegades" go on a scouting mission to find neded supplies.
next Chapter will be up Friday, sorry fo delay.
if i am a good guy
Name:Spyash
armor: Skolver cap and dead shot mantle
weapons:Wild hunting blade,Acheron,Polaris,Blitz Needle
if bad guy
Name:Spyash
armor:Skolver cap and shadowsun slicker
weapons: GF,Blitz needle,Dread Venom Striker,Argent Peace Maker
Name: Falcon
Armor: skolver coat with a gold chapeau
Weapons: Acheron, Final Flourish, Polaris, Volcanic Plate Shield
Personality: very serious, lone wolf, tactical, almost never talks
Bio: was an assassin at one point in his life
good guy as usual
why is there no new chapter... i hope Doggies is alright
DID SHE DIE?!? She probably got a splinter then died.
Not only is At's post unrealistic, it's kinda suspicious...
0_o
I know NOTHING!!!!
*Pushes Doggies head out of Frotrex's view.*
What was THAT?! How do you explain THAT?!
O!O WHY ATGATG!!!!!!
why did you kill Doggies?
was it because of the jellie beans?.......
........wait a minute, that head is fake!!!!!!
:D *Throws robot Doggies head at Weld*
The robot head says, "Hello. No new chapters. EVAH!!!!"
P.S.
I squiggled a mustache and beard on my computer screen where Weld's avatar is.
....no i will rebuild this robot of doggies and send it on a mission to hunt and eliminate you...ATGATG!!!!!!!! ANARCHY!!!!!
She fell in a toxic dump and gained supernatural powers which she is currently using to fight off ALIENS!
beware for now i have put a large bounty on your head. you will either be attacked by pokemon or recieve a cold either one will pssible happen in your dreams
@Duskfinder
yeah, and i am king of the galaxy.... anyway ,WHEN IS THE NEW CHAPTER COMING
Anarchy is when everyone in a city or country is allowed free will, and can do pretty much anything they want. Riots can create anarchy, too.
*Random knight is behind Atgatg* HA! No knight can catch me! Or... pokemon..............
*KNIGHT TACKLES aTGATG* excuse ME FOR A MOMENT!
I call my army of Skolvahs to come to mai aid!!!
*Army of skolvers fly some how, and carry Dusk away.*
why did they take Dusk?????
'Cause he shmell like pie.
*Dusk's mauled hand falls next to Atgatg*
and then your skolvers attack you cause you smell like cherries
ooo.
are u taking characters? :3
pwease? ok, thanks! XP
my name is Shadow, and im more of a warrior kind of person. I suck at building XP. i once blew up a factory. lets say im like a rougish kind of person, and i met u guys and joined. my past is a mystery, and no one knows. i have Ash Tail set, Elemental Set, WOS, DTS, Leviathan Blade, Nightblade, SS, Flourish, Magnus, Kilowatt Pulsar, Shadowtech Alchemer, and Spine Cone.