[REBOOTED] Fanfic: Almirian Child-- Chapters Prologue-XI out!

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Isekuube

My Inspiration

I saw many different story casting things, and I already had an idea in mind, but it kinda died so, many other things revived that idea. Submit your ideas for a character like this:

Rolecasting sheet

Name (DUH)
Gender (DUH)
Appearance and Weapons
Characteristics
Background History
Good/Evil: (Will they help the Main or burden him?)
Expendability (To those of you who don't know, it's if you want the character to die, but at least one of you have to fill the role of the Mains's first friend, who dies in the Prologue, but in the end it will all be up to me, I will take into mind of you non-dieng person)
Role (You can put in what role you're appliing for, I know that some of you have, but...)

The Characters

Roles so far:
Main Characters (having somethng to do with the main character)
Main- Ice
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Ice's Party
Ice's Second in command- Vot
Ice's Healer- Blue
Ice's Gunslinger and Third in Command- Aria Azalus White (or Aria)
Ice's Swordsman- Satoshi
Ice's Bomber- Trevor
Ice's All-Around- Grittle
Ice's Other- Julius
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Dwayne's Squad
Ice's Rival- Dwayne
Dwayne's Second in Command- Diana
Dwayne's Healer- Kamron
Dwayne's Gunslinger- Johnathan
Dwayne's Swordsman- Frostrex
Dwayne's Bomber- Ryder
Dwayne's All-Around- Morgana
Dwayne's Other- Arena
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Solo Knights

Rogue Knight- Cross
Rogue Knight's Hunter- Angelic Tear (or just tear)
Rogue Knight's Companion/Cousin- Sacred-Tear
Divine Avenger's Rougue: Sushi

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Other Characters

Trevor's Crew:

Spyash
Kana
Critias

Angelic-Tear's Mother:

Celia

Table of Contents

Almirian Child- Prologue

Chapter I- Vot and Aria

Chapter II- The Divine Avengers

Chapter III- Cross

Chapter IV Satoshi and Julius

Chapter V- The Cleanup

Chapter VI- The Dark Path

Chapter VII- The Twenty-Third Depth

Chapter VIII- Angelic-Tear's Charge

Chapter IX- Depth ???

Chapter X- The Wintry Garden of Goo

Chapter XI- Another Commission

Chapter XII- Sanctuary Dreams- IN PROGRESS!

Chapter XIII- Annihilation- COMING SOON!

Chapter XIV- Battle on the Elevator- COMING SOON!

Chapter XV- Returning as Not So Heroes- COMING SOON!

Chapter XVI- Back Down Under- COMING SOON!

Chapter XVII- The Citadel and His Son- COMING NOT SO SOON!

Chapter XVIII- Gran Faust (No, Not Jennifer)- COMING NOT SO SOON!

Chapter XVIII- Themselves- COMING NOT SO SOON!

Chapter XIX- Checkmate- COMING NOT SO SOON!

Chapter XX- Returning as Actual Heroes- COMING NOT SO SOON!

Epilogue

Additional Messages

I have finished Chapter XI. Writers Block Sucks. I do have all of the character app-links done and you can now view every character with ease. If there are some that don't work, please notify me. I also encourage you to comment, because I feel like nobody's reading anymore. And I guess I can understand this, because I've been gone for like... a year.

Started on XII- Sanctuary Dreams. Also, once I finish Chapter XIII- Annihilation (or whatever I might change it to later) I will remove the rebooted tag. XII probably has one of the silliest beginnings in all of fanfic history.

Thanks,

Isekuube

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Emostabe
Blargh blargh blargh

Name: Dwayne
Gender: Male
Appearance and Weapons: Deconstructor, Mercurial Demo Hem/Armor.
Characteristics: Is good at making various kinds of noise to confuse his enemies.
Background History: Unknown. He's a bit of a mystery, honestly.
Expendability: Up to you.

Role: Main's rival, maybe? Or a villain?

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Valorai
Name: Blue Gender:

Name: Blue
Gender: Female
Appearance and weapons: Seraphic set with a heavy plate shield and leviathan blade. Blue personal color.
Characteristics: Good at being a medic
Background: Been one of the first to crash on cradle. Also used to work for the spiral order.
Expandability: Up to you.

Role: Main's best friend.

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Xairathan
Character App

Name: Critias
Gender: Male
Appearance: Cobalt player color, Dragon Scale Helm, Wyvern scale Mail. Carries a Blazebrand and Wyvern Scale Shield, and also uses a Silversix as needed.
Characteristics: Hesitant and timid except for when his friends are threatened; if they are he will attack with full force with no regard for his own safety.

History: Critias was part of a trainee's group going into Firestorm Citadel when he and his party were ambushed by Slag Walkers. Among the members were his leader and mentor Shinseki, his friend Torus, and his lover Alanis. Shinseki was killed, Alanis heavily injured, and Torus went missing. As a result Critias is now obsessed with defeating all the Slag Guards and eventually taking down Lord Vanaduke himself.

Expendability: I'd like him to survive please. If you want to use Torus or Alanis, I'd prefer to have Alanis live, and Torus is as expendable as you please.

Role: Support character or squad member

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Votabbot
One from Isis

Name: Vot
Gender: Male
Appearance and Weapons: Cobalt Personal Color, Solid Cobalt, Ascended Cali, Ageis
Characteristics: Timid, pretty good at leading a group, likes to know people.
Background History: A rookie knight-to-be that rose up the ranks of the Spiral Order. He is skilled with his Cali, but more of a talker than a fighter.
Expendability: You can murder him if you want.
Role: Supporting role (second in command of squad maybe)

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Biospartan
character app

Name Biospartan
Gender male
Appearance and Weapons dusker coat with magic hood red personal color
Characteristics social a good leader is untrusting at first
Background a knight born to lead he was the leader of one of the first groups into the clockworks
Expendability: I'd prefer him to live

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Kanmir
Name: Ryder Gender:

Name: Ryder
Gender: Male
Appearance and Weapons: Plasmatech Armor, Volcanic demo helm with helm-mounted display. Carries a nitronome, an ionized salt bomb, and an electron Vortex
Characteristics: Frequently questions things, but is surprisingly easy to talk to. Usually very cool and understanding.
Background History: Even before the knights landed on cradle, Ryder has always wanted knowledge. As a researcher or a tinkerer, Ryder is always trying to find something new. Since landing on cradle, he frequently explores the clockworks, hoping to find something new.
Expendability: I guess he could be somewhat expendable, though I dont want him to be the friend that dies in th prologue.

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Sanin
HI

Name: Kana
Gender: Female
Appearance and weapons: Fallen set, usually wear a Divine Stranger Hat and Wolver Coat as costume. ALWAYS carry her Crest of Almire, has a FoV and a Divine Avenger.
Characteristics: Kind-hearted, shy against new people unless they are friendly, act strong in front of people but very emotional.
Background: The only survivor after Almire was destroyed by Vanaduke, she was youngest Almirian Crusader in Almire history. She is very proud of her home.
Expendability: Don't want to die somewhere in the beginning chapters and her death can't be just random.
Role: Travel by herself, helps, saves, gives advises to other characters who are in need.(she is known for being in the right place at the right time.)

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Happyapathy
@Xairathan

Just noting a little discrepancy here, in my thread you submitted Critias as a male, and here a female, is he/she having an identity crisis right now? :s

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Xairathan
@Happy

Whoops, I totally meant 'male'. WTF was I thinking O.o I'll go edit that

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Kaijuhunter
Name: Aria Azalus White

Name: Aria Azalus White

Gender: female

Age:16

Appearance and weapons: Green eyes, chapeau of the gold rose, angelic mail, argent peacemaker, valiance,

Characteristics: warm an welcoming, kind.

Fears:losing her friends

History: She was an Almirian princess before the kingdom was burned to the ground by the evil Lord Vanaduke. She had to survive
in the wild for 4 years.She
quickly learned how to fight and joined the Spiral Order. She has an innate talent with guns and can hit a fly that is over
15 miles away. Shes the best gunslinger in the spiral order and will never abandon her friends. She is also a pretty good
medic.

Role: Can u make her like maybe a main character? Like a knight who avenges her kingdom by killing Vanaduke?

Expendability: i dont care its ur story. But if she does die, id like it to be a heroic death, like her protecting the other Knights from a powerful enemy or something.

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Isekuube
Sowwy Guys XD

I've been somewhat distracted with the actual game. XD I am amazed with what you've all come up with and I will adress some of you now.

@Kind of Everybody I know my title is "Almirian Destiny" (and that may not even be the title of the story ;) ), but are you guys trying to have like an Almirian background so you can get into the story? lol. You don't have to answer this but it was just an observaition :D

@Biospartan are you going to identify his weapons? Just a thought ;)

@Kaijuhunter Does Aria Azalus White have a nickname? Like Aria or something?

~Lord Ice (IGN Isekuube)

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Kaijuhunter
Yup!

Duh, her friends call her Aria, the old Almirians called her Princess! Btw can u check out my fanfic, the Arc of Almire? The thread is shown as chapter 1:Skylark down!plz tell me how to make it better!

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Isekuube
Changes

Ok, I have started the Prologue blindly not remembering details, and I have to say it is a LOT longer than I originally thought. I have made some changes based on appearance and personality. Vot is it OK if I give your character Azure Guardian stuff and a levi? I have also hade him more serious, but it adds to the humor :) Wanted to see if it was ok with you. Umm.... well, my brother has asked to be in the story and just because he is my brother doesnt mean he will automatically be in the story. Kaij and Vota, I have added you into Prologue as early friends with the main and his friend, I will post the Prologue on Friday, hehe so don't let me forget. @Kaijuhunter Did you make any changes, I thought she had the Fallen set XD oh well I can always change it. And dop you mind if I change the Angelic to Radiant Silvermail? Gold with gold... or is that something else idr >.< Have not really made any other changes, except I made up the main and friend, and their "guildmaster" they are not apart of a guild well I am adding the giuld master into the story as a role. NOTE: THE MADE UP MAIN, MAIN'S FRIEND, AND "GUILDMASTER ARE NOT PERMANENT FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO ARE SWEATING AND WETTING YOUR PANTS XD I dont really want to spoil it but, I will try to post the first part of the Prologue sometime today.

~Lord Ice (IGN Isekuube)

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Isisdelltion
Can he have a Mighty Cobalt

Can he have a Mighty Cobalt helm?
Oh, and yeah, I'm Votabbot. :D

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Kaijuhunter
Aria: Ok, sure.*changes clothes*

Sure, Aria can have radiant silvermail. It fits a bit better anyway. Oh yeah i have changed it so that she now has Argent Peacemaker, Valiance, and also a Hunting blade

THE CAKE IS A LIE

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Starmandeluxe
Name: Trevor

Name: Trevor

Gender: Male

Appearance and Weapons:

Big Angry Bomb - "It reminds me of the sun in a way that reminds me of gears."
Ash of Agni - "This isn't an urn?"
Mad Bomber - "BWAHAHAHAHAHA!"

Characteristics: Happily insane.

Background History: Before going insane, Trevor was one of the best bombers yet to land on Cradle. He was a kind, friendly knight, if not a bit of a recluse. However, on a routine venture into the Clockworks, his team reached the woods of the Snarbolax. The leader of his team gave the order to stop before descending to the beast's lair, planning to return to Haven for supplies. But then, an attack! Out of the surrounding trees, the wild Snarbolax jumped out and started slashing at the team. Unprepared and without a bell, Trevor's team fell. It's unknown how exactly Trevor alone survived. Was it his skill as a bomber? Did the Snarbolax spare him? All that's known is that he was found quivering on an elevator in the arcade repeating, "the Snarbolax, the Snarbolax, the Snarbolax."

After intense therapy, he regained some, but not all of his sanity. He's still a good bomber, but his current skill can't compare to his skill before the attack. Every few weeks or so he'll snap back to his former self, but never for long periods of time.

Expendability: Could probably be killed off and then reintroduced into the story with some illogical explanation.

Role: Main's Bomber

"What? A story? I like stories! specially stories about Unimogs. Does this story have one? No? Aw. At least I still have my giant vat of peanut butter. Would you like to join me for a swim in the ground?"

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Isekuube
Hehe

lol I know but Vota was shorter and it didnt portray "Vot" and well... idk even know why i posted this lol. Oh and Kaijuhunter, I think i did have a AP when I was thinking blindly. XD I think I am going to post the first part of the Prologue after I email it to myself.

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Isekuube
Here it is!

Almirian Destiny- Prologue
"I could have saved him, I wasn't fast enough...."

Prologue Part I

Ice was part of an elite group of Knights called “Duos” as you can guess from the name

two people were involved on a mission at the same time. Ice was a mere newbie at the time,

but was accepted into the group because of his potential. At the time of their acceptance Ice

had the Spiral Sallet, Spiral Cullet, Proto Sword, and the Frost Gun.

Ice wondered the Headquarters of the “Duos” and saw pairs of people walking around,

some of them were arguing, laughing, flirting, and practicing, all in pairs, but looking at these

battle scared knights, it made him scared. He had never been so timid in his life before. They

heard a loud noise on the loudspeaker, “Hey hey hey! Its Dragon here I want the following

Knights to report to my office: Fire, Ice, Vot, and Aria Azalus White!”

Two other Knights emerged from the crowd Ice had never seen before: A boy with the

Mighty Cobalt set, Mighty Defender, and Ascended Calibur. Lastly he saw a newbie, who had

the Spiral Pith Helm, Spiral Brigandine, Proto Sword, and Firotech Alchemer. They both stood

there staring at each other with puzzled expressions on when the Mighty Cobalt person, who

must have been Vot, came over to them and said, “Hey guys, you must be Ice and Fire, I’d love

to get to know you more, but we got to get to Dragon’s office.” Ice shook his head, nodded, and

followed Vot to Dragon’s office.

When they got to Dragon’s office Ice saw that Dragon was a full Dragon Scale set, with

a Dread Venom Striker strapped to his back with a Blight Needle at his side. He had a scar

running along his left eye, he looked dead serious except for the huge grin on his face. “Here

come my new recruits!” exclaimed Dragon, “Welcome to the Duos!”

“Woo hoo!” celebrated Vot and gave Ice a high-five. Fire did a little dance. “But where is

the fourth Knight?” Suddenly another Knight burst into the room “Agh, phew, oh Cradle…” said

the Knight as she burst in to Dragon’s office. Dragon raised an eyebrow, “A little late don’t you

think, Aria Azalus White?” asked Dragon. Aria Azalus White was a girl with a Golden Chapeau

and Radiant Silvermail and Argent Peacemaker at her side with a Crest of Almire on her back.

“Yes, yes I’m sorry,” said the Knight called Aria Azalus White “I just got here when,

another knight asked why I wasn’t at your office and I rushed over here as fast as I could.” “Did

you assign the pairs yet?” asked Aria Azalus White “Lucky for you I have not, I will give them

now,” said Dragon

“Let’s see….” said Dragon as he walked behind his desk, “Ah here we are… Ice… you

will be with… Fire.” Ice looked over at Fire, he saw the astonished look in his eye, Ice guessed

that he would be paired up with one of the other Knights not two beginners. “Vot you will be with

Aria Azalus White.” Vot looked over at Aria Azalus White, “Hey hey! I’m Vot, pleased to make

your acquaintance.” Vot said. Aria Azalus White smiled warmly, “Please, call me Aria,” “Well,

now I can see you’re all warming up to each other, but I have a job for both of your groups.” said

Dragon

“Ok first mission for your groups, a Tier 1 run, down to-“Vot cut him off “A Tier 1 run?

Why can’t we do a-“ Dragon cut Vot off this time, “The first terminal,” finished Dragon with a

steely glare towards Vot, “You may progress faster than others and get to the harder missions

I will assign you…” “You all are dismissed,” Dragon said back to his usual self, “Once you are

done with the run go to Basil and he will give you a special item then bring it back to me,” “That

will be all,” Dragon waved his hand dismissal, went back behind his desk, and sat down. “Well

we better getting to the gate now,” Ice said “Yeah, awesome!” exclaimed Fire. Ice could tell that

Fire was eager to get going, so they rushed to the Arcade.

“Which gate should we go to?” asked Ice when they got to the Arcade, he looked over

towards Fire and saw he wasn’t listening. “Hey, hey! Look at this gate! Why isn’t it an elevator?

Why does it have all these shiny crystals? Maybe it leads somewhere!” Ice went over to him

just in time, and pulled him back towards the gates. “Now which one should we do?” asked Ice

again, “Well, maybe we should do the Orange Pointy Stick Thing gate!” said Fire excitedly “Ok,

though I doubt that’s what the gate is called… Let’s GO!” said Ice

When they got down to the party lobby they saw the first level: Wolver Den, Ashes to

Ash Tails. “Ashes to Ash Tails, huh, well… let’s beast this place! Heehee, see what I did there?”

asked Fire. Ice just slapped his face. Ice took his Proto Sword and Shield out and stood readily.

Fire took out his Firotech Alchemer, cocked it, twisted it around, put it in his belt, and grinned.

Ice rolled his eyes, “Oh come on,” he said and with that he charged forward out of the protective

barrier.

First thing they saw was a bunch of bushes, “I wonder if there is anything in these

bushes?” Fire wondered and crawled under the bush. “GAAAAH! Heeee-e-eeelp!” Ice yelled,

he was under attack by a pack of 3 Wolvers. Ice hacked and cut at the Wolvers as they bit at

his heels. “Hey look at this flower, it’s so pretty!” said Fire as he picked the flower. “Guess what

WON’T be pretty? Your face when I’m done here!” said Ice as he killed the first Wolver and

started on the next one.

“Ok coming!” Ice looked over towards Fire and saw that he had a flower on his Pith

Helm. “What on Cradle is on your head???” asked Ice in a rush, “It’s the pretty flower I saw in

the bush!” Fire said as he got out of the bush. Ice stabbed the second Wolver. “Huh, huh, huh,”

Ice panted, “I thought, huh, huh, there was-“ he was cut off when another Wolver pounced on

him and knocked his sword out of his hand. “AUGH! Get off me-e-eee!” Fire aimed his Alchemer

at the Wolver’s fiery eye. Ice heard a BAM! “Aroof…” uttered the Wolver and it went limp. Ice

pushed the Wolver off him, looked at fire and said, “Nice shot, dude,” Fire grinned and did that

twirly move with his gun and replied, “Heck yeah! Now let’s go!”

Ice and Fire were on the floor, collapsed, and bloody all over by the time they got

to the terminal. “Oh, my GOSH…” whispered Ice as he got down to the terminal, “That was

HORRIBLE!” muttered Fire “Well, we made it...” said Ice wearily stood up, but fell back

down. “Unngh!” he tried again, and propped himself on his sword. “Basil, do you have to special

item?” Fire muttered weakly “Yes, I do little one, come, but heal first,” said Basil as he gestured

towards the healing pads. Ice and Fire hobbled over to the healing pads. Ice collapsed savoring

the fresh health.

Feeling rejuvenated Ice stood up, “What is the special item Basil?” Ice said in a

firmer voice than before. “It is quite odd, little one, it’s an apple.” Ice’s eye twitched, “We

got mauled, pummeled, nearly eaten, and torn apart FOR A FREAKING APPLE?!?!?” Basil

remained calm, “It was Dragon’s idea, little one, and I did not want question his request.” Ice

sighed, “Here, hand me the apple,” said Ice. Basil handed Ice the apple and Ice put it in his

backpack and said, “Thank you Basil, c’mon Fire, let’s go have a talk with Dragon.”

Ice burst in Dragon’s office, “WHAT ON CRADLE IS THE MEANING OF THIS?” Ice asked

furiously as he slammed the apple on his desk. “Ah yes thank you,” said Dragon at peace as

he took the apple from his desk, “Why did you send us through a Wolver infested place to get

an apple?” “I was getting hungry,” replied Dragon “Wait,” asked Ice, “We went on that run… TO

GET YOU A SNACK?!?” “Yes, exactly, thank you.”

With that Dragon took out some fresh cheese, which was odd because he did not have

a refrigerator in his office and put it on his apple. That was Ice and Fire’s very first run; now let’s

get to the real part.

Prologue Part II

1 year later they were both a full 5 star. Fire had the full Deadshot Mantle set, Heater

Shield, which Ice always makes fun of Fire for, Combuster, double Firo Drivers which Fire

tends to use more than anything else, and the Ash of Agni. Ice had the full Skolver set, Crest of

Almire, Glacius which he fondly named IceKlaw, Shivermist Buster, Divine Avenger, and Argent

Peacemaker, but when he is feeling comical, he often switches his Argent Peacemaker with his

old Frost Gun.

As well as being a full Five Star they were the best pair in “Duos” they had just brought

back a piece of the Red Roarmulus Twins’ tooth to Dragon, and before that the Ice Queen’s

refrigerator, and even before that The Rabid Snarbolaxes’ claws. “All this junk is better than, an

apple, huh?” asked Ice with a knowing smile. Dragon laughed, “I guess so.” “Although,” Dragon

added, “That was a good apple,” he said. They all laughed.

Aria and Vot had left the “Duos” not too long before, and had gone their separate

ways, still friends with each other and with Ice and Fire. Now that Ice and Fire were both Five

Star they could go on their very last mission: Bring back a Darkfire Almirian Seal! “Ready

for your next and last mission?” asked Dragon, “Heck, yeah! Bring it ON!” said Ice and Fire

simultaneously. “Well, then, you need to bring back at least one Darkfire Almirian Seal,” said

Dragon, “If you succeed than you can keep the rest of the seals and leave the Duos.”

For this particular run Ice had a Snarbolax Coat with a Vog Cub Cap with a Crest of

Almire strapped to his back. He had IceKlaw, his Argent Peacemaker, Divine Avenger, and

Final Flourish. Fire had the Deadshot Mantle and the Mad Bomber Helm, but with a Vog Set

costume; in addition he had his Firo Driver, Blitz Needle, and Shivermist Buster.

When Ice and Fire got to the Blackstone Bridge and they were shocked at what they

saw: bones, helmets, skulls, swords, guns, and bombs lying on the ground from dead knights

and dead Carnavons the defending wheels of the old Almirian gates shoot giant wheels at them

continually, ever dodging them as they avoid shadow fire and kill zombies. When they got to the

party button, Ice charged up IceKlaw and Fire charged up his Firo Driver they both stepped on

and the fight began!

Fighting waves and waves of Carnavons, they finally killed all of them except the

Trojans. The Trojans charged and Ice nimbly dodged it and Fire got out of the way just in time.

Fire got out the Shivermist, charged it up, set it down next to the Trojan, and kited around it until

the Shivermist froze it in place. He waited until the freeze did it’s damage, while he was waiting

he charged up his Blitz. Fire unleashed his volley of Blitz bullets and the Trojan left this world.

Meanwhile, Ice had trouble freezing his foe to the ground. “Bah, freeze you dang

Trojan!” yelled Ice as he unleashed IceKlaw’s charge again and again. While the Trojan was

occupied with Ice, Fire charged up his Driver. BAM! “Neigh...” muttered the Trojan after it fell to

its knees. It soon turned to stone and dropped crowns and hearts.

In the later levels Ice and Fire hacked through the never ending waves of Carnavons

and Trojans. They finally got The Throne Room of Darkfire Vanaduke! They healed up talked to

their friends, who wished them good luck.

Finally they talked to Aria and Vot, “Hey Vot! Hey Aria! How’s it going? We are currently

in the Throne Room of Darkfire Vanaduke,” Ice told his friends. “Awesome, good luck to you

both!” replied Aria. “May the spirits of the lost Knights be with you!” said Vot. “Thanks guys,”

replied Ice. With the luck that their friends wished upon them Ice and Fire stepped onto the party

button that would lead to their doom.

“What’s this?” roared Darkfire Vanaduke, “More wolves hungry for the blood of Almire?

Our great kingdom shall never fall to the likes of beasts!” And the battle began. Vanaduke’s first

move was to slam down his mace on the pair of knights, Fire adeptly dodged the mace and Ice

jumped up and landed on Darkfire Vanaduke’s mace, and started to run along the mace, up

onto his arm, and began to slash furiously at Darkfire Vanaduke’s face, neck, and chest.

Darkfire Vanaduke roared savagely and walked north to the top of the Throne Room. His

mask popped off and Vanaduke got on his knees and was inanimate. The mask began to spit

fire balls while some orbited him. Ice went over to the wells and threw a waterball at him and it

missed. Enraged, Ice went to the next well and threw it at him, again Ice blundered.

While Ice was epically missing Vanaduke’s Mask, Fire was busy defending himself

against the waves of fireballs. Fire looked back and saw Ice’s progress: it wasn’t very

good. “Hey! Ice!” shouted Fire, Ice looked over at him, when Fire was sure he had his attention

he said, “I’ll throw the waterballs at him, you come here and occupy Vana here,”

Ice came over to Fire expertly feinting the fire and shadow fire, he made it over to where

Fire was, while Fire made it to the wells. Ice blocked the damage with his Crest of Almire. Fire

threw a waterball at the mask. Sloosh! Vanaduke’s Mask was put out! Amazed, Ice cleft and

stabbed the mask while Fire bombarded the mask with Firo Driver bullets. They repeated that

until it inflamed Vanaduke. Vanaduke was on his Third Phase.

Ice and Fire attacked Vanaduke until he was so damaged that he was on his Fifth

Phase! Ice and fire were doing great, until Fire tripped. Fire tripped on a Carnavon’s skull.

Vanaduke, seeing this opportunity, summoned Cursed Dreadnaughts, and slammed down with

his mace, while Ice watched with dismay. It didn’t annihilate Fire, but a Dreadnaught ran over

and impaled Fire with his spear. Fire dangled lifelessly on the spear and the Dreadnaught threw

Fire at a wall, and there he slammed against the wall and didn’t get up.

Infuriated, Ice laid waste to the Throne room killing the Dreadnaughts and savagely

mauling Darkfire Vanaduke. Vanaduke tried his best to fend off Ice in his rage, but eventually

Darkfire Vanaduke got on his knees and laid down, dead. Ice rushed over to his friend, “No,

no, no, stay with me man! Don’t go don’t go!” sobbed Ice, “Ughh…” mumbled Fire. “Fire? Fire,

speak to me!” said Ice, “Hey, this was more disastrous than that Wolver Den, eh?” rasped Fire.

He gasped and closed his eyes. Something changed that day for Ice, he never wanted anything

to do with Dragon again and he went off hating everything.

When Ice got back to Dragon’s office he was polishing his nameplate. “Here is your

stupid Darkfire Almirian Seal!” said Ice, “Ah, thank you, Ice” said Dragon, “Uh, where is Fire.”

Ice’s glare broke for a moment, then the scowl returned, and he stormed out of Dragon’s office

and never came back. That’s where this story begins…

Had this redone, just a few grammical errors, still, correct me on any that I didn't get. Thanks,

Isekuube

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Frostrex
Ummm...

Do you need any more?

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Isisdelltion
:D

Heh, Frost and Ice.
This is gonna be fun. :D

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Spyash
Is it to late to join?

Name: Spyash

Gender:male

Appererance: Snarby coat and skolver cap (with black rose chapeau as costume)

weapons: wild hunting blade,Acheron,Divine avenger,Final flourish (if you want to throw in different weapons Polaris,Blitz needle,Argent peace maker,Nitrome,and Shivermist buster are all ok though he always has his wild hunting blade)

characteristics:Childish,loves that fact that he can move faster than most people and so when he's know the fight will be easy gets it so he can dodge at the last second spin around the opponent and take a quick slash at them and then say "too slow"

background history: Was traind as a child to not speak when not expected to to always get the best marks in his class, always expected todo all his homework,always to get home on time,always to spend his time studying,eventully on his thirteenth birthday he said "I'd like combat training" his parents without hesitation said "NO". for the next three years his family was successful his parents became dangerous with how well they were doing some of the government though that the people might like them more and vote for them.So they said that thy needed them to a clockworks exploration and sent them off to a certain floor where they had asked the gremlins to be. the gremlins went down hard as most of them hit the floor but i the end the parents were defeated and the government refused to portal them back.After finding out the news Spyash got himself weapon training,but the problem was he was the oldest of his beginner class and had a hard time finding it ok to fight littler kids.after a while he got the hang of it a progressed through the classes until he hit the point where he could specialize in types of weapons first he did fast weapons which he spent a while mastering.He then moved on to medium speed swords (three strike) which he's good at and then spent some time doing slow speed swords (2 hit) which he is average at.

expendability: i'd prefer not to die but if i have to i must thats fine aslong as it's a great fight i put up

shield: swiftstrike buckler or BTS or grey owlite shield (preferably swiftstrike but whatever you think)

role: Main or Main's GM (preferably main)

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No it's not @Spyash

It's not too late to join, I might add you as the first main's friend, cause that's kind of how Main's firend works, but it will already be a lot of work formatting the Prologue and adding the weaopns and name in, Fire had his personallity though also foolish :P

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OH! Yes, I forgot

Remember how I said I was going to be in the story? Well here is his character page:

Name: Ice

Gender: Male

Appearance/Weapons: WHen he is not on runs his appearance is as follows: Skolver set, a Crest of Almire strapped to his back, Divine Avenger, a Glacius which he fondly names IceKlaw, Shivermist Buster, and an Argent Peacemaker.

Characteristics: Fun to be around, the joker of the team, if one of his teammates is wounded or killed, he will go on a rampage everywhere, and he won'te be able to calm down for a couple of days. Oh yeah, and he will do almost anything for Cheese, Fruit by the Foots, and Milk Duds.

Background/History: Brought up by knights from the Alpha Squad, he dreamed to be the knight who opened the core. When the Alpha Squad dissapeared, he got the idea that the core swallowed them, even before Luitenant Vaelin did. He got into a weapons training class and became the best there was, with particularly swords, he occasionally uses guns as they help him ranged wise.

Expendability: He may die, but I probabloy will not kill him :P

Role: Main's Swordsman and most trusted adivisor.

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@Frostrex

I do need some more glad you asked, the MP shows what roles are left. That goes for other ppls to, other than Frostrex!

~Lord Ice (IGN Isekuube)

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As I said before

My brother wants to be apart of the story, here is his character page:

Name: Sushi

Gender: Male

Appearance and Weapons:Full skolver set with divine dragon wings, an Aegis and only one weapon: Cold Iron Vanquisher

Characteristics: Cool, but a little shy

Background History: Was raised by wolvers when one day ran away from his cruel family looking for a new one. Always had trouble speaking English, but never beast.

Expendability: NEVER IN ALL OF ANYONES
YEARS!!!
Role: A mysterious knight/ wolver in the story that dosnt talk much and is only in a handfull of the story.

Ok, well that was my brother's character. He wants people to comment on it >_>. Anyway... wait? What did you call me? Why you little [My brother and I start fighting] *Cencorship*

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wait....

so do i get killed of soon?

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@Spyash Hehe

Well, I may kill you, but I have not decided! MUAHAHAHA! If I decide to make you him... idk it will be a lot of work, I will have to change the weapons name, blah, blah, blah. Read the Prologe, the character "Fire" might be you, or the role you applied for "Dragon". Have you read my Prologue? You should if you have not.

~Lord Ice (IGN Isekuube)

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SPAM

SPAM

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SPAM

SPAM

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Hah, fail SPAM double

Hah, fail SPAM double post.
Great Prolouge, but as you said there are some grammatical errors.

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Okaayyy...

I'll be the Rival's Swordsman...

Name: Frostrex
Gender: Male
Appearance and Weapons: Dark blue PC, Mighty Cobalt helm, Azure Guardian armour, Aegis, BlizzardHale, a sword who's blade is composed of ice
Characteristics:Doesn't talk much and gives yes or no as opinions. A dealy fighter, combining speed and strength to form crushing blows.
Background History: Is this neccessary?
Expendability: 50-50

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@Isisdellition @Powpowpowpowpow, etc. @Frostrex

I said there were grammical errors? Huh.... weird lol. AND WHAT'S WITH THE SPAM??? I should just make a thread where everyone can take there spamming >_>. Yes it is nessicary, I would like to know more about your character, take Starmandeluxe's character "Trevor" for example, now I know that I should make him afraid of the Snarbolax and make him happily insane.

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Whoops

Ah, formatting errors.
I fail typed.
Please forgive. :D

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Waaa

Lol um... Ise, Aria Azalus White... U can just call her Aria... Thats just her full name...

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Lol my bad

Oh uh nevermind... I saw the edit... My bad

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^ ^

No problem, no problem! lol both of you XD. I have started a bit on Chapter I- The Squad, but I need more members for the squad! The rival squad will be introduced in Chapter III- Dwayne. And remember my brother, well he will be in the story as a minor character, maybe in CHapter IV or Chapter V, i don't know yet :/
Hehe, now on to my Homework!

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Uh, hi.

Here's one I just came up with. Let me see if I can structure this right.

Name: (Original) Construct B5714984, (Given name) Julius
Gender: Neither, but male voice.
Appearance and Weapons: A higher quality Mecha Knight, but somewhat damaged looking due to its backstory. Equipped with a prototype elemental beam-cannon in its ocular lenses (eyes, but I like to sound cool), a sword with minerals embedded in the core of its handle, thus capable of generating elemental and shadow edges on the blade. Durable armor, but not indestructible.
Characteristics: Somewhat timid and inexperienced, desires to learn, make friends. You know, the whole deal.
Background History: Originally created with the same prototype circuitry that would later conceive the Roarmulus Twins, Julius was part of a large-scale AI program engineered by the Gremlins to create an army that would adapt to war conditions. This backfired when a computer virus (this can be a story element engineered by the other main characters to introduce Julius) crippled the majority of the army, leaving only Julius and a handful of other Mecha Knights left alive. In a panic, Julius tries to flee, only to be attacked by Gremlins for an "intelligence defect" (emotions), thus damaging his armor.
Expendability: I could go either way about this character, really. I created him a few seconds before typing this, so there's no real emotional attachment. Others might like him, though.

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Almirian Destiny Chapter I- Vot and Aria

Here is the first chapter and I am unable to format this because of all the complicated HTML codes and such, but all in all I hope you guys like it! (Sorry no new characters were added. Note: The random Almirian Destiny and Vot and Aria are the headers and footers, just thought that might help you comprehend all of it! ENJOY!
Almirian Destiny

Chapter I- Vot and Aria

“Is that you?”

5 years after Fire died, Ice went down into the Clockworks from time to time, but

never into Vanaduke’s gate ever again. He mainly went into Ice Queen Shadow Lairs.

His appearance had changed since Fire died as well, he changed his personal colour to

red, he now had a Snarbolax Set costume with a Skolver set as his set armour, he had

a Barbourus Thorn Shield, his main weapon set was, a Gran Faust, Acheron, IceKlaw,

and Fire’s old Firo Driver.

He rarely went to the Town Square or other places in Haven, because people

usually got out of his way, threw things at him, and little children cried when he came

near them. Today, went to the Arcade to go down to his usual relax place: Ice Queen

Jelly Palace.

When Ice got to the Arcade he came to an abrupt stop. Over by the Ruby Titan

gate was a knight with the Azure Guardian set and a Leviathan Blade strapped to his

back, it was a knight that Ice recognized as Vot! Ice hesitated as he saw Vot, but Ice

just walked onto the elevator when he heard a familiar voice from behind him, “Ice? Is

that you?” asked Vot. Ice said nothing. “Oh my gosh, it is you!” exclaimed Vot as he ran

over to meet his friend.

“Long time, no see man!” said Vot excitedly, “I’ll go call Aria, she’ll want to come

see you again!” “Umm, that might not be the best idea…” said Ice feebly. Vot didn’t hear

him, “Hey Aria, guess what? I just ran into Ice by the-“Vot held the phone away from his

ear and Ice heard a happy high-pitched screech, “Yes yes, I am not getting back at you

for that one time in the Snarbolax Lair,” “What? Yes he is standing next to me right now

you should come over right now!”

“Hiya! Ice!” said Aria excitedly, “Woah that was fast” commented Vot, “Yeah I

wanted to see my old friend again!” Aria said as she gave Ice a friendly hug. “I must get

going now,” said Ice rather quickly, “Where are you going?” asked Aria, ”You just go

here and I haven’t had time to catch up,” “Yeah, what happened to Fire? Is he here with

you?” “NO! He’s NOT!” yelled Ice, “Not anymore,” said Ice sadly, as he held Fire’s old

Firo Driver.

Vot and Aria looked a bit surprised at Ice’s sudden outburst. Vot put a hand on

his friend’s back and said, “It’s OK we understand,” “No, you don’t!” said Ice on the

verge of tears, he was like a brother to me, we teased each other, we wrestled, won in

Lockdown, defeated all the Shadow Lairs, all except…” Ice trailed off, “Darkfire

Vanaduke,” said Ice, he retold what happened in the Citadel. “I could have stopped him,

I wasn’t fast enough…”

Vot respectfully stabbed his Levi into the ground, while Aria was on her knees

sobbing. Ice turned back to go on the elevator with a tear in his eye. “Wait!” said

Vot, “Where are you going?” he asked, “To my usual seclusion hideaway: Shadow Lair

Royal Jelly Palace,” said Ice, “I am going now,” “Hold on a second, can we come?”

asked Aria, “No, not for the run, but we can rendezvous at the Depth 23 Terminal,” said

Ice, “I must meditate on a big choice. ”With that, Ice walked over to the elevator and

went down to Emberlight.

Ice went down to Emberlight and fought his way down through the depths

contemplating about something: a squad. It has been a trend in Cradle ever since the

elevators were expanded allowing more knights to step upon it allowing up to 7 knights

for different roles, Leader, Swordsman, Gunslinger, Bomber, Healer, All-around, and

other.

Ice finally made it to Depth 23 and made it to the rendezvous location and met up

with Aria and Vot. “Hey guys,” whispered Ice. “Hi Iceeee,” whispered Aria. “Why are we

whispering?” whispered Vot. They all laughed, Ice had shared his first laugh with his

friends in 5 years.

Well I hope you liked it,

Isekuube

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Next Chapters

Look out for Chapter II- The Avengers!

Following Chapters

Chapter III- Dwaynne
Chapter IV- Savior

Unsure what the other chapters will be, but I'm not gonna plan that far ahead.

~Lord Ice "Don't do it!" "I have to...."

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@Frostrex

Hey your custom sword that you made? I think I might change it out with a weapon from Dragon Quest V called teh Icicle Dirk, heres a link to it: http://www.woodus.com/den/games/dq4ds/weapons.php Scroll down untill you get to the Icicle Dirk. This is actually a better website where you don't have to scroll, but check the other one out as well: http://dragonquest.wikia.com/wiki/Icicle_dirk

~Lord Ice "Don't do it!" "I have to...."

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Thingy

Name: Blademaster
Gender: Male
Appearance and Weapons: Twin Leviathans as weapons. Crest of Almore and Almirian Crusader Set. Cyan colour.
Characteristics: His swordplay is second to none.
Background History: He was an elite Almirian soldier but when the kingdom collapsed he escaped and joined the Spiral Order. He is relentless with his twin Leviathan Blades and he can kll his foes with three lucky hits sometimes.
Good/Evil: Good
Expendability: I'd rather he lived.
Role: Main, since it's still open.

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Name (Grittle)Gender

Name (Grittle)

Gender (Male)
Appearance and Weapons:Rock jelly helm(cool game face accessory) miracle cloak, sinister skelly shield, pepperbox, master blast bomb, electron charge

Characteristics: Orange eyes, part jelly(thats the hat!)

Background History: used to sell trinkets, Main's rival's all-rounder character slain his parents, likes to eat.

Good/Evil: neutral

Expendability: gets badly injured

Role all-rounder :in main's party

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Blizzardhale

Two things....
Great new chapter!
Blizzardhale is from Spiralstory, the long and pretty awesome story of Vot and the Band. It has long since been abandoned, due to the lack of feedback and/or new characters....
and I had like two new chapters for it.
Oh well, just search for it. :D

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NO

C'mon continue it! Oh, and I guess you could switch it out.

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Well...

If you really want to I can, but I just remembered that the Dirk is like a knife if your Blizzardhale is a long sword then ou could have both, just a thought :)

~Lord Ice "Don't do it!" "I have to...."

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Ah yes an another thing!

@Kaijuhunter I'm sorry that I haven't been able to put in the "Almirian Princess" aspect of Aria, The time isn't ripe.... lol, I will try to do it soon though, maybe a cliffhanger at the end of a chapter, idk.

~Lord Ice "Don't do it!" "I have to...."

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And on that note...

@Powpowpowpowpowpow Do you mind if I just name the Main, Blademaster? As in keeping the aspects of "Ice" but giving him a new name? I would have to write the Prologue and first chapter all over :P I'm going to change the IceKlaw (Ice's Glacius) thing, if you choose to accept.

~Lord Ice "Don't do it!" "I have to...."

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Ok

Ok... I started a new fanfic and will get more into it after I finish the next chapter of Almirian Destiny here is the link: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/45827#comment-298932

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Umm.... Derp?

I was going to say something, but I forgot... XD I will edit this for my post XDDDD

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^

Ok nvm I wanted to look at somethng on the thread :P Ignore my post up here ^