Spiral Knights - [REBOOTED] Fanfic: Almirian Child-- Chapters Prologue-XI out!

[REBOOTED] Fanfic: Almirian Child-- Chapters Prologue-XI out!

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Tue, 08/13/2013 - 08:35

#201

Isekuube

No Longer

No Longer a Reservation.

@Scamall Well, I did kind of fix it, I just don't know what else to fix, could you give me a suggestion on what you mean?

Fri, 05/25/2012 - 11:01

#202

Scamall

@Isekuube

The bit where Feron runs through Cross' bio has sections in parentheses, followed by notes put in by Tailithia regarding slight corrections and omissions. It wouldn't make much sense to have Cross' love-life on record when he's supposed to be a secretive assassin.

EDIT: Oh, I forgot to mention the bit where Feron somehow knows about the behind-the-scenes-War-killing-people-and-Pestilence's-message-to-Cross thing. Gotta say, though, Tailithia's doing a good job of pointing out plot holes. I'd never have noticed it otherwise.

Fri, 05/25/2012 - 11:26

#203

Isekuube

Ah.

I could've sworn I got rid of Talithia's notes, and never thought of the love thing. :P Ok, fixed it, tell me if there are any more errors.

Fri, 05/25/2012 - 15:23

#204

Isekuube

Brace Yourselves

So, I've decided to change the name of Almirian Destiny, to make more sense, if you've grown to like the name, I am sorry. But this is for the best. ,

Isekuube.

Fri, 05/25/2012 - 18:17

#205

Kaijuhunter

Nice to hear that youre

Nice to hear that youre almost done, Ise. I myself am in high school and am about to go into sophomore year! XD

Btw, just started a new fanfic and id like some new faces. Is it ok if i use one or two of your characters from your app archive? Thnx.

Oh, I gotta go now. Sayonara, Ise-kun!

*I love anime and lots of japanese stuff! :)*

Tue, 08/13/2013 - 08:35

#206

Isekuube

Huh...

I didn't really pay attention to your post Kaij, :P If you want to use some new faces for your fanfic, then just tell me on there.

Sun, 05/27/2012 - 10:13

#207

Angelic-Tear

me = back on internet,

just saying hello.
also...the name change is just weird. I don't get it. I'll just have to wait and see what it means...
now i've got to get back to Talbot's entry for TCR ...what next...au revoir mes amis! (Japanese and Anime is not for me (well, not writing it anyway) but french, as my second language, is :P)

Sun, 05/27/2012 - 12:29

#208

Isekuube

Don't worry, it'll make sense, just wait...

Untill the end of the book.

Sun, 05/27/2012 - 23:48

#209

Angelic-Tear

nine more chapters...

Oh well, i have an OK imagination and am already speculating possibly.

/sleep (I have to go to school in 40mins so i don't know why i'm sleeping)

Sun, 06/03/2012 - 06:29

#210

Insert-Knigh-Name

ME CHARGLE!

Name:Chargle
Gender:Male
Equips:Vog Cub Cap,Vog Cub Coat,Divine Avenger,Leviathan Blade,Grey Owlite shield
Characteristic(s):Crazy
History: Unknown
Good
Expendabiliity: No not expendable
Role: I don't know make me one i guess?

P.S. i know my name doesnt say chargle but its me.

Sun, 06/03/2012 - 19:05

#211

Isekuube

Mmm.

Hello Chargle! ^.^ I may accept him, I'm not sure. I may come up with a good role.

Mon, 06/25/2012 - 12:04

#212

Voidrex

Character Idea

Wow, its my first posted comment. Okay, to the point.

Name- Sheik (Name can be changed I don't care what his name could be -_-)

Gender- Male

Appearance and Weapons- Deadly Virulisk Armor and Tortise Shell Shield, Biohazard, and twin Dread Venom Striker. Also carries around a Venom Veiler occasionally.

Characteristics- Very secretive, and is pessimistic due to the burden of his venom (read below). He constantly gets put out of action, often forcefully, because he dosen't work as a team member very well. Although he fights silently, his foes often become a dead men within minutes, due to the poison in all of his weapons.

Backround History- He lost his parents when he was twelve, torn apart before his eyes by a pack of hungry wolvers. He went bitter and, seeing as he had no family, ran away through the woods in an attempt to escape all he had of his parents, for those had saddened him deeply. He lived there for a few years, alone, and crafted his own armor from an animal's hide (virulisk) the hard way, and got poisoned in th process. He returned to civilization, all quiet and pessimistic years later, and the poison clouded his thoughts throughout life. He was treated by expert Spiral Medics, for he had a rare, contaigous, and deadly poison that works subtley, and quietly. His troubles had almost ended there. Almost. The poison somehow survived, and is slowly wearing away at Sheik's health by the day, bringing him closer to death's door slowly, but surely...

Good/Evil- He'll probably be a burden to the character, at first, then warms to him later.

Expendability- He should probably die near the middle/end, if he should die, at least.

Role- You choose, your the writer :D

Mon, 06/25/2012 - 14:31

#213

Isekuube

Hmm...

I can probably use him. Just... later in the story.

*folds fingers*

And thank you for bumping this. Gives me a chance to tell all of you people a little story.

Chapter IX is done. I'm just waiting upon Talithia to proofread it.

But, I can't start on any more chapters because I got my laptop taken away from me for the summer. I always use that for writing my chapters.

I can restart the Fanfic when I get my computer back.

~Ise

Sun, 07/01/2012 - 02:16

#214

Angelic-Tear

@Talithia y u no do writing stuff!?

@Isekuube sitting in a turny round armchair and folding finger in a dramatic way: *Moans*

Mon, 07/02/2012 - 14:48

#215

Artistbma

Ise,

Me buddy,

I daresay Ive read chapters one to three. I havent gotten time to read the rest, but its good so far.

Also, when I made a new fanfic (I plan to finish this one. Theres a first), it reminded me of my first Fanfic, The Crash of the Skylark. Remember that? Ah, I was such a forum noob back then...I wish I couldve finished it. But alas, the story was just so dumb.

I was planning to make taren die when the Skylark crashed years into the future and Feron becomes the Lieutenant and stuff, It was confusing. But YOU were the one that inspired me to write more, and become a better Author. Look at me now. Ive got a short story thread, and Ive got a new story called Battlefield!

Just thought you'd like to know that.

Mon, 07/23/2012 - 06:37

#216

Isekuube

R-really? :'D

That... wow. That means a lot to me. And sorry I didn't get to your comment until now. *Cries Tears of joy*

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 19:25

#217

Fazil

Keep Working Fastah!

I found about this idk how but I ended up reading all of prologue to ch. 8 and I can`t wait the suspense is unbearable :D

I guess this is just me saying this is incredibly good. Also I thi k this is my first post YEÀAAAAAAAAAAÆAAAAAAAAAAA

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 19:33

#218

Feline-Grenadier

...

Notice the time of absence.

Yeah, I'd say he's dead.

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 17:12

#219

Shear-Force

im bored

please write the new chapter soon

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 19:54

#220

Artistbma

Ise isn't dead, silly. His

Ise isn't dead, silly. His computer broke a while ago or something. He's back now though.

Tue, 04/23/2013 - 18:25

#221

Shear-Force

Hello

Hellohellohellohellohellohellohellojellohellohellohellohellowmantone out there?

Tue, 04/23/2013 - 18:25

#222

Shear-Force

Hello

Hellohellohellohellohellohellohellojellohellohellohellohellowmantone out there?

Tue, 04/23/2013 - 20:12

#223

Feline-Grenadier

...

I am resisting the urge to criticize all the aspects of your story in full force.

@Zero

Tue, 08/13/2013 - 09:05

#224

Isekuube

Ahem, Chapter IX-- Depth ???

Chapter IX—Depth ???

“Maybe I can finally forget my past…”

When the party finally got to the bottom they were astonished at what they saw. An army of frozen jellies, cold polyps, and wintry lichens, most shocking of all was the Ice Queen herself. See-through whitish-blue, atop her… um, head… Was her magnificent crown. It was such a sight to behold, but harder to behold when you’re right in front of her with chilling winds behind you. Ice could hardly believe it himself, the very boss that he had endlessly beat hundreds of times had come to kill him.

I mean, that’s the only reason she’s doing this right? The Ice Queen gave orders to Dwayne to kill us. Before hand she flooded the clockworks with her minions to weaken us. She chose the right skill of knights to attempt to kill us, but knew we would beat them. Now, she wants to kill us herself! Such an evil mind, for a monster anyways.

That wasn’t the only evil mind of a monster that he had encountered, Ice thought as flashbacks of Fire’s brutal murder came swiftly to his mind. Ice shook it off, he had had more flashbacks recently, more than he would have liked. But right now he filled his thoughts with the training he had been given over the years of his life. “It all ends here,” Ice whispered softly. He begun to charge up Fire’s old Firo Driver and prepared for battle.

Ice turned around to face his squad: Vot was standing firm, he knew what was coming, he faced Ice and nodded, Aria was nervously twirling her hair, Blue was sorting all of her meds, Trevor nervously fiddled with the fuses on his bombs looking in awe atthe sight before him, Grittle was nervous, Ice could tell, he had the armour, just not the experience, but Ice knew that he was determined, Satoshi was carefully sharpening his swords, and Julius, well, he couldn’t tell, he was a Mecha Knight after all.

Seeing that they were all nervous, Ice decided to say something that he hoped would inspire them all, “Guys listen for a moment,” he announced, “Look, this looks rough, but I know we can do this. Fire came to me in a dream, he said a great evil was coming, and we must stop it. I intend to make good on the promise I made him. We can do this, and maybe I can finally forget my past. So, what do you say? Team?” The others were startled particularly of his confidence, but they all understood the deal with Fire. They all nodded. Ice smiled and a warm feeling coursed throughout his body. It wasn’t like those thank you smiles that he gave a teammate just after saving him, no it was a genuine smile, one that said, we’re going to be okay.

Right before they left the force field gate, Trevor said something that lightened the mood, in inadvertently of course, “I wonder what would happen if an Ash of Agni blew up inside the Ice Queen. Maybe some sort of fireworks that remind me of the sun in a way that reminds me of gears!” With that, the party looked on the massive army assembled before them and crossed the barrier.

I really, really, really, really, really, apologize for basically killing this off. I looked at all of the postive comments and just noticed that this fanfic that I started because of other people, actually was good! :O I got back in to SK recently and this has been nagging me, I really enjoyed working on this SO SO SO, much. I really enjoy writing the Trevor character. He's so crazy and I just love him. :D But, honestly when you see this, no need to freak out or anything, just tell me how you liked the chapter. I don't really want to make a huuuuge dealio over all of this. I don't want you to think I did this for attention, oh noes. I just love this so much. Ask questions if you will, about why, what, who, etc. I would love to answer, and in case you haven't noticed the time span... my last post was over a year ago. So...... that means I've matured. :D So, much less grammar mistakes, and well, not more spamming, I seem to have done that a lot. o_O But, I love you all and hope you enjoyed my chapter. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to write Chapter X now! :D

<3 Iseeee

Tue, 08/13/2013 - 10:45

#225

Scamall

Writer's Block.

Oh, hey Ise. I was wondering where you slinked off to.

Chapter was okay. I'm sure you'll get back into the groove soon enough. You have been gone for a while.

Tue, 08/13/2013 - 19:21

#226

Isekuube

And I apologize!

@Scamall-- I will get back into the goove, eventually. XD Just procrastinating IG. I do think I might be able to get the next chapter out today, just to prove I'm not gonna just drop this again. How's that for a groove? :D VVV

Wed, 08/14/2013 - 08:19

#227

Isekuube

SNIPPIT! Not done. Rest will be done tomorrow! :S

Chapter X-- The Wintry Garden of Goo

“And that's the game...”

Ice held out the Driver menacingly and unleashed the barrage of flame imbued bullets streaming across the battlefield. Thankfully, none of his own were hit, just the jellies, now on fire in a frozen wasteland, the kingdom of the Ice Queen. “ATTACK!” Ice brought his Gran Faust up and continued to slash vigorously throughout the crowd of slimes. The others followed shortly after, Trevor, who had made his remark earlier decided to run full force at the Ice Queen, dodging and weaving throughout the slime ridden land. He armed his Ash of Agni and prepared to shove the bomb inside the Queen, but a Polyp had thrown its spikes at Trevor. Many of them stuck to his body, he fell down, dropping the armed Ash of Agni.

Blue was watching these events as they unfold away from battle, she rushed over to Trevor, utilizing the new techniques that Satoshi taught her. The only thing that she didn’t see was the armed bomb waiting patiently for the fuse to reach its core. Blue immediately took out all of the spikes from his body and put on non-infectant gel over where the spikes used to be lodged in his body. She made sure the gel stayed there and did it’s work by covering it in gauze. “There, that should do it,” she said aloud. Blue called over Satoshi to help him lift Trevor over to the edge of the gate. As they attempted to lift the limp body of Trevor, but he convulsed into many involuntary movements and motions, causing for Blue and Satoshi to drop the quivering Trevor. The most unsettling part about all of this is what he yelled out, “SNARBOLAX! HEHE. SNARBOLAX!” And then the bomb blew up, sending not only Blue, Satoshi, and Trevor, on fire, but also Trevor’s gauze and Blue’s medical supplies up in flames...

Hopping from tree to tree, gaining better, and newer vantage points was an incredible help to Aria, as she shot from one and jumped over to another, the Slimes never even saw the strange assailant in the trees. Except for one lucky Polyp, who shot its spikes right before she jumped, landing a perfect shot. Aria fell and got her foot wrenched in between two different branches, the force of her fall suddenly came to a stop, sending shock waves of pain throughout her leg and eventually, body. And to make things worse, she was upside down. She attempted to reach her foot and unhook her leg, but it was no use, gravity was working against her. The same polyp launched another barrage of spikes towards Aria’s neck...

Charging up his Volcanic Pepperbox, Grittle thought to himself, Wow! This is awesome! I get to be in Five Star gear for the first time! But, I wish the circumstances were better... As he day drumpt, he saw Aria’s predicament and ran over to save her, when he finally got to her, she didn't feel so good, so all she could tell him was, behind you... Grittle turned around only to be introduced to a face full of Polyp spikes. Grittle slumped to the ground and barely muttered, You owe me...

Inside the mind of Trevor, some many disturbing things have been going on. Flashbacks, to an unwanted past... “Spyash! How’s it going?” called out Trevor. “Great, how about you?” Spyash replied as he walked over to Trevor. “Amazing, I feel like I’m ready to take on the Snarbolax!” he replied as he tossed a Blast Bomb upwards and rolled it around on his shoulders. “Umm, is that armed?” asked Spyash uncomfortably. “Haha! Of course!” Trevor responded as he kicked the bomb upwards into the sky. The bomb blew up beautifully, as if a firework. Spyash however, didn't see the beautiful display, as he was shielding himself from the blast. “Lighten up will you?” Trevor laughed as he slapped Spyash on the back. Spyash stumbled, as he followed Trevor. “Let’s go find Critias and Kana!” Trevor shouted behind him, Spyash, still shaken from the bomb-firework, stumbled after him.

Grittle bought me some time... Aria thought to herself. She tried to wrench her foot free once more, but this only brought on more convulsions of pain and agony. She had dropped her Argent, but Aria was clever. She attempted to grab Grittle’s Pepperbox, which was still in his hand. She tried repeatedly, but couldn't reach it. Seeing as the Polyp was really persistent, she got an idea. She grabbed Grittle’s shield, which was closer than the sword, but it hurt, because of the additional weight. Aria proceeded to tilt the sword at such an angle that it would bounce off of the shield and hit the tree trunk. And it worked, the branch couldn't hold under the weight of Aria and the shield, it snapped off. Aria, felt the relief immediately with no more force tugging on her foot. She almost felt pain free! Until she hit the ground.

Ice turned around and saw the poor condition of his team, Three of his soldiers down and on fire, an unconscious Aria, three of them were actually fighting, even so, they weren’t doing so hot. Julius’s optic lasers no longer fazed the opposing team. Vot, with no type upper hand whatsoever was obviously at a loss. Ice had to help somebody, he just couldn’t decide who! The downed three, Blue, Satoshi, and Trevor, A greatly wounded Aria, or the conscious one’s who barely could handle themselves? Ice decided to do something really drastic, but it would put him at a severe disadvantage... “JULIUS, VOT! Tag team with each other! Vot, take this!” Ice tossed his Gran Faust towards Vot. Vot, caught it happily, and sung around killing tons of slimes with the momentum. Vot, no longer having a type disadvantage began to wreck. “WOW! THIS IS AWESOME! I NEED TO GET MYSELF ONE OF THESE!” Vot yelled happily, swinging and slashing at the enemies. The unconscious Blue, Satoshi, and Trevor were in the middle of the field getting mauled by slimes. Ice had to carry all three of them to where Aria was laying. All four of them, lumped into a very awkward looking dog pile.

Whelp. This is the first half (section, quarter, whatever, I have no idea how much more is gonna be in this chapter) of Chapter X. Full chapter will be revealed tomorrow. At least now, you can give me advice on what to fix here and such. Thanks, and I hope you all like it so far. I really love working on this. I'm so glad I took this back up.

Ty! ISEEE!

Wed, 08/14/2013 - 09:26

#228

Isekuube

X-2

“Trevor! Spyash! Hey guys! What sort of trouble are we getting in today?” asked Critias as both Trevor and Spyash approached him. “Well, today we’re gonna go get in on some Snarby action,” Spyash replied. “Haha, okay, let me just call Kana and we’ll be all set!” said Critias. He pushed a few buttons on his HUD and the face of Kana appeared in hologram form. “Hey guys! What’s up?” she asked. Before Critias could answer, Trevor squeezed his face into view, “Nothing much, except for we’re going after the Snarbolax!” responded Trevor. Critias pushed him away. “Sounds cool, let me just go get suited up!” Kana told them. She pushed a button on her HUD and her face vanished. “Alright you heard her, she’s getting ready, which will probably take quite a while--” Spyash was interrupted by a teleporting Kana. “Hi guys! I’m ready!” Kana said cheerfully as the other two laughed at Spy. “Well... we better... get down there...” mumbled Spy. As they all boarded the elevator to the Snarbolax they went down, and the air suddenly became chilling and the landscape dark.

Meanwhile, in the real world Ice, Julius, and Vot were basically fighting for their lives, slime after slime after slime came at them seeming like it was endless. Ice decided to take action as the leader. “Alright you two, I’m going to create a hole, leading all the way up to the queen herself. Then we just attack the Queen until she shrivels up. Got it?” Ice asked them. “Yeyuhhhh!! Any excuse to use this thing again, I think I’ll call her Jennifer!” laughed Vot. He was really enjoying this. Ice looked back at Vot strangely, “You do realize that’s my sword and I’m going to need it back?” Ice told him. Vot immediately looked downcast. “It’s fine Vot, I’ll give you my recipies,” Ice told him, “But right now, we need to finish something.” Ice charged up his Acheron and made a hole in the middle of the circle surrounding them.

The three of them continued to hack and slash all of the slimes leading up to the Queen. And when they got to her it was a horrifying sight, the sight of a jealous queen that took over her husbands kingdom in cold blood. “Alright guys! ATTACK!” yelled Ice. And they did. Hard. The Queen didn’t stand a chance. Ice was fueled by his own rage, Vot by the “sword-happiness” of the Gran Faust, and Julius by the bond he had shared with the other six members of the Divine Avengers.

Normally Constructs don't have feelings, but Julius or, Construct B5714984 as he was named back then, was originally created with the same prototype circuitry that would later conceive the Roarmulus Twins, Julius was part of a large-scale AI program engineered by the Gremlins to create an army that would adapt to war conditions. This backfired when a computer virus crippled the majority of the army, leaving only Julius and a handful of other Mecha Knights left alive. In a panic, Julius tries to flee, only to be attacked by Gremlins for an "intelligence defect" (or emotions), thus damaging his armor. This is why Julius cares so much for the DA’s, he’s never had somebody who loved him.

So with the combined forces fueled on emotions that riled them up, the Queen crumpled in a fantastic display of jelly remains and water. “And that’s the game,” muttered Ice. The three of them cheered, for the evil foe of their’s had fallen and finally they could go back up and then finally avenge Fire.

Deep into Trevor’s mind finally got to the unsettling events... “Heh, it’s awfully dark down here,” observed Trevor. “Well, it is the lair of the Snarbolax,” noted Kana. She could tell he was uneasy, despite his cheerful appearance. He never acts this way around other people, Kana, Spyash, and Critias are his only friends, he only acts this way around them. He’s normally a recluse, keeping his head down, muttering his bids, completely awkward around anybody who doesn’t have the name Kana, Critias, or Spyash. They stepped off of the lift. The first two floors were easy, having Trevor as a bomber and the other three skilled swordsmen were a really great plus, however. By the end, they were really beat out. Critias made the decision to go back up before going down into the Snarbolax’s lair and get supplies. But, they never were able to. The Snarbolax came out of nowhere and attacked them. “Augh! This isn’t supposed to happen!” cried Spyash as he was dragged into the brush. The others heard screams of horror and dispair, and suddenly it just cut off and they heard no more screaming. Spyash was dead...

“Dear Cradle, that was intense,” muttered Julius. Ice chuckled, “We got ‘er didn’t we?” responded Ice as he held out his fist. Julius looked at the fist puzzled, “You just hit it, it’s called a fist bump,” Ice told him. So, Julius punched Ice’s fist as hard as he could sending him a good couple of yards away. Ice moaned in pain and Julius rushed over to help him up, “Sorry Ice! I apologize,” Julius told him. “Oww, it’s alright, at least it was my right hand,” Ice said. Vot was on the other side of the remains of the Jelly Queen saying goodbye to ‘Jennifer’. While Blue and Aria were stirring.

~
When Aria awoke all she could think is, I’m gonna need to take an asprin. She slowly got up, head throbbing. She steadied herself and held her head as she headed over to where Vot was crying over Ice’s Gran Faust. When she approached him he said, “I’m gonna miss you so muuuuch!” “I’m not going anywhere, Vot,” Aria replied thinking he was talking to her. “I’ve never been the same since I met you!” Vot sobbed. “Oh well, thank you,” Aria said, blushing. “I think-- I think I love you!” Vot confessed. “Oh, well, I don’t know what to say, Vot,” Aria was suprised about the sudden confession of love, for what she thought, was her. “Vot... I...” Aria was at a loss for words, she bent down and put her hand on Vot’s shoulder. Vot noticed her hand and looked over at Aria. “Oh, hi Aria. I was just saying goodbye to Jennifer,” Vot informed her. “Wait, what?” asked Aria suddenly coming to realization, “You were talking to the sword the entire time?” “Yeah, who else would I be talking to?” asked Vot unknowingly. Now mad, Aria slapped Vot and left to go tend to Blue. Puzzled, Vot reterned to saying goodbye to Jennifer.

“We need to go, NOW!” said Trevor very panicky. “No kidding!” returned Critias, even in a life threatening situation he always just had to be sarcastic. “Let’s go!” they all shouted. They ran for the elevator, but the Snarbolax snatched up Critias and Kana right before they made it. “TREVORRRR!” they cried. The Snarbolax disappeared into the brush, but Trevor heard no screams, or at least not as intense as Spy’s. So Trevor went to the elevator and pushed down, Snarby must have taken them to his lair He concluded. So he did and he went down. The confrontation was horrifying. Trevor having nothing but bombs put him at a severe disadvantage, but Trevor was one of the most skilled bombers in the Spiral Order, he knew he could do it. Unfortunately for him, his skill as a bomber couldn’t save him from hearing the screams of his friends. It repeated over and over in his mind, and he couldn’t take it. It was driving him insane. He watched his friends get ripped to shreds and their bones scattered over his lair. Trevor couldn’t take it, he hobbled over to the elevator and escaped. Now with a guilty mind that he couldn’t save his friends, and the life scarring events that he had seen and heard. When they finally found him Trevor was hunched over and continued to repeat the same thing over and over again, “Snarbolax, Snarbolax, Snarbolax,”

Alright, that was chapter X-2 the second half to X. I guess, I think X-2 sounds cool. XD Either way. I hope you guys like it. Be sure to check the OP again. Things have happened. :3 Changed. Like the future chapter names. Well, I must get going, see you all laters!

~ISEYKUUBE

Sat, 08/17/2013 - 05:45

#229

Isekuube

He got a phone call inside his makeshift hideaway. It wasn’t much, but it was livable. He picked up the ringing phone and answered, “Hello? Yes, this is Cross...”

Angelic and Sacred Tear just came into Feron’s office once again for the fifth time that week. Angelic-Tear thought this was going to be fun, getting to hunt down a homicidal rouge and finally bringing him to justice. But it was more like follow this tip, go to that location, don’t do anything fun and don’t fall asleep on stakeout again. It was true, Sacred Tear couldn’t really stay awake as much as she would have liked. Angelic and Sacred were tired, just doing mandatory research on criminal patterns and behaviors, which she wholeheartedly did not enjoy. Isn’t that what mandatory means? Not fun? She thought to herself and she made way into Feron’s office. She looked around red carpet, horsey banners, as she respectfully named them, battle ridden armour, and a huge desk with a little, “Lieutenant Feron” sign on it. It all seemed so dull already, this was the fourth time she’d seen the room in a week. That’s four more times than she wanted.

“What is this about?” asked Angelic, unenthusiastic. “Another tip came in today,” he said, “It was a conversation between two peoples, take a look.” Angelic looked it over and excitedly exclaimed, “Ooooh, this is Cross! Definitely Cross!” “Come on, it says they’re meeting in the Ice Queen throne room,” Angelic said as she pulled Sacred along. “Let’s go nab ourselves a killer!” she yelled as she left Feron’s office, suddenly not seeming so dull anymore.

DUN DUN DUN

~ISE

Sat, 08/17/2013 - 19:36

#230

Kaijuhunter

Yay!

Ise is finally back! Nice to see you're back and writing again! ^_^

I laughed at the part where Vot was talking to his sword... :3

Sat, 08/17/2013 - 19:39

#231

Isekuube

So glad somebody said something. Thank you Kaij. :D

Sun, 08/18/2013 - 06:34

#232

Isekuube

...

Name: ???

Gender: Female

Appearance and Weapons: Nothing that this woman or... thing has, can be crafted by anything that is known to be on Cradle. Her face is hidden by a cowl, she stands in a tattered robe, but if you do get unfortunate enough to get a peek under her hood, you are pierced by the most evil eyes in the world. More disorienting than the Rabid Snarbolax, darker than the Red Roamulus Twins, and more frightening than Darkfire Vanaduke.

Characteristics: Vile, Evil, and Charismatic.

Background History: Not much is known about this woman, except she was born from the embodiment of--ZWWRTTXXSJDKFN Encryption Error.BZZRTJKAFXCCDecryption FAILED... ... ... Spiral Knights Bio Data Base cannpt be reach do to... ERROR. ERROR. Unkn0wn F0rces... Sp0iler... Alert... Y0U MAY N0T C0NT1NUE

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You will all suffer my wrath...

Sat, 08/31/2013 - 06:49

#233

Isekuube

Chaoter XII-- Sanctuary Dreams

Chapter XII-- Sanctuary Dreams

You will all suffer my wrath... soon

The party was now at a severe disadvantage. No more medicine... damaged beyond belief... Trevor was crazier than ever... Nothing was going their way. And it was getting worse.

(… What? You say it really can’t get worse? … Why don’t I kill off someone? … I can. And I will. … How about Julius? I’ll make the death tragic, because the readers will grow attached to this character by the time of his death? … Fine. I won’t. … What more is there? … Oh, right. I should stop breaking the Fourth Wall. It is a sacred thing and--- … Oh all right, I’ll shut up now. )

Ice had to call the HQ, to call this in. A little glory wouldn't hurt. Ice brought up his HUD. A lot has changed since we left, Ice thought to himself, Battle Sprites and no mist energy? You don’t have to use CE to craft? That’s pretty weird. Ice shook his head, I need to stay on task, he told himself. A wide screen appeared with the face of Lieutenant Feron, “Hello, Lieutenant. My name is Ice. And I have something to report.” Ice said in the most business-like way as possible. Feron looked up at him, “What is it?” Ice hesitated, he had no idea how to tell him this, “Umm, well... you see--” Ice started. “Just spit it out, soldier!” “Okay okay! The Ice Queen was planning to invade Haven and my squad and I stopped it. We need help. Several tragic things happened, more than I would have liked to happen, we have no medicine, heavily injured, and one of our knights is... I guess insane,” Ice told him.

Feron’s eyes widened, “Well-- umm, how do I know you’re telling the truth? You could be seeking fame and fortune,” Feron asked. Ice backed out of the view and showed him the landscape, the remains of slimes on the ground, his broken teammates, and the actual Ice Queen Crown on a large pile of jelly bits. Feron’s eyes widened so big Ice thought they were going to pop out of his head. To his surprise, they didn’t, but Feron did respond with,
“Wow, soldier. You’ve taken quite a beating. I believe you. However, the place you are in is restricted, I’ll make sure I deliver to your needs, I will send somebody down to the core to give you your supplies. Vaelyn will make sure you get them, she and her squad will tend to you. And make sure everybody knows about the squad that saved Haven. By the way, what is your squad name?” “Avengers, the Divine Avengers,” Ice said proudly.

“Well met,” he responded, “Now go to The Sanctuary and stay there until further notice.” Feron ended the call with a salute. Ice put away his HUD and looked over his squad. Not doing so well… he thought. First he took back ‘Jennifer’ and then had Vot and Julius help the others.

They had reached The Sanctuary, it was a wonderful place. Calming above anything else. I guess ironic was another word for the place, because Grittle got himself an Ice Queen Crown. Ice told everybody that Feron was coming with a call very soon. But it never came, for a long time. Ice began to pace while all the others were asleep. Walking back and forth. And back and forth. And back and forth again. Until he gave up and drifted off to sleep. Now Ice began to dream, but this time, it was a terrible dream.

He was in the throne room. A throne room he knew very well. Darkfire Vanaduke… But there was no Vanaduke, but there was someone. A lone knight. Ice’s dream shifted closer to the person, the knight appeared to be female. Though he wasn’t completely sure it was indeed female, as the figure laughed in a raspy tone that didn’t even seem human. She turned around and even though Ice knew she couldn’t see him. She stared right at him and said, “You will all feel my wrath… soon…”

The dream shifted and he saw Fire again. Ice lit up, “Oh my gosh! Again? This is awesome!” he said. Fire however, was not, “Do you realize what you just did?” Ice was taken back, “Umm, what?” Fire slammed his face into his hand, “You just killed the only Swarm Infect that was on our side!” Ice was confused, “Wait, what?” Fire sighed, “The Ice Queen was delivering a message to the people of Cradle that they were going to be attacked!” Fire told him. “Well, who is attacking?” asked Ice. Fire, shook his head, “Unfortunately I can’t tell you, you have to figure it out yourself. Besides, I have it in my ‘lost spirit’ contract that I have to be all mystical and mysterious,” he said. Ice was bewildered, “What? No! You have to tell me!” he pushed. Fire took out a piece of paper and seemed to read from it, “Go. Hero, and do what is right. Awaken.” And as Ice woke up he could here Fire mutter, “Stupid scripts…” Then, Ice was thrust into the real world.

Not much more to say other than thank you for reading!

EDIT: Ohwow. ._. I just bumped my thread to the top because I just wanted to edit one small thing... SORRY.

~IESH

Sun, 09/01/2013 - 21:38

#234

Sandwich-Hero

Yay this is awesome, I read all the chapters so far!
Wait.
Why did the Ice Queen attack them if she was allied with Spiral HQ? WHY DID ICE QUEEN SEND A SQUAD TO KILL THEM IF SHE WAS ALLIED WITH SPIRAL HQ???

Damn you, lost spirit contract. Now all we have is a cliffhanger.

Sun, 09/01/2013 - 21:46

#235

Isekuube

Derp. :3

Self defense.

And I'm glad you like AC so far. :>

This encourages me to actually write more. :3 I've been doing the "p" word. (procrastination!)

Another thing I would like to mention for all of you regular readers who stalk this thread. Recently, my brother moved our non-steam account to his steam account. So I had to get on his steam to play SK. Thank goodness, Aphrodite fixed all of that. (Thanks, a lot btw.<3) Anyways, so since Isekuube has been converted to steam.... you know what? Nevermind. Way too much explaining. Basically I can't edit the OP. I may just make an entire new thread for this. Which I think I will. Tomorrow that is.

Sun, 09/01/2013 - 22:02

#236

Sandwich-Hero

Okie

Mon, 09/02/2013 - 18:23

#237

Isey-De-Kuube

Derp. :3

Ugh, this is not cool. I don't think I'm ever going to be able to get this right. I'm still trying.

Fri, 09/13/2013 - 18:23

#238

Isekuube

Derp. :3

That was a really weird double post. :3

Fri, 09/13/2013 - 18:23

#239

Isekuube

Chapter XIII- Planting the Seed

After a really long time trying, and trying to get this issue fixed, umm, it never happened. SO! I will just try and leave the OP as it is and continue on with the story as usual, the title for Chapter XIII changed, though. :3

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Chapter XIII- Planting the Seed
Change... yes...”

Dwaynne got up, his body racked with pain. It was hard to stand. He surveyed what was left of his squad. Man, we’re in trouble. I hope that thing doesn’t come and kill us for a failed job… he thought to himself. He looked around once more and heaved a great sigh, Of course, Jonathan isn’t here. That coward, he thought. Dwaynne turned around, no less than 2 feet away from him was this “creature” he was referring to. It’s face was hidden by a cowl, she stood in a tattered robe. Dwaynne said, “Oh… h-hello! As you can see, they did stop us--for now, but we totally have this under--” “Stop blabbering, you fool. You’ve failed. These people need to be OUT of my way. But obviously you mortals can’t do the job right,” the voice was raspy, hardly feminine, but you could tell it was,
“I’m just going to have to dispose of you myself.” Dwaynne dropped on his knees and put his hands together, “Oh no, please! We can change! We really can!” Dwaynne pleaded. It wasn’t the most dignified thing he’d ever done, but his life was at stake. Dwaynne couldn’t tell, but the mysterious woman’s eyes lit up, “Change… yes. You can.” She took something out of her pocket and whirled around and shoved it into Dwaynne’s heart, she kicked him to the ground, and pulled off her hood. Dwaynne’s screams echoed throughout the terminal.

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