Spiral Knights - Spiralstory, Deeper: A SK Fanfiction [Always Rolecasting]

Spiralstory, Deeper: A SK Fanfiction [Always Rolecasting]

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Sun, 03/18/2012 - 22:01

#101

Isisdelltion

:D Yersh

Chapter 6:

A new figure stepped forward, her head turned towards Danovan sprinting towards the elevator.

"I'm Mira, the...commander of Gamma 9, and the Band...or what's left of it." Faste started forward at her comment, but Kantint held his shoulder, pulling him back.

Mira continued, "This is Giro...he doesn't talk much." The giant knight she was pointing at grunted and lifted up his mammoth Leviathan Blade, even larger than the standard, to rest on the shoulder plate of his Azure Guardian armor. "He follows my orders and my orders only, so don't try anything stupid."

"Then there's Demalj." Mira turned her head towards someone right next to her, a knight who tossed some sort of bomb up into the air, then started head butting it back up using his Mad Bomber helm. "Do not try to best him in Raletball, he always wins...and when he doesn't-" She grew silent, and her eyes darted to a nasty looking gun in his belt.

"This is Reyleand, our gun expert." His belt was filled with at least five Antiguas, and he was cocking and un-cocking them over and over again.
"Just call me Rey, 'Kay?" A couple of the Band members nodded in acknowledgement, but most stayed silent.

Mira continued, "This is Evangeline, she is our fiend specialist." One of the recruits looked as though he was going to ask her something, but an icy glare from Demalj shut him up. Evangeline then glared at Demalj, who glared at her, and Rey cocked all of his guns, as if he was preparing to fight for his life.
Mira glared at them all, and Giro copied her, his face contorting into a strange angryish expression.

"These knights are Remi, Stevuns, Toruinh, and Ron...they act as the standard soldiers for Gamma 9." Four knights, each in Solid Cobalt with Tempered Caliburs and Super Blasters, saluted. Towards whom was a mystery.

"Of course, there's Danovan...he'll probably trot back in a few hours claiming that he's the valiant leader, and that he toppled Almire while he was gone. In all truthfulness, I'm in charge here, but Danovan the only one who put in the hours to get a license. Once I-I mean we, get a the crest, Danny's going to meet a sticky end." She chuckled a bit, and the knights behind her laughed also.

"We'll head up to Haven to drop off the recruits, then I'll see what mission we can scrounge up. For now, we have to wait for Dan to get back, we need his stuff to do anything up there."

Sun, 03/18/2012 - 22:03

#102

Isisdelltion

My eyes...

Chapter 7:

Things were flashing through Ren's head.

The Monolith - fallen - it's eyes closed - sadness - respect for a brave enemy - surprise - Kort fighting - his leg - Greavers - he was too slow - Haden - Kort - anger - rage -he had to avenge Kort - Haden was too fast - Too many Greavers - Kort - on his knees - he didn't expect -Haden - more rage - then sadness - deep sadness - he was awake.

"Wahtha?"

"It's over." It was Vot.

"What was that?"

"What?"

"In my head? The images...the feelings."

"Our minds...interesting. It seems as though our minds are connecting."

"Like...?"

"We are becoming one being."

"So we'd be a Vot/Ren hybrid?"

"You could think of it that way..."

"One being....hrmm...not quite sure what to think about that."

"Give me a second...I'm going to finish the bond."

"Wait, wha-"

It hit him like a freight train. His mind was being overrun by all the feelings, the thoughts, and the memories. It was too much. He was screaming, but nothing was coming out. It wasn't his body anymore. He was shoved into the corner of all the thoughts around him. His control was nonexistent. He was nonexistent. He pushed, as hard as he could. He wrestled for his mind. Ren, or the Ren part of Ren, got just enough of himself to whisper, "Help." Then he was thrown back into the back of his mind. His own mind.

Something reached out. He grabbed it, and tugged as hard as he could. It pulled him up, though the sea of emotions, memories...so much. It was thick, like crude oil, but the hand only grasped him harder. He was finally out, pushed back into his eyes. He could see again, breath again, feel again.

"Wow..."

"Wha-wha-what ha-happened, Vot. Wha-"

"Don't worry, I think it's over."

"YOU THINK!?!"

"Whaoh Ren, calm down man, chill out a bit."

"IT'S NOT LIKE I DROWNED IN MY OWN THOUGHTS!"

"It seems as though you're repeating something."

That same stupid humor.

"So, Ren...it seems like you have some dark secrets."

"What do mean by...dark secrets?"

"Is Durant still alive?"

"I...I don't know."

There was an awkward silence.

"Here...erm...take this."

A new memory drifted to the front of his mind.

"IT'S YOUR FAULT THE SKYLARK BLEW UP!?"
"Yup."

"But you're Vot!"

"And..."

"You're a hero and stuff!"

"And..."

"You...but you saved the knights like-"

"Twice...listen Ren, I-"

"Your secret is safe with me!"

"Good, but what I was going to say was that I need you to help with something...important."

"Let me guess, the fate of Cradle rests in your hands and you-"

"No, I have to go and warn the Band about Haden, he's after Frost."

"How do you know this?"

"I jumped into his mind for a second...something powerful is hiding out in him."

"Like Zos?"

"No, no. If it was Zos we'd both be brutally dead, our minds crushed and probably turned into Saringul."

"Ouch."

"So...are you up for it?"

"Chasing after an evil bandit who's mind is housing some kind of demonic monster, which has a personal vendetta against the Band and all who were part of it? YES!"

"'Kay then. Hey Ren-"

"What?"

"Sometimes you remind me of myself."

Sun, 03/18/2012 - 22:29

#103

Frostrex

Great chapter!

I wonder who Frost'll get stuck with...

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 11:50

#104

Tevokkia

You've been busy!

Got some heavy stuff going on in these chapters. Good reading, though; can't wait for the next! ^.^

Also- welcome back! Hope you had lots of fun! For some reason, I had it in my head for a bit that you wouldn't be back until Thursday ...

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 11:58

#105

Isisdelltion

Imma so sleepy...

It was most definately fun! :D Home sweet home.

These chapters were tediously redone after they came out horribly wrong, but I think I'm on for smooth sailing here on out.
I actually have the some other chapters done, but I still need to copy them over.
Give me a few seconds...or minutes...or hours...or days...

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 12:00

#106

Tevokkia

Catch some zzzzzs!

I'll throw them at you if you need me to. ^.^

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 15:21

#107

Scamall

@Isisdelltion

Is the casting still open? If so, I'll edit this into an application.

EDIT: Excellent. I'll submit a character that has yet to appear in a fanfic. Maybe you can help him to fit in here. New kids tend to get nervous on their first day.

*ahem*

Name: Null

Race: Whatever a Spiral Knight is. I've heard someone, perhaps Kaijuhunter, coin the term "Spiralian.

Equipment: Carries only a Sealed Sword and a bloodstained Darkfang Shield. Equipped with Valkyrie Set.

Abilities: Can use his sword's power to awaken his physically superior alter-ego, Faust.

Bio: Captured along with his squad by the Gremlins, Null was imprisoned and forced to watch the horrendous torture and brutal slaughter of his collegues and friends for days on end. Once the rest of the squad were gone, his turn came, and he himself was tortured. He eventually snapped when the Gremlins tried to kill him with his own Sealed Sword, the inner darkness of the blade calling out to him. Disarming the Gremlins and reclaiming his sword, he then went on to start his own slaughter, claiming his trademark Darkfang Shield while doing so. This left him with a split personality, with one trying to break free of the blade's influence, and the other relishing the blood it allows him to spill. He cannot remember his own name, so he calls himself Null, meaning "nothing".

Personality: Rather eccentric and paranoid. Fearful and disturbed. Desperately wants help, but too mistrusting of everyone and everything.

Facts: Green eyes that turn purple when he unleashes Faust. Wraps his head with his sword's bandages to keep Faust locked away within his mind.

---------------------------------------------

And now for something completely different. Or not.

Name: Faust (Read backstory)

Race: Spiralian

Equipment: Faust and a Darkfang Shield. Equipped with Fallen Set.

Abilities: The raw power he gains from his sword, coupled with his insanity and bloodlust, leaves him completely immune to pain.

Bio: The alter-ego of Null, Faust surfaced when Null's psyche broke under torture and the dark recesses of his mind strengthened his sword, magnifying his inner demons to the point of creating Faust, a manifestation of the sword's dark power. He remained in control of Null's body long after killing the pack of Gremlins that indirectly created him, with Null powerless to resist, and growing weaker. It wasn't until Faust accidentaly dislodged some of his sword's wrappings, causing them to tangle themselves around his head, that allowed Null to force himself through, breaking Faust's hold over him. Since then, Faust has recognised Null as a worthy other self, forming an (albeit uneasy) alliance between them. Null still lives far away from any friendly contact for fear of causing pain, preferring to associate himself with the savage beasts of the Clockworks, for when his life is threatened, he removes his bandages, allowing Faust to reign chaos on their enemies. In this way, he keeps the Clockworks less populated with hostiles, which indirectly helps his fellow knights.

Personality: Cold and calculating. Highly intelligent, but arrogant and vain. Master strategist. Insane in a sadistic playful sort of way, but easily angered.

Facts: Often appears to Null as a hallucination, often poking fun at his despair, or offering him advice on various topics, usually fighting or escaping.

Feel free to let me know if you'd like some adjustments to be made. I can understand if you find him to be a bit overpowered. I'll make some edits if necessary.

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 12:22

#108

Isisdelltion

Yepperino!

Sureo! To be honest, it would be much easier if you made your character/characters into knights though! :D

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 12:33

#109

Tevokkia

Knights!

If you need that sort of character for something, you can always make Nistaline into a squad-hopping knight. XD Just give her an oversized Sudaruska and some manner of scale mail. XD

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 12:38

#110

Isisdelltion

Gremlins!

Nah, I've got plans for Nistaline...
*Evil laugh*

Also...
YOUR FINAL NEW CHAPTER!

Chapter 8:

The figure stepped into the temple at a brisk pace, his person retinue of six Saringul trailing him. He came up to the main alter, and motioned to the eyeless men, or monsters, behind him. They knelt, and he placed a small gem on the huge slab of cold stone.

The room lit up and a...thing rose from the stone, mist collecting together to make a flowing image of the creature. It's face was shrouded, and it's body was wrapped in black robes. It looked like the Saringul, but instead of their blank faces, it had eyes.

The figure had long since known not to look into the eyes. As if to solidify the rule, a Saringul vaporized next to him, screaming about the horrors. It had made the mistake of trying to look through the window into Zos's mind. You could only make a Saringul so smart without it getting any ideas.

"How was... the insertation?"

"Good my lord, we found the perfect carrier. A fool my lord, he didn't even know we existed."

"That is good news...we have to be quick."

"But my lord, I have amazing news!"

"Go on..."

"Kort is already dead."

"This is very good."

"The takeover is progressing nicely, right?"

"Yes. How did your Greavers do?"

"Great my lord, they shattered the resistance!"

"That is good. Oh and Necro?"

"Yes?"

"Soon you shall be the Balancer of Cradle, after Vog is dead."

"Of course, my lord."

"But we need more!"

"What, my lord?"

"I need more knights for the New Order of Cradle."

"Shall I send men to find knights...ready for the task?"

"No, you shall take two Saringul and infitrate the inner Order, then come back here. I will deal with the carrier."

"But..."

Zos was already gone.

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 14:53

#111

Tevokkia

And the intrigue really gets going ....

Aha .... you have additionally piqued my interest.

I'm going to tell you the same thing I told Frost; personally, I'd like to see more descriptions of thoughts, expressions, actions, and scenery compared to the amount of dialogue, but that's me. The story is getting really good, otherwise!

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 14:59

#112

Isisdelltion

I was trying for some mystery there...making it so that the reader had to guess what was going on, imagine what everything looks like, and what Necro was thinking, although I was trying to make it seem as though Zos had complete control over him.
But yeah, I should really work on that...

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 15:25

#113

Tevokkia

Mystery it is

It's definitely harder when you're trying to keep an air of mystery, although simply describing scenery as "mostly shrouded in darkness" or something can take care of that. Try describing voice inflection or posture, perhaps? Sometimes that can convey more about a relationship, particularly a superior/underling relationship, than anything else.

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 21:45

#114

Frostrex

Waait...

Did I miss something? I did not know that Kort was dead.

Tue, 03/20/2012 - 04:16

#115

Shue-Donnym

Mhm

Name: Unknown, alias The Poacher

Race: Spiralian

Equipment: Picture!

Abilities: He kills animals and sells their drops on the market. That's about it.

Bio: Formerly a regular knight, the Poacher recognized that Wolver set wearers are some of the fastest growing parts of the community and decided to make a quick buck selling to them. What was originally an idea to scrape together some extra cash grew into a full-time occupation and the Poacher quickly took up the Dragon Scale gear along with a Wild Hunting Blade to subdue(read:kill) the more dangerous beasts he encounters along with a Callahan to halt faster opposition in their tracks. He's pretty good at dealing with non-beasts, but his skills are at their peak against anything that barks, yelps or roars(barring Constructs.)

Personality: Like an old, serious veteran hunter who's seen it all and dealt with it all. Cracks a joke every now and then.

Facts: Often volunteers to lead rookie knights through beast infested areas. Have some quotes.
"This gear lets me deal the most damage to beastly enemies. Not sure why, but I'm not wild about the fact that I look sort of like a girl, though."
"This here's my shooty-stabby-bludgeony-burny-decapitatey-trappy helm. I wear it when I go out to shoot/stab/bludgeon/burn/decapitate/trap myself some beasts."
Storyline Improvements: Add gender to the App Format.

Tue, 03/20/2012 - 11:58

#116

Isisdelltion

Gender to the app format... don't I have that?

@Xplad: This is gonna be fun... :D

@Frost: I should of made it more clear in that chapter. Haden killed Kort. D:

Editrelatingtothetopic: It seems that I don't... I must of copied over from the original Spiralstory lazily. Forgive me.

Tue, 03/20/2012 - 17:20

#117

Duskfinder

Hi peeple

Tue, 03/20/2012 - 17:24

#118

Isisdelltion

O_O

Suppers...

Tue, 03/20/2012 - 17:32

#119

Duskfinder

suppers?

Supper time? Tacos for everyone! \(^-^)/

Tue, 03/20/2012 - 17:33

#120

Isisdelltion

SUP!

Ahem...NACHOS FOR EVERYONE!
That's just how we do it here. :D

Tue, 03/20/2012 - 17:39

#121

Duskfinder

so bee it

Nachos for everyone! \(^-^)/

Tue, 03/20/2012 - 17:42

#122

Tevokkia

There's a rumbly in my tumbly

Mmmm .... nachos indeed.

Now I'm genuinely hungry. I blame you two.

EDIT: Also, I totally love you today, Isis. I truly roflcoptered at your "prologue" review. I'd post in the thread myself, but I think I'd feel dirty afterward.

Tue, 03/20/2012 - 17:41

#123

Isisdelltion

AH GOD BEES! EGGAAAADDDDDD!!!!

Yummers...
\(^-^)/

Wed, 03/21/2012 - 23:10

#124

Frostrex

I'm an indestructible, master of war!

Sorry, I was just rocking it out to some metal. ^m^
Anyways, thanks Isis, that was good to know.

Fri, 03/23/2012 - 14:42

#125

Isisdelltion

"NINJA BUMP! HIYA!" ~Isis

Fri, 03/23/2012 - 14:45

#126

Isekuube

YAY!

Back to a Snipe Isis :D always liked that avatar best besides this one!

Fri, 03/23/2012 - 18:08

#127

Kaijuhunter

NACHO PARTY CELEBRATION!

NACHO PARTY CELEBRATION! Yeah! Welcome back, snipe Isis! Yay! JANEF MUST THROW A PARTAY

Fri, 03/23/2012 - 19:12

#128

Isekuube

OH! Derp

I just now found out why Isis was a Magic-Frostbreaker there was a fan thingy going on and Isis joined in, I just saw the updated thing and I saw nothing of it untill today. :3 Derp

Sun, 03/25/2012 - 08:39

#129

Isisdelltion

Now I just need to murder every other snipe on teh forums....

Oh, why thanks peeps!

Again, NINJA BUMP!

Sun, 03/25/2012 - 08:49

#130

Scamall

@Isisdelltion

Well, to make use of the "ninja bump", I may as well ask: I never got a reply for my character app. Bugs me a bit when that happens. Mind letting me know what you thought at least?

Sun, 03/25/2012 - 10:24

#131

Isisdelltion

Ah, I finally get to use Faust! :D

I believe I have the perfect spot for Null to fit in!

I'll write the chapter now. XD

Sun, 03/25/2012 - 11:39

#132

Valorai

Wheres the nachos?

Wheres the nachos? WHERE?!?!?!

*X-plodes Isis's face off*

@ Tev

Definitly their fault. I don't cause hunger, I stop it..

*Rides into small african nation on a nacho-mobile giving nachos to all the hungry children*

Sun, 03/25/2012 - 13:37

#133

Isisdelltion

Egad! The nachos are right here! Just don't eat me! D:

Uploading time!

http://isistheawesome.deviantart.com/#/d4u0si8

http://isistheawesome.deviantart.com/#/d4u0szd

Now this one...
well, it's by no means trying to hurt anyone's feelings in any way. It's just a joke...'kay? :D

http://isistheawesome.deviantart.com/#/d4u0tbf

I feel like I've been on some kind of binge... XD

Sun, 03/25/2012 - 14:12

#134

Tevokkia

Oh dear. XD

You, sir, are silly.

Sun, 03/25/2012 - 16:27

#135

Faronel

Isis, Egyptian goddess of women

YAYZ FOR CHAPTERZ! CLAPITY CLAPITY CLAPITY! Isis gets life-time supply of nachos and chese!

Why have I not been commentting more you ask?
I'm to lazy to log on.

Sun, 03/25/2012 - 20:13

#136

Kaijuhunter

DERF

Isis, is Ace accepted? Where is he? Ok bye. Btw good story so far.

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 09:06

#137

Isisdelltion

NEW CHAPTERS! YAY! :D

Hopefully this will explain my absence...
http://isistheawesome.deviantart.com/art/Long-Absence-293281851

***Chapter 9:***

Haven was devistated. There were dead and wounded laying on the streets, and moans were heard throughout the city as medics treated the knights that had any chance of surviving, and gave painkillers to the rest. Survivors ran around, bringing the wounded to the doctors and getting the dead out of the way.

Ren was dragging a dead knight across the arcade.

"It's sad isn't it?" Ren still wasn't used to Vot speaking in his head, but responded in about a second.

"What, the dead, the wounded, or everything?"

"Look at him."

Ren finally looked down. He'd been trying not to, just incase he knew the knight. It was a recruit. His Proto Blaster was half outside his belt, like he had tried to pull it out before his body got ripped up by the Greavers.

"It is sad." He whispered.

The crew elevator next to him sped down into place, and something caught Ren's eye. It was the Band!

"Looks like Haden isn't going to get Frost after all!"

"Where is he?"

"What?"

"Where's Frost?"

"I don't kno-"

"WHERE IS FROST!?!"

"Whaoh, Vot, chill out."

Okay, maybe he and Vot were a little bit closer than he'd like to imagine.

He stepped up to the group as they got off, waving someone over to take the body. The Band seemed to be joined by ten others, a full strike team. By the looks of the one gloating about how he killed a phantom he guessed that it was Danovan's squad, Gamma 9.

"Hey Faste! Kantint! Blue! Jed! Uhh, Ace right? Oh and you must be Milo! It's the Band!"

"You must mean Gamma 9." Danovan said snidely.

"No, I mean the Band." Ren replied.

"We got transfered when Frost got recalled." Kantint said, his eyes angry.

"Yeah, they're under my command now." Danovan's eyes perked up. This guy was really starting to...Ren was starting to hate him.

"Really...?"

Just then a knight came running in.

"Hullo! I have a very important message for Corporal Ren and Knight Elite Danovan!"

"Right here!" Ren called out.

"Here you go! Report by the Briefing room tomarrow ASAP for the details!" He sprinted off.

***Chapter 10:***

"So you think that the Greavers came from a Temple near Lanolar Ridge in level 36G, correct?"

"Yes."

"And we are supposed to go there and take them out."

"Yes."

"Piece of cake." Danovan sat back in his chair, already anticipating the rewards.

"Do I have to be stuck with him?" Ren asked, pointing towards the knight sitting on his own bloated self-importance.

"Yes."

"And we're bringing four recruits along with us?"

"Yes."

"This is going to be dangerous. Seeriusly, are you sure that bringing new knights along for a mission we know nothing about is a good idea?"

"Yes."

"Is that all you say?" Ren missed Kort already, but it wasn't comparable to the sadness he was getting from Vot.

"Yes- I mean no."

"I thought so."

***Chapter 11:***

They stepped off the crew elevator to a lush foresty area. They were on the surface, and no dome of painted sky surrounded them. They peered up to the giant mountain around a half-hour's walk from their position.

"We're really going up there?" A recruit asked feebly to Ren, pointing to a outcropping of flat rock and pillars around halfway up.

"Yeah. The Greavers must be living in the abandoned catacombs. Either that or intel is completely wrong...it wouldn't be the first time."

"What?"

"Er-Nothing. Just follow orders and you'll be fine." He awkwardly tried to change the subject. "I can still remember my first mission."

"Really? What happened?"

"We'll...it was a bit dramatic..."

"Can you tell us?" Ace looked at him eagerly. Even Gamma 9 looked curious.

"Well...maybe someone like Jed or Kantint should." He almost said Frost, but caught himself before he did.

"It wasn't my first mission." Kantint said, backing into the shadows and disappearing. Jed just held up his hands in a gesture of no. Everyone gathered in a circle around him, except for Danovan, who was boring a recruit to death about how his father fought in some war in somewhere called Kradel. Vot chuckled in his mind, and Ren wondered why, but didn't ask.

"The Band...the original Band, was at its high point. It was led by the thoughtful Vot, the daring Frostrex, the wise Kantint, the brave Faste, the witty Danghu, the...well, yeah. It was good times for the Order. All the squads looked up to them. Especially my squad, Apollo Team. We were trained to perfection. We should of been the best. We would of been the best, but we just didn't have that extra thing that the Band had. We didn't...well we didn't have a Vot.

Our sole job was to be the next in line if the Band was destroyed. We were the ones to make sure that the last mission got carried out. Of course, we also did minor work, you know, bandits here, Gremlin Armorys...small stuff like that, but there was always this chance that we'd need to do something big."

Ren paused for a moment, then continued.

"We were called in as backup for them on this mission to take out this small Gremlin lab with some superweapons and stuff like that. It was normal protocol, except this was the Band we were covering, not just another team. Everything started out normal." He closed his eyes, took a deep breath, and then kept going.

***Chapter 12:***

"We were hardly in when Qwex went down. He was just another soldier, just another tech, but you could see the sadness on Vot's face. We found a saw buried in his back, and we thought it was shot from another building. The whole place was already in lockdown, nobody could get in or out. We were then ambushed by a bunch of Grems, appearing out of nowhere, throwing saws left and right at us. It was madness. We lost Gord then. But there was only one way to go...forward."

Danovan stopped and looked over, thoroughly annoyed that his story of valor was interrupted. He nearly said something, but was stopped by Mira's eyes.

"Then we got into a big room, and Kantint planted the bombs, but as we turned to leave, the door behind us closed, almost twenty silent robed knights barring the way. Soro lead them, along with a bunch of Grems. It was one of those 'fight for your freaking life' kinda things. I'm not sure what happened, but in the end...Vot was killed, and the rest of my team wiped out. Frost was scarred, I could tell...but there wasn't anything we could do. Just leave. Watch the explosions from afar as the cause of the Band and Apollo's demise was blown sky-high."
Silence lay heavy over them like a blanket, not even Danovan breaking in to say how he would of completed the mission without a scratch, although Ren knew he wanted to.

"That's really..." Mira mumbled slowly, then trailing off.

"Sad." The recruit finished for her, his eyes faintly showing tears.

But Ren wasn't quite finished yet. "After that, we all should of been put in an infirmary...we bore mental wounds, the kind you can't see until it sent the person into madness. Frost was this close to that."

He held up his hand, his gloved fingers nearly touching as he made a C with them.

"But the Order sent us back out into the field. They just added a couple knights to the ranks and thought all would go back to what it was. They were wrong."

He rested his head on his hands and sat there taking deep breaths, as though recounting this story was hurting him. Guilt was pouring out of Vot and into his mind.

"We lost." He jerked up and looked at the knights surrounding him, especially the former Band. "We actually lost...and we had the advantage. That's when they pushed down the Band to training, mineral runs, and the occasional rescue mission. But they pushed me out first. You know where they put me? Arcade watch."

His head fell back into his hands. The others could hear him slightly crying. A few started crying themselves. Then everyone began to shed tears.

Everyone except Dan of course.

***Chapter 13:***

"My lord! My lord!" Necro was calling urgently through the temple ruins. Suddenly a black cloud jumped out from a crack in front of him.

"Yes Necro? Have you found anyone?" He seemed annoyed that Necro had disturbed him, and his voice was colder than usual, although Necro didn't notice.

"Yes...at least twenty knights!"

"Good...now can you just go ba-"

"But lord, I've found something of interest!"

"Well...are you going to tell me what it is, or just stand there like a blithering idiot?" His voice got colder if anything.

"Sorry my lord. I believe we've found Faust!"

Zos raised an eyebrow, wondering if Necro, a blithering fool in his opinion, had truthfully saw Faust.

"Why don't you bring him in. I'd just love to see my old...partner again." He smiled, a deathly smile that held no happiness in it.

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 16:46

#138

Nechrome

Firstly, YAYZ NEW CHAPTAS!!!

Firstly, YAYZ NEW CHAPTAS!!! /Celebrate

Secondly, FAUST? FAUST AS IN MY FAUST? FAUST AS IN THE LUMINARIAN SCIENTIST???

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 00:36

#139

Frostrex

Uuuhh...

Isis? Why is Haven completely destroyed?

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 10:29

#140

Tevokkia

I read this days ago ... why am I not commenting until now?

Is it alright for me to have the distinct desire to punch Danovan in the face? (I'm thinking his original name actually rather fit ...)

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 04:07

#141

Psychodestroyer

Sorry Isis

I only had time to skim-read in my need to catch up on posts I am severely behind in.

But as far as I managed to see, even with my glasses on, you seem to be doing really well with your writing! You seem to have a lot of support to, so good luck on the continuation of your story!

I won't detail out my limited analysis, because that'll make me sound like some wannabe english teacher, so forgive me for the vague post.

But still, great story you seem have going, I'll try and read it in more depth when I get time.

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 05:27

#142

Oroseira

Waitwhat?

Psy, YOU BACK SO EARLY? :3

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 06:55

#143

Softhead

Dunno,

Last time I saw him, he might be back in a week. maybe longer.

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 11:56

#144

Isisdelltion

'Kay, reply time

Lordofnecromancers: Hrm, maybe he is, maybe his isn't.
DUH DUH DUUUHHHHHHHH!!!!

Tev: I believe we all do.

Psycho: Thanks, it really means a ton coming from you. Seeriusly. :D

Thanks everyone for dealing with my extreme laziness.

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 14:04

#145

Psychodestroyer

Sorry guys

I just found some time to post on my main. Being 'back' is still some way off.

C'mon Isis, I'm not THAT great. Come to think of it, Codename Part 1 seems a little cheesy in some areas compared to the others...I may make a re-write when I get back to writing.

But seerusly, I'm nothing great to look up to. I just got lucky ;)

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 17:12

#146

Oroseira

Also Psy, I found the full version.

Here's the full version of Simple and Clean Planitb Remix. Found it on accident. Oh well, I might use it in CC3 for a songfic.

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 20:03

#147

Nechrome

@Isis Well, if it is Mr.

@Isis

Well, if it is Mr. Luminarian Scientist Faust, I have some stuff to tell you about him... That is, if you want to keep parallel with my story.

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 20:17

#148

Isisdelltion

Pm me about it then. :) My IGN is Votabbot.

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 20:21

#149

Nechrome

I send them as soon as

I send them as soon as possible, like tommorow night or something.

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 20:29

#150

Psychodestroyer

@Phantom

I already know. Simple and Clean is the regular version. I had some trouble finding the remix, so I ran into the original first.

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