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Endless wars , A fan-fic ( applications open !)

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Sun, 11/04/2012 - 07:58
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Trabias

Hi ! i'm Trabias , i have decided to try and make a fan-fic !
I'm writing this story for the fun of it and to improve my writing skills

This story takes place in a combo of the worlds of Arctifice's fan-fic 'Intensions' http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/54861 and doctor-spacebar's 'The petrode chronicles' http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/55484 so there may be some mention of the events that happened in both stories.

This story is about the ending days of the Gremlin-knight war, and how the swarm war begun,
there will be both knight and gremlin characters, and i will try and balance the screen time of them

I need applications for the story so please post below

Format of App :
Name :
Gender :
Race : ( IM-POR-TANT )
Gear:
Bio : ( not too long though)

I will post the first chapter of the story when i get enough apps , about 3 should do.
more character spaces will be opened when the need arises.
this is my first Fan - fic so i'll need as much constructive comments so as to improve.

Sun, 11/04/2012 - 08:08
#1
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Thunderbog

Oh my god. Intentions.

It hasn't been continued for 2 months, Artifice must be busy.

Say, listening to this was like, hey the title.

Tue, 11/06/2012 - 03:22
#2
Trabias's picture
Trabias
Oh wow is this thread quiet :P

I got bored while waiting, so heres chapter 1 part 1

“ Where … where am I? … What… What is that? Wait … why is it coming at me? W-W-W-Why can’t I move? Ohshitohshitohsh- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!”

I bolted upright, panting for air.

“ Damn … its that nightmare again…” I said to myself.

My clothes were completely drenched in sweat and my hands were cold and clammy. I stared at the clock opposite my bed. It was 3 o’clock in the morning and it was raining outside.

As I lay in bed, listening to the rain pouring outside, I thought to myself, “ Why do keep having the same nightmare? … And what exactly does it mean? “ I then let out a sigh and got out of bed.

I stumbled my way to the kitchen, not even bothering to wash my face or brush my teeth. I opened the fridge, hoping that I left something that was actually edible for breakfast. Turned out I only had in my fridge a bunch of leftovers from yesterday’s dinner. I chucked the leftovers into the microwave and shuffled into the bathroom for a shower.

When I got out of the shower, I smelt something burning. I rushed over to the microwave and discovered, to my horror, that the leftovers were burnt. “ Herp Derp , well I guess I can eat at HQ’s cafeteria …” I mumbled to myself.

I hastily put on my ash tail coat and helm, which were the only armors I owned. They were tailored for swordsmen, and since I cannot hit a target with a gun even at close range, the ash tail set was perfect for me.

Then I snatched up the rest of my equipment, which I left lying around and unlocked my front door.

As I left my apartment I spotted the smothering ruin that was the bazaar, I clenched my fist in anger as I looked at it. The bazaar was an unfortunate victim of the gremlin’s ‘Project R’, which was discovered when the order did a raid of the iron claw munitions factory. Unfortunately the force that the spiral order sent was not strong enough, and only a few of the mega-gunpuppies that were the products of ‘Project R’ were destroyed, resulting in a gremlin victory as one of the monstrosities was sent up to the surface, destroying a big part of the bazaar.

The gremlins, from the start, were not very happy with the intrusion of the spiral order on their home planet, cradle, and peace talks with the gremlins were failures as the gremlins simply ionized any knight that came close the their ‘great colony’.

The tensions between the knights and the gremlins came to a break point when the previous king of the gremlins, king tinzinkar, who had apparently made the clockworks mysteriously disappeared. He disapproved of the notion of war with us, so when he disappeared the first thing the gremlins did was to go to war with the spiral order.

The war had raged on for many years, and with increasing amounts of wounded on both sides, pressuring the race for a mega-weapon that would eliminate the enemy and end the war, like ‘Project R’.

The order has been researching on a certain particle, that when compressed, can be used to make weapons of mass destruction. Lieutenant Feron , whose is overseeing the project, hopes that the weapon can be used to end the war.

Meanwhile, many squads of knights have been sent down into the clockworks to stall the gremlins from advancing into haven and to buy time for the project to be completed. However, the gremlins have broken though our so-called ‘ defense line’, and Lieutenant Feron has been sped up the project, in hopes of completion before the gremlins reach haven.

The wailing of the emergency siren suddenly interrupted my stream of thoughts, and explosions were heard from the direction of the arcade. I raced down the steps from the apartment block and saw squads of ironclaw thwacker gremlins streaming out of the arcade. I grip my silent nightblade in anticipation, ‘Looks like I don’t need to have breakfast now … ‘ I think to myself.

Tue, 11/06/2012 - 10:12
#3
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Critzer
Critzer

Name : Critzer (Sorry if it seems unoriginal using my knight name, but i like the name :3)
Gender :Female
Race : Knight (Idk if you wanted SK race as in Gremlin or knight, or ethnic group such as hispanic or Asian, etc)
Gear: Ashtail coat and cap, Daring Rigadoon, Blazebrand, a Firo Driver, and a wise owlite shield
Bio : Critzer never was given a last name to carry on, as she was never really cared for with love and passion in the thought she'd live on a successful life. But she has surpassed everyone else's expectations, striving through the ranks and becoming a fast learner, in combat and money making. Within only a few weeks (a week in real time for me :D), she walked into the star 4 area of the Hall of Heroes, already having full star 4 equipment.
This brings up why she still doesn't have a last name, well, she keeps it so because it reminds her of the past she left behind, reminding her to never stoop to the low everyone expected her to be at. This foreshadow gives her a heart of iron, and will to go on, but also passion for those who struggle.
She is also a joyful knight, easy to make friends with, and quite caring, somewhat like an older sister. And she does like to look sharp or cute when she has free time, so she keeps all her old armors and an assortment of costumes. Her current one being a hallow tailed helm with vertical vents (Hallow) and a fur coat (hallow) with a bomb bandoleer (hallow).

P.S. Sorry if its to long, my ign is Critzer and add me and tell me if you like the bio or not. Id love to have my Character in a story :3

Thu, 11/08/2012 - 06:54
#4
Trabias's picture
Trabias
@ Critzer

You're in !

By the way, mind if i change your character's equipment a bit ?

Thu, 11/08/2012 - 08:26
#5
Critzer's picture
Critzer
^

I guess....but the gun and brandish stick with her liking of fire....forgot to mention that. And if you change the armour, change it to something that looks good...

Mon, 11/12/2012 - 07:54
#6
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Trabias
Chapter 1 part 2

Sorry if i don't post the chapters often, i am often busy and don't have time for the fan-fic, anyways , heres part two of chapter 1 !

Not caring much for stealth, I rushed up to the gremlins and unsheathed the silent nightblade , and in one swift motion, cut down the gremlins thwacker that was the leader of the troop.

It was just then that I noticed that there were still 3 gremlins left. I rolled my eyes “ Well, looks like its three on one now” I mumbled under my breath.

All three of the gremlins charged at me, hammers aloft. I raised my sword and blocked one of the gremlins, and used my shield to block the other. Using all my strength, I pushed both of them backwards, and the 3rd gremlin, who was running at me, tripped on this comrade’s foot. I then stabbed the unfortunate gremlin in the head, killing him instantly, following which, I took his body and chucked it at the two gremlins, who were still recovering from the fall, and knocked them to the ground again. I then executed them with a swift slice though both of their necks.

As I stood up again, I was knocked over by another thwacker, which took me by complete surprise.

“Darnit!” I thought to myself.

I was knocked to the ground, and when I picked myself up, the thwacker was already on me, hammer raised.

“ Trabias ! DUCK!”

I knelt down and two blobs of fiery globs impacted onto the gremlin’s face. As it was clawing at its blistered face I stabbed it through the heart with my silent nightblade.

“ Hey Trab be more careful next time, I might not be around to save you then,”.
“oh, hey there critzer, thanks for saving my life, I owe you one.”
Critzer smiled,
“there’s no need to say that we’re friends, and friends watch each others backs, right? “

Critzer was my next door neighbor, and my friend from the academy, and has the reputation of being one of the fastest knights to ascend to 4* star armor.

“By the way, have you seen tyrorx around yet? He left his gun at my apartment and forgot to take it-“

Suddenly, a knight in cobalt armor staggered from the town square and collapsed on the floor. Critzer and I ran to him.

“Whats going on ? “ Critzer asked.

“ The gremlins… Burning … town square… “ the knight mumbled, before passing out from his injuries.

“ The gremlins are burning the town square? … Trabias! go there quickly and see if you can help, I have to bring this knight to the medic.” “Got it Critz” I picked up my silent nightblade and raced to the town square.

Mon, 11/19/2012 - 10:20
#7
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Feline-Grenadier
Next guy to join is...

Name: Mr. "K"
Gender: Male
Gear: Vog Cub Coat; Ash-Tail Cap; Cold Iron Carver; Faust; Dark Thorn Shield
Bio: An older member of the Knights, who only recently became a Defender Elite. He worked his way up the ranks in the most uninteresting ways, such as doing repetitive missions. This allowed him to develop and refine his own unorthodox combat techniques, but also inhibited his social skills (for the lack of being around people his age and maturity). K is a quirky knight, as he quips and quotes his way through conversations like an annoying mosquito, but he does make an excellent teammate. His build doesn't seem out of the norm, until the occasional explosion hits him head-on. He would still end up in one piece. Socially, one might compare him to an insane man with a chainsaw. If one could mosey their way through his mind-field (pun for "mine-field"), they would end up with a person like their semi-incest uncle. (Not so entertaining is it now?)

Tue, 11/13/2012 - 07:18
#8
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Trabias
Hmm... Interesting... Okie

Hmm... Interesting... Okie vinny you're in.

Mon, 11/19/2012 - 06:41
#9
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Trabias
i'm back :D

sorry for the long wait, the guild hall update and RL issues have rendered me unable to type, but now, i have finally finished part 3! enjoy the story! :3

Chapter 1 part 3

The town square was in a state of chaos; the gremlin attack had taken most of the knights by surprise. The Auction house and several other building were on fire, and gremlins were everywhere, beating the life out of any knight in sight.

There was a bunch of Recruits by the gate of haven leading to spiral HQ, defending against the gremlins, but were being picked off one by the better-trained gremlins. In an attempt to I picked up a blaster from a dead knight and fired in the direction of the gremlins, it didn’t hit any of them, but it certainly caught their attention, as several gremlins turned their heads and begun firing off shots at me.

I ducked behind a nearby wall as pulsar bullets exploded on the wall behind me.
“Gah! I hate kind of situations” I thought, as I blindly returned fire with the blaster. Cries of pain implied that I had hit my targets. I tossed the blaster to the side and leapt over the wall.

The gremlins opened fire again, but this time, I easily dodged them as most gremlins with guns were shot down by my blind shots. I charged right up to them and most scattered, and those that did not were slaughtered by me.

However, just as I killed the last gremlin, the gremlins that had ran away had ran away had called reinforcements. “Oh *insert random swear word here*, reinforcements.” I muttered.

“Hey! You recruits, do you have any weapons?”
One of them replied, “ Sir, we have a bunch of blasters, autoguns and caliburs, but noting over 3-star weaponry, sir!”
“Okay … can you provide some covering fire for me?”
“Not a problem sir.”

I pulled out my silent nightblade from a gremlin’s dead body and readied a charge. As the first gremlin appeared from behind the rubble of the fountain, I charged up to him and released the charge, sending the gremlin and his comrades behind him flying.

Amongst blaster and autogun shots, I cut down the gremlin attackers, and those gremlins I didn’t quite kill yet were downed by the gunshots. However, the gremlins kept coming, and as fatigue kicked in, I was forced back to the gates of the barracks, and the recruits were almost entirely killed.

As wave after wave of gremlins descended on us, the recruits that remained panicked, one of them said “ Screw this, I’m outta here! I don’t wanna die!” and ran for the garrison. The remaining recruits, out of pure panic, followed the deserter.

“ Stupid idiots !” I muttered.

Sure enough, the gremlins went after them like a pack of hounds, and killed them mercilessly. As I was being distracted by the death of the recruits, a gremlin jammed his hammer up my backside. “ OW! Son of a * Female elephant! *” I cried and stabbed him in the face.

P.S sorry for the abrupt ending. My idea bottle ran dry and needs refilling :P

Sun, 12/02/2012 - 06:04
#10
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Trabias
A short intro for the gremlin

A short intro for the gremlin character, M'ak, enjoy!

Chapter 2 part 1

“ M’ak! Wake up you little Grimp! The commander wants everyone gathered at the elevator!”
“ Alright, I’m getting up ,don’t get all fussy about it E'sok … “

I yawned and propped myself up, my partner, E’sok, was at the entrance of my tent.

“You awake yet sleepyhead? “

Typical E’sok, Always the impatient type.

“Yeah, Yeah, Yeah, now shoo off , I need to change”

“Whatever, and remember to pack up, cos I heard we’re moving, “ Replied E’sok before she sauntered off to her tent.

I let out a deep sigh and begun gearing up for the day.

The camp was bustling with activity. Supplies were being packed,
Weapons sharpened, and tents being dismantled. After packing up my tent and my other belongings, I strolled over to E’sok’s tent, or what was her tent, that is.
She had just finished packing up her belongings. I leaned on a nearby rock wall, and looked as she heaved her tent and belongings unto her back.

“Ever thought of giving me a hand m’ak?”

“Nah, you’re strong enough, I known you long enough already. “
She shrugged.
“Guess I can’t keep anything from you.”

“Meh, Anyway, do you know why we’re moving?”

“Its anyone’s guess, maybe the commander might tell us”

“Race you to the elevator?”

“Last one there’s a rotten knight!”

We both laughed, and sprinted off to the elevator.

Sun, 12/02/2012 - 06:49
#11
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Msaad
Nice story

Name : Ernest
Gender : Male
Race : Adult Vog
Gear : Vog Set, crest of almire, Divine Avenger, Argent peacemaker.
Bio : He is a Vog who was hated by everyone in his neighborhood of Almire. He was betrayed by his parents, seeking for revenge... But he gets confronted and calmed down, and changed his desire for revenge into helping almire.

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