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The Clockwork Renegades RP Revived Than Closed.

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Sun, 01/13/2013 - 11:11
#101
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Fleet-Miss-Gun
I'll will start now.

When Broal comes. A pack of wolver attacks the renegades,"There's no time to hide, chatty bird." Broal whisper. He charges up his gun and shoot them at all wolvers, he then shoot his gun and all the wolvers exploded,poisoned, and takes heavy damage.

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 12:12
#102
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Artistbma
((OP Much, Fleet?))

Soul shouted with joy at the retreating wolvers, "Yeah, go back to the hole you came from!"

He rubbed his side and right arm. "Man, we really gotta finish up here before they come back."

"So..." Soul continued. "How 'bout we start with names? Hello, everyone. My name is Soul. I come from a graveyard, and spent most of my life being screwed over by idiot zombies. My eyes? I went into a Gremlin Facility when I was younger and one of their experiments went wrong. It stained my eyes permanently. How about you guys?"

Soul sheathed his Gran Faust and stared intently at the creatures before him.

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 12:18
#103
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Ebil-Bunny
@Fleet-Miss-Gun

((Artistbma is correct. That was a bit over powered. Also, why did you call Whatsit, "Chatty bird"? You didn't even hear him talk yet! For the future, be a little less OP. Also, your grammar is very off, please work on that.))

Whatsit flew over to the phantom.
"I'm Sky Bushtrimmer, but everyone calls me Whatsit because of all the questions I ask. I come from Haven, where the spiralians live."

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 13:02
#104
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Artistbma
((Soul's pic is in progress:

((Soul's pic is in progress: http://s1309.beta.photobucket.com/user/Artistbma/media/scan0001_zpsaabd7...))

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 13:03
#105
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Callis-The-Wicked
Didn't read that part...

Okay...I am officially excluded from this Forum

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 15:16
#106
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Fleet-Miss-Gun
Post is deleted

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Sun, 01/13/2013 - 14:03
#107
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Artistbma
((Fleet, you might want to

((Fleet, you might want to actually read the things other people post... The battle is over. And, you can't control other people's characters.))

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 14:13
#108
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Ripizza
After long last.

((Sorry I couldn't post earlier.))

Thor, confused by all of the gear-changing, didn't remember much of the battle. Afterwords, he managed to find a gremlin to get the claws out of his back, and repair the damage done by the clinging wolvers. Hearing the phantom tell everyone it's name, and the chattybird, now Whatsit, reply, he went over to them and said.
"Thor Stormhammer my name. Hammer me claim to fame."
With that, he went over to a nearby clump of rocks, and powered down to rest and recharge.

* * * * *

The Alpha wolver was wounded in claw and pride. Claw, because he had to chew it off to get free from the Lumber's back. And pride, because his Pack, formerly unbeatable, had lost a fight to a ramshackle group of rebellious renegades. Rashack, for that was his name, slunk belly low back to his cave, and awaited reproof. It was not long in coming. Soon a darkness crept over the sandy floor, and a smell of death permeated the den. A voice whispered from the shadows.
"You have failed me... I told you to bring me the stone, but you could not even beat a ragtag bunch of traitors."
The wolver chief whimpered an apology, but the Voice continued.
"If I had my way, you would be scraps right now, but my orders are to let you live. It seems 'They' still have a use for you. I am even to give you something to help your task. Kneel."
Rashack, now terrified, knelt on the ground, facing into the darkness. He felt a cool, damp fog settle onto his fur, and a fire in his wounded paw. Cringing, he looked down at it. His missing claw was regrowing before his eyes! But it was not the same... It was a dark purple color, and glowed slightly. It was a new claw. A superior claw. A Shadow Claw...

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 14:35
#109
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Artistbma
Soul was happy he finally

Soul was happy he finally knew two of his comrades' names. He was about to ask the ice jelly its name when he saw a zombie screaming. Soul rolled his eyes and strolled over to the undead creature.

"What... the heck... are you doing?" he asked, annoyed.

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 15:08
#110
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Ebil-Bunny
@Fleet-Miss-Gun

((I'm sorry, and I know you're a noob, but it looks like you aren't even trying. Your grammar isn't very good, and it looks like you aren't reading anything. If it wasn't for the symbol thing on your app, I would think you didn't even read the rules.

No IC post right now, but one will probably come next time.))

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 15:22
#111
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Fleet-Miss-Gun
Ebil Bunny i'll do my best and i'am an asian.

Broal is now curious about his friends."What's your name?" Broal asked to Soul. "What happened?" Broal asked to everyone."Also, i'am sorry that i'am late." Broal whispers to the renegade leader.
((I read the rules but sometimes i forgot it))

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 15:29
#112
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Artistbma
Soul rolled his eyes again

Soul rolled his eyes again and ignored the zombie. He turned back to the rest of the Renegades.

"So, what's your name?" he asked the ice jelly. Soul smiled then noticed the name tag on the ice jelly.

"Colin," he read. "Well then, hello Colin. I look forward to fighting by your side."

((EDIT: Woops, forgot about the 2 post limit thing.))

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 16:10
#113
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Dmatter
Just as i got to colin to

Just as i got to colin to help, The bird thingy scared all the wolvers away. Great, I thought, I am less useful than a BIRD. After telling my name to everyone, as the bird asked, Opae, I ask a question that i've been wondering about to the towering robot like creature ((takun)) who seemed to be the head of the place. "What Is this place?"

(( edit: woah wave of posts. sorry for any inconvinionce, i was on page 2 for a wile and didn't notice page 3. Edit2: i'm going to change a bit of this to fit the current situation.))

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 16:03
#114
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Fleet-Miss-Gun
@Dmatter

Did you even read page 3?
@artist Actually, since you already wait about two post, you can.

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 15:58
#115
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Fleet-Miss-Gun
Double post

Oops double post

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 16:03
#116
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Feline-Grenadier
Erm...

((It looks like Seatus won't be joining us anytime soon...
Also, Ripizza, did you try to make a Public Enemy or something? It looks like it from what you're writing...))

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 16:40
#117
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Ripizza
((@Vinnydime. Bunny already

((@Vinnydime. Bunny already yelled at me for that. The wolver is just going to dissappear or something.
@Dmatter I believe that Takun is a Stranger, not a robot.
Sorry for no IC this time, but my character is sleeping.))

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 16:42
#118
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Fleet-Miss-Gun
Broal is doing something........

Broal follows the bird, since the phantom ignore him. He's asked Whatsit "What's your name? My name is Broal."

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 16:54
#119
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Dmatter
((my character does not know

((my character does not know that.))

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 17:52
#120
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Ebil-Bunny
((Is everyone trying to be a

((Is everyone trying to be a moderator or something? Sure, I need some of them, but it would be nice if I had given them the job first. Oh well, the help is useful sometimes. Also, Vinnydime, you don't actaully "control two characters" when you have an NPC. In the old RP, the NPCs were either a creature needed controlled by mods (Takun), or a creature that has a connection to your main character (A relative, an old friend, a nemesis, or a creauter that harmed you or a friend/relative. You can actually have as many as you want within reason! When you make that connection between the two characters, you may use Vin.))

"My name's Sky Bustrimmer, but most people call Whatsit. I like your hat. Is it comfortable? What creature are you?" Whatsit asked the zombie named Broal.

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 18:20
#121
Dmatter's picture
Dmatter
*waits patiently for takun to

*waits patiently for takun to respond*

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 18:25
#122
Artistbma's picture
Artistbma
((I could be a moderator if

((I could be a moderator if you like. :D))

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 18:32
#123
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Feline-Grenadier
...

((I never knew Vin was going to be an NPC, nor did I know he was controllable only by connections to my current character. I thought I was going to control him. Can you make it clearer for us players about who controls what when they make characters and such? It's starting to annoy me that you're throwing random rules mid-game. <---No, I am not acting like a mod or anything, I'm just asking what people are doing. I never told anyone to do anything. Going to change the application for Vin now...))

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 06:42
#124
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Ebil-Bunny
@Vinnydime

((Sorry for the inconvenience. I was trying to make this RP like the first one as much as possible. When I say NPC, I mean secondary character. Takun is a NPC, but only I am allowed to control him. Speaking of Takun, I think someone wants me to post for him. And when I posted about the mod thing, I meant a bunch of people were acting like mods.

@'Artistbma' If anyone would be a mod, it would be either Ripizza because he's my brother, or Snowdusk, because he's been the most trustworthy. I'm not saying you guys do a bunch of bad stuff, but Snowdusk was the first one to post, which means he was wise enough to know that a RP won't only be good if there is already a bunch of people in it, and because I do his adventure thingies, and he wrote them very well.

@'Snowdusk' Don't get too high and mighty. You aren't a mod yet! Also, a adventure thingy about the Clockwork Renegades would be awesome! Where at one point you can choose to be a Clockwork Renegade or be a Public Enemy. I'm not saying this to advertise the RP, but because I think it would fun. How about you?))

Takun
"This is the Clockwork Renegades, creatures devoted to help the spiralians get to the Core. Either because they hate the Spiral Knights and want them off the Cradle for good, because they like the spiralians and want to help them as much as possible, or because they think the best way to stop this war is to get the spiralians to the Core," Takun said to Opae, "You may join if you wish, and we need all the help we can get!"

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 19:02
#125
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Dmatter
Hearing what takun had said,

Hearing what takun had said, he seemed nice. I decide that I will stay with him, helping. "I wish to join" I say, as this is the safest place it seems.
((Also,"tukken said to Colin", Colin is over by soul just pointing out.))

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 19:57
#126
Artistbma's picture
Artistbma
((I only waited because I was

((I only waited because I was trying to come up with a character but okay...))

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 02:21
#127
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Snowdusk
((@Ebil-Bunny: Thanks for

((@Ebil-Bunny: Thanks for your compliments, and yes, I still feel rather "new" around here, so the mod position can wait. However, if you are in need of mods, you can count on me. I'll wait for your orders :)

Clockwork Renegades for the Choose Your Adventure series? Sounds interesting. I'll consider it...))

Being approached by Takun then, Colin was feeling butterflies in its core. All of them did manage to ward off the wolvers, but staying in a team with different sorts of creatures was another concern. However, everyone will be fighting for a main cause: getting the knights to take off Cradle as soon as possible. Who doesn't want that?

To think about it, everyone would be glad that no one is messing around their peaceful home; and the knights will get what they want the most. Everyone will be happy to settle for this win-win situation (including his Royal Gelatinous Highness). Besides, Colin is getting bored of all its ice statue collections.

Finally, Colin looked at Takun and made a joyful "glorp" in agreement. That reminded Colin to find a chance to learn up a proper language and stop making jelly sign languages, but maybe later.

The ghostly figure had introduced himself to Colin right after the conversation. Turned out he was a "phantom" living in the "graveyards" with other "zombies". Colin has neither seen nor heard of anything he described before, though it actually thought the colourful eyes of the phantom were natural (until he explained it to Colin).

Colin was rather delighted to speak, but to no avail. All it can do was another joyful "glorp". Hope the phantom understands, Colin thought.

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 01:14
#128
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Fleet-Miss-Gun
Broal is doing something........

"I'am a droul zombie and the hat is comfortable especially when you become a zombie." Broal answers Whatsit question.

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 01:18
#129
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Fleet-Miss-Gun
double post

Damn my tab makes a double post again!

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 03:20
#130
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Infernus-Dragneel
((I'm still sorry about before ....))

Jack Frost slowly opened his eyes, the wolvers standing in front of him isn't there anymore. "What happened?" he thought to himself as he sheathed his blade back.

"I...." Jack Frost frowned as he approached Takun and the rest of the group, "I...I'm sorry....about...." he paused for a moment to think of the word which will describe it. "...Everything...."

Jack Frost turned to the ice jelly who was still glorping in joy, "Sorry.... That I kinda lashed out my anger at you...."

Jack Frost fixed his glasses's position and cleared his throat, "My name's Jack Frost.... Call me Frosty if you want to..." he looked down for a moment and continued, "I don't know how to... Or even learned how to make friends with allies... So I hope you could help....somehow..."

((I'm so sorry to everyone.. For being selfish with my own character and trying to control everything :( ))

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 03:44
#131
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Snowdusk
Colin turned around. Did

Colin turned around. Did someone said "frost"?

The ice jelly cube looked around, and watched as the scarf creature voiced out his apology. A Layoafer! Of course, how could it forget? Colin thought again. Turns out there have something in common after all: ice and frost! With great excitement, Colin rushed forward, mixing slushing and quick sliding movements, and launched itself towards the Devilite.

On impact, it wrapped itself around Frosty so tightly, the icy contents started oozing out. What Colin did was basically a hug among slime families, but it didn't care if Frosty got the meaning. Colin was way too excited to bother that anyway.

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 05:10
#132
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Artistbma
Colin let out a "Glorp!" and

Colin let out a "Glorp!" and Soul could only assume that meant he was happy. Soul turned to Takun.

"Is that everyone? Colin, Whatsit, Thor, Frosty, me, and that zombie?" Soul wondered. He noticed a gremlin nearby. "Who are you?" he asked it.

Soul felt the hilt of his sword. Due to his past of gremlins, he didn't care too much for them. He was prepared if this gremlin was not a friend, but a foe. He stared at the gremlin as if he didn't care what its name was.

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 06:31
#133
Dmatter's picture
Dmatter
((FYI, I have school, so I

((FYI, I have school, so I won't be able to post in mournings on weekdays.))

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 17:29
#134
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Ebil-Bunny
@Infurnus-Dragneel

((The controlling everything was the bad thing, not the selfishness. We need all kinds of Renegades, even ones that everyone hates to be around. You don't need to change your character at all, but if you want friends you would ;) And your're forgiven. Hope you're having fun!))

Whatsit
"A zombie? Yikes!" Whatsit yelled as he turned away from Broal, and then stopped and turned around again, "Wait, you are friendly, right? Because everyone here so far is friendly. I heard zombies eat brains! Are they tasty? What does "Droul" mean?" He machine gunned his questions.

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 07:26
#135
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Infernus-Dragneel
((It's Infernus >_>, but I don't care much about that matter ))

"Whoah! G-get off!" Jack Frost tried to release the Ice jelly, he noticed a name tag inside it's slime body written 'Colin'

"Help! Get this... Get Colin off me!" Jack Frost shouted even harder, he knew that Colin's intentions were good but he Jack Frost wasn't the type to give hugs, or even to get one.

Turning to the chatty snipe, he wanted to ask it few questions of his own but was suddenly distracted by something. Jack frost could feel his cold body started to get hot, either a wolver or another furry creature is still nearby. Looking through Colin's semi-transparent body he could see a gremlin, apparently a female one. That he cared little, through his career the fiends never got along with the gremlins, either because they never communicated that much or gremlins just don't like fiends

Grabbing the handle of his nightblade, a strong weapon with the property of shadow.... Which is the weakness of all gremlins.

"You.... don't have the renegade symbol.... I don't care who you are, but I won't hesitate to kill you..." Jack Frost growled as he slowly pointed his blade at the gremlin.

(( I should have never controlled anyone, I'm really sorry about it... And I actually intended for a slight change in Frosty's personality, but he is still cold inside and out ))

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 09:14
#136
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Feline-Grenadier
Okay.

Ka'in only tilted her head to the side.

"Mend?" she asked. She couldn't say much more than that, and she began to get a bit more nervous. Having some paranoid monster pointing a nightblade at you isn't usually a comfortable situation, especially when you have speaking problems...

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 09:49
#137
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Ripizza
Thor awoke to the sound of

Thor awoke to the sound of voices. A group of monsters were introducing themselves. One of them, a Layofer, Calling itself Frosty, noticed a gremlin standing nearby, and pointed it's Nightblade at the poor thing.
((I can only assume that Ka'in is standing nearby, from what is said in the posts. I'm not trying to control anybody.))
The gremlin looked nervous, and peeped the word "Mend?". Not sure what was going on, but feeling loyal to gremlins in general, for all they have done for him, Thor stumped over to the group, and shielded the mender with his large frame. He asked what was going on, in his crude way. ("What you do? I ask you.")

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 13:23
#138
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Artistbma
Soul re-sheathed his Gran

Soul re-sheathed his Gran Faust. He looked straight at the gremlin.

"So you're Mend?" he asked. "Psh. Takun, is 'Mend' part of the Renegades?"

He diverted his attention to the tall stranger. Soul scratched his face. He was feeling uneasy what with the blazing sun overhead.

Tue, 01/15/2013 - 13:37
#139
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Kaijuhunter
No spam here, move along

No spam here, move along

Tue, 01/15/2013 - 04:11
#140
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Fleet-Miss-Gun
"I'll not answer your

"I'll not answer your question until you fix your spelling." he whispers to Whatsit.

Instead of answering Whatsit weird questions, he wanders around the clockworks renegades camp. As he wander around, he saw a gremlin, layofer, and electreant. "A layofer, gremlin, and electreant. How original." Broal speaks to the gremlim, layofer, and electreant.

((Hookuu did you even read the rules and Ebilbunny you completely ruined the post))

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 16:04
#141
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Artistbma
((@Fleet Are you kidding

((@Fleet

Are you kidding me?))

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 16:40
#142
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Feline-Grenadier
>.<

Ka'in shook her head.

She points to herself and says, "Ka'in (Ka-Een)", and then points to her Wrench Wand and says, "Mend", and then points to what looks like a Dark-Matter encrusted Thwack Hammer clunking it to the floor, "THWACK!"

She then tilts her head to the other side, as if inquiring if her actions were comprehended.

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 17:40
#143
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Ebil-Bunny
@Hokuu

((There is 3 problems with your application, not including the whole unfinished thing, because that doesn't matter that much. 1, Skolvers aren't actually included in Spiral Knights, the armor is, skolver isn't. 2, Your character is way too OP. A bit less power please! 3, I don't believe you even read the rules in the first place! And if you did, obey them, rules aren't for breaking, after all. Fix all these things, post a complete app, and I might accept it.))

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 17:48
#144
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Ripizza
As Thor waited for an answer,

As Thor waited for an answer, a zombie perambulated over to the small group, and complimented him for his originality.
"Thank you, I do." He said in reply, and bowed slightly. Then introduced himself. "My name Thor. What be your?"
The gremlin, Ka'in, gestured with it's wrench, then pounded the ground with a hammer. While it did this, it was peeping in it's small voice.

Tue, 01/15/2013 - 04:16
#145
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Infernus-Dragneel
And away we go!

Slowly but cautiously Jack Frost lowered his blade, "Thwack? What meaningless epithet might that be?" he asked the gremlin who's name seems to be Ka'in, or so Jack Frost was told. "If you're here to join... I suggest you don't go near me, or the next thing you know that your precious fur shall become a substitute for a wolver coat." Jack Frost growled and sheathed his blade.

Ignoring Ka'in, Jack Frost let out a sneeze and turn his attention to the snipe, "Who are you? And more importantly, why are you here?" Jack Frost asked the snipe as he wiped his red nose with his yellow scarf.

"Allergies... I hate furs..." Jack Foist sneezed again, his body started to get hot and rather almost turning his cold body into a Firebrander Devilite's hot burning body. "I think you better get off me before you turn into water..." Jack Frost sneezed again as he poked Colin who was still hugging him.

Tue, 01/15/2013 - 10:24
#146
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Snowdusk
Colin did feel Frosty's body

Colin did feel Frosty's body getting warmer, and retracted its gooey body off from him. Colin wondered if allergies were common among the Devilite race or other monsters. Because of the special properties possessed by the ice jelly cubes, any disease cannot stay in their body for long. So they don't get very sick at most times.

Colin watched silently as everyone started to introduced themselves to each other. It actually felt rather excited to meeting all these new people, and it looked forward to make some new friends. But since Colin couldn't talk their language, and the jelly cube is not accustomed to meeting new people, it decided it's best to stay where it is and simply watch. Everything would be so much easier if it only learnt some real languages, Colin thought.

After a while, Colin gave up the idea of standing still and doing nothing. He would rather try to ask then to act like a mute jelly. Colin approaches Takun and wrote a brief message like what he did earlier.

"I can't talk like everyone else. I need to learn a sign language."

Tue, 01/15/2013 - 14:19
#147
Dmatter's picture
Dmatter
((it's been 2 days already.

((it's been 2 days already. sorry, but I'm getting a little impatient for a response from takun.))

Tue, 01/15/2013 - 20:51
#148
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Kaijuhunter
Imma try againz...

NamE: Kaleth

GendeR: female

AgE: (just felt like adding it) 19

RacE: Gremlin (she is half Ghostmane, half Mender)

PersonalitY: kind and loving, used to be known by her fellow Ghostmanes as "The Nice Murderer" since she killed, just like them, but always did it quickly and painlessly, unlike her demented coworkers, who taunted their prey with their invisibility and ruthlessness.

AppearancE: the same as any Gremlin, only her fur is grey and she wears a black assassin's cloak bestowed upon her by Seerus himself (it looks a bit like Connor's outfit in AC3). Her robe is midnight black with fiery red designs down the sides and a small crest on the chest part, identifying her as one of the feared Ghostmane Stalkers. She also has a gauntlet on her arm that can expand into a Lionheart Honor Guard, a gift she got from a kind and dying Knight she stumbled upon in the woods. She has a small burn scar on her paws from when she was little and tried to play with Seerus' hammer. Her eyes are azure blue with flecks of green in them.

EquipmenT: a special War Cloak given to her by Seerus, which, in addition to being light and flexible, is incredibly tough and was built to withstand the power of a Darkclaw Thwacker's hammer. The cloak also enhances the power of her melee weapons, like a wolver coat. It also has the bonus attack and moving speed of the vog and quicksilver armor, along with a slight degree of shadow defense. Her main weapon is a specialized Acheron modified by Seerus, given the code name of "Thanatos" after Hades' lieutenant of death. It is slightly deadlier than even the horrid Gran Faust, and its charge attack produces an effect that is a mix between the Acheron and Retri charges: the sword is swung, creating a wave of black shadow energy, but where that wave ends, a blast not unlike the retri occurs; 3 small black shadow balls circle around the area for 2 seconds, then disappear, returning to Thanatos. Other than this deadly blade, Kaleth wields two twin tomahawks, which are slightly weaker than a Thwacker's hammer, but are as fast as a Cutter's strikes. Of course, she can throw these axes, which are dipped in Yellow Chromalisk poison, a toxin that momentarily stuns the foe. Kaleth also has a belt filled with 10 small throwing knives, which are also dipped in the same stunning substance. When using Thanatos, Kaleth usually wields it in one hand, gripping a tomahawk or throwing knife in the other. She occasionally uses a black longbow which can fire poisoned arrows that can cause status effects (it changes depending on the poison used, but it is never deadly). This combination of shadow, stun, surprise, range, and quick strikes was originally created to be a counter to the Knight's versatility, but it is also useful against other foes.

SkillS: has the same skills of any Ghostmane; impeccable accuracy when throwing objects (when she was a child, she used to be the team captain of a lil demon league team for kindergartener devilites), lots of stamina, strength slightly higher than that of a Thwacker, a residue of Mender skills, and the Ghostmanes' signature stealth ability: invisibility. She is an experienced hunter and is also efficient with a longbow. Like any other Gremlin, Kaleth is weak to shadow (her cloak can only protect her from it so much), but ironically makes a habit of lurking in the shadows, stalking her enemies, just as a Ghostmane should. She also has one other weakness: a fear, not vulnerability to, just an extremely mornid fear of fire, which dates back to when she accidentally burned herself playing with Seerus' hammer. Although she is resistent to elementals, as all Gremlins are, the mere sight of a fire-based weapon causes her to flinch in fear. Her paws, burnt from the Hammer, are her weakest spot: an Achilles' heel of sorts. Even if someone were to hit her palm casually, like for a hard high five, it will cause her extreme pain, thereby providing another defense against her vicious fighting prowess

BiO: a Ghostmane stalker who was once part of Seerus' vanguard, but went rogue to join the Renegades. She was a good child; she kept her grades up, attended the prestigious Razwog's Academy (although the old Razwog was something of a pervert, sometimes trying to peek down her uniform), and helped around the house. When she came back from school one day, she found her parents (her father an honorable ex-Ghostmane, her mother a gentle Mender) dead, poisoned by Seerus. She was sent to an orphanage at Emberlight, once even meeting the jolly Impostoclaus himself (long story). Soon, Seerus came by the orphanage "completely by accident" and adopted the young Gremlin. He trained her as his most prized pupil, and made her part of his regiment, the legendary Ghostmanes. Years later, at the age of 17, she went out into the Snarbolax's lair and encountered one of her friends from the orphanage, a gremlin who had joined the Renegades. He explained to her what was going on above the Clockworks (along with some other things), and when she inquired Seerus about this, the wicked Gremlin nodded sagely. Remembering that her friend said that Seerus, her own adoptive father, couldn't be trusted, she asked him a question that would scar her for life: what really happened to her parents? Kaleth recalled that the poison used on her parents made their bodies bloated and deformed- the deadliest of the secret Chromalisk poisons: Corodisk (portmanteau of Chromalisk and corosion) toxin. Kaleth also knew that only Seerus himself had access to this mysterious poison, and had drawn a horrible conclusion: Seerus was the murderer of her loving guardians. Seerus, hearing this, laughed- not as if he was being falsely accused, more as if he was amused that Kaleth had not known this sooner. Horrified, the young Ghostmane fled from Seerus and his dreadful factory, going to the surface of Cradle in search of the Renegades that her friend had joined, knowing only that she needed to get away from Seerus.

AdditionaL factS: has a craving for jelly and in her spare time can be found having a nice talk with the Jelly King. Often, she will begin to nibble on one of the mini jellies without even knowing its alive. Ironically, she has a pet mini jelly named Shlerp, but she doesn't try to consume him. She also has two young Devilite friends, Nyra and Lyra, who always follow her and occasionally play with her tomahawks, accidentally scaring all the Snipes away.

(Sorry my bio's a bit long, i got too absorbed in it)

So... Does it still need to be nerfed? I added TWO extra weaknesses to balance her deadly skills.... Give meh ur opinion.

Caught my error, sry didnt see it in the rules.

Tue, 01/15/2013 - 16:34
#149
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Feline-Grenadier
^

((Whoa, what a nice app. Also, can the Bunny look at Vin's app again? Seatus doesn't look like he's playing.))

Tue, 01/15/2013 - 17:49
#150
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Artistbma
((@Dmatter I'm waiting for a

((@Dmatter

I'm waiting for a response from Takun too. :/ ))

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