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(Spiral spy Fanfic Comic!) :Queen of secrets and the army of Ice: Incomplete chapter 1

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Sun, 01/13/2013 - 20:26
Mzculet's picture
Mzculet

Prologue
The prologue is about a team of recon rangers who are sent to a secret underground lab to help save the scientist and experiments that has been recently attacked by unknown type of slime's. The team discovers a shocking new type of slime's that has the ability to form into any kind of species living in cradle!

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The story also connects to a fan fic I have written a long time ago that I have failed to keep writing. So instead I plan to put this 2 stories together.
You may also want to read it so I will leave the link here:

http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/70728

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Want to help? (or be in the story?)

You can participate in the story by helping me create new characters and scenes!

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Character Requirements
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Name:

Gender:

Personality:

Appearance/Gear:

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The story

Prologue
http://imgur.com/a/x4xvQ#0
Chapter 1
http://imgur.com/a/Mu6GA#0

Special thanks to:
Happyapathy for Inspiring me to create a story like this.

Side note:
Like Happyapathy said here I also cant make everything as you like.
http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/42339

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 20:27
#1
Mzculet's picture
Mzculet
Also I will try to

Also I will try to create/post new chapters every week.
And hopefully I can post the rest of the story today.

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 21:46
#2
Robotrog's picture
Robotrog
Very good work

I like the story so far, a very good beginning. How did you make the artwork? I really like how you added speech bubbles insteadof the chat boxes we use in the game and the graphics that you used for the knights look great!

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 23:13
#3
Mzculet's picture
Mzculet
Thanks Robo!Uploading the

Thanks Robo!
Also I used spiral spy.
Uploading the full prologue tomorrow!

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 22:41
#4
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Great

I was wondering where you been...
I would like to fill out my app. If you need help look at my Lore anytime =P

Name: Seatus

Gender: Male

Race: Snarbolax

Appearance: Full Snarbolax (weapon is thorn, not bomb)

Personality: Serious, but sometimes upbeat

Bio: Chapter 1 of my Lore (Which I trust you've read)

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 23:12
#5
Mzculet's picture
Mzculet
Great thanks seatus! (Yup I

Great thanks seatus! (Yup I read it xD)

Sun, 01/13/2013 - 23:22
#6
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
KK

XD

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 16:49
#7
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
looking good so far, just

looking good so far, just want to point out that you should disable the compass before you take a screenshot :P

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 17:03
#8
Mzculet's picture
Mzculet
Haha Yeah I forgot to turn it

Haha Yeah I forgot to turn it off and the grid as well.
Anyways I've uploaded the full prologue! Feel free to tell me any spelling mistakes or suggestions!

Also Happyapathy should I put a "how to download spiral spy" video for people to create fan fic comics as well?

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 17:05
#9
Mzculet's picture
Mzculet
Also a heads up! the next

Also a heads up! the next chapter is going to be really interesting featuring the untamed snarbolax Seatus!
(Might take me sometime though Hopefully to be uploaded sometime this weekend)

Mon, 01/14/2013 - 17:17
#10
Callis-The-Wicked's picture
Callis-The-Wicked
Great

I will also record this in my fanfic =P

Sun, 01/20/2013 - 14:32
#11
Mzculet's picture
Mzculet
Greetings everyone! Here is

Greetings everyone!
Here is the preview of the next chapter

http://i.imgur.com/O3UY92Y.png

http://i.imgur.com/HPfDgAw.png

http://i.imgur.com/KpW0ZeE.png

Sun, 01/20/2013 - 15:34
#12
Verodius's picture
Verodius
If I may make a suggestion...

Could you add numbers or arrows to the speech bubbles or something? As is it can get a bit hard to tell which order each character is speaking in.

Sun, 01/20/2013 - 19:38
#13
Mzculet's picture
Mzculet
Sure thing!

Sure thing!

Mon, 01/21/2013 - 16:32
#14
Mzculet's picture
Mzculet
Incomplete chapter 1 I will

Incomplete chapter 1 I will post the whole chapter sometime next week
http://imgur.com/a/Mu6GA#0

Fri, 08/09/2013 - 21:37
#15
Rubixman's picture
Rubixman
Noooo

Says the files not found when I clicked the link D: any one know what to do bout this???

Fri, 08/09/2013 - 21:40
#16
Rubixman's picture
Rubixman
Noooo

Says the files not found when I clicked the link D: any one know what to do bout this???

Fri, 08/09/2013 - 21:41
#17
Rubixman's picture
Rubixman
Lol

Lol dafuq? post got doubled XD

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