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EXCEED [Fanfic]

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Sat, 02/09/2013 - 01:14
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone

:D

Err... It may contain some "mature content" when I write it on draft, so just... fidgets nervously

And some of the chaps may be based on RL experiences. So sit back, enjoy the story and I warn, Reader Discretion is Advised. :D

Books:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xrYUvgKR1aOB4YeF2ZuNbNtVwgGxvX4i_7uq... -- Book 1: AlucardLegolas

App Format:

To Monsters:

Name:
Gender:
Race:
Weapon/s:
Backstory:

To Knights, or at least, anything Human-like related to Knights:

Name:
Gender:
Race:
Weapons:
Outfit:
Backstory:

If you guys want, slap a little more information if you get really really REALLY creative XD

Sat, 02/09/2013 - 01:50
#1
Sir-Wuddle's picture
Sir-Wuddle
App! >:U

Good sir, I offer you my best friend.

Name: Lenny
Gender: Male
Race: Chromalisk
Weapon: Tongue
Backstory: Abandoned and taken into adoptive care at a young age, this chromalisk has been a "rogue" for most of his life even before joining a guild of the same name. He can always be found adventuring into the clockworks along with a certain companion. He is as skillful as he is crafty; this Rogue knight prefers to remain silent and under the radar until the time is just right.

more info here http://skrogue.org/pages/lennychromalisk

also your document is locked :d

Sat, 02/09/2013 - 19:43
#2
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
Tried fixing...

I think it's fixed now; I forgot to set the "share" settings XD

Mon, 02/11/2013 - 07:10
#3
Magyk-Septimus's picture
Magyk-Septimus
My Application!

Here you go:

Name: Kyle
Gender: Male
Race: Knight
Weapons: Final Flourish and Barbarous Thorn Blade slung across his back.
Outfit: Wears a damaged Tabard and Chapeau of Violet Rose never carries a shield, thinking to good for it

Back story: As a recruit in the Knights of Rose, he trained hard. He didn't talk much but people knew he was going to become something great until he created an elaborate scheme to kill the Vanguard that work in the Knights of Rose.... But it worked and people found out it was him and he was removed from the Knights of Rose. Now...he strays Haven, pick-pocketing his fellow knights.

Welp, here it is, as you can tell, he is somewhat a bad-guy.

Tue, 02/12/2013 - 04:46
#4
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
UPDATED! Chapter 2 done!

Oh, and Kyle will have an appearance at Chapter... um... Let's keep it a surprise, and that goes for Lenny, too! :D

Tue, 02/12/2013 - 06:01
#5
Infernus-Dragneel's picture
Infernus-Dragneel
bear-sona?

This seems quite interesting to read, I will try to follow on the story! And just asking, how did Sandra get her bombs? Oh what am I saying, she must've took hours crafting them with energy and crowns... wait.... I meant that literally!

Anyhow, the real reason I am here right now, is because of the title. You could figure out on how the title drawn me into this.

Thu, 02/14/2013 - 03:45
#6
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
Bombs!

@Infernus - Thank you for saying that :D As for your questions...

SPOILER ALERT!

^^^^

Errr... How can I do the highlight to see the text thingy like they did with Arkus's profile as a monster?

Thu, 02/14/2013 - 03:58
#7
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
Bombs!

Due to my obsessiveness to bombs... I have exaggerated the term bombs... Heheh... But nevertheless I will continue Sandra as a bomber and she will have major back stories in the following chapters/books.

Oh, and happy V Day to all of ye <3

Thu, 02/14/2013 - 04:38
#8
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
UPDATED! Chapter 3 done!

I will comment when I have done a chapter in the story with the subject: UPDATED! CHAPTER __ DONE!

Thu, 02/14/2013 - 18:23
#9
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Feline-Grenadier
App?

Name: Ariel Gestalt
Gender: Female (despite masculine name, FEMALE)
Race: Knight
Weapons: Volcanic Pepperbox, Lionheart Honor Blade
Outfit: Volcanic Plate Mail, Azure Guardian Helm, (shield N/A)
Backstory: Originally, she was a Recruit onboard the Skylark along with the rest of the Knights. She defected from the Order soon after she found herself to the Rescue Camp, and only stumbled onto Haven by pure accident. Although she considered leaving the Order-controlled encampment, she found it more convenient to live there than fight enemies outside. So, she was re-recruited into the military ranks, and used her unorthodox fighting style to good use. She doesn't like using shields, but she can use weapons with both hands.

Sat, 02/16/2013 - 02:26
#10
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
UPDATED! CHAPTER 5 DONE!

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Best imitation of kat! in uh... sideways...

Sun, 02/17/2013 - 21:26
#11
Little-Mage's picture
Little-Mage
Application

Name: Gorran

Gender: Male

Race: Gunslinger

Weapons: Argent Peacemaker, Polaris

Outfit: Nameless Poncho, Deadshot Cheapeau, Grey Owilite Sheild

Backstory: Gorran lived with his parents for the longest he could remember. He was a friendly and curious boy, and often was found frolicing in the Haven with the Snipes. As a kid him and his father were close and always were practicing together. After his father had died, he was devoted to protecting his mother, and avenging his father. While away on a mission, he had come back to find his mother gone and a letter left for him, the letter read that his mother had been kidnaped and was going to be killed if he doesn't become a rebel knight. He refused to let his mother seek a horrid faith like his father and agreed immediately, and became a rebel. Gorran currently is desprately searching for answers of his mother and crying out for help of those from the cradle.

Wed, 02/20/2013 - 22:57
#12
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
UPDATED! Chapter 6 Done!

Ariel and Gorran are accepted! :D I'm so happy people are starting to join the party.

Thu, 02/21/2013 - 06:06
#13
Infernus-Dragneel's picture
Infernus-Dragneel
I wonder how Sandra feels....

SANDRAAAAAAA

Jerk

Jerk

Night isn't going to be happy.... T^T

Fri, 02/22/2013 - 21:45
#14
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
XD

Ikr Infernus XD

When I wrote that chap, I was laughing and crying at the same time.

Fri, 02/22/2013 - 22:14
#15
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Also...

I pray to god that you won't make Ariel a Sandra. Because Sandra needs to be on a leash :L

at least give Ariel some cold-blooded dignity :P

Fri, 02/22/2013 - 23:51
#16
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
UPDATED Chapter 7 is Done!

Now that I think of it, when I read Ariel's name... I flattened the pronunciation and heard myself say "A Real Guest Alt."

Anyways... Read on :D

Don't worry, Vinny, I'll take care of that :D

Sat, 02/23/2013 - 22:08
#17
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
UPDATED! Chapter 8 is Done!

I hope I described Ariel as not a Sandra, Vinny! :D

Mon, 02/25/2013 - 00:27
#18
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
UPDATED! Chapter 9 is Done!

=D

Mon, 02/25/2013 - 17:05
#19
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
FU-

Oh MY FRIGGIN GAWD, you're seriously going for a harem. Oh, Lightning, you...

=<=

Wed, 02/27/2013 - 02:52
#20
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
._.

Uh... this is awkward when you said I was going for a harem...

>.<

And now I see the future for the story XD Lol... How did you see I was going for a harem; not that I planned it, but how did you see that the story had flown like that?

Thu, 02/28/2013 - 16:30
#21
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Well...

Contrary to the "One does not simply walk into Mordor" belief, I simply apply my otaku-ness into real-life scenarios, such as this. >:D

Wondering what is this Mordor I speak of? http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/one-does-not-simply-walk-into-mordor

Fri, 03/01/2013 - 19:17
#22
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
XD

Lol, nice one XD

What kind of otaku are you? ✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌

Sat, 03/02/2013 - 01:19
#23
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
...

One does not simply say the word "Otaku" without becoming one themselves...

Anyhow, what do you mean by kinds of otaku? It's just, otaku. :P

If you're asking what kind of stuff I'm into, let's say...

9gag memes, SAO, Spiral Knights, Mintsphere & Lucidrine, Battlefield Series, Choose Your Story kinda stuff, Bleach (my eyes f***ing burn from trying to catch up ermegerd), naruto (cancelled watching to prevent eyestrain), some Kongregate games, etc.

Got a rough idea? Naah, too vague...

Sat, 03/02/2013 - 01:28
#24
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
Updated! Chapter 10 Done!

Well, there are manga otaku, anime otaku, so much more.

I favor anime more than manga; I like trying to dub some characters in my language.

Sat, 03/02/2013 - 05:55
#25
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
Updated! Chapter 11 Done!

Thy next chapter will be:
Really long chapter(I hope) coming up for loyal followers!(Twitter much? XD)

Wed, 03/13/2013 - 01:35
#26
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
Okay...

The Epilogue for Book One maybe not really long, but while I'm brainstorming for ideas to use for the next book... Wait I'm going to create a thread...

Wed, 03/13/2013 - 01:56
#27
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
MElancholy

http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/76411

Wed, 03/13/2013 - 05:11
#28
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Cobalterian
Lolz Skye.

I went on Melacholy and I saw someone called your highness333 writing.... Is that you? I said Hi but you didn't listen.

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