Hello, I have found that many good fanfics that I apply to seem to ...well...die (I bring bad luck :3). So I've decided to make my own but i'd like to lay down some rules for those who apply.
1. NO GODMODE . This mean your character cannot be indestructible, unhurt-able, or have no flaws in themselves. No perfect men/women in personality nor physical body or power, there has to be a draw back. You don't have to state them in your app, just pm me if you'd like (Critzer ign).
2. No flying, im sorry, but that defeats the purpose of going through the clockworks as you in a sense can just jump down off the edge and reach the end no problem. it may sound stupid but if I mention the power in the story (which i would have to since you mentioned it in the app), the reader would ask the question "Why take the elevator...?". Teleporting is okay...just a short distance I guess.
3. If i like your app (it has depth) but the power is overpowered, ill let you know to edit it. But dont beg me to let your app flow into the story if you even know its OP. Nor do i like it when people beg me to accept an app if they put no effort into it.
Since this is your app, you choose what goes on, and I may be asking for the app, but you are also asking me to accept it, so you have to give a little to get a whole lot.
Thank you, I will PM you any questions i have about your app if needed.
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Name:(obvious)
Gender:(Girl guy, idc)
Age:(put whatever)
Looks:(Height(small, med, tall), personnal color, frame if you want, gear as well but that can be discussed in history if they are special (no super custom gear please, like wolver coat with machine guns attached ;3), and costumes and accessories would be a really nice touch.
History/personality : WHATEVER YOU WANT This can mention powers, their life, what they like, and even special gear. It can mention little pets, familiars, whatever, as long as it isn't too OP from the start. A little weakness adds glamour to a story. Make this part as deep as possible please, it helps make the story more dynamic...and long lasting.
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Critzer wakes up to the buzzing of her door, groaning and punching her bed in discontentment. "I have told you guys not to wake me up like this!" As she gets up, she shivers, heading immediately to the medium sized furnace in the metal room. She snaps her fingers, making a small flame appear in her hand, which she uses this to light the furnace, warming the room. To her, cold is around 92 degrees, the furnace raises it to about 120. She sighs to herself looking around the metal room of confinement, as she begins putting on her garments and such. First her Skolver Coat and Cap, Elite Fast Strike Module and her Heart Pendent. Then comes her favorite costume, a Hallow Tailed Helm with Hallow Glasses, Vertical Vents and a Hallow Fur Coat with Hallow Wings and Bomb Bandoleer. She smiles with glee, doing a single twirl of excitement, the furnace's flame becoming a bit brighter. She heads to the door and knocks on it, only for a flap to open, a pair of green eyes peering in, a wimpish, questioning voice is heard, "Yess...sss..?"
Critzer replies in a sweet voice, "What have I told you about waking me up with that buzzer...? And where is my breakfast...?"
The man's eyes begin to dart from side to side through the viewing square, "Ummm...umm...I forgot...and the stove isn't working...Miss...you'll have to wait a bit..."
Critzer sighs, her aura of flame beginning to show, "I can understand you want me up on time, but I ask you to at least HAVE MY FOOD READY WHEN I DO WAKE UP... and warm.... and delicious.... bring here though..." she replied in an annoyed voice.
The man jumps when she raises her voice, slightly closing the flap to shield himself. Once she finished, he rushes back to the food and brings it to the door and hands it to her through a lower, larger flap in the door. He then quickly closes the two flaps, scuffling away in fear of being burned.
She stands with the pan, holding it out some. She flicks her hand this time, creating a larger blaze and holds it under the pan, heating her breakfast. She notices the camera in the far corner near the roof of the room zooming on her. She sighs again, wondering why she is here, and why she volunteered to live like this. She begins to recall the memories before this day, the days of her past.
Her family was an envious group of people who weren't really good at anything, weren't known for anything, nor did they have a lot of money. They where tired of this state of living. Her parents where hoping to have a boy, but instead they had her, a critical blow to their plan. They named her Critzer, a run off of the word "critical". The only reason they even named her, was because they had to in the facility they where in. Her mother couldn't afford to have another child in the hopes of having a boy, so they decided they'd get a boy by adoption. But this came at a price, so they traded her to a greedy man for his boy. He only wanted a girl because he could put her to work on the streets, begging for money. She grew to the age of 11, her years being miserable and dirty. She was forced by her "father" to lie to other people for money, she did learn a few things on how to get crowns easily, however. But soon she had enough, and ran. She ran and she ran, and she ran, until she found herself on the Skylark at the age of 17. By now, she had joined the Spiral Knights by squeezing through the nooks and crannies of the registration requirements. She had barely been on the Skylark before it crashed down onto Cradle. She, along with many others, escaped in a pod, difference between the others and her is that she landed into a very large amount of Crimsonite, the fire crystal of the Clockworks. The crystals, overcharged with fiery energy, poured a large amount of it into her and the pod, the pod absorbing a majority of it. She survived, gaining a very fiery new crimson personal color and some very intense fire related powers. The only real problem was that she was knocked out for nearly 2 weeks after the Skylark had crashed, due to the Crimsonite. She eventually awoke, the pod still red hot from 2 weeks earlier. She left the pod and headed to where she was told to go.
She arrived to Haven, finding herself broke as usual, tired, and hungry. She was told that she needed to help get to the Core and she did as she was told. She only noticed her new flame powers when she spun around and swung her sword to which her free hand shot a ball of flame into a random direction. She learned how to use these new powers to her advantage and blazed though the levels of the Clockworks, literally. She earned the nickname "Le Flame", as she basically set everything aflame that was in her path. She rose up the ranks extremely fast, mainly by scrounging every bit of crown she could to buy better gear. She soon found herself sitting around doing nothing, until one day she set something... pretty important ablaze and was asked to live in a special metal room; she went in willingly.
She soon falls out of her trance and even jumps up, her breakfast now burnt to a crisp, as the metal door to the room opens. A man in full 5 star gear walks up to her, only saying "Come with me, I have a very special task for you, Le Flame... unless you would like to rot away in here for the rest of your life."
She nods excitedly, grabbing her Magma Driver, Combuster, and Daring Rigadoon, quickly following the man in charge. He takes her to an elevator that she had never seen before. He tells her that she needs to go down, one way or the other. Her only reply is why, but he doesn't answer her, he just pushes her onto the elevator, which begins to head down.
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Hope that was good for yall, and please send in those apps!
Name: Forrower
Gender: Male
Age:17
Looks: Medium to tall height, Sharp features, almost hawk like. Snarbolax armour set, Gran Faust, Sentenza, Sometimes carries a gravitation vortex. Carries a stolen Crest of Almire. Hacked aura. Prismatic wolver tail. Personal colour = Dark grey.
History/personality : He has quite a dark personality but will make a very strong bond if he trusts the person. Can give you a good laugh is he is in a good mood. He is very agile and can scale trees and walls quite easily. His history is mostly unknown but he was born by a loving and caring family and they kept him, but when his father did something that nobody liked they attacked his father. His mother died of a heart attack a few months later. His parents deaths being so abrupt, he ran away to the streets where he could be by himself. After this, Forrower has been an enemy to many. He has a criminal record but he is very sneaky, stealing things with ease. However he does know that this is wrong and has tried to stop this horrible habit but stealing is a must for his survival other wise he will starve. Once he accidentally stumbled across Moor craft Manor. He clumsily managed to do something which summoned Margrel. Margrel fired curse bullets which defected of crystals of darkmatter. There was then a small explosion and when it all cleared. Margrel was gone. The only evidence of it hapening was a curse symbol eteched into his chest and this still remains a scar to this very day. His power is to let out a curse coloured shockwave but this is an extreme risk as he falls seriously ill and will come close to death if he has used this power. He is also able to fire tiny bullets of curse. These small curse missiles have 70% of causing curse. If coming in contact with elemental weapons or attacks he is very vulnerable to these attacks. He can hold the actual elemental weapons but if he is damaged by this then he is very weak. He describes it as "A bright light that shines too bright when I look at it." And "It burns me when I touch it." He can also control this curse coloured energy to make temporary force fields around himself and anothers. However this is mainly temperory because its weak to elemental damage. Its also weak to shock and fire but great against poison, curse and shadow. If the shield is hit it will develop cracks and eventully crumble away. He is also pretty much immune to curse.
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I tried to make the curse thing have a few weaknesses to it but if it's OP then please tell me.