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A Hidden Danger. [Fan-Fiction] The End! Vote for the start of a new fic! Read the last Chapter!
Edo's thingy is true, and Kaiju's wrong.
Anyways..... I have a feeling that Edo will die here? If you're asking if I write this, I'm going to say no. I give this to a friend, who I help post. :P He lives on Mars, so that's why he doesn't understand slang english, and doesn't write well.
The person that lives on Mars is called Topoyozariane. :P
Another chapter from Mars man Topoyozariane / Topoyozada.
@Edolas: Sorry if your character does have any action here. There will be a return to the compound *hint* compound 42 mkII *hint* and try to rescue Rose.
@Skype: You want so many bedtime activities! You write 'em!
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Chapter Eighteen:
One of the six titans knelt, and about twenty Gremlins came out, in helmets, and a armour bearing the symbol of the Crimson order. The unsheathed their weapons simultaneously, bring out their gigantic axe. They stepped forward, just past Theta’s firing range, then barked, “Yield!”
Rose snarled, grabbing her Eclipse, but Kyrie grabbed her arm, halting her. He pointing at Carter, who was unconscious, with Alfred trying to revive him.
Rose threw her weapon on the floor in disgust, and the others mimicked her action. The lead Gremlin smirked, then walked over to her, when she kicked him in the groin. He fell, and Rose charged, yelling, “Theta! Get Carter and get out of here! Warn the Spiral Order!” She summoned Eclipse, slashing through waves of Gremlins. One managed to land a hit on her, it’s axe penetrating her armour. She screamed, then used the butt of her scythe to knock the Gremlin down, then kick at it’s face. While she was distracted, a pair of Crimson order guards advanced, trying to knock her down when she jumped, surprising the guards. Her backflip made her land behind the pair, and she killed them with a burst of Blackhawk fire. She glanced at Theta, they were already at the exit of the factory, approaching the elevator. While she was distracted, a Gremlin slashed at her, making a huge chest wound. She winced, then glared at the Gremlin. She lifted her Blackhawk, aim... and fire, before collapsing on the ground, laying in a pool of her own blood.
“No!” Kyrie yelled, being pulled back by Edo. Alfred was carrying Carter, who was still unconscious. “Let me at those bastards!” He yelled, trying to get free of Edo’s iron grip. He turned, and bit Edo’s arm, but received no response. ‘what in hell?’ He thought, then deactivated his arm blades. He smashed his hand to Edo’s face, causing him to falter and wince, and Kyrie took the chance to run back to Rose, activating his arm blades. Edo chased after him, tackling him before he reached the factory entrance.
“Kyrie..... You’re our Squad Leader now, whether you like it or not. You’re coming with us.”
“Rose is your squad leader! Why didn’t you go and try to save her?” He screamed at Edo, face red with frustration.
“Because Rose ordered us to inform the Spiral Order.” Edo said, pulling Kyrie back, deaf to his pleas.
Kyrie moaned, then slumped, helpless.
Carter and Alfred had reached the Elevator, and began to wave them over urgently. Carter was not doing good. They entered the elevator, and pressed up.
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“Where...... Where am I?” Rose muttered, and tried to sit up. It hurt when she did that, so she quit it.
“Where are you? You’re in a cave.” A familiar voice said, and a figure stepped out of the shadows.
“Fang? What are you doing here?” Rose asked in bewilderment. “Are we dead?”
“No.” Fang chucked, “As for me being here, I’m saving you. I’ve gone renegade.”
“Why? The Spiral Order is good now.” Lying down while speaking was uncomfortable, so Rose attempted to sit up, and succeeded. She sat, propped up by a wall.
“They tried to..... make me stronger, smarter. Better.”
“So? That’s good, isn’t it?” Rose asked.
“Except.... to do that... I would have to give up my memories and emotions.”
“Oh...” Rose said, looking down at the floor.
“I should have taken Hahn up on his offer.... but I kept thinking about you.”
Rose gulped. This was an awkward moment.
“So I escaped.... and then I met you here. I patched you up, but I needed to....” Fang begun to blush.
“Needed to what?” Rose asked, but she already knew the answer. He would have needed to take off her clothes.
“I’m very sorry, alright? I just.... I didn’t want you to die.”
“Oh, it’s okay.” Rose said in a timid voice. Was she really THAT fierce when facing the Gremlins? And so..... soft with Fang and Kyrie?
“Well, I’ll be bringing you to the nearest elevator, then I’ll continue.”
“Where are you going?”
“The core. I hear the other Valkyries are there. I might be able to be accepted by them, if I can’t be accepted by the Spiral Order.”
Rose inched over slowly, then took his hand, “Fang. I need you to return to Haven. Be stronger. Faster. Smarter. It’s alright.”
“It’s not alright!” Fang said, agitated. “I don’t want to forget you.”
“You won’t forget me.” Rose said.
“Yes, I will. They’re going to erase my memory.”
“You won’t forget me. “
“I don’t want to!”
Fang started to say more, but Rose leaned forward, then kissed Fang. Then she pulled back, leaving Fang speechless.
“You are NOT going to forget me.” Rose said firmly. “You are going to remember me, and that kiss.”
“What if I don’t?” Fang asked, like a little boy.
“Then you’ll have to remember this.” Rose threw herself on Fang, then begun to kiss him, hard. So hard, Fang was stunned for a moment, then he grabbed her head, then kissed back.
When they broke apart, there was an awkward silence, broken by Rose, who said, “You have bad breath, Fang. Honestly, do you brush your teeth?”
Fang just stared, then walked to Rose. He leaned forward, his lips brushing hers, then he begun to kiss her forehead, then trailing down to her ear, exploring her earlobe.
Rose’s breath was gone in an instant, and she started to mutter, “Fang... maybe this isn’t such a good ide-” When she was interrupted by Fang, who started to kiss her neck, sucking gently at the skin.
She sighed, then turned to kiss Fang. Do you have feelings for Fang? Rose recalled Kyrie’s question, then answered it mentally, “Yes.”
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Kyrie sat in his room, occasionally glancing at the spot in his bed where Rose was supposed to sleep in, sometimes. ‘She’s dead.’ Kyrie thought miserably. ‘She’s dead and it’s all my fault.’
He sobbed into his pillow, feeling very alone.
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Rose snuggled into Fang’s sleeping bag, with Fang by her side. As she rested her head on his shoulder, he put his arm for her as a pillow, his free arm hugging her close, then wrapping his wings around them, acting as a double layer of blankets. Rose smiled as she slept, feeling very
at home.
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D: What did I do? You want so many bedtime activities!
Good chap, though. And nice guilt-tripping Kyrie :D
Have a feeling people may find out about Edo's Robotics sooner rather than later.
And are Rose & Fang Captured by the Grems? Or did Fang rescue her and take her somewhere safe?
If they WERE captured, those pervy little Grems would have cameras monitoring the place, wouldnt they? ._.
Apparently, any relationship can be broken by the vampire-lick kissing and sucking of the neck. Seems legit.
Anyway, great chapter! XD
Apparently, any relationship can be broken by the vampire-lick kissing and sucking of the neck. Seems legit.
Yeah, that's what I thought at the second I re-read the chapter...
Name: Longsword
Age: 36
Race: Isoran (spiral)
Allegiance: Spiral Order
Bio: Can't think of a bio right now.
Appearance: Wears Skolver set with Barbarous Thorn Shield
Loadout: Wild Hunting Blade, Sudaruska
Personality: Kind to Knights, relentlessly attacks monsters.
Sorry that I haven't posted for a while but you did do very well. +1
Name: CX2-III
Age: Since 10 Years Before the Skylark crashed into cradle
Race: Battle Sprite
Allegiance: Him Self can be convinced other wise
Bio: CX2 is the third of his kind in an attempt in finding the answer to life. His predecessors had failed at this simply because they lacked the ability but they had the intelligence to build one. So they assisted in the construction of a Sprite that could. 9 years later CX2-III finally was finished and they powered him on. A few minutes after checking if he would stay running they had asked him: Whats the answer to life? He responded with a sigh "read that book some human wrote you lazy idiots." They provably shouldn't have given him his own mind of sorts. Confused by this the Technicians locked CX2 in a Iron Lockbox and put him in the Skylark. Later when the Spiral knights started to populate haven some recruit who had stumbled on to that very box unlocked it. Unlucky for him, he lost his key and CX2 gained freedom. Problem was he got stuck in the clockworks. Having no clue where he was he simply wandered waiting for some one to find him.
Appearance: CX2-III looks like and E-Class Battle Sprite Except Jet Black and somewhat bigger
Loadout: Elite Iron Harness
Personality: Having never met other people He's quite shy and Scared of people in general. Although some times he acts quite cynical if he feels like doing so. He also talks to just about any thing mostly walls thought.
I'm sorry if I'm inactive..... got writer's block as stuff.... for anyone who wants to see what I've been working on, check THIS out.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l4M25ORaOYm3EQjp6Uhuf160toGs2eJznfA-...
It's called Hostility, and Skye and Divine read it.......
/e meows.
Hurm... Often I read this again and again in search for something to do. Then last night, my dirty-side-of-the mind took over as I drew some characters. And what I drew, was what Rose's Drakon said. If you read his statement over and over, you might see what I drew.
Nobody commented? posted? (except for Skype, of course.) Alright, I'm very sad, but here's a new chapter. And a new chapter for hostility (For all those who haven't read it, not you Skype.)
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Chapter Nineteen:
Kyrie blinked, then sat up, as sunlight streamed from his open window. “God, fuc* you!” He yelled, right at the window.
“Kyrie, please refrain from swearing.” A familiar voice said.
“Fuc* you, Edo! Fuc* you and your fuc*ing orders!” He yelled, then felt his eyes glaze with tears.
“Kyrie.... It’s time for breakfast. We need you.” Edo said, patiently waiting outside.
“Alright, alright. I’m coming.” He called, his voice muffled by his pillow, then he stands, and dressed into his Ash Tail Coat, and strapped his arm blades. He opened the door to find Edo sitting on the floor, standing up after seeing Kyrie.
“Kyrie. I’m sorry for abandoning Rose..... I’m just following orders.”
“Yeah, it’s okay. I’m sorry I hit you.” Kyrie mumbled, then held out a hand for Edo to shake.
Edo stared at it, then shook it. Edo turned, and walked to the cafeteria, with Kyrie following him, happy that he and Edo finally reconciled after yesterday’s incident.
“Report, Theta.” Feron ordered, sipping from a mug, glancing out the window.
Edo scooped another bite of scrambled eggs into his mouth, then mumbled, “Sir..... We lost...”
“We lost Rose.” Carter finished, glancing at Kyrie.
Rose’s expression was impassive as he bit into a sausage and swallowed.
“I see. Vitals and Beacons located her at Depth 27. We have a soloist going, so you might as well join him. Good luck, Theta.” He glanced up, when he saw Kyrie pelting towards the elevator, with Theta in chase. He sighed, then muttered, “Relationships...”
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“Hey, Rose, wake up.” Rose felt someone shaking her, then she pushed it away. Two strong arms grabbed at her, and made her stand up. “Rose. I got somthing to show you.”
“What?” She snapped, then she realized holding her up was Fang. “Oh, I’m sorry.” She said, her hand touching his cheek.
“It’s okay. You’re always like that when you wake up. Now, c’mon.” Fang said, then he hugged her tightly, extended his wings, and kicked off. They were flying, together, when Fang landed on a tree, the branch creaking slightly.
“Woah.” Rose whispered, looking at the scenery. It was aurora isles, and in front of them was a beautiful garden, along with a few sleeping Chromas and a dormant Tortodrone.
“Yeah..... Look, there’s something I wanted to give you.” Fang said, taking something from his back. It was carefully wrapped.
Rose slowly took the wrapping out, then pulled the dress out. “Fang? It’s beautiful.”
“Not as beautiful as you.” Fang said, then leaned forward and kissed Rose. She relaxed, and put her arms around Fang when she heard a familiar voice say, “Rose?”
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“Rose?” Kyrie said in bewilderment, looking up at two familiar people, kissing as Rose held a dress.
They broke apart, and Rose and Kyrie made eye contact. Kyrie blinked, and his mouth opened and closed like a fish without water.
“Oh, Kyrie.” Rose handed the dress back to Fang, and slid down the tree. She wrapped her arms around Kyrie, stroking his hair. “I missed you....”
Kyrie felt her arms go around him numbly, and he pulled out of her embrace. “Everything you said to me is a lie.” He whispered, looking at Fang. Fang’s stare was blank too. “You like him.... not me. You kissed him, and you got a dress from him. I bet you’re going to wear that when you’re having sex with him, aren’t you.”
“Kyrie..... calm down...” Edo put an arm on Kyrie’s arm, which he shrugged off.
“Kyrie, let me explain.” Rose whispered, her voice fragile.
“You don’t have to bloody explain. You like him, and you don’t like me. Everything you said was a fuc*ing lie!” He yelled brandishing his arm blades.
“I’m so sorry.... I’m so sorry.” Rose whispered, cupping her hands around her nose and mouth, as if trying not to breathe something in.
“No, I’m the one that’s fuc*ing sorry for making you endure me. So there. I’m fuc*ing sorry!” He yelled, his face wet with tears.
Fang slid down the tree, and put an arm on Rose’s shoulder. “Maybe we should leave, let him calm down.”
“I’m calm enough, you failed experiment. Feron told us all about you! You escaped not because you don’t want to lose your memories! It’s because you’re a failed experiment!” Kyrie yelled, being held back by Alfred and Edo, Carter gripping his Gran Faust in case anything went wrong.
“I’M NOT SOME KIND OF EXPERIMENT! I’M A REGULAR ISORAN! NOW YOU SHUT THE FUC* UP, AND CRAWL BACK INTO YOUR STUPID HOLE, YOU POMPOUS FUC*!” Fang yelled, Rose holding his arm in an attempt to stop him.
“HOW DARE YOU! YOU’RE A POMPOUS FUC*, YOU BITC*!” Kyrie flung Alfred and Edo away, swinging a punch at Fang, sending him staggering backwards.
“OH YEAH? LET’S SEE HOW YOU LIKE THIS!”Fang roared, firing at Kyrie with his Polaris, sending Kyrie flying and hitting a tree.
“Hey! Stop it!” Carter said, holding his Gran Faust in front of him.
“Or else what? You’re going to help wolf-boy here fight his battles? Aww.... Carter helping little wolf-cub fight his battles while he drinks milk...” Fang mocked, when Kyrie flung himself at Kyrie, slashing him across the chest.
“GOD FUC* YOU!” Kyrie yelled, as he inserted his Iceburst Brandish into Kyrie’s stomach. Filled with adrenaline, Fang didn’t feel a thing, as he fired point blank into Kyrie’s face, the blast exploding.
Kyrie’s neck snapped back with a sickening CRACK!, and Alfred and Edo ran to him, checking for any injuries.
“I said, enough!” Carter snapped, “Under the orders of Lieutenant Feron, I now arrest you, Fang. Rose Hawthorne, you are coming with us.” With that, he swung his blade, a dark spirit flying towards Fang, making a makeshift cage.
Fang roared, and shot at the cage. It flickered, and disappeared. He yelled, “FUC*ER!” once more, glanced at Rose, his expression softening, then flew away.
Rose was sitting there, sobbing into her hand, not like the person she was when she took down the three titans.
Carter went over to her, and put a hand on her shoulder, “Rose, you’re coming with us. That’s an order. Everything’s going to be alright.”
As Rose was led back onto the elevator, with Alfred and Edo carrying him, she couldn’t but help think, ‘No. Nothing’s going to be alright.’
And I'm sorry.
No applications acceptation. Longsword has two little info, and CX2, maybe you can make it into a knight
That's why there's no bio
Did Fang kill Kyrie? Also, it says 'Kyrie yelled, as he inserted his Iceburst Brandish into Kyrie’s stomach.' And '...when Kyrie flung himself at Kyrie, slashing him across the chest.'
XD
@Dewca - You beat me to the errors. D:
Hey Tops, was the first part... And correct the errors, please, I have a hard time comprehending the last few parts :P
EDIT:
Also, Rose’s expression was impassive as he bit into a sausage and swallowed.
@Playerman - Now that I think about it... Yeah! And he acted like a police, too :3... Although, when I see the username Playerman, my mind reads Carter instead.
To Kaiju, Dewca, and all other apps I'm too lazy to mention:
Basically, this is what my mind processed when both Kyrie and Fang turned madman:
Kyrie and Fang turning madman after being Mr. Niceguys
Rose sounding a little hopeless
Currently, Edo and Alfred does not have any possible Genesis of Aquarion counterparts. :/
Sorry for the edits: Here's what happened:
Kyrie attacked Fang.
Fang did not die, and ran away. (You'll learn about his powers later.)
Rose sounding hopeless, because that's what girls would be, even if they're crazy yanderes.
Carter IS the cop. He's the official new squad leader
New Update?
Comment please.
Schoolwork begun it's toll on me. Between increased Homework Workload, and time for SK, just kept forgetting 'bout Hidden Danger.
A twist in the story, that's what I call it...
Read, enjoy, and comment!
Chapter Twenty:
“Okay, what happened?” Feron asked, pouring a cup of tea into Rose’s cup.
“Well.... I liked Kyrie, but then I like Fang too...” Rose mumbled, sipping her tea.
“No, not your relationship. What happened in the Gremlin Factory.”
“Oh, that.” Rose blushed, then said, “I held off the Gremlins...... Then I fainted. When I woke up, Fang had healed me. Then the squad found me.”
“I see. Kyrie’s in depression right now. Beating up a punching bag.” Feron said, casually, while dropping stirring his tea.
“Where is he?” Rose said, putting down her cup.
“Oh.... Advanced Training Hall, Tier 3....” Feron said, glancing at his computer screen, and turned back to Rose, who was already pelting down the street, shoving people off the sidewalk.
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“God, that [scrapping] [bucket]..... He better die.” Kyrie muttered, as he stabbed at a training bag, then backflipping to stab another. He flung his arm to slash at the ‘CONSTRUCT’ training bag, but then it got stuck. He growled, then detached it, flinging his other arm blade at the training bag. The with a snarl, he begun punching the training bag. he became more agitated as he thought of Rose and Fang’s kiss, and he begun to punch harder, then kick, and was about to bite it when he heard a door open, and Rose stepped in.
“[Scrap] off, you [wheel].” Kyrie snarled, and begun to punch at another training bag.
“You’re bleeding.”
“Yes, and you’re not here.” He said, then pried his hands off Rose’s.
“Kyrie, you have got to stop hurting yourself...”
“And then what? No one cares about me.”
“I care. I like you, a lot, Kyrie.”
“You lied. Everything, a lie!” He bellowed, pushing Rose away.
“He’s really a failed experiment you know. I could tell. One of his abilities was mind-reading. He knew you wanted a dress, so he stole it from Haven. He knows you like him, so he rescued you. He tried to read my mind, but I resisted. It somehow reflected and I read his mind. He won’t die, you know. From my stab. He’s near immortal. He can heal himself.”
“Then why is he a failed experiment? He’s like perfect.” Rose came closer to Kyrie, pulling his arm blades out of the training bag.
“The emotion thing? That’s true. He doesn’t want to give up his emotions. Still likes you.” Kyrie said, pulling the blades from Rose’s grasp. “And just so you know, I changed my squad. I’m in the new Omega squadron.”
“Why did you do that?” Rose asked.
“What did you think? I didn’t want to face you.” Kyrie said, exiting the training hall.
“Hey Kyrie?” Rose said, running after Kyrie.
“Yeah?”
Rose grabbed his shoulder, turned him, and kissed him.
Kyrie grabbed at her head, then kissed back.
When Kyrie pulled away, Rose said breathlessly, “Now we’re even.”
“Yeah.” And with that, Kyrie exited the training hall.
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“Seems to be some kind of disturbance in the Gremlin Factory you just destroyed the Titans in. Recon reports show that they’re making some kind of Roarmulus twins, except portable this time. I’m sending you, Theta, and Omega squadron, to shut down their operation.”
The two squads nodded, then stood on their respective elevators. Both rumbled, and went down. A few minutes after, there was a sudden stop, a SNAP!. The elevator lurched downwards.
“Grab something!” Rose yelled into her comm, both to Omega and Theta. There was a sickening crash, and the two squads were tossed into the air, and came back down.
“God, the cables were cut. Might have been the Gremlin Stalkers.” Carter moaned from his corner. “Leg’s injured.” While Rose came over to check on him, she heard Kyrie’s reply.
“Two dead, me and Primalis are ready to fight. Stand back.”
There was a BOOM! And the door in front of Theta opened, with Kyrie holding it. “Come in.” He grunted, and Theta climbed onto land.
“Alright, we got casualties, but we’re here. I say we go on, and beat the crap outta the Grems.” Kyrie punched a fist into his waiting hand.
“I say, we bury the bodies, then fight.” Rose said, “They’re Spirals, after all.”
“Well, I’m the squad leader in Omega, and I say fight. Bye!” Kyrie was off in an instance, with Primalis running after him.
“Alfred, follow them. Keep in comm distance. Edo, help me with Carter. We get a Crystal Energy bandage on it, and it’ll be fine.”
“Alright.” Alfred grunted, grabbed his guns, and ran after them.
Alfred followed them, then arrived at a factory, with sign markings, ‘TOP SECRET.’
“Stupid of them to write that.” Kyrie laughed, and slipped inside. What he saw, shocked, and disturbed him.
It was a machine, churning these black creatures out, the ones they encountered before, the Swarmettes. And sitting next to the Gremlin in charge, sipping tea, was....... “Fang? What the [scrap]!”
Asking for some is a straight-forward way.
But with regards to the story.
I kind of had suspicions of Fang working with the Grems.
The technical advantages he got seemed a bit out of reach for just the Spiral Order.
And Carter is getting injured again.
Feels like everything is back to normal :3
Who do you think? Rose loves fang more, or kyrie? Your votes makes a difference to the ending!
Honestly, I can't have an answer to that.
Because if I pick Fang, then -- [I Want Mah Wrench] -- will have a different ending, Kyrie having-- Spoilers for Topo!
And if I pick Kyrie, then Fang would probably rip Kyrie's life into shreds, taking into account the fact that he's practically immortal. AND that he snapped Kyrie's neck with a point blank Polaris bullet. :/
Plot Twist: She loved Feron all along!
But no, I want it to be corny and have Kyrie win her feelings over.
...Or Fang. But he is in-line with the Gremlins...
But then again Kyrie tried to bite my OC's arm...
But that was to save Rose...
But Fang's dress for Rose did look "divine".
Hmm...
Im saying Feron actually. He seems the less hassle.
Part of me doesn't like Fang because he's 6 years older than Rose, but that's only like 25% of it. 75% is because of the dress and mutual attraction.
Part of me doesn't like Kyrie because well... He bit Edo's arm and he kept beating himself up, thereby guilt-tripping me... :/ Kyrie, are you betraying me, your creator?!
NOOOO!!! FANG! YOU BETRAYED ME!!! I SHALL DEMOLISH YOU!!!
(Swatts Fang like a fly)
Maybe Fang lost his thoughts and emotions and Kyrie manages to die from Fangs actions and then Fang remembers his past life and commits suicide and Rose goes with Carter or something?
What Dew said, "Rose goes with Carter," I automatically remembered A Doomed Skylark. Carter Hawthorne, huh?
To answer all these questions,
1) No. Not Carter Hawthorne. Not Rose's brother in another dimension.
2) Fang commits suicide? That is what I planned. Kyrie? He SHOULD die.
Okay, now I'll reply.
1. Good.
2. (Excuse me, I yelled out AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA when I read that.) >u< >n<
Chapter Twenty One:
“Well well well.... if it isn’t my favourite person. Kyrie.” Fang sneered, and raised his hand. Immediately, Kyrie was raised up to the air, choking.
“Wondering how I got this power? I let the Swarm inside me.” Fang smirked, and flung Kyrie away, into a crumpled heap.
“Stop it.” Primalis ordered, raising his Leviathan blade, and swung it down at Fang. Fang dodged, jumped and with one sweep of his Fang of Vog, set Primalis aflame.
Primalis yelped, and dropped to the ground, trying to extinguish the fire.
“Fang, I’m sorry, but this has to end.” Alfred raised his guns, and fired. The bullets slammed into Fang, and bounced back, smashing into Alfred, making Alfred fly into the air.
“Fang?” A feminine voice appeared, and Rose’s head popped into the room. “What in the?”
Fang beckoned to her with two fingers, and Edo, Rose and Carter was suspended in mid-air. “Theta squad. All demolished with one of my hands.....” Fang purred, walking right into Rose’s face. “Or..... I could let them all go, if one of you stays...” He raised a hand to Rose’s chin, and Rose jerked it away.
“Fang. Let us go.” She ordered, her voice quivering.
Fang closed his eyes for a moment, read Rose's mind, then grinned, “Really? You want to do that?” Fang asked in mock amazement.
Rose blushed, then tried to kick at him, “LET US GO!”
“Now now.... don’t get angry.” Fang smiled, then circled Rose, his hands touching a small on her back, then tracing down to her butt.
Rose blinked, then kicked at Fang.
“Rose. Kicking is wrong.” Fang tutted, grinning at Rose’s chest. “How ‘bout we just do the kicking in bed?”
“LET US GO!”
“Well, if you put it that way.” Fang raised his hand, and Edo floated to him. “I might even let him go to heaven.” He pushed a blade into Edo, and let him spontaneously combust.
“No!” Rose cried, resisting. She kicked Fang, which sent him staggering, his concentration wavering.
“Attack!” Carter yelled, and leapt into action, despite his bad leg. He swung his blade, and a dark spirit crashed into Fang.
Kyrie jumped to his feet, then clawed at Fang’s face, while Alfred shot bullet after bullet into him. Suddenly, the air around Fang exploded, sending everyone flying. Alfred flew right into a wall, his neck making an awful cracking noise.
“Alfred!” Rose cried, then threw Eclipse at Fang. It connected, then stuck in his chest.
Snarling, Fang shot a bolt of dark energy at Rose, who dodged it easily. Rose lunged, grabbed Eclipse, and swung. She missed, and Fang took this advantage to shoot a dark bolt of energy at her, sending her flying.
Fang got to his feet, smiling triumphantly, until he saw Rose’s chest move slightly, then stop completely. Alarmed, he scrambled to her, then pulled her head to him, “Rose... please, I’m sorry! Don’t die!”
What Fang didn’t know, was that she was pretending. Smashing her head into Fang’s nose, she swung her scythe again. It hit Fang, and sent him flying. Fang got to his feet, snarling when Kyrie leapt onto him, slashing at everything he saw.
Fang grabbed his sword, and parried his blows. Sending a powerful push, Kyrie stumbled, to which Fang stabbed his sword, straight for his heart.
It connected, and melted the armour and the flesh. Primalis blinked, then looked down to his chest. He had jumped at the last second, saving Kyrie. He blinked once more, and fell.
“God fuc* you!” Kyrie yelled, hitting Fang. Fang staggered back, then grabbed something from his belt. It was some sort of bomb, and it started ticking once it met Fang’s hand.
“No one leaves here, ALIVE.” Fang snarled, “Either one stays, or all of you die.”
Kyrie absorbed the words, then pushed one of his arm blades to Rose. “Go. Bring Carter, and anyone surviving. I’ll stay.”
“No.” Rose protested, pushing his arm blade to him.
“Compromise. I’ll stay.” Carter muttered, staggering to them.
“NO.” The couple said.
“Fine. I’ll stay, and escape at the last moment. It’s the only chance we got.” Kyrie said, pushing his arm blade back to Rose. “Promise me you’ll be safe.”
“Promise.” Rose mumbled, and kissed Kyrie.
“Ugh. This is making me sick.” Fang smirked, and jumped Kyrie. Kyrie parried, and pushed Rose away.
Rose walked first, then ran. Carter followed her, staggering.
“Let’s finish this.” Fang said, unsheathing his Fang of Vog.
“Yes. Let’s finish this.” And with this, Kyrie threw his arm blade, right into Fang’s bomb.
A deafening BOOM! rocked the factory, sending Rose and Carter flying. Debris flew around them. Rose felt tears threaten to slip, and she turned her head to wipe them. Carter noticed it, then hugged her. “It’ll be alright, Rose. It’ll be alright.”
At least let Kyrie and Fang crawl out he wreakage and have some last words?
SPECULATIONS:
What if Kyrie and Fang are actually brothers separated at birth; Fang was born as a pure human/Isoran earlier and Kyrie as a feral/hybrid later? Fang was experimented on and became a Valkyrie, while Kyrie was left to fend for himself. Then, they fall in love with the same woman, and in the end, they regain their memories of being brothers:
Kyrie yelled at Fang, both of them beaten up, "Why are you doing this, Fang?! Don't you have anyone else you care for?! Brothers, sisters?!"
Fang, his face suddenly in pain as Kyrie mentioned 'brothers', said, "I... I remember having one... brother... But who cares about him?! All I care about is Rose, only her! She... understands me... So you won't get in the way!" Suddenly, Fang was veiled by a black aura, and dashed at Kyrie.
Kyrie prepared to parry, and as they clash, Kyrie retorted, "I had an older one-- I don't know where he is, much less who he is, but... He's one of the reasons besides Rose why I have to stay alive!" With his statement, Kyrie was enveloped by a purplish-red aura and they continued clashing.
"Shut up! SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP!" Fang persisted, slashing with his Fang of Vog.
"Faaaaaaaang!" Kyrie yelled, and as Fang was about to pounce at him, he stabbed Fang with his arm-Glacius. Quick to react, Fang slid his Fang of Vog into Kyrie, surprisingly, neither of them were THAT hurt about it.
Just then, a vision appeared into both their minds, connecting them.
"What..." both of them said. Flashing in and out were younger versions of Fang and Kyrie, Fang left by Kyrie's parents, and Kyrie left by Fang's.
"That's..." they said again in union, "Mom... and Dad!"
As they realize this, they faint, and were dug out by Theta.
(OOC: Dewca, continue?)
Wow... I... *sniff* thats... thats... *sniff sniff* (cries) heartbreaking...
Fang awoke strapped to a bed. Bright neon lights struck his eyes and he winced as the brightness struck him. He turned his head and saw Kyrie... His brother... "Kyrie!" He was answered by silence. "Kyrie!" He hesitated before saying the words, "Brother!" He watched Kyrie's eyes flickered but Kyrie was still unresponsive. Fang sighed and looked around at his surroundings. It seemed familiar..."Oh no, no no no no NO!" This was it. The lab, his lab. The lab where he was experimented on, almost tortured. He whispered "No..." before nodding of into dreams of a mother and father... and a brother
The speculations were born from my bored-of-JK-runs mind... :P
Anyways, I'll try to continue...
Ugh... My head feels like it's been barraged with a bunch of bricks... First things first... Open my eyes.
Kyrie's eyes fly wide open, and he mumbles loudly, "Fang!..." Trying to move his arms and legs to no avail.
Crap... Where am I?
Pretty short, but I'm stripped of time.
Welp.
My OC went Boom.
Never understood what his Primary Function was...which is good in a way.
Died Oblivious. And shocked probably.
Also I dont think anyone found out he was a Robot. Not even him ._.
Oh sh*t. Knowing Rose, I'd say this is the time for some kill-everything-in-sight yandere rage.... Just saying. And... Damn, that love triangle >.> You've managed to turn me against my own character, dammit, Top! Never thought Yanderes could be sluts....
@Sky: huh... That actually looks like rose... But she has black hair with streaks of red.
@Kaiju Say that again, she will now look like this.
EDIT:
Kaiju, if you knew about my spin-off starting from Chapter 19... Then the ending would make you think she is. And... The two of us(me and Dewca) feel the same :P
1) Yes, Kaiju. I did use your character against you. Don't worry, she'll be a pysco in the next and last chapter. Don't worry! There's going to be a sequel! Worry! It's school. It'll take some time.
2) Skype... you used a picture from big time rush... xD
You have a swear word in post #188. I'd suggest altering it somehow.
@Kaiju
When I saw the Titans and them being Techological War Machines, I thought of these things:
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-_CXBYnYO0a8/ULuz7SgMhtI/AAAAAAAAAr4/vmuSxXTjS5...
But for the latest Chapter, with all these Gremlins & Advanced tech around, There may be some Edo Moments.
It doesnt look good for the squad though. Cant wait to see how they get out of this situation (If they do at all).
Also can Carter stay unharmed for 5 mins?! >.<
I have a feeling that wont happen ._.