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Here comes Chapter 7...another major fail, I always fail when I write about Nick and Lance and the stuffies around them. Though I love playing LD I can't write LD well lol. Can't really find a nice song for this Chapter so Imma just post some randomness. Now follow the story of Nicholas as he struggles to reclaim his epicness from his non-bawssly failure mode.
Note: I am not affiliated with The Jempire in anyway (not a member, sponsor (lol?), hater, 21er, etc), I just find the guild amusing and worth adding to the story...if there are indeed guilds in Haven, which would be better than The Jempire?
Song: Evening Star
Part 2: Pale the Twinkling Stardome
Chapter 7
“Try harder.”
Lance didn’t use his boost to the limit; only a slight trickle of fume was ejected from the his back. He was still able to dodge his sparring partner’s shots casually despite at half-speed.
His motion was a combination of zig-zag sidewalk and insignificant , forward boosts. To let Nicholas practise with his aiming, he intentionally decreased his velocity and allowed him more time to fire and maneuver.
“Stop speaking. I am already trying hard.” Nicholas shouted as he fired more shots, but most were unable hit its target. The occasional on-target shot was easily interrupted by Lance’s impeccably accurate Flourish; they exploded into beautiful bouquets of blooming lilies, illuminating Lance’s silver hair.
“Apparently not hard enough.” Lance’s body edged closer; fifteen metres; twelve metres...always a bit farther than how much Nicholas moved back. As he closed in he felt the pressure increase drastically---but still manageable.
Nicholas gritted his teeth and aimed exclusively at his opponent’s head and chest. “Why don’t you stop talking then?”
“Because I can. And you can’t.” Lance accelerated, turning into a hazy shadow; he listened calmly to the sound of ripping gusts and the bullets that whisked harmlessly beyond.
Suddenly, Nicholas grinned mischievously. The next moment, Lance’s back exploded.
What? Glancing back briefly, Lance realised where that shot came from. A teammate of his sat dizzily on the ground, concussed by what is likely to be an Umbra bullet.
“Nice ricochet. I’ll never get used to these guns.” without letting Nicholas respond to his compliment, he pounced. Nicholas’ guns fired in succession, each shot more exact than the last; at such closeness reaction was impossible.
Lance blocked the shots, his sword a blur dazzling mirages of motion. A few did cross his flashing barrier and imploded into purple-and-cyan flashes on his snowy Skolver coat, but that affected nothing.
“If you let someone get in so close to you, you are already dead.”
With ease he butchered the overwhelmingly amazed Nicholas. Before his lowering level of vision the gleaming tip of his blade moved nimbly; a gesture only the falling Nicholas could make out.
Trigger and muzzle. It said. I didn’t need to guess.
“Oh I see…” Nicholas mumbled as he levitated back to the locker room.
Twenty seconds later he dashed out, fully energised. He felt himself making progress---he surely was. Two gunners intercepted on his way to Lance. Dodging agilely between the swarm of aggression---which could be legitimately classified as “spam”, he had their heads bursted open in ten seconds.
Great. I have my accuracy back.
Yesterday was another painful day of endless torment; his failed miserably. Today was much better.
I still can’t match Lance. But at least I can take the others easily.
He met Lance, then busy disposing Nicholas’ less potent teammates. And they sparred. Once again his shots failed to halt Lance’s progression, but this time he resisted for a few moments more; only coupling his fingers round the trigger at the last impulse, he landed a few more shots. That didn’t alter the ending, though. His energy was always wasted with a bright sunglow at his throat.
Another match had ended. Though Lance didn’t actually play seriously, his result was still amazing.
“Lance. 0 capture. 25 kills. 0 death. Longest killstreak: 25”
Nicholas could only be finicky on his overpowered friend that he never bothered to capture; but he knew that in his recognition, captures weren’t important at all---did he have that concept at all?
Sighing, he looked at his own results.
“Nicholas. 6 captures. 12 kills. 5 deaths. Longest killstreak: 4”
Not bad for a player. Nicholas had to however remind himself that he scored none of the kills from his friend. And all five deaths he received from him.
Lance had quit after the game. According to Nicholas, his reason for leaving so early was to “have lunch and stay calm so I won’t look strange in front of your Senator whatsoever.”
Nicholas knew it was another thing; Lance could stay calm in the most extreme of conditions. Lance left early with another purpose---to leave the Lockdown to him, and him alone. Nicholas was uncertain if he could grow as quick without his mentor.
What did Lance mean?
Lance stood before the Senate. A white marble glamour, the speckled, pristine surface suggesting a serenity that strived for the highest of virtues, masking the unevinced vices of rife turbulence. Gigantic pillars in Greek style---what did they support?
Armed guards appeared, signalling him to remove any aggressive belongings, which he did unwillingly. Escorted to the reception, Lance voiced his name to the old, wrinkled man in a ruffed suit; determining by his modest outlook and lack of exquisite garment, his countenance contorted into a malignant mask of derision.
Lance took a lift, a lavishly adorned cube with a chilling temperature. He got out on the third floor; the corridor was an endless column of locked doors, a grand display of all species of wood, metal and unidentified textures acquirable on Cradle. Most of the doors were locked---it seemed that the noble Senators didn’t want to be disturbed in their privacy.
One by one he passed, until he reached the venue of his appointment: the office of Senator Thesus. He knocked on the door. When there was no reply, he knocked again.
The door was opened, not by the Senator, but by his guard. The Senator sat in his great chair, embraced on all sides by the dark leather fabric. His look glared with annoyance---he was waiting for another person. He said tersely, in a rather briskly tone, “Who are you? What are you doing here?”
Lance didn’t feel too angry at the impoliteness of the Senator; even if he was infuriated, he would have to wait until after the meeting to vent his anger. When he began, he spoke as quickly and shortly as he could.
“Greetings, honourable Senator.” he saw the fat, bald man’s posture straighten significantly with the word “honourable”. “I am Lance. There is important subjects I need to inform the Order of.”
“So you are Lance? I heard of you recently; Nicholas told me you are an excellent Lockdown player.” Thesus’ eyes narrowed, shining in curiousity. “What business you have here?”
“I need a meeting with the current Master of the Spiral Order.”
“Who do you think you are, requesting a meeting with the highest figure in the entire Haven?”
“Sir, this is of vital importance. I guarantee with the honour of a Striker.”
“Striker. Do you mean Striker?” Thesus’ tone rose considerably.
“I do.”
“Show me.”
Obliged, Lance removed the silver ring and placed it on the Senator’s expansive table. Grabbing it with his fat, plump fingers, the Senator studied it, squinting.
“Very good. Very good.” he said, rather absently, as he typed on the keyboard. “Wait for a few moments.”
This isn’t very right. Lance never expected such “positive” reactions from him. Now he could only wait.
Footsteps were heard at the corridor. Could it possibly be the Master, or his secretary whatsoever? Not likely. There were multiple sets of steps going on.
After a knock they entered. Not the Master or anyone related to him, but a trio of Knights dressed in cobalt armour, each with an authentic firearm---a Valiance, the finest upgrade of the standard blaster; a sharp steel blade, a shortened bayonet, was attached to its body. Their gazes burned into Lance’s body with much hostility.
“Guards! Get him!” the fat Senator bellowed, the buttons of his suit nearly busting open.
Lance spun round; the strangers involuntarily stepped back under his transfixing gaze; even so, they held their weapons firm, ready to fire.
“Strikers. You betrayed us once. Now what are you here for? Meddling with Haven? Planning to assassinate the Grand Master? Bringing again the Apocalypse?”
Lance stood firmly, wordlessly; the noisy insults sheared his back like razors. He tried his best to ignore the grave hostility in the maddening Senator’s accusation, knowing that in such a scenario any defence would only add fuel into his already blazing fire.
The Knights stared. He stared back. He was more agile and dexterous, but what? Not worth feeding his skin and flesh to the cold metal of theirs. He could surprise the Senator and overpower him; that wouldn’t solve anything, either. The shredding bullets would bite into his exposed back on his way.
The door creaked close, slamming against its brown wooden frame, thumping. Lance’s heart thumped with it. The Senator continued to bellow like an inflated music box, “Put your hands up, and my guards won’t fire. Go to hell if you don’t!”
Lance had no intention to surrender. He could stay cool and placid, but admitting defeat without a fight...he was too proud for that.
Besides, he was curious. He wanted to know: the commoner’s amnesia, the politician’s disdain---why?
He wanted to clarify.
The door wheeled open. In came a gentleman, considerably younger and lighter than the obese Senator; he had on him a casual T-shirt and navy blue jeans, his hands stuck nonchalantly in its pockets; apparently he opened the door with his foot. His hair was a bright red---dyed, Lance realised, as he spotted the natural flaxen hue at its roots. He smiled enigmatically.
Lance had expected the Senator to enrage at the newcomer’s disrespectful appearance and intrusion, which however didn’t happen. A moment of dismay crossed his fat, oily face, but he soon composed himself into a reluctant smile.
“Mister Rubius, may I help you?” the respect in his tone was extremely loathing; it was respect nonetheless.
“I guess I can help myself…” the stranger called Rubius scratched his unnatural hair offhandedly, “I am looking for my friend, do you know where he is?”
If Thesus was a hundred pounds lighter, he would have rose and gave the stranger a welcoming smack on his face.
“Ah, here you are.” feigning delight, he stepped across the guards to Lance’s side. “Lance, I have been looking for you; we still got things to discuss.”
As the stranger came close Lance could detect his true demeanour: veiled under his artificial informality was something more substantial; it was power, the ability to generate the power, and the strength to utilise his power.
What is inside you?
Rubius looked back, his message hardly decipherable. And what is inside you, Lance?
Thesus was furious beyond description. His whiskers, long and artfully trimmed, were literally blowing. “Leave that person to me. I am in charge here!”
Rubius’ gaze was taunting, as if saying: are you? He grabbed Lance’s arm amiably and shoved him through the guards. “Wait for me at my lounge; it’s at the end of the corridor. Tell the server to fetch you a drink and wait, we’ll discuss our deal later.”
“Senator, let’s chill and sit down? I believe we still have a deal to make.” he smiled confidently.
Lance entered the ready room in a bustle of hurry. Nicholas sat on a couch, finishing a carton of blueberry milk, commenting to his teammates that it tasted more like narcotics.
“Nicholas.”
“Yeah, Lance? How’s the meeting going?”
“Nicholas.”
“Yes?” Lance’s voice was terse on an unprecedented level. Nicholas realised something was wrong. “Did the meeting go wrong? What happened?”
Lance walked out of the waiting room. Nicholas rose and quickly followed. Once they were in the lobby Nicholas asked, “Lance, what’s wrong? You don’t look very content about the meeting.”
Lance remained silent. Was it time to reveal Nicholas the secret? “Nicholas, we need to talk.”
“Okay, let’s talk here?” Nicholas still couldn’t fully identify the severity of the event.
“I need a place private and safe from hearing. What I am telling you...I know it’s bizarre for you, you might not believe it. But trust me and what I’ll say.”
Nicholas nodded, his head buzzing with anticipation. From day one he knew that Lance was linked to some kind of secret. Finally, it would be revealed. “If you want a safe place to chat…” he grinned, “there’s a place I know. Now hop onto my bike.”
The bike traversed the narrow alleys and lanes of Haven with amazing agility. From the bustling, glamourous city centre they set out, towards the downtown area; neatly organised street lamps gave way to blazing neon lights suspended criss-crossedly off its unpolished, stained walls; the cleanly swept floor replaced by concrete slabs strewn with broken bottles, remains of cigarettes, and a sundry of assorted garbage.
“Nicholas...is it my perception that’s wrong or is this whole place wrong? It doesn’t seem particularly safe and secure here.”
Nicholas checked his watch: it was a minute to six. “Wait for a minute.”
The long hand of the watch ticked, its pace regular and unhasting. Sweeping a slow, sporadic cycle along its rim, it finally connected with the short hand in a straight line.
The ground rumbled.
Lance gasped, “What is…” he couldn’t finish his line as a disconcerted harangue of heavy music inundated the streets; bass drums, louder and scarier than earthquakes, rammed the walls and concrete; the deadly dubsteps, causing disorder in one’s heartbeat, rattled the unstable neon signs; the sour screeching of electric guitars, violins and what-so-evers abraded brutally Lance and Nicholas’ eardrums.
“Welcome to the world of steampunk.”
“What?” Lance roared against the preceding tide of noise. “I can’t hear.”
Nicholas roared against his friend’s ear, “I mean this place is so damned noisy you can’t even hear what I say from a meter away!”
“What?” Lance bellowed, feeling his breath drawn away from his lung into a great pulse of sound, “I still can’t hear.”
“I mean if you can’t hear what I say from a meter away then why bother those eavesdroppers ten times the distance?”
Nicholas wanted to slap his face when he saw the fateful resignation on his companion’s face. He should have told him before this. “Fine, let’s just get in.” he started walking, waving for the dazzled Lance to follow.
They entered a cellar. Nicholas closed the door behind, and instantly the music dimmed. The place was dimly lit with white ornaments placed casually everywhere; Lance took a closer look and discovered that those were bones.
“Evening, Nicholas. You brought a friend here?” the bartender, a guy with a biker jacket and jeans, asked amusingly.
“Yeah. May I introduce Lance, whom I met in Lockdown.”
“Queer. I thought if you’re going to bring someone here, it would be a hot blond babe...never knew you had such interests.”
Nicholas slapped the bartender playfully, “Mankey, stop talking nonsense. That guy is serious---he’ll have his sword skewer your throat.”
“Fine…” the Mankey person mumbled, “Do you want a drink?”
“Of course. And music.”
Nicholas brought Lance over to a plush sofa at the corner. “Want a drink?”
Lance looked cautiously at the glass of bubbling, milky-white liquid, “Is that milk?”
“I have to regretfully inform you that this isn’t carbonated milk. Rather, this is my favourite drink...volcanic pepper’d frost gel with unstable core and nightshades. Refreshing and beats the **** out of you.”
“I think I’ll have some water.” Lance grumbled. This world was really not for him.
“Fine then. We’re not here for a drink anyway.” he turned to Mankey, “Mankey! More music!”
The song was a “Beach Parade” performed by a Haven-acclaimed string orchestra. “You know, you are literally guaranteeing that my number of customers would remain at single-digit level this evening.”
“Never mind that, you won’t die with a night less of income,” Nicholas paused and chuckled wickedly, “Or should I say you’ll go on better with a night less of deficit?”
“Nicholas, forgive my annoyance, but I must state it again: What I am telling you is strange and bizarre for you. It is reasonable for you question and not believe. However...you got to know that this is all true.”
“Good. Now explain what your secret is.” Nicholas was intrigued.
“I am a Striker.”
“Striker? Never heard of that term…”
“For decades my predecessors have fought underground, below your beautiful city and the surface of the planet. We strove to subdue a darkness, a great danger to all that resides on Cradle. For years we have...no, not succeeded; we are merely able to keep it at bay.”
Wow. This is beyond my wildest guess.
“If that’s so, why do you need to come up? Just continue your business and everything will be alright?” Nicholas tested, but in fact, the reason was so obvious that he could nearly guess it.
“The darkness has risen. I don’t know its wrath in truth, but I did hear from my teachers that...what we have been combatting is merely a wisp of its former strength.”
This is like a story.
“It was two years ago, when the attacks grew frequent and strong. Since then, we have been retreating---there isn’t enough of us to oppose its might. From Depth 28 we have gone up three Depths; we are now at Depth 25.”
“I don’t understand here. Three Depths in two years. That means like sixteen or seventeen years until it reaches Haven, according to this scale, right? Why do you need to inform us so early?”
“Depth 28 took a little more than a year for them to conquer. Depth 27 six months and a week. Depth 26 took a month and a half. Depth 25...I don’t know yet. The darkness...it is getting stronger with each fleeting moment.”
Nicholas found it hard to believe. If it is indeed true…
“How did the Senator react when you briefed him on this?”
“I never had a chance. In fact, he called his guards once I told him I’m a striker.”
“How did you get away?”
“A stranger named Rubius appeared; it seems that he has great power. He was able to wrest me away from the angry Senator.”
“Rubius?” Nicholas was truly appalled. “What business do you have with that guy? He’s the Guild Master of the greatest guild in Haven! What would he want to do with some stranger like you…”
“Nicholas, I am sorry. Now the Senator will suspect you and I don’t know what else will happen. However, I need your help.”
“Help? What can one like me do to help?” Nicholas joked, “I can’t just go down and smack some darkness with you; I’m not good enough.”
“Nicholas, why do you underestimate yourself? I have been to Lockdown for days; you are one of the few that I see potential in you to further develop. Besides, you possess a lot more, things that I am not good at and knowledge I failed to perceive.”
Nicholas felt oddly touched; did Lance genuinely praise him, or was this sweet talk to lure him into a bigger trap? Could he believe Lance? They had only know each other for days, after all.
“I don’t trust people; inanimate objects are more trustworthy.” he remembered what his old friend Septre had said one night when he was forging another sword.
But then, Nicholas felt he could trust his new friend. He recalled the assurance to have him on his team, and how he spoke frankly, never exaggerating or adorning his speech. This man has integrity. Besides...it was something he secretly hoped for, out of his routined life---Lockdown sometimes couldn’t appeal to him.
“Right. What do I have to do?”
Instead of answering, Lance hushed.
“Lance...what have you done?” the people that entered the door were not normal customers---they were the Senator’s personal hitmen.
“Guess he really want us gone for good.” Lance shrugged.
“These are my lads, they’ll supervise you painting.” the Senator’s proud snarl, from their first encounter when he barged into his shed with his hitmen, “requesting” him to paint a picture, was still clear in his head.
They were extremely eye-catching people; they would catch your sight with their spiked mohawks, then catch your limbs with their steel-gloved fingers, then catch your soul with the fun-looking but plainly lethal guns they carry.
There were four of them. The leader chewed a sorry stub of an expensive cigarette, presumably a special flavour of chewing gum. He held a minigun in his hand; his poor underdogs held the power supply and ammunitions. Nicholas knew it was a basic, prototypical model only capable of 300 shots a minute; but then, they had only two targets, each requiring only a bullet to kill.
Curse. I shouldn’t have come here. Now they could just kill we three here and disguise it as an unfortunate bar fight…
“Lance,” he hissed anxiously, “Can you defeat them?”
“I am afraid not. The distance between is too far; without my booster I’ll need about two seconds to reach them; how many bullets can they fire in two seconds?”
“Ten…”
“And by two seconds I am assuming the shortest path. Which makes me a walking target.” pausing briefly, he resumed, “With my boost I may be able to defeat them...I could surprise and overwhelm them before they fire enough shots to kill me.”
Lance’s tone was complex. Was he afraid? Scared, haunted by death? Nicholas didn’t think so. But there was a bitterness presiding his calm oration; suddenly, Nicholas knew: he hated to admit defeat.
He hated to admit his swords inferior.
“Nicholas. You got guns. Can you take them?” there was a reluctance in his voice.
Nicholas’ arm moved conveniently to his twin Alchemers, hung at his waist. “No, I can’t do this…” he whispered, “they are Lockdown models, once disconnected their energy depletes quickly. Besides...the bullets are slower; they’ll get us before I get them.”
“You do know you only need to fire one shot, right? Take out that gun and the rest I’ll manage.”
Quickly, he calculated in his mind: he could maximise the energy level on his Umbra Driver to produce a faster and powerful bullet; he could take the minigun out before it was fired. However, this also implied that he could only fire once.
Could he do it?
His fingers clutched the handle, he pulled the gun out---
He was afraid.
What if he didn’t hit? What if he really missed and the angered hitmen fired?
“Sorry to say that this is not Lockdown. There’s no second try if you fail. Are you still going to fire?” Lance said, his calmness undisturbed by the emergency before him.
Am I still going to fire? Nicholas knew there was only one answer. From the beginning, there was nothing else he could have done.
Accuracy, reaction, interpretation of situation; he could fail none of these. On the battlefield, there’s no second chance; nor was there any now.
Hush. Nicholas took multiple breaths before coiling his fingers round the trigger. He felt his heartbeat double; adrenaline secretion tripled. Time decelerated to one-tenth its velocity.
With a swivel the Driver popped into his hand. In a split second he took aim, pulled the trigger, and fired. The bullet escaped his gun, an uncertain glob of chaos. Dread possessed his soul---what if he really missed?
He only exhaled when the explosive fragments of the minigun scratched his temple.
“There is no second chance.” was that what Lance meant? How he sworded…
The hitmen struggled to retrieve their pistols. No chance. In two seconds---not one millisecond more---Lance was on them, his rapier having drawn a glistening, diamond line across the cloudy, brimstone-hued smoke.
The smoke dissipated in the booming, screeching music. Nicholas stammered as he saw the scene, “Lance. You killed them.”
Lance returned a guiltless shrug. What else could I have done?
“Why not just disarm them? Knock them unconscious?”
He was even more shocked when he saw Lance’s expressions. It was one of surprise, confusion and awkward realisation. He didn’t speak, but Nicholas could read.
He sighed, “Maybe you did the right thing; its either we or them. But answer me, Lance: Are you always like this?”
Silence loomed. Finally, Lance answered, albeit with much difficulty, “When I was down there, all I do was to kill; I had no difficulty killing those beasts, though I knew they are living and thinking as I do. But I am a Striker. Between I and the beasts there was no such thing as peace---not even a precariously thin line of stability and equality. I had to resist them, to destroy everything that comes at me---if I didn’t kill them, they’d kill me. In my world, there was nothing as second chance---I saw too many die before me, and I had many a person distinguished; these four were nowhere near the first person I had killed.”
“I’ve realised after my first kill: Those who killed also deserved to be killed, despite your motives. You haven’t killed anyone, despite all the years in Lockdown, right?”
Lockdown is but a spectacular game.
“The day we first met...the thrust you made at my throat...what were you thinking?”
“You were lucky.”
And the bar descended into silence.
“So Striker it is.” the man with flaming hair and T-shirt mused as he finished another cookie, “don’t think that I’ll miss anything…”
In a provocative action he licked the cookie crumbs off his lips. Savouring its condensed chocolate fragrance, he commented proudly, “My cookies are always the best.”
Of course. His assistants, deputies and officers all agreed in tacitness; who else in Haven would bake cookies with Crystal Energy?
“So…” Rubius grabbed another chocolate chip cookie from the voluminous china flask, sank happily into his chair, and said, “Laxius, please organise for me a professional computer team. I need to hack into the Order’s database.”
“Sure. In a minute please.” Laxius took out his phone and started calling; he never questioned his boss---Rubius was past that sanity level to explain his intentions. “Here, what are you searching?”
“Tell them to search for anything about the term Striker. There will be multiple layers of password and blockades, just crack them anyway.”
“Rubius, how do you know?”
“Well,” Rubius scratched his chin, somehow embarrassed, “I tried to access the database today. When I checked it said access denied and I needed to enter a password...I entered ‘1234’ and it let me pass to the next set of password, which I entered ‘1234’, and then to the next level of password...which went on for several times before the system told me that the technicians were busy updating the passwords.”
“Okay, boss, just wait for a few minutes, we’ll have all the information you need.” Laxius assured.
Three minutes later. Laxius let out a small curse, and regretfully informed Rubius, “Dang, boss, we cannot acquire the information you need.”
Rubius was genuinely surprised, “Why? You mean...there is actually potency in the Order?”
“Yes, in some sense…So we broke through layers and layers of defence...they had no way to halt our advance. Then after we had finished another level ‘spam swords like Ruby”, we got in.”
Rubius interjected, grumbling, “They surely have a queer sense of humour.”
“Then as we got in...they started to spam us. Try to hack our servers to counter our hacking. True tactics. And when that didn’t work…”
“They unplugged the power of the database.”
Rubius gasped. “Good grief...that crude wisdom. Nevermind, Lax, go get yourself a cookie and send me what you’ve got.”
“Roger.”
When everyone had departed, only Rubius and another girl remained. The girl spoke, “Boss, are you sure that the person you mentioned is worth half a million crowns? That’s not a large sum to you, I understand, but still…”
“Nevermind, Espy. I know it’s infuriating to lose to such a greedy, insolent politician. However, we now have him in our grasp---he cannot operate without our support. Half a million for a politician is well, cheap. Besides, the person I had mentioned to you...he is worth ten times the amount.”
“Lance, I hope you do not disappoint me.”
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