~Sword: A Winter Story~ {Interlude 3} Yeah, there's actually another new chapter.

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"Rest in peace Sword and what it emblems." -Vivid
"Don't you know...it's the end of the world...
It ended when they bade me...good bye..."

Hi everyone!

This is Vivideus with his first ever attempt to write a coherent fanfic. Which is actually very difficult.
The story is *intended* to be quite an epic tale, but I don't know how it will turn out xD
The story happens in a background loosely related to Spiral Knights; I have nicked the better concepts and trashed the rest. As result, the story won't be 100% relevant with the SK lore and there are things that I intentionally dismissed.
I have the first few chapters done, I'll probably update two times a week. Go smack me in game if I delayed (IGN: Vivid-Gluttony) (waiting for ya all with most glorious love!)
So, enjoy the story! Sincerely hope your support!

Updates
Vivid is depressed...
He needs hugs. Lots of them.

Notes:
1. The story is not completely tied to the SK world. Don't rage if you see your favourite Gremlins not getting a mention.
2. Echo is not the puny, smelly guy with the slick blade overgrown with moss you see in HoH. And she is NOT Ezho .
3. This is my first try and English is not my first language; please give suggestions and feedback! Also, since I am still in the process of actively honing my English writing, my style may change drastically over time. Don't feel strange.
4. Please, in specific, please do not challenge me on the mechanics of swords, guns, how stuffs work, etc. I got the freedom to do whatever I want; again, don't rage if my concept of Lockdown/Divine Avenger contradicts your perception.
5. I may use names of my in-game friends, but not in an insulting way; if you find yourself accidentally placed in the story and you dislike, please let me know.

Links:

Character Name Explanation
Character Application Post
Character Power Chart

Content:

Prologue

Part One: A Prominence at Dusk
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six

Interlude One

Part Two: Pale the Twinkling Stardome
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven
Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen

Interlude Two

Part Three: Revelation Under Full Moon
Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen
Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Twenty
Chapter Twenty One

Interlude Three

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I decided first to do a character name briefing here; you'll find out what do I *intend* to mean for each of my lovely gaiz/galz!

Lance: Long, sharp and extremely lethal (check Companion Cavalry or Polish Hussar), it is however easily breakable and extremely frail if not at its tip; in fact, in medieval times, lances of knights are intended to be broken against your opponent's shield in a gallant, chivalric duel. Does this character portend to tragedy? We shall see.

Nicholas: My real life friend, my second best friend in SK after Vindeus. He is a lovely guy, though has a temper when he goes recon. I hate his polaris-hammer styled recon which I cannot blame as spamming (cuz I spam more).

Auresque: A Shilin name. Which means a name from my most revered online artist, Shilin. Check her out and support her webcomic on shilin.deviantart.com or Carciphona.com

Xyver: His name is indecipherable since I don't know what I want to do about him. So nvm. nvm. nvm.

Mythra : Zoroastrian deity of covenant and oath. What do I want to do with him/her...? Most probably I'll bind him to something else.

Mira : Mira is a mirror. What does she reflect changes from time to time, but...there are seldom times that she gets to reflect herself. And if that's the case, its a long and ultimately narcissistic process.

Vindeus : My best friend in game until I discovered that he is NOT a girl. Well, to satisfy my ***tic wishes, I made her a girl here...her name means something though, will be elucidated later.

Atalia: For those who like reading the Bible Old Testament as a third-rate epic story (no offence intended), they should know Ataliah. I could argue that Atalia is as deadly and evil as her Bible counterpart, but in the end she is just a typical person lost in the indulgence of what they treasure/crave. The Night of Sorrow is dedicated to her.

Vercin: A contraction of the Gaul chief (and hero) Vercingetorix, the only general able to stand up to the furious might of Julius Caesar the Great. The name is perfect for the war-hardened lieutenant of the fiery Halfblood Princess.

Chris: A truly epic LD player known for his rageness (is that a word...) who had already died from SK.

Septre: Derived from the word scepter, the stick/wand/long stuff that signifies the strength of a monarch/ruler. The symbol of sovereignty, royalty, and best of all...power overwhelming.

Hiros: A guy who happens to be my friend?

Echo: Is an echo. Is not an ezho.

Kai: Kai is a word from my native language, Cantonese. It means "the opening", "the beginning". Yeah Kai is both cute and cool.

Zytes: Zytes makes me think of Cytus. And Cytus means perfection.

Lucielle: the Luci- prefix suggests light; most of the time, when I bestow such an obvious quality on a person, he/she is surely not all light and joy...wait and see, she is another key to solving the puzzle.

Vasha: Lemme just confess this is a random name.

Thesus: Random name. Sorry. This guy is a total dick so nevermind his name.

Mankey: Is my friend. Same case as in Hiros.

Rubius: You know who he is...nevermind.

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Prologue

Prologue

It started on a white day, in a world dyed white.

Snowflakes fell from the sky, unhastening. The sky was equally white with the snow, a compact opacity undecipherable by the human eye.

Snowflakes fell slowly, their graceful swaying imitating nothing but the fall of scarlet sakura petals. They landed in unison, laying a frosted carpet atop the mud and concrete. The wind hymned cheerily, even festively, carrying the coldness to horizon and beyond.

Cold. It was cold, so cold to send constant shivers up your spine, penetrating your thoughts until
you dream of nothing but a fireplace, and fight for nothing but that.
On the streets of Haven, not many were seen. That was typical---on such a freezing day, most would put aside what they were doing and instead opt for the tight embrace of their mattresses. Those who must venture into the snow were whisked to the destination smugly in private or public vehicles.

There was but one person. A figure clad in white, brighter and purer than snow under sunlight, trod slowly along the snow-covered walkway. His face was obscured by the snow, but one could infer from his nonchalant pace his steadiness and determination.

The snow-laid ground, squishy and quite comfortable to step on, nonetheless made his boots sodden and his feet wet. He seemed not to care, and continued his unhurried walk.

If one panned in closer he would have noticed anomalies on this queer person; for one thing, his coat was of authentic fur, silvery and smooth with a weird feel of sharpness. A few long objects were strapped to his back; pointed with an edge of ferocity.

However, with such low visibility no one could make out what he was composed of. So they naturally waved him away with queer, disbelieving glances.

Alone he trod, a white loner in a white world. For long, unnerving moments it seemed that he was wandering nowhere. It wasn’t until much later, when the dazzling neon lights of the Coliseum emanating fiercely could be recognized, than his intention was clear.

Coliseum. And not a mere Coliseum, but the greatest and grandest in all Haven---presumably also in the whole world. Even in the darkest conditions this majestic structure still opened loyally to the top-notch battle fanatics in the city.

Yet what was he, a random person, doing? Did he meant to barge into the fray, where the best of Cradle competed? Nonsense.

Yet he was here, stepping into the Coliseum in his usual, slow pace. The service lady at the counter growled when she saw the wet footmarks he left on the registration hall’s futuristic fluorescent floor.

The white guy readily approached the service counter. And when he was face-to-face to the service lady he asked, “This is Lockdown? I would like to sign up for the next match.”

The service lady frowned. Not only did he pull his hood so low that half of his face was hidden, but his costume was so rare and archaic that it was almost beyond recognition. She traced faintly from her memory---was that somehow a Skolver Coat? She had only seen such a piece of gear in movies. Old school movies.

“Who are you? You do realise that you’ve just entered a professional-level Coliseum, don’t you?”

“I know the situation perfectly well. And I would like to sign up for the next match.” He spoke, his voice cold and unyielding as the melting snow coated on him.

Seriously, that was one strange person, the lady had to admit. Even after meeting so many weirdos and fanatics in this place, her nerves were still aroused by this oddity. Fine, not to care so much, let him just have a game. A famous proverb said: “The queerest is always the coolest” anyway.

She followed the standard procedure, “Please show your personal identification to sign up.”

He obliged, and detached to hand her a silvery ring from his index finger. It was without any etchings and patterns, save for a delicate “S” carved shallow into it. The lady grabbed the ring, sent it to the scanner, and waited for a while. The computer responded soon, but perplexing its answer.

“Access denied. Enter passcode for access.”

Strange, she thought. Confused, she handed him the ring, and asked, “I can’t sign you in by the computer. Can you give me your name and occupation so I can register manually?”

The white stranger paused briefly, then answered, “Lance. I am a...Striker.”

“Striker?” the lady apparently did not understand.

“Yep. Striker. The Edge of the Blade. The Wings of Skylark.” the stranger orated calmly, in a matter-of-fact kind of way.

Well, Striker it is, the lady typed the word in, grumbling. “What weapons are you using?”

“Swords.” pride seeped from his well-masked, calm tone.

“Wait! You don’t mean you are going to use…” she eyed quizzically at the things protruding from his back. Those pointy stuff?

Without answering or even a slight gesture, Lance went on into the ready room, disappearing from her eyes. Yet before he left, she spotted something; a faint, enigmatic smile.

If she had more sense she would have identified that one of the swords he carried was previously known as the Divine Avenger.

I have chapter 1 ready. I can post it anytime you like...waiting for replies
Prologue is relatively short; chapters are much longer.

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Wow...

Great vocabulary you have! Though I do see the very rare grammatical mistake, you've got quite the amount of words in your head. I would love to see another chapter go up soon.

Clear writing style, great vocab, and a evenly paced prologue so far. Good spacing and length, which I always like.

This might even be able to go on par with the greater fanfictions, like Intentions, if you keep it up :D

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Chapter 1

I originally scheduled only to post two times a week, but...
PROLOGUE IS NOT A CHAPTER
AND
I don't want people think "Vivid quit after writing the prologue! Let's smack him!"
Here comes chapter 1! But...a song first:

Cradle Theme.
What is better than starting a story with the music that start's your Spiral life?
Night be my cradle, darkness be my haven.
Light I sought, salvation I forgone.
If my haven is indeed your heaven...

Chapter 1

Nicholas dropped his weapons on the couch, sat down beside them, and grabbed an orange juice. Casually he sipped the drink. It was too sweet for his taste, but after an intense battle served as a good replenishment of glucose.

He also took off his Kat Cowl to refresh. It was a cute spectacle, originally a simple, comfy purple-and-black cowl but painted eyes and attached artificial ears. Oh, and also a special blessing by a renegade Kat Conjurer that boosted his ability to focus. He had found out that wearing the cowl for more than 2 hours consecutively made him hear much clearer---even after he had took it off. Oh, and his ears were growing pointier day by day according to observers.

He was in a good mood today. He had managed to grab some spectacular victories and an even more spectacular 8 killstreak. Now he only need a few victories and some three dozen kills more to secure himself a spot in this year’s Grand Finals. Apart from the fun, there also existed a lucrative sum of cash prize for all participants.

He could really use that bit of cash. Though a minor legend in Lockdown, he was neither a professional nor a soldier. He job yields little surplus and well, he really needed some extra money to upgrade his polaris.

Speaking of legend. Among the myriads and myriads of Lockdown players, young or old, pro or new, he stood out as the outstanding minority. Nowadays Lockdown was dominated by guns. Though swords still existed at lower tiers, it was nearly useless among the professionals. The short range was simply too fatal for their users.

Nicholas was one of the few that incorporated the usage of swords into his playstyle---and very successfully. His warhammer (technically a sword-typed weapon) was so fast and powerful that people could do little but die in awe.

He took another sip of orange juice, then tossed the half-full carton into a recycle bin. The heavy bass of the microphone boomed overhead, “Notification to all players: Next match starting in two minutes.”

Confidently he rose, donning his cowl. Then he picked up the dual alchemers: Umbra and Hail, and slipped them conveniently into his grayish cloak. The Polaris, a large gun that buzzed electrically, clinged to his waist. And finally his behemoth of a hammer, fuming dangerously, which he held tight in his hands.

Once they were in the ready room, NIcholas observed the other team cautiously. Most of them he knew; good players, but all subject to his relentless abuse of hammer and Polaris. He grinned with much confidence as he scanned the room, until he saw at the corner---

Skolver? He had had the piece of gear identified immediately, yet still he was amazed. Who was to don such a useless piece of gear that couldn’t absorb any damage? And the long, thin blade he held, gleaming attractively...a Flourish? That kind of sword was almost extinct from Lockdown now. No, actually, fading from existence entirely.

Suspicious. But it wouldn’t be a big matter. Nicholas was still confident of grasping the victory. While he was calculating the possibilities, he entered the locker room with his teammates.

A 6v6 in Rampart, which means a rather large map with five scoring points. There were two main paths, one at the top with control to the home points and secondary points of each team; the second at the bottom, which led to the fiercely contested fifth point. Also a hidden pathway, blocked by multiple gates which required some effort to open. This path was often unused; at professional level players could identify the intruder quickly, and have him/her swiftly repelled. The path was narrow, with only narrow room to manoeuvre. However, Nicholas could exploit this with ease to claim victory.

The locker room was a rather spacious room; sturdy brownish red tiles mosaiced the floor; the walls were a dull, nondescript colour of rust. Six sets of gear were hung off one wall. The set was comprised of four objects: An energy gauge which would offer protection in the expense of the mist energy stored: when the energy level dropped to zero, the player would be proclaimed defeated; a huge shield; a backpack-styled booster; a personal cloaking device.

While his teammates invariably went for the booster, he reached out for the cloaking device. He would be a Recon, a silent capturing of points; though he would add to that description “master assassin” or maybe to some extent, “kill machine”.

King Krogmo bellowed loud in the announcement channel, signalling the battle to begin. Three of Nicholas’ teammates would capture the bottom point, then strike north to meet the enemy. Two more would capture the home and secondary points and hold the enemy at bay. As for Nicholas...he was planning for something else.

Five figures darted out of the force barrier. Shockwaves escaped from their boosters as they reached the maximum velocity they could keep control, and they soon reached their respective points. Nicholas meanwhile sprinted for the hidden path.

Normally this would be too easily spotted. Yet Nicholas had turned his cloaking device on---the ten-odd seconds of invisibility was enough for him to deactivate the gates and dash through. As his cloak depleted he had reached the opponent’s home point. It was obviously captured as the point was flooded in red light. Two of his opponents were busy capturing their secondary point, unaware of the covert action he had been up to.

He snickered mischievously. Quietness was never his norm;it was simply too boring. Instead, he approached the northern edge of the point, waved amiably to his opponents, and well, made himself known.

Within a split second one of the guys began boosting. Nicholas nodded in satisfaction, and took out his Polaris. Then he began shooting---or, in less precise terms, spamming.

The slow Polaris bullets escaped the gun like small, dense spheres. But as they drifted forward they expanded violently, finally becoming huge orbs of glowering, volatile plasma. At about 15 meters from origin they erupted into dazing flashes of lightning.

Not expecting this, the interceptor charged face-first into the fray. A bolt of electricity trickled through his body, and the next moment he was thrown backward like a rag doll roflstomped by its angry master. Green energy buzzed round his armour, signalling a drop in his energy level. However, he would not falter; with his hands he tried to pry open the explosion with minimal damage, but was soon repulsed. He took a step back and promptly checked his gauge: Still some 77% of energy remained.

He took out his Nova Driver and raised it to eye level. Feigning an action of aiming, he waited for a second before lifting his boost instantaneously to an extraordinary level---and sprinted swiftly through the narrow gap between the orbs of malevolent storm.

“You are on bait.” Nicholas whispered with satisfaction. Adrenaline coursed through his body, blessing him with extrahuman reaction. In his world time seemed viscous and lagging---there was so much his sense could recept. In less than a second he finished three actions: he clung the Polaris back to his waist, then retrieved from his Umbra Driver from his cloak, and as he began pouncing forward he unleashed a much awaited purple bullet.

Nicholas did not aim. He didn’t even think that was necessary. His screen of Polaris had reduced his opponent’s position to close proximity; apart from that, he could infer from various experiences and encounters, what his opponent would think and do.

In such a scenario he would probably have his head lowered and an arm to protect it, with the other hand holding his gun. Thinking that he had outsmarted his opponent, he would not caution; mostly probably he would just dash straight through the Polaris until reaching his ideal range.

This was not to happen though. The Umbra bullet ripped through the air, colliding straight with the lower, exposed part of his head. An immense amount of energy exploded from the epicentre; a headshot could claim over one half of the victims energy gauge. For a fleeting moment Nicholas could witness his dazed opponent’s cranium being lifted upwards by the explosion. He laughed at the total bewilderment on that face, and cloaked.

A burning hammer emerged from the right flank of the unfortunate player. He felt himself again tossed by an invisible, violent hand, until he landed.

“You have been defeated.”

The defeated player was lifted into the air and transported back to the locker room by some electromagnetic force. He would emerge unscathed after 20 seconds, eager for revenge or perhaps more humiliating defeats.

By now the second opponent had finished capturing the other point; he boosted forward, pelting at Nicholas a terrifying round of bullets.

Nicholas pulled out his hammer and swung at the air. Though the hammer could not reach him, the gunner nonetheless leapt backward, creating a single moment of lull. Fully grasping the situation Nicholas activated the second hit of the hammer.

A steam-powered dash. Directed not toward his opponent, but sideward, evading all bullets. With one hand hanging onto the hammer, he fired his Hail Driver.

Two bullets traversed the distance between. Compared to the hailstorm of bullets they seemed lonely and underpowered.

Yet they were the only two bullets that made contact. One found the gunner’s legs, adhering quickly and freezing his feet to the ground. Another rammed into his right hand, immobilizing it together with the gun being held.

Terror was clear in the victim’s eyes. Yet with such sheer horror he still had sense to pull out his second gun with his other hand, and fired a rapid succession of bullets. However, in such a shocked state he could not aim; all were desperately off-target.

Nicholas decelerated and walked towards his victim, shoving away stray bullets with his arms. Finally he stood at the back of his still frozen opponent. Raising his gargantuan hammer overhead with both hands, he inhaled sharply, a breath full of the exultation of battle, and had the fervent, steel-clad fury unleashed.

With a dull but loud thud the hammer landed on his victim’s skull. Shook by the great impact, he was sent whirling forward, tumbling with sheer momentum until he rebounded against a few walls. When he stopped he ceased to move.

Nicholas grinned. A great 1-hit knockout. He was pretty sure this would be one of the ten most spectacular kills of the day.

He hummed contentedly. So far everything was according to plan: He had killed two himself, the lone opponent venturing for the fifth point had long been deposed, and his teammates at the top route had already gained the upper hand against the two players they faced. They were prevailing at all three routes; soon he’d secure another easy win.

Wait. Two by him, one at the bottom, two at the top. Five players down.

All of a sudden, he realised. This was a 6v6. And they had only seen five people.

The sixth...the white stranger with the swords? What was he planning?

A dreadful feeling flooded his thoughts as the familiar, mechanical voice droned on.

“Your teammate Juan Capez has been defeated.”

“Your teammate Ben George has been defeated.”

“Your teammate Samson has been defeated.”

Three deaths within three seconds. What efficiency was that? The last time he checked, his three alive teammates each retained well over one half of their energy…

Nicholas shivered involuntarily. He felt cold. As cold as the frost on the stranger’s equally white cloak. No, his teammates had no chance to fight this killer heads-on.

“After you’ve captured the second point, don’t go back to base.” he commanded in the team channel, his voice calm though a little shaky. “Do not go back to base.”

“Nah, we’ll go back. That guy’s busy capping 5 so we’ll be alright.” his teammates did not notice the severity of the event. Yet Nicholas knew. That person...so cold and deadly...was not someone that would prioritize capturing a point over killing some more people.

Having affirmed that his teammates are goners, he could do nothing but try to save the situation. A loud boom had kindly reminded him that he had finished capturing the point. Taking a deep breath, he held his Polaris in his right hand, and his Umbra in his left; then he began his walk---not to north for the second capture point, but eastward, towards the other team’s locker room. As he proceeded he kept Polaris bullets afloat; he intended to create in front of his enemies soon to be revived a wall of impregnable storm.

As he waited patiently he received the message. He had expected it without doubts, but was still astounded by the quickness the Skolver had demonstrated.

“Your teammate Capac has been defeated.”

Two seconds later,

“Your teammate Sam Wong has been defeated.”

Nicholas sighed. Yet it was not time to lament on their ill-fated defeat. His opponents were emerging from behind the humming force barrier, five in total. Five infuriated juggernauts that would do anything to claim his head. Nicholas wasn’t afraid.

“My head is always yours to claim.” he mused, watching his opponents struggling to get through his matrix of blue plasma. Dropping the Polaris, he produced on his palm his Hail Driver. Training his duo of firearms at them, he fired.

“Now come.”

Nicholas sighed comfortably as he finally slumped to the ground. Not bad---three taken out before he dropped. More importantly, precious time had been wrested from the other team: his teammates now had enough time to congregate and take on the Skolver. After defeating the threat they could exercise their collective strength to beat the other team.

“Still according to plan.” Nicholas muttered in silence. The Skolver’s prowess was much beyond his wildest guess, yet he was sure the balance of victory still tipped to his side.

“Your teammate Capac has been defeated.”

Normal. Taking down such a tough opponent would invariably require some sacrifices.

But seconds later.

“Your teammate Ben George has been defeated.”

The death toll was still within expected results, if perplexing and worrying. Nicholas whispered to comfort himself, “Damage control, damage control…”

The subsequent events were not so within control.

“Your teammate Juan Capez has been defeated.”

“Your teammate Sam Wong has been defeated.”

“Your teammate Samson has been defeated.”

Suddenly his team was no more. A thick, dead silence loomed over the team channel. Finally, Nicholas spoke uneasily, “Well...maybe I’ll go meet him?”

There were no encouragement, no round of applause. Nicholas could feel the contempt and disbelieve in the mute conversation.

“Go ahead Nicholas. Good luck.” someone replied, his tone flat and inanimate. Nicholas did his best to shy away the pessimism, but it still sapped his confidence.

Great. Before he had defeated me he already took away my confidence. Nicholas thought bitterly as he grabbed the booster. Against such a dangerous cloaking was next to functionless. He needed mobility, a lot of that.

The white stranger stood there, some 10 to 15 metres away from Nicholas. Aggression was absent from his gestures, which compelled Nicholas not to fire, standing straight in his position.

He carefully observed the stranger. He wore on his body a white coat which enveloped his entire body. There were strange fur at his collar and elbows---glitteringly silver, beautiful and soft like fine Chinese silk. On his coat were intricate etchings lined in silver and grey; the patterns were flowing in the air, dancing with each flutter of his cloak. His boots were white as well, made from the hides of some unknown creatures. He also wore a black glove on his right hand.

He put his hood down, revealing his hair: it was silver and curled, like the mane of a grey wolf. His powerful eyes stared into Nicholas’, observing not only his surface but also his essence. For a fleeting moment their gazes locked.

NIcholas could identify such a wide variety of emotions in one single gaze that he felt quite overwhelmed. There was unwavering determination, strong like an uncrackable rock; there was the fervent pleasure of battle; there was the cold, calculating ruthlessness also visible in his style of fighting; but there were other things---sorrow from isolation, uncertainty, and...fear?

What was he fearing? Definitely not the Kat cowled person he faced now.

The moment passed. Nicholas saw him actually smiling. The stranger nodded, grinning, acknowledging Nicholas’ strength and eligibility as an opponent. He held his sword vertically in front; it was long blade, extremely thin, made of a metal that sparked and glimmered a thousand pristine reflections. A rapier like sword, its body provided only range, not offence. The fatality was stored within its sharp tip.

Seeing his opponent raise his weapon, Nicholas did the same. His twin Alchemers sprang into his hands, fixed straight at the Skolver. His legs were slightly bent, his eyes transfixed; every little motion would send him springing backward unleashing a series of buzzing bullets.

“Very well.” the Skolver spoke solemnly. There was traces of reverence in his tone. “My name is Lance. Good luck.”

With that he charged forward. At precisely the same moment Nicholas leapt back, pulling the triggers consecutively and lightning speed.

The barrage of lilac-and-azure bullets travelled through the air, splaying out like a giant web that covered every direction Lance could possible go. That should buy him enough time to pull back and organise a second offensive.

That didn’t happen. Instead, Nicholas saw vacuum. The space behind Lance was briefly sucked empty. Sprinting with such a great velocity he evaded all bullets---they simply couldn’t reach him.

Nicholas’ heart thumped loudly. That speed...it was three times faster than that of a normal professional. With such momentum one could hardly think, let alone react. Yet Lance...not only had he managed to keep himself entirely conscious, but he could actually dodge.

Amidst the torrent of air ripping around him Lance cocked his head. A purple bullet whizzed past his face, enticing a few magentum sparks to leap into life. Not the least distracted, he slashed fiercely at Nicholas’ exposed shoulder. Unable to defend with both his arms held out, Nicholas was knocked back by the impact, yellow flames spewing out from his left shoulder.

He managed to hit Lance with his other gun while retreating. The white bullet made a solid hit on his chest, but the icy orb could not adhere and instead slid off.

At the same time Lance tapped his boost to the limit. A blue shot of steam blasted off the booster as the mist energy inside ignited. The boost depleted after that, but not before propelling Lance off his feet. Darting mid-air, he made a powerful thrust towards Nicholas’ throat, his blade tearing air apart, producing a thin, shrieking noise.

As soon as the tip of the blade encountered the energy field surrounding Nicholas, Lance felt something wrong. The energy field---it gave way to his blade too fluidly. Gasping, he hastily pressed his wrist down, converting the thrust into a slash. It pressed into Nicholas’ back, emitting a bright fury of golden sparks. The next moment he was forced to retreat; the slash merely did damage to his opponent’s energy, but didn’t obscure him from further action.

Nicholas retaliated with a powerful strike from his hammer. Lance could not dodge this as he was landing and his boost already depleted. It wasn’t worth to risk his fragile blade against his opponent’s gigantic hammer in such circumstances. His back itched. He knew it was his Divine Avenger calling him. It longed to be used, and now it was the chance.

A sequence of images formed in his mind. He could grab for the greatsword, then spin and deliver a backhand slash that would hit Nicholas before his hammer reached him. His left hand twitched with excitement and he hardly could suppress it.

However, revealing the Divine Avenger would be too risky. Riskier than clashing with his Flourish. The sword bore too much secrets, many long forgotten. He would not have the revelation premature.

Taking the brunt of the impact entirely with his left hand, he surfed on the momentum, flying towards the right. Using his left foot as the pivot point he rotated to slash at Nicholas’ abdomen. Narrowly Nicholas dodged the not-so-powerful slash, firing a bullet which explode on the aggressor’s chest.

Lance continued forward regardless, delivering another thrust at Nicholas’ chest. This time it hit, dropping Nicholas to the ground. Having finally emptied his respectable opponent’s energy gauge, he made a slight bow and remained, waiting for the next challenger.

Speed. Nicholas was completely taken aback. Only after the battle was over could he reflect upon his opponent’s prowess---his impregnable speed had forced him on the defensive from the first second. He could not make a single active move against him.

Apart from talent, how much training and work had Lance done to attain his level of skill? Nicholas couldn’t even speculate. That deadly thrust---so accurate even under extreme acceleration was still plaguing him. His shoulder was stinging. The blow, though much energy diverted at the last moment, had managed to pierce through his energy field and leave a scarlet line on his shoulder.

If that was aimed at his throat…

Nicholas was completely defeated. He wouldn’t have had chance to land the two extra blows.

The rest of the match went through quickly for him. He had managed to kill a few when Lance was busy slaughtering his teammates. Once he had even stole a kill off Lance. He didn’t feel proud or success though. The other team’s points increased constantly, while his was stagnated at a shameful 53.

He sighed with relief when the scoresheet popped up. The nightmare was over. He was surprised when he saw himself claiming 10 kills and a capture. He was even more surprised, when he looked at Lance’s statistics.

A part of him had expected this, but the other part still gawped in awe.

“Lance. 0 capture. 37 kills. 1 death. Longest killstreak: 21”

The audience cheered in sheer disbelief. Soon the Coliseum bathed in exuberant exultation; its guests had just witnessed the flaming rise of another Lockdown legend.

Nicholas wanted to play again. He wanted revenge. He knew that he would be soundly defeated, but he also knew he could never reach Lance’s power if he shied away from damage. However, Lance had already vanished from the Coliseum.

In much haste he managed to intercept Lance at the entrance. Lance spun round to face him, and said plaintively, “You did well.”

Nicholas’ face turned red. That irony had stung him. Yet as he looked into Lance’s face, he found nothing but genuity. “Tell me,” he demanded, “Why are you so strong?”

Lance walked over until he was face to face with Nicholas. “You don’t lack this,” he pointed at Nicholas’ long, artful arms. “You don’t lack this,” he pointed at his forehead. “You lack this.” he pointed at his chest, tapping against his vividly beating heart.

“What do you mean? I am not focused? Not determined? Not devoted to Lockdown wholeheartedly?” Nicholas sputtered at the speed of a machine gun firing.

“Sword.” Lance remarked. Much reverence was in this random comment.

“You mean I should practise with swords? But…” Nicholas was quizzical.

“No.” he grinned again, that light, amusing grin he once shown to the service lady. “You didn’t use your guns as how I wielded my sword.”

“No matter how hard you try, your gun is still only a gun. No matter how serious you are devoted in this, this is still merely a spectacular game that had allured you. Gun like how I sword.”

Leaving that Nicholas to digest, he began his wander. Nicholas’ voice rang from behind.

“Is there something I can help?”

Yep, there is. One crucial thing.

“Is there any cheap lodgings I can find?”

Nicholas hadn’t expected such an irrelevant question. He had imagined Lance to request something epic. Still, he beamed, and offered, “There’s a few near my home, quite far away but I can lend you a ride. Want to come?”

His hospitality seemed to have touched Lance. He stood in the snowstorm for a few moments, unmoving, then smiled again. “Sure. Thanks a lot.”

“No problem, my friend.” Nicholas, cute and amiable as ever, replied.

He whistled all the way to the car park where his motorcycle was parked. At least the day ended nicely. Lance’s last smile seemed so much more friendly...and humane.

On the motorcycle. Lance was meditating. Thoughts whirred in Nicholas’ mind, undisturbed by the intensifying storm. The world was white, and getting whiter still. The sky, fading in lustre, bellowed ominously. Snow fell, not the elegant sakura petals but malignant hailstones.

Wanderer. Skolver. Final Flourish. Impregnability. Coldness. “A Spectacular Game”.

Linking all the pieces, he now had a clearer idea who Lance was, though still entirely unsure.

At least, now he understood why Lance inquired on lodgings. He smiled. Things were getting more and more interesting, he definitely becoming a part of it.

Chapter 1 is conducted at an extremely slow pace. Things won't accelerate considerably but at least I have multiple storylines. I know the prologue sucks---Chapter 1 actually happens 1.5 minutes after the prologue (trololololol)

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...

Effer is still depressed by her failed attempt at CC audition so she is not in the mood to comment but let her just say this: LOL BEN GEORGE. Viv that is so messed up xD.

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Popoixd

Wow i really like your fanfic its really good.Continiue like thats !
I can not wait to the next chapter !

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Tedme
+1

good Fan-fic. I skimmed it, saw some grammatical errors (NOT JUDGING), and I reaaly liked what I saw. Keep it up! If you want, you can check out my Fan-fic. Similarly, it is in the Spiral Knights world, but is far from having the exact theme, though it still retains some of the feel. Here's a link:
http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/83699

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Catnip: Narcoticz for Catz, Kittiez, and Katz! And Kat Kowlz!

Nu,
I am NOT posting Chapter 2 here, though I already had it done 1.5 weeks ago.
If I continue to post like this a chapter a day, I'll soon find my existing chapters depleted.
and there's no damn way I can write 4k+ words a day
Well, actually I can, but my mom will surely charge over, slap me on the face (slam!), and roar, "WTF are you doing with ur computer stop being an addict do some work revision etc etc."
No, my mom is a good lady. And I agree with her that I can't just sit in front of my lappy and spam 4k words a day.
enough trash talk. Time for some feedback:
Effer: Ben George is just a start. If you prefer I can add Richard and Joe Chan (if that pleases you!) to my death toll. When are we doing FSC again? Love!
Popoixd: You are the kindle of innovation required to tear ripples in the dead water called literature. Keep up with your style, never falter or sway to the peasantry rabble, and some day you'll clutch the Nobel Prize! /e cheers
Tedme: Did I hear grammar? Joking. If you could afford to write more add a bit of psychological illustration and background (include symbols!), that really works. An impressive quotation, just one line, could decide the theme, tone and quality of your chapter.

So...I was damn bored on the Physics lesson and I started to think about my fanfic. How do I get more views and replies? Then I realised:
Character Application
Yup. No matter how derpy your fic is, views are guaranteed iff (if and only if) you dish out this dark magik wand. (logik iz dark magik!)
I am doing my own Character Application :w:
There are several categories you can apply into:

1. A few randoms whose only purpose is to be mentioned on the death toll; Power=?; Mortality=100%
2. A few LD losers whose only purpose is to be defeated; Power=5; Mortality=very low?
3. A few less rubbish guilds and their members to be defeated in the Guild Lockdown tournament; Power=50; Mortality=very low?
4. A few people to go on to a mission only to be trashed by a Snarbolax (btw Snarby is strong in mah story); Power=100; Mortality=medium
5. A few officers or warriors who will happen a few times and have a lil'bit of fighting; Power=200?; Mortality=high
6. A few dicky politicians and high-ordered Spiral Order Knights; Power=5~250?; Mortality=low
7. A few Strikers who are friends and comrades of the supposed protagonists; Power=200~400; Mortality=variable, quite high
8. A few lovely hot girls (or boiz?) whose only purpose is srsly I dunno; Power=?; Mortality=?
9. One or two strong commanders/generals who will have some serious action; Power=300~450; Mortality=high? :3
10. A bawss-like Master of the Swords for the Strikers; Power=over 9000!; Mortality=over 9000!

If you want to apply, please state the name of your character, sex, and anything you want to add. Please also specify the character category you are applying to.
Names like "Ernest", "Jill" or "Liz" will be accepted (I guess), but I don't want derpy names like "Derpyhoovesyeah" or "DarkarchonworldeaterwhatsoeverIthinkmynameiscoolprocomposedofseveralderpywordsIsawfromthedictionaryorLoLorStarcraft"

You can gimme the bare minimum; the name and sex. But then, I'll probably write your guy like this:
"Lance looked at the guy before him. Lance could see he is a guy from his flaring nostrils and prominent Adam's Apple. He is smiling. He wore a shirt, and see what! Trousers! So he wasn't naked, Lance noted. He held a piece of metal...something long and quite pointy...with a handle on one side. To his horror, Lance realised what it was; a very, very generic proto sword! Before he could unsheath his blade someone slapped the guy from behind and he died. Oops, his name was probably James."

Good luck, have fun, and support this act of total insanity!

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Effervescence
Character application

See always the first to support u ah I sincerely hope dat u r thankful.
Name: Effer yay! or full name if u want
gender: wat do u think?@3@( eventho i dun mind being a guy, just make me a cool one)
Effer is a gunner
SHE HAS TO BE A GUNNER
appearance: gimmeh back mah cool purple hoodie and cloak <3
backstory: Ernie, ur creativity pls :3
YES MAKE JOE CHAN SUFFER i hate him tho im not sure if his tummy can be stuffed into any knight armor lol. He will have to do without xD
I may be inactive during the festie *sigh so much hw and im so damn sleepy ><
looking forward to the next chapter :) Luv u<3

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Effervescence
oops

ignore this pls
pretend I reserve this :p

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Tedme
lol.

thanks for the feedback. I'll be posting a link to your fan-fic in mine. Hope to get to read all of it soon, need, more, time! lol

Also, I may do an app soon. Sit tight!

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Popoixd

@Vivi:1)I was sleepybut like REALLY.2)The more i write the worst i am.And before comming here i just started my own Fanfiction.3)English my second langauge and thats make law 2 A LOT more efficient.So i write a bit and I start torturing the grammar.Hre the true mssega:
Your Fanfiction is very good I like it a lot.Continuous like that you are really good! (I have a LOT of problem whit the word Continuous if someone can teach it to me.)

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Popoixd

Application:

1)Sex:Boy/Man
2)Age:He's 28
3)Categories:Number 6 whit quit high morality.
4)About him:His name is Justin,he pretty good and he loves the cat so he'll hesitate have someone with a Kat Cowl.He like to socialize,he can look like he normal but when you know him a bit HE TOTALLY CRAZY !!! But don't worry he just funny and he's good friend.

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Hey, might as well.

Name: Evera
Apperance
Sex: female
Sex: no xD
Age: 25
Category: 8
Ranks: Vanguard, Lieutenant, Delta Squad Leader

Loadout: Azure Guardian Armor (draped style), metallic blue Spiral Round Helm with metallic blue mecha wings (not usually worn except during combat), Aegis (with a usable pair of knives), Valiance, Irontech Destroyer (thrown like a grenade)

Combat style: She likes to keep her Valiance charged so she can open combat engagements with a massive BANG! Prefers to charge into the fray guns blazing, rather than duck behind cover. When she gets close to an enemy, she will invariably try to slice, dice, or stab them with the Valiance's bayonet, combined with some well-placed punches and kicks. If forced into a sword duel, she will dual-wield the knives stored in her shield.

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Vivideus
Gud mornin. Time zone is different. Gud night to u all.

Not much to add, but...

Edit: Did anyone ragequit my chapters cuz they're too long?
Did anyone actually read this but not post? I want to know :w:

@Thinslayer: How did you know I really put *shortened* bayonets on the Valis in mah storeh >< I dunno if I like the idea of charging, its a bit illogical for me; maybe guns can charge, but swords really can't. Just pieces of metal anyway. And over 9000 thanks for making the story hotter! Edit: is that pic from Final Fantasy? I dunno much about games other than SK :P

@Effer: I'll assign you to "the peoples that got ****ed by a Snarbolax". Nvm, you can still be cool; in my settings there is about...
1 Vog. 30 Snarbolaxes. 10 million people in Haven.
So not much shame for a 10mil to be beaten by a 30, honestly. It's just how hard you fight before losing.

@Popo: I doubt if the character'll fit into my story, since I do not write crazily. I must try to be more logical and less-humorous than all other fanfics since having random lulz somehow defies my ideals of writing. Writing, even if only a fanfic, is still an expression of your virtues and vices in exposure to all readers, still a conveyance of message and philosophy. I'll see though, maybe there're some cute battle fanatics in the Spiral Order :w: (most probably are!)

@Tedme: Did you click on that link?

So...next chapter'll probably be posted in 12~24 hours, depends on how many replies I have. If there are not much replies I'll just post chapter 2 and conveniently bump it. Things are getting romantic...and strange...and dark...and long...and wordy...and derpy...

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Feline-Grenadier
._.

That kinda describes the situation with me and my parents. Even if I fill up my time with piano, homework, and other things.

Anyhow...

~~~

Name : Diana Gorchev

Sex : Female

Category : 8. Just someone random to chat with.

Appearance :

- Personal Color : Lake. http://wiki.spiralknights.com/Personal_Color for reference.

- Attire : White blouse, blue jeans, sandals (no heels or clogs). Garnet-studded hair tie. Add fur coat, shoes, and scarf during the winter.

- Appearance : A somewhat short girl standing at 5'4, whose eyes (same as her personal color) glint like a pair of crystalline gems in the dark...or light. Her skin, as if she was already dead, is as pale as a parchment. She weighs in only at a light 105 lb. She has a scar running across the side of her neck, like an ugly crack on a porcelain vase.

- Personality : She doesn't mind helping out people when they come asking around for assistance. After all, she has nothing else to do other than study and gives appraisals for the old artifacts that turn up in auctions. She comes off to people as somewhat reserved, but not nearly enough to be shy.

And please, don't ever ask about her abusive parents. They made her life hell when she was younger.

Loadout :

-Shadowsun Set.

-Volcanic Pepper.

-Iron Slug.

Backstory :

Diana grew up in a rather prestigious family of medical practitioners, somewhere at some time. It's irrelevant to know where exactly, but rather what happened in her household.

It was rather unfortunate to say that Diana wasn't as brilliant in the medical field as her parents thought she was. The little girl grew up around all sorts of teachings based on medical doctrines, studied books on bio-chemistry, and partook in dozens of experiments on real patients. However, she just wasn't as intelligent as they had hoped. She struggled with the impossibly difficult theory, let alone procedures, and tried to lean towards other branches of knowledge instead.

Disgusted with their own daughter, Diana's mother bore a son, while they locked her away in their basement at the age of 8. She was able to crawl out and escape her household, until the police found her and took her back home.

That was when the beatings started.

At first, they lashed her with a belt, and after deciding it would not inflict enough pain, took to barbed branches and bludgeons to do the job. Though her little brother did not feel the violence she had, he was also harshly trained at the age of 4.

They got worse as the days, not even the weeks, went by. They struck rather sensitive areas, such as the joints and the solar plexus, until her father finally pulled out the kitchen knife and lodged the steel into her neck.

Her parents would be carted away to prison, thanks to being able to save their daughter with first aid and surgery, and both siblings traveled through many foster homes before Diana finally got a job at the local museum. She found history and literature to be particularly appealing, and so her job as a curator got her a bit of cash for an apartment. Her parents died from a double suicide when she was 14, after realizing the shameful deeds they had done. They left quite the some of money for some charities, and only a few pieces of weapons and armor for their daughter.

She now lives in Haven with her brother, in a tiny one-room apartment. Now aged 16, Diana provides for her brother and herself with the job, though her budget is slowly dwindling between the costs of mortgage and her brother's schooling, as well as costs for food.

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Vivideus
OMG "literature and history" that's me ><

That's some serious content you got there Vinny ><

This would be difficult to write...to make it look real I'll have to incorporate her past learning which she painfully couldn't forget, her hostility to...what? The last message her parents delivered I would interpret it as a way to absolve Diana from her terrible past and a failed attempt to yank her out of her nightmare; not leaving money means that she could live without the constraint and shadow of her former parents...the weapons...I could link to revenge (quite mainstream), or I ACTUALLY GOT AN IDEA; Diana herself chose between the money and the weapons that makes sense :w:
I'll have to arranged her brother to be seriously damaged in some incidents *after the story happens* that hails for a parallel comparison to her own past and drives her out of her normal world into the Clockworks/Gloaming Wildwoods to...repent? Just evasion? I don't know. And I'll put Effer as her good friend <3 (Love Effer!)

And the museum is actually a good touch...what is not in the museum? A lot... (really thanks Vinny I can add a 4.5th storyline this way xD)

Speaking about homework: homework is too mainstream

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Thinslayer
@Vivideus

Yes, that's a pic from Final Fantasy. You don't have to know the character's background in that game. All you need to know about her personality is that she is stoical, burying her emotions beneath a cold front. If a character tried to romance her (or even just befriend her), she still wouldn't show much emotion, but she would become kinder and more forgiving.

Also, the described charging mechanic is simply a more useful variation of the SK charging system. It takes time to charge, and once charged, it stays that way until released. The main difference between my mechanic and the game's mechanic is that here, the gun can be put away and stay charged even without the trigger being pulled. I'll compromise with you; perhaps it's just a really bad idea to leave the gun charged when it's not in use. It's like leaving the safety off on a modern weapon.

If you're skeptical of the charging mechanic itself, it's just based off of how capacitors work. If a constant stream of power doesn't provide the amount of power you need, you can compromise by letting it build up in a capacitor and then releasing it in a brief burst. In a directed energy weapon like the Valiance, you can charge extra energy into the capacitor and let it all go at once.

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Feline-Grenadier
Hm...

I was thinking of putting her in category number 8 (aka random pretty-girls and pretty-boys to chat with), but...meh. It's your story.

She's actually my character from a role-play off-site, though her history was tweaked to avoid any linear story problems.

She was supposed to be a daughter of a duke, who pretty much ran his territory like a cruel monarch, and she got shipped off to a facility that raises mages. And then two years would pass for her to enter a deathmatch with her half siblings (I'm such a sadist), who were "home-schooled" in their own territories to kill each other. Hunger Games, much?

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Vivideus
I love myself.

@Thinslayer: Guns charging is perfectly fine. I'll just say its an action of discharging more power in the same duration, that requires some prior heating. I don't want to meddle much with the mechanics since that's really not the point of the story. But swords are seriously NOPE, since I treat them as pieces of metals.

@Vinny: Stop being a noob.

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Feline-Grenadier
;A;

But I love being noobish! It makes me feel like I can't stop improving!

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Thinslayer
@Vivideus

I wasn't asking that swords can be charged, but since you bring it up... xD

Instead of "charging" swords, characters "set up really powerful attacks." For the Leviathan Blade, characters simply spin around really fast. No charging involved. For brandishes, they awesomely plunge their swords into the ground to release an elemental trail along the ground. Again, no charging involved.

But the Divine Avenger and Gran Faust can be charged. They are charged by raising them heavenward, and released by thrusting them forward.

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Vivideus
Bah, back from an hour of

Bah, back from an hour of wood-cutting. Holiday today so my dad taught me how to cut stuff. xD
Thinslayer, I mean...swords are swords. There are no "really powerful attacks" or "charges". Watch people sword before? Unlike SK, swords are just used---there are never combos or specific attack patterns. Thrust and lunge your opponent, parry and block; that's all. Swording is about power and reflex, nothing else.

Anyway, when would you like me to post the next chapter? Just to let you guys know I have chapter 1~6 + interlude 1 ready to be posted. :3

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Thinslayer
@Vivideus

Siegfried: "Zis is fantasy! Ve don't 'consider realism' here!" xD

But seerusly, this is fantasy. We can pretend all we want. I know that supposedly 'powerful' moves in fantasy actually leave one very vulnerable in a real sword fight, but it's fun to pretend that aerial moves and such are super effective. But in the end, it's your decision, and I, for one, won't complain about extra realism. ^_^

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Vivideus
No, actually, my story isn't

No, actually, my story isn't fantasy it all.
It can all be very real except for some tiny parts.
And all is rational. If a character dies I can't make him alive. If a battle is lost I can't make it won.
So when would you like the next chapter to come out?

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Thinslayer
@Vivideus

How about you have the next chapter out by Sunday morning? :D

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Feline-Grenadier
Ho-hum.

I agree with Thin. Need some time to clear up stuff.

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Vivideus
ok!

I'll wait for more character apps then :3 I seriously need some people to fail for the story!

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Vivideus
Chapter 2

The epicly unawaited chapter 2. Things escalate quickly...or do they?

Nightwish---Nemo Beautiful song, beautiful lyrics.


"This is me for forever One of the lost ones
The one without a name Without an honest heart for compass
......
Oh how I wish For soothing rain
All I wish is to dream again
My loving heart Lost in the dark
For hope I'd give my everything"

Chapter 2

In darkness Auresque paced briskly after her companion. There were noises---a hundred different tunes of pure irritation. To Auresque, they portended pure evil.

The world around her was dark. No lights around, no lights below, only a dim illumination from above. The sun couldn’t be blamed---penetrating twenty-four floors of worlds was exhausting enough.

A thousand beacons of light rested before her, all of which she abhorred. Bright red, twinkling, malovalent; a sharp stench of rapid decadence and ruin diffused in the air. As each blooded eye blinked there followed an impatient noise of bodies shuffling against leaves.

Auresque moved forwarded. The red irises contracted at the sound of her steps, then expanded, flaring lustily. As she scanned through them she identified the familiar chaos within the artifacted order: an insatiable pursuit for blood and destruction.

The putrid stench intensified, as if taking up a form. Auresque wrinkled her nose in disgust as a rank, invisible hand stroke her face, leering.

“They don’t know what beauty is.” She whispered softly. Even after so many encounters and expeditions she was still oblivious towards their pure, profound disdain of anything beautiful and orderly. They strove for destruction. She and her companions strove for survival.

Around her the other Strikers spanned out, ready to engage their enemies. Swords brandished, guns charged and pulsing with energy. Swiftly she took out her own gun, and had it loaded full.

Apart from being an effective firearm, her gun was also an artpiece and a relic. The handle and trigger were showing sides of worning despite receiving great care; the gold-gilded body was fading in lustre, though the colour still a magnificent, majestic gold. Twin golden wings spanned out at the end, resembling the flight of a legendary phoenix; it possessed not only grandeur but also a mystical ability to purify the bullets---and their targets.

It’s always you and me, Old friend. She gripped her gun tightly, her other hand fumbling for more bullets. The gun was cold and merciless, but the cloth-wrapped handle offered some warmth and soft comfort. As she stepped forward she eyed eagerly at the white-clad figure in front of her. The figure continued, and she followed suit.

As they delved further into the forest the creatures closed in. Carefully, Auresque slowed her steps, not wishing to antagonize them prematurely. After a further twenty steps or so, her companion halted, waving his hand to signal her do the same.

He turned over and spoke to his team, “Battle position. Guns and swords ready. They will strike when I step one step further.”

Nodding in confirm, Auresque locked her fingers on the trigger and elevated the Peacemaker to eye-level. Then she extracted a small, blue vial from her belt and downed it. The content was a mixture of Spark of Life, Blaze Pepper and small shards of Crystal Energy; it could bolster the secretion of adrenaline, heighten her senses and prolong her stamina.

Having verified that everyone was ready, the team leader spun back to face the darkness. He lifted his foot. Everything remained noisily silent. Then his foot returned to the ground.

Auresque saw mayhem unleashed before her. Red light danced lividly towards her. A raging chorus of roars broke the silence, beating deafeningly against her eardrums. She was not afraid, however. Switching on her lighting, she engaged the vile servants of chaos with her Peacemaker.

There were wolves, gels and lumbers. All were of a dull silver-black, except for their bleeding eyes. The wolves would charge fiercely towards her, slashing at her feet and leaping up to bite on her. The gels would squirm around trying to obscure her way, projecting the occasional spike which hurt a lot on impact. The lumbers were silent observers, waiting to smash their giant club-like fists down at proximity. Greavers hovered in the air, diving for her vulnerable face.

Maneuver. Speed was critical here---how fast you react, how fast you run, how fast you kill. With the enemies still approaching, Auresque had time to gun down some lumbers. Her fingers pulled quickly at the trigger, firing six bullets in two seconds. Then she leapt back, expertly inserting a new cartridge of bullets into the gun.

None of the bullets missed their targets---the single red eye so apparent on the lumbers lustreless, rusty surface. Six lumbers tumbled down, derelict, without a sound.

The next six bullets took six wolves in their heads, between the two eyes where a vermillion crystal empowered them to life. Again they slumped lifeless instantly, crumbling into dust at an unprecedented efficiency.

The next line of beasts were closing on her. A few pounced at her, snarling and thrashing wildly. Tapping onto her boost, she spiraled back, finished reloading in the process, and fired again. More corpses dropped, ceased to move, and disintegrated.

Refreshing her breath, she dashed forward to the epicentre of the clash, where her teammate engaged in a fierce skirmish. Wielding his heavy, gigantic blade, he hacked his enemies into pieces with forceful double-handed strikes. Gels and wolves were flung everywhere, creating a circle of invincibility around him. Greavers dive-bombed recklessly, but were sniped by Auresque’s amazingly accurate bullets.

They cooperated perfectly. When he went left, she aimed at the right. When he charged forward, she cleared the flanks for him. When he defended, she took on the offensive. Soon the area was cleared, with lumbers left to rot and beasts left to degenerate.

He smiled with approval, “Nice work so far. In this way we can reach the Seed before it gets dark. Follow me.”

As they went further into the forest, hostility grew thicker. They would appear from above the trees and behind the leaves; some would materialise mysteriously in front of them.

Auresque had the few simple but precise actions repeated over and over. Shoot. Evade. Reload. She was relatively unharmed by now with just a few scratches, but was getting physically exhausted. As she lagged behind, he had to slow down to accommodate to her speed.

“Aures, are you alright? You look quite pale there.” he asked, a little worried.

Auresque panted loudly, wiping the sweat in her palms onto her skirt. “I am just not used to this pace. If Lance is here I could deplete much less stamina. I am adapting, Xyver.”

“Alright then. I know its hard without Lance, but we can still do it.”

“Where is the Seed? Hope its not too far away. We would have better chances if we could reach there before the Creatures of Night appears…”

Xyver produced a small screen on his palm. For a few seconds it was blank, then a detailed topographical map of their sector materialised.

“It is not very far away from our position, but this time they chose to spawn the Seed inside a canyon. Would be hard work to get in. Follow me if you are ready.”

“Let’s go.” having regained her breath, Auresque resumed her trek. Suddenly Xyver stopped. After some rummage he produced a small vial from his pocket, much alike to the one Auresque consumed earlier.

“Aures, take it. I am ok without it, and besides, I got an extra.”

Auresque gratefully accepted it and downed it in one gulp.

Closer to the canyon the scene changed drastically. From a healthy, if not lively dark green, they gradually decayed into an autumn yellow. Even the flame in the yellow was sucked away, leaving it dull and discoloured. The thick patches of grass and fallen leaves gave way to hard, unyielding soil. The sounds---the rhythmic rustling of crispy leaves, the distant howls of beasts, the light, rancid leer of the passing gusts---coalesced into a tune of horrid macabre.

Auresque continued, undaunted by the sight. She clutched close the Peacemaker though---to her, it was a beacon of light and brightness. Reassuringly, the gun gleamed brilliantly.

Her pulse accelerated. Her senses heightened. She had felt something, but she didn’t know what that was. When they approached the entrance of the canyon and found it surprisingly empty, she knew what was wrong.

“Xyver!” she yelled hastily, her voice high and shrill. “It’s a trap! They’ll appear when we’ve gone into the canyon!”

“A trap? But how...they couldn’t just appear here without a Swarm Seed!”

“I have no idea, but I can feel it. Darkness looms around me in large quantity. It makes me...vexed. Xyver, be careful.”

A dreaded realisation coursed through her body, electrifying. “Xyver, here they come!”

Large swarms of greavers closed in from both sides, a gigantic clamp darkening the sky. They were followed by a deafening exhibition of savage roars and screeches. The earth trembled before the attacking might of the Swarm.

Without making further comments, they engaged the enemies. Retreating backwards, they lured the enemies to congregate, forming a black mass. Though it seemed more fearful, it was actually easier to confront---the offensive only came from one direction.

Xyver charged forward, tapping his boost, crashing into the beasts like an iron ram. Instead of hacking everything to death instantly, he focused on knocking them back and dazing them to give Auresque more room for maneuver.

Auresque focused on the greavers. Their numbers were so great that she could literally shoot with her eyes shut. She didn’t aim carefully, but instead used this period to rest and slightly slacken her attention. She would need those later when the greavers were less cluttered.

The battle raged on. Xyver was gradually pressed back. Still, he maintained an impassable barrier between him and Auresque. However, things were growing ill. An endless amount of reinforcement flooded the battlefield, bit by bit grinding away his focus.

An abnormally sizable wolf pounced him. He took it with his sword, but the momentum sent him unsteady. In a moment, a dozen wolves have charged through his defence. Intending to spin around and hunt down the stray wolves, he was however delayed by another surge of belligerents biting frantically at him. He couldn’t help Auresque.

“Aures, watch out!” he cried out urgently. “They are coming for you!”

Auresque had enough time to gun down the first wolves, but was out of ammunition. Cursing, she boosted to the right, swiftly reloading her gun. The wolves were nearly as fast, however, and soon caught on her, pursuing after her tail.

It was the worst scenario for Auresque. At such close range her Peacemaker would be useless. However unwilling, she unsheathed her blade, a medium-lengthed single-edge, much like a shortened version of a katana. She did not possess the same prodigy as in wielding guns though; her attacks were fast but clumsy, often repulsed by the enemies’ claws before reaching target.

This is unbelievable. This would never happen if Lance is also here.

The wolves ganged on her. Surrounded her. Staggering, she could but slash about wildly, producing shallow gashes on their mane. But soon she was overpowered. The wolves clawed at her feet; though her thick legging and boots deterred the attack, a number of wounds still appeared on her legs. Tasting blood, the wolves went hyper. And with one triumphant roar they dragged her to the ground.

Desperately she yelped, agony and terror intermingled in her cry, “Xyver! Help! They are going to get me!”

Realising the severity of the situation, Xyver abandoned his fight and rushed towards her, tapping his boost to the fullest. But both of them knew he would not arrive in time.

The pack leader bristled lustily, trying to bite into her neck and taste fresh blood. Struggling with all her strength, Auresque managed to bring her left arm up in defence, fending off the gigantic monstrosity looming over her vision. Yet she was no stronger than the beast---and soon it jaws were closing on her tender throat.

Really can’t believe I’m dying here.

Auresque closed her eyes, daunted by the grim prospect that awaits her. Yet a part of her accepted this fate without resentment. Deep in her heart she was calm and placid, with the realization that every Striker had---

I’ll die eventually.

Of course, it was always better to live. That’s what she had in mind when she saw the wolf’s skull punctured by a blue jet of compressed air.

Thank God. She sighed with much relief, ignoring the flaming scratches the wolf made on her left arm. Around her the wolves were scattered quickly---some were sliced apart by blue disks of energy, the others flung away to oblivion by Xyver’s Leviathan.

“Are you alright, Aures?” the saviour, a girl of Auresque’s age, knelt down and inquired. She had rusty red hair of medium length, set into two short braids which came next to her years; her large hazel eyes glistened like pearls; she was apparently worried to see Auresque bloodied and down; the vexation was clearly shown in her low and hushed voice.

“Your legs look quite messy there. Can you stand up?” She squatted beside Auresque, lending her a hand. Nodding to show her gratitude, Auresque grabbed her arm tightly and stood up, wobbling.

“Ouch…” she grimaced, gritting her teeth. She sat down again, wincing as the wounds scratched against the grainy soil. “Nothing major, it just looks bloody. Really hurts a lot though.”

“Here.” the red-headed girl retrieved a can of spray from a voluminous pack she carried on her back. “Mist spray; it alleviates your pain and sterilizes your wounds.”

“Thanks a lot, Mira.” Auresque beamed. She emptied its contents onto her legs until they were covered in a thin layer of fluorescent blue. “Its a lot better now. I’ll treat them when I return to camp.”

Using her right arm, she pushed herself upwards, staggering, but soon regained balance. She looked around: her team had already cleared the battlefield. Then she turned and said to Mira, “The Swarm Seed had spawned over there, in that canyon. I and Xyver are going in.”

“Over there…” Mira tipped up her toes to compensate for her short height. Looking at the rocky canyon, she shivered, “That place look quite scary. Can you two manage? Maybe an extra person or two could help…”

“Proposition rejected.” Xyver appeared from behind. He was a tall person, very muscular. His black hair was short and cropped neatly.

“The canyon is very narrow; more people would simply obstruct our own movement. Besides, I need you to guard the entrance and if possible,” he paused briefly to stress the importance of the issue, “find out the other Swarm Seeds. I believe there’s at least two miniature-sized ones around. Else we couldn’t account for the sudden ambush just now.”

Mira’s head cocked sideways as she considered the situation. Stroking her braid playfully, she shrugged, and replied, “I guess that’s legit for me. We’ll proceed in 15 minutes.”

“Good.” Xyver said confidently. “Are you rested, Auresque? We’ll start if there’s no problem.”

“Sure.” Auresque replied cheerily, stretching her body. “Let’s go.”

The canyon was narrow at the entrance. It was narrower inside. Auresque and Xyver had to move with caution to avoid falling rocks and monsters that would appear out of nowhere. Slowly they penetrated into the darker corners of the canyon.

Auresque shot down another pack of greavers. They didn’t come in considerable numbers---barely a nuisance, truth be told.

“Creepy.” she complained, apparently pestered. “If there were so many, why don’t they come all together?”

Xyver shrugged, not bothering to reply. He kept moving on deeper into the canyon, holding the map-gadget in his palm with much care. He frowned when the map indicated a split path. He informed Auresque, “The path will split into two soon. We should stick together.”

“Well, we could scout; one person per path.”

“I don’t think that’s a good idea. They are becoming more witty than ever; this may prove to be another trap that they laid: separate and conquer. We should work as a team and hope that we find the Seed before night falls.”

“Can you like, check on the gadget? You can locate the Seed on it.”

Xyver shook his head. “I can’t. Apparently the destinations of these paths were very close to each other. I don’t know the exact position of the Seed---the gadget merely approximates according to data on dark energy. It might be on either path.”

“Maybe we can do it this way,” Auresque suggested, “As you said, well, they are getting cleverer. But not clever; they set up the ambush but failed to realise that we got reinforcements. So...if there was indeed a trap…”

She entered the pathway on the right, walking for twenty steps before returning. “They aren’t there.” she groaned, pouting her lips. Then she tried the other way. She made each step carefully, waiting tentatively before continuing.

One step. Two step. Three. Four. Five---

An immense host of silver-and-black creatures materialized from behind. They dived from the sky, rolled down from the cliffs, rose from their burrows, just come from nowhere. Their collective stench severely antagonized her nose.

In a single moment their retreat was blocked. The next moment the deadly host charged.

Frantically Auresque pulled out her Peacemaker and fired. But after a few shots she was yanked away by a great force; Xyver, tapping his boost, grappled firm her shoulder and towed her away from the mob, bellowing loudly,

“Run!”

Recovering from the initial shock, she could not agree more with him---there were simply too many of them. Tapping her boost, she accelerated sharply.

The only way out of this was to destroy the Swarm Seed before its minions caught up with them. However, they could hardly outrun the beasts: the Striker boost was meant for short, sudden actions; it could not support a marathon at full velocity.

Multiple groups of monsters intercepted on their way. They had them deposed easily, but this deprived them of their ability to outrun their pursuers.

Xyver took a quick glance at his map. He declared between his breaths, “We are almost there. Don’t collapse yet, Aures!”

Auresque was already panting hard, breathing in a sporadic pattern. She could hardly speak---aiming and sprinting were consuming much of her stamina.

“Where...is...it.” she uttered bitterly. Her feet were burning; the intense action had brought blood coursing through her them. As the effect of the mist spray worn away the sensation of pain intensified.

They sped. The monsters also sped, edging closer to them. Closer to the Swarm Seed the Creatures of Darkness gained more power---around it they could be three times as powerful.

Auresque saw it. The end of the canyon was before her. For a moment she was relieved---the trek was finally over. Then the horrible realization set in.

“The Seed isn’t here!” she yelled urgently. “I can’t see it anywhere!”

“Are you sure?” Xyver’s reply was still steady. “It must be here. I am sure.”

The black tide surged in tumultuously. Time was running out. “Xyver! I saw it!” Auresque exclaimed, “It is over there! On that ledge!”

Xyver cocked his head, squinting his eyes. It was indeed there---a magentum, eye-shaped totem embedded in a large rock ledge. He studied the rock face carefully, then the incoming surge of monsters. His face grew grim.

“Aures.” he demanded, “I know this is difficult even for one like you. But please, try to accomplish what I’m going to order. While I climb up this cliff, hold off the monsters for me.”

“Are you kidding?” Auresque cried in disbelief. “I only got a gun; you know how crap I wield swords!”

“Can you climb up that surface? If you can, I am perfectly fine with switching roles.”

“No...” the rock surface was steep, about ten meters tall; ledges were not particularly hard to balance on, but were interspersed sparsely. Auresque couldn’t possible climb up.

“Fine.” she snapped, spinning around. Her long, ashen-blonde hair, streaming down in a single ponytail, fluttered brilliantly in the air. Her left eye, which was emerald green, remained focused; her right eye, a rare colour of turquoise, expanded sharply.

She was a sharpshooter for a reason; her especially keen-sighted, blessed right eye being one of them. Every time she pulled the trigger a monster fell dead.

They pressed on her, edging closer, trampling over the demise of their kin. The distance was about twenty-five paces, but decreasing quickly. Reluctantly, Auresque fetched a piece of crystal, an unstable shard of ultracondensed energy, and stuffed it into her Peacemaker.

The gun heated significantly, producing a strange sound not unlike that of a boiling kettle. A majestic phoenix of golden light soared from the gun, flying straight into the monsters and scorching everything in the way.

Auresque was thrown back violently by the recoil. The monsters were pushed back, parts of their body sizzling in the process; the ones at the vanguard crumpled into ashes.

Good. She would have no problem fending them off for another minute or two. She looked up at the climbing Xyver, “Are you ok?”

Xyver, expertly scaling the cliff, replied, “Making good progress so far. I can see the Seed there---Yes, I got it.”

Balancing precariously on the thin ledge, he unsheathed his gigantic Leviathan and slashed at the Swarm Seed. As the blade reached the target, a strangle gurgle was emitted: a blast of dark energy repulsed the unsuspecting Cyver.

Letting out a loud, surprised yelp, Cyver was bounced back. His Leviathan was wrested out of his grip and fell, clinging and clanging on the way. Struggling, he managed to climb one ledge higher and could view the Seed in its entirety.

“Aures! Quick! Throw me your gun!”

“What?” Auresque replied in dismay. “I have got no other weapons I can use!”

“I know, but you can’t fend off these monsters endlessly. Soon they’ll overpower you. We must destroy that Seed before they do so!”

He was right. Auresque knew. However, giving him the gun would render her entirely defenceless. She’ll be attacked feistily, mauled, even killed.

But on the other hand.

If I keep the gun, we’ll probably both die.

Auresque tossed Xyver the gun, then turned and braced for the coming onslaught.

The monsters ganged on her. Her sword was soon knocked out of her hand. Instinctively she raised her left arm to brace from a ferocious claw; it razed deep into her flesh, crimson blood spewing profusely. As she dropped she received another bite on her shoulder. The beasts were on her.

“Gotcha!”

After a few seconds of clumsy shooting, Xyver had finally managed to hit the Seed. Instantly it imploded into a purple lotus, dissipating quickly in the air. In a second the creatures vanished, leaving the canyon blank and void.

He came down from the ledge. Auresque was on the ground clutching her left arm, where blood oozed from the new wounds. She smiled weakly at his caring gaze.

“I’ll be fine.” she assured him, her voice unsteady and tremulous. She tried to stand up, but found her legs turned jelly.

“You did a great job.” Xyver smiled, stroking her messed hair. “Here, need a ride?”

“Sure.”

“Hop on.” Xyver knelt down, letting Auresque climb onto his back. “Let’s go.”

Auresque sat alone in the common room. It was late at night---the others had already drifted into slumber; those who had not slept stayed in their rooms, writing a letter or reading a book.

The hall was a spacious chamber, dimly lit by brazen lamps hung on the wall. They flickered, wane and sickly, illuminating her small, thinly clothed back. The room was devoid of substances, a long wooden table and a dozen chairs being the only substantial objects. The table was a plaintive oak, etched with numerous scratches; the natural texture of the timber could faintly be recognised under them.

Auresque was busy tending to her own wounds; she hadn’t had a chance to bound them in the expedition, and now they throbbed loudly. She had already changed to a T-shirt and shorts; her wounds needed more airing.

She picked up a bottle of spirits from the med-kit placed next to her. Pouring onto her arm, she then cleaned them with a piece of cotton. The searing induced by the alcohol made her wince. After sterilizing the gashes she applied a salve; lime green with a vile smell of concocted herbs, it nevertheless brought a fresh, soothing sensation.

She moaned softly with relief. She wrapped several layers of bandages round her arm, bounding it tight but permitted a little room for movement. Her bleached arm matched eerily with her white T-shirt.

What a bitter irony. She thought blankly. At a typical night she would still be sitting here, but relatively unhurt, awaiting her companions to outstretch a scarred arm. She would open her med-kit and treat their wounds gently, and laugh together afterwards.

It was the first time she had received so many wounds. Lance and Xyver, they would always be around her, shielding her, protecting. She could aim and fire without apprehension.

But Lance wasn’t here. Her mind dim and dreary. Hardly a few days since Lance had left, she was already miserable, as if missing a vital part of her body. In fact, she felt she was missing something; the trio had lived and fought together for so long they were nearly inseparable.

She sighed, bending down to treat her legs. Her hands moved speedily as she started cleaning the numerous lacerations, but she was drowned in thoughts.

She, Lance and Xyver. She could not unravel the tangled strings of emotions she had to them. To she, they were her brothers and best friends, living, fighting, laughing, weeping---all together. She surely liked them. Trusted them. Relied on them. Yet she couldn’t distinguish this from deeper emotions; did she love either one of them? Both?

Frankly, she didn’t know the answer. Living in isolation, deep down from the lustrous, colourful world, she had few chances to witness and observe such feelings, let alone experience.

One thing was sure; with Lance now gone, she missed him awfully. It wasn’t until then that she realised how important Lance---and Xyver---was in her heart.

She remembered the night when Lance left, taking an elevator up to Emberlight. She had smiled, even bade him good luck and farewell. But when she woke up next day and entered the common room---the room without Lance’s silver hair and deep, black eyes, she felt disappointed. Not merely disappointed, but despondent.

When a new person was assigned to her team, she felt incredibly insecure and unfit. The new teammate was skillful, but without the silent teamwork that spoke for itself found inherent in the trio. After the expedition she immediately requested him to be transferred away; it was simply awkward for someone else to occupy the position that Lance had held and played so well.

Lance...She wondered when would Lance return. The Grand Master didn’t specify---he would remain until he had accomplished his task. It was really bad without Lance here; Xyver would think so too.

A soft, gentle voice came through the corridor. “Hi, Aures. Are you alright?”

Auresque turned to see Mira, the beautiful girl with cute rusty hair. She was dressed in her normal garments: a purple-and-black robe with silver embroideries, a purple, silken tippet with golden tassels hanging; she wore a pair of simple sandals on her foot. She was holding a cup of bubbling liquid. She looked tired; her concerning hazel eyes were swollen and weary.

Seriously, Auresque couldn’t comprehend why she was wearing that strange cloak of hers. She also couldn’t understand the string of runes with exotic glyphs she wore as a necklace. But that was her liberty, right?

“Still treating your own wounds?” Mira restated the obvious fact. “Here,” she took over the ointment and rolls of bandage from Auresque’s hands, “Let me help.”

Auresque gladly obliged. Mira knelt down and started working. “Does it still hurt?”

“Well, not a lot...I doubt would it heal in time.”

“ Aures, I know you are hard-pressed. In fact, the whole team is quite demoralised after the day. I’ll concoct some nice dishes tomorrow to cheer you guys up. I got quite a lot of ingredients...how about stir-fried wolf ribs with minced greaver wings and blaze pepper? I could also do a hot pot and a perfect snowball sundae.”

Auresque could not suppress a fatigued smile. That was Mira, ever the cheerful, helpful girl. She asked, “Speaking of the team; is there anyone injured today?”

“Mythra was mauled badly by a large pack of wolves; we already had her evacuated to Depth 23.” Mira recounted while she finished bandaging one of Auresque’s legs. As she moved to the other, she continued, “Feist had sprained his ankle quite seriously, but he insisted he could walk after a day or two. The rest...just a few scratches, nothing as serious as yours.”

Auresque groaned, “That means we are one more down. I doubt if we can fare for much longer.”

“Well, things are not as desperate as you think.” Mira tried to cheer her up. “As I know we have destroyed quite a few Seeds there; they would need at least 72 hours to regenerate, if we are lucky maybe up to 96. And I doubt if they would commit such a large scale attack again. Next expedition would be easier. So relax!”

“How do you know so much?”

Mira stuck out her tongue, grinning, “I really don’t know. Maybe I shouldn’t put it in this way; I simply know it.” she chuckled blithely.

“Well, I guess so then.” Auresque shrugged and didn’t question further.

“Thanks then.” Mira stood up, yawned, and placed the equipments back into the med-kit. “Your legs shall be fine now. Avoid running and stretching too much for the first two days, and don’t let the bandage touch water.”

“Thanks a lot, Mira. You are really helpful!” Auresque thanked with genuity.

“Its alright. By the way, I noticed that you are probably not sleeping any time soon. So I took the liberty to make you a drink. Its over there.”

“Is that...milk with soda water? I don’t prefer lactose much.”

“No, no. You are completely mistaken. That’s sweetened Frost Gel with Nightshade and Static Clinger powder. I added a Royal Core for extra flavours.”

“I’ll take that.” Auresque claimed the beverage instantly.

“Have a nice drink!” Mira said brightly as she left the common room. “And good night!”

The departure of Mira had made the room lonely and gloom again. Darkness seeped in from the enigmatic landscapes outside, blinding the lamps and shading over Auresque. She was tired. Her eyelids would drop any moment, her muscles aching dully, signifying her much-needed rest. However, she still had one more thing to do.

Having travelled back to her room, she switched on her communication device and dialed Lance. An unstable hologram popped up, with Lance’s familiar face. “Lance, how’s things going?”

She could see from the background Lance had been honing his blade. Hesitating for a moment, Lance started speaking, “I don’t know. This world is no longer what we know.”

“Why?”

“It is hard to explain. They have...forgotten a lot. They have changed a lot.”

“How?”

“Aures, I can’t believe this---they don’t know what a Striker is. When I showed them my ring, they laughed and had me neglected. When I mentioned to someone the Swarm, they thought I had it cited from a certain movie.”

“Lance…”

“I must say that this world is irrational. They don’t know what is lying before us, Aures. This is an age of disbelief. I am tired.”

“I am tired too.” she sighed. “Take care. We’ll talk tomorrow.”

With that she disconnected. Softly caressing her bandaged left arm, she clambered onto bed.

The night, soft like a blanket, placed onto her its seductive embrace. Darkness, which she had abhorred and feared, felt to her so blissful.

What do you know after Chapter 2? What do you think you know?
No one sees through the surface of darkness. No one can see without light.

Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Huh...

Reminds me of this :

http://www.mangahere.com/manga/hataraku_maousama/

In the sense that strangers from another world and end up in a stranger world than theirs, and that the old world begins to corrupt from the absence of certain characters, I find these two similar.

Vivideus's picture
Vivideus
You are wrong.

But that's none of this story.
Chapter 2 is a delusion, as is Chapter 1.

Effervescence's picture
Effervescence
Can I have a description of

Can I have a description of what Xyver looks like pleeease? :3

Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
...

Matrix, or Inversion kind of delusion?

Vivideus's picture
Vivideus
Xhaba is Papaya!?

No, none of these kind.
But rather,
The writer deluded his readers .
Each chapter is a thread, longer and messier than the last. Where will they lead to? Soon they will tangle, bundle, into a great mess of fiber, spiralling down into an inescapable abyss of sorrow that overtakes you (spare my EU3 reference xD)
Chapter 3 is even more delusional in this way. But things get better after Chapter 6. Continue reading (advertisement) :3

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Tedme
lawls.

I did click on your link, and I'm still trying to find the time to read this in full. Once I do, I'll add a character.

P.S. I can't add a character while writing for mine, cause I'm homeschooled, and Torin counts as school, so. Fun times, right?

Vivideus's picture
Vivideus
Dude,

If you don't have time, just fill in the bare minimum, something like:
Name: James Sex: Who cares Category: 1
And I'll have this translated to:

Evera scanned the crisp white piece of paper, squinting to make out the beady alphabets. "So..." she mumbled, tossing and spinning a steel throwing-knife in her hand, "We've lost a lot of people yesterday."
"Yeah..." her friend, Asta, sighed sadly, "Ben George...Joe Chan...then there is James."
"James..." Evera whispered the name several times, quite confused. "Who is James?"

Also, please tell me what do you want the interval between each chapter to be: 2 days? 3 days? 4 days? 1 Haven Cycle? 30 minutes? A few parsecs? (seriously parsec is not a time unit :w:)

Thanks and have a real nice weekend! Play more Lockdown!

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Vivideus
Bump.

Today is still a no-post day. Still, I want to bump this up for more people to gawp at my impotent style of pages-long event-recounting.
But a bump with just a message "I am bumping" is too mainstream. Gotta spam some other content...

I'll talk about my views to writing a fanfic. Not a fiction/text, but a fanfic in particular.

Let's start this nonsense.

First there are words. Then there are sentences. Coherent sentences. Passages. Stories. Stories upon stories. True stories, lost stories, unremembered stories; distorted stories, manipulated stories, invented stories.

Then there is fiction.

Fiction is spinning a yarn, a creation, a lie that damages no one and satisfies everyone. A fanfiction...is much more complicated. What does one intend when he writes a fanfic? Creation? Telling lies? Or...

A fanfic is a fiction. So obvious, so obviously hidden from our omniscient eyes. A fanfic is merely a platform---a pre-made set of background and structures for you to safely expand on. No, many people write fanfics for particular purposes: some instill their love/hate towards particular characters, some explore into the world of "what if" and "what if not", some more take use of certain aspects of the game to write their own stories (so apparent in our clockwork diving, gremlin battling, swarm killing, self-brawling stories).

No. In my opinion, a fanfic is both more complex and more simple than that. Complex, in the sense that you must choose what to write and not what to, to tread the thin thread that borderlines "creation" and "imitation"; simple, in the sense that you just write. Yes. Just write.

A fanfic is a good one if it satisfies one of the two conditions: depth or width. It must necessarily be either wider and bigger than what the game has to offer, or delve much deeper into certain links and ideas the game has to offer. A fanfic is a "not-so-good" one if it remains inside the scope of the game all of the time. Where's your creation? Where's your invention?

A fiction is higher than a story. So is a fanfic. I try not to let the game restrict you, but instead---to the opposite. I do not tell stories, I create them, I recreate what seems apparent in the game and works it over. I simply do not believe that by writing a nice dive into the clockworks, or illustrating some very epic Lockdowns, you transform your fanfic into a good one. Nightsong awashes my ears.

A fiction being a fanfic is an abject excuse of not writing to your limit. Do you not treat a fanfic as a serious piece of writing? Pay effort, have something original, write to your best; just because the game has a theme then you do not instill upon it your ideology, philosophy and thoughts? Just because it is a mere fanfic then you resort to stomach-churning romance, epicly written battles and quirky Gremlins? That you have lost the ability to let your readers ponder, and instead entertain them with TVB-styled plots?

I'll summarize: A writer must not be homogenized by his fanfic. He shall remain what he is.

OK. I have gone too far (seriously). I'll talk about what I intend to do on this fiction I am writing:

Readers have posted unfortunately wrong speculations on the plot. I never intended from first place to reveal the whole picture. It is of course easier to say "We are gonna kick some Gremlin @sses!" or "Oh noes Skylark crashed we are doomed" from the beginning, but that somehow spoils my novel. I strive to bring my readers another sense of pleasure, one that cannot be discovered in simple romance and fighting: that of an onion.

Bit by bit I unravel the plot. Every layer you see adds to the stinging smell, forcing you to think more and guess. With each layer unveiled you guess differently, only to find out next that it's incorrect. "What is happening" is as important as "Why this happened" and "What had happened".

Also, I wanted to add a bit of depth into the story. I'll only make hints, as I highly doubt this act's success:

"Rest in peace sword and what it emblems."

That kind of explains the title.

Thanks for ignoring this cr@p! :D

Scamall's picture
Scamall
Writer's Block.

Ah, Vivideus. A man after my own heart. With a vocabulary that rivals my own, to boot. I'll be keeping an eye on this little gem of a tale you're fencing.

Critzer's picture
Critzer
Char app, not as lengthy and in depth like i wanted, but this ok

Name: Critzer (her real name is unknown O_o)

Age: 38

Personality: Kind and quite hyper, even at her age (not saying 38 is really old), but she has switch that flips when she gets to hyper or to scarred that makes her quite morbid and blood lusting. She hates ignorance, arrogance, and hypocrites.

Loud out: Explained in history

Character spot: 7 or 10, depending on you :3

Appearance: About 5'6 in height with a lean body. Her eyes are a dark hazel and her hair is a Dark Red, her skin a light tan. Her personal color is a Crimson red. Her arms and torso are toned and show muscle gained only by practice and fun.

History: She had a Gawd awful family that preferred boys over girls due to their success rate in the field of battle with no restrictions (people are crazy are there are people like this). They gave her up to a greedy bum of a man that used her to gain money by being a beggar. She escaped around the age of 8 by hiding in the snow during the winter in an alley way. She nearly froze and from that day had a personality that reflected her hate of snow. She became quite fiery and reflected that in her personality, attitude towards different people, and fighting style as she grew up. She would occasionally go to the fight arena to see some old timers be tough and be the legends of the Coliseum. She one day asked one of the old legends to help her in dealing with things like they do, swiftly, precisely, and with style of course. The man smiled at her spirit and took her under his arm, which she was taught the way of staying warming and kicking some major butt. As the man aged and she grew older, stronger, and wiser, the man gave her things that he once owned and used. She received a skolver coat and cap, fearless rigadoon, and a combuster. She disliked the white color of the skolver armor and decided to don a hallow tailed helmet (with hallow vert vents and glasses) and fur coat (hallow bandoleer and wings) for some nice red and orange flaming color scheme. But soon her teacher soon got old and retired away then withered away, it left her alone like before and it made a slight crack in her sanity.

After all of this only really participated in the arena 5 times. Out of those five games she was called 5 names by the few who played with her and the many that watched: The Dragons flame; Raging fire; Fire priestess; The insane flame; Chica muy Caliente. Her fighting style represented the flickering of a blazing fire, as you push into it, it flickers out of the way, but then envelopes you in scorching fire in retaliation. She liked to set her opponents ablaze with her combuster or prod them with her rigadoon. But she really didn't like it to much and stayed away from it after that. She isn't seen much anymore but comes out to talk to others and sell some stuff she gathers around. She is known to come out of nowhere and leave to nowhere with a white mewkat following her time to time.

P.S: Lockdown is just a thing she is known for and just attributes to a broad scale of her skill. (I'd had loved to put in she had the power of fire but it seems you aint goin down that kinda road so its up to you >.>....)

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Fe...fi...fo...fum.

This isn't a fifth grade English class, but alright, I get your point Vivi. If you have read Artifice's "Redemption" & "Intentions", he pretty much does the same thing that you do.

He makes a world, but he makes it so wide that it doesn't quite feel like the same old Spiral Knights.

In that sense, you too are making a new world with a few borrowed aspects, but you're also creating a unique (because I can't say fresh or new when Artifice has already done this) setting for the characters to interact in. It's hard to find authors who write like that nowadays, and that only serves to make your fanfict more treasurable.

Me gusta :D

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another phonepost

its actually only a more fashionable bump
posting in 11 hours, gotta school now...
/sad

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Chapter 3

I have to confess...after finishing Chapter 3 about 2 weeks ago, I...
turned my story prematurely into complete cr@p.
Let's start this epicness.

Blackmore's Night---Shadow of the Moon A song worth listening over and over.
"In the shadow of the moon,
She danced in the starlight
Whispering a haunting tune
To the night...

......

Feeling lonely, feeling sad,
She cried in the moonlight.
Driven by a world gone mad
She took flight...

"Feel no sorrow, feel no pain,
Feel no hurt, there's nothing gained...
Only love will then remain,"
She would say."

Chapter 3

At night she stood, wandering among the mystic lilac mist. The blue corn moon wooed softly to the barren field below. The field, devoid of any life whatsoever, glinted with much melancholy. Endless piles of the fallen---corpses, beasts, weapons, dotted and marked the ashen, burnt soil. In the unspeaking moonlight they moaned enigma, their tender, bloating bodies mourning softly of their abrupt demise.

What were they thinking; hatred, sorrow or guilt? What were the fighting for; justice, faith or pride? The wanderer had no answer.

Among the fallen she stood, exceedingly fair and exotic. A swivel of a shadow, gliding swiftly through the seams of decadence. Her purple form shimmered distant among the broken blades; she studied each with quizzical patience, but did not pick up any.

Her black eyes were unnerving, unmoving. They were clear like crystals but reflective like mirrors. Her pupils captured the carnage in its entirety, but her soul reacted to nothing. Hell abound presided in her eyes, yet her mind untainted, unmoved.

Cold the night breeze, colder her face. The mists whirled around her, twisting and tangling, writhing like a knot of snakes. That she waved away casually, condensing on her palm droplets of crystalline, violet dew.

Numbness. She could not speak, for her voice was locked and soundless. She could not shed a tear, for her eyes were but transfixed onto the scene. She could not bend down, and stroke their pallid, bloodied faces, for she wasn’t even there. All she could was to wander, floating, a flickering, fleeting existence so naked and exposed in the eyes of the newly dead.

At day she lingered on, her existence rendered obsolete by the scorching heat. The sun, blazingly magnificent, sown on the ground below a field of gold. Steam rose vividly, from the dews, from the creaks in the earth, from the bloated, diminishing bodies of the soldiers. The steam---stirring, a substance of impurity, of the rank stench of rot and the burnt flavor of life.

Among the clashing she stood, graceful, exotic, exceedingly fair. Yet her face was pale, her form dashed. The sun brought down on her a bright glimmer, an aura golden and extremely imposing that sapped her purple, pale form.

Among the warring she glided, swift and elegant, across the clambering swords and brandishing claws. Great hordes of armies, some human, some beastly, confronted with innate ferocity. They fought with savage obstinacy, solid, courageously adamant. Totally unyielding.

She glided among them, her lavender form shimmering weakly among the blinding tips of their swords, claws, and other mortal instruments. From distance she looked majestic, a royal figure clad in rich burgundy and crimson. From close she looked ghouly, bathed in rich, rank blood.

The deafening roars didn’t shake her. The moans and cries of the dead didn’t move her. She stood silent among the living and the dead. One side were knights, clad in fine armour, charging and fighting with valiance. The other side was the Night, red, silver and black, furiously bloodthirsty and excessively chaotic.

Both sides she eyed; the bright, valiant Knights, she neither hated or liked. The dark, beastly Night, which had invoked astir her fluctuating thoughts.

Resonance was her term. Deep in the reclusive soul of hers she rediscovered something---a strange mixture, grasping her heart like a muddy, rapid torrent.

She knew what that was when she looked into the bloodshot, glowering eyes of a Trojan, a wrathful entity amount its skeletal horse. The eye stirred, and beneath the pretension of blood hot fury, the existence she could identify.

Emotion. Suddenly, she was alive again. Still the wispy, pale figure, but a solid mind and soul. Abhorrence and weariness of the bloodbath surfaced, followed by empathy for the belligerents and sadness for the perished.

She realised a lot---for one thing, the valiant, chivalric Knights with their self-justified cause were not the “better” side in this battle. In terms of life and death every single creature was weighted the same. And, she knew, that the Night had its casus belli as well.

The field was now full of blood, lusty and hot. It was warm as it first exited its master, a thick, flowing liquid much like ruby. But when it cooled, and all signs of life left, it became a sad clump of black, crusty solid. Only the smell and the stark truth remained.

She wanted to cry out, to tell them stop their meaningless fighting. Yet her mouth was full of blood, its sanguinary rankness clogging thick in her throat, constricting her breath.

She struggled. For a moment something sneaked into her mind, a thought sinister and rabid. Suddenly, she felt an immense hatred---one towards the Knights; the images of bloodshed coursed in her veins, hateful, dominating---

Then she realised she wasn’t here. She was merely a shadow, an observant, a fleeting glimpse. The world here didn’t belong to her.

If that was so, who was she? She had no answer of that, either.

Ah, you are here, Child of Darkness.

She screened around. The owner of the voice was nowhere to be seen. All around her the battle raged on, with ever increasing brutality. She was disgusted.

Child of Darkness, finish your wandering. It’s time to awake.

A part of her resisted to that voice. She should not wake, it called. Yet another part---the truer, closer part, was tired of the carnage and death she had already witnessed for an inexplicable amount of time.

Child, what are you waiting for? The proceeding events are not for you.

She was torn between the two parts of her mind. One urged her to stay on, to witness in full what was happening next. The other yearned for nothing but peace, and peace in her own world.

Child of Night, why cling hopelessly to the blinding light of the day? You simply don’t belong there. Your solace is the dark and immaculate night.

She was confused. She didn’t know what to trust---her torn, conflicting mind or the voice. Finally the longing for peace and sanctity overwhelmed the desire to know.

I shall wake.

Her eyes fluttered open to a bright, hazy sky. Azure dotted with beautiful, white clouds, it placated her and soothed her puzzled head. A cool breeze enveloped round, fresh and pure without a slight hint of lush grass.

Who am I? She seemed not to know.

Name. My name...what is it? V..Vin...Vin---

Vindeus.

Vindeus rose, her flowing purple hair brushing smoothly against her exposed back. She surveyed around; the earth was soft and moisturous; a green carpet, comprised of lush grass beaming with a lively emerald; pillars of stone rose everywhere, their texture smooth and white like marble. Birds twittered and chittered, spreading their gaudy wings, gliding in the air. Apparently not afraid of her, one landed on her lap, studying her with its innocent, beady eyes.

Beautiful and Peace. However,

Why am I here?

She stood up, discovering the weak state of her body. She had either been badly malnourished, which was a definite no judging from her healthy complexion, or had been in a coma for long.

Why?

She walked down the steps. What she had slept on was not natural: a random stack of large, smooth-surfaced cubes, pure white like snow. More of these cubes were present, of various shapes and sizes, some embedded in the pillars and the grass, some suspended in the air.

She had absolutely no idea why she was there. Worse, she had no information of where this place led to. Not knowing where to go, she wandered around in the beautiful but isolated paradise. She encountered more bird on the way; also flowers, exuberantly gorgeous, of unknown species.

On her way ideas formed in her mind, clustered and unclear. Then they faded again.

Finally she reached a place of oddity. It was a little square pool. The edge was white, the same texture as the cubes. Long, thin prisms of translucent crystals floated above, its clarity only rivalled by the water below.

She stared into the calm, crystalline surface, and the reflection that was clearly painted there. She looked into herself. A feminine face, presumably young; she had never remembered how old she was. Deep, large eyes with stunning black pupils and long, elegantly curved eyelashes. A small, delicate nose and thin lips. Her face was of a light complexion, nearly flawless and without a mark. Her long, purple flowed down her shoulder, interspersed with strands of black and silver. A ruffled bang covered parts of her forehead.

Memories flushed back. She tugged at her black-and-silver vest uneasily---she had remembered it to be white. But well, fashion would be only another mystery waiting to be solved. Other memories were more important.

I am Vindeus. A traveller. I have traversed this planet to where no one had dare gone before.

She remembered how she came here. Defeating a wild Snarbolax, she had it tamed and rode it all the way, through innumerable forests, mountains and swamps. And then…

Then she couldn’t recall. As she pushed further, an immense headache seized her.

A giant anvil seemed to have banged into her head. Failing to control herself, she let out a loud, agonizing yelp.

What was that…

The residing pain of the immense seizure caused her to bend down and breathe heavily, creating ripples in the still water. The ripples sent more memories to sprawl into existence.

Abruptly she rose, walking quickly over to a patch of bush where she believed her weapons and equipments to have been hidden. She retrieved her cloak, frowning---the colour had again changed into a dark purple. Same with her weapons---lying there were some fine pieces which she didn’t recognize.

She picked up the blade and studied it closely. It was a lacklustre, black blade with a purple glow. Long and slightly curved, it exhibited an explicit perception of death.

Child of Darkness, let this be my blessing.

How come...She had wanted to refused this gift. Yet she knew by heart what it was named.

Acheron.

The name sent more echoes into her skull.

Echo. Echo…

Her guild? Did she even have a guild?

Reality Echo.

She was more confused than ever. This place was not intended for her to stay on. She had to leave.

Things will sort themselves out later. I have to go back.

Picking up her cloak and draping it over her body, she started off towards the reality. The new acquired blade hung on her shoulder, smiling menacingly from behind.

Things will get better.

She exited the bright sanctuary to control the darkness beyond. Yet that was not where she belonged. She abhorred the darkness and the chaos.

Child of Darkness...she joked.

Where do I belong?

“!”

With a gasp Mira scrambled down from her bed. She sat on the floor, leaning against the bed frame, exhaling sharply. Placing her hand onto her chest, she could feel her heartbeat---quick, rash, even urgent.

“What was happening…?” she murmured. A slight tugging was felt below neck; she looked down. The chain of runes she wore hissed slightly. She touched the central one; it was extraordinarily warm. With a delicate finger she deliberately traced its contour and inscriptions, feeling a electric tinge go up her fingers. Viewing closely, she could spot a slight glow and a small surge of vapour that escaped the rune’s porous surface.

In a single stroke her fingers scanned through the rest of the runes. A low chorus of humming was heard, one of danger and urgency.

“Tell me,” the humming intensified.

“What has disturbed the flow.”

Light blue emanated from the chain of runes, seeping through the pores and onto Mira’s face. Suddenly, they lifted themselves into the air, edging slowly towards her. She gasped faintly.

She tapped into the runes, sensing the irritated flow. She felt, beneath the seemingly correspondent order of nature, a novel shadow of death. As she drilled deeper she saw it; a great current of purely destructive emotion, rising unopposed through the desolated depths.

It was...something devil. Something that wouldn’t follow the rules, that did not abide to the laws and balance of life and death. It was seductive, elusive, delusional. And when it danced, rejoicing in its macabre glory, the world danced with it.

This is not good. What has unleashed you from your stupor?

Mira had no answer of that. As the runes faded, her mind became increasingly disturbed. She knew the dark image would kept her from sleep tonight.

She rose and went for the door, retrieving the cloak that she had hung there earlier. In the darkness her vision was sharp; closing the door in silence, she travelled noiseless through the corridor, through the evacuated, dimly-lit common room, and finally out of the camp.

The huge, metal door glided into its original position, leaving Mira alone in the wild. A single step out of the door, the difference was already so obvious. Contrary to the static, inanimate suspension inside, the night here teemed with life---and danger.

Outside the landscape were but different shades of black. The trees and shrubs that comprised the front view were a more solid black, their contours sharp and distinct. Behind swirled the mists, pale and blurring, a complex shade of deep, unnerving grey. The mountains and canyons rose sharp in the distance, a milky shade of monotone extending into the horizon.

The night was not silent. The wind was strong, hustling, sending the tall, swerving trees to brush against each other; the noise was soft but perplexing, constantly reminding her of a particularly grimness. There were squeaks: nocturnal animals, insects, the unstable, drunken pendulum motion of a tree about to topple.

More prominent was the sound heard at the ambience. A low rumble, a consistent grumble of rocks against earth, perpetual like the ceaseless groaning of a volcano about to erupt. Ambers leapt into existence, illuminating the swathes of thick mist. Mira blinked. Not an illusion.

An ill omen. Mira recited from her past teachings.

Night, what has awakened you from your protracted slumber?

I am here. Alive.

Mira gasped. What was that?

My servant, have you been seeking me?

Mira knew. The hidden malevolence in its eloquent speech was unmistakable.

Come to me, o faithful one. Fall into my reincarnated embrace.

So elusive, sweet and fatherly. Mira was compelled---

I know you have been waiting for a long time. Come to me for the reward I promised.

She felt an inexplicable urge to reach out for the dark, swirling mists. Dangerous, deadly, she knew; but also magnetic and irresistible. Sensing the immediacy of the danger, her runes burned in warning.

She yelped, surprised by the sudden pain, which expelled the manipulating voice from her soul. She recalled one thing: the Goddess Divine never promised her followers any reward.

Why are you hesitating? Come to my reach and receive blessing abound.

Mira refused.

Calmly, she confronted the shadow, “No, you are not who I follow.”

Are you lost, my poor Priest? Let me guide you to salvation.

With that the shadow condensed into a form. A hand, reaching, grappling for her. She stood there, undaunted, not even evading. As the darkness reached her it was rebounded by a sharp jolt of blue flash.

Her runes were burning, projecting an aura around Mira’s frame, preventing the shadow from entering. Hissing, the great, malformed hand knocked against it, unable to break through.

My Priest, what are you doing? Recognise your rightful patron!

“No, you are not the Divinity.” she stated. “ The runes speak it all.”

One day, one day. You’ll know punishment. And I promise the day would be soon.

“Never mind. I serve the Divinity with faith.” she spatted contemptuously. Then she left.

Having switched on the light, she grabbed a piece of paper and started writing.

The rest she would explain when she got back.

Among the bushes she leapt, a flaming figure riding a red wolf. A great battle cry was shouted, followed by a shocking roar of her mount.

The soldiers, marching across the forest, could not react. In a few moments those who took the brunt of impact had all but fallen. The rest of the legion, however, was undaunted. Hoisting their shields, they formed a cobalt wall surrounding the ambusher. She could see more than two dozen guns trained at her, ready to fire and blast off her head on command.

She smiled reassuringly, knowing that the moment wouldn’t arrive. She watched in amusement a scout approaching his officer in scrambling haste, whispering in panic. The officer paled upon hearing the message, and turned to bark an order.

Within seconds the rearguard formed another shield wall opposite to her. Moments later, the Riders charged from the bushes.

With a frantic scurry, the soldiers started firing at the shadows appearing so suddenly. A few were shot down, but more struck their javelins into the wall, striking down the defenders and creating gaps in the legion. The officer, steady as ever, ordered reinforcements to be sent to supplement the scene of war.

This the feminine figure watched and nodded approval.

A good commander there. The decision was almost perfect but…

The one moment of distraction was what she required.

A bloodthirsty grin materialised on her face. At lightning speed she unsheathed her weapon---a burning, jagged fang of a blade with a lava-like texture.

“That was a mere decoy.” she wielded her savage blade, faster than the passing wind, towards the shields in front with a furious slash. With their bulky shields cluttered together, the guards could not evade. Gripping their shields with extra strength, they braced valiantly for the offensive. Behind the gunmen fumbled noisily for the trigger.

“Here’s the real danger.” as the blade was about to contact solid with the shields and get rebounded, it erupted.

Burn with me. A maelstrom of searing flame erupted from the blade, adhering vividly onto the blade and encircled her body. The lead bullets were mostly deflected by the storm; one passed through, leaving a scratch on her face.

Gritting their teeth in defeat, the gunmen reached for the Blaster strapped to their waist; its bullets, in the form of pure energy, could pass through the flame barrier unopposed.

Too late to notice. The sharp noise of metal against metal was heard. The rapid, sucking noise of extreme combustion was also heard. More was the startled, agonizing cry of the defenders.

Tempest. The maelstrom had evolved into a full-scale tempest, a cyclone of red-hot plasma latching its tongue onto any unfortunate passerby. Around it the brave soldiers scattered, thrown mid-air, burning, crying, their efforts rendered completely futile.

Amidst the tempest she felt it---the red-hot, burning temptation of the flames. But before she could reach for it in exultation, she felt a sharp tug to her stomach, followed by a rapid drain of strength. Her arm limped, the flames enveloping distinguished. Not a wisp of smoke was seen.

Victory is already our’s. Scattered and demoralized, the remaining troops, those not charred and blackened, could only become prey.

The officer slumped on the ground, his face dirty, his coolness nowhere. His legs trembled involuntarily as she closed in.

“Ha...Ha..Halfblood…” he stammered. A murky liquid flowed thickly out of his trousers. Her nose wrinkled in disgust. It smelled.

“I am the Halfblood Princess.” she snapped impatiently. Toting her sword, a new burst of crimson flames engulfed his horrified eyes.

It was dusk. Scratching at her facial wound playfully, she studied the map with her subordinates. “So, we’ve won another skirmish today. But we also had quite a few down, and while they could incessantly replenish their forces, we couldn’t.”

“Princess, why don’t we retreat via the Western Pass?” a young warrior suggested.

“Entirely unviable. From what I know, they have put in a considerable number of forces into this operation. Not only would retreating via the usual route,” she pointed finger towards an area of valleys on the map, “bring us into direct contact with the bulk of the Spiral Order,”

“But they would most likely have garrisoned the Western Pass.” another warrior continued.

“Correct. They are more numerous and could afford extensive scouting actions. We couldn’t. If we decided to retreat via that path we would find ourselves smashed to bits in our passage. Which means,” she tugged at her dragon-scale armour, “Our only way to go is further West.”

“Princess, are you sure?” an older one enquired, “That would very soon bring us into the Gloaming Wildwoods.”

The Riders shivered. Dying was one thing, but venturing blindly into the Wildwoods and be torn into pieces to feed its inhabitants was another.

“I know now!” the first warrior exclaimed. “That’s the whole point of their initiative---to trap the whole Dusk Riders here, and either kill us or make the beasts kill us. And with the best force of Almire now gone,” he eyed his dragon-scale clad, flaming commander with awe, “Also the best general in all Almire, they could mount an invasion against the demoralised Kingdom!”

“Thanks for the compliment, Ashar.” she smiled confidently. Its always good to have someone admire you, fight for you, sacrifice for you. “However, we are still going into the Wildwoods.”

The whole group of Riders hushed in unison. They had faith in their Princess, but this was all too risky and courageous.

Facing the glares of disbelieve, she rose. Her large frame, clad with fine, red-and-brown dragon-scale, seemed so imposing with her flaming cherry hair. “No worries. In the name of Atalia, the Halfblood Princess, the Heiress of the Fang, I will you safety.”

The crowd cheered half-heartedly. She shrugged the apprehension away, insteading raising her blade.

“Anyone, or creature, that lies in our way.” she poised the Fang high overhead. With a single thought it erupted into a pillar of scorching heat and glamour.

“Will burn!”

Around Atalia, the awed and spirited Riders cheered in wholehearted unison.

Well after the meeting. The Riders were having a quick dinner---bread, dried meat and cheese. After that they would quickly set camp and sleep. Atalia paced around. Something was bothering her, but she could not figure out.

Fang, what is that approaching? There’s a strange feel in me.

Little Princess, listen carefully.

So she did, placing her ear against the ground. Then she heard it. The sound of an army marching through the vegetation, not far away from their camp. “Curse that.”

Hurriedly she approached her second-in-command, then busy finishing his dinner. “Yes, Princess?” he asked, his voice blurred by the foodstuff in his mouth.

“I need you to get the Riders moving. Now. Move towards the Wildwoods.”

“And you, Princess?”

“I’ll suffice as the rear guard. Don’t worry, I’ll catch up with you.”

“Are you sure this is good? I mean, if the scenario is indeed that we need to evacuate…”

“Worrying about me? Not typical of you. I’ll be safe and sound, Vercin, remember what I promised.”

“OK, Princess. I’ll get them moving. Take care.”

Vercin moved around, barking at his comrades to rise and get mounted. Soon they were ready, on their Duskers, riding out toward the west. Before leaving, he shot a concerned glance at the beloved Princess. She replied with a blatantly confident smile.

The cool night breeze blew around her, lifting her cherry hair, fluttering. It looked alike to the flames that she commanded, twirling and flickering. The dragon-scale armour glistened a majestic red under the faint moonlight. Her short skirt fluttered wordlessly. Donning her exquisite, burgundy shoulder guards and shin guards, she was ready to fight. And she promised herself, she would not be the loser.

Vercin leaned against his Dusker, tapping his foot impatiently. They had reached the verge of the Wildwoods an hour ago, but did not dare go in.

Where was the Princess? He was increasingly worried. Atalia was a strong woman---she had verified that with her bravery and prowess at war. But could she fend off an army, sent to destroy the whole Dusk Riders? He didn’t dare think.

“Captain! Something’s not right!”

“What?” Vercin demanded.

“My Dusker...it couldn’t stop howling.”

“Mine too!” “So is mine!”

“Peace.” Vercin heralded. Though he wasn’t as dominant a figure as the Princess, he was still, in fact, her second-in-command. “This could only mean one thing.”

The fiery shadow emerged from behind. The crystal-clear, confident voice proclaimed, “The Halfblood Princess and her Ash Tail are both here.”

Instantly, the Riders bursted into yet another frenzy wave of cheering. Vercin studied the victorious Princess carefully; there were multiple bullet marks on her dragon-scale mail; her skirt was torn and bullet-ridden; a piece of her shoulder guard went missing and the laces of her knee-length leather boots were loosened.

A few scratches and shallow gashes existed on her exposed arms and legs. But nothing major was inflicted. Sighing with relief, Vercin questioned the Princess in admiration, “Princess, how did you manage to overpower that army?”

Atalia smiled, boastful and vainglorious. “Of course I couldn’t kill them all. Even if the Fang could supply so much power, I simply couldn’t hold it. So I did the clever thing and sniped down quite a few of their commanders.”

Murmurs of realisation spread quickly across the Riders.

Wiping the condensed flakes of blood off her face, Atalia commanded her troops, “Why loiter around? Hurry up and into the Wildwoods.”

Her troops shuffled hesitantly towards the unknown. But after a few steps they stopped.

“Riders, what’s wrong with you? Where’s your self-proclaimed courage?”

“No, Princess…” a Rider stuttered, “something...huge...coming towards us…”

Indeed. The unknown beast stampeded across the earth, howling ferociously. In a great leap it pounced out of the woods, knocking an unfortunate Rider miles backward. The rest unsheathed their weapons in grave alert.

The beast cocked its head, letting out a long, inflaming howl. Sparks of fire could be seen from its breath. With gigantic, burning eyes and the golden mane emboldened with animated crimson, the beast shed the alerted Riders a derisive glance.

“Don’t worry.” Atalia grinned casually. “It’s an old friend.”

She raised her Fang, pointing towards the great beast. The beast’s eyes bulged upon viewing the blade. Then it burned, roaring, flames congregating onto its body like a new layer of majestic, fiery mane. Responding to the beast, the Fang burned vehemently.

She walked towards the legendary beast, wolf-like but multiple times larger---and multiple hundreds of times deadlier. The beast studied her ominously, but then submitted, lowering itself for her to lightly stroke its prominence-like mane.

You have answered to my calling, Vog.

Which means.

A new era is about to dawn.

Sorry for making things confused, I didn't do that deliberately. But I gotta entertain myself as well ;__;

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This is great so I thought I'll join...

Name: Ardern
Gender: Male
Personality: Humble, usually calm and collected. Kind to friends but solitary to strangers.
Appearence: Short, neat black hair. Tall. When out of combat he wears a wears a dark navy hoodie, usually with hood up. Wears black combat trousers.
Loadout: Polaris, Voltedge, Sudaruska, Grey owlite shield, Divine mantle and veil.
Catargory: 7

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Vivideus
I mean

Why no one apply to category 1. You can post up to a million entries at once and they'll most likely be accepted.

OK...I srsly need some feedback on the length and duration between each post. Too long? Too short? Post too often? Not often enough? Please help.

Edit: I'll do a reply to all character applicants and talk about what I want them to be in the story later, perhaps tomorrow or the day after. I could always fit it in for you as my story enables extreme flexibility. Love!

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Dunno.

Feedback? A little too long. And you saying that english isn't your first language. That's crazy. You're AWESOME.

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Vivideus
Herpyderpy is Hurrdurr!

Edit: Topo you doing Char. Apps? I desperately need spare names for category 1 and 2 :3 And feel free to spam more hot guiz/galz for my use ><

English is not my first language. I am still studying IB Prep year now, and I don't plan to do higher level next year...too hard for meh
As for writing, I think that if you have a heart and you can dream, you are awesome. Grammar and literary devices and everything else added can't catch up to one thing---your dream.

That's what I've conjured in my month in Australia:
"What I write are words
What I compose are sentences
What I tell are stories
What I weave is fantasy
What I create are worlds"

"What I illuminate is my soul
What I redeem are my dreams."

I think that explains it all, what I write, how I want to write (though great gaps exist between ability and wishes...). At times like this when I have written 2.5k a day I felt strangely tired...and a bit philosophical. And derpy.
And its too long. But I can't stop :<

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Critzer
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Umm, just letting you know i edited my app so just read the new parts. BTW, it is kinda 'rushed' because i was mainly like "JUST TAKE IT, TAKE MY CHARACTER AND MAKE SOME MYSTICAL MAGIC WITH THAT IMAGINATION OF YOURS!!!!"

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Effervescence
Too long? :3

You might want to shorten the chapters a bit Viv :3 But other than that it's great :D

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Feline-Grenadier
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This isn't too long.

If you wanna read long, you read the Encyclopedia Brittanica.

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Sirius-Voltbreaker
Application

Name: Stark-Nova(or stark)
Race: Isoran/Valkrie
Story: He was an orphan who was abandonded after birth. He was all alone until Valkryies found him. For the next few yeara, they cared for him and trained him. They imprinted themselves on him in a way. Much like fang was but it wasn't an expirement. He had valkrie wings which with he could fly,(don't need to add that) and he was very fast. So fast it looked like he could teleport. The valkries found armour left of deas knights and gave him them. He was very strong. But one day scientists came looking for the valkries for expirements. They were all killes. He was found whimpering under the rubble. He was brought back as a recruit but he immedeiately surpassed everyone. He then fell in love with another knight it had actually been his firat time in a group because before he coukd always handle himself. They were going to take diwn the snarbolax. But when they came she was impaled by a spike. Then in rage, WITHOUT the beast bell he slashed through the beast. He was too fast. When he got back he never and vowed not to love or make friends since everyone close to him dies. He became one of the spiral order's best. Even though everyone knew he was powerful no one ever teamee with him. He didn't let anyone. This was because when he waa bullied, he challenged the person to a lockdown match. He beat him down and the bully pleaded but Stark codly stabed his weapon through his heart.
Abneilities: Can regenerate health slowly.Very fast Dual wields and has an ability when he rages and is so fast he can only be detected with sound since me moves so quickly.
Age:17-20 (don't care much)
Weapons: Dual welds a shock infused final flourish and a fire infused Barbarous thrin blad. Also has a shock infused winmillion and fire infused callahan.( loves fire and shock.)
Armour: Divine helm and chaos cloack.
Shield: shield bracelet. I allows him to sheild but he doesn't need it since he is really fast.
If he needs a little nef that's ok. He doesn't need the shield, or callahan really.
I rather him to be good and to not die.