-[Fan-Fic]-Cradle: Two Paths Chapter 11(Interactive Story)VOTING ENDS WITH 10 VOTES

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Trolololololololoe's picture
Trolololololololoe
I choose

A

Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

A

Doomskull's picture
Doomskull
Sowwy

Well, I don't mean skill or weapon wise, like, coordination wise. We just can't work together.

Colray's picture
Colray
Toys.... :)

I like the sound of new toys, hoping for a rifle of some sort. That sounds awesome.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Hmmm...

I may have given too much time in the voting period...

Hazardous-Anomaly's picture
Hazardous-Anomaly
"Mercy rule"

Could have the vote go to 10 and cut it off when it gets to 6 of a certain side. Raise it higher if need be

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Ah ha!

Thats a good idea…thanks Bombardier!

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Then, according to Bombardier...

Choice A has won! More than 6 votes have gone for A.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Chapter 3: An Saint or a Sinner

Choice A: Find the Recon Team

Will and his team sat in command, waiting for the elevator to the Gremlin stronghold. The silence was unsays, if they faced something similar to what was at the Intel Center, the mission could be extremely dangerous.

"So," Said Doomskull, "What crazy errand do you think the Order has us up to now?" Will looked at him strange.

"Whaddya mean?" Doomskull smirked.

"Well, you're good enough to be a Vanguard, but the Order hasn't done it yet. You ever wonder why?" He said. Will tightened his fists. Eve elbowed Doomskull, and Oberon, who was sitting on Doomskull's other side, elbowed him too. Will began to speak, but Kora came in and interrupted the conflict.

"Well, thanks to you Will, the weapons were in a good enough condition to be mass produced." Kora said, handing the team their new weapons. Doomskull declined the offer.

"I got enough firepower right here," He said, hefting his Warmaster hammer. Kora looked at him weird, but shrugged.

"I guess you don't want the Ballistics-Mod Mjolnir Hammer I have in the back." She started walking away. Doomskull's eyes widened, and he chased after her.

"Hey, wait up! I changed my mind, ok?"

*****The Clockworks, Depth 23*****

Will and the team descended, the air getting hot and musty as they got closer and closer to the Gremlin fortress. The fortress itself was a thing of steel and fire, smoke billowing from the towering smokestacks. Gremlins were patrolling the bridge to the compound. Will looked for any vantage points to attack from. Then he saw a cliff in the distance. He motioned at Nick to get there. Nick hefted his new sniper rifle, and started climbing to the cliff. Eve unfolded Oberon to help Will and Doomskull with the frontal attack.

"On my command..." Will whispered into the comm. "Fire!" Nick sniped the first Gremlin, its head shattering into a bloom of red, Will, Doomskull, and Oberon charged forward, cutting a swathe through enemy forces.

Will slashed a Gremlin's arm off, and kicked it over the side of the bridge. Another Thwacker tried to strike him from behind, but Will parried it, and stuck the Gremlin on his sword. A demo threw a bomb at him, but Will was ready. His new sword crackled with energy, and the bomb melted when it touched the energy field generated by the sword. Will rushed at the demo, and decapitated him.

Doomskull slammed his hammer into the ground, the sonic boom launching several Gremlins into the air. He rammed the butt of the hammer into a Gremlin behind him, and spun around, hitting it with the hammer and sending him flying off the bridge. As more Gremlins charged, his hammer started to pulse, and a searing hot beam of light incinerated everything before it. Soon the Gremlin forces at the bridge were decimated, but an alarm rung through the compound. They would be preparing for them inside.

The team cautiously walked into the compound, which was suspiciously quiet. Eve unholstered her pistol. They silently crept down the hall, their steps making echoes. Little did they know, they were being watched. A hand banged against the wall, sending a loud clanging sound through the hall. Its cause swiftly fled into another room. The defense systems were triggered, and Mechanized Howlitzers emerged from the walls. Will activated his shield again, the barrage of bullets pinging off the shield. But the sword grew hot in hand.

"MOVE!" He ordered. They ran down the hallway, the Howlitzers firing like hell. As they made it to the door, Nick rolled a grenade behind them, and when the door closed shut, a bang was heard. The firing stopped.

Behind them was a whole prison complex, but there was no screaming, no clanging of flesh against bars. Gremlin corpses lined the floor, looking as if something sided them open with-talons? Once more it was quiet. Will looked around, trying to spot if the Recon team was around here somewhere. A dark figure flew into a cell at the highest point in the prison complex. It's wings folded back into the armor she was wearing. Her black Armor of the Fallen clinked quietly as she strode towards the half dead Recon team, chained to the wall.

The only conscious member lifted his head up, squinting through his one good eye, as the Gremlins had taken his other one. He spat at the stranger.

"I knew we could't trust you." He rasped. The woman held the man's head up, inspecting his face.

"I had to do it, you were in my way." She replied, her voice calm. It was calm, but it was like staring at a glass wall. Something terrible was behind the glass. Something unpredictable.

'I did it for my brother.' She thought to herself. But even before her choice, she began to question her motives. Was it really for him? She cleared these thoughts from her mind, they weren't important right now.

"I need information." She continued, her hand tightening on the knight's chin. "Where is the Apocrean Cannon?" The Recon knight laughed.

"That doesn't exist."

Down below, Will heard a faint chuckle of laughter above. He looked at the highest cell, and knew it was coming from there.

"Sentience up there, be cautious." Will unholstered his Valiance and crept up the stairs towards the cell. The stranger growled.

"Liar." She snarled. "I was there at the Intel Center. My ears bled, and I will never forget that sound." The Recon Ranger's smile dropped off his face, and the stranger smiled triumphantly. The Recon Ranger sighed.

"That's supposed to be classified information. How did you-" She stopped him.

"I have my ways. Now tell me."

"It's on depth 30."

"There is no-"

"Yes there is. It was sealed off long ago by them. You know, THEM." Said the Recon Ranger. The stranger sighed.

'Getting there won't be as easy then.' She thought. "Thanks anyway." As she was about to walk away, the Ranger stopped her.

"Madea? Don't be a stranger." He said wistfully. Madea smiled a half smile back.

"Don't worry. I won't." A split second later, the Ranger's head snapped, and Madea wiped the blood off her hands. "Sorry Sigil. You would've told." Just as her wings unfolded again, Will stood in the doorway, pointing his gun at Madea. Doomskull, Eve, and Nick did the same.

"I saw you kill that Ranger." Will said, his hands trembling in rage. "Surrender now, and you will be taken into custody for tr-" Madea screeched at them, sounding more like some sort of bird than an Isoran. Her wings spread out in full, making her look like an angel of death. A mighty gust, accompanied by the sting of iron in flesh, blinded Will and his team. The female knight was gone. Will pulled one of the iron feathers out of his arm, and wondered.

"I think I've seen her before…"

*****Spiral Order HQ*****

Will stood before the Spiral Order.

'They look so imposing from up in their high chairs. But down here, they're just other knights. What gave them the power to decide who did what? Why didn't they make me-' Will was interrupted when the official asked him a question.

"I said, what did you find out at the Gremlin base, Defender Elite Soran?" Will nodded.

"The Recon Team was dead. The last surviving member was killed by a winged knight." The officials murmured amongst themselves.

"Leave us, Soran. You should head to the base and assist the knights being attacked by wolvers, they're low on morale and supplies." They dismissed him. As Will left the conference room, Doomskull followed next to him.

"I heard what they said, and I think it's bogus." Doomskull said. He put his hand on his shoulder. "Hear me out. I think we should investigate that knight we saw. She could be real dangerous in the future." Will sighed.

"Look, I don't-" Doomskull stopped him.

"We need to do this."

Choice:
A. Investigate Madea.
B. Assist the now desperate knights being attacked by wolvers.

Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Luguiru

B. help dem knights.

Malkalack's picture
Malkalack
Swag IS a virtue

Heart of Luguiro? YOU DON"T KNOW WHAT YOUV'E DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!
B, nobody likes visceral death.

Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Valor

Luguiru is love. Luguiru is life. Luguiru is love. Luguiru is life.
Luguiru is love. Luguiru is life. Luguiru is love. Luguiru is life.
Luguiru is love. Luguiru is life. Luguiru is love. Luguiru is life.

Doomskull's picture
Doomskull
A

A. Death. Death. I like how you have captured Doomskull's personality. Perfect. Death.

Colray's picture
Colray
Derp

B
still wanna help dem Knights from Wolvers.

Yaaaaay Nick gots him a sniper rifle :D

Great job with that chapter.

Hazardous-Anomaly's picture
Hazardous-Anomaly
A snarled choice

Should she be let free, it could cost many more lives than what the mere wolves could take. A

(P.S what ever happened to 6?)

Aekun
B B B B B B.

B B B B B B.

Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Really Aekun?

A

((OOC: Aekun, you do realize only one will count.))

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Subject 6

Subject 6 comes in I think two chapters from now...

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
War of the Carnations

Also you guys should see my other story, War of the Carnations.

Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Hm...

A is the choice that starts us off on the path where we sacrifice everything to bring down possibly top-baddy Madea from wreaking havoc on the Order...but we won't win against the corruption among the officials...

B is where we can hold out a bit longer, and allow Madea to do whatever the heck she wants for a day...

I can't make a choice >.<

Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Valor

Fel said the letter B, but not A.

She voted B. :D

EDIT: well...they said B last.

Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
All shell will break loose.

Why can't they send one of the commandos in with a couple of other knights to help the base? Wouldn't that make more sense than sending in the guys with the new super weapons who just found an anti-hero/neutral that's more of a threat?

I say A. The Order needs to step up their game. Those four (five?) aren't the only knights you have.

Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Valor.

"Leave us, Soran. You should head to the base and assist the knights being attacked by wolvers, they're low on morale and supplies." They dismissed him. As Will left the conference room, Doomskull followed next to him."

Although they didn't directly say it, they gave the team orders. Orders that they should follow by helping out those knights.

Also:

"I heard what they said, and I think it's bogus." Doomskull said. He put his hand on his shoulder. "Hear me out. I think we should investigate that knight we saw. She could be real dangerous in the future." Will sighed."

How do they plan to 'investigate' the knight? They have no leads. It's a waste of time to try to investigate a single knight when multiple others are dying at that very moment.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
@Valorai

Do what any other detective would do: Go back to the scene of the crime. Something like that anyway.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Sonosuke

The Gremlin War has stretched the ranks thin, Will and his team are the best knights they have at hand right now.

Flix-The-Ninja's picture
Flix-The-Ninja
A for ze win

I choose A. Investigating cant be all that dangerous and life-threatening, right?

Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
All shell will break loose.

Like I said, why not send one of their commandos? I'd understand if they're all already fighting somewhere else, but seerusly though.

Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
@Valorai

I swear, if Psych takes your misinterpretation of my indecision, I'll write a chapter in one of my fanfics including the death of all your characters \(OuO)/

((jkjk, but I seriously cannot vote this round :P)

Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Valor.

Love you too.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
O-O

Well then I guess the limit is 9 votes this time. A has won. And that fan-fic, feline...I'm scared.

Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
All shell will break loose.

I'm sure Feline was talking about Val's characters... right?

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Chapter 4: A Sister, a Murderer, and an Anarchist

Madea looked at her sleeping brother. He was so thin. So fragile. She needed to get him some food. As she was about to walk out of the door of the small apartment, her brother mumbled.

"Mommy...? Mommy...? Why are they taking her away...Madea?" He trembled with pain. "My whole body hurts. I'm really hungry..." Madea cradled his head, sickeningly light, and hummed him a tune her mother used to hum to her.

"Shhhh...I'll make it all better. Don't worry." Madea crooned. "Go back to sleep, I'll go get you some food, ok?" Her brother nodded weakly. Madea walked out, she had someone she had to meet.

Will and his team made it back to the now Spiral Order held Gremlin Facility, where the Recon team had been killed. The Spiral Order had established another garrison here to ensure that the facility would stay in Isoran hands. Biotechs scanned the area for any clues pertaining to this winged knight.

"What have you found so far?" Will asked. The biotech consulted his datapad.

"Well, we don't have a name or appearance, this knight seems to have been removed from our database. But we can review in the archives knights we have excommunicated over the years."

"Yeah, go do that." Will patted the man on the back and went back to the cell block the team was murdered in. Eve studied the corpses, laid out on the tables the Order sent them.

Will's commset buzzed, and he put a finger to his ear.

"Yes?"

"Defender Elite Soran, you must get to Depth 3 now, we have some very important information for you." Said the worried voice of a Spiral Official on the comm. Will raised an eyebrow.

"First of all, why Dpeth 3, and second, why not my whole team?"

"It's not safe at Haven right now, someone is looking for me, and you're the only one I can trust. I suspect a traitor in our ranks." Will's eyes widened.

"Who? It can't possibly be-" Eve interrupted him.

"Hey, who're you talking to?" She asked cheerily. Will sweated under his helmet.

"I'm just discussing the condition of the wolver base with...uh...Lieutenant Barrus." He lied. Eve nodded slowly, and walked away. The voice on the comm mumbled worriedly.

"See what I mean? I need you here, ASAP!" Will agreed, and left abruptly.

The Spiral Official put down his commset, and put his hand to his bleeding face.

"There, I did it." He cried. "Will you let me go?" Madea smiled.

"Of course." A second later, a bullet sped through the officials head, and killed him. Madea reloaded the official's gun and tossed it to the side. She walked over the the supply depot nearby.

'This should keep us stocked for a good month, a most." She gathered the supplies, and waited for her victim.

Will got off the elevator, and looked around. There was nobody here. Maybe the official had left or something else was happening. In the distance, he spotted the corpse of the official who called him. He started to run over the the corpse, when a black, obsidian blade erupted from his chest. Will coughed up a lot of blood, and dropped his gun. He heard a feminine snicker behind him, and then he knew who this was.

He whipped his sword out as fast as he could, and swung the blade over his head. Another weapon blocked it, and the blade removed itself from him. Will collapsed, supporting himself with his sword. A female knight stood over him, a Warmaster Hammer in one hand, and an Obsidian Edge in the other. Will swung at his opponent, who blocked with the hammer, and slashed across his arm with the sword. He couldn't keep this up for long.

Wings unfolded from the attacker's back, and a great gust of wind came, sending steel blades flying towards Will. He activated his sword's energy field, deflecting the steel feathers, but when his field of vision cleared, a taloned foot kicked him in the face. Will was sent against the wall, next the the official's body. He grabbed the gun on the floor and fired, catching one of Madea's wings, and sent her spiraling towards the ground.

Will dragged his sword up to bring the hilt down on Madea's head, but she knocked him back with her Warmaster Hammer, disarming him. Will was vulnerable.

"End of the line, Defender Elite." She hefted her hammer back, but a barrage of bullets from behind threw her onto the ground. Nick, Eve and Doomskull were on the elevator, guns smoking. Madea laughed a tired, fed up laugh. She unfolded her wings, and flew into the air. She threw a few feathers at them as she left, but they were easily deflected. The team rushed over to their commander.

"Where were you, you should have told us!" Eve said. Will grimaced.

"Sorry..." He blacked out.

When Will woke up, he was at the hospital again. Aekun and another commander stood by him.

"Ah, Defender Elite, glad to see you're awake." Said Aekun. The other commander nodded. "We have a job for you. That wolver base has a supply caravan traveling to it, and we need you to escort it. The pathway to Depth 8 is a treacherous one. The mission begins when you show up, but you should get there as fast as possible. MechTeka would also like to brief you on another mission."

"Also," Said MechTeka. "I had one of my lieutenants help an attack on another Gremlin facility on Tier 3. It's the Gremlin's experimental weapons base, so taking it would be a great addition to our arsenal." The two commanders left, leaving Will with another decision.

A. Help the assault on the Gremlin base
B. Escort the supply caravan

Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
I CHOOSE

option A

Also, when is War of Carnations starting?

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
War of Carnations

When I have enough peeps, I only have like 4 or five.

Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

A

nobody cares about the knights with the wolvers ;_;

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Wolvers

You know, they're the invincible Perma Frostifurs that really can't be killed. Those knights are getting slaughtered.

Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

I change my vote to B

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
:)

Charity. Charity for knights wounded by wolvers.

Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

if you excuse me, I'm going to make 5 alts and make them all vote B

I don't know why I'm doing this when I am a wolver

Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
...

Alright, it's a definite A. We're going to lose some ground, but we can always regain it with the CUTTING EDGE TECH we stole from the Gremlins.

Well, just because it's experimental doesn't mean it's powerful...but hell, if the Order can't keep up the fight with its current equips, then might as well get a diverse arsenal instead of a quantitative one.

Robo-Drilldigger's picture
Robo-Drilldigger
Super...

Option A

I noticed something in the last chapter, does Eve have a crush on Will? It sounds like it...

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Nobody?

Darn you guys hate those knights fighting Perma-Frostifurs over there XD. And I might throw a wrench in the gears sometime...

Trolololololololoe's picture
Trolololololololoe
...

I was gone for too long which is why my RP died...
I choose option B but I probably won't be counted...

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Why Not?

Why don't you think you won't be counted? Every human is worth something!

Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Worth of a human?
Trolololololololoe's picture
Trolololololololoe
Thoughts

Depending on the next part goes, this is what I am thinking.
A: The team met up with Betrayus and advance through the assault until they reach the boss of the place (Which I am going to create tomorrow) and battle against it.
B: The team rush to the unbeatable Perma frostifurs to help and we learn more about Eve and if she has a crush on Will(Like Creeper said, it sounds like she has a crush).
Uh, I am just thinking over here, don't mind me.

Hazardous-Anomaly's picture
Hazardous-Anomaly
A

WE NEED FIRE WEAPONS, KILL FROSTFURS WITH FIIIIRE AHAHAHAHHA

*Ahem*

I mean ya, new weapons might be nice

Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

I'd say A, just to see some actual story rather than the apparent unkillable base of knights who've been stuck for quite some time now. Shouldn't they be dead by now?

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
...Humanity.

Humanity is like a virus. And we are the-Oh wait, no. XD

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
The base...

The base is like a skeleton crew now, almost all the other knights are dead, which is why a supply caravan is coming through with FIRE RELATED WEAPONRY(looking at you, Bombardier)to help them out and drive the frostifurs back to their den, and seal them in.