Is this a forum roleplaying game, or a fanfiction written entirely by Creeperlucario?

I don't generally ask that an RP have lots of lore, but what lore it does have should be solid. Your current lore on the Swarm does not appeal to me. From what I gather, the Swarm is generally accepted to be much as its name implies - swarm-like, similar to an ant colony, where individualism is at a minimum. Depending on how far you want to take that concept, you could either model it after the Zerg from Starcraft or model it after the RP "Hours Till Midnight." In either case, individualism simply does not exist in the Swarm. Players cannot properly control characters that have no individual characteristics.

Also, try this, this or this for Sir Percival. I hate Sonic-themed characters.

Hey! Why'd you graveyard it? I was just trying to help you. There's no harm in editing your opening post.

And I was even toying with making a character app. I wouldn't have said anything if I wasn't the least bit interested.

Creeperlucario is a female? I'll need confirmation on that one.

Anyways. I'm neither joking nor toying with him/her. I'm offering constructive criticism (I think).

I'd like to hear from Creeperlucario now.

God, Thin. Don't just show up at an RP and start criticizing. Nobody invited you to do so, and you came across a bit condescending, no offence intended.

Bump, gonna keep this alive until Creeper is feeling better

/thumbs up

Just gonna bump this....

I am sir keep-head-downicus, of the bans almost over realm.

Why not? I'm willing to give it a go if you are.

^

I might say that all the time now

I'll make an app even if I can't but an apocrean would be sort of an in between species. In between swarm and demon.

Name: "The Finder"
Birth Date: 02/14/2450
Appearance
Race: Demon
Abilities:

• poisonous spine volley, the equivalent of Blight Needle
• infected claw swipes, the equivalent of Dread Venom Striker

Skill: venomous fangs, a bite that injects cursed venom into an opponent. The venom is replenished every 5 minutes.
Personality: Burdened with Multiple Personality Disorder and Schizophrenia, the Finder is a rotten, cannibalistic monster with an aptitude for hunting her 'fellow' humans. Her senses and instincts have been honed after decades of constant hunting; her eyesight rivals a hawk's, and her hearing and smell rival a dog's. She is prone to laughing her head off one minute and snarling angrily at you the next.
Bio: When an unfortunate injection of Dark Matter forced her bonded mind to split, she descended into insanity from sheer agony. Left with only fragments of her mind, she became schizophrenic and began seeing everything as an obstacle, and every human as a monster. It wasn't long before she started hunting them for sustenance.

Why would she help the Swarm?

Nobody knows. Many suspect it's because she was partially infected by it. Some say she pities its condition. Others think it may be that the enemy (Swarm) of her enemy (humans) is her friend (Swarm). Unless anybody manages to ask her, hear an answer, and live to tell the tale, no one will know for certain.

DONT MENTION 9. THAT MOVIE IS TWISTED BEYOND BELIEF. AND... IT CORRUPTS LITTLE BIG PLANET.

No, that's Thinslayer's own character, all original. He commissioned the picture to be made on his own, and The Finder is more akin to a possessed Gwen than anything else.

@Malkalack

The original script for 9 was written 3 years prior to the release of LittleBig Planet. They're in no way related to one another. ^-^

...and look at all the subtle thematic hints they drop around the movie. Same thang for Wall-E. They may seem a little lackluster on their own (cuz trailers lie and 13 year old faptards seem to have problems with focusing), but if you really just see all the big AND small details, they're great movies.

You have to watch it man.

DUDE

FELINE

KNOWS

HER MOVIES.

Me gusta. :)

Somebody put this black beast down; who let it out of the slaughterhouse?