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The Swarm's Final Stand (RP Discussion thread, Accepting apps)

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Tue, 03/25/2014 - 16:56
#51
Colray's picture
Colray
me

I'm here

Fri, 03/28/2014 - 15:22
#52
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Graveyard...

Really no interest...

Fri, 03/28/2014 - 16:14
#53
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Wow.

You have four apps. FOUR APPS!! That's plenty! You could totally start the RP with four apps.

Fri, 03/28/2014 - 18:54
#54
Captain-Llama-Bra's picture
Captain-Llama-Bra
Llama to Victory!

She probably just doesn't want to commit to running it.

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 08:03
#55
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
@Thin

I wasn't feeling well for 3 days and when I checked, nothing else changed which is why I said "Really no interest." If no new posts come in 3 days, that's proof no-one really has interest in this RP...

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 08:49
#56
Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
Behold, the evil squares take over the world!

I haz interest

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 08:57
#57
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Love-Puppy-Amy

Lack of activity doesn't prove disinterest; it only proves that nobody has anything worthwhile to say.

For my part, I was still waiting on you, and a bit puzzled at your inactivity.

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 09:00
#58
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
First...

Take it out of the Graveyard.

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 10:41
#59
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
An old app to get you alive and kicking.

Name : Empyrea

Gender : Female

Race : Demon (Lord - Class)

Appearance :

http://static1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20121216001353/typemoon/images/f/f...

Abilities :

Flight - Sprouts a pair of black feathery wings from her back, allowing her to take flight. Helm Guards will activate and appear, and her greaves and boots are given a talon-like appearance, as though she were a Hawk. Longest period of flight she can do without expending too much energy is for half a minute. Extending beyond that will slowly drain her health. Also increases melee damage (given how she's using her talons and gravity to add more force)

Theta - Allows her to enter an ultra-focused, body-straining state that increases her speed and attack exponentially. Attacks damage her twice as much, though, and she becomes blinded to most colors (makes it hard for her to distinct from certain attacks and so forth).

Blood of the Innocents - Her hands become dripping wet with her blood. Contact with weapons will make weapons become heavier to hold, and armor becomes grimy and hard to move in. Takes a minor part of health out of her.

Iron Feathers - Tosses feathers as if they were knives. They do little damage, but if not blocked properly can stick onto flesh and tear the body as time goes on. Some feathers go deep. Using this while flying deals more damage with an AoE same size as Ironech Destroyer.

Riposte - Deflects a melee attack and returns with a powerful strike using a different limb. Deals less damage, but pushes the enemy back.

Overcast - In Empyrea's shadow, the air becomes dry, hot, and dead. It gives a feeling of discouragement and lethargy.

Personality : A businesswoman, most would say, would summarize her. She does everything for the sake of her comrades, and she won't hesitate to stoop to doing the lowliest, most abominable things for her nation. She takes pleasure in little but the downfall of other demons, oddly enough. But that pleasure almost never comes, for she is obedient before she is over-indulgent. She is, in essence of her name, the demons' Empress by her actions.

Sample Chapter :

Empyrea, as she was every day, was calm. On her lap, a dark-haired, white-skinned boy slept. He seemed no older than three, a mere toddler who still spent more time dreaming of utopias than living in real dystopias. She was humming to him an enchanting tune, a tune that was eons old, one that had sat in an old tome on the nightstand next to the throne, the throne she was sitting on.

It wasn't her throne, but because she was instructed to sit there and hum a tune, there she sat, humming in her honey-sweet voice, though soft and weak, as honey is when it ages. In her lap, the child slept, a prince : heir to an old overthrown demon, once supreme even to the Leaders today. Dormin was his name, and he would remain quiet for not much longer.

But Vantioch's messenger had delivered a call to arms, a call heeded by her every time it came. As his indentured servant among the host of other servants, she would have to follow him close behind.

The prince of darkness, Dormin, would have to be content with the voices of his maids of distant relations. His sister would sing him lullabies no more from that day on. He would continue the legacy alone.

As for her...it was doubtable she would be even able to sing a lullaby.

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 11:32
#60
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Hey...

Those abilities look awfully familiar! Madea...

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 11:51
#61
Colray's picture
Colray
im here

And interested... I have nothing to say, only waiting for the RP thread to appear

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 13:21
#62
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Hm...

Give me a bit, trying to figure out how to start the beginning...

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 13:31
#63
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
@Psych

She's actually the spiritual predecessor for Madea XD

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 13:52
#64
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
RP's up

Also Feline, your character is accepted.

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 14:20
#65
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Guardians? Crystals...?

Now, this has a good start where both the demon and Swarm forces are getting acquainted, but Guardians(Wardens) don't have crystals on their backs. That's only for Trojans. Not to be condescending, but these are some plot holes you should consider revising.

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 14:22
#66
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Arkus...

Arkus is technically a guardian who happens to have a crystal... If you battled him in-game, he has a crystal similar to a Trojan...

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 14:39
#67
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Arkus

An excellent point, which is taken in with respect, but not everyone is Arkus. Think of criticism as a cheat sheet for a good story.

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 14:43
#68
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
@Psychnade

Modified the beginning to make some more sense...

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 14:49
#69
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Excellent!

Wonderful! Looks good now, I will make an app!

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 15:11
#70
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Here, Have My App!

Name: Mr. Matter

Gender: Male

Race: Demon

Appearance:
http://d1vr6n66ssr06c.cloudfront.net/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/0090.jpg

Abilities:

Phasing- Mr. Matter can turn into black vapor, allowing him to travel quickly between distances, and pass through walls and floors.

Possession- Mr. Matter can puppeteer someone from a distance using ancient spells. This renders him immobile as he controls the other person or being.

Masquerade- He can shapeshift into anyone he's previously killed, but a brand in the shape of a violin will always appear on the back of it's palm. Look for that if you think someone is really Mr. Matter.

Personality:
Mr. Matter is...volatile. He is extremely unstable. The "man" may look like an angel, but don't be fooled. He can go from dark and somber to jolly and eccentric. He is a constant sadist and enjoys pain and suffering. He often kills by snapping necks or turning people against each other with possession and masquerade. In his time he often walks around playing a violin he can summon at any time. A very thin, slender blade is hidden in the bow.

Sample Chapter(Because Why Not :D):

Mr. Matter, that's what they all used to say,

They'd chant my name, to the last of their days

Mr. Matter, why do you run?

Mr. Matter, Mr. Matter...

The knight woke with a start. The quietness of the garrison smothered him like a blanket hung over a corpse. His partner was still hammering away at the terminal, monitoring the security systems.

"Sheesh man, how long are you going to be there?" The knight remarked. He continued to tap away at the terminal. As the knight got closer, he saw that his friend was opening all the doors in the garrison.

"What the hell are you doing?!" He shook him by the shoulders. "This base is supposed to be closed off at all times!"

The knight in the chair took his gun and abruptly shot himself in the head. The other one backed away, afraid and alone, until he bumped into something.

"Hello!" Said a cheery voice. Gloved hands wrapped around the man's face and twisted suddenly, breaking his neck.

"Wonderful, just plain excellent..." Mr. Matter spun his bow sword and walked spryly over to the terminal. He dragged his finger across the keyboard, and it started to smoke. All the lightning shorted out, and all the weapon systems stopped work. Permanently. And the man in the mask vanished, leaving the two dead men with the rest of the deceased in a dark, desolate base.

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 15:19
#71
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
@Psychnade

Impressive, your character is accepted.

Sat, 03/29/2014 - 18:51
#72
Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
Behold, the evil squares take over the world!

You mind if I make some additions to my app? I'll just post again saying the additions

Sun, 03/30/2014 - 02:32
#73
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
@Pipipipipi

As long as it isn't too OP, you might be allowed, just post and I will think about it.

Edit: The next section is out where it shows how close Arkus is to the Shadow Lair's. A boss battle is coming soon...

Sun, 03/30/2014 - 08:05
#74
Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
Behold, the evil squares take over the world!

be 25% Demon, why not be a mix of swarm and demon? (of course he's still mainly swarm)

Add mischievous to personality

Shadow whips: His arms morph into a long whip-like weapon, good range and some shadow damage (peircing too if hit by the needles, can't be used if armor is on his arms)

Swarm Bolt: Shoots several swarm bullets from his mind, deals normal damage

Quill punch: His quills turn to face towards his hand and he punches the target, which deals normal and peircing (can't be used if there is armor on his arms)

Sun, 03/30/2014 - 09:07
#75
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
@Pipipipipi

It looks fine and the changes are allowed.

Sun, 03/30/2014 - 09:07
#76
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Swarm King

Apocrean w/ wings & crown

Sun, 03/30/2014 - 09:38
#77
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

I would have expected a more ominous background for the Swarm King pic.

Sun, 03/30/2014 - 09:39
#78
Captain-Llama-Bra's picture
Captain-Llama-Bra
Llama to Victory!

Whaoh. That must have been a hard outfit to assemble.

}:D

That face is wearing a Prismatic Bolted Vee.

Sun, 03/30/2014 - 09:52
#79
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
@Captain-Llama-Bra

You didn't create an app so why did you post in the RP thread?

Also Thin, nice picture of the Swarm King.

Sun, 03/30/2014 - 09:59
#80
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Hm...

Malkalack = Llama-Bra.

Malkalack made an app you accepted.

Therefore, Llama-Bra gets to post on RP thread.

Sun, 03/30/2014 - 10:54
#81
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Hm...

That does seem odd, I have other names but not other characters... Right then...

Mon, 03/31/2014 - 23:38
#82
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
So...

@Feline: Yes, you can include Devilite emotions but not too much and don't post questions on the RP thread.
@Colray: Nice fight so far.
@The rest: You are able to go to depth 24 which is the graveyard.

Wed, 04/02/2014 - 09:09
#83
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Boss stats

A boss battle is nearly here but only Colray and Feline are the only people doing anything...

Boss battle: Sir Percival and Arkon.

Name: Sir Percival
Attacks: Stab: Simple slash. Multiple slash: Stabs the foe multiple turns (only for charges) Fire Spin: Spins around in a fire dealing high damage with high chance of burn.
Ability: Fire Soul: Whenever Sir Percival uses a fire move, her damage is a lot higher.
Health: 70 bars (Currently 40 bars)

Name: Arkon
Attacks: Long grab: Uses his spear to bring his foes closer. Slash: Does low damage but fast. Dragon call: Summons a dragon ally that helps him deal damage, similar to Lvl 100 Drakon.
Ability: Strengthened armor: Arkon's armor can sustain tons of damage and can't harm Arkon normally until his armor shatters.
Health: 2 bars (Loses 1 when hit when armor value is gone once.)

Wed, 04/02/2014 - 16:47
#84
Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
Behold, the evil squares shall take over the world!

I would be posting more, but I can't because Llama was banned (again)

Can I just pretend my character never encountered Llama's character?

Wed, 04/02/2014 - 18:07
#85
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Hm...

Yeah.

Fri, 04/18/2014 - 19:54
#86
Oroseira's picture
Oroseira
Uh...

Just to ask, what happened to your fanfic? I did apply for it, now I can't find it.

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