OK, I think I have a concrete direction, I'll try to get to this at least once a week for a nice sized update, right now I'm just starting it out. Any feedback you have is appreciated, every now and then the story will branch which means I'll need votes for how things'll go down which means viewer pole time. Till then, please read, feel free to post thoughts and (HELPFUL!) criticisms, and any thoughts about what will happen in the future.