-[Fan-Fic]-Cradle: Two Paths Chapter 11(Interactive Story)VOTING ENDS WITH 10 VOTES

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Feline-Grenadier
...

Well, if we have no idea what's at the Scarlet Fortress, the only logical decision is to...

Go down to Dirty Juan (stupid pun, but the Bachelor advertisements just tempted me to)!

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Colray
should i say it?

Yeah Ima say it... We should have saved dat Wolver base!!! Now Barrus had a bad time cuz of it.

EDIT: I choose B, I like scarlet fortress. It is full of fun.

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Creeperlucario
Amazing chapter

I choose option A

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Psychnade
Umm...

A is to help Eve. And I don't understand what you're saying Feline. I don't watch the Bachelor! :D

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

You know what, forget Madea (for now). I say we help Barrus at the Scarlet Fortress. He's in a pickle because we've been ignoring orders and following Madea.

B

EDIT: Either MechTeka took his Barrage off-screen, or he left it all together.

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Feline-Grenadier
XD

The current Bachelor is named Juan, and it's far enough into the season for him to get...intimate. XD

Anyhow...

I have no idea why we're helping out Barrus when he hasn't told us scrap, so I'd rather help Eve.

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Valorai
Heart of Valor

I completely agree with Sono. How long are we going to ignore our superiors orders for help?

B

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Robo-Drilldigger
You know what they say

"Ladies first" Option A

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Psychnade
Madea

Those wings didn't belong to Madea...

The Black Barrage comes in at the Barrus' chapter.

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Feline-Grenadier
Ugh, fine.

Well, Barrus might get mad at us for not helping, so we'll go to help him.

Changed to B

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

But who else would those wings... belong... to....

Oh....

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Psychnade
The Brotherhood of Apocrea Cometh!

THE BROTHERHOOD COMETH! MUHAHAHAHA!

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Hazardous-Anomaly
How about we skip the trap this time?

Option B

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Trolololololololoe
Help Eve

Option A

It makes sense to try and battle Apocrean's than more gremlins...

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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

A

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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

it's a tie, I think

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Flix-The-Ninja

Psy, we all know which is gonna be chosen. Human curiosity cant be controlled, bro.
(I choose A.)

On a completley unrelated note, Will our choices get the Will, Eve, Doomskull,Nick and other main charectars killed?

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Robo-Drilldigger
Yay

Helping Eve! Barrus can wait for a bit longer since there aren't Perma Frostifurs.

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Now it's a tie.

Feline: A
Colray: B
Creeper: A
Sono: B
Val: B
Robo: A
Feline: A -> B
Blessid: B
Deadly: A
Pipipi: A
Flix: A

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Robo-Drilldigger
@Sono

Uh, you are wrong.

There are 6 A's and 5 B's.

Accept the fact we are helping Eve.

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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

Flix is the tie breaker

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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

Double Post

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

How am I wrong? Unless you want your marshmallows taken away.

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Psychnade
@Flix

Maybe...MUHAHAHAHAHA!

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Now that I think about it, I don't really care anymore whether we help Eve or Barrus. We all know it's gonna be Eve who wins, and that Barrus's team is gonna get slaughtered. Just like the knights who were fighting Perma-Frostifurs that we completely neglected time and time again.

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Colray
D:

I wanted to help the knights getting attacked by perma-frosts...

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Robo-Drilldigger
Eve won, look again!

"Quoted from Sonosuke"
Feline: A
Colray: B
Creeper: A
Sono: B
Val: B
Robo: A
Feline: B
Blessid: B
Deadly: A
Pipipi: A
Flix: A

Look at the list carefully. A then B then A then B then B then A then B then B then A then A then A. If you are looking correctly, Flix made option A win.

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

I don't think you copied that right. The second Feline tag was:
Feline: A -> B
Meaning their first choice doesn't count. Thus the list should look like:
Colray: B
Creeper: A
Sono: B
Val: B
Robo: A
Feline: A -> B
Blessid: B
Deadly: A
Pipipi: A
Flix: A

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Psychnade
....

So which choice is it exactly?

EDIT: IT'S A TIE D:<
coin flip time.

Heads is a, tails is b.

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Robo-Drilldigger
At the moment

Tie

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Alright, hold on... *flips coin*

It's head. A wins.

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Robo-Drilldigger
Yes

Barrus, you need to wait a little bit longer!

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

I just did a Best 3 outta 5. Apparently my nickel hates Barrus. 3 heads in a row should have proved something.

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Psychnade
NICKELS!

Nickels are ruthless monsters man.

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Valorai
Heart of Spam.

Need moar! Can't wait for the next chapter, Psych. I think your writing has really improved!

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Well, at least we'll see the Cult at long last. As for Barrus, good luck.

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Robo-Drilldigger
Bump

Can't wait for the new chapter.

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Psychnade
Chapter 8: The Cult

When you delve deep enough,

When you learn enough,

Power shall be yours, my child.

Then Ascension begins.

-Book of Apocrea, written by The Father

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Rodric scribbled ravenously in his book, pages and pages of failed experiments and notes scattered on the floor around him. Candles burned weakly in his study, while an rusty old record player sung a tune that was both elegant, but psychotic.

"Day 3," Rodric whispered. "The subject has shown signs of extreme paranoia and mental state is deteriorating." He dipped his quill into the ink well, and continued.

"True-Fear is perfected, and soon I shall test it for use by myself." He put down his quill and sighed, twiddling a bloody scalpel in is thumbs and humming. Then Caesar entered, interrupting Rodric's chain of thought.

"Knock, you buffoon. I was thinking." Rodric scowled. Caesar sneered.

"Well, I guess you don't have time for the Father's wishes, do you?" Caesar retorted. Rodric spluttered, then sat.

"Apologies." Rodric said. "Tell me what the Father has to say."

"He says that a most auspicious discovery has been made, he requires your presence at once."

"Very well, tell him I'm on my way." Rodric stood up, scattering more paper everywhere. He took an ebony case, something that resembled a violin case, and walked out the door.

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Kora stood by a console, searching for a signal. Finally, a knight's face popped up on screen.

"Did the shipment of weapons make it?" Kora inquired. The knight nodded.

"The Gremlin technology helped us make some very powerful weapons, ma'am." The knight reported. "Who did you want to send this to again?"

"Will Soran and his team, as well as commander Aekun and Commander MechTeka, thank you."

"Will do." The knight saluted, and the message blinked out.

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As Will and his team sat in the briefing room with the two commanders, a group of knights carrying packages.

"Will Soran?" One of them asked. Will got up and nodded.

"This is another shipment of weapons from Kora, she says you'll need it for wherever you're going." They took the weapons, and headed down the elevator.

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They arrived at Depth 29, a very old and unused part of it. Vines hung from the ceiling, and there was little light coming from the dim and flickering lamps.They looked around aimlessly in the dark.

"What are we looking for exactly?" MechTeka asked. Eve was feeling around a wall that looked newer than its surroundings.

"It's here somewhere..." Eve said. "I can't seem to..aha!" A loud click bounced off the walls, and a secret door opened, looking out upon a vast cavern. Light was coming from the bottom of the abyss.

"The path is clear now, and my friend's footsteps aren't the only ones here..." Eve said, examining the hall. "Come on, lets go." She led the group down the hallway. What they saw was unbelievable.

A huge, yet abandoned city was below them. Towers and fortresses that were probably proud in their formers days were now dark and decrepit. Vine encrusted statues of arcane figures stood out in the sea of abandoned buildings. It was a reflection of what was once great, but no longer was.

"By the Core..." Will whispered. "What is this place..." The faint clinking of boots echoed in the distance, interrupting their awe and curiosity.

"Something else is here..." Will said. "Stay vigilant for any hostiles." The team primed their new weapons, and walked into the silent city.

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"Disciple Drace, we have detected a group of intruders at the west gate." Said a cultist. "Orders?"

Drace took out her spyglass and gazed out at the west gate, her eyes following Will and his team descending the staircase into the city. She turned back to the cultists and the others behind him.

"Bring them back alive." She said, in a voice that was void of humanity. "Rodric is in need for sacrifices."

"As you wish." The cultist said. The group vanished in a haze of black vapor, leaving Drace alone in the tower.

"Hey Drace!" A cheerful voice said behind her. A sharp bolt of pain clouded her mind. She turned around, to see a knight. He wore a red flak jacket and helm, a bolted vee on his helmet. A proto crest shined on his shoulder.

"No. Not you." Drace murmured. "I don't want to talk to you right now." The knight laughed.

"Aww c'mon." The knight said. "No warm welcomes for your old buddy Mec-" The knight was silenced when Caesar walked up next to Drace.

"Who're you talking to?" He asked.

"Nobody..."

The knight was gone.

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Will crept down the dark street, their footsteps echoing in the hollow halls of the city. Suddenly, three figures materialized at the end of the street. Eve and Nick aimed their guns, while Doomskull, Aekun, and MechTeka put their swords out.

The three figures just stood there like statues, eerily frozen in place.

"I say we go and get 'em," Doomskull said. "See who they-" A sleep dart embedded itself in his neck, and he instantly hit the ground, unconscious. Will turned back to the three figures, who were now gone.

Will instantly whipped around to block a sword attack that would have cut his arm off. He shoved his attacker back, and fired several times into his chest, killing him. The two remaining attackers were joined by three more, descending from the rooftops. MechTeka swung his new sword, leaving a trail of dark magic behind it. It slashed one of the cultists across the chest, and his eyes leaked purple liquid, sending him screaming in madness.

The other cultists were falling back, their numbers thinning. Nick shot the cultists in the legs, immobilizing them. He was about to finish them off, when Will stopped him.

"We need them alive for information." Nick put away his gun, and Will turned to the hooded knights.

"Who are you?" He asked. "Why did you try to kill us?"

The hooded knight hissed.

"I'll never talk." He seethed. Will crossed his arms.

"Very well." Will said. "You won't be going anywhere, so we're going to call the Spiral Order to pick you up. Then we'll see if your will is as unbreakable as it is."

The cultist spat, and Eve took out her comm unit. There was no connection.

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Rodric kneelt before the obsidian throne, shrouded in shadow.

"What is it you wish of me, O exalted one?"

A voice with the weight of centuries, and seemed to be an extension of evil itself, replied:

"We have been discovered." The Father said. "That is correct, hmm?"

"Yes, but we now have her in captivity and testing the new weapons on her."

"Well, she was followed." The Father stated. Rodric's eyes widened.

"Impossible, the passage was too well-" The father put up an armored hand, and Rodric stopped.

"Go and find them. And bring them here." He ordered.

"As you wish, O exalted one."

Rodric got up, and exited the throne room.

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"Hmmm..." Will thought, and pondered. "Two of you, go back up and bring back reinforcements."

Eve nodded.

"Who goes back?"

Choice:

Pick 2 out of these:

-Aekun
-MechTeka
-Doomskull
-Eve
-Nick

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Creeperlucario
Good chapter

I vote we send MechTeka and Nick back.

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Valorai
Heart of Valor

Aekun and Eve.

I feel like they would be an interesting combination.

Great chapter! The ending choices are neat too, as they are not the normal two paths.

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Robo-Drilldigger
I vote

Aekun and Nick.
Why send Eve along? Apocreans will most likely go after her first (Especially if Avalanche is there.)

Edit: Changing who goes, who cares if Avalanche is there. Eve and Doomskull should go.

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Aw, what? MechTeka's already voted on?

I say Aekun and... hm... Nick.

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Trolololololololoe
*Crackle*

Nick and Aekun

Edit: There is a reason why I am called "Betrayus"
Eve and MechTeka

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Eve is the main reason why we're going down to Depth 30, why would she be the one to go back for reinforcements?

Also, MechTeka found out during your search for Madea that Drace was reborn into the Head of Influence in the Cult. Which is why he wants to try and save her, even if he knows that it's futile. He even brought her old scarf for her to remember (wait a minute).

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Also, here's the tally so far:

Aekun: 4
MechTeka: 1
Doomskull: 0
Eve: 1
Nick: 4

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Colray
hm

I vote send Nick and ummmmmmmmmmmm Mechteka i guess.

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Colray
wonder has been created!

who of the Apocrean cult died? Or were they just other disciples...

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Just the disciples

I think

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Valorai
Heart of Valor.

I vote that we send Sonosuke back to gremlin chatter.

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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

NO!! *throws marshmallows*