Codename - Part 3: A new hero must rise [Chapter 5 now out] (/head falls on laptop "Aiesh, I'm depressing...")

Hai, Chapter 5 is now up. I managed to sneak in a tweak or two here and there, but I decided to finish it tonight, considering my exams are almost over, and only the 'simple' ones remain. Y4Y!

Anyweis, sorry about the ending-part of this chapter, I got back into re-reading Megatokyo, and it got me into a melancholy mood. It's probably a little awkward and depressing in some places, not to mention a bit mood-swingy, but hey...I need a noun, someone give me a noun.

In any case, I'm not going to be returning to forum activity just yet. I think I'll linger back a bit and just write a bit here and there, mostly on the Treasure Vault, I still have life to deal with for another week or two.

Anyway, I'm working on all of my other stories, so let's hope I managed to get a writing spurt and rustle up a few more short-shots...or something...

Bai~~~

An update!

yay

...I want.... moar.....

Gets laptop and rubs face onto the screen...

Moar...

Noun is a noun.

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good to have you back, Psycho! Thank you also for the reminder yesterday to double-check this out and read it through - even though you were critical, it still looks good.

Overall, it did feel like this chapter left a lot of unanswered questions. The transition from the Roarmy's room to Vanaduke seemed awfully short, but I did appreciate the character elaboration - seemed much more involving, and I'm looking forward to seeing how Drake will take and apply what Max told him. Glad to have Rom back - should have remembered he was one of the missing pieces in this story!

*thought in-between writing...wow, it's already part 3 of Codename? Seems so short of a time frame...*

As you mentioned, you were a bit melancoly with the last section there; it definitely feels like it wasn't the best work you could have put out, but it isn't at all bad, either.

That's what I can analyze for now. :D It's good to see you back online and working hard!

I love this series!!! Keep it up!

Wow... ive read the entire series, and your other stories. like Sacrifice, and One is all it takes. I just want to say you are one of the best writers here and inspired me to write one of my own, Read it here, plz? I can't see any faults in the codename story except for the prominence cannon. Sounds a bit too much like megaman to me. And I have a question, what happened to Mark?

He's gone, he can't hear you.
Isn't he basically megaman and jesus combined into a completely strange protagonist?