Happy are my character alterations approved? I just wanted to know also on an unrelated note ASDF movies FTW and i'm a stegosaurs
Embrace the Dark: ROLE CASTING [UPDATED FEB. 8, REOPENED, view character list for open slots]
Sun, 03/11/2012 - 16:51
#252
Altering my character?
Tue, 03/20/2012 - 03:11
#253
Casting Update
Doing this a bit earlier then I intended but I do really have to sort out the issue of that empty role for Squad 3.
Drake: CONFIRMED- Swordsman/Second in Command OR shared Squad Leadership (?Main/Supporting?)
@Bulby
I know we had an in-game discussion about a certain 'issue' but I think I can work it out and pass 'it' on for another character.
I quite like him in terms of personality and background, only thing I would want to take out is this:
"Straight out of the academy, Drake was drafted into the special forces and was frequently sent on assassination missions on his own and in a small groups of two or three."
The 'assassin' bit would sort of force what his fighting style (stealthy, ninja-like, etc) would be like for me, I would like to keep that open.
The biggest issue is his appearance as he bares too close of a resemblance to the already existing character Jael (who also has a +2 height :P), perhaps you could come up with an alternative look, also depending on some other responses here I may want to switch up what weapons he has, though the final result will have a 'dual' nature regardless.
If you are okay with these changes then I will confirm your character's role, otherwise I will reopen the role for others.
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I also want to confirm these roles, though I won't be mentioning where they appear quite yet:
Jed: CONFIRMED - Gunner (?TBA?)
@Outnuendo
Quite like him as is, I would like to add a somewhat fatalistic outlook to his personality, sort of "Tis a good day to die, no one lives forever" kind of mentality, would go with a sarcastic cynic like you described him as.
For his relations the only one that may come into play during this story is the one with Soro, the others will probably not be mentioned.
In terms of appearance and weapons I must ask to be able to redo his appearance cause, no offense or anything, he looks like he was dressed by someone who is colorblind, he'll have the cowboy-like appearance when I'm done still though. Would you be okay with what I do?
I might switch up his weapons a bit too, he'll still be a pure gunner but I'm thinking about taking out the Peacemaker and replacing it with another Sentenza to be used in a sort of dual-wielding fashion with his other Sentenza, I'm also not sure about the Polaris and Biohazard.
If you are okay with these changes then I will confirm your character's role, otherwise I will reopen the role for others.
Regnan: Unconfirmed - Gunner (?TBA?)
@Windsickle
If I do use her I would want to knock out quite a bit of the paranoia you described, this would alter her personality from your original description. I would also like liberty on her appearance, be interesting to try and come up with a feminine gunslinger.
If you are okay with these changes then I will confirm your character's role, otherwise I will reopen the role for others.
Critias: CONFIRMED- ??? (?TBA?)
@Xairathan
I believe there is a place for him and Torrus as well, I know this is a pre-existing character of yours so I'll try to stick to your description as much as I can, personality and appearance wise.
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Characters I am seriously considering:
Artini
Captain Hammer
Clide
Karan
I don't have any specific comments about each of them, yet, but they are been highly considered for roles at the moment depending on how the story goes.
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Some replies:
@Raults
This is an unfortunate case of too little too late, your character would likely have gotten a role earlier but as things are he's essentially another Urrick, so I'm not likely going be using him, sorry.
@Remiliaoftheearth
I was actually quite liking your character until I got to part on her appearance, the character I was envisioning till then was not a bomber type at all, I liked the personality, even the pet a bit (if she did make it in I would have it as a voltail instead though), but the strict appearance (and weapons?) is whats stopping me from including her right now. I also would cut the full name down to something like Remilia too.
@Gzilla
I'm not quite sure what you changed, you may want some new character submissions altogether at this point cause the ones you currently have still don't work for me.
@Kaijuhunter
You seem to be obsessed with having your character related to Kozma in some way, what's up with that?
@Pow...
Cobalt Knights = Crew, I'm not crediting you suggesting something that already exists.
The issue with everyone of your characters is the fact there really isn't one, your giving me a list of over the top, over powered weapons and armor with a little name tag sticker on them, there is nothing to work with besides a pile of empty armor and idle weapons, stop focusing on what kind of ridiculously powerful (which I will not use) gear your character will have and more on the actual character instead.
Mon, 03/12/2012 - 16:40
#254
In response to Happyapathy:
In response to Happyapathy: Well, the paranoia was one of the aspects of this character that really made her so I'd really prefer that it remain somewhat, perhaps not to the degree that I'd written. I wanted her to be someone who is fairly competent and who always has a plan. A very careful and thorough student and observer but at the same time is still imperfect in the fact that she is who she is because of her secret worries, fears, and paranoia. If you were to take this away, I must ask: what do you have in mind?
As for her appearance, I thought she already looked pretty neat as I actually handpicked the pieces on SpiralSpy, but if you have some ideas for something more interesting, well, go ahead. She's a very practical person so nothing particularly flashy or flamboyant.
Mon, 03/12/2012 - 18:15
#255
im ...not ...on ...WAAAAAAAA
(shaters into a miieon pecies)
Mon, 03/12/2012 - 21:00
#256
@Happyapathy
To be honest I really didn't like the part about him being an assassin either. I just wanted to give the impression that Drake is a One-man wrecking crew. I don't know if you've ever seen movies or documentaries of U.S. Navy SEALS, but when I think of Drake I see him like this and not so much as a ninja.
Also, the only reason I wanted him to be +2 tall was because of the way the helm looked in comparison to the armor (it made him look a little more menacing). I'm ok with him being normal height though and this is an acceptable alternative.
The weapons on the other hand, I would like to keep on him. They match his armor and the Glacius is one of the coolest-looking swords I've ever seen. That being said though, if it means the difference between him making it in or not, then I'm fine with you changing his weapon load-out. After all, given his background, it stands to reason that he should be able to pick up any weapon he comes across and use it extremely well.
Does this mean the shield will stay as the wyvern though? And will he still have throwing knives?
Thanks. And I'm glad I was able to contribute to your comic. ^_^
[Edit]: I'm working on some appearances. Give me some time and I'll see what I can come up with.
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 03:43
#257
Whoa!
i was scrolling though the comments to see where this thread was going, and i saw that i was seriously considered. wow...
What i'm trying to say is, anything you want to change with his character, you may. Be it personality, load out, relations, though i still would like the amnesiac part of it.
Thanks! -Varsian
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 09:11
#258
Pow is being revised
I'm revising Pow so both he's less OP and he matches my real knight's revision.
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 09:28
#259
Revised Pow
Pow has now been revised. Check pg 4.
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 06:53
#260
@Happyapathy
[Comment Withdrawn]
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 12:35
#261
Weapon
You can give Pow either this or tempered calibur.
Name: Scout Dagger
Rating: 3-star
Description: A dagger adapted for use for Spiral Scouts.
Damage:
Front/Side hit = Tempered Calibur damage (pure Normal)
Back hit = Final Flourish damage (pure Piercing)
Speed: Slightly slower than tempered calibur.
Combo Hits: 3
DMG against All (Front/Side) = 33-115
DMG against Beast/Fiend (Back) = 44-340
DMG against Undead/Gremlin (Back) = 39-258
DMG against Slime/Construct (Back) = 7-77
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 13:05
#262
@Powpowpowpowpowpow
well Powpowpowpowpowpow you are vaery good at statistics.
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 13:18
#263
I really don't know why
I really don't know why people tell me about their character's costumes or weapon stats...
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 13:33
#264
LOL!
May I suggest another character for squad 3? What are the requirements?
ALso, is there a Azure Guardian with its helm p(or is Mighty Colbalt that?)
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 13:36
#265
Yes, you can use Scout
Yes, you can use Scout Daggers to backstab XD
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 14:39
#266
@Happyapathy
Ok, never-mind, negate everything I said in previous posts. I made a helm I actually like better than the wyvern believe it or not.
Here's my final draft of Drake:
http://i1198.photobucket.com/albums/aa460/CaptainCool537/Drake_Alt.png
Hope you like it as much as I do. :P
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 14:44
#267
Also...
I'd also like to take a stab at weapon load-outs if I may as well.
The more I develop this character the less flashy he becomes.
I thought giving him a normal calibur blown up to 1.2 would be better suited to his nature.
That's all for now.
Let me know what you think
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 17:47
#268
My second entry for the 3rd squad.
Name:Remus
Gender: Male
Personality: Overly Protective, kind, Jittery
Appearance/Armor: (If I can re-access Spiral-Spy, I could post a pic) Wears a Skolver Coat and Divine Veil. His costume is the same armour that Warden/Virgil/Arkus wears(but is divine trojan head) including the Guardian Shield as a shield. He has a white personal colour.
Weapons: A Levi, DR, Callahan and DA.
History/Background: A knight who once looked up to Arkus before the Crash and after untill that ''Incident''. When Arkus started going aloof, he was confused and was saddned when he heard of his death in 'The Silent Legion''. Now, he vowed to live up tho the Guardian's Oath and not to end up like Arkus. Now he is always alert.
Relations: His fellow Squadmates.
Pets/Sidekicks: If you want, he has this fiend named Charles who is Chroma sized and is on Remus' head.
Expendability: Your choice.
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 16:34
#269
So my character doesn't fit
So my character doesn't fit anywhere then?
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 17:59
#270
Ooh, want to help!
Name: Nill
Gender: Male
Personality: Energetic, has a comment for everything, the kind of guy who would say something like "Don't worry about me! I'm just over here getting killed by wolvers while you're over there kissing!" Is hardly ever to the point.
Appearance: Blue Seraphic armor and helm.
Weapons: Uses two Swift Flourishes and when far away, uses the Needle Shot.
History: When Nill fell from the sky in a pod, he was nervous, so to keep him from losing his nerve, he made up jokes and comments for everything that happened to him, so now he's totally addicted to doing it. It helps him focus. Instead of mumbling to himself stuff like "3 slimes to the left, turn +90 degrees, strike to the left, then to the right", he mumbles stuff to edge him on. He joined a squad because he liked it down in the clockworks, the exploration mostly, but all of it was fun. (Put him in any squad you want.)
Relations: Your choice
Sidekicks: none
Expendability: Also your choice.
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 20:59
#271
Ok 4th times the charm
Name: Dusk
gender: male
personality: he ranges from being a bit timid to being pessimistic and snide but when with people he trusts or knows he opens up as an energetic happy and charismatic guy.
appearance: bombastic demo helm and mercurial demo suit
weapons: graviton vortex, dark briar barrage, callahan, and triglav
history: even when he first crashed on cradle Dusk was always in the back seat when it came to adventure. He always let other people do it and he backed them up, but that all changed when project R became known to spiral HQ. His whole squad was wiped out except for him because he hesitated from going in to the docking bay and was locked out of the fight. After he fled back and was not blamed but deep down he thought that maybe if he hadn't hesitated his friends would still be alive. Ever since he's devoted his life to helping HQ to discover and explore.
Expandability: up to you
twist degree: up to you
Tue, 03/13/2012 - 19:58
#272
Ok
... Im not accepted, am I? Well, its Ok I dont rage quit over that stuff like Pow does. Btw, Happy, great story! Hope u accept one of the guys i made, but Im content with just reading the comic. Good job you did!
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 06:52
#273
Artini update?
hey happy, is it ok if i update artini? i posted him in the second page, and i want some changes to him that make him less of a loner and more open if thats ok
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 08:24
#274
anything is okay as long as
anything is okay as long as you inform me of changes
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 11:12
#275
@Happyapathy
So, are you going to confirm Drake as the (?Supporting/Main?) for Squad 3 or are you still leaving that open?
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 11:32
#276
@Happyapathy
I've created something here that I intend to use in the future and wanted to give you the option to use it yourself for Embrace the Dark. It's uh, well, I'll just let you see it for yourself.
Note: a modified hurt_hard.dat animation works well for mounting characters on this bad boy.
P.S. If it's possible, I'd like to see Drake get one of these. XD
You won't be hurting my feelings though if you can't find a use for it. :T
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 14:02
#277
Confirmed Drake
@Bulby
I've confirmed your spot, Drake is in. The bike isn't likely to make it in, though there's always a possibility (but man that's cool).
@Windsickle
Main problem I have with the whole paranoia thing is that it doesn't mesh too well with the rest of the character, you have a gunslinging lady (suggests: badass + confidence + femme fatale) speaking in with a Southern US accent (suggests: Cowboy/Cowgirl + confidence + extrovert + brashness) who is an extreme paranoid (suggest: fearful + pessimistic + introvert + conservative) :s, the picture you get from those first two parts doesn't connect with the third all that well as I see it.
@Everyone
If anyone sees or knows Outnuendo and/or Remiliaoftheearth please direct them to come here cause I've been really wanting to hear back from them, also give them a good smack for taking so long >:(
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 14:09
#278
Do I need to edit remus?
Do I need to edit remus?
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 15:26
#279
Thanks
Nice! Thanks for including Drake. And yah, I didn't think it would be easy to incorporate the speeder. I had fun making it though. :T
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 16:11
#280
.
I'm not exactly sure how to put this, but...
Change her however you wish, but I'm making a request here.
Please change her name if you change those things I asked specifically to be kept. She will not be "Remilia" if she is changed in key points such as her personality and appearance.
Other than that, I'm fine with any change you make to her. I would not have put her up had I not been willing to have her changed.
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 16:46
#281
Some Jed stuff
I'm fine with your changes, though I don't understand where you got the whole colorblind part. I made his costume pretty vibrant, with tons of red and yellow...
Also, you'd slap me when I respond in the same day? I'd hate to have you as a boss.
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 17:11
#282
@Bulby
wow dude i wont one (do thay come in red?) @happy can u plese tell me if im in or not you can make any changese u want to my knight.
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 18:22
#283
replies
@Outnuedo
That post got updated, that's why it says today, it's been sitting there for almost a week >:(
Anyways thanks for the confirmation, I have some interesting ideas for your character, maybe its the overly bright scenery around him that's making him look odd in my eyes.
@Remiliaoftheearth
If that's the case do you have any name suggestions? I prefer you gave me one then letting me decide for you.
Personality and background wise I don't plan on any big changes, it's mainly the appearance and weapons I would really like to overhaul, I actually got the image of a agile sword user instead of a bomber if she were to fight in-conjunction with a wolver. I would like to say the part about the wolvers makes her sound like a bit of a nature nut :P.
Also you mention two wolvers in her background but one of them seems to mysteriously disappear, anything about that there? You may also want to consider renaming the wolver(s) too if I change it/them to Voltails.
Feel free to add anything else you can think of.
@Regal-The-Soverine, Echo
I don't see a spot for one of your characters yet, they may have a chance to appear later though, not that I'm promising anything.
@Atrumvindex
You don't need to edit him as I don't have a spot for him, if I do find one I will then see what kind of revision he needs.
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 21:12
#284
I'm afraid I don't understand
I'm afraid I don't understand your logic, Happyapathy. I guess I just don't have the same connotations. Whatever. Do as you wish with her personality then.
Thu, 03/15/2012 - 01:35
#285
Say, HappyApathy, did you see
Say, HappyApathy, did you see my message nominating Greenhorn for the cast at all?
Because THIS long without a definite yes/no or even acknowledging that I posted it is kind of weird.
If you missed it, it's on Page 4 a little above Pow's multiposting spree
Sun, 03/18/2012 - 16:53
#286
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Name: Hallie
Gender: Female
Personality: Has what some would call an adaptive personality-changes according to the situation. Mantains her composure most of the time, but slowly falls into a state of panic when cut off from the rest of the squad.
Appearance/Armor: Here are some shots of her from what could generally be considered the front and back.
For reference: Crew Navy stranger hat, Kora and Kozma's armor, Prismatic Long Feather, Crew Navy Helm Guards and Binocular Goggles, and a Toasty Vitakit. Violet Personal Color.
She has a visor to aid her in long ranged combat and a Vitakit to store extra healing aids. She takes the visor off when not in combat. The eyes use the "saultry" texture.
Weapons: Nova and Umbra Driver, backed up by a Callahan. One is in her weapon hand, one is on her back and one is in her off-hand, which fires less accurately than her weapon hand. Also, she can only fire charge attacks with her weapon hand.
History/Background: A Knight of the Spiral Order, Hallie left the traditional style of swords to become an aspiring gunslinger. She takes a preference to the blend of damage and survivability possessed by the Alchemer and Magnus guns. She always tries to stay at the right distance from the action to avoid most stray and/or directed attacks that are aimed at her but still be able to unload into the fray. She always stays with a team and always will. She refuses to go on a solo mission. Most think that she does it out of a desire to help others out, but in truth it's out of a fear of being surrounded and outmatched without someone to help. She will occasionally use Callahan charges to make an escape. She recovers from the knockback faster than an average knight.
Relations: Hallie is friends with a few members of the Spiral Order.
'Twist' Degree: Nothing too severe, thank you.
Pets/Sidekicks: None.
Expendability: We'll talk when she's accepted...
Fri, 03/16/2012 - 20:12
#287
Artini Updated
Name: Artini
Gender: Male
Personality: Quiet, Soft-spoken, he has piercing green eyes that can sometimes make people uneasy if they dont know him. With people he doesn't know too well he keeps quiet. With people he's comfortable with he talks openly, sometimes not stopping to catch a breath. Thinks about situations before acting, accept sometimes in combat he can take rash and stubborn decisions. He has a journal he can't stop writing in.
Appearance/ Armor: Skolver Helm/Armor, his shield is his grey owlite shield.
Weapons: Divine Avenger and Callahan, also carries a gran faust. He calles his Gran Faust and Divine Avenger yin and yang, he uses these swords like double broadswords.
History/Background: On the crash landing, Artini received a very bad bump on the head, receiving a massive gash on his head and causing him to forget everything about himself accept his name. On arriving at Haven Artini was lucky enough to be nursed back to good health and treated for head injuries. He still can't remember anything about himself. (good for some twist in the story eh? :P)
Artini prefers to be training hard, and making new types of maneuvers to baffle his enemies. He met some friends in haven, two of them had sealed swords, and the four or them turned into a close knit family. Their names were Voltix, Blue, and Cryptus.
A few months later, Artini and his squad were assigned to bring supplies to the core. The spiral order thought they found a short cut to the core through a sketchy area of the clockworks. This area was not covered by the map, did not have a definite stratum, and did not have any history of ever being there. Artini remembered there being some rumors about knights going missing but he thought nothing of it saying, "Come on guys, its not like a tragedy is going to happen right?" Famous last words....
The journey was a disaster. They were slaughtered. Strange miasmas and demons struck at them, and all of them died before Artini's eyes. Blue fell to her death from one of the crumbling sections of the structure. Voltix was gruesomely slaughtered while trying to save Artini and Cryptus. And finally Cryptus took a fall when Artini and him came under fire from those strange creatures. Artini barely made it back to the lift. He took the sealed swords from his squad and vowed never to forget them. He still has nightmares from that event.
Relations: Artini has two friends in haven. The first is his superior named Tairatu, a fast talking analyzer for the Spiral Order. The other is Kana, who treated Artini in the infirmary. Both of them have large jobs in Cradle elsewhere so Artini does not see them much.
Twist Degree: His memory is blank! blank canvas :D feel free to put in anything!
Pet/Sidekicks: None.
Expendability: I would like it if he survived to the end. Some injuries would be nice too, but it you have to kill him thats fine by me. Just please dont make it like hes dead three seconds into it, that would really kill the who waiting for his calling and never forgetting his dead friends thing XP
So here it is again. Sorry about reposting but i think the updated version is better. Thanks! Great work so far!
-Varsian
Thu, 03/15/2012 - 07:54
#288
Pre-made Levels
Hey Happy,
Do you still need pre-made scenes to work off of? I'm going to try to whip some up here and wanted to know if you still needed 'em.
Also, about how many environment models do you typically put into a scene (not including the enemies, characters, special effects, etc.)? And when you've finished creating a scene is it "complete" (meaning if you looked at the level from all angles there wouldn't be any missing pieces). I'm currently working on a Haven level and wanted to know how much effort I can expect to put into it.
Thanks
Thu, 03/15/2012 - 15:14
#289
^_^
Nothin' I like better than making up names.
By the way, the elder Volttail does not matter, it's only the younger one (the one she took under her protection) who fights with her. That Volttail's gender can go either way, although I set it down as female. :P
For former Rem, I present Gyli.
For the Volttail, I decided on Sec.
Thu, 03/15/2012 - 15:41
#290
@Happyapathy
ty man. it would be awsome to be in your fan fic
Thu, 03/15/2012 - 18:03
#291
What Dark Ritual?
i havent gotten a comfirmation for Xeris yet ;_______;
Thu, 03/15/2012 - 20:06
#292
@WindsickleI guess
@Windsickle
I guess describing her as paranoid may be going a bit too far for me, cautious or prepared would be a better way to put it I guess.
@Mejezfeld
Sorry for not saying anything earlier, I tend to reply only if the person asks me too or else I would be posting a lot of "I'll think about it" or "Yes I read it" type posts.
That said I have considered Greenhorn for a possible role, though I'm not certain enough to post it right now.
@Varsian
Only part there with an issue is Soro and Frostrex cause they both appear in this story, any ideas on this?
@Bulby
Any sort of premade scenes are appreciated, Haven ones would be really useful.
I normally reach about 100 environmental objects before placing characters, most of my scenes are not 'complete' as that would take up a lot more room in terms of data space for other objects.
@Remiliaoftheearth
I'll take that into consideration next time I post a cast update :)
@Altos
Haven't found a space for him yet, I must admit he is a bit sparse on details compared to most other submissions.
Thu, 03/15/2012 - 20:03
#293
Critias
Feel free to alter him and Torus as much as needed, as the personality of 'Critias' now resides permanently in a character in my new novel. Have fun if need be
Thu, 03/15/2012 - 20:21
#294
@Happyapathy
Ah, okay, thanks bro.
Fri, 03/16/2012 - 03:33
#295
Happy
I changed his bio so the names are different but the characters are the same. That would work out well right?
Also, i wanted to ask you:
Could i continue Artini's Journals? so like, if you choose me, i could sorta write his journals corresponding to whats going on, i would send them to you first of course...
Fri, 03/16/2012 - 05:01
#296
Lets try this again.
Coming with a bit more detailed character this time.
Name:Rotanim
Gender:Male
Appearance: Red glowing eyes/Seerus like eyes, black-grey stranger hat, Shadowsun Slicker.
Weapons: Not quite sure on this part, but... An one-piped (remove the upper part) Iron slug with Acheron blade attached at the bottom or some kind of "rifle" would be a suggestion. Or just some reguluar Blackhawk. Anyway, i leave this one open for you.
Personality: Kind, yet shy type. Not very fond of killing. Prefers the "Right" thing to do over everything else.
One of the finest sharpshooters on cradle, Rotanim has yet to meet his match. With a big heart, Rotanim tries to take the friendly approach to everything, including monsters. His posture to anything or anyone is quite admirable, but gets him into alot of trouble sometimes.
Biography/History:
While young, due to his ability to not only succeed in his missions risk-free with his excellent distanced aim, but also "befriending the enemy", Rotanim quickly raced up the ranks of the Spiral knights, and was soon to be chosen to become a Squad leader. After several months of operation, he came to fall in love with his Female squad mate. But like most love stories, Rotanims didn't have a happy ending. Under the Siege of the Gremlin Iron munitions factory, his squad was one of the first few to enter, meeting heavy resistance.
His squad was holding out until the promised reinforcements was to arrive, but the reinforcements never came. He and his squad was captured by the Gremlins and were seperated from eachother, after his escape and end of the IMF war, Rotanim searched for his squad and furthermost, his loved one. As he soon discovered they had been transported deeper into the Clockworks or killed during their capture. Rotanim, at the final rank of Vanguard, left the Spiral order in an attempt to find his loved one in the depths of the clockworks with the promise of returning when they needed him.
Befriending many monsters, mostly Gremlins(Outcasts, few colony members) and the Beast family, Rotanim became one with the clockworks. Even with his authority within the clockworks, he never found the girl he loved. Finally giving up his search he returned to his Spiral service once again, yet kept the Clockworks as his home. Nowadays working as an overwatch for knights in dire need and keeping peace as far as he can, Rotanim still dreams about to see the one he loved once more.
Relationships: Keeps an old photo of the his loved one in his pocket, the love saga is not really necessary to be included here, but would be an interesting part of the story, as the Girl could be any of the suggested/implemented characters.(He and Esira would be quite an interesting plot twist as they are for the moment almost straight opposites of eachother)
Anyway, Monsters=Friendly, eez fairly important.
Twist Degree:
As long you keep his general personality and such, i'm fine with major twisting.
Expendability: Would rather prefer not to die.
Pet/Sidekick: A junior Snarby would be lovely. :3
Fri, 03/16/2012 - 12:39
#297
@Happyapathy
Couldn't access the thread for some reason. Back now. I noticed that you didn't provide feedback on my other character ideas. Now, I know the chances of them making it in at all are practically nil, but I would still appreciate knowing whether you like them or not. Maybe even some ideas I can use so I can work on them a bit. Don't want to sound pushy, but I would appreciate a status update.
Mon, 03/26/2012 - 01:51
#298
Here's that Pow update. Name:
Here's that Pow update.
Name: 'Revised' Pow
Gender: Male
Colour: Cyan
Class: Scout
Personality: Very brave, fast and he always stays on his mission 'till it's done.
Appearance/Armor: Solid Cobalt Helm and Vitasuit Deluxe. He is very short, half the height of the standard knight. Sometimes has sniped stranger hat.
Weapons: Either Shockburst Brandish, Nightblade or Twisted Snarble Barb with a Tempered Calibur.
History/Background: His pod exploded in Cradle's air. It is a miracle how he survived, and an even bigger miracle that he had his weapons at the ready befire the pod blew. He could only barely make it to the Rescue Camp and it took a long time to get him at full health.
Relations: Burner is his dad, Frostbite is his pet and he makes friends very quickly.
'Twist' Degree: I'd like him to be rather unchanged.
Pets/Sidekicks: One pet Frostifur called Frostbite.
Expendability: PLEASE let him live. I get put off fanfics when all o' my characters die.
Energy: Almost completely relies on Mist. He sometimes gets crystal energy, but that's only for when he needs it.
BTW, I'm removing that ad post now.
Fri, 03/16/2012 - 16:05
#299
@Happyapathy
Thanks for considering Clide...
and I though he's least interesting character out of all three I had posted ;-)
BTW, I've edited Clide's armour/weapons a bit.
Fri, 03/16/2012 - 17:19
#300
@Powpowpowpowpowpow
varry good mon ya did it right mon ya did it right.
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Name: Prime
Gender: Male
Personality: Prime is very laid backed and relaxed. He thinks he's only living when he's at dangers front door. Prime is impatient and doesn't like taking orders but he holds his feelings/pride and does it anyway*(See history)
Appearance/Armor: Azure Guardian Helm or Mighty Cobalt Helm. Seraphic Armor. Great Defender. Blue or Red, possibly changes during the story? Hmm? Would be interesting
Weapons: Vile Striker(Or maybe a re-skinned Shadow Striker), Flourish and, Magnus
History/Background: Prime is still very young,(19-21ish in human years? If possible) he was born on the Skylark.(Assuming that's possible and for him to be 21, if not then he was on the Skylark by a young age) Due to this fact he often wished he was out exploring the home planet, stories(or memories) dried his imagination. He spent his childhood running about the ship when he could, his favorite thing was races. As a teen on Craddle, Prime was very rebellious he never listened to his parents and some times would never come home for days, never telling where he was. He thought about how he would escape his endless labyrinth of dullness and boredom, and one day decided to join the Spiral Order. Though at that age(16ish) that wasn't yet possible. So Prime pretended to be a delivery boy and stole himself a proto set. He then proceeded to the arcade and took an elevator for a joy ride, Prime came back bruised and bleeding with a large smile on his face and a feeling of satisfaction. Every so often he would do this for fun. When it was time for him to join the order, he didn't make the cut. Even the Drill Sergeant noted that Prime was clearly the best fighter there. But he lacked the skill to listen. Prime was enraged, he spent the rest of the day punching walls. The next time he took the test, Prime grit his teeth and followed orders and was eventually broken into shape by the Drill Sergeant. This changed his personality to a more chill person.
Relations: In a squad, preferably Rex's as the supporting character? Mebbe? Please? Or mebbe main char? plz? mebe? ANYTHING!?(Yeah, get a 'lil over dramatic...)
'Twist' Degree: 100 percent do what you want with him.
Pets/Sidekicks: Nope.
Expendability: 70 percent, at least want him to be alive for a while.
Additional Notes: I like trains.