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Spiralstory, Deeper: A SK Fanfiction [Always Rolecasting]

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Thu, 02/16/2012 - 17:59
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion

Second part to Spiralstory! BOOYEAH!
Before I start, I should give you the links to the first and the Renegades, which you should read/join if you haven't already!

Renegades: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/33996

Spiralstory: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/38896
(Seriously, read this)

Submit an app below, but keep in mind that you can't be over powered, or you will have a tiny pointless role! D: Also, if your earlier character was brutally murdered, submit your new one here.

Name:(Anything you want)

Gender:(Thanks Xplad for saving me here...XD )

Race:(What is your character? Spiralians for Knights)

Equipment:(What does your character have?)

Abilities:(Anything that makes your character special)

Bio:(What is the background your character? Please make it as long as you can.)

Personality:(The longer it is, the easier to describe your character)

Facts:(Just some basic facts about your character)

Storyline Improvements:(What do you think should be here that isn't? You can do this anywhere below also.)

Thank for being awesome in advance! :D

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****** Spiralstory, Deeper *******

Prologueish Thingy:

It was a beautiful day.

Brimley had just finished training. He felt great. He couldn’t wait to get assigned to a team and finally go into the clockworks.

“Hey Brim! You wanna tour Haven with me!”

“Sure, yeah, just a sec.” He really didn’t want to spend any more time with the other recruits. He wanted to meet other knights, heroic knights. He wanted to meet the big ones. The ones he was told about.

He spied a couple of knights wearing what seemed to be quality armor, and went over there to talk to them.

“Hey look! A proto!” They snickered.

“Why don’t you show us your fighting style!” Brim was surprised. Maybe they would help him at fighting. He slashed with want he thought to be amazing speed. They laughed.

“Watch out! He might cut some butter with his proto sword!” They burst out, their roaring laughter piercing the relative silence of Haven.

“Hey! Leave the kid alone!”

Brim turned and saw a lone figure. The knights just laughed louder, but ceased as the sole figure drew his sword. The blade glistened like glass, reflecting the knight’s face.

“It’s just one knight.” The leader said, rallying his followers. “We can take him on, easily.” But one of his friends took a step back in the shock of this weapon, this blade of ice, casually held as though the knight thought he wouldn’t even break a sweat in the fight to come.

“He said, leave the kid alone.” Another knight was right behind them. He carried a blade that looked as though a Flourish became wicked, jet-black with a glowing red tip. The knights jumped forward, but their leader was still confident of their success.

“Only two, and we’re better armed anyways.” His comrades looked at him in disbelief at the latter comment.

They began to advance, when a bomber that jumped out of nowhere stopped one, passing a bomb that Brim hadn’t seen before between his hands. The knight fell back in surprise, scrambling away. Another jumped as a bullet hit the ground in between his legs.

“That was on purpose.” A gunner stepped up, a crazy grin upon his face. The knights paused, unsure of themselves. They still outnumbered their surrounders, but still, it wasn’t seven on one anymore.

“Just leave him alone.” They whirled upon a wolver grinning at them. Okay, now they were just a bit scared.

“Yeah Haden, just leave the kid alone.” It was a knight in full Azure Guardian Armor. It was Kort. One of the big ones.

The vulgar knights backed away, obliviously terrified.

“Hey Kort,” The original knight began. “Can I deal with it?”

“Sure Frost, just don’t make it… messy.”
In knight trudged towards the middle of the group, the others spreading as far from him as possible.

“You! Yeah uh… Haden! You and me! Right here, right now!” The leader inched forward, his gaze shooting fire at his so-called “friends”.

They met each other in the center of the circle of knights surrounding them. Haden made a lunging attack, but Frost was completely ready, knocking the sword away from his opponent. Haden’s chest was wide open, but Frost didn’t counter-attack, he just poked the now angry knight in the chest, sending him tumbling.

It went on like that for a while until Haden was visibly boiling with anger. He flung himself forward upon Frost, flinging his sword around at Frost, slamming everything he had into his blade. But Frost never took the saber full on, just knocked it away.

Finally Haden collapsed with tiredness. Frost prodded him a couple of times with his sword, then turned and said. “Okay everyone, you can disperse! Come on, nothing to see anymore!”

Brim turned and saw a fairly large crowd surrounding them. Most of them shuffled away, and the rest went along with their business. The figure stepped up to him sheathing his sword.

“Fresh out of training?” He asked.

“Erm.. Yes s-sir.”

“Why don’t you come with us, we’re on a mineral gathering mission in an hour, could always use an extra hand with the monsters… uh,”

“Brimley sir!”

“Oh yes- Brimely!”

“No uh-sir it’s Brimley.”

“How ‘bout Brim.” The bomber said, walking up to them.

“Yeah, uh-Brim’s fine.”

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 18:09
#1
Valorai's picture
Valorai
This sounds good. A few

This sounds good. A few spelling errors, otherwise great!

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 18:18
#2
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Yeah, just kinda rushed

Yeah, just kinda rushed it.
You know, wanted to get it out there.
REKINDLE (fire, not reader thingy) THE STORY OF SPIRALS! :D

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 18:36
#3
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
New stuff!

Nice, you've got the new story started! Looking forward to reading it as it comes out.

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 22:55
#4
Frostrex's picture
Frostrex
Wait

You are keeping Frost, right? And by the way, The Kradel might not be finished...

Wait, don't worry...

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 23:16
#5
Faronel's picture
Faronel
Horay!

Yay! The next story! I can't wait!

(I just lost the game... Again.)

Mon, 02/20/2012 - 19:50
#6
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
New Chapters

I have import the next chapter from a current non-working computer. ._.
Expect it soon! I hope.

Mon, 02/20/2012 - 20:41
#7
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
NEW CHAPTERS! (Happy now :D )

Chapter One: Still Alive

Ren was surveying the South Arcade, watching for any disturbances. Frost and Kort had warned him about a knight called Haden. They noticed that he was stirring up some trouble. Possibly even forming a group of bandits, which had happened far to many times for Ren and the others to slack. Ren could only hope Haden wasn't going to make his move soon. He hated fighting other knights, and if Haden got some people that Ren knew and trusted to follow him... well let's just say it happened before.

Ren still couldn't get that smudge of his brother's blood off his sleeve from when Onix led that bandit group to Kome about a couple month ago. How he was ever to forgive himself, Ren didn't know. Of course, no one knew Durant was his brother. No one but Ren and his long dead parents. Not even Durant knew. Ren wouldn't forgive himself. Ever.

"Hey! Yeah, you! Erm..."

"Corporal Ren."

"Ummm, well something is wrong with this Mineral Depot!"

"Let's check it out."

They stepped up to the depot, where a couple others were standing. A slight screeching noice echoed up the chute.

"What is-" Ren was cut off by a sudden increase of volume. One of the knights walked right up to the opening and peered in. He was met by swarm of Greavers.

Ren was barely able to pull out his sword before he was flung back by the mob of the bat-like monsters. Others weren't as lucky. In less than twenty seconds, three knights were on the ground, dead or dying. As Ren tried to retreat to the upper level, he felt the ground shudder under him. He fell to his feet, groaning, and turned to face the elevators. The actual platform wasn't up in one, and a Trojan jumped up through the chute, followed by a few Devilites and some Gremlins.

As Ren pulled himself up, a couple of knights were knocked down by the Trojan and were finished off by the Greavers. He blocked the attacks of a couple of monsters. He glanced at the Trojan, and was surprised by the shield marking. The Eye of Vaz, the supposed emblem of Zos, replaced the traditional Rook of Vanaduke's armies. Ren wondered if these were the "Void", but they seemed perfectly normal.

His thoughts were violently interrupted by the bloodcurtling screams of a knight, hidden behind the hordes of Greavers. He turned and started sprinting toward the town square.

He didn't make it far.

Mon, 02/20/2012 - 21:03
#8
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
Dun dun dunnnn ...

This is a good section - there were a few parts that particularly stood out as being powerful because they offered a good mental image or preserved an instant of suspense really well.

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 13:10
#9
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
ITS ALIVE

Okay peoples of teh forums, I have decided to continue Spiralstory! Not quite sure if this is a good idea, but I feel bad never finishing it. Sooooo... expect a new section (or chapter I guess) out later tonight and for them to be pumping out at a regular basis from now on! :D Just a bit slower, because I'm lazy.
On that note... CLEAR! *Shocks it back to life*

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 14:26
#10
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
<3

Yaycakes!

For you, my dear, I may actually submit a character if you're actually looking for more. (No doubt you've noticed that it's not my usual habit).

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 15:32
#11
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
<3

These days it seems like you're the only person who cares about Spiralstory, which I find hilarious due to the fact that you don't have a character in there.
(Translation: Thanks Tev for being awesome, and I'm honored that you'd even THINK about submitting a character. :D )
I'll edit this later with the new chapter once I edit it! (Hur, hur, hur!)

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 15:50
#12
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
You forgot something!

Awwww. But you forgot to tell me whether you are in need of characters (and if so, whether you would prefer I make a knight or a gremlin).

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 16:13
#13
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
All Submits are happily welcomed!

Yeah, I'm in need of a character or two, and I don't really care what race it is... the Band stopped being only knights a while ago. :D
On that note, if you what to submit someone, please do it somewhat soon, so I can make the next chapter.

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 17:11
#14
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
I'll do it now, then

I don't know what you have planned, so she may be difficult to work in as anything other than an antagonist or a traitor. I can create someone else if that's the case. Feel free to maim, kill, change, or whatever.

Name: Nistaline
Race: Gremlin
Equipment: One ginormous thwackhammer. And some standard-issue Darkfang body armor. She may or may not have ditched the shield by now.
Abilities: Beating the ever-loving crap out of things. Being intimidating. Keeping secrets. Ordering people around, when necessary.
Appearance: Tall, wiry and athletic, with a steely gaze. She almost never smiles, and when she does, it's usually unnerving. She doesn't wear goggles like most other thwackers. Her ears are both a bit nicked up, and there is a criss-crossing of faint scars over any visible part of her body.

Bio: Nistaline comes from a long line of high-ranked combat gremlins, so she was more of a small soldier than a gremlinite, and the life of a fighter is all she really knows. She worked up the ranks quickly when she came of age, and had command of a large group of thwackers that patrolled deep in the Clockworks. One thing that was never instilled in her was the fanatic loyalty to King, Colony, and Order, though, and increasing demands on her eventually led her to snap her ties with the Colony altogether; the mortality rate for thwackers is high anyway, so it wasn't much to just walk away and not report back home after a particularly gruesome battle. (The rest I'll leave up to you, in case you want to tie her background to someone else's at all). In the Colony, she was reported as deceased a few years ago.

Personality: Nistaline is no-nonsense, self-serving, and, in the end, disloyal. She really only sticks with a group as long as she feels that doing so benefits her, which usually means that it's the winning side and they're not making too many demands on her freedom. She's also so far in the "I hate stupid people" camp that she usually comes off as having no sense of humor. (She does have one, but it's the macabre sort usually found in hospitals and police stations.) Someone really has to impress Nistaline (which is difficult) to earn her respect, although she's very good at faking it when she has to. Her temper is short, but she doesn't always show it outwardly; she rarely raises her voice, even when angry. An angry Nistaline is an unusually quiet Nistaline, and also a dangerous Nistaline ... she holds grudges. She won't actively try to hurt you or mess up your life once you've angered her, but if the opportunity arises and she feels the consequences will be either lacking or easy to live with, she'll take it. This is a gremlin who actively enjoys combat, when it comes down to it: smashing skulls and splattering blood on her armor is good catharsis for her. She doesn't seek out unnecessary combat or pick fights with those around her, however; there isn't a lot of point to that.

Facts: Nistaline has a weakness for very cute things, and way down deep in the pit of that tiny heart of hers, she wishes that she could have been a mother (although she knows perfectly well that she is in no way suited to it and would never give in to that faint little desire as a result). She usually spices her food with copious amounts of blaze pepper.

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 19:49
#15
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
PICK ME PLAZ

LEMME JOIN

Name: Ace

Race: Spiralian

Gear: Ace prefers a very quick and nimble battle style. As a result of this, he has a Final Flourish and Fearless Rigadoon. Wears a mighty cobalt set and never uses shields, since they slow him fown. Sometimes he uses a blue Silversix.

Personality: Ace is very kind and high spirited. He is a jokester, but knows when to speak or goof around and when not to. He may not be the toughest Knight, but he is very prudent, which helps him in a battle.

Bio: The son of Kozma and Brinks, Ace was trained to fight at a very young age. He was horrible with standard spiral gear, and likes to use quick swords such as Hunting Blades or Flourishes. He became a very good swordsman and joined the Band. When his parents died in The Battle of Haven, he left for a short while to grieve by himself. He is still a jokester, but comes through for his friends when it really matters.

Expendability: feel free to maim him or severely injure him, but if he dies, id like it to be a heroic death, like stalling some enemies in order to save his friends
Hope you like it!

"Now... We strike."
~Tsuna

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 20:00
#16
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
:D Yersh

All of these characters look great!

Chapter 2:

They were all around him. He couldn't see, hear, or feel anything other than pain. Then it all stopped. Ren wondered if he was dead yet, if it was finally over, but his eyes saw a tiny spot of light in the crowd of shadow. He held on to that spot. Grasped it. Everything else faded into the background. It was Ren and the beautiful sun, not the fake sun of the Clockworks, but the real sun. The spot disappeared, blocked by a new figure. Ren's hope disappeared with it.

Stony and cold, it looked like a small Trojan was beheaded. A single purple eye, the Eye of Vaz, sat blankly on its face, blinking ominously. In it's hand was a blade that also resembled the equipment used by the Trojans, but was a bit thinner and smaller. Wordlessly it hauled Ren up to his feet. The monsters pulled back, and Ren saw his enemy step back and blink. Its silence was the scariest part of it. It was so out of place, a stain of darkness in a sea of light. Light that once was valued, but now couldn't save Ren.

Nothing could.

He dodged the first strike with vigor, and even tried to counter the mammoth with an attack of his own. It took the assault with the same silence, knocking it down, nearly wrenching the sword from Ren and onto the ground. It bashed him down with the shield. Ren groaned and tried to get his feet, but stumbled back to the ground. The thing approached him, and Ren jumped up. Ren was on his feet, only to be brutally attacked. It lifted up its sword, and brought it down, only to be met with a refined chunk of tempered Sun Silver. HIS refined chunk of tempered Sun Silver. He then jumped to his feet, leaping up at his foe, surprising it. Through his fatigue he knew that something was wrong. He commanded his body to jump back to evade a blow, but he instead jumped over the sideswipe. He wasn't in control anymore.

"Don't panic." A voice instead his head.

"Yeah nothing to panic about... ITS NOT LIKE THERE'S SOMEONE IN MY HEAD!"

"Whaoh, chill." That voice reminded him of someone.

"Is this..."

"Vot?"

"But yo-you're de-"

"Dead? Yep."

"So you're a..."

"God? Nope, just a warrior for Vog and his army."

"Then why are you here? Why didn't you say anything since..."

"Listen, Zos just broke the rules, like, bigtime. He unbalanced Cradle... again."

"You mean like the army and the..."

"Monolith? Yeah, he has a grudge...it's a long story."

"But th-"

"Listen, kinda trying to save us at the moment. You know, giant monster trying to murder us."

Ren half chuckled, which ended up sounding more like a wheezing cough due to his fatigue. It seemed as though Vot hadn't lost his sense of humor, however lame. He fully released himself from his body, and just curled up and slept. His mind drifted from everything, for it was but a distraction. Everything was just a distraction.

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 23:01
#17
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
I love how freaked out Ren is.

Awesome. I get the feeling that the not-Trojan is about to get his stone butt handed to him.

(Also ... it is weird that my machine has been telling me the forums are down for schedule maintenance for the last three hours? I'm having to use Sol's.)

EDIT (@Frostrex, below): Don't you start in, too!

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 22:59
#18
Frostrex's picture
Frostrex
...

i care about Spiralstory. it's what got me started on writing SK fan-fics. Oh, and Tev is awesome.

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 23:04
#19
Psychodestroyer's picture
Psychodestroyer
/clap

YAY FOR DEAD PEOPLE WHISPERING IN YOUR EAR!

If you need other characters, like specifically something, I'd be happy to help.

Just tell me the specifications of the character (must-haves) and I'll see what I can do.

Stuff like: 'I need some crazy old gremlin with no significant part, but he seems to be everywhere.'

Yeah. If you need anything like that, I'll see if I can help.

Otherwise, cool story!

If I may:
If you want to 'spruce up' (I have no-idea if I used that term correctly) your fight scenes, be more specific with the movements used for attacks etc. You can use the terminology I use in Codename and my other stories. Stuff like 'overhead downcut', 'parried it with a solid forehand stroke' etc.

But if you're happy with how it is, that's entirely fine. I like how the story's going either way, don't ruin it in your eyes if you like it how it is already.

Tue, 03/06/2012 - 14:27
#20
Valorai's picture
Valorai
I do read your fanfic, i

I do read your fanfic, i guess i just dont post as much anymore.

Wed, 03/07/2012 - 01:13
#21
Frostrex's picture
Frostrex
@Tev

You're the one who bought me the expansion.

Fri, 03/09/2012 - 13:16
#22
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
---------

@Psycho: I could use three recruit characters, and a couple of knights who are skilled and powerful, but also cocky and hotheaded. :D
I haven't forgotten about you guys! The next chapter should be out tomarrow!

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 11:42
#23
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Chapter 3: "Come on you guys,

Chapter 3:

"Come on you guys, there a couple of Jellies up here!" The recruits were taking forever. He'd better get used to it, as recruits were all they were going to deal with now.

The crowds forget so easily. Nowadays Danovan and his team were the ones everyone knew about, and Frost was stuck dealing with... these guys.

"Seriously people! Get a move on!"

"But they have spikes! Big, pointy spikes!"

"Then take your SWORD and STAB THEM!" He was seriously annoyed now. "I've seen Broggarts with better swordsmanship than you!"

The veterans of the group laughed, leaving some people like Mylo, Ace and a small group of recruits in the dust. Frost noted this, and said, "It's a long story, but a funny one for sure."

They had many good times back when... they had a leader. Frost definitely wasn't one. His job was to be rash and reckless, and to keep the team moving. Not to lead. He didn't belong as a leader. He would never belong.

The recruits finally got out of the Arena-like room, and Frost took the time to count heads, just incase one of them speared itself. If only.

There was the original members, the ones he trusted, and then two well equipped knights that the Order added to them when they thought that the Band would still function as well as before... Vot died. Well the Order was wrong. The two, Mylo and Ace, were just itching for a real fight. Frost didn't have the heart to tell them they'd be dealing only with mining runs and recruits from now on. Frost checked over the recruits with them now, and saw that they had all four of them. He hadn't taken the time to learn their names, but he knew the one with the Cobalt Crest was named Brim.

"Heyo' Brim!"

"What can I help you with sir?"

"You see that tree?"

"Uhh.. Yes! What should I-"

"You and the others try to clime up it as fast as you can, and the first one back with the fruit at the top wins a prize from me!"

Ace broke in and asked, "Can I do it too?"

Frost replied with a hardy, "Yes! Of course you can! Just give them a chance will ya'?" He winked, than wished everyone good luck. "Now!" He cried, sending them off giddily toward the mammoth tree that rose further than anyone could see.

After they were gone, the veterans finally started conversing again.

"Ahhh, the beautiful 'get the recruits out of your hair' trick." Faste remarked.

"Invented by Vot himself!" Kantint replied, and Frost suddenly didn't want to talk anymore. Only after their beloved leader was dead did they fully miss him. It would take the entire night for the recruits to get the apple.

"I'm hitting the hay for the night. You guys wake me up if anything happens, 'Kay?"

"But Fro-" Blue began, but was stopped by his eyes. They weren't the same carefree eyes she remembered, but the sorrowful, sleepless eyes of... someone whose best friend was killed. Killed right in front of those very same eyes. She took a second to take that in, then continued. "Just have a good rest."

Soon they were all asleep, including the recruits up in the tree, clueless that their supposedly iron hearted and minded leader was crying in his sleep, Vot being murdered over and over before closed eyes.

Those poor eyes.

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 20:06
#24
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
Awwwww

Awww, I just want to pat Frost's head and give him a hug, after that.

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 20:08
#25
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Poor Frost...

Tev, you missed on a OCH run with me and Frost.
How dare you! D:

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 20:16
#26
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
Talk to the hand

Pshaw, I was at the opening of my art show. I'm allowed to be absent from SK for an evening. :P

You're lucky you got an IC reply between my father-in-law's birthday get-together and the show. XD

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 20:41
#27
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Hallo hand!

Hrmpf... you're absent the one day I'm on at the same time as Frosty.
Anyways, even your hand is awesome. XD

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 20:43
#28
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
XD

Fanboy.

But I love you anyway. XD

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 20:47
#29
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Am I still adressing your hand?

"Fanboy"
Yep XD

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 20:51
#30
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
No, you can address the rest of me too, now.

Sol and I were looking for you in game when we got home and you weren't there, sir.

By the way, I'm totally laughing at Vakky giving Bettit bad advice.

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 20:55
#31
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
XD

I'm seeriusly sorry about that then, I was pretty busy today too.

When Frost comes after you, completely blame Vakky. XD

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 21:15
#32
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
It's all good.

It's all good ... was just in the last half hour, really. And I figured you had to be busy, because you didn't post in any of the threads for most of the day and you usually do off and on. Hope you were busy doing something fun, though.

I might, but Bettit won't. It's not in her nature. I'm fully expecting him to come after her, though, and will be very disappointed if he doesn't do what I told him he could do. VERY disappointed. I have a particularly gruesome post all thought up for it, too, just waiting to be modified per the actual situation. (plus a tl:dr version that's a bit less lavishly detailed for those who don't want to read the macabre).

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 21:13
#33
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
No response?

...Isis, i applied a character, but i never got a response. Is Ace accepted into the Band? Plz notify

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 21:27
#34
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Tradition and stuff...

Ahhh... thats the customs here at Spiralstory, I never tell you if you're accepted, because everyone's accepted. Look above all of Tev and my posts.
@Tev: Yersh, I was having some good fun today, but I probably got off right before you got on. *facepalm*
You up for something tomarrow morning? Frost wouldn't be on, but Out might be. :D

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 21:41
#35
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
Glad to hear you had fun. ^.^

Sure hon! I bought someone at the Knight Auction to guide us through a Roarmulus run and I'm not sure what time we're doing that tomorrow (he's in UK, though, so should be interesting), but any time we're on other than that would be good. ^.^

Thinking of making you a Knight character, too, based on the types you told Psycho you needed. Haven't thought of anyone really interesting yet, though. EDIT: If any of your new recruits have fairly small roles, feel free to use Gendan, Sacha, or Derrit.

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 21:57
#36
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
:D

That's a pretty good idea (both the use of Gendan & co and you making a knight character)!
Anyways, if you need a fourth on the Roar Twins, I have a new shield that a little less... wimpy should I call it? Just post it up when you start and I'll try to join in.

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 11:12
#37
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
Gender preference?

Would you rather the new (more experienced, I suppose) knight be a chick, or a dude? Or do you particularly care?

... also, I just noticed that you named a Knight Gonad. What?!?!?! Sol and I are scratching our heads.

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 11:48
#38
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
XD

Whoops, I am a forgetful little Snipe aren't I...

And to answer your above question, I don't really particularly care to be truthful.

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 11:56
#39
Oroseira's picture
Oroseira
I added more chapters Isis and Tevo!

Go READ :3

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 14:04
#40
Valorai's picture
Valorai
I REFUSE TO SUBMIT!! *Jumps

I REFUSE TO SUBMIT!!

*Jumps out window*

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 14:53
#41
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
NNNOOOOOOOOOO!

WAIT! TAKE ME WITH YOOOUUUUUU!!! AAAHHHHHH!

*Dead...again*

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 15:26
#42
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
Oh noes!

Oh noes! Don't die! *performs resuscitation*

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 19:05
#43
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Valorai
So..... I am alone? I WILL

So..... I am alone?

I WILL NOT GO DOWN ALONE!!!

*Grabs Isis and Tevokkia and drags them into a dark shadowy well*

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 19:13
#44
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Isisdelltion
Happiness...OH CRAP THERES MORE! DX

YAY! WE'RE SAVED!

WAIT! PHANTOM HAS A SEQUEL! NOEEEESSSSS!

*Jumps into well*

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 19:15
#45
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Tevokkia
O.o

*sputter* *cough*

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 19:43
#46
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Kaijuhunter
O.O

*stares at the groaning bodies of Isis, Agatg, and Tev.*

What the motherfu- O MY GAWD ITS MY MOM! *jumps into well*
IM SAFE. WAIT, WAIT, NO, NOT THE NACHOS, NOOOO-

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 19:45
#47
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Tevokkia
A break from the silliness

Here, have a character. Apologies for the short bio. XD

Name:Evangeline

Race: Spiralian

Equipment:She wears the Valkyrie set accessorized with matching wings, flower, and parrying blade. A dedicated Fiend and Undead expert, she carries a Divine Avenger, a Cold Iron Vanquisher, and a Final Flourish, with an Argent Peacemaker for long-range backup. (Her personal color is actually the same as yours, Isis, although I can't remember what it is at the moment ... aqua?)

Abilities: Eva is a wrecking ball if you put her in an area full of devilites or zombies; it's like she has a personal vendetta against them. She's also good in social situations, and can flatter or flirt her way to success if normal forms of diplomacy don't seem to be working. She also occasionally acts as team medic if no one else in the group is better suited.

Bio: Evangeline is the youngest of eight and the only girl in the family. She was coddled and spoiled as a child, but also protected to the point she was ready to scream by the time she was old enough to start training for the Spiral Order. Her main goal: outstrip every single one of her brothers in ability. She's done it, too.

Personality: Eva is hot stuff, and she knows it. She's the sort of person to roll her eyes when having to listen to someone for too long, is impatient waiting for something she wants, and generally feels as though she's entitled to ... pretty much everything. She would be the perfect example of a spoiled brat if she hadn't worked so hard to get where she is, and most people just put up with her sense of entitlement with a shrug because in some ways, she's earned the things she expects to get. Still, she has a soft spot for the little guy if they look like they're working hard and just not getting it, and will offer a bit of a hand or some advice if needed. Despite being a trained warrior, she's also very much a girly girl and enjoys all that is feminine.

Facts: She prefers that if people shorten her name, that they call her Eva. Not Eve, not Evie: Eva. She also finds it funny that most people assume that she has a hatred of fiends and the undead due to some dark event in her past; the reality is nothing of the sort. She just wanted to specialize in something. Eva doesn't dispel the rumors, though, because it gives her an extra edge when dealing with those who want to be sensitive or find dark pasts mysterious and appealing.

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 20:05
#48
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Nechrome
WHERE BE ME?????? :( XD JK

WHERE BE ME?????? :(

XD JK take your time. I can wait.

so far so good, btw

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 20:12
#49
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Isisdelltion
Now back to the silliness folks! XD

@Tev: Thanks, it a great character, and I can't wait to use her! :D
@Lordofnecromancers: Where do you think all those Greavers are coming from?

Oh hi Kaiju! Wouldn't expect you to join us- wait, what about nachos? NACHOS? NACHOS?!?

Mon, 03/12/2012 - 20:09
#50
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Kaijuhunter
Ok hi

Hi Isis. Wait a second... Isis? WATDAHELLAREYOUDOINGHERE! *stares at threads beginning* oh... This is ur thread. Oh. WHATEVAH. DISH ICH MYINE NOW *grabs a nacho* HAHAHA

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