one question:what happened to my character's amnesia?is it going to be brought in later or something?
The Invasion (Fanfiction)
Name: lance
Race: New Knight
Color: green.
Gender: male
Friendly(as in would you help the knights): yes somtimes a bit to over zealous though.
Likes: Charging recklessly into battle, cutting and blowing things up, perfectly timed shield blocks, loyalty and comradery.
Dislikes: A long wait before a fight, things that cant be solved with a sword or bomb, when things break his shield and betrayal.
Personality:A new knight itching for action in the field. Loves being upclose and personal with a blade in a fight but would also loves to blow anything he can sky hi. Has a strong sense of loyalty to the spiral order and is willing to lay his life down for it or his team members if necessary. He tends to attack before thinking wich gets him in trouble pretty often. Funny but makes people mad often when joking at serious times.
Hobbies: Training to get stronger, blowing stuff up, fighting new monsters and talking about the spiral order and discussing about how we might get off this world.
Equipment: proto armor and helm, calibur, defender and a blast bomb. (you can have him get new gear as the story progresses)
Would you want to die?(Optional): Who wants to? haha That I will leave up to you :p!
Character cut-off, please no more characters, I got enough already and more adds in to the confusion. Not trying to be mean but it's too much already x.x
23 characters and I just noticed how much :O Alma, Blue, Stormer, Doggies, Ztype, Ghigxhalon, Dusk, Will, Mystic, Advent, Arus, Nerco, Crimson, Xeris, Amazeltoa, Travid, Firehate, Tails, Erick, Blitz, Theo, Bio, Lance
Some aren't forgotten just, hard places to add you guys in.
@Litterbit
Amazeltoa made a mysterious appearance in chapter 11, part 3, Ericks' POV. I didn't say the name since Erick and the others didn't meet you yet.
maybe the mastermind behind the invasion could secretly be his mentor/father and he was some weapon to use against the knights but something happened and he lost all his memories!
or i might be getting ahead of myself :D
1 more week of school and 2 days of testing during that week, at least I'm done with the easy part.
Chapter delays, might be done tomorrow.
I really like it blindshot, you have really done a great job :).
"The edition of Blue vs. Crimson will soon be coming out but until then, this is Flame signing out.
"Why isn't it Crimson vs. Blue?"-Crimson
"I like it the way it is."-Blue
"Of course you do, cause your name's first!!"-Crimson
"Yup, that's kinda true."-Blue
Chapter 12; Fire Spasms: 1:12PM
-Bio
"Dang it Lance, hurry up already!" I shouted out behind me seeing that Lance was way far back from where I was expecting him to be. "Coming.." He huffed as he tried to go faster. I guess we should stay back at rescue camp but I had a distress signal and was ordered to go back to Haven and check to see why the signal was activated. They told me to bring this new knight with me because he needed some kind of training, thanks for filling out the request form. Lance was still wearing the proto set but was sent back to be trained over again, stating that his strategy was not the best kind and he should learn from me. Never knew I was trained to be a teacher for anybody let alone anything. Other than that, he is a confident fighter and he shows it through his enthusiasm of throwing his bombs everywhere.
"I finally...caught up." I looked back behind me and for sure, Lance was right on my tracks. "Took you long enough." I joked and he just stared at me. All of a sudden I felt my leg go numb and I faceplanted into the grass. I looked down and saw that a spike that went right through my leg and when I say right through, I mean it. I looked up and saw a wolver about to bite down on me when Lance jumped in and stabbed his sword through it's neck. It fell down with a thud on the ground and soon another group of wolvers came in and surrounded us to the point where we were nearly standing back-to-back, facing the snarling teeth and drool that was dripping down their mouths. I glanced at Lance and he whispered to me if I could even walk. "I'll be fine, just harder for me to move now." Then soon a wolver launched itself at my head but I held up my arm just in time to where it was breathing down on my face, still snarling. I shook my arm violently in the air, loosening it's grip and soon it letting go, falling into the deep abyss of Cradle but let out one last yip before free-falling. The wolvers were watching their teammate fall down and after a few seconds, faced at us again with more anger.
"I'll take the-" And before I finished, Lance was already dashing into the pack of wolvers and swinging his sword in a mad frenzy. Shrugging it off, I swung my Acheron in a wide arc in front, causing some to jump back or either to wither in pain as the dark energy flowed in their veins. I suddenly got weighted down as one jumped on my back and another followed. Without them knowing, I quickly slid my Pulsar out and shot up in the air and ground. The bullets were sent off earlier, as expected, with the wolvers flying up in the air. "Where are those constructs?!" I saw an alpha shouting up from the back end of the mob. I took the chance of it looking around, to jump up aim and fire my pulsar at the now, knocked back alpha. "WATCH OUT!!" Then soon after the shout, there was a flash of green light followed by an explosion. "Bio, theres some retrodes coming in from up there." Lance pointed to the pile of alphas who side-stepped quickly enough to not get hit. Up to ten or so different kinds of retrodes came out and fired again. "Crap." I muttered and jumped out of the way only to get the pain from the spike to hit me again. I rolled instead of standing back up and was knocked into the path of another beam coming my way. I was just recovering from rolling around when the light warned me for only a few seconds then I started, wide-eyed. Lance ran up in front of me and positioned his sword in front of his face, then the voltrode let the beam out.
The thing I saw was amazing, even for a new knight to accomplish the move was very unlikely. The beam hit Lances' calibur and bounced off into the crowd of beasts and constructs, causing them all to gasp as it was too late for them to react. Lumbers appeared and were shocked to submission, wolvers of all kinds, including alphas were scurrying away but were unfortunate enough to get hit as well. Lance was turning his sword slightly to each direction, all falling and the voltrode was apparently malfunctioning because it's beam wasn't stopping, even though he tried to stop. Some retrodes were trying to help the helpless voltrode, pulling and tugging him but nothing happened as he didn't stop. All the monsters were gone right away and Lance stole a look at the voltrode whose light brighten as he anticipated his fate. The retrodes stopped what they were doing and faced Lance who, turned his sword in their direction and they were soon deactivated. It was as if dozens of fireworks were shot off as that was how the battle ended, in a stunning display of fireworks. Lance put his sword back in its scabbard, put his hand out for me to grab hold of and I got back on to my feet. I groaned in pain as the spike was in my leg. I've probably lost alot of blood as I was starting to feel dizzy.
"Hmm, stay down and try to pull that spike out, I'm going to find something." He patted my shoulder and ran off into the bodies of monsters. I gripped the spike, let out a deep breath and pulled. It came out easily as I let out a small yelp and soon Lance came back. He handed me a pill which he found and I swallowed it. The hole in my lag which the spike left was patched up but not well enough as a medic would have done it. "Let's keep moving, in cause more come." I stood up and pushed the pain out. Lance nodded as he put some other pills he found in a pouch. As we were walking, we weren't talking but I decided to break the silence. "Nice job back there with your calibur, Lance. Never have I seen any knights who were new, accomplish that in just a short time." I looked back at him and he grinned a little. "Thanks."
_________________________~
Thank you, and I don't think we're even half-way into the story.
good job so far blind :DDD
23 chars IS a lot......maybe kill off...idk, 13 of em? i dont wanna die, maybe some others? xP
ik its a hrad choice coz no1 wants their character to die xD
You did the right thing naming it Blue vs. Crimson.
Crimson vs. Blue would be just WRONG
good job so far blind :DDD
23 chars IS a lot......maybe kill off...idk, 13 of em? i dont wanna die, maybe some others? xP
ik its a hrad choice coz no1 wants their character to die xD
Hehe.....Im quite sure Theo could take care of that.....>:3
PS: ded
The person who makes the 170 post will have their character be slaughtered >:\
That won't affect me. One of mine already died(Advent).
My character is supposed to sacrifice himself(or so they think)and come back in thy darkest hour!
http://www.google.com/imgres?q=lolcat+salute&um=1&hl=en&client=safari&sa...
Great job portraying lance! Couldn't have been better :).
You can kill mine off Blindshot. Oh wait...
;)
But for those who says their characters will die, let's just say they're just not in the story, not completely forgotten. :) Oh and of course, you need some screentime.
"Hehehe, I didn't have time to write and now since my cousin made me convinced to watch this series, we're watching it together and she doesn't want me to stop sometimes to write. Anyways, it's my fault of not making her stop, not hers."-Blindshot
"Next vid, next vid!!"-Cousin
"Aren't you forgetting something?"-Me
"Noo....."-Cousin
<.<
Chapter 12; Fire Spasms: 1:12PM (Part 2, 1:15PM)
-Third Person
Crimson was still staring at the large building, not impressed that it was built under ground and can still hold the hundreds of knights that passed by here. He was going to take a step toward until he got bit in the side of his neck and leg three times and as soon as he realized that, instinct told him to sidestep out of harm's way. Crimson turned around to find an ashtail looking wolver standing before him, with some blood dripping down from it's mouth. "Heh, vog's fur is tougher than you know, and you would have died if I saw you earlier." Erick stood up straighter and smirked. "I'm lucky that I didn't. Who are you and what do you want?" "Ahh, that's none of your business, all you need to know is that my name is Crimson and I'm a vog." And he jumped at Erick, but only nearly face-planting into the ground. "Hey, since you said what's your name is, mine's Erick." He was smiling happily, making Crimson madder by the second. When he tried to jump at Erick again, he did a second jump and that surprised Erick as he was already trying to get his footing from the pervious jump. "Crap, lucky you!" Erick shouted as he himself nearly fell flat down on his stomach. "That's one thing you didn't notice." Crimson said as he had his back at Erick. 'Here's my chance.' Erick thought and he ran up, jumped than landed on the vog's back, only to be on fire, singed, and screaming for some kind of water relief. Crimson stood there and chuckled at the wolvers' mistake. Vog fur was also on fire and one touch can instantly turn the invader into fire. Soon the ashtail wasn't on fire and stopped as he panted, trying to catch his breath. Blue was still in the shadowily confines of the training hall, watching as what she never expected to ever surface the depths of the Clockworks fighting Erick. She decided that this was the limit and got out of the shadows.
____________________________~
I need to catch up, one way or the other.
YAY!! Do I kill him? Huh? DO I? TELL ME NOW!!!!!
and i always thought ashtails were resistant to fire.....
cmon guys! dont let this thread sink so we can keep blind motivated!!! :)
"Hehe, sorry bout that had some things to do. Also, I'm not really good at making really descriptive fight scenes with blood so my cousin, being the sorta horror loving girl that we all love, is probably going to help me with this. And who will win, it's going to be something like a tie."
"You'll die, I'll win. Ok?"-Blue
"No, it's not ok."-Crimson
"Oh and Erick and Xeris battle is going to happen later in the story, in the Clockworks."-Blindshot
Winter Break=2 weeks off :D
Chapter 12; Fire Spasms: 1:12PM (Part 3, 1:19PM)
"I'll take over for you, Erick." Blue said and jumped in front of the tired ashtail who was barely standing on his feet. "If you say so Blue, but I'm going to try to stay here as long as I can to help you." He buried his head in the side of his fur and got out a pill, from the training hall possibly. As the pill took effect, he felt much better. "If you say so. Try being more careful though." "So the ashtail now has to be watched over now? That's something unexpected. On top of that, it's a skolver, now this should be fun. Let's see what you two have to take to kill me." Crimson grinned evilly as he gave a kind of death glare at Erick and Blue. "You call yourself a vog? If you are one than where is your pack?" Blue questioned as she ran up to him and grabbed a jagged metal rod that was on the ground, trying to slice him since the speed was at her advantage. "You notice that my pack isn't really here? Well you're really observant to notice that." He quickly ducked, went up as quick as he did going down and made her flip in the air.
"Actually, I left because they were too much for me. We kept losing to different packs, our hunts don't go well. We were really being killed one by one, they always depended on the strong ones. I killed some of them off and left, marked as a traitor for just killing a few of my pack members, how crazy is that?" He smiled as he had absolutely no care in the world as he said that. Blue was standing up when he was talking and was shocked as to what he said. 'He killed his own family and friends just because they were weak? That's not even a way to respect the ones whose been there for you all this time nor your whole life.' After a while Erick decided that time was up and threw a piece of glass that he was holding on for some time now. It hit Crimson in his side and blood started to drip out slowly, if Erick took a second look, he would have found out that the glass was smaller in size than what he expected. 'Well that was stupid of me.' He thought to himself and nearly jumped out of his skin, surprised as the vog was in front of him with his mouth wide open ready to bite Erick who was too shocked to move.
YAY!!!!
Sorry Erick, you're ded. :)
DO NOT WORRY THOUGH!!! ILL SHAVE YOU!!!! *Cough* *Cough* Save I mean.
/gets Dark Thorn blade ready/ Jump at me Crimson, and we'll be having vog kabobs for dinner!
(Licks lips)
MmmMmm!!!
Its kind of cannibalistic, but still!!!
Skolver: Ice cream, or mint.
\
Vog cub: All kinds of hot foods. (MAinly hot peppers)
Ash tail and dusker: The dusty mystery meat in the freezer.
Then how do they know that Jelly Gems taste like Raspberries.
Then how do they know that Jelly Gems taste like Raspberries.
Scanning/analyzing devices in their mouth.
I mean, the impossible can happen in fanfics.
Even mystic becoming normal? O_o
u lousy scum eating little RAT! :OOOOO
xD jk :P
by anything can happen, u mean that dusk can become semi-inteligent and be smarter than the average mosquito?
O.O this surely is the darkest of sorcery!!! xD
Name:Altair
Race:Skelly
Color:Ice Blue
Gender:He's dead, he has no gender
Friendly(as in would you help the knights):at first,no, but then he will later on
Likes:executions,commanding, destroying knights.
Dislikes:Losing,made fun of.
Personality:cold blooded, heartless, freak with a tad bit of sympathy when he helps the knights.
Hobbies:leading an undead army to knight refuge camps, destroying cities.
Equipment:gran Faust, sentenza, dread skelly body, dread skelly legs, vile striker,angry bomb
Would you want to die?(Optional):if he dies, he can just repair his broken bones, until he gets incinerated by king tinkinzars royal scorchers, if it will happen.
blind said she's not accepting new characters
well im a divine avenger plus i got the power of BOSWICK'S BUSH on my side!
*gets Final Flourish out* :)