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Mon, 12/26/2011 - 17:18
#51
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Mysticbeam
YAY new page!

your welcome :D

Wed, 12/28/2011 - 08:33
#52
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Jmtheawesome
Chapter? *CoUgH* *cOuGh*

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U-y43U2tbsI& (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ObOlaqhYGkw&feature=relmfu (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vQZC-th2BIs&feature=related (3)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JvOQSOWTW24 (4)

Chapter Fourteen /o/ Rejoice! Rejoice!

(Bloodless Narrative) ( start 1)
I floated to the sky, in the moonlight I could see Chuck far behind me, his pike algow.
I gotta put Dusk somewhere... As I looked around where I was. I was right above the area we reserved for Fiends, I got the idea and laid Dusk in a corner, making sure there weren't any other Fiends a round.
"IM STILL COMING!" Chuck shouted, before I narrowly dodged a flying pike, and started to float upwards again, looking behind at Dusk, as I dodged another pike.
I flew away for another minute, then faced Chuck myself, as I saw we were above the Dorm again.
Chuck began with a charge forward with his pike, dodging quickly I sent a backhand into his back, he fell for a meter, than rose again. I looked away for a split second, and got sent backwards from a random pile of something. I shook it off, and began again with a side strike
I wonder where he keeps all of that stuff.
I deflected an office chair, slicing it into two as I dashed forward to grab Chuck by the face, and tried to sense whatever was going on.
He had no soul.
"What the heck.." I said to myself, as I punched the side of his head.
He went unconcious, as I scooped him up before he fell into a garbage can.
"I better take him back.." As I flew downwards again, landing softly in front of the doors of the Dorm. ( stop 1)

(Amber Narrative) ( start 2)
I opened the gate of the Fiend reserved area, it creaked open with a rusty screech. I walked along the paths of the area, sorta resembling a worn-down zoo.
"I wonder who would be stirring up trouble at a time like this.." I said to myself, looking around the area when the shadow of a figure moved away.
"Hey! You!" I yelled, chasing after it as I ran past some empty stalls that gaurds would stand at.
I ran for a half hour flat, panting for air as I finally stopped at an alleyway, the figure standing in the moonlight.
"Wait..." As I took a closer look at the person I was facing.
"Mystic?" I asked, his face resembled the were-trojan that would throw my food around like a toy. ( stop 2) (Start 3)
"Who? This isn't Mystic.." The figure turned around, his face resembled him like Mystic staring at himself in the mirror.
"Yes it is, now what're you doing here-" I was about to ask him, when I felt myself being pushed into the ground by a large object.
I grunted as the wind was knocked out of my stomach, my face hit the asphalt as I struggled to get up.
"Whats... wrong with you.." I murmured. ( stop 3 )

(Genome Narrative) ( start 4 )
I sat in front of Arus in the damp cell, we looked at eachother for a moment, looking away when he broke the silence.
"I figured out what his plan is," He whispered, leaning close to me.
"What?" I leaned closer, listening to him.
"He made a pact with the Swarm, and he's using his power to destroy the universe, but really, the Swarm is just using Hariko for his own use," He pointed out.
"So.. if we don't stop Hariko in time.." I thought for a moment.
"The Swarm will consume everything, and everyone," I pictured the idea in my head, everyone screaming as a black something swallowed them whole.
Black Lantern anyone? :O
"We really need to find a way out," I stood up, and looked at the wooden bars on the window.
"Dont even try, it's Soulwood, remember?" He stopped me before I could do anything.
"Pfft, so what?" I smirked, grabbing a piece of bone.
"DONT-" ( stop 4 )

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 09:52
#53
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Mysticbeam
nice! :D

^_^

so, i haz captured amber?

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 10:44
#54
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Duskfinder
o_o

Jm died in a car crash? At least what mystic and imanoobandimproud told me...

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 10:52
#55
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Mysticbeam
yea, imnoobandimproud

told me hes dead D: from the car crash

*cries pitifully*

:(

if hes dead, i want to help finish the story for him :/

this sucks so badly <_<

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 12:02
#56
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Jmtheawesome
What are you talking about?

o_O Who said I was dead?

(IN COURT)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zCxyYNJUcBo&feature=related

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 15:19
#57
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Duskfinder
Mystic told me u died.

Mystic told me u died.

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 15:52
#58
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Mysticbeam
WHAT THE BLEAPING EFFF

IMNOOBANDIMPROUD, I WILL BEAT THE [Censored and removed for the sanity of the parents of the kids who are reading this :/] OUT OF U!

YOU FWEAKIN [More Censored Words]!!! :OOOO

U SAID HE DIED!!!!! AND I ACTUALLY BELEIVED U!!!

on a bright side:

@ jmtheawesome YAY UR NOT DEAD!!! ^_^

:D sorry, but that was NOT cool imnoobandimproud. u ARE a noob >:(

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 15:40
#59
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Duskfinder
u live??!

Darn... Gotta hire a professional this time.

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 15:47
#60
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Mysticbeam
O.O

dusk...........thats just pure evil/mean

so THATS why u didnt seem upset when i was at our house and i told u!!!! >:L

btw eevry, i went over to dusk's house to chillax and hang out :D he didnt seem upset about jm dying :OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 15:52
#61
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My-Alts-Alt
Whoops..

I guess the truth's out.

Plan A: Run

Plan B: Run faster

Plan C: Lag the game

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 16:31
#62
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Mysticbeam
>:( GRRRRR

time to make a SHORT play >:D

mystic: watches noob running

noob: oh cr@p!!!! HALP

mystic: pull out striker shield while transforming into trojan :P

noob: O.O

mystic: >:D continueous trojan dash + uber charges striker shield on = UBER POWERED DASH!!!! :O
mystic: cathes noob and shakes

noob: ahhhhh!!!!!
noob: sprays pepper spray into mystics eyes

mystic: blox spray and beats the bleap outta noob
mystic:pushes on spikes with NO peirce ressit :P
mystic: hires devilites to circle him and throw pitchforks at him
mystic: summons his trojan army to dash-launch rock jellies at noob
mystic: pays for all this with noob's money
mystic: drags noob's barely alive body to blindshot

Blindshot: so this is the &!$&*%& who lied to u mystic? u want me to torture him? ok :P
Blindshot: ties noob to a stake and throws fire pots at him

Dusk: i hey guys, wassup?

mystic: nothing, jsut watching some noob who made me feel horrible get tortured.

blind: yea :D

dusk: cool :D

mystic: alright bliund, thats enuf :P

noob: THANK YOU KIND SIR!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!

mystic: dont thank me yet >:D

noob: ._. oh no <_<

mystic: throws noob into a vat of salt with all his wounds open :P

every1 except noob is now happy :)

i admit i got BIT carried away there :D

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 16:54
#63
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Jmtheawesome
IamnoobandIamproud is a girl, and also, her nickname is IAM

Amber: So.. Im being pummeled into the ground by Mystic?
Me: Yup.
Genome: And I'm still stuck in the jail cell?
Arus: Yup
Amber: So.. what's going to happen next?
Me: You'll know once we get to it, if at least you're alive at that point. :P
Amber: You LITTLE-

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LS9ygU8RMvQ&feature=related (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jLK9402Maew&feature=results_video&playnex... (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VY8q0RRqYe8&feature=related (3)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fR0XtV2Y1-E&feature=related (4)

Chapter Fifteen /o/ Yay! Rebellion!

(Amber Narrative) ( start 1)
I ducked another slash from Mystic as I dodged another charge of Dark Energy. It sent some otherwise random surges of black lightning traveling in every direction.
"What's wrong with you?" I yelled, blocking a surge with my Metatron Blade, and fired another Bullet from my AP. Mystic took the bullet like a snowball, dodging it quickly. I dodged another overhead slash and slashed downwards, with almost no effect.
"Mrrf.." A grumble came from the corner, I looked there for a second to be blown all the way to the wall, making a huge crater the size of.. a... well, something big. My body felt numb, as I slumped down onto the floor face-first, my sword and gun fell a foot away from me. I could see his shadow straddle over me, when the footsteps of someone lighter than Mystic broke the confusion.
"Mystic? Amber?" I quickly recognized his voice, I looked in his direction to find Dusk standing there with confusion over him.
"What's.. going on?" He mumbled, staring at us like ghosts.
"Get away!" I yelled, Dusk only taking a step closer. (Y U DUN LISTEN?)
"What?" He looked at me with a little confusion, I felt my back stiffen along with Mystic rushing towards him.
"Dusk!" I yelled, struggling to stand up.
Mystic grabbed Dusk by the neck, and held him into the wall, cracking it slightly.
He squirmed, only to have Mystic press his hand into the wall even deeper.
I wanted to get up, but the pain that reeled into my back and legs kept me from moving at all.
Mystic growled happily, as he started to glow purple aura around him and Dusk, envoloping them in a sphere of shadow. ( stop 1) ( start 2)
I heard Dusk scream, before the darkness shed off, to reveal Dusk laying on the ground, probably dead. Mystic stood upon him with a glowing item in his hands, crushing it as it turned into a mist. I finally got the courage to stand up, and without warning, struck Mystic's crystal and turned him into stone. I panted heavily, my breathing came in and short gasps.
"Mystic.. Dusk.." I looked at both of them, my heart starting to break apart.
I picked up Dusk by the hands, and started to drag him along, when I accidentaly bumped into a drainage pipe.
"Oh my.." I gasped in horror, as the drainage pipe started to crack off from the rest of the buliding, and then, the whole wall.
I looked towards Mystic, still in stone as the wall started to lean in his direction, then, to my horror/amazement/astonishement/adjectivethatmeanshorrified, the whole wall fell upon him, crashing into a bunch of pieces, and unventfully, so did Mystic. ( Stop 2)

(Falcon Narrative) ( start 3 )
I ignited my hand, Zooduth and Blue backing a foot.
"So.. what happened to that?" Zood asked, as I extinguished the flame.
"Lab accident, it involved chemicals," I answered, shrugging like it was a gift.
"Hey um guys, are you planning on staying in there and rotting in that room for the rest of the day?" Tony and Dove dawdled (LOL) by.
We looked at eachother for a moment, then nodded.
"I wonder if there's anyone in the ATH?" I asked, thinking for a moment.
"Probably not," Blue answered, hence the darkness and the dangers and thieves and etc.
"So what? Then I get to play wit these bombs," Zooduth laugheg maliciously, juggling some bombs like toys.
Drop one, I bet you. ( stop 3 )

(Genome Narrative) ( start 4 )
I stood alight on the top of the ATH, sensing their conversation from the window.
What're you going to do once you have control of me? I thought back to the swarm controlling my body.
Nothing more than steal their souls, more for me.. He answered, before I could feel myself dropping form the roof and down to the doorway, stepping inside as I set on the lights. Lines of them lit up in a numerical order as he thought of a place to hide.
The statues.. The Swarm was enlightened by his own idea, then started to walk to the back of the hall. ( stop 4 )

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 17:09
#64
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Mysticbeam
:OOOO

i KILLED dusk? :O

and amber killed me? :D

and...genome's gonna kill every1 else? :P

"Mystic took the bullet like a snowball" i love that line :D

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 19:23
#65
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Duskfinder
Wow

Wow

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 21:57
#66
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My-Alts-Alt
AHEM..

As Producer, I ask that further acts of rebellion against this prank abate by the next chapter. >_>
It was a joke, but Jm WAS in a car accident and was hospitalized..
AND had a near death experiece.

Also..

Composer: Jm

Conductor: Guess. :)

Producer: Me

Tenors: Everyone played by other people.

Baritone: Characters made by US for the story.

Fri, 12/30/2011 - 10:35
#67
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Mysticbeam
=_=

u shalt not be evear forgiven for ye 'orrible deeds

NEVAR!!!!!!!! :O

=0 ^_^ well, have a nice day! :D

Fri, 12/30/2011 - 10:06
#68
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Softhead
Wait, Chuck's soul is gone?

But he is the cute embodiment of Devils. He woulden't have a soul.

If he does, doesn't he have Dr Chroma's Conscious with him? I haven't seen him mentioned.

Sat, 12/31/2011 - 10:57
#69
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Jmtheawesome
I will try and use Chuck's other Concious, sorry.

Arus: So who's going to die?
Composer: Everyone.
Producer: No exceptions! :)
Everyone: T_T
Conductor: I hate this..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fR0XtV2Y1-E&feature=related (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZj2TENVAjI&feature=related (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5T1pIsjLAM (3)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ObOlaqhYGkw&feature=relmfu (4)

Chapter Sixteen /o/ Yay! Mystic is DEAD! (Put Psycho music here)

(Blue Narrative) ( start 1)
Have I ever told you how dark it was outside? It was dark.
Like, really, really, dark. Falcon lit his hand, so at least we had a light to go with.
"Hey, the lights are on.." Falcon pointed to the ATH, the lights on.
"Well, there might be someone there," I barked, beginning to walk towards to the ATH.
"No, really?" Zooduth rolled his eyes, following as we opened the doors. (Yes, there are doors,)
We found the place alit with electricity, the lights and machinery working like clockwork.
Except that, nobody was here.
Before we could turn around, the doors behind me shut with a loud thud, along with all of the windows in an eerie way.
"What's going on?" I turned my head to the side, looking around as I backed up a foot.
"Maybe it's a prank, there's definetly someone back there," As we began to walk to the back of the area, by the statues and that switch.
Something told me that you could make a jail from that.
"Did you hear that?" Falcon alerted my senses, and made my *ahem* back stiffen, as I heard a short clanging noise from the back of the area.
Without warning, a figure jumped out of the shadows, and ran right into Zooduth. ( stop 1, and start 2)
The figure raised his Cold Iron Vanquisher, about to stab Zood when Falcon drove him off with a punch to the side, falling near the fire trap. Zooduth grabbed a Nitronome, (!) and began to charge it. I darted out of the way for the figure to bring down his sword on my spot, some gravel and steel erupted form the ground from the impact, followed by a huge

explosion that blew us away into the wall. I grunted lightly as my back dented the steel wall, as I flopped down onto the ground. ( stop 2 )

( Amber Narrative) ( start 3 )
I burst through the doors dragging Dusk to find Chuck laying on a medical bed.
"What's going on?" I asked, dropping Dusk. (owch! :3)
"Chuck went berserk, but I struck him unconcious," Bloodless floated down, coming quickly.
"Do you have another medical bed?" I picked up Dusk again, laying him down on the couch.
"Yeah, i'll pull it out for you," Bloodless came back with a medium-sized bed on wheels. I quickly put Dusk on the sheets.
"One really weird thing I inspected on Chuck.." Bloodless alerted my attention.
"His Heart Isn't beating, but he's still alive.."
"What do you mean by that?" My back stiffened.
"I mean, his heart isn't beating at all, the only case of that I've seen was when they lose their soul.." Bloodless wrote some stuff on a clip-board.
"Lose their soul?" I looked at Chuck again.
"In order to do that, you need a very strong magical medium, and a deity of great power in order to focus it on," She explained, I still couldn't understand.
"I think Necro has some more information on it," She rolled her eyes, looking at Dusk. ( stop 3 )

(Arus Narrative) ( start 4 )
Boxes.
I just remembered, the boxes that I had obtained from Wedge and Talon.
"Maybe there's something inside one of them.." I took them out, only to find that the one from Wedge had a lock on it, probably an iron lockbox.
"Drat," I cursed under my breath, tossing it aside as I took in hand Talon's.
I found it to be wooden, opening it to find a letter inside.
The letter said as follows.

You remember the first time we met? Just try to find me, I won't fret.
Take all the itme you need, just take this letter in hand and you'll read,
of the past we have taken, the goals we have accomplished,
But as soon as you find me, youll soon have wished,
before the darkness came we would have met.
and when you make your actions, you wont have regret.

( stop 4 )

Sat, 12/31/2011 - 12:46
#70
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Blindshot
ooooooooooo

Who thinks that Arus can find Talon? Or better yet, would he go find Talon?

Sat, 12/31/2011 - 15:12
#71
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Mysticbeam
awww ^-^

arus and talon sitting ina tree, K-I-S-nevermind :D

ofc hes gonna go find talon! xD

did u not read the second story??!!!!.....well i didnt either but that doesnt change anything! :P

Mon, 01/02/2012 - 08:49
#72
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My-Alts-Alt
HEY!

Of COURSE Arus is going to find Talon.
At the moment, please enjoy a very mediocre rhyme.

He was murderous, he was fast,
Arus striked quick like a blade from the past.
He murdered dozens and knew what to do.
If he ever finds you, he will kill you too.
Barred doors and bordered up windows,
Dont even try, because he knows,
Where you are, where you will hide.
Just try to run, youll last thirty seconds alive.
He slashed through their bodies with no sense of care.
He dragged their bodies to nearly anywhere,
He cut their heads, and drank their blood,
He buried them in the soil, maybe even mud.

*Ignores everyone's shrieks of terror with headphones, playing "Long Way"*

~The Producer

Tue, 01/03/2012 - 15:00
#73
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Jmtheawesome
:p

Yeah, so um.. sorry for the HUGE delay, Holidays and that stuff.
To make up for it.. here's a LONG Chapter. :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=42ryl_HK7Fg&feature=related (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2-3xz-HPf2k&feature=related (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_O0IlfxpaIk&feature=related (3)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VY8q0RRqYe8&feature=related (4)

Chapter Seventeen /o/ Do you see what I see? :)

(Arus Narrative) ( start 1 )
I quickly crept out of the doorway from an unseen montage of making a key from bones, I slowly opened the door the slightest bit I possibly could, and found the hallway to be empty.
All clear.. I thought yo myself, my escape already being successful. Silently walking upon the other halls until I came upon the door Hariko used to travel to any part of Cradle he wants to.
"Take me to... the Great Colony," I whispered to the door, it opened with a bright light as I stepped through it, wind slammed against my face as I could feel myself traveling to the center of the planet.
"Find me.." I said to myself, clenching the note in my hand as I walked past desolate and barren streets with void everywhere. I looked at the black something clinging to the walls and floors, but to my surprise, it darted away when I walked towards it.
I caught the glimpse of my old Dorm at the end of the street, barricaded with the sign saying "VACANT" on the front. I sighed, as the past memories of them flowed around me with a warming welcome. I walked past the hallway, old pictures of me and my old friends hung on the walls like vintage memories. I headed towards the door of my old room, but to much of my surprise, unlike the area around it, it was clean. I hesitated a moment, before reaching to touch the doorknob.
Warm, like someone just opened it a few seconds ago. ( stop 1)

(Genome Narrative) ( start 2 )
Yes.. that's it.. kill them all and rejoice in the bloodlust.. The swarm echoed into my head.
It was forever a mystery to learn how to do that. Blue swept to the side and prepared an attack, while Zooduth threw the charged bomb. I ducked out of the way of the incoming explosive, grabbing it in mid-air as I threw it back at Zooduth, missing him as he smirked lightly.
That was before the bomb detonated, hurling Zooduth in Blue's direction, knocking them both dangerously close to a (Lagging) spike trap. Falcon raced behind me, fists on fire, I swept to the side, sticking out my leg as he tripped over it, and fell over Zooduth and Blue. (Memories, right?) I smirked evilly, when the familiar sound of a vaporizer -esque bomb going off made me turn in the other direction, before falling asleep. ( stop 2 )

(Mote Narrative) ( no music. :C )
I smiled reluctantly, (anti) Genome fainting on the spot, when I saw the spike trap starting to warm up. Zood, Blue, and Falcon scrambled to their feet as they tripped on peice of an iron bar (again).
"Heh.." Grinning as I began to drag Genome's body out the door, the black in his eyes fading away. Falcon helped be as we got out the door, explaining the whole scenario of how the heck they got there.
"So.. why did Genome attack us?" Blue asked from the side, her coat rugged and (somewhat) bloody.
"It's a bit complicated.." I answered, as we finally reached the front of the dorm. Everyone inside.
"Finally, I thought a thief or someon-" Alex called from the back, stopping in his tracks when he saw us.
"I'm, not even going to ask.." He sighed, walking away. ( still no music.. 'cause im mean. *insert trollface .jpg)

(Necro Narrative) ( start 3)
"Okay.. I figured out how this whole scenario works.." I called to everyone, stopping whatever they were doing whether it was taking care of the (unconcious or dead) knight and whatnot or beating the living daylights out of a person for stealing her cookies.
"Then tell us.." Vog appeared again, sitting atop a chair casually.
"Well, it seems that someone is trying to infest the rest of the Knights' bodies with the Swarm, doing so he absorbs their power," I explained, reasoning out why Chuck went berserk.
"That power that you speak of.. is called Soul,"
"He needs the souls of a few individuals in order to complete whatever he's doing, and those individuals are us," Frightening them a little, putting into their heads the idea of them being the next target.
"And the only way to save yourself from this is...?" Vog sighed deeply, waiting for an answer.
"No clue," I looked down.
"Well, you need the Four Echo stones, and a being who performed miracles before, because you'll need a mother of a miracle to save yourself from this one.." Vog jammed into our heads.
"We need to go INTO the swarm-Infested Clockworks when we're trying to stay AWAY from the Swarm?" Shade yelled from the back. Vog shrugged, reluctant as always.
"Dont worry, I have a Proxy that will help you," Vog alerted us with (SOME) good news.
"Who?" Zooduth asked, still juggling a bomb (with hopefully, a safety latch).
"Evan knows," Vog finished before disappearing again.
We all stared at Evan for a second or two.
"What?" He asked. ( stop 3)

(Chuck Narrative) ( start 4)
So, anything new with you? Mr. Chroma asked, I was still unconcious.
Got trapped by the swarm, and lost a huge part of myself.. I answered back, It felt like I was missing part of my own personalit. (Kingdom Hearts BBS comes to mind)
Dont worry, you still have me to talk to..
Ugh.. I think I'll just stab you with something I could find...
Like what? That thing in your head you call a brain?
Possibly
Fine, well, I'll give you the backdrop on what I heard otuside,
*INSERT NECRO'S SPEECH HERE*
_______________________________)
Am i.. off the hook for not having the chapter?
No Atrumvindex, you WILL NOT kill me, not in a MILLION YEARS. >_>

Tue, 01/03/2012 - 15:11
#74
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Mysticbeam
YAY

a bit hard to folow, and not a great chapter as the others(not bc im not in it, but bc no really goof fighting scenes :D)

BUT YAY! ITS A CHAPTER ALREADY!!!!! IVE BEEN WAITING FOREVER!!!!

.

Tue, 01/03/2012 - 17:15
#75
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Jmtheawesome
OFFICIALLY..

I AM NOT ACCEPTING ANY MOAR CHARACTERS

Wed, 01/04/2012 - 15:45
#76
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Jmtheawesome
Have u noticed, many fanfics start with "The"

Atrumvinex, you SHALT NOT KILL ME >:D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_O0IlfxpaIk&feature=related (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xUqb-Uej0hQ (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mH_uhIHuhKI (3)

Chapter Eighteen /o/ Refractioning your HECTOPASCALS *Insert trollfaace .jpg*

(Ether Narrative) ( start 1)
"Ready?" Shade shouted over everyone else.
"Ready!" Everyone yelled, as we headed out the doors of the dorm, locking it tightly with the key I held. We walked along the same path we would usually take, but this time, the groun was littered with objects that seemed like silhouttes of the unforgiving. Once the light we held brought shape and color to them, they seemed almost sad.
A broken sign for a guildhall.
A shattered shield.
A telecom still crackling it's "ERROR" messege.
I put the telecom out of it's misery, breaking it further.
At last, we reached the elevators, through the light we could see the bright yellow "STAY OUT" tape that covered the entrance inside. Everyone looked at Dusk for a moment, I could sense he was pretty depressed about Mystic.
Why would he have been killed anyway?
"MISSING SOMEONE?" A familiar yelled raced past our heads, whizzing from the direction behind us, standing was the silhoette of a huge character.
"Hmm?" I turned to look at him closer, before he began to charge up energy, sending a blast of hot (and or) cold air at us, blowing me away a millionth of a centimeter. The figure dashed towards us, and then turned smaller and faceplanted right on the elevator dashboard.

(Sir-Shade Narrative) ( keep playing 1)
"Mystic?" I leaned closer to him, breathing in and out rapidly in short and steady gasps. ( start 2... ooh! happy happy sobby!)
"Yep, it's still me.." He grinned, Amber matched the expression that I had when I found out.... about certain things.
"You're alive?" She stammered.
"Yeah, I just took the (dead) body of a trojan, and placed it where I was when you weren't looking," Mystic explained, picturing it.
"Well, we're just about to (Im not going to explain that whole thing again, No, just.. No)" I reinterpretted Necro's speech.
"I just got back from a two-chapter rest," (LOLWUT) I'm going to need some fun.
"Ugh, can we get a move on already?" Dusk yelled, everyone else nodding like bobble-heads.
We finally agreed, after another ten-minute delay of random stuff. (Nyan Cat, Chuck Norris, etc etc) ( stop 1 )

(???? Narrative) ( start 3) Not, since this part isn't long, you can choose not to play music)
He called me.
He called me to come.
He told me to find them.
He called me to help them.
He called me, to help them find they who will save Cradle.
He said to get them.
And this is where my journey begins.
To help them. ( stop 3)

(Arus Narrative) (no music yet..)
"I've been waiting.." I opened the door, to find a familiar Gremlin sitting inside patiently.
"Talon!?" I yelled, I walked into the room, completely clean save a few dust bunnies here and there. (Dust bunnies, lol)
"Yep, been a while too," She walked towards me, "what's your story?"
"Escaped," I answered quickly.
"Ditto, but this time, I had some help," She pointed to a lump on a bed, covered by a blanket.
"Rya helped me bust the door open," She laughed lightly. That explains the dent I found in one of the bars.
"We need to go back," I told her, standing by the doorway.
"We can't just go back, we need to do something, that's why I've been waiting here for around.. a year," My nerve snapped, in fifteen dimensions.
"A.. YEAR?" Startled, on so many levels.
"Yep, 365 days, and 6 hours," She sighed, Rya muffled in her sleep.
"Just take a seat, and I'll explain my part in this," She deeply smiled again.

Wed, 01/04/2012 - 20:38
#77
Duskfinder's picture
Duskfinder
-_-

Just what I should expect of mystic...

Sat, 01/07/2012 - 13:22
#78
Jmtheawesome's picture
Jmtheawesome
Sorry for delay. D:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ObOlaqhYGkw&feature=relmfu (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2-3xz-HPf2k&feature=related (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mH_uhIHuhKI (3)

Chapter Nineteen /o/ Hey Look! Death!

(Sir-Shade Narrative) (Note, the use of "Death" in the chapter) (1)
I turned into a wolver and held a steady grip on my sword, facing the numerous void- somethings that were surrounding us.
"Oh sure, first stop, the Unknown Passageway," Dusk sneered, driving his Voltedge through a blob of something.
I ran towards a Void-Lumber, jumping upwards as I pushed it back, falling on top of a Swarm Turret, quishing it into black pixels of nothing.
The wonders of narrating a story in places like this baffles even the most clever of storywriters.
"Pfft, Unknown won't be Unknown once we find it," Evan ran by, firing his AR into the darkness, more red eyes of infected monsters shone through the darkness.
"I see the elevator!" Ether floated from a direction, hitting an enemy with a bullet while shortly dodging an attack.
"Where?" I yelled, transforming back into a Knight.
"Due South," Ether fired some mroe into the crowd.
"We can't detect South, the Swarm screwed up our telecoms,"
"Okay then, follow me-" Ether was inturpted, when a Lumber he didn't see slammed him into a wall, his wings broke as he fell onto the floor.
"Ether!?" I heard Amber yelled, rushing to him as he began to glow with an uneasy light, when a small sphere-like object protruded from his back, and was absorbed by the swarm.
"C'mon! He was about to go this way," Mystic rushed by, slamming into the Lumber as it broke into Digits of nothingness, when we finally caught the icon on the elevator. Amber grabbed Ether, and hauled him to the elevator, everyone else rushing by as the Swarm started to crowd behind her. Amber threw Ether onto the elvator, and began to run towards it, when a Swarm-Wolver sprang out of the ground, and tackled her to the side. I turned into a Wolver, and ripped the enemy off from her, only to find that a couple more were starting to prowl. I gentle bit Amber's arm, and started to drag her to the elevator, finally reaching it as Dusk punched the down button, the elevator descending quickly. We sighed of relief to find the wolvers staring at us from above, then suddenly, one had the guts to jump down, Dusk reacted quickly and blew him skyward.( stop 1)

(??? Narrative) (start 2)
I ran along the shadows of the dark corridor, slinging a bomb to obliterate an unsuspecting amount of swarm, dark particles flying everywhere as I ran through the mist and jumped down the elevator, gliding down the railing quickly as I stopped to prevent myself from crashing into the elevator. I saw the gorup readying their camp, protected by a blue aura. Some muffling noises, and I saw some figures emerge from a medical tent, some of them converesed for a second and then left with frowns.
I snuck past the force-field, entering the encampment. Ah, memories.
I opened the tent, and found a Mewkat and a Knight laying inside, unconcious.
"Who.." The Knight whispered, the IV in her arm was attached to a container filled with a Health liquid.
I opened up my bag, and took out the miracle elixer I got from Vee. I opened the container, and disappated the liquid inside. The Knight grumbled a word or two, before I poured in the other liquid, filling the container to the brim. I left in a flash, leaving the Knight and the unconcious Mewkat, ( stop 2)

(Evan Narrative) (start 3)
I shuffled in my sleep, waking up with sweat dripping down my face.
"Ugh... nightmares.." I whispered to myself, wiping the liquid dripping from my forehead. (?)
Some muffled whispered outside, disappating as the sleep was broken from my eyes.
"Mrrf..." I decided to look around, just to tire myself again. I got up from my mat, and put on a (really, really, really small) Wolver coat to keep myself warm. For some reason, it could be boiling over in an Unknown Passageway, or it can be colder than a black of ice. I looked outside, and found nobody there. I walked along everyone's tents, seeing them inside sleeping.
Apparantly, Mystic's tent was alit with a lantern, the light inside silhoutted his figure, reading a book.
A book?
Suddenly, in the corner of my eye, a dark figure raced by, I ran towards it to find a familiar face standing in front of me.
Memories of explosions and changing sides awoke my annoyed feeling for him.
"Wedge?" ( stop 3)
_______________________)
OOOH! PROXY!

Sat, 01/07/2012 - 13:35
#79
Softhead's picture
Softhead
Mystic was revived!?

I am starting to lose interest.

Sat, 01/07/2012 - 18:44
#80
Mysticbeam's picture
Mysticbeam
=0

sort of good job.

good work jm.

this sounds very monotonous doesnt it?.

im actually bored right now.

thats why im typeing this.

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YAY! I JUST WASTED 5+ SECONDS OF YOUR LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

congrats.

im bored again <_<

Sat, 01/07/2012 - 19:53
#81
My-Alts-Alt's picture
My-Alts-Alt
Hee hee hee hee..

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/4572/unicorns.jpg A gift 4 Mystic.

ENJOY

Sun, 01/08/2012 - 11:26
#82
Mysticbeam's picture
Mysticbeam
lol.

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sun, 01/08/2012 - 11:41
#83
Mysticbeam's picture
Mysticbeam
lol.

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sun, 01/08/2012 - 15:53
#84
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Hey

I'm really late, but can I join? I mean I know you said no and stuff, but PLEASE! I'll try (and I'll put on my best begging puppy face) and hope for the best, but if I'm not accepted its okay. Again. PLLEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE :P

Sun, 01/08/2012 - 16:03
#85
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
PLEASE

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! (BEGGING PUPPY EYE FACE)

Name:Vot

Race:Knight

Color:Cobalt

Weapons: Acended Calibur

Armor: Solid Cobalt

Personality: Kind of awkward.

Likes: Making thing that eventually try to kill him.

Dislikes:His creations trying to murder him. D:

Die early?: Meh, no thanks but if it allows me to be in the story YES. (Then some random guy named Vot was murdered. That's all I need, PLEASE!)

Small bio: After accedentaly destroying the Skylark (don't tell ANYONE.) He got into some secretive secret group filled with secrets. He doesn't even know what their called.

Yes.

I know that I probably won't get in, but I love the story. Even if its really confusing. (I couldn't find the first or second). So even if I'll never be a part of this AWESOMENESS, good luck with the AWESOMENESS!

Wed, 01/11/2012 - 04:58
#86
Jmtheawesome's picture
Jmtheawesome
Sorry There WILL be a chapter

Sorry
There WILL be a chapter later, or I will TAKE THAT BOOK FROM UNDER MYSTIC'S BED AND POST THE PICTURES IN IT!

~The Composer

Wed, 01/11/2012 - 05:45
#87
Jmtheawesome's picture
Jmtheawesome
CHAPTER!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RXIYNADL5xo&feature=related (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_O0IlfxpaIk&feature=related (2)

Chapter Twenty /o/ Unerring Awkwardness

(Evan Narrative) (start 1)
"What're you doing here?" I flipped off his hood, his left eye blackened and scarred.
"Trying to help," Wedge answered, his usuallly clumsy naiveness was now covered in a solemn and (ahem) dead-serious air.
"What happened to your EYE?" I was about to say more, when he curled up the cloak on his left arm, blackened and scratched like a cat got to him.
"The Void, Hariko took me prisoner and made me tell everything about you guys, then this person.. Vee saved me from him, but I still had my scarrs on my arm and eye," Wedge explained his history so far.
"Okay.. wait.. you're the proxy Vee sent?"
"Proxy? He just told me to help you find 4 echo stones," He was left out in the dark as well.
"Okay, well... we don't have a tent, so-" I was about to say sorry, when he interuptted.
"It's fine," Before he curled up behind a tent, right before the range of the fore-field.
"Suit yourself," I sighed, as I walked back to my tent and fainted in the doorway.

(Bloodless Narrative) ( keep playing 1)
I woke up before everyone else did, scanning the perimeter by floating up in the air. Nothing was disturbed, until I found a sleeping figure behind one of the tents. Was it a swarm? I thought for a moment, but then again, the force-field was designed to keep SWARM away, nothing else. I floated down, and looked at the little creature sleeping quietly. It had a baggy cloak over itself, obscuring it's facial features. I hesitated, before slowly reaching out, and pulling the hood off. I stared awkwardly, realizing that the person was a Gremlin, except that half of his face was jet-black. It shuffled in it's sleep, his left hand extending outward with the sleeve pulling back, his left arm was horribly scarred and blackened.
"Traces of swarm.." I growled to myself, taking out my sword silently, bringing it into an overhead position.
"Good night," I was about to slash him in the midsection, when a small, fast object tackled my side and made me trip. I fell to the ground, my hand extending through the force-field, the Swarm starting to get to it.
"Evan!?" I looked at him, his weight pulling me down, until I felt a sharp sting in my right hand, the Swarm started to materialize around it, covering my fingers in a black something. (how long ago have I used the something?) My hand felt numb, before something glowing started to materialize in my palm, being eaten away by the Swarm as it darted back, coming away from range.

(Vots Narrative) (start 2)
I grabbed the screwdriver from the end of the table, screwing in the bolt(?) to finish the Mecha Knight.
"Um.. thank you.. sir?" The Knight said, his broken mecha knight finished. He stuck out his hand to reveal some crowns, which I took with a quick grab.
"Watch out for the lasers," I said as I walked away.
"Lasers?" He tilted his head, before a green beam shot out from a direction, he dodged it before the Mecha Knight stood up and began to chase him, firing lasers. I entered the ruined arcade, the black and rusted metal adorned the walls and littered the floors. I was standing on an elevator, the "DOWN" button was clean like it was just used. Suddenly, I heard an outburst of energy and a green laser destroyed the panel, I felt the floor underneath me give way.
Then, I just could feel myself falling.

(Kozma Narrative) ( keep playing 2)
News spread around that the remaining members of the originals were going into the clockworks again.
"And WE didn't get an invitation," Fang sneered from across the table, curling the newspaper into a ball, throwing it into the air, and blowing several holes in it with his Sentenza.
"Oh hush, it's their problem, not ours," Feron flipped another page of the paper.
"You're on your way to the greatest father of the year award," Feron answered by taking a sip of his Wolverale.
"Go clean up your quarters," He growled at Fang, who stopped tugging at his leg
"You too, Koz," He gave a glare, before I went up the stairs to my room. I opened the door and looked inside, Fang was reading the book I kept udner my bed. ( stop 2)
________________________________-
Everyone haz their bookz. :DD

Thu, 01/12/2012 - 16:03
#88
Windsickle's picture
Windsickle
Feron speaks three times in a

Feron speaks three times in a row in the Kozma narrative. Was that intentional? It seems like it should be a "back-and-forth" conversation between Fang and Feron.

Fri, 01/13/2012 - 15:22
#89
Jmtheawesome's picture
Jmtheawesome
D:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ObOlaqhYGkw&feature=relmfu (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3YlA-g5YIqQ&feature=related (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0GEWkIANz4I (3)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L638OZoL9Ow (4)

Chapter Twenty One /0/ LWI (LIVE WITH IT)

Don't read this text, don't see this text, just write your text,

(Vot Narrative) (start 1)
I tumbled along the elevator shaft, finally landing on the platform denting it a good 2 feet.
"I think I broke my face.." I murmered, getting up to see some lights in the distance, flashing on and off like a battlefield. I wondered for a moment. When was the last time I actually got to kill something...
Oh yeah, two minutes ago.
I took another step forward, when a large clanking noise behind me snapped a nerve.
The Mecha Knight was out for blood. ( stop 1)

(Ether Narrative) (start 2)
"Bloodless, six o'clock," I shouted to her, she brought down a blade onto a Swarm Source that was about to.... do something evil. Mote and Zooduth rushed by, leaping ahead of the (ACCIDENTALLY) flawed force-field, that laid in pieces. Zooduth prepared a (random) bomb, dodging a (random) bullet, Mote slashed the source with a quick strike while it disintegrated into black (stuff). Mote looked behind himself to find a Void-Lumber preparing a strike, before it was blown into (varying sizes of) pieces by a (random) Nitronome. I fired a bullet into the crowd, a small explosions followed by a number of Lumbers falling on top of eachother signaled my attack connected. I flew above

(Wedge Narrative) (keep playing 2)
My hood fluttered like a cape in the wind, as I threw the Shivermist forward, hitting against a Void-Thwacker. He was frozen into the ground before I sent a punch into his frozen body, breaking it into shards of ice and pixels. A random knight in the corner of my eye caught my attention, as I turned to look at him. He was running around followed by a Mecha Knight, firing lasers like crazy. I took my eyes off for a moment to be tackled into Mote and Zooduth. Mote accidentally threw his Curse Bomb upwards, flailing wildly. The projectile ricocheted off the ceiling and hit an unlucky Mystic who apparantly rammed into Dusk and Amber at the same time, who then all fell on top of eachother. A weird silence swept amongst them, until the bomb blew off and sent them in random directions.
Go figure. ( stop 2)

(Arus Narrative) ( start 3)
Talon brought up a random (crystal?) orb from under the bed, it gleamed with an ethereal glow.
Reminds me of that something Evan cooked.
"Look into this," Talon shoved it into my hands, it was perfectly polished. The only imperfection was a symbol carved with a (bloody?) ink on the bottom. I saw a flash of pink light, then found everyone fighting the swarm. But there was a couple more members to the group...
A gremlin..
Two knights..
and a Skolver.
"Wait.. we're you watching me the whole time?" I looked at Talon, who was quietly twiddling her thumbs(?).
"Uhm.... I completely DIDN'T see that sunset with Mystic, Amber, and Dusk, who then were pushed off by you, in a hilarious attempt to get them together, then Mote, Bloodless, and Chuck came along for medical help,"
Talon fact: When she thinks, her mouth speaks.
"Humph," I shrugged. Nothing suspicious here. ( stop 3)

(Fang Narrative) ( start 4)
I ran out the hallway door with Kozma's secret book of secretive secrets of secretive secrets, that was secret. An energy round whizzed past my head.
"GIVE IT BACK!!!!" Kozma yelled. I ran through another intersections when I was at a dead end, Kozma stood there with a Super Stun Gun.
"Ssg?" I chuckled, until I realized it was the one that I was tinkering with. Kozma put her hand on the dial I set on the energy barrager, from setting 1.. to setting 57843. Curses.
"Seriously, GIVE IT.." She growled pointing the gun at me. The glowing energy barrel glowed with a dangerously high amount of energy.
"MATRIX GAME.. GO!" I yelled, as I threw the book into the air, while Kozma pulled the trigger. ( stop 4)

Sat, 01/14/2012 - 07:29
#90
Randomjockey's picture
Randomjockey
Wow, Alex disappeared? (except for a random excerpt at EP17)

It MIGHT be for an armor upgrade (which I'll specify) but I have no idea really. Good job so far, and I hope I didn't miss myself randomly dying somehow. Also Alex has a hologram computer? IT ALL MAKES SENSE NOW. (I own a laptop IRL)

Armor upgrade details:
Wolver Set --> Dusker Set
Freezing Vaporizer --> Freezing Atomizer
Bristling Bucklet --> Dark Thorn Shield
+ Dark Thorn Blade
+ Tri-heart Pendant
+ Dual Heart Pendant
The pendants have some... um... story behind them, but not me nor Alex will say it :3

Sat, 01/14/2012 - 10:56
#91
Softhead's picture
Softhead
Rant.

Why is almost everyone who dies revived? Wedge, Mystic, Andrein, Evan ect.? In this fic you said no one would not get revived here, yet Mystic is still alive! It makes their death less inportant and less impact(like Captain America's). One of the crimson Skies Gremlins got the team on the elevator and sacrificed himself by holding off a Tordadrone! Evan commited suicide yet was revived by a spark of life! Sad, Captain Marvel's death is still important because he is still DEAD.

If you are trying to not hurt anyone's feelings, then why make your own fanfic if you are trying to please different sides TOO much. Critisim yes but Vots was added even though before you said no more characters. Odd.

I know you may don't care, but this is my oppinion.

No on the lighter side, I think that is a Swarm copy of Mystic. Mystic is truly dead. "I swithced it with a dead trojan" trick is dumb and unbelieveable as there are no trojans near that scene and how did he get it since he was stone?

Continue with the fic.

Sun, 01/15/2012 - 21:38
#92
Jmtheawesome's picture
Jmtheawesome
Chapter Time

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U-y43U2tbsI& (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZj2TENVAjI&feature=related (2)

Chapter Twenty Two /o/ MATRIX GAME, GO!

(Fang Narrative) (start 1)
It was like time slowed down drastically for a moment. Like that time in a movie when they're about to bring that heavy object into someone's face? Or that time in horror shows when the HOO HEE HEOO HEE HOO HEE thing popps up? Yeah, exactly like that. I saw the orange bullets the size of fists whizz across the hallway, aiming for me.
"MATRIX GAME, GO!" I shouted, as I ducked the first one, I waved my hands out of the way to avoid another. I jumped in the air and did a somersault, dodging around 6 others. (Reference anyone?) At last, the gun was around 3 quarters ammo, Kozma grunted and prepared the second attack. I ran to a wall, and scaled it for a moment, to dodge two. I jumped off of the surface to dodge 3 more, and landed clean.
"How do you do that?" Kozma put the gun down, awed and shocked.
"Taught myself, now give me the gun, and I'll give you the book," I took the Metal Locked book, a post-it note saying, "LOOK INTO THIS BOOK AND I WILL SEVER YOUR LIMBS OFF" was pasted on the front.
Kozma lowered the energy level to 0 on the Stun Gun.
I took another step closer, as she reached both hands out with the gun in her other hand.
I put the book in her hand, and backed away with the gun.
"Hmph," She grunted, as she took out a (REALLY REALLY REALLY) big key from her pocket.
It amazes me how much we spiral knights put stuff into our pockets.
She opened the book, and stared at me with a furious glare.
"Have you been READING THIS!?" She shouted, pointing to a folded corner in the book.
"No duh," I shrugged, about to talk away when I felt a sharp pain in my back.
I looked at myself, and found a tranquilzer dart embedded in my back.
"Ha ha, I knew a Tranquilizer Accesory wouldn't be useless," She laughed, before I fainted right on the floor.
Onto my gun with the power level set to 10. (stop 1)

(Blue Narrative) (start 2)
I swirled out of the way from an attack and came back with a bite to the lumber's leg. Zooduth raced by and threw a random bomb into the crowd, exploding in a red and or blue explosion. Falcon ignited his hand and threw forward a pot of oil, flaming for a moment before exploding in front of me. It set numerous enemies into flames when a random knight with a mecha knight chasing him ran by, the mecha knight "accidentally" shot through 7 swarm lumbers and a wolver, destroying them and leaving no trace of their existance.
"Who the heck is that guy?" Falcon stared at the knight running in circles, the mecha knight failing to shoot him again and again instead obliterating random swarm.
"Something tells me his name is Vot," Zooduth stopped by us, staring at him as well.
"Hmm..." And in a synchronized pattern, we tilted our heads in a confused manner.
Then, a gigantic explosion left us in random directions.
Evan stood a couple meters away, his Polaris steaming.
"Sorry, my finger slipped," He giggled. (REFERENCE!) (keep on playing 2)

(Swarm Narrative (?))
I laughed for a moment, as I rammed into a Void Gremlin and squished his puny body. I brought the full extensino of my body weight to ram into a Lumber, knocking him onto a bunch of others. Vot(?) ran by, the mecha knight following him fired a laser and destroyed the lumber that fell before me in a quick mannder, obliterated in a snap. I turned around, and found that Tony and Dove were staring at me with a suspicious glare, before waddling away.
That was close... I used telepathy to speak to Hariko.
Don't mention it, I'm going to bring Krogmo onto the scene, make your move then,He ordered, before Alex destroyed the last Void-enemy.
"Moving on?" Alex panted, whiping the sweat from his forehead.
"Yeah, and Mote," Falcon stopped Mote in his tracks.
"What was with that stupid force-field?" Falcon was panting heavier than usual.
"I dunno, I told everyone that it would be okay as long as nobody touches it," Mote walked away from him, and athered up the remaining pieces of the broken machine. (stop 2)
________________________________________|
Looks like we have a SPY on our hands.
Any ideas who it is?
Well.. here is the breakup.
Suspect #1: Dusk
Suspect #2: Mote
Suspect #3: Wedge
Suspect #4: Amber
.....anything suspicious?
Oh.. btw.
Atrum, Mystic, if you tell ANYONE.. I will sever your limbs off ONE BY ONE.

Mon, 01/16/2012 - 00:17
#93
Windsickle's picture
Windsickle
Zooduth. Almost definitely.

Zooduth. Almost definitely. He messed with the shield a while back just so he could blow some stuff up. He was delightfully surprised to experience the consequences at this time though any other would probably have been fine also.

Fri, 01/20/2012 - 20:35
#94
Jmtheawesome's picture
Jmtheawesome
http://www.youtube.com/watch?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ObOlaqhYGkw&feature=relmfu (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xiikD9pRCMI&feature=related (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jLK9402Maew&feature=results_video&playnex... (3)

Chapter Twenty Three /o/ Undeniable Loss

(Alex Narrative) (start 1)
"Have you noticed.. Mystic is acting a bit.. demanding lately?" Genome whispered to me as we marched in the Gloaming Wildwoods, thick with poisonous mist and void.
"What else is new?" I shrugged. The gigantic trees almost covered the sky with a thick black and green texture. It was extremely quiet for some reason... quiet as in..
Really quiet.
"Mystic, are you sure you know where we're going?" I asked, as we went into a deeper path of the woods.
"Abosolutely," He called from the front, as he charged energy again to send a purple flash into the woods to illuminate whatever was there for a split second. I could see shadowy figures standing there with their red eyes in a demonic clutch.
I took out my sword, and began to charge it in a projectile stance, when a quick flurry of air whipped my face.
"Theres more than one enemy," Zooduth prepared a bomb, smiling crookedly.
"Really? I didn't know-" Mystic snapped, before a gigantic figure the size of the Snarlbolax tackled him to the ground. I was about to let out a charge attack when another one appeared out from nowhere, and glared it teeth. The first one was mauling Mystic into the grassy earth while the other attempted to bite us into bits.

(Bloodless Narrative) ( stop 1 and start 2)
I immeadiately immaterialized out of the way of an incoming spike from another Snarlbolax, he burrowed into the ground again.
"Wheres the beast bell?!" Alex yelled, running around trying to avoid bites from random enemies.
"I THINK THE SWARM GOT TO IT FIRST!" Mystic screamed from under the Snarlbolax, who was effectively trying to bite anyone who was getting too close, we turned our heads to a pile of disntegrating metal and swarm in the center of the area.
"Oh crap," I whispered, as a fury of spikes came out from nowhere and struck my knee. I yelled loud enough for one of them to recoil.
"Bloodless?!" Genome yelled, striking down a Void Wolver while killing another by-step.
I screamed as high pitched as I could, for another to turn deep yellow and scramble back into the bushes. Dusk let loose a roar and ran to it, his Nyx Acheron darker than ever. Vot had a firm leash on the Mecha Knight that was chasing him around, as I floated upwards to strike when ready. Dusk was knocked out by a strong burst of energy that came out from nowhere.

(Vot Narrative) (Keep playing 2)
The leash that Mote made me helped alot. I shoved it (or him/her) in front of my, and waved my hand in front of it to make it fire a laser. The luminous beam traveled for a moment before exlpoding right next to the Snarlbolax on Mystic. Mystic grumbled for a moment, before the Snarlbolax tipped off. I heard him curse under his breath, before letting loose another roar of energy to make them cringe. I felt a strong surge in energy, the Mecha Knight felt it too, if it could. I fired it again at the crowd of Void that were starting to swarm. It desotryed most of them, and what wasnt destroyed was left a couple inches before dead. ( stop 2)

(Rya Narrative) (start 3)
When I woke up, I found Arus and Talon talking about... stuff.
"When did Arus get here?" Talon shot me a glance.
"Around.. five minutes ago," She shrugged.
"Hey, long time no see," I patted Arus' back.
"I would say the same thing to you.. but with that crystal Talon has..."
"Um.. guilty as charged," Talon blushed.
I facepalmed.

Sat, 01/21/2012 - 20:22
#95
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Jmtheawesome
Anyone order some... Misc fun?

Iam will start posting some riddles every 2-4 days.
Winner prizes: Bragging rights and possibly a small prize.

Puzzle #1: Coding Recoding (extremely easy)

?Owt sul powt stahw
_________________
Rules, those darn rules:

•First come, first serve.

•All answers must be in letter form.

•No hints or directions will be given.

•At the possibility of cheating, or that you are my Swarm-Persona, it would be much obliged that you do not spoil anything.

•No numbers, must be in word form
Ex: 2 -> two

•Please, take a pie with a bomb inside and throw it at the person next to you. Don't throw it at me, or I will sneak up on you in the middle of the night a gut your insides out, shove them down your throat, decapitate your head, and use your spinal cord as a jump rope.

Thank you for understanding and agreeing to the terms and restrictions of the puzzles. Thank you and have a FREAKISHLY SCARY, BLOODY, and FLIPPIN wonderful day! :)

~ The Composer
&~ The Producer

Sat, 01/21/2012 - 20:45
#96
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
?Owt sul powt stahw = what's

?Owt sul powt stahw = what's two plus two?

Four.

Mon, 01/23/2012 - 07:37
#97
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Randomjockey
@Lordofnecromancers

WRONG! The correct answer is:
.ruoF
/inb4smartass

P.S.: Regarding the last rule, what if you're the only one near me? [Directed towards JM]

Mon, 01/23/2012 - 10:50
#98
Lemonadium's picture
Lemonadium
:)

It continues. Good to see that Mote is still alive. lol

Last part of the triology eh? :[

Mon, 01/23/2012 - 11:43
#99
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Spyash
very long character

Name: Spyash

Species:Gremlin

Gender:male

Equips:Wild Hunting blade,Acheron,and a Sentenza

Personality:Mysterious, kind of evil although does enjoy himself quite a bit and has a love of snipes.

Bio: A gremlin who became a Assassin after his family was slaughtered by the spiral order when they went out to the devilish drudgery one day to buy some new clothes only reason he survived because he was a mischievous 4 year only gremlin who thought it would be hilarious to hide in a mail box where the knights didn't find him. as he saw them be beaten up by the spiral order he started to cry as they left a devilite found him and trained him so that he could move quick and as he grew up at the age of seven he was hiding waiting for a member of the spiral order to come by and he found one as he came up to attack she noticed him and thought he was kinda cute!.they talked and had lots of fun and she introduced him to snipes.as they grew up at the age of eleven she went adventuring in the clockworks with him where a gun puppy shot her down.She landed with a slam as she hit the ground he rushed up to her to try and do every thing he could to save her when a lumber whacked him into a tree away from her and when a wolver popped up about to grab her when he shouted "NO!" run towards the wolver a hit it in the head with his thwack hammer.He got her up and carried her to safety through all the pain it caused him.After another year she asked her dad to adopt him which he did as a birthday present for her. They trained together and after weeks of hard work she gave him a wild hunting blade as a gift he treasures the blade as if it was his life.They together slowly got much strong and he made him self an Acheron to help her defeat Jelly King.After they Got enough Jelly gems he bought an antigua and she bought a sealed sword.One day he had left it was the day before her birthday and she was in so much distress. The next day there was a knock at the door and he had returned and with him he carried a Darkfang shield say "only the most honourable gremlins get to wield this shield in combat and i think your more honourable than any of them" she hugged him so tight it started to get hard to breathe and she hadn't let go yet so he had to mumble until she figured out what he had been saying.She went out to the store that day to get herself some new clothes that her dad had said he'd buy her for her birthday and she'd seen a white fur cloak that was very beautiful so she asked her dad "can i get that?" as she pointed to it her dad said "ah a skolver coat one of the most valuable kinds of fur,sure i'll get that for you" and so they buy it after a few months she made herself a divine avenger and Spyash made his Sentenza. 2 days after she got a ceremony for gaining clearance into tier 3. One day as they're adventuring Spyash tripped and hit the ground really hard she laughed at him and then helped him up (secretly he really likes her laugh) but as he got up he notice a path behind a wall he followed it and when down into a room with her it was pitch black they knew something was wrong she pulled out her divine avenger which lit up the room. "Oh wow....." she said "i never thought i'd be the one to discover him""discover who?" said Spyash "King Tinkinzar" she said he responded "and that is.........." "Spyash he's king of the gremlins" "well that explains the gremlins around him" "their the Crimson Order" she said "haha a smart one she is" said king Tinkinzar "Spyash" she wispered "ya" he wispered back "we can take him"she said "are you sure we can take him and the Crimson Order?" spyash responded "yes we can this is what we've been training for" she said "ok" he said "if you insist". She said to King Tinkinzar "your on and when we win we'll go down in histroy you guys will be done Knights from the spiral order will come at you day and night" he responded "Ha! Vanaduke is going to love you" "ok get them and take the girl get rid of the gremlin with her. A hand came up and grabed her "GET OFF ME!" she shouted she swung her Divine avenger at a gremlin just to have taken away "NO!" spyash shouted as they were pulled away from each other "i'll find you and get you back i promise you" and spyash's vision goes black. He woke up in bed at home nothing taken, he was glad about that he still had the wild hunting blade she gave him and the matching Darkfang shield that he carved thier initials into.He went around town posting up signs saying he'd pay to buy the best skolver at tracking he could. Always looking in the clockworks for one to find for free, And on that day he swore to himself he would do anything to get her back even if it killed him.

Mon, 01/23/2012 - 15:39
#100
Fallconn's picture
Fallconn
cool story bro :P

me wants to keel some one :C

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