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The Battle for Haven! Chapters 1-14 out! [Role-casting now closed] one chapter left!

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Sat, 02/25/2012 - 15:39
#51
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Kaijuhunter
P.S.

Btw evry1 a twist degree is like how much ur character develops, like how they change over the course of the story. Ok gtg cya

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 10:23
#52
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Pow-The-Commando
Thingy

Name: Pow

Gender: Male

Age: The youngest of the lot, only 12.

Color(only for knights and monsters): CYAN, durr.

Race: Knight

Good or evil? Good!

Personality: A skilled, but young scout, always ahead of the rest of the party, using his weapons as a Cutter, but his hsiny Solid Cobalt items are his most treasurewd possessions.

Armor: Solid Cobalt Armour and Cobalt Helm. Proudly displays a Cobalt Crest.

Shield(optional): Great Defender

Weapons: Nightblade and Calibur (Later posts describe more of his arsenal)

Bio/history: Once a honorable member of the Spiral Order, but after the fall of Cradle, some of his gear was broken, he lost ranks, but ultimately, he
lost his fending off experience, so he now has a protecter. When he joined the Order at the age of 10, he knew there was going to be something to overrun Cradle, where he loved to sell unneeded materials and allsorts for his energy. But, the fall improved him. He learnt how you know if there's CE below the ground and quickly knew which weapon to use. a Big Beast Basher.
Now, he is far more resourceful in energy.
Relations: His protector Sez, who has Ironmight Plate Set and Sudaruska. Expend him as much as you like.

Twist degree: Changes his skills alot

Expendability: Make him live, as he runs past monsters all the time. But sonewhere in it, maybe near the end when he slashes an explosive block, make an explosion hurt him seriously, but he uses a HP capsule
to regain his health.

Likeliness to be first at the elevator: 99.6%

Friendliness: Friendly to every knight, even helping out new knights with new shiny gear, usually 2-star.

Destroyed Gear: Wolver Coat (now shreds of wolver-hide) Vitasuit Plus (now scrap metal) Skelly Mask (now a ghost)

Pets: 1 Frostifur, 3 Chromalisks, 1 Love Puppy, 12 Tundralisks, 40 Wolvers, 7 Mewkats, 88 Devillites and 2 Pit Bosses.

DPS (with calibur) 320

DPS (Nightblade +) 1280
DPS (Nightblade) 690
DPS (Nightblade -) 220

DPS (Frostifur and Wolvers)+999 666 -333
DPS (Devillites) +142 86 -32
DPS (Tundralisks and Chromalisks) +73 56 -21
HPS (Love Puppy) +6 Pips 4 Pips -0 Pips (- is when Pow is poisoned and + is when Pow is going speedy)
DPS (Mewkats) +6 4 -2
DPS (Pit Bosses) +3 2 -1

Sun, 02/26/2012 - 19:56
#53
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Kaijuhunter
Character list

Err... Here you go, guys. I have made a list of some of the new characters. Only a few slots left!

Squad 1(elite squad): Tsuna, Hades, Blue, Angela, Ace, Striker.

Squad 2(secondary squad): Vot, Erin, Kaito

Squad 3(third squad) Pow, Aria(Ariasky), Spy(Spyash), Spark.

Human squad 1: Vera, Dan, Sarah, Mark,(members pending)

Human squad 2: characters pending

Btw Ariasky, theres anothr character in my story named Aria... Can u make a diffrnt name?

Sun, 02/26/2012 - 21:41
#54
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Frostrex
...

Where's Frost?

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 06:07
#55
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Kaijuhunter
GTG

Dont worry he will appear soon, *Ace stares at watch* but in the meantime, i gtg to school!

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 09:29
#56
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Pow-The-Commando
Tream Pow's in

Pow is second in command of the Scout Team, a group of knights who perfer to confuse and quickly defeat foes. The teams are like second guilds Add them please.

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 09:33
#57
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Pow-The-Commando
Keep

If we go into Cndlestick Keep in Chapter 5, make Pow be assigned to take the role of distracting grimalkins. What Pow will do is run through the side, making them eat nothing. BTW, Pow sometimes uses blasters, blast bombs, his trusty Snarble Barb and his electrifying Shocking Edge. He likes to be the first one at the elevator.

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 09:42
#58
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Pow-The-Commando
Drudgery

If we go to the Devillish Drudgery, Pow will climb on buildings, and jump off, and when he lands, he,s sitting because he stabbed a Devillite in the head, maybe even a pit boss! Pow also likes to ndo that in the4 Dark City with not just the buildings, but also Trojans! Pow also is a good shot - maybe why he owns a Blaster.

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 09:51
#59
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Pow-The-Commando
Pow has a clock in his visor

Pow has a clock in his visor so he does not need a watch. Pow's visor also has other necessary scout equipment like a speed boost charge bat, allowing to know how much longer he can run faster than anyone else, which is linked to two speed boosters on Pow's solid cobalt-clad legs. and even has a module telling him which status effect he must resist in the level! His helmet also has special circuiting that helps him to resist stun. Pow also trained against Snarby's cubs! BTW, Pow also equips a Needle Shot to get rid of those far away beasts and fiends.

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 10:12
#60
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Pow-The-Commando
Wrong Squad

I think I should be in squad 2. I have bad gear on him because it's light, and he is actually a very skilled knight.

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 11:23
#61
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Pow-The-Commando
Chapter 4.5 (fanmade btw)

Fanmade Chapter 4.5 ; Pow! Haha! http://wiki.spiralknights.com/Haven

(Currently from Striker's view)

Two new guys got here at the terminal. One of them wore light, durable armour and the other heavy plate armour, we all greeted the two. The light one greeted us. He said "My name is Pow. Nice to meet you. I hated up there, I mean, I had to jump from building to building in order to survive. He is Sez, he protects me wherever I go. He has heavy armour so he can withstand blows and his Sudaruska makes him deadly. Sometimes, you see him with his loved Caliahan. I sometimes assist him with my Calibur, stabbing enemies in the head after jumping amazing distances. We are both skilled in fake death aswell. We spend all of our time with eachother and by my opinion, I am spoilt quite well, huh? Having my own protector and able to go faster? Huh?" Vot, Blue and Tsuna agreed. I said "Saracasm!" and Pow replied "No, it's not. Spoilt has two meanings. Get going. Striker." We all dashed to Basil, one of the last remaining Strangers. All of us bought the best recipes avaiable, but all the ones Pow got were learnt.

(Now from Pow's view)

"POW! Haha! PROFIT!" I said. "I am surely going to get some profit from those! Any idea of the CE translation?" Vot replied "133 CE each 4*, 66 each 3* and 18 CE each 2*." Tsuna told all of us "Descend!" Once I awoke from an elevator sleep, I saw myself in the area of a Slimy Showdown. I saw some goo splatted on the candles, and I drew out my Nightblade. I jumped all the way to the party button with one giant leap. Then, I waited... ...and waited... ...And finally, the showdown began. I quickly reaped through the Slime Legion and we won that one. We descended. We stopped at the Royal Jelly Palace. Striker tried to do my jump and he failed badly. I could leap to the elevator if I tried had. But that would be unfair. And I want to assist my friends.

That's it so far, hope you liked it! BTW, this is only fanmade, so do not expect the same style as Kaiju's.

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 11:38
#62
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Pow-The-Commando
THIS IS MONSTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

http://wiki.spiralknights.com/Monster
http://wiki.spiralknights.com/Monster
http://wiki.spiralknights.com/Monster

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 11:48
#63
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Pow-The-Commando
Second character (Still use Pow)

Name: Frostbite

Gender: Unknown

Age: 11 Months

Color(only for knights and monsters): Ice Blue

Race: Frostifur

Good or evil? Good

Personality: Pow's pet Frostifur.

Armor: Everfrost Sprinkling

Shield(optional): None

Weapons: Claw, Bite, Freeze Bullet

Bio/history: None

Relations: Pow, his owner.

Twist degree: Gets a colder bite

Expendability: Do NOT kill him, please don't.

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 13:27
#64
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Ariasky
new name

How about Sora? Since I like to keep my theme of sky or air in my name.
I just notice my username "Ariasky" can mean something,
Aria means "open space" and with Sky it can say open space sky.
(that does not make any sense... Does it?)
Oh hey Pow, looks like we are working together.
Please to meet you, I'm Sora (I think)
Since when skolvers spit out bullets?

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 13:38
#65
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Kaijuhunter
Ok

Hmm... Seems interesting enough... I guess i can use ur chapter for the story... Meh. Oh well, Sora is actually a good name since it means sky, and i know since i watch anime. Well, im doing homework, ill be doing the story soon!

Btw, pow, i might or might not use ur second character that much, but ill try to incorporate him into the story

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 13:46
#66
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Pow-The-Commando
Another character (Leader of scout team)

Name: Vuva

Gender: Male

Age: 31

Color(only for knights and monsters): Gold

Race: Knight

Good or evil? Good

Personality: A fierce Knight who leads the Scout Team before he dies from the Snarbolax. He was then replaced with Valo who is the same but alive.

Armor: Mighty Cobalt Set (costume cobalt set)

Shield(optional): Mighty Defender

Weapons: Striker, Strike Needle, Winmillon

Bio/history:

Relations: Pow, Sez, Kozma

Twist degree: He dosen't change

Expendability: He dies

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 13:51
#67
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Ariasky
Yay

I'm happy

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 20:21
#68
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Kaijuhunter
The Rage of The Varalax

Yup! Ok its chapter 5! Here it is, ENJOY!

Chapter 5: Varalax returns!

Vot and his friends dashed through all of the levels, avoiding any and all monsters. They eventually made it to Emberlight, but the place was empty. There were no Gremlins running about, no Knights doing business with other Knights so they could get crowns, not even any strangers trying to sell items... The place was desolate, cold and empty.

Kaito tapped his com unit and said "Hello? Lieutenant Tsuna, do you copy? We have made it to the rendezvous spot, but there is no one here. Where are you guys? Please respond..."

A faint signal came through, and Tsuna tried to say something. "Yes, Private Kaito. We have retreated further into the Clockworks and we have set up camp at the Core. I advise you to leave Emberlight at once and rendezvous with the Order at these coordinates: 132W, 537N. Goodbye, and good luck." then the unit went static. Vot gulped. "Well, we better get moving, guys." Erin said. Then the group boarded the lift and descended towards the Core.

Meanwhile in the Gloaming Wildwoods...

"No, please dont! You guys cant die like this, you cant! Pow, Sez, Kozma, get out of here!" Pow, second in command of the Scout team tried to object, but Vuva pushed him away. "GO, NOW! I WILL HANDLE THE MONSTER!"

Pow nodded, tears in his eyes and led the rest of the Scout team away to the lift. Vuva stared at the immense monster before him. He lifted up his Winmillion and Blitz Needle, the look of a madman in his eyes.. "It's just you and me now, you overgrown lizard." The Varalax had fury in its eyes and fire in its heart. It roared so loud, the trees fell down, and the two met in battle. The fiery claws of the Varalax were the last things that Vuva ever saw.

Pow gulped as the elevator descended deeper into the Clockworks. He heard the horrifying roar of the Varalax and the dying cry of his friend Vuva, and tears came to his eyes. That scream would be the last thing he would ever hear from Vuva's lips... And he cried. Pow began to cry...

Well, hope you liked it!

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 14:47
#69
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Ariasky
So Pow

I guess you like making new characters
Which reminds me, I like to say this...
How does someone in 4* gear die?
I mean, He must have killed snarbolax more than once...right?
Is it because he is using winmillion?
Or did he die as a hero?
(PS:Please Forgive me and my questions, I love to ask them.)
(PPS:I was very close to raging and putting all caps.)
EDIT:(PPPS:Don't read this post...)

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 14:42
#70
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Ariasky
... god, I type slow

...
god, I type slow

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 14:44
#71
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Kaijuhunter
IKR

Hahaha i noticed that 2! Well, thats why i made my new monster, The Varalax kill him, since its as powerful as 10 of the Rabid Snarbolaxes combined! Thats why he died. I mean, who can solo a fiery dragon who is resistant to almost all of your attacks? Just saying.

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 15:03
#72
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Ariasky
Darkfire Vanaduke solo... That is all

I don't think it can get harder than that.
Wait...
I'm not going to say anything.

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 15:28
#73
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Isekuube
I have a question...

Umm, you put my character "Ice" in chapter 4... I think, and then you ditched me Necro and I :P what happened? I don't want to be pushy, I know you have a lot on your hands, but I was smiling and so happy when I read chapter 4!

~Lord Ice (IGN Isekuube)

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 17:48
#74
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Kaijuhunter
DUN DUN DUN DUN! SUSPENSE!!!

Hehehe... Dont worry ull find out, ill be posting chapter 6 soon, btw. Its fine since Ice and Necro will be the center of focus in chapter 6. Ill probs post it tonight.

Wed, 02/29/2012 - 06:22
#75
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Fireherat
@ Ariasky

ok A sora is also a boy name in the kingdom hearts games you do know that right? B kaijhunter i left you a message in the chapter 1 skylark down!

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 19:03
#76
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Kaijuhunter
l_l :3 (-_-)

Ok, but i am not using that fanfic, so if u want me to use that dude, then u better put the app on this thread.

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 22:47
#77
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Ariasky
Sora means Sky in Japanese

Yes, I do know that name was in KH,
But I also know, it's just the thing above our heads that can cry and shout really loud.
Does sora sound like a boy's name? Maybe, But that's your decision to make
(PS:I watch too much anime in three years...)

Tue, 02/28/2012 - 05:42
#78
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Wuvvums
More importantly Sora was one

More importantly Sora was one of the original digi-destined from Digimon. :v

Tue, 02/28/2012 - 09:07
#79
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Pow-The-Commando
Aria heres a reply

Its because Vuva's skill in viewable contact is not good. Pow has very good skill with that, but he cuts a sad person when his comrades come to die, and he can confuse any monster. He is also a grimalkin-sucking vacuum cleaner by running through the Grimalkin's side. Also, when Pow is doing things alone he wears a Sniped Styranger Hat.

Tue, 02/28/2012 - 09:14
#80
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Pow-The-Commando
Pets

Remember to fit all of my pets in the story. Frostbite is just one. Check the new bits of mah character thing on pow to see all my pets. It will be ALOT. Frostbite is also the deadliest of non-alpha frostifurs.

Tue, 02/28/2012 - 09:21
#81
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Pow-The-Commando
Pow's family

Pow is part of the Swordking family, which is a family of swordsmen.
Members:
Pow
Sez
Vuva
Valo

Tue, 02/28/2012 - 09:23
#82
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Pow-The-Commando
Drawing

I'm making drawings for the fanfic, but don't know where to paste them.

Tue, 02/28/2012 - 12:30
#83
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Pow-The-Commando
2nd fanmade chapter

Chapter 5.5: The Sniping

(From Pow's view)

We had fun with snipes. We all played a game called "Snipe and Seek" in which the snipes hide and we catch them and put them on our Stranger Hats. We were mid-T3 at the terminal, Sez sheathed his Sudaruska when I sheathed my Nightblade. Everyone sheathed their weapons and we gave each other BIG huggles. Sez gave the biggest and I gave the smallest, well that's obvious because I'm the youngest and the smallest. I had to upgrade my stuff before Emberlight was available and I did so. Now I am almost as good geared as Valo. We all decided the Firestorm Citadel was the safest way to go. I got a Cryo Driver out and even a Blizzbrand. We descended, only to find an army of Slag Walkers coming for us! I drew out my Blizzbrand, and everyone else sheathed out elemental weapons too. I did a very fast swordfighting style that ripped the Slag Walkers apart in seconds. You would miss five swings in a blink. Then, MMMrrrh! A Trojan came to kill us. We got past it and descended.

(Now from standard view)

Pow ran and grabbed a Sprite without any monster knowing he was there. Not even the blaze-eyed Slag Walkers or targeting apparatus king Rocket Pups! He managed to leap to the holy circle and put the Sprite there. He did all the other five, and Tada! The Knight descended. They were then at the Ashen Armoury. The Knights all got shadow resistant gear, killed the Slag Walkers, Trojans, and Red Rovers, and descended to the Smoldering Steps. There was a big blaze everywhere. It was a sign that Vanaduke was near. We killed some Slag Walkers, but Pow accidentally slashed an explosive block, and was hurt terribly. Sez gave him a health capsule and Pow used it. Pow looked as good as new. We all killed more Slag Walkers. Trojans came out and we defeated them. More Slag Walkers dug out. We defeated them. Pow, this time, shot the explosive blocks with a Master Blaster. We all went to the elevator.

There was all but darkness, fire, health pads, the Knights and the elevator. We got to the party button and the place illuminated with flame. Vanaduke standed up from his throne. He bashed his mace on the ground, Slag Walkers dug up, and we had a truly hard time. He then went to the back and he let his mask fly off while he hid his face. We threw water at the mask and we did a big beating on it. Vanaduke came back up with his mask and he bashed his mace on the ground again. More slag walkers came up. We had another truly hard time. Vanaduke his his face at the back of the room again, with his chipped mask flying out. We threw more water, and did another big beating on it. Tsuna then shot the mask with his Argent Peacemaker. Nothing happened. Pow shot it with a Master Blaster. BANG! Vanaduke came back up, bashed his mace on the ground and we saw no mask! Slag Walkers and Slag Guards came. Pow got smashed by a Slag Guard's lance. He needed a health capsule. Tsuna threw him one and Pow used it. Pow looked as good as new again. We all had an immensely hard time. Lucky Sez was there! Vanaduke fell to the ground, one leg resting and one leg standing, holding himself up with his hands. Then, he collapsed and made a corpse. We knew he was dead. He then disappeared into the ashes. We grabbed Almirian Seals that landed on the ground. We healed again, got loot, got the recon module, got minerals, bla bla bla. We then descended to the Core. We were at camp with the others. Even Bechamel was with us there. Also, Bosco was there too. Bechamel sighed with relief. "We were worried about you lot" he/she said. We looked at the core from the viewing part. It was cold. Pow came up with just the idea. We used the ash gained to warm up the area. Lucky it didn't burn like the citadel did!

The end of it so far, hope it can be used!

Tue, 02/28/2012 - 13:35
#84
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Ariasky
Bechamel is a male

Since in "let's go shopping again"mission description it said "now it's time to pay him another visit"
That blew my mind,
for the first time in the time that I played SK, I did a WTF moment...
ok maybe not the first (love puppy ftw)WTF moment but really, I though béchamel was a girl after wearing a lot of accessories on him

Wed, 02/29/2012 - 19:39
#85
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Kaijuhunter
Well... I made a little pic

Well... I made a little pic for the story... Isis, this is a pic of Vot! Ill do the other characters soon, but for now, heres Vot!

Http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=Spiral+knights+vot#/d4re4pa

Wed, 02/29/2012 - 20:29
#86
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Isisdelltion
Pic...

BOOYAH!

Wed, 02/29/2012 - 23:28
#87
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Frostrex
...

I don't think I like Pow, I mean, taking over fan-fics and fan-comics just isn't right... They should really stop...

Thu, 03/01/2012 - 08:49
#88
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Isekuube
Yeah...

I kind of agree with Frostrex, but Pow, if you want to do something like this you can make your own thread if you want. I did, and you would know since you spammed it :/ Anyway, even though I will like to see more literary works in the Treasure Vault!

~Lord Ice

Thu, 03/01/2012 - 09:04
#89
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Pow-The-Commando
Well I want to kow the knids of fanfic

Well, I want to know all the kinds of fanfic so I'm just seeing wqhat my characters are like in those fanfics, so that's why I wast at least one of them living.

Thu, 03/01/2012 - 14:17
#90
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Isisdelltion
@Pow

Yeah Pow, just loosen up a bit, write your own fanfic, and stop making chapters on this one without even asking Kaiju. I mean, just ask, and if the answer is no, then lay off.

Sun, 03/04/2012 - 05:05
#91
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Kaijuhunter
Chapter 6: The new mission, Chapter 7: Fight to the death

Before I begin, I have a few things to say.@ Isis and Ise: thnx guys, but its ok. As for u pow, its true, leave a bit more room for other people to read or post on. U can make your own thread if u want. Oh well... Now to the story.

THANK YOU LORD! I just finished chapter 6 of The Battle For Haven! Here it is!

Chapter 6: The new mission

Vera was watching Twilight in her tent when a sudden tap came. "Come in!" she called. In came Daniel Hunter, with a big smile on his face, his gold eyes twinkling with happiness.

"Hahaha! Vera, you watch Twilight? I thought you were supposed to be tough!" Daniel laughed. Vera blushed and replied "I wasnt watching Twilight... I was scrolling through the channels and I happened to find it..." Daniel raised his eyebrow in a suspicious manner and pretended to think very hard. "Oh, but you have that old DVD player on right now... So I think youre lying!"

Vera's face grew redder, and Daniel said "Well, dont worry. Its ok. I just need you for a mission." Vera immediately straightened up and said "What is it?"

Daniel's face became dark and cold, his rich voice now icy and stern. "There have been reports of strange activity going on at Sector 526.8, and General Adrian has told us to investigate the area... A place known as the Clockworks ."

Vera was puzzled an asked "What is that place?" Daniel replied with a "Its an ever changing extremely vast area under Cradle with some useful minerals that could be sent back to the human colonies in Sector 502.1 and on Mars... But supposedly the place is like a deathtrap, monsters crawling out and about.

Now, Daniel's voice was even lower, almost evil sounding, and a chill went down Vera's spine as the young man whispered "And bring your best gear, or we are all going to die..."

Meanwhile...

Ice groaned and slowly woke up. He yawned and said to himself "Where in the name of Cradle am I?" He stared around and saw nothing but mist. He walked around and threw a bomb on the ground in front of him. Immediately, it exploded and a bright light shone from the spot. Ice grinned and walked ahead, using bombs as a way to find his location.

After a while, Ice heard a voice emanating in the distance and walked towards it. He threw another bomb at the ground and saw a body. The body of... A Gremlin... A Gremlin named Necro... He sighed and kicked the seemingly lifeless corpse aside. It groaned, and Ice strolled towards the Gremlin, deliberately taking his time.

He sneered and said "Oh my, this is even worse than when I annihilated you in Emberlight!" he then pretended to be concerned and finally sighed. "I cant leave you here, even if youre a Gremlin... Ill put you out of your misery." Ice rummaged through his backpack and Necro saw a handle... Like a knife... But the Knight took out a Health Capsule and threw it at Necro. "Eat it." he said.

The Gremlin shook his head and Ice asked "Why wont you eat it? Are all you Gremlins just mindless fools?" Necro shook his head again and said, in perfect Spiralian, no less,"You must leave here. The monster here is a horrible thing.. Leave now... Or he will kill you. Run,you idiot Knight, RUN!"

Ice sighed again and said "I see nothing dangerous here, Gremlin. Now get up, I have to leave." A dreadfullly terrifying screech echoed through the area, and a huge blast of blinding light illuminated the place.

Ice now saw that the place was a huge dock, with a gargantuan nest sitting on a distant clift. A white building shone and had a sign that read "Devilite Inc. We accept anyone/thing!" along with a picture of an Overtime Devilite and a Pit boss. A Yesman that was sitting by the building was enjoying a book. A second later, he was pulled into the building. "Short vacations" Ice commented.

The screech came again. And again. Ice looked up and saw two huge pterosaurs, all with flaming purple eyes. They were enormous, at least 50 feet tall. Their wings gleamed with a sinister light, and their legs were literally on fire.

Ice gulped. Suddenly, another screech came out of nowhere. It was so loud and shrill that Ice had to cover his ears just to keep them from exploding. Another pterosaur swooped down from above, a Pit boss, an entourage comprised of 5 Yesmen, and a whole small army of 40 Overtimers riding on its back. The new reptile was three times larger than the others at 150 feet tall, and was clad in full shadow steel armor. It had dark razors on the wings on its claws, and its blazing red eyes had rage and fury in them.

Ice growled and stood at the ready, his Divine Avenger and Glacius shining with elemental power. His Glacius was in his hand, and his Divine Avenger was strapped to his back. His Barbarous Thorn Shield flared with the rage of the Snarbolax itself, and and he charged, ready to fight to the death.

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Chapter 7 starts here! Enjoy!

Chapter 7: Battle to the death!

Lord Ice charged the three enormous demons and screamed at the top of his lungs. It only stunned the monsters for a second, but it was enough for him to rush up the wing of one pterosaur and slice off its head, the bolt away. He darted from side to side and destroyed the other demon with his Divine Avenger. He stared at the last one and it roared at him in defiance. "GROOOOOOOOOOH!" Ice winced as the demon bore down upon him, its red hot fiery claws blazing.

"AAAAAAAAAAAH!"

Ice slowly opened his eyes, and his vision began to deteriorate. "Am I going to die?" he asked himself. He looked up to see the huge pterosaur swooping in for the kill.

"AAAAAAAAAAAH!"

Ice winced. As he opened his eyes, he saw a Knight in shining ice armor and white eyes. He had a regal looking face and a cape on his armor. His shield was also ice, and it was inscribed with strange hieroglyphs. The sword however, was the real problem. It was 6 foot long blade of pure absolute zero Stygion Ice with a miniature dragon head as a hilt. The eyes on the dragon were clear, but had rage deep inside. He stared at the newcomer, who merely strolled up to the monster. The newcomer gazed directly at the Draigon, the demon pterosaur and said "Bye bye, birdy." That was the last thing the creature would hear.

"GROOOOOOOOH!" A huge explosion lit up the area as the new Knight slashed at the Draigon's body. His BlizzardHale cut easily through the demon's armor as easily as it would through butter and severed the creatures head. The monster, wings, body, cut off head and all fell to the ground with a mighty crash. The Knight walked away, but before he could leave, Ice said "Who are you?"

The Knight grinned at him and replied "The name's Frostrex, but you can call me Rex..."

Ice nodded and then asked "Well, in any case, thanks for saving my hide."

Rex smiled and a cloud enveloped him. When it disappeared, Rex was gone, leaving Ice alone with Necro.
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Thu, 03/01/2012 - 17:09
#92
Mindspark's picture
Mindspark
Can you post the loadouts of each character?

I wish to sketch them all out for future reference, but I don't want to search through all of that text for their equipment.

Tue, 03/06/2012 - 06:09
#93
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Character list

Sure... But i have created some of the characters already... Here they are.

Vot: created and posted on Deviantart. Link in the thread. No color or background yet, im working on that.

Hades: no color or background, will post when done.

Ace: No color or background, will post when done,

Tsuna: need a pic of him. He has a Valkyrie helm and skolver coat, and wields a Valiance along with his trusty (EDIT) WILD Hunting Blade. Sometimes uses an Ascended Calibur, and will switch between either an Aegis or a Grey Owlite shield. Has fiery orange eyes.

Blue: also need a pic of her. Blue has a Leviathan and a mighty defender. Has blue eyes, of course, and wears a Seraphic set.

Angela: Also has a Seraphic set, but uses a Silversix and a Fierce Flamberge. Has no shield.

Striker: snarbolax set with Nameless Set as costume. Wields a Divine Avenger and a Dragonscale shield.

I gtg. Ill update the story later.

Fri, 03/02/2012 - 16:13
#94
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Isekuube
WOO HOO!

That was awesome :D THe only thing that troubled me is
1: I am probably going to die :P (Not everyone can live I know that..)
2: You didn't mention IceKlaw, Ice's pet name for his Glacius

Other than that it was awesome!

Fri, 03/02/2012 - 20:17
#95
Mindspark's picture
Mindspark
I have new characters, but...

...they don't necessarily have to be in squads

Name: Mayist (M is such a malicious letter.)

Gender: Male

Age: 35

Color(only for knights and monsters): Magenta

Race: Knight

Good or evil? Evil (To remedy the lack of pure evil characters.)

Personality: Determined, merciless

Armor: Scary Skelly Armor set

Shield(optional): Scary Skelly shield

Weapons: Faust, Shadowtech Alchemer MKII

Bio/history: A radical revolutionist, claiming that the Spiral Order is corrupt and is only sending Knights down to their deaths for their amusements. He is commonly found in front of the Auction House, "rallying" his supporters to bring down the order. When the humans invaded, he rejoiced, claiming they will cleanse the Order. One night, he ventured out to the human camp to ally with them.

Relations: Mother and Father are high ranking officers in the Spiral Order and disowned him. He is generally very unpopular in the eyes of the public and his "revolution" has no supporters.

Twist degree: None

Expendability: When he went to the camp, the humans viewed him as a threat and open fired.

Name: Corinth

Gender: Female

Age: 18

Color(only for knights and monsters): Red

Race: Knight

Good or evil? Good

Personality: Friendly, caring, and loyal to her causes

Armor: Angelic armor set with custom accessories. (I will provide a sketch along with the other characters.)

Shield(optional): None

Weapons: Arc Razor

Bio/history: abandoned by her parents at birth, she was raised by Bechamel. Bechamel taught her the skills of metal shop. She has special magnifying glasses mounted on the front of her helmet to aid her in crafting and repairing. She serves as a support role in this story.

Relations: Adopted child of and apprentice of Bechamel.

Twist degree: None.

Expendability: However long you would like.

Name: Skeyl

Gender: Male

Age: 5

Color(only for knights and monsters): Brown

Race: Wolver

Good or evil? Neutral. Mainly good.

Personality: Curious. Cautious.

Armor: None

Shield(optional): None

Weapons: Bite

Bio/history: Has guided a proto knight through the Gloaming Wildwoods. He has seen other wolvers killing defenseless knights and he doesn't like that brutality.

Relations: Has had some history with knights. He has grown distant from other wolvers.

Twist degree: Becomes more confident

Expendability: However long you wish.

Fri, 03/02/2012 - 22:14
#96
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
HUZZAH

I just posted part of Chapter 7! Yay!

Fri, 03/02/2012 - 22:30
#97
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Frostrex
So...

i guess you're not using Frost, then?

Sat, 03/03/2012 - 08:02
#98
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
@FrostRex

Nope hell be appearing soon, just keep readin

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 14:28
#99
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Chapter 8: The Phoenix Blade and chapter 9: Operation E

NOTICE: I am borrowing a character from Dragaroths fanfic. His name is animus, the creator of Cradle. No infringement intended, i just thought his guy was epic. Well, enough of my jabbering. ON TO THE STORY.

Heres the start of chapter 8!

Chapter 8: The Phoenix Blade and The Rage of Animus

7:18 A.M., March 30th, 2510

The loudspeaker turned on as someone yelled into the microphone, " This is General Adrian here, and I need Daniel Hunter in my office! I repeat, I need Daniel in here now!"

Daniel was enjoying some coco at the time, but promptly shot his chocolate milk at his friend Mark when he heard the noise. "DUDE, THIS WAS MY FAVORITE SHIRT!" his pal spat. Daniel said a quick "Sorry, bro" and left. I wonder what he has in store for me now...

Daniel walked through the military camp and arrived at the office building. He gulped. General Adrian was his father, but he never knew why he would sometimes satre off into the distance for hours at a time....

His father was standing at the door. "Come in, son" he said. Daniel took a seat and looked around the Generals office, filled with military awards and honors. He always liked the guy for that, and many other things. Adrian was no dimwit like other people. He was the greatest military tactitian of the 26th century, possibly ever!

Daniel stood at attention, but the General merely said "At ease, boy." Daniel sat back down and asked " What do you need, Dad?"

Adrian replied "Its your 19th birthday, my boy. Dont you remember?" Realization finally dawned on Daniel's face as Adrian said "HAHAHAHA! Dont tell me you forgot your birthday, Danny! Hohohohahaha!" Daniel said back "What did you need." His father said " HA, YOU DONT KNOW?! YOUR NINETEENTH BIRTHDAY IS YOUR PASSAGE INTO MANHOOD! No more being nice, my boy. You were always a great warrior, but now you are a SOLDIER!"

Adrian sighed and said to his now adult son with pride "Its time you got it, son." His sons mouth hung open as he took out a huge ceramic box and set it on his table. It was IT... the special items his father had promised to give him on his birthday...

The young man silently said "Yes!" and opened the box. Inside was a gun and sword. The gun was an advance tech handgun that could fire heat seeking energy blasts instead of bullets. The sidearm itself was golden with a black grip and had two wings at the back, by its handle.

The sword was even better! It was a 4 foot long fiery blade that had a phoenix feather on the hilt. Engraved on the blade was "United we stand, divided we fall." Daniel was about to say thank you when he looked up and... His father was gone.

Meanwhile, deep inside the Core...

The spirit growled in frustration. His red wings were dragonlike, and a red halo floated above his head. His crimson eyes were filled with bloodlust and furiousity. His fury created an earthquake so strong that everyone on Cradle felt it. The Wolvers, Knights, and even the humans felt the shock from the Core as the spirit's baritone voice boomed "I will destroy you, puny Knights. You humans will die at my hands... Cradle will be mine once more! Yes, you fools. Beware, and fear... FEAR THE NAME ANIMUS TECTORION!"

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Chapter 9 starts here. Its from the view of Animus, creator of Cradle.

Chapter 9: The Rise of Animus

Nothing went according to plan. The Knights had triumphed over two of my monsters and somehow left unscarred. I hated those upstart humans and Knights who dared to tresspass on MY planet. I smiled as I stared at the shadow cage. Yes.. My secret weapon was going to destroy them... He would destroy them ALL

Tue, 03/06/2012 - 06:11
#100
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Kaijuhunter
Chapter 10

Reserved for chapter 10

Here you go! Part of chapter 10 is now posted!

Chapter 10: Attack

"Finally, were here!" Kaito said. His magic hood was drenched with sweat and he was panting like a wild dog. Vot and Erin were no exceptions. They had rushed all the way to the Core where a whole small city/camp was set up. It was bustling with excitement, but there were also at least 1000 Knights suiting up and getting into armor. Vot went up to Ace, and the two friends high fived. Erin met with Blue and Kaito socialized with everyone. In the middle of all the excitement, no one noticed a lone Knight exiting the camp and walking straight into the human base... No one was prepared for the battle...

Later at the human camp....(from the view of Daniel)

Transmission begin-

I loved the new sword and gun i got from my pop. Sadly, the sword hates me. Yeah, a sword hates me. I find it quite sad... Hehe. Well, ive been training with Vera in colse combat for some time now, and I got way better. That Phoenix sword seems to like me now... OUCH. It hit me... Never mind.

Well, well be ready to leave this planet soon. Good grief. Wolves and lizards are constantly on our tails... Im surprised were all still alive. Vera hates it here, and Mark says he only hates it "Because I aint got no beer, man! NO BEER! Or even fruit punch..." Weve been being bombarded by attacks from some unknown source, another thing that should have killed us...Meh. My dads no idiot... Hes a great general. I havent seen him though...*sigh* im goin to bed now...
*in the background* AAAAAH!
Hmm? What? Who are you? What do you want? What is- AAAAAAAH!

-Transmission end

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