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Fri, 03/30/2012 - 03:28
#151
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Lunaecho
Just stop.

Your character was killed because you aren't wanted in this any more.
Your character will follow the writer's rules and not your own because this isn't your story.

Just stop already.

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 04:01
#152
Pow-The-Commando's picture
Pow-The-Commando
*eats lunaecho*

*eats lunaecho*

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 06:26
#153
Softhead's picture
Softhead
/Clap

Chap 12 was awesome.

"AAAHH!!"

Love how pow was devoured...

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 12:44
#154
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Lol thanks, Atrum. This

Lol thanks, Atrum. This motivates me to revive Pow yet again, one last time, then make his final end as brutal and gorily descriptive as I can. Btw im gonna post more links to the chapters in my comment on the first page. Also, I'm gonna finish chapter 12 and start chapter 13 soon.

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 12:53
#155
Scamall's picture
Scamall
@Kaijuhunter

I can help with that. The gorily-descriptive part, I mean. Unfortunately, it MAY be unsafe to post here. Oh well. Good luck with your next chapters, Kai.

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 12:56
#156
Softhead's picture
Softhead
Pfff....

I posted on Pow and the Knights pow's suicide.

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 17:38
#157
Mindspark's picture
Mindspark
Well... here's my gory ends for a character in my story:

These are gory ends for a character named Wop that I have brainstormed:
-Trojan:
"Look! I'll defeat that Trojan by hitting its shield!"
"Wait! I don't think that's a good idea-"
Wop charged forward, screaming quite maniacally. The Trojan stared at him back. Wop struck his Calibur against the Trojan's shield. The Trojan looked down and shoved him aside with his shield and sent him flying into the ground. The Trojan spun its sword to an underhand position and swung it downwards. The tip connected with Wop's torso. His head and limbs jolted one last time before his life ebbed away.

-Giant Lichen Colony:
Wop charged at the Colony, before it charged its attack. It slammed into the ground and dozens of spikes protruded from the ground. One spike impaled Wop and he was flung into the air. He desperately grasped for air and felt along the massive thorn protruding from his chest. The colony gave an ear-splitting scream and swung its two arm spikes. The spikes connected onto either side of Wop and he was torn apart when the colony snapped back its arms.

Even monsters can perform executions. (Perhaps Pow is talking about how he got rejuvenated and how many humans he can killed. Irritated, a monster can attack him to silence him.)

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 00:24
#158
Oroseira's picture
Oroseira
This fell apart.

I am so disapproved of this. All of you, be ashamed of yourselves. You ruined your own thread, and now you have no way of cleaning it up. Way to go, Hope Nick or Magnus helps you! :D Bye.

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 05:15
#159
Scamall's picture
Scamall
@Phantomhamachi

That's what I said. Earlier. I told Kai that it'd be a good idea to back up all chapters, move this to the Graveyard or have an admin delete everything, and continue like nothing happened.

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 11:03
#160
Mindspark's picture
Mindspark
Indeed we should. Let us

Indeed we should. Let us clean up this mess and move on. Create a new thread with the story so we won't forget it.

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 11:29
#161
Softhead's picture
Softhead
Eh....

Meh.

Can we please have the next chapter?

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 12:35
#162
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Ok, fine. I'm working on that

Ok, fine. I'm working on that idea right now, I'll make the new thread in a few weeks. See ya guys, and expect chapter 13 soon

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 13:07
#163
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Hey Kaij

Before teh thread dies I have a question, wil Ice be featured in this and if not what characters of mine will? Thanks,

Isekuube

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 13:40
#164
Ares-Hsg's picture
Ares-Hsg
Remember me when this thread goes down!

Yeah, Armerio, I don't wanna go down with the thread. it's amazing that (three letters) didn't do this to me. Oh, karma, better start working on a backup. Later.

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 16:28
#165
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Chapter 13

Chapter 13: The Assassin Strikes

Koda smirked down from the top of the building and leaped down at his target. He unsheathed his new Acheron and stabbed his foe

in the skull and cleaved his head off in a single deadly swipe. The knights around him drew their weapons and charged. Koda quickly

drew his Sentenza and blasted a few knights into dust. He leaped over antoher one amd stabbed him with a knife. One knight made

the mistake of charging right at Koda and was rewarded with a barrage of shadowy bullets to his chest. Koda concentrated and

suddenly a small black hole appeared, sucking his enemies into oblivion. And there was one knight left. Koda disappeared into

shadows and materialized directly behind his final foe. He locked him to the ground and pointed his Sentenza at his enemy's head. He

saw a video transmitor on his foes helmet and pulled his adversary closer, then whispered into the recorder "Let his death a message

to you, Spiralian scum. I WILL find you, and when I do..." Then Koda pulled the trigger on his Sentenza. BANG! Then, as the knight

slumped lifelessly to the ground, he finished, "You. Will. Fall.
___
Finished! Tried to have some suspense. 😱

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 17:11
#166
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
😱 BOX :D 😱

Awesome Chapter Kaij! ACK! Acronyms make everything better :D

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 04:23
#167
Pow-The-Commando's picture
Pow-The-Commando
Pow revives again

and he boards his ship outside Haven, flies out of Cradle and to his homeworld. And, all his troops are waiting for him! So, you can stop including Pow, but he's still alive! And Pow's homeworld is so fortified that it ONLY has Pow and his troops as inhabitants! So, you can put Pow waving to Cloud on the next chapter, and Cloud shouting "OMG UR STILL ALIVE POW YAY!!!!!!!!" and Pow replies "I always have lived. I have since the beginning of the galaxy."

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 05:22
#168
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
You know...

I looked and saw that the Snarble Shadows was updated, then I saw it was by you Pow, I thought I might give it a shot, but alas, no it wasn't worth the time I typed this >.>

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 06:14
#169
Pow-The-Commando's picture
Pow-The-Commando
Pow's revive speed

Pow can also revive 945459 times in a second.

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 06:29
#170
Softhead's picture
Softhead
OKAY!

Kaju! I am going to make that htread. Pow has Effed this one up.

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 06:29
#171
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
I don't think anybody cares

I don't think anybody cares pow, AND if he can revive 945459 times in a second then that means he was killed 945459 in a second, THAT'S how fail you are.

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 06:31
#172
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Haha, Atrum!

Barely before my post XD Anyway, wouldn't it be a good idea for Kaij to make the thread? After all it is his Fanfic

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 06:35
#173
Softhead's picture
Softhead
I'm Impatient.

Also, Pow takes this time to post replies, while he doesn't continue his fic....

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 06:54
#174
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
SHUT UP

@Pow: no, Cloud nor Pow will be featured in this story, they have been cut and you will never see them in my thread. Besides, tour idea makes no sense and just proves how OP'd Pow is. It doesnt even FIT in my ****cking plot!So please, Pow, stop spamming me. If you don't, then I hope Hyperion gets you... NOW GET OUT OF MY LIFE

~Sincerely,
Me

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 06:54
#175
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Also, I'm postponing chapter

Also, I'm postponing chapter 14 so I can finish the last chapter of The Battle for Haven. Ok, thanks guys, seeya!

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 07:12
#176
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Oh yay!

Yay! Last Chapter of TBfH :D Can't wait!

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 07:20
#177
Ariasky's picture
Ariasky
Shame...aw papercut

It's gonna be Spiral Knights 1 year anniversary on April 4(no joke) so yeah...now pow, I want you to write a haiku about what you did.
Here's mine
*The Wolvers*
Wolvers may claw me,
while in the sunshine to search,
for pow's dead body.lol just kidding

By the way kaiju,I think you need to change one of the chapters in the battle for haven since pow died 2 years after this, right?(just saying)
And may everyone have a happy April fools day! \(^.^)/

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 12:46
#178
Pow-The-Commando's picture
Pow-The-Commando
I WILL EAT THIS THREAD FOR

I WILL EAT THIS THREAD FOR YOUR ARROGANCE KAIJU! POW CAN ALSO NEVER DIE BECAUSED HE HAZ INVINCIBLE THIRD! I WILL EAT THIS THREAD WITH MY HUNGRY THIRD! POW REVIVED ALMOST SIMILTANEOUSLY AFTER THAT ARIA I WILL EAT THIS THREAD NEXT POST I POST... which is pretty soon.

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 12:50
#179
Softhead's picture
Softhead
Kaju!

Please make the new thread! And more, and more. Just make sure HE is wiped.

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 13:09
#180
Oroseira's picture
Oroseira
All of you BETTER get serious help.

I am NOT in a good mood. Either all of you get banned or shunned(Except for pow, just give him a damn chance to fit in, and it'll be like nothing happened!), or obey me and accept your fate.

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 13:46
#181
Ariasky's picture
Ariasky
mur...

Whoa there Relax, instead of flaming and fighting, you should listen to some Adele or Florence and the Machine. There really good, well for me it is.:)
Here's a present of understanding.
*Today*
Today we walked,
Down by the cool fountain square,
It was a hot day.
edit:I was slow...like day
And I was trying to talk with Pow, but it seems to failed...Oh well I'll Try Again some other time.

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 13:20
#182
Oroseira's picture
Oroseira
stop

letpowfitin.avi

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 13:27
#183
Scamall's picture
Scamall
@Phantomhamachi

Look, I'm all for letting people fit in and everything, but we, each of us, tried to help Pow to the best of our respective abilities. We tried constructive criticism on his fanfics, asking him politely to tone down the incessant character spamming on other fanfics, and we even put up with outright spam on fanfics when he didn't get his way. He's. Not. Listening. He's most likely a troll, which is fantastic, because he wins in the end anyway, or an angry child, which would explain the tantrums. We can't just be all friendly all of a sudden. Just calm down.

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 13:46
#184
Oroseira's picture
Oroseira
fine then

notsureif.avi

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 13:49
#185
Softhead's picture
Softhead
Notsureifphantomissane.avi

Again, I don't respect you now.

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 16:14
#186
Mindspark's picture
Mindspark
Please, can we all just stop

Please, can we all just stop talking about Pow and talk about the actual story like the civilized humans we are? (Phantom, you aren't Mr. Goody either. You started a flame war about Pow fitting in and now everyone's raging about you. And to clarify, none of us are Mr. Goody.)

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 16:23
#187
Softhead's picture
Softhead
WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Also, I really need to read all of your fics Kaju...

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 16:23
#188
Softhead's picture
Softhead
WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Also, I really need to read all of your fics Kaju...

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 16:35
#189
Soulstaker's picture
Soulstaker
@pow

Omfg stfu pow. Go back to playing roblox. Maybe one day you will mature enough to play SK but that would never happen.

Wed, 04/04/2012 - 11:28
#190
Pow-The-Commando's picture
Pow-The-Commando
Uhhhhh, you all think I'm OP?

Uhhhhh, you all think I'm OP? CALL A KNIGHT IN THE ACTUAL GAME OP!!!??? Heavy Weapons Guy is disappointed.
Here's where I got the pistol showdown from:
Heavy: POW! HAHA!
Scout: X_X

P.S: I ate this thread.

Wed, 04/04/2012 - 09:46
#191
Mindspark's picture
Mindspark
Kaiju. We all want this

Kaiju. We all want this thread graveyarded now and create a new thread.

Wed, 04/04/2012 - 09:54
#192
Scamall's picture
Scamall
@Mindspark

Actually, the more I hear that idea over and over again, the more I'm convinced there might be a rule against it. I think maybe just wiping all comments would be a much better idea.

Wed, 04/04/2012 - 10:00
#193
Mindspark's picture
Mindspark
That might be a good idea

That might be a good idea Scamall.

Wed, 04/04/2012 - 10:55
#194
Pow-The-Commando's picture
Pow-The-Commando
I already ate this thread.

I already ate this thread.

Sat, 04/07/2012 - 20:20
#195
Ravenevan's picture
Ravenevan
POW!

I"m going to write a fanfic about pow!

Spoiler: he eats everything.

Sat, 04/07/2012 - 21:39
#196
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
... Anybody miss me? Hey all

... Anybody miss me? Hey all im in Mexico at da moment. Thats y i havent been on in a while. Coming back to my home in about two days, and back to SK! Mexico is so fun! Oh well, gtg! Cya

Sun, 04/08/2012 - 05:47
#197
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
That explains things!

I don't think you can get back to me at the moment but, I was wondering why you haven't been on :P oh well, nice to know you're having fun! Best wishes,

Isekuube

Sun, 04/08/2012 - 11:55
#198
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
@Kaijuhunter

have a good time man.

Tue, 04/10/2012 - 09:07
#199
Pow-The-Commando's picture
Pow-The-Commando
I was kinda at Scotland...

I was kinda at Scotland... back now

Thu, 04/12/2012 - 07:49
#200
Lukervol
Stuff

1st of all Kaiju when will Lukervol be in story? 2nd of all Pow ur like a baby, cant stop screaming rubbish. 3rd of all Kaiju ur never on anymore, why?

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