Looking forward to the rest of the fanfic.
A fanfic i made. (prequel to the battle for haven)
Thu, 04/12/2012 - 18:53
#202
Oh cool.. hope you had fun dude
Sat, 05/05/2012 - 06:57
#203
Chapter 14
Chapter 14: Vanaduke
Kodokuna ventured deeper into the Citadel, smashing anything in his way. He didnt even bother to collect the heat or crowns, and
merely trudged on through the ashes. Slag Walkers charged and were blown to bits. The Ash tails were greeted by a barrage of bullets
from Koda's gun. Gun puppies were decapitated by one blow from his dark blade. At the end of the levels, Koda descended down to
Vanaduke's throne room with barely a scratch on him. He walked towards the button, completely ignoring the healthpads. Fire burned
all around the Throne room, scorching the marble tile floor. Koda stared around the room, and stepped onto the Party Button.
Instantly, Darkfire Vanaduke appeared, his violet flames blazing with power and his mace gleaming in the firelight. He looked slightly
different though, and were those... Wings? Enormous dragon-like wings sprouted from his back, flapping furiously. He was surrounded
by a horde of minions, from Slag Walkers to Carnavons to even small dragons! One Slag Walker jumped and found itself impaled on a
black spear. It glowed purple, then exploded into ash. The spear instantly morphed back into Koda's Acheron and he took out another
10 demons with one swipe of his sword. But suddenly, the monsters were all around him, and Vanaduke sat back with a grim smirk on
his face. Kodokuna frowned at Vanaduke. "Really? You have wings now? Pssh. Flight is a coward's ability. Try and fight me one-on-
one, cretin." Vanaduke scowled at his opponent and rose from the throne, as tall as ever.
"Bring it, punk."
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Is that good?
Sat, 04/14/2012 - 07:42
#204
Chapter 15
Chapter 15 in progress
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Not done
Fri, 05/04/2012 - 20:24
#205
BUMP. Gonna finish chapter 14
BUMP. Gonna finish chapter 14 soon.
Sat, 05/05/2012 - 06:57
#206
Finished chapter
Finished chapter 14,yay.
Also, if no one is gonna read or comment, im quitting this story.
Sat, 05/05/2012 - 10:01
#207
Subject
I've just read 14, I thought it was good, wasn't able to do anything for a while except play SK cause I wasn't feeling good the past few days, and even now I don't, stupid oreo donut...
Sun, 05/06/2012 - 09:12
#208
Last try..
Sry Ise, but if no body reads this chapter, im gonna quit. So, this is my last try.
Chapter 15
Vanaduke lay sprawled on the floor, his mask so dented that his left eye was covered by the metal. Above him stood Koda, his Acheron humming with shadow power. He was about to deliver the killing blow when suddenly...
"STOP RIGHT THERE!"
A pack of 6 knights had descended and joined the level. One was dressed in a Seraphic helm and an Skolver coat. He had graceful wings on his back, which shone radiantly. Another knight had Mighty cobalt gear with a Grand flourish strapped to his side. There were more, but the cop caught his mind the most. It was a knight in full Azure Guardian gear, with a Leviathan and Aegis to match. Dark rimmed glasses covered his eyes, but there was a faint yellow glow under them.
Koda glared fiercely at the knights, and the Mighty Cobalt one tried to charge, but the one in Azure held out his hand to block him. "Wait, give him time to explain." he turned to Koda intently, eyes as watchful as a hawk's. "So, why are you here all alone? How did you manage to beat Vanaduke with a SHADOW weapon, of all things?"
Koda smirked and spread his arms in a sort of ‘ta-da' fashion. "Why, I intend to destroy the Almirians and take this world as my kingdom. The winged knight yelled "Why would you do that? Why would you kill innocent people?! Aron, let me take him!" he began to unsheathe his Silversix and Hunting blade when the Azure knight, whose name was evidently Aron, stopped him. "Kid, I got this. I'll take this guy on." Slowly, he drew his Leviathan and finished "Now, lets get this show on the road, yes?" Koda leered at the Knight. He suddenly spoke in a more malicious voice, if not a somewhat grudging hint of admiration. "You're pretty brave to try and take me on. Ok, I accept your challenge. You will die nobly, at the hands of the mighty Kodokuna!"
Then at the same time, the Knights yelled "BRING IT!" and charged at each other, their mighty blades clashing, trying to destroy the other. In all the chaos, somehow, nobody noticed Vanaduke sluggishly crawling out of the throne room, leaving a small trail of blood behind him.
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is that good?
Sun, 05/06/2012 - 11:35
#209
/clap
Dramatic, half-actiony and cool. Idk if anybody still reads it :3 Sorry about that.
Sun, 05/06/2012 - 14:55
#210
I still read
Just been very busy this week(important tests etc)
Mon, 05/07/2012 - 05:54
#211
Story
Nice stuff there im left in suspense about what will happen with Vanaduke.
Tue, 05/08/2012 - 14:55
#212
Chaptr 16
Ok, im a bit motivated now that i see that people still read.
Just a little thing to keep u company: http://www.flickr.com/photos/28181477@N04/4432465730/
Here is chapter 16
Chapter 16
(earlier that day)
Feron looked at the squad curiously. He boomed "Are you sure?" Tsuna nodded at him. Feron smiled, but it was a grim one, as if he
thought the Nova squad was walking to their graves, which in a way, if they werent careful, they would be. He sighed, then said "Ok.
Here is your mission. Infiltrate the Firestorm Citadel, defeat Vanaduke, recover the Recon Module, and GET OUT of there. Just so you
have backup, take Aron, my son." Feron pointed at the smiling 20-year old knight. " You should make it out safely if he's with you."
Oh yeah. Should make it out. Really assuring, Angela thought.
Aron pulled Striker over and the two discussed weapons and WWE (whatever that was) then joined the team. Tsuna grinned at the
squad and Aron."Nova, lets move out!" Then they descended into depth 24.
(present time)
Carnage. Destruction. A few dead mewkats. These are a few of the things that can describe what happened in the Firestorm Citadel.
Just as the swords of Aron and Kodokuna collided, Vanaduke awoke. ‘Darn... Stupid knight. How could... How did i lose?!’ He was
immediately filled with rage as he remembered what had happened. He had been challenged by the knight and lost... But his pride
could wait. His survival was more important. He slowly, agonizingly crawled across the throne room, watching the knights battling.Just
as he was about to reach his portal, a swhirling mass of blue energy, two of the Knights blocked him. One was a medium sized girl
who wore an Seraphic set and held a Heavy Plate Shield. It was Blue. Next to her was a somewhat tall boy who bore a Blackened
Crest on top of his Ash tail gear. A strange sword, like a fiery version of an Avenger, rested in his hands, glowing with red light. He
glared down at Vanaduke, fire raging in his eyes. Of course, this was Striker. "And where do you think you are going?" asked Blue.
Vanaduke snarled, then made a bee line for the portal. Striker glanced at his friend, who gave a slight nod. He cracked his knuckles,
then charged. In a matter of seconds, he slashed through Vanaduke's armor as easily as a Flourish could pierce a wolver, then
sprinted up his back, clung onto his head, and swung him onto the ground. The Almirian king groaned as Striker yawned and strode
back to Blue. She shook her head and beckoned him back over to the squad. Angela blinked. Tsuna began to laugh to himself. Ace
just stared. His mouth hung open in awe. "What, but... How... He... You... That fast... Eh whatever. Good job Striker." The heavy
hitter grinned at the squad in pride, then turned around just in time to see Aron fall. And just in time to see Koda stab him in the ribs.
He nodded at Aron, who politley acknowledged him. The two almost smiled at each other, and Kodokuna quickly, mercifullydelivered
the death blow.Then he turned to the Nova squad and glared at them with evil intent. What little sanity he had when he locked eyes
with Aron was long gone. Tsuna stared at him. "What was..." Koda finished his thoughts with only ten words. "I hate the weak, fool,
but I respect the strong." Tsuna stood there, flabbergasted. Koda sighed and repeated " Yes i hate the weak, and i want to destroy
them all,but I respect the strong, especially those who are brave enough to fight me and powerful enough to give me a real challenge.
And with that, he evaporated into shadows.
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Aron may have died nobly, but no one was happy when he was killed. The next day, Feron ordered a swuad of fifty soldiers to capture Kodokuna.
Big mistake.
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That good?
Tue, 05/08/2012 - 15:11
#213
A few brief notes
Just a quick thing, im gonna explain J.A.N.E.F.
(J.A.N.E.F.): joint alliance of nacho eating friends, a band of the best keyboard warriors who are determined to make awesome fanfics, defeat Trolls, *COUGH* Pow *COUGH*, and eat awesome virtual nachos as a team.
Current members consist of Atgatg, Kaijuhunter, Isisdelltion, Isekuube, and Tevokkia.
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(O.E.F.C.):the other exotic foods coalition and an allied branch of Janef.
Current member(s) are Scamall.
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Also, Chapter 17 coming soon.
Dont forget to comment and rate. Remember, still Rolecasting.
"My dear man, doth thy mother know thy weareth her drapes?"
~my favorite Iron Man comment. From the movie "The Avengers"
"I WILL NOT BE BULLIED BY A PSYCHOPATHIC GREEN-*gets beat up by Hulk*
~something Loki said before Hulk pwnd him. From "Avengers"
"HOLD THE POW WALL!"
~all the members of T.U.N.O.F. (the united nation of food, which includes J.A.N.E.F.)
Sat, 05/12/2012 - 17:55
#214
... No one readingz? Awww...
... No one readingz? Awww... Please reads.... BUMP BUMP BUMPITY BUMP BUMP
Sat, 05/12/2012 - 18:07
#215
It's great.. but you need one more ingredient..
ME!!! I mean, from the way I built my bio, I should be as strong as Kodokuna, so you can have like multiple epic clashes between my charcter, who could be always getting in Kodokuna' s way or something.. I dunno.. but great story still.
Sat, 05/12/2012 - 18:12
#216
@Armerio: ok, sure. Just post
@Armerio: ok, sure. Just post the app here again.
Blablabla, heres the app.
Name
Gear
Personality
Bio
Personal Color
Accesories if any
Age
Height: short, tall, medium, whatever
Sat, 05/12/2012 - 21:30
#217
Here we go!
Name: Armerio(I like this name too much)
Gender: Male
Race: Spiralian
Weapons: Cold Iron Carver, Silversix, Silent Nightblade, Pepperbox, Sealed Sword, Pulsar
Armor: Ash Tail Coat, Wyvern Scale Helm
Shields: Owlite, Twisted Targe
Personality: Short-Tempered, Smart, has an arrogant streak, but generally knows what he's doing
Bio: After the Skylark crashed, Armerio worked his butt off to get to the core. He deserted the Spiralians, rising Knight Elite, when his party deserted him in Candlestick Keep. The Grimalkins would have killed him, except he was luckily lying in candlelight. He was corrupted by gremlins, who deserted him as well once Project R was destroyed. Now, he seeks to control the Shadow lairs, take it's power and rule Cradle. But of course, he needs better weapons.
Twist Factor: He knows how to fix the Skylark (if that's applicable)
Good or Evil: You read the Bio, right? EVIL.
Personal Colour: Blue
Height: Medium
Age: Teenager
Sun, 05/13/2012 - 20:19
#218
Say, Kaiju, did you read my
Say, Kaiju, did you read my criticism on The Battle for Haven?
Tue, 05/15/2012 - 13:37
#219
Chapter 17
Kk, heres next chapter.
Chapter 17, part 1
A lone figure stalked through the night like a shadow. He lept from rooftop to rooftop, quiet as a wolver pup. He bounded down gracefully from his perch on the auction house and spotted a night patrol of seven knights. He scowled with displeasure. He didn't want to alert any one of his presence at this hour, but in order to get to his goal he had to kill them. Quickly, he scaled another building and stood directly above his targets. Three of them left, which was good. All the easier to kill. He shook his bow off of his back, a beautiful, but dangerous projectile weapon with curves that appeared almost birdlike. He notched two arrows and released them, killing one knight and paralyzing the other. Unsheathing his twin Acherons, he lept down.The remaining two rangers looked up in surprise as the assassin dropped down from the roof and slashed his blades across their chests. Their eyes widened in surprise as he quickly decapitated them and flicked their blood off of his swords. The paralyzed knight had an arrow in his spinal cord. He was going nowhere. The assassin didnt want to use torture, he just needed to kill. He swiftly curved his hand into a snake's head, then struck the guard ten times in quick succession. The man dropped down to the floor, dead. The assassin smiled, then whispered into the night "Armerio, the job is done."
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part 2 cming soon
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Not done.
Fri, 05/18/2012 - 19:24
#220
BUMPITY BUMP BUMP
BUMP! Almost done with chapter 17... Please read.... Im sad that no1 reads anymore.... l_l
Sat, 05/19/2012 - 09:12
#221
..... Goodbye
Ok... Thats it, i officially quit this and all other fanfics. Nobody reads anymore, so I'll just spend my time on other things. Sayonara, Treasure Vault. Im quitting.
Sat, 05/19/2012 - 09:46
#222
@Kaijuhunter
Oh, don't be such a drama queen. We still read your stuff. It's just that you've kind of lost your edge lately, especially since you focus on Kodokuna more often than most other characters. In fact, I'd be so bold as to say he's like Pow all over again. Where's the substance, the character? The essences of what makes a villain a villain? And it's not just that, but you've ignored your other fanfics as well. Battle for Haven was never finished, despite being the kickstarter to this trilogy, which brings me to my next point: you can't quit now. At LEAST see it through to the end. You've come this far, why stop now?
Sat, 05/19/2012 - 11:21
#223
Agreed with all of Scamall's
Agreed with all of Scamall's points.
Sat, 05/19/2012 - 23:44
#224
I mean
You could finish the story...
Sun, 05/20/2012 - 07:26
#225
...
Fine, fine. Ill just finish the battle for haven, which i have decided to extend, then I'll see what happens. If it's still as barren as a wasteland, then ill give up. K, cya guys.
Guess i gottta try to get the writing juices flowing....
Sun, 05/20/2012 - 07:26
#226
Btw when im done with all of
Btw when im done with all of the stories im gonna copy and paste all the chapters onto a new thread.... So... Yeah.
Mon, 05/21/2012 - 13:40
#227
Electonode
Name: Electonode
Gender: Male
Race: Spiralian AKA: Spiral Knight
Age:14
Personal colour: Aqua
Weapons: Combuster and Blackhawk
Armor: Deadly Virulisk set (And NO he is not a troll.)
Shield: Gray Owlite
Personality: Curious
Bio: On his first exploration into the clockworks, He was attack by a pack of rabid wolvers and caught a rare virus and was mortally wounded. His wounds eventually healed, but the virus could not be cured as the virus was unknown to the spiral order, so he had to wear a poison-resistant just so he wouldn't die.
Twist degree: The soul of the knight in his blackhawk is slowly corrupting him.
Good or evil?: Good
Role: Any recommendations?
Misc: His voice is slightly muffled and he has determined eyes.
Height: Tall
Is my character do-able?, and if so than /thanks. P.S: I'm sorry if cant think of a role!
Mon, 05/21/2012 - 19:33
#228
Final chapter
This chapter is the final one. And the shortest. Sry it doesnt explain kuch, im in a hurry.
Chapter 17, part 2: War
Tsuna came back from his search weary, cold, and dead tired. He flopped down onto the couch in his room and recovered on the healing pads built into the sofa. He breathed in the cool, refreshing scent of medicinal herbs as the rest of Nova went about their usual business. Tsuna sighed. He had failed to find the strange knight from the Firestorm Citadel, the one who killed Aron. He sighed. Suddenly an alarm went up through the corridor. The speakers blared: "Nova Squad, please report to The Council of the Order. We have a mission for you. The group quickly armed themselves and rushed to the secret tunnel that lead to the Councilroom, where the leaders of the Order resided. A whole day later, when they returned from their mission, war had been declared. The War for Haven had begun.
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Chapter 17, part 3: Assassin of the Shadow
Armerio blinked his fiery red eyes in surprise. The assassin whom he had hired to retrieve a piece of The Core had offered to train him in Ryu nō michi, the Way of The Dragon. The way of the assassin. Why this deadly man had offered his services so easily perplexed him. The assassin gave him a cold smile. "Its time you learned how to kill, young demon. Prepare to join... the Snarble Shadows.
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done
Mon, 07/02/2012 - 18:49
#229
I'm liek, "NOOOOOOOOOOO!"
No Kristopher? WHY U *flips table*
Didn;t you see Kaij's post? He said he was in Mexico... -.-