Hello once again, fellow Knights and story writers/reviewers. If you've been on the forum withing the last month or so, you'll have noticed my ever-lurking icon on all the famous works. Well, with all the "character-spamming" that I do, I figured I'd actually do something more. Better. A few things in one, in fact: Write a fanfic(s); list my characters; and better my writing skills. Put my crowns where my mouth is, as some would say. Anyway, this is the first of a planned series of fanfics, each of which focuses on the respective origins and backstories of my stock characters, the characters they meet along the way, themes, events, struggles, blah, blah, yadda, yadda.
For the sake of self-promotion, I guess I can add that this technically isn't my FIRST SK fanfic. My Wiki page, seen here [ http://wiki.spiralknights.com/User:Scamall ] was stumbled onto by Lordofnecromancers, who politely asked my permission to post a link to the Vault. I gladly obliged. Wouldn't be here now if that never happened, so thank you, LoN.
I suppose that's enough of an introduction. Without further ado, I present Project: Origins- #1: Cross. Enjoy.
Oh, and be sure to give feedback. Constructive feedback. I do NOT want this turning into Pow*6's trainwreck of a thread series. Speaking of Pow*6, I'd rather he not post here. Nothing personal, I'd just rather be able to find my way around a thread this time.
===Prologue===
"C’mon, move! Faster! I want to hear that sound barrier shatter!”
A dark bullet whizzed past his head, hitting an adjacent banner, scorching it. This wasn’t motivation. This was madness. He tore through the regally-decorated corridor, footsteps echoing loudly on the stone. He had been running for hours through these damned Depths. Each individual muscle screamed out in agony, and still he ran. His anaerobic breathing was loud and shallow. A chorus of voices were screaming inside his head, each one as anguished as the last:
“You shouldn’t have done this… why do this to yourself… you get what you pay for… what sick person does this… just stop, rest… I need a moment… please, someone, help me… feels like my body is on fire… where’s the exit… no way out… no way out… no way…”
Just a bit further. He could see the elevator, almost feel the warm sun on his face. The taste of freedom wafted in front of him, drawing him ever closer. Just… a bit…
*Clunk*
He fell forward spectacularly, his speed carrying him several feet through the air before finally collapsing comically on the cold stone floor. His every muscle relaxed once it had registered in his mind that he had fallen. The relief was so grand it actually ached horribly to feel each part of him fall into a bloodless sleep. He barely even noticed the pain from when the bullet punched him in the back of the head. After what seemed like an eternity, he was dragged to his feet.
“Nice one, Famine. Took him down clean. You okay, rookie?”
Cross looked up, dazed. He saw War standing in front of him, holding his still-smoking Sentenza. Just behind War stood Famine, with what looked like a sniper rifle. Wasn’t standard issue, Cross knew that much. He wondered how difficult it was to make with no known recipe for a gun even remotely like it. He held a hand to his pained head, gathering his thoughts. Then, it dawned on him.
"You shot me. You SHOT me! In the HEAD! What the Hell, man?!”
“Easy” said War, in a somewhat half-hearted effort to calm him. “Low-velocity rounds. Besides, they weren’t even bullets. Training pellets. You know, for your TRAINING? Jeez. Yeah, they’d kill you if you knew where to aim, but Famine’s a good shot. She knew better than to-“
“Then why’d YOU shoot? That damned cannon nearly took my head off!” yelled Cross.
“Believe me, if I wanted to do more than spook you, I’d have done it.” War menaced, holstering the Sentenza.
“Excuse me,” interjected Pestilence, sagging under Cross’ weight, “but would you mind giving me a hand? His muscles are, for want of a better word, kaput. Little more than dead weight now.”
“I’ll show you dead weight,” mumbled Cross angrily.
“Famine, help Pestilence with the rookie,” ordered War. “In the meantime, I’ll take that.” He motioned towards the rifle. Almost reluctantly, she handed it to him. “Horsemen. Elevator. Now.”
“Easy,” Famine whispered as she took Cross by the arm. “C’mon, let’s get you back to the hideout.”
I loved it, but I have a question I think I remember that Cross's name was Death at the time *checks Cross's Character App* yeah, here let me show you: " Originally part of a 4-man squad called "The Horsemen", Cross went by the alias "Death". Along with his allies "War", "Pestilence" and "Famine", they plundered and pillaged the Clockworks for vast amounts of loot." Yeah... so that is basicallly the only thing wrong I found, other than that, it was awesome!
(P.S. How did you do all that stuff on you Userpage? Like the portrait and the open up box thing? :3)