If you've read the first chapter, pleasepleasePLEASE tell me your feedback on it.
I need to know what you guys think so I can improve my writing. I also want to know your thoughts so that I know that someone's been reading it, haha.
(Sorry if this seems attention-seeking)

@Unstable Yeah, I'm more into dark stuff. So the fanfic will be pretty dark at some points.
@KoV Thanks, keep an eye out for that sniper so you don't get killed again, hehe.
Anyway, I got the next chapter written up. As I said before, it's pretty dark at some points. If you can't handle it, you are certainly welcome to tell me that I'm going a little over the top, and I'll try to adjust my writing.
Here it is. Enjoy (or try to enjoy).

Chapter Two - Readjust
Replica Project? What the he-. I couldn’t finish my thought because that bell had been rung again, numbing my senses. I had a feeling by now that there would be some side effects from all this messing with my body, but that was the last thing on my mind when I saw the... thing. I don’t know what it was, it was tiny, much, much smaller than a sword, and didn’t look like a gun. It didn’t even look like a weapon, but the moment I saw it, it invoked more fear than any device could. I still don’t know why. It was like a tube, but with some dark, shadowy stuff in it, and a really vicious looking point at the end of it, not like a sword at all. The Knight at the front of the group had grasped it in his hand, thumb on top, as if he, rather, it, was going to stab me to death with it. That was not the case, but the physical pain I experienced afterward was much worse. I was still immobilized by the bell, so when the Knight walked towards me, I couldn’t resist. He went around to my side, and drove the needle straight into my back, some tears springing to my eyes. I didn’t know what he was doing with it, but soon, the Knight wrenched the... thing, out of my flesh, leaving a little patch of blood-stained fur where it was.
“What did you just do?”, I barked angrily. He didn’t appear to have understood me, but instead simply left the room along with all the equipment and devices he brought in. The other Knights followed suit, and the wall space slammed shut, and I was left in the room to ponder what had just happened.
Something seized up inside of me. Everything suddenly felt tight and constricted. It became hard to breathe, and in the next moments, there was just pain. It felt like little spikes were pressing themselves into every inch of my skin, or that I was on fire, or that my fur was being torn out. I can’t describe it accurately enough, but I’ll just tell you that those moments were intensely painful. But the worst was yet to come. I was coughing up blood. Writhing around on the floor. And the worse part is that my insides felt like they were being ripped apart. And stuck back together. And ripped apart. And stuck back together. Over and over again.
“Stop it... please... stop... it...”

[Laboratory Monitor Room]

Hahn gazed at the myriad of monitors in the Laboratory’s dark Surveillance room. There was a variety of tests going on, but none was more so interesting than The Replica Project, in Block 1, Room 1-S.
“So, they just administered the solution...”, he muttered to himself, as he saw the Wolver on the screen thrash about in pain.
A door opened, with a Biotech Researcher coming through.
“Chief Researcher Hahn, I was informed you would be here. We have just administered the solution to Subject 1-S”, the Knight said.
“I can see that. You understand that your team is responsible for collecting the results, correct?”
“Yes, sir. I will make sure that this test is documented properly.” And with that, the Biotech Knight left the room.
He returned to looking at the monitor.
“Hey, Hahn, whatcha up to?”, an annoying, feminine voice asked as the door opened yet again. Hahn sighed. It was Kora.
“Hello Kora, and please, next time, knock before entering”, he replied. “I’m just overseeing all the tests in the Laboratory.”
“I heard you have a new project going on, something about a Replica?”, she asked.
“You are correct, please direct your attention to Monitor 1-S”, Hahn replied, gesturing to the wall of TV screens. Kora glanced at it, and put her hands over her mouth in horror. The subject was still thrashing around in pain.
“Wh-what are you doing to that poor Wolver?!”
“It’s called the Replica project”, Hahn explained. “In short, we’re trying non-embryonic DNA overwriting to attempt to change the form and abilities of a creature. It’s the first time it’s been done. If this works, it’ll be a scientific breakthrough.”
“What do you mean, if it works?”, Kora asked, wiping some tears from her eyes.
“There’s an approximately 32 percent chance that the subject won’t die from this, and the treatment is successful.” Hahn leaned back in his chair.
“Alright, given that this twisted experiment of your does work, what’s going to be the result?”
“That is classified, but I can tell you that we won’t have to worry about protecting Haven any longer.”
Kora stormed out of the room, teary-eyed, while Hahn shook his head.
"She'll never understand. Sacrifices must be made in order to progress. It's just how life works."
The subject had become unconscious. Her once golden colored fur had started darkening.
Hahn looked back at the monitor and was surprised. "So it really did work..."

I just remembered something else. One word. Mynah.

I appreciate all the feedback, I'll probably write the next chapter sometime this week, most likely on Tuesday.
Also, please refrain from advertising. Thanks.

The chapter probably will be sometime later this week. During the weeks, I have a lot of homework to do and not that much freetime, so I can't really dedicatedly (is that even a word) work on a chapter.
Sorry about that, but the more time I have to work on a story, the better.

Here's the new chapter. Just putting a non-sequitur out there, but Bastion is the greatest game you can buy. It's 15 dollars on Steam and the Chrome Web Store, and 5 dollars as an iOS app, so if you have the money, get it RIGHT NOW.
Back on topic, here's the next part. Sorry for the wait, and I apologize if it's a little short.

Chapter Three - Reform

Eurgh... I open my eyes for the second time in that white room, and stood up with some difficulty. I was in the exact same place where I had woken up the first time, however, I could remember everything that happened before this time. So one of those knights stuck that sharp thing in me, and then I was... I didn’t want to think about it. But something didn’t feel right in my body. Like I was somewhat of a different person. I looked down at my paws, and I was astonished. I definitely had golden fur last time I checked, but the fur on my paws was jet black. I looked back at the rest of my body. It was dark as night, no trace of my former fur to be found. Something else felt strange though. Well, it felt sort of like I had three extra limbs. I knew I didn’t have any extra arms or legs because I still felt fine when I walked. I looked back at my body, and noticed three small spikes I hadn’t seen before. They were equally black as my body, but they had an ominous-looking red glow at the tip. Maybe those are the extra limbs I felt? I closed my eyes and tried moving the spikes on my back. I looked back again, and I saw three tentacles waving in the air, covered in barbs, with the spikes on top. I was a little creeped out, but I thought it was kind of cool that I had weapons now. I tried moving them around, and within 15 minutes I could probably impale someone with one of them. However, I noticed something else wrong. There was a collar on my neck, where there was nothing before. I tried biting it off, but it seemed to be tightly stuck on. Oh well, it didn’t seem like much of a bother anyway. I was bored again. There was nothing to do in this white room besides wait for the knights to come and do something else to me. These spikes could be my ticket out of here... all I need to do is kill every Knight that tries to stop me, haha! I’m not sure if it was because I was so bored, but I was thinking some pretty dark thoughts, like killing everything in Haven, or just escaping the laboratory or whatever one of those Knights called it by impaling my tormentors. I laid down on the floor again, formulating evil thoughts and waiting for the Knights. Sure enough, onr came, and I shot the spikes towards his chest. He quickly dodged it and pressed a button he had in his hand. I fell down to the ground as I felt electricity coursing through my body. He pressed the button again and the flow stopped, leaving me where I was, breathing heavily.So instead of using the bell, they’re electrocuting me. Great.
“Woah, calm down”, he said, waving his hands. “I just came here to give you some food.” Food? At the first mention of the word, I realized just how hungry I was. I was still recovering from the electric shock, so I didn’t see the Knight put something on the floor and leave the room. It was something that looked very meaty, and its scent was irresistible. I started gnawing at it, even using one of my spikes like a fork. Suddenly, I felt incredibly tired. My eyelids feel heavy as I collapse onto the ground, under the influence of some drug they must have put in it.
“Wh-what did... you give me... wwwhat are you doinggg to meee?”, I say with some difficulty, slurring the words. I close my eyes and before I fall asleep I can see the wall open up again with three knights toting various equipment coming through. What’s going to be different when I wake up this time?

Is Mynah... my name?

Yes, chapter coming Friday night. I will try to pick up the pace a little, sorry.
(Note: For anyone who read the original post, applications will come after the next chapter)

Sorry for the lateness, got distracted.
You all are welcome to apply now, I'll try to fit you into the story as best as I can, but keep in mind I need specific parts.

Roles needed:
- Test Subjects (must not be Knights), at least two.
- Hunters (must be Knights or Mechas), at least two.
- Researchers (must be Knights), at least three.
- Normal Knights/Explorers, as many as needed.

Please use this application form when submitting, thanks:

Name:
Gender:
Species:
Bio/History:
Personality:
Abilities/Weapons:

You're accepted, Vinmeister (that's my new nickname for you :3).

Just a bump.
If you want to apply, feel free to do so. I have plenty of spots open.
Refer to the first post for more information.

That was a very lengthy post, but sure, you're accepted.
For anyone planning on applying, I could use another (current) test subject and a Researcher.
Thanks!

To answer your question, mostly yes. His bio is incredibly short and lacking a lot of detail I need to see in order for him to have a good role in the story. If needed, you can post a completely different application for a different character, as slimes have a very... simplistic lifestyle.
If you're just gonna be revising your original application, try to make him more life-like and interesting as opposed to this random jelly cube that comes out of nowhere, which I wouldn't want to have in a story.
Sorry if this seems rude, but I'm looking for more overall effort.
Oh, and try to be a little more creative with the name. "Bobster" is a really generic and uncreative name (sorry again, I'm a harsh judge sometimes).

I'll start working on it today.
Also, @Spiral-Knight-Kid, do you mind if I change your researcher character's name in the story?